1. 00:20:035 (3) - I suggest moving this to a lower position on the screen. I think round flow will be nicer here: http://puu.sh/ddv2n/802984c872.jpg
2. 00:20:776 (5) - Ctrl+G might be cool.
3. 00:30:035 (1) - I think the reverse flows better: http://puu.sh/ddv8T/9c3b514fde.jpg
4. 00:32:628 (4,1) - Maybe it will be nice to put a little larger spacing here since (1) is a downbeat.
5. 00:36:517 (2) - I think it will flow better to put this more up and to the right: http://puu.sh/ddvq8/76e0cfc2c2.jpg (x:292|y:12)
6. 00:59:294 (5,6,1) - I feel like this kind of movement is awkward, with jump to (6) and smaller spacing (6,1). I think (6,1) should have larger distance, or direction change to emphasize downbeat in song.
7. 01:02:257 (4,1) - Random suggestion, just my preference: http://puu.sh/ddvHz/69b38291b9.jpg
8. 01:04:109 (1) - This slider is touching the hp bar. It is best to avoid this to look better and avoid distracting the player. Move it down a bit to avoid this.
9. 01:06:146 (2,2) - Fix stack.
10. 01:27:072 (2) - The rhythm here doesn't match the song. If you listen carefully to vocals, the rhythm is not the same here. It is more like this: http://puu.sh/ddwOs/8ee2cc65df.jpg so I suggest using some different rhythm, maybe like this: http://puu.sh/ddwQb/f6b7c179fc.jpg
11. 02:31:146 (4,1) - I suggest using larger distance for emphasis of downbeat on (1).
12. 03:02:998 (2) - I think it will flow much smoother into the next note if you reverse this: http://puu.sh/ddwlC/2c834a95fb.jpg
13. 03:18:924 (1,2) - (1) is touching the hp bar, so move them down a bit.
14. 03:50:035 (1,2) - This feels a bit awkward to play. I suggest curving (1) in the direction of (2) for nicer flow.
15. 04:03:369 (1) - This is touching the hp bar too.

lkx_Shore wrote:

General

1. 你的前置时间加起来不够两秒，添加406ms确保玩家有足够的准备时间。

Nostalgia

• 
  最后两条线的offset晚了点。……fix……其實我覺得前面哪兩個折返也有問題orz
  

  Timing:
  BPM:67 offset:334297
  BPM:54.9 offset:335430

1. 没有插好的绿线 - 333408ms.……刪掉了111
2. 00:06:331 (1) - 音乐在这有张力变化，加个Whistle在滑条尾巴，最好再做点跳在这些地方。……比起應和某個聲音我還是習慣按固定的規律下音效orz
3. 00:11:146 (3) - 这种音可以用类似的滑条来表现 ……好~
   
   img

   
4. 00:18:102 - 加note带Whistle？……唔……我思考下……
5. 00:19:109 (3) - 2走过来3是很卡手的...如果第二个滑条趋势不是顺着的就最好别放折返了。……這段re了一下orz
6. 00:55:961 (4) - 这个弄个跳比较好，有个重音在这。……我覺得6note夾雜跳放前面有點難orz
7. 00:57:998 (6) - 音乐和前面有变化，别stack。……好~
8. 01:08:184 (4) - 你在01:06:517 (3) - 是把clap添加到了滑条尾...但你在01:08:184 (4) - 又让clap出现在了滑条头，这一个部分就没过去就变来变去很容易打乱节奏，建议改掉。……限制太多我就排不動版了惹……基本上還是覺得人聲比較重要吧orz
9. 01:30:035 (3) - 不用折返更好。……好~
10. 03:45:591 (1) - 在滑条加一个40%音量的soft-Finish?……好~
11. 03:52:955 - 为什么要漏这个音……..和下面那個overmap的一樣……我覺得這樣的打起來會更合理一點orz……雖然本來就是兩個音……但是二連很反人類啊111
12. 03:53:368 (3) - Remove.顺便把这一小段从03:53:554 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这个整体分开。
13. 04:41:887 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 偷懒，建议重排，而且间距应该是越来越大才对,缩小间距只会让人感到莫名。……我試試orz
14. 04:44:109 (1) - 去掉折返，04:44:665 - 加note在 X:384 Y:208 左右的地方。……3/4的間隔我也覺得容易墜毀orz
15. 05:02:628 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 2/4clap掉线？……這段已經一排finish了我覺得還寫clap會很吵orz……
16. 05:07:813 (1) - 同 04:44:109 (1) -

