1. remove storyboard
2. Theres a ranked short version for this song, perhaps you can go there and take some of the tags? https://osu.ppy.sh/s/182845

1. 00:53:183 - i would recommend mapping this out? its pretty loud imo o-o
2. 01:10:683 - perhaps add note here? this should be a 5 note stream imo
3. 01:24:109 (2) - hmm how bout use this rhythm? since there is a guitar sound on 01:24:480 -
   
   SPOILER

   
   02:47:072 (2) - ^
   03:58:184 (2) - ^
4. 01:43:368 (4) - maybe add NC here as sort of a lead in to 01:44:109 (1) - this section where nc is used alot?
   03:06:331 (4) - ^
   04:17:443 (4) - ^
5. 02:17:813 (4) - how bout 1/4 repeat instead q: there's a piano
6. 03:50:776 - why not map this sound out like u did for 03:47:813 (5) -
7. 03:52:628 - eh skipping this kinda felt weird for me. if you map something like 03:52:813 - out then you should put something for this one too
8. 02:04:109 (5) - could nc this owo? idk i just like to nc between long jump patterns
   03:27:072 (5) - ^
   
9. 01:54:294 (4,5,1) - can you justify some of these overmaps for me? i don't really have anything against them but i want to hear your reasoning behind them

Kibbleru wrote:

[General]

1. remove storyboard …… fix ~
2. Theres a ranked short version for this song, perhaps you can go there and take some of the tags? https://osu.ppy.sh/s/182845 ……ok ~

[Blah]

1. 00:53:183 - i would recommend mapping this out? its pretty loud imo o-o……a……i give up some because it's not important orz
2. 01:10:683 - perhaps add note here? this should be a 5 note stream imo……^
3. 01:24:109 (2) - hmm how bout use this rhythm? since there is a guitar sound on 01:24:480 - ……ok ~ all change
   
   SPOILER

   
   02:47:072 (2) - ^
   03:58:184 (2) - ^
4. 01:43:368 (4) - maybe add NC here as sort of a lead in to 01:44:109 (1) - this section where nc is used alot?……i skip some NC …… intent is keep all pink color in The fourth section …… NC can point jump but i prefer to keep form orz
   03:06:331 (4) - ^
   04:17:443 (4) - ^
5. 02:17:813 (4) - how bout 1/4 repeat instead q: there's a piano……ok~
6. 03:50:776 - why not map this sound out like u did for 03:47:813 (5) - ……www, i find piano only …… but many some point it 111, use a 1/2 slider instead of one note now
7. 03:52:628 - eh skipping this kinda felt weird for me. if you map something like 03:52:813 - out then you should put something for this one too …… ok ~
8. 02:04:109 (5) - could nc this owo? idk i just like to nc between long jump patterns
   03:27:072 (5) - ^
   
9. 01:54:294 (4,5,1) - can you justify some of these overmaps for me? i don't really have anything against them but i want to hear your reasoning behind them…… i wish play have more click on the Kiai time orz, same as i give up some sound in other part. and i think add 3-hit note before downbeat is well …… of course i‘m ready delete it if you think it's wrong 111

nothing to complain about, absolutely fantastic map! also your consistency is very nice …… 喵~

Gaia wrote:

Narcissu 好口愛 ヾ(｡･ω･｡)

改天一定要用這個ava :3

Kibbleru wrote:

poke me when that SB is made!

tm1209 wrote:

[General]

OD我覺得還能再高一些，比如8，這樣更送pp……加到7.5了……我還是希望多數人能輕鬆的得到高ACC……
另外我覺得難度名直接和歌名一樣似乎不太好。。……可是我沒有其他更好的選擇……


[Nostalgia]

00:20:776 (5,1) - 感覺這個沒啥必要做成平行，我大概會用5的轉折點和4做一個blanket …… http://puu.sh/eemVZ/76b5113310.jpg
00:23:924 (6) - X185Y348，這樣的話和00:23:368 (4) - 00:24:109 (1) - 間距相同而且prev2.00 next1.50左右的間距應該會很舒服……ok~
00:47:072 (3,4,5,6,1) - 擺的似乎不是很標準……和kiai中標準的做對比~
01:22:072 (2,3) - ctrl+G？……ok~
01:46:146 (2,3,4,5,6) - 我覺得這地方可以做個越跳越大的梗……我覺得這段平穩較妥……
03:55:961 (1,3) - 其實我覺得這兩個更應該疊一起…………ok~
04:25:035 (2) - 這地方感覺做個滑條比較好 ……安靜的地方我想多空一點…… http://puu.sh/eeorf/0047457a52.jpg
04:42:628 (1,2,3,4) - 根據前面的來看，這裡也應該做成Y軸對稱的那種……一開始是這樣打算的不過擺不出來orz ……

sjoy wrote:

