[Normal]
01:04:337 It looks like you were going for bends right when the singer changes notes, but it feels like it's curving a little early. Maybe manipulate when the bends hit so it matches up with the beat. I messed with it and moving each bend out one more grid (at 3 zoom) felt better.
01:53:462 Maybe it's more of a style thing to me, but perhaps switch these four sliders with the pattern at 01:59:462. With the way the song goes, it just fits a lot better.
[Hard]
The beginning is just mistimed. The ritardando (slowing of the tempo) makes this really hard, as you're going to have to have several re-timing spots.
Keep in mind a lot of this is pretty rough timing. You may want to go in and fine tune them if you can.
The beginning, I have an offset of 661, BPM 160.
00:08:204 BPM 157.00
00:09:841 BPM 150.00
00:11:077 BPM 110.00
00:11:647 BPM 95.25
00:14:166 BPM 160.00
00:15:291 BPM 140.00
00:17:461 BPM 160.00
This might throw a bunch of your beats off at the beginning section as well.
00:58:337 [3, 4] The spacing here is really deceptive. I'm not sure if that's what you were going for, but it didn't feel natural at all.
The spacing goes all over too with the BPM x.05 and x2's. Try to keep it more standardized with occasional jumps with the music.
[Marathon]
I just spent a bunch of time getting that timing done... I'll take a peek later on if I remember. :P
Nice storyboarding, btw. Looks really smooth.
Star~
01:04:337 It looks like you were going for bends right when the singer changes notes, but it feels like it's curving a little early. Maybe manipulate when the bends hit so it matches up with the beat. I messed with it and moving each bend out one more grid (at 3 zoom) felt better.
01:53:462 Maybe it's more of a style thing to me, but perhaps switch these four sliders with the pattern at 01:59:462. With the way the song goes, it just fits a lot better.
[Hard]
The beginning is just mistimed. The ritardando (slowing of the tempo) makes this really hard, as you're going to have to have several re-timing spots.
Keep in mind a lot of this is pretty rough timing. You may want to go in and fine tune them if you can.
The beginning, I have an offset of 661, BPM 160.
00:08:204 BPM 157.00
00:09:841 BPM 150.00
00:11:077 BPM 110.00
00:11:647 BPM 95.25
00:14:166 BPM 160.00
00:15:291 BPM 140.00
00:17:461 BPM 160.00
This might throw a bunch of your beats off at the beginning section as well.
00:58:337 [3, 4] The spacing here is really deceptive. I'm not sure if that's what you were going for, but it didn't feel natural at all.
The spacing goes all over too with the BPM x.05 and x2's. Try to keep it more standardized with occasional jumps with the music.
[Marathon]
I just spent a bunch of time getting that timing done... I'll take a peek later on if I remember. :P
Nice storyboarding, btw. Looks really smooth.
Star~