Others

这个图有一个致命错误，跟人声时，节奏和音效是分开的。这样打的是一个节奏音效又是一个节奏完全没意思...……我也是這麼想的不過我覺得這是最好的處理手段了orz……很多歌也都是鼓點和人聲分開的嘛111
例如：01:18:924 (1,2,3,4,5) - | 01:07:072 (1,2,3,4) -
说句不好听的，这样下音效顶多只能哄哄外行人...
Star. Goodluck

Gaia wrote:

Narcissu 好萌啊啊啊
(｡･ω･｡)♥

CloudSplash16 wrote:

Hi

[Nostalgia]

1. 00:20:035 (3) - I suggest moving this to a lower position on the screen. I think round flow will be nicer here: http://puu.sh/ddv2n/802984c872.jpg……ok~
2. 00:20:776 (5) - Ctrl+G might be cool.……ok>,
3. 00:30:035 (1) - I think the reverse flows better: http://puu.sh/ddv8T/9c3b514fde.jpg……your flow better but more change 111……i try orz
4. 00:32:628 (4,1) - Maybe it will be nice to put a little larger spacing here since (1) is a downbeat.……ok~
5. 00:36:517 (2) - I think it will flow better to put this more up and to the right: http://puu.sh/ddvq8/76e0cfc2c2.jpg (x:292|y:12)……too far for me orz ……
6. 00:59:294 (5,6,1) - I feel like this kind of movement is awkward, with jump to (6) and smaller spacing (6,1). I think (6,1) should have larger distance, or direction change to emphasize downbeat in song.……(6,1) far than （5.6）now >,
7. 01:02:257 (4,1) - Random suggestion, just my preference: http://puu.sh/ddvHz/69b38291b9.jpg……ok~
8. 01:04:109 (1) - This slider is touching the hp bar. It is best to avoid this to look better and avoid distracting the player. Move it down a bit to avoid this.……ok~
9. 01:06:146 (2,2) - Fix stack.……fix>,
10. 01:27:072 (2) - The rhythm here doesn't match the song. If you listen carefully to vocals, the rhythm is not the same here. It is more like this: http://puu.sh/ddwOs/8ee2cc65df.jpg so I suggest using some different rhythm, maybe like this: http://puu.sh/ddwQb/f6b7c179fc.jpg……but i hear vocals in 3/4 www
11. 02:31:146 (4,1) - I suggest using larger distance for emphasis of downbeat on (1).……ok~
12. 03:02:998 (2) - I think it will flow much smoother into the next note if you reverse this: http://puu.sh/ddwlC/2c834a95fb.jpg
13. 03:18:924 (1,2) - (1) is touching the hp bar, so move them down a bit.……i think it's just white link not downbeat 111
14. 03:50:035 (1,2) - This feels a bit awkward to play. I suggest curving (1) in the direction of (2) for nicer flow.……
15. 04:03:369 (1) - This is touching the hp bar too.……fix~

Generally nice map. The style is cool.

jimpky wrote:

虽然不懂摸。。路过给个赞啥的。。打了打感觉燃点不太够，w 怎么说呢，感觉左手点击太均匀了，切纸太少什么的可能，

zxhzxhz wrote:

感觉没啥大毛病，我就大概看了看O.O
00:01:887 (1) - 拉弯一点
00:24:109 (1,2,3) - 样子有点蠢><
01:04:109 (1) - ctrl+g……同向是我的愛orz……
01:07:072 (1) - 这个不顺……因為是1/1啊……順了就被當1/2了
01:21:702 (4,1) - 位置交换一下……掉頭也是我的愛……
01:29:109 (5) - 和4分开点（?……
01:43:276 (4) - 弄成短滑条(?……我從頭到尾都沒用過短滑啊111
01:46:517 (4,5) - 互换位置……
01:58:183 (4,5,6) - 别做成原地的……我所有連打都是原地啊111
02:27:350 (2) - ctrl+g……
03:31:517 (3,4) - 互换位置……那太遠了吧……
03:32:257 (1,2,3,4) - 这个梗建议重新弄一弄……
04:43:368 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 连打拆开比较有力，如果能的话考虑一下那种两个两个的有间距连打（我摆的有点蠢Orz）