[Nostalgia]
00:16:517 (5) - 强迫症会对齐DS的……我就是強迫症用的1.4和1.6【喂
00:24:665 (2) - ^
00:40:776 (2,3) - 我觉得这里用滑条比较好 有个降音的过程 叠一起没那感觉 怎么感觉是没地方摆了？……一直是滑條有點難擺……
00:44:480 (4,5) - ^
00:49:294 (1,2) - ^
00:54:480 (5) - 我觉得用弧度感觉比较好 直线太硬了……ok~
01:20:035 (4,5) - 感觉用个跳比较好……亞達
01:24:850 (1) - 用个红点什么的拐个弯感觉挺好的……ok~
01:35:220 - 这段的CLAP感觉有点大声了 直接盖住VOCAL了……換成55了，順便kiai也降了10
02:17:813 (4) - 1/3 节奏……這個1/3的話排版很糾結……
02:31:517 (1) - 这里有个3连漏了我觉得难受的……亞達
02:58:183这段和前面那段一股即视感。。 尤其是到了 03:07:072 (1) - 这里。。。…………233，後面那個順序的反的哦【？
03:52:628 (3) - http://puu.sh/eht6F/2a7ae023f4.jpg…………厚~
04:43:368 (1) - 05:07:072 (1) - 这2段连打我觉得还是做点距离打起来比较爽……不要……超過8個太難了，前面還是一堆圈
05:33:554 (1) - 这个跟红线好像有点不准……我不會timing啊幫幫我111

1. 05:34:297 (2) - consider nc here since the slow down due to the bpm change is quite darastic
2. 00:23:924 (6) - i dont think this needs normal sampleset?
   01:26:702 - ^
   02:48:183 - ^
   03:59:294 - ^
3. 00:29:480 (4) - doesn't need clap?
4. 01:37:257 - auto sample
5. 01:37:443 (3) - soft sample
   01:38:924 - ^
   01:39:850 - ^
   01:40:405 - ^
   02:59:480 (4) - ^
   03:01:887 - ^
   03:03:368 - ^
   04:12:998 - ^
   04:14:480 - ^
   im not quite sure if i was too consistent with these, so if you find anything that was inconsistent please apply them too
6. 02:24:110 (1,2) - why not copy paste one slider
7. 03:47:813 (5) - isnt there some kind of clap you can put here maybe?
   03:50:776 - ^
   03:53:739 - ^
   03:56:702 - ^
   
   these hitsounds are great, feel free to reject any of my hitsound suggestions since i don't understand your kick pattern too much (i wouldn't really mind if you rejected all of them just have a reason)

Kibbleru wrote:

recheck

1. 05:34:297 (2) - consider nc here since the slow down due to the bpm change is quite darastic……ok，i move 05:33:554 (4) - NC to here ……
2. 00:23:924 (6) - i dont think this needs normal sampleset?
   01:26:702 - ^
   02:48:183 - ^
   03:59:294 - ^
3. 00:29:480 (4) - doesn't need clap?
4. 01:37:257 - auto sample
5. 01:37:443 (3) - soft sample
   01:38:924 - ^
   01:39:850 - ^
   01:40:405 - ^
   02:59:480 (4) - ^
   03:01:887 - ^
   03:03:368 - ^
   04:12:998 - ^
   04:14:480 - ^
   im not quite sure if i was too consistent with these, so if you find anything that was inconsistent please apply them too
   
   i add hit-normal in 1/1slider and almost note …… skip some 1/2 slider tail …… of course music is “x-ox-xo-” all part ……but it's too hard to compose for me orz ……so i add some change
   
6. 02:24:110 (1,2) - why not copy paste one slider …… a…… copy now orz ……
7. 03:47:813 (5) - isnt there some kind of clap you can put here maybe?……just i am too lazy LOL …… all add ……
   03:50:776 - ^
   03:53:739 - ^
   03:56:702 - ^
   
   these hitsounds are great, feel free to reject any of my hitsound suggestions since i don't understand your kick pattern too much (i wouldn't really mind if you rejected all of them just have a reason)
   
   don't be so humble orz ……

1. 04:03:369 (1) - touches hp bar
2. make combo color 1 and combo color 3 more different from each other
3. and maybe make combo color 5 a bit darker too
4. did you want to keep letterboxing? you choice on this one
5. delete storyboard if you're not going to have one
6. drum-hitclap has a slight delay use this one http://puu.sh/ejokB/a4b5b5521c.wav
7. your current mp3 is only 128 kbps, could you possibly find a better one?
8. not important, lol using the song name as difficulty name is just.. not creative
9. uh i THINK could put marathon in tags

Kibbleru wrote:

1. 04:03:369 (1) - touches hp bar ……i down 04:01:146 (2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - part
2. make combo color 1 and combo color 3 more different from each other……;w; ……but i don't know to choose what is good , it's not important ？
3. and maybe make combo color 5 a bit darker too……color 5 “128→164 ”and color 6 “192→212”
4. did you want to keep letterboxing? you choice on this one……keep >,
5. delete storyboard if you're not going to have one …… fix orz …… i don't kown why it always appear ……
6. drum-hitclap has a slight delay use this one http://puu.sh/ejokB/a4b5b5521c.wav ……fix~
7. your current mp3 is only 128 kbps, could you possibly find a better one?……192kbps are rare orz …… and i need offest check orz ……
   