SPOILER

04:50:220 (6) - 不顺
第一个和第三个kiai后的平缓段，有个清脆的啪啪啪的音效，有些地方听起来稍微有点不和谐
下面美丽orz
这种曲子不加个sb真的好么……不會做sb哭哭

Narcissu wrote:

I'm a loli

Hakurei Yoru wrote:

让我想起了最早玩EZNM时候的青春（明明现在还小

这首曲……太好听

00:19:850 (2) - DS1.8拖到3滑条尾个人感觉怎么都比现在好。……不想都是疊起來的111
00:12:257 (1) - 往左拉个小弧度 要好看……好
00:47:072 (3,4,5,6,1) - 请务必善用功能 play中都可以看出来这个五角星不对劲辣……我計畫就是平時的不標準然後kiai的標準111
01:21:517 (3,4,1,2,3) - 这flow好诡异啊QAQ 反过来转可以吗……好
02:09:665 (3) - 这个位置很不合适，与上面的note1与滑条4成直线较好。……直線的話能放的地方都太近了……
03:29:294 (1,3) - 修正一下blanket 这里看得出来……好
04:49:850 (4,5,6) - 其实像这种突然的折线的话 干脆把6再放开点……沒地方放辣……
05:08:924 (2,3) - blanket可以更好……好
05:16:887 (4) - 个人建议就用直线滑条……好
05:31:887 (6) - 顺转20°再放上来一点……我喜歡同向……

hmmm……非常不情愿地变成了骗kud性质的mod

就是觉得前面部分的跳还是要DS吧...

整张图的感觉还是很APP(adj 的

抱歉我做不好Hard QAQ …… 哭哭我只會做hard QAQ

Star……喵~

[Teichan] wrote:

M4M，sorry for the delay。。。。自己的图都不想看

本来写得差不多了，想了想，把排列上的nazi全去掉了（感觉没资格），let's begin

Red means you must fix.
Blue means highly recommended to fix.
Black means my personal comments.
[General]
Tag加上专辑Starlight Vision
bg and hitsound checked, no unrank issues found.
[Nostalgia - Rhythm]

1. 00:05:405 (3) - 感觉是否不stack，这里音乐是上扬的……好難改啊111……我在想想
2. 00:29:294 (3,4,5) - 改成两个circle加一个slider？ 这里3和4的头有很明显的击打声，用circle打击感强一些……好
3. 00:48:368 - 这里不放note感觉有点没有理由，不过打着还是没问题……orz
4. 03:47:257 (2,3,4) - 这里有主音571，而1和5是鼓点，建议改成一个reverse slider（我忽然忘记这个中文是啥了。。。回转滑条？）或者滑条加单点组合，最好不要stack。……第一個也是有琴音的111
5. 03:53:183 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 其实忽然下这个节奏有点莫名（虽然还是能打）只有第二个三连是契合音乐的，改一下吧？……是overmap的不過我覺得會比二連更正常orz

排版比我好了一万倍，我做图的心态还是太急躁了。

[Nostalgia - Sound]
音效选得非常好。

1. 00:12:257 (1) - 这里下个finish?……不要……
2. 00:17:443 (3) - 整个滑条全下clap吧……不要……
3. 00:26:331 (3) - 用绿线提一下clap的音量，不然打起来根本没感觉（其实我觉得要用不同的hitsound，但是试了试finish不适合），你也可以用新的hitsound。……厚，我去找找
4. 00:29:294 (3,4) - 00:35:220 (3,4) - 00:38:183 (3) - 如上...我觉得这些地方你也应该知道，之后相同的就不说了。
5. 00:59:665 (1) - 从这一段开始，音乐开始上扬（就是配器多了），所以音效加得密集一点，至少要和前面的不同，但是也不用下得像kiai那么多
   
   an example:
   01:00:776 (4) - 01:01:702 (2) - 01:02:257 (4) - 01:03:183 (2) - 加上clap（滑条均指滑条头），往后类推……不要……
6. 01:04:109 (1,4) - 这两个滑条尾clap下得好，所以01:15:961 (1) - 这个应该是忘记加clap了吧……對，
7. 01:34:294 (3) - 这个滑条头的clap去掉比较好 ……好
8. 01:34:572 (4,5) - 加clap，其实这属于我在前面提到的换音效的部分，所以还是为强击打换一个音效吧……
9. 01:35:220 (1) - 这一段的音效略大声，建议调小一点，53%左右吧，50%有点小了……強迫症要求我必須用5的倍數QAQ……55好了
10. 01:44:109 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 圈出来点个赞，建议两个两个一组下绿线渐强，每次提2%吧（前提是你接受了我上一条，在前面降了音量）……我覺得這段不是漸強……都是對等的……
11. 02:58:183 (1) - 和上面一样，改成53%吧
12. 03:07:072 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 渐强
13. 03:59:665 。。。我怎么听不到这个clap，我还以为是漏音效了。。。。感觉有点神奇……QAQ
    04:02:628 (3) - 怎么这个也是。。。我感觉我有点晕了，啊啊啊啊啊啊明天再来写
14. 好那就接着来写啦 04:02:628 (3) - You know what
15. 04:18:184 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You know what
16. 04:24:109 (1) - 建议单提一下这个whistle的音量 04:27:072 (1) - 04:30:035 (1) - 同理……好
17. 04:35:961 (1) - 加clap…………不好
18. 04:38:924 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 整段渐强
19. 05:25:590 (3) - 咦这里怎么就变成只有滑条头加clap了，和00:17:443 (3)保持前后一致吧……都改成後面的clap了惹

[结语]
比我强太多了，希望我的这篇水mod能对你有所帮助。

呜呜呜呜呜我真是懒啊，想射星的时候kudosu都不够了。。。

Narcissu wrote:

I'm a loli

……那個什麼什麼的表情……

guineaQ wrote:

Haiii from PM request OwO

Nostalgia

[General]
Nothing

[The diff itself]

1. 00:01:146 - I recommend switching 00:01:146 (3) - into single circle, since I don't think there is any significant note requiring a hold, and the music you mapped the slider end to actually should be an clickable object, try this rhythm……i wish the rhythm can continuous …… play can hit note differ 1/2 ……
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:04:109 (4,5) - same story but this time I would use this rhythm instead.
   
   SPOILER

   
   The reason is that the pitch of the last note at 00:04:665 - goes DOWN instead of UP unlike the last similar riff
3. 00:06:702 (2,3,4) - Fancy this rhythm?……no……i work extra whistle and i want not skip it……
   
   SPOILER

   
   I don't think there is a strong enough beat in the 00:07:072 - for it to deserve something clickable AND a whistle hitsound
4. 00:08:739 (4) - 3 circle anti jumps would be perfectly justified here. Since you didn't use any 1/4s it shouldn't be confusing either.……i dislike anti jump……and the sound very light …… i wish use slider……
5. 00:10:035 (3,4) - same as 00:01:146 -, and remember you can control the distance between those two circles that you will place (if you choose to do it) to decide how much emphasis you want to put on them (higher distance for more pitch disparity or less distance if it doesn't etc.)
6. 00:23:183 (3,4) - this sounds better :3……no…… it not sound here but it's white link orz
   
   SPOILER

   
   there isn't really anything strong at 00:23:368 - :<
7. 00:55:961 (4) - how about you increase the distance on this since there is a stronger beat here? I think somewhere around x:253 y:306 would work ……not jump here orz
8. 00:57:072 (2,3,4,5,6) - :3
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:18:739 - why u no map this strong beat D:……a……because i think play not hear the light sound orz
10. 02:14:480 (4) - ok instead of having something holdable here, how does this sound to you
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 02:17:813 (4) - PLS 3 circle triplet sounds so nice here D:……5 note too more orz
12. 02:46:517 - to 02:46:887 - seems like you left them blank to give some break for players, but this part does have some awesomeness you can map with simple 3 circle antijumps :<
13. 03:47:257 (2,3,4,5) - maybe.. :3?
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 03:49:294 - add circle B)……no …… i only find right hand piano
15. 03:50:776 - :c c-circle?
16. 03:52:628 - :c ^
17. 03:53:554 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - erm, this should be just single stream, but idk, I guess you can leave it as it is
18. 05:09:294 (3,4) - yeah these are same as 00:01:146 -
19. 05:12:257 (4,5) - ^^
20. 05:15:220 (3,4) - ^^^
21. 05:18:183 (3,4) - ^^^^
22. 05:21:146 (3,4) - ^^^^^
23. 05:24:849 (1,2) - ^^^^^^
24. 05:26:331 (1) - I don't really like this rhythm in general but I think this is the time to use it……you are right but 1/4 too confusion imo……orz
    