8. not important, lol using the song name as difficulty name is just.. not creative ……yse ，not creative orz…… do you have a better name /
9. uh i THINK could put marathon in tags……ok …… but i think it's not marathon 233

Narcissu wrote:

Kibbleru wrote:

1. make combo color 1 and combo color 3 more different from each other……;w; ……but i don't know to choose what is good , it's not important ？ this is quite an important issue, if combo colors are too similar, it can lead to an unrank
   
2. not important, lol using the song name as difficulty name is just.. not creative ……yse ，not creative orz…… do you have a better name / i cant seem to find any lyrics of the song lol, usually i pull something out from the lyrics

[Colours]
Combo1 : 212,212,212
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 0,128,128
Combo4 : 86,90,148
Combo5 : 255,128,255
Combo6 : 130,130,130

Kibbleru wrote:

whoops, remote is in the tag twice, please remove one and ill rebubble it

lkx_Shore wrote:

Nostalgia
01:21:487 (3) - 换成1/2滑条？……厚~
03:53:153 (1,2,3) - 真的和03:53:524 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 不同，不换个梗摆放区分音乐变化？……當作本來就是這樣的吧orz
04:44:079 (1) - 我还是觉得换成note就好(……的確note比較合曲但是我更傾向打的合適……和上面那個一樣……3/4的note肯定會墜毀的&&
05:07:783 (1) - 同上.
05:25:560 (3) - 滑条折返处换W?……厚~

最后的那里是滑条折返处对不上，要按的地方都对上了，我觉得无伤大雅.

1. Timing is quite questionable at the end. You should add a timing point at 05:33:807 -, the piano is actually here. (05:33:524 (4) –‘s reverse point is not at ticks on your timing). Also offset at 05:33:523 –is a little early, try the timing below:
   
   
   code

   376,370.37037037037,4,2,1,50,1,0
   332968,444.444444444444,4,2,1,50,1,0
   333537,496.894409937888,4,2,1,50,1,0
   333807,740.740740740741,4,2,1,50,1,0
   334267,895.522388059701,4,2,1,50,1,0
   335400,1071.42857142857,4,2,1,50,1,0 

2. soft-hitwhistle is delayed more than 5ms,
   SPOILER

   
   please use this file instead: http://puu.sh/epADr/929651301e.wav

1. 01:10:653 –How about adding a circle to follow drums better？
2. 01:17:968 (2,3) –make them a same shape for better view
3. 02:17:783 (4) –it shoud be snapped to 1/3 ticks like 00:20:746 (5) –
4. 03:33:709 (1) –I suggest you to move it far away from 03:33:338 (6) –to make jump to emphasize the stress here, for example (345,232)
5. 03:33:894 (1) –I think you forget set sampleset to normal to the spinner.
6. 03:54:079 (3) –I think you can remove it, for following piano well.
7. 05:26:301 (1) –end it at 05:26:579 –to follow music track like your followed at 05:25:560 (3) –

Emik wrote:

加油 期待中
here's my mod:
Kibbleru are is the best one of all the modders
233

Fycho wrote:

Popped due to several issues:

~General~

1. Timing is quite questionable at the end. You should add a timing point at 05:33:807 -, the piano is actually here. (05:33:524 (4) –‘s reverse point is not at ticks on your timing). Also offset at 05:33:523 –is a little early, try the timing below: …… 換上了√……不過為了能全部用滑條而且不改文件所以換了紅線的設置位置……
   
   
   code

   376,370.37037037037,4,2,1,50,1,0
   332968,444.444444444444,4,2,1,50,1,0
   333537,496.894409937888,4,2,1,50,1,0
   333807,740.740740740741,4,2,1,50,1,0
   334267,895.522388059701,4,2,1,50,1,0
   335400,1071.42857142857,4,2,1,50,1,0 

2. soft-hitwhistle is delayed more than 5ms, …… fix ~
   SPOILER

   
   please use this file instead: http://puu.sh/epADr/929651301e.wav

~Nostalgia~

1. 01:10:653 –How about adding a circle to follow drums better？……不想下前面下五連orz……
2. 01:17:968 (2,3) –make them a same shape for better view……ok~
3. 02:17:783 (4) –it shoud be snapped to 1/3 ticks like 00:20:746 (5) – fix……而且拉近了後面圈的距離……我總是覺得最後那個音是落在1/2的……
4. 03:33:709 (1) –I suggest you to move it far away from 03:33:338 (6) –to make jump to emphasize the stress here, for example (345,232)……ok~
5. 03:33:894 (1) –I think you forget set sampleset to normal to the spinner.fix~
6. 03:54:079 (3) –I think you can remove it, for following piano well.3/4的圈會墜毀的啦……當作本來就是這樣吧111
7. 05:26:301 (1) –end it at 05:26:579 –to follow music track like your followed at 05:25:560 (3) –ok~

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