    SPOILER

    

>w<……::>_<::
/me runs

Kibbleru wrote:

i really like this map let me know if u need someone to flame it :>

332998,444.444444444444,4,2,1,50,1,0
332998,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,50,0,0
333553,496.894409937888,4,2,1,50,1,0
333553,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,50,0,0

Sharlo wrote:

你老实说音效谁下的。

TicClick wrote:

copy and paste this into timing panel (F6)

332998,444.444444444444,4,2,1,50,1,0
332998,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,50,0,0
333553,496.894409937888,4,2,1,50,1,0
333553,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,50,0,0

also change last offset's BPM from 54,90 to 56

liuyiqiangbu wrote:

既然BAT来看过了我也不太敢多说了，稍微说点
01:42:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里直线的感觉不是太明显，不如干脆把滑条弄成弯的……厚
01:44:109 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 让我想到一个高举双臂的人……233
01:46:146 (2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/drByL/046387503e.png让我想到了这张图，图里的处理我觉得更好点，算是参考吧……這個還是算了……是前面的複製翻轉過來的
02:43:925 (2,3,4,5) - 这里flow不太好...其实3放在4那也不错啊……厚
03:52:813 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/drBVF/c03d7851a6.png个人建议……亞達……平行是我的愛
04:23:554 (3,4,5,1) - 这里我觉得很神……不就是單純的DS直線嗎111
05:24:294 (3,4,5) - 05:27:257 (3,4,5) - 都可以弄成蜿蜒的图形……直線我的愛111

总体来说质量挺高的啊，不过有的地方感觉不太顺

1. remove storyboard
2. Theres a ranked short version for this song, perhaps you can go there and take some of the tags? https://osu.ppy.sh/s/182845

1. 00:53:183 - i would recommend mapping this out? its pretty loud imo o-o
2. 01:10:683 - perhaps add note here? this should be a 5 note stream imo
3. 01:24:109 (2) - hmm how bout use this rhythm? since there is a guitar sound on 01:24:480 -
   
   SPOILER

   
   02:47:072 (2) - ^
   03:58:184 (2) - ^
4. 01:43:368 (4) - maybe add NC here as sort of a lead in to 01:44:109 (1) - this section where nc is used alot?
   03:06:331 (4) - ^
   04:17:443 (4) - ^
5. 02:17:813 (4) - how bout 1/4 repeat instead q: there's a piano
6. 03:50:776 - why not map this sound out like u did for 03:47:813 (5) -
7. 03:52:628 - eh skipping this kinda felt weird for me. if you map something like 03:52:813 - out then you should put something for this one too
8. 02:04:109 (5) - could nc this owo? idk i just like to nc between long jump patterns
   03:27:072 (5) - ^
   
9. 01:54:294 (4,5,1) - can you justify some of these overmaps for me? i don't really have anything against them but i want to hear your reasoning behind them

Kibbleru wrote:

[General]

1. remove storyboard …… fix ~
2. Theres a ranked short version for this song, perhaps you can go there and take some of the tags? https://osu.ppy.sh/s/182845 ……ok ~

[Blah]

1. 00:53:183 - i would recommend mapping this out? its pretty loud imo o-o……a……i give up some because it's not important orz
2. 01:10:683 - perhaps add note here? this should be a 5 note stream imo……^
3. 01:24:109 (2) - hmm how bout use this rhythm? since there is a guitar sound on 01:24:480 - ……ok ~ all change
   
   SPOILER

   
   02:47:072 (2) - ^
   03:58:184 (2) - ^
4. 01:43:368 (4) - maybe add NC here as sort of a lead in to 01:44:109 (1) - this section where nc is used alot?……i skip some NC …… intent is keep all pink color in The fourth section …… NC can point jump but i prefer to keep form orz
   03:06:331 (4) - ^
   04:17:443 (4) - ^
5. 02:17:813 (4) - how bout 1/4 repeat instead q: there's a piano……ok~
6. 03:50:776 - why not map this sound out like u did for 03:47:813 (5) - ……www, i find piano only …… but many some point it 111, use a 1/2 slider instead of one note now
7. 03:52:628 - eh skipping this kinda felt weird for me. if you map something like 03:52:813 - out then you should put something for this one too …… ok ~
8. 02:04:109 (5) - could nc this owo? idk i just like to nc between long jump patterns
   03:27:072 (5) - ^
   
9. 01:54:294 (4,5,1) - can you justify some of these overmaps for me? i don't really have anything against them but i want to hear your reasoning behind them…… i wish play have more click on the Kiai time orz, same as i give up some sound in other part. and i think add 3-hit note before downbeat is well …… of course i‘m ready delete it if you think it's wrong 111

nothing to complain about, absolutely fantastic map! also your consistency is very nice …… 喵~

Gaia wrote:

Narcissu 好口愛 ヾ(｡･ω･｡)

改天一定要用這個ava :3

Kibbleru wrote:

poke me when that SB is made!

tm1209 wrote:

[General]

OD我覺得還能再高一些，比如8，這樣更送pp……加到7.5了……我還是希望多數人能輕鬆的得到高ACC……
另外我覺得難度名直接和歌名一樣似乎不太好。。……可是我沒有其他更好的選擇……


[Nostalgia]

00:20:776 (5,1) - 感覺這個沒啥必要做成平行，我大概會用5的轉折點和4做一個blanket …… http://puu.sh/eemVZ/76b5113310.jpg
00:23:924 (6) - X185Y348，這樣的話和00:23:368 (4) - 00:24:109 (1) - 間距相同而且prev2.00 next1.50左右的間距應該會很舒服……ok~
00:47:072 (3,4,5,6,1) - 擺的似乎不是很標準……和kiai中標準的做對比~
01:22:072 (2,3) - ctrl+G？……ok~
01:46:146 (2,3,4,5,6) - 我覺得這地方可以做個越跳越大的梗……我覺得這段平穩較妥……
03:55:961 (1,3) - 其實我覺得這兩個更應該疊一起…………ok~
04:25:035 (2) - 這地方感覺做個滑條比較好 ……安靜的地方我想多空一點…… http://puu.sh/eeorf/0047457a52.jpg
04:42:628 (1,2,3,4) - 根據前面的來看，這裡也應該做成Y軸對稱的那種……一開始是這樣打算的不過擺不出來orz ……

sjoy wrote:

[Nostalgia]
00:16:517 (5) - 强迫症会对齐DS的……我就是強迫症用的1.4和1.6【喂
00:24:665 (2) - ^
00:40:776 (2,3) - 我觉得这里用滑条比较好 有个降音的过程 叠一起没那感觉 怎么感觉是没地方摆了？……一直是滑條有點難擺……
00:44:480 (4,5) - ^
00:49:294 (1,2) - ^
00:54:480 (5) - 我觉得用弧度感觉比较好 直线太硬了……ok~
01:20:035 (4,5) - 感觉用个跳比较好……亞達
01:24:850 (1) - 用个红点什么的拐个弯感觉挺好的……ok~
01:35:220 - 这段的CLAP感觉有点大声了 直接盖住VOCAL了……換成55了，順便kiai也降了10
02:17:813 (4) - 1/3 节奏……這個1/3的話排版很糾結……
02:31:517 (1) - 这里有个3连漏了我觉得难受的……亞達
02:58:183这段和前面那段一股即视感。。 尤其是到了 03:07:072 (1) - 这里。。。…………233，後面那個順序的反的哦【？
03:52:628 (3) - http://puu.sh/eht6F/2a7ae023f4.jpg…………厚~
04:43:368 (1) - 05:07:072 (1) - 这2段连打我觉得还是做点距离打起来比较爽……不要……超過8個太難了，前面還是一堆圈
05:33:554 (1) - 这个跟红线好像有点不准……我不會timing啊幫幫我111

1. 05:34:297 (2) - consider nc here since the slow down due to the bpm change is quite darastic
2. 00:23:924 (6) - i dont think this needs normal sampleset?
   01:26:702 - ^
   02:48:183 - ^
   03:59:294 - ^
3. 00:29:480 (4) - doesn't need clap?
4. 01:37:257 - auto sample
5. 01:37:443 (3) - soft sample
   01:38:924 - ^
   01:39:850 - ^
   01:40:405 - ^
   02:59:480 (4) - ^
   03:01:887 - ^
   03:03:368 - ^
   04:12:998 - ^
   04:14:480 - ^
   im not quite sure if i was too consistent with these, so if you find anything that was inconsistent please apply them too
6. 02:24:110 (1,2) - why not copy paste one slider
7. 03:47:813 (5) - isnt there some kind of clap you can put here maybe?
   03:50:776 - ^
   03:53:739 - ^
   03:56:702 - ^
   
   these hitsounds are great, feel free to reject any of my hitsound suggestions since i don't understand your kick pattern too much (i wouldn't really mind if you rejected all of them just have a reason)

Kibbleru wrote:

recheck

1. 05:34:297 (2) - consider nc here since the slow down due to the bpm change is quite darastic……ok，i move 05:33:554 (4) - NC to here ……
2. 00:23:924 (6) - i dont think this needs normal sampleset?
   01:26:702 - ^
   02:48:183 - ^
   03:59:294 - ^
3. 00:29:480 (4) - doesn't need clap?
4. 01:37:257 - auto sample
5. 01:37:443 (3) - soft sample
   01:38:924 - ^
   01:39:850 - ^
   01:40:405 - ^
   02:59:480 (4) - ^
   03:01:887 - ^
   03:03:368 - ^
   04:12:998 - ^
   04:14:480 - ^
   im not quite sure if i was too consistent with these, so if you find anything that was inconsistent please apply them too
   
   i add hit-normal in 1/1slider and almost note …… skip some 1/2 slider tail …… of course music is “x-ox-xo-” all part ……but it's too hard to compose for me orz ……so i add some change
   
6. 02:24:110 (1,2) - why not copy paste one slider …… a…… copy now orz ……
7. 03:47:813 (5) - isnt there some kind of clap you can put here maybe?……just i am too lazy LOL …… all add ……
   03:50:776 - ^
   03:53:739 - ^
   03:56:702 - ^
   
   these hitsounds are great, feel free to reject any of my hitsound suggestions since i don't understand your kick pattern too much (i wouldn't really mind if you rejected all of them just have a reason)
   
   don't be so humble orz ……

1. 04:03:369 (1) - touches hp bar
2. make combo color 1 and combo color 3 more different from each other
3. and maybe make combo color 5 a bit darker too
4. did you want to keep letterboxing? you choice on this one
5. delete storyboard if you're not going to have one
6. drum-hitclap has a slight delay use this one http://puu.sh/ejokB/a4b5b5521c.wav
7. your current mp3 is only 128 kbps, could you possibly find a better one?
8. not important, lol using the song name as difficulty name is just.. not creative
9. uh i THINK could put marathon in tags

Kibbleru wrote:

1. 04:03:369 (1) - touches hp bar ……i down 04:01:146 (2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - part
2. make combo color 1 and combo color 3 more different from each other……;w; ……but i don't know to choose what is good , it's not important ？
3. and maybe make combo color 5 a bit darker too……color 5 “128→164 ”and color 6 “192→212”
4. did you want to keep letterboxing? you choice on this one……keep >,
5. delete storyboard if you're not going to have one …… fix orz …… i don't kown why it always appear ……
6. drum-hitclap has a slight delay use this one http://puu.sh/ejokB/a4b5b5521c.wav ……fix~
7. your current mp3 is only 128 kbps, could you possibly find a better one?……192kbps are rare orz …… and i need offest check orz ……
   
8. not important, lol using the song name as difficulty name is just.. not creative ……yse ，not creative orz…… do you have a better name /
9. uh i THINK could put marathon in tags……ok …… but i think it's not marathon 233

Narcissu wrote:

Kibbleru wrote:

1. make combo color 1 and combo color 3 more different from each other……;w; ……but i don't know to choose what is good , it's not important ？ this is quite an important issue, if combo colors are too similar, it can lead to an unrank
   
2. not important, lol using the song name as difficulty name is just.. not creative ……yse ，not creative orz…… do you have a better name / i cant seem to find any lyrics of the song lol, usually i pull something out from the lyrics

[Colours]
Combo1 : 212,212,212
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 0,128,128
Combo4 : 86,90,148
Combo5 : 255,128,255
Combo6 : 130,130,130

Kibbleru wrote:

whoops, remote is in the tag twice, please remove one and ill rebubble it

lkx_Shore wrote:

Nostalgia
01:21:487 (3) - 换成1/2滑条？……厚~
03:53:153 (1,2,3) - 真的和03:53:524 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 不同，不换个梗摆放区分音乐变化？……當作本來就是這樣的吧orz
04:44:079 (1) - 我还是觉得换成note就好(……的確note比較合曲但是我更傾向打的合適……和上面那個一樣……3/4的note肯定會墜毀的&&
05:07:783 (1) - 同上.
05:25:560 (3) - 滑条折返处换W?……厚~

最后的那里是滑条折返处对不上，要按的地方都对上了，我觉得无伤大雅.

1. Timing is quite questionable at the end. You should add a timing point at 05:33:807 -, the piano is actually here. (05:33:524 (4) –‘s reverse point is not at ticks on your timing). Also offset at 05:33:523 –is a little early, try the timing below:
   
   
   code

   376,370.37037037037,4,2,1,50,1,0
   332968,444.444444444444,4,2,1,50,1,0
   333537,496.894409937888,4,2,1,50,1,0
   333807,740.740740740741,4,2,1,50,1,0
   334267,895.522388059701,4,2,1,50,1,0
   335400,1071.42857142857,4,2,1,50,1,0 

2. soft-hitwhistle is delayed more than 5ms,
   SPOILER

   
   please use this file instead: http://puu.sh/epADr/929651301e.wav

1. 01:10:653 –How about adding a circle to follow drums better？
2. 01:17:968 (2,3) –make them a same shape for better view
3. 02:17:783 (4) –it shoud be snapped to 1/3 ticks like 00:20:746 (5) –
4. 03:33:709 (1) –I suggest you to move it far away from 03:33:338 (6) –to make jump to emphasize the stress here, for example (345,232)
5. 03:33:894 (1) –I think you forget set sampleset to normal to the spinner.
6. 03:54:079 (3) –I think you can remove it, for following piano well.
7. 05:26:301 (1) –end it at 05:26:579 –to follow music track like your followed at 05:25:560 (3) –

Emik wrote:

加油 期待中
here's my mod:
Kibbleru are is the best one of all the modders
233

Fycho wrote:

Popped due to several issues:

~General~

1. Timing is quite questionable at the end. You should add a timing point at 05:33:807 -, the piano is actually here. (05:33:524 (4) –‘s reverse point is not at ticks on your timing). Also offset at 05:33:523 –is a little early, try the timing below: …… 換上了√……不過為了能全部用滑條而且不改文件所以換了紅線的設置位置……
   
   
   code

   376,370.37037037037,4,2,1,50,1,0
   332968,444.444444444444,4,2,1,50,1,0
   333537,496.894409937888,4,2,1,50,1,0
   333807,740.740740740741,4,2,1,50,1,0
   334267,895.522388059701,4,2,1,50,1,0
   335400,1071.42857142857,4,2,1,50,1,0 

2. soft-hitwhistle is delayed more than 5ms, …… fix ~
   SPOILER

   
   please use this file instead: http://puu.sh/epADr/929651301e.wav

~Nostalgia~

1. 01:10:653 –How about adding a circle to follow drums better？……不想下前面下五連orz……
2. 01:17:968 (2,3) –make them a same shape for better view……ok~
3. 02:17:783 (4) –it shoud be snapped to 1/3 ticks like 00:20:746 (5) – fix……而且拉近了後面圈的距離……我總是覺得最後那個音是落在1/2的……
4. 03:33:709 (1) –I suggest you to move it far away from 03:33:338 (6) –to make jump to emphasize the stress here, for example (345,232)……ok~
5. 03:33:894 (1) –I think you forget set sampleset to normal to the spinner.fix~
6. 03:54:079 (3) –I think you can remove it, for following piano well.3/4的圈會墜毀的啦……當作本來就是這樣吧111
7. 05:26:301 (1) –end it at 05:26:579 –to follow music track like your followed at 05:25:560 (3) –ok~

Call me back when replied.

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