sjoy wrote:

[Nostalgia]
00:16:517 (5) - 强迫症会对齐DS的……我就是強迫症用的1.4和1.6【喂
00:24:665 (2) - ^
00:40:776 (2,3) - 我觉得这里用滑条比较好 有个降音的过程 叠一起没那感觉 怎么感觉是没地方摆了？……一直是滑條有點難擺……
00:44:480 (4,5) - ^
00:49:294 (1,2) - ^
00:54:480 (5) - 我觉得用弧度感觉比较好 直线太硬了……ok~
01:20:035 (4,5) - 感觉用个跳比较好……亞達
01:24:850 (1) - 用个红点什么的拐个弯感觉挺好的……ok~
01:35:220 - 这段的CLAP感觉有点大声了 直接盖住VOCAL了……換成55了，順便kiai也降了10
02:17:813 (4) - 1/3 节奏……這個1/3的話排版很糾結……
02:31:517 (1) - 这里有个3连漏了我觉得难受的……亞達
02:58:183这段和前面那段一股即视感。。 尤其是到了 03:07:072 (1) - 这里。。。…………233，後面那個順序的反的哦【？
03:52:628 (3) - http://puu.sh/eht6F/2a7ae023f4.jpg…………厚~
04:43:368 (1) - 05:07:072 (1) - 这2段连打我觉得还是做点距离打起来比较爽……不要……超過8個太難了，前面還是一堆圈
05:33:554 (1) - 这个跟红线好像有点不准……我不會timing啊幫幫我111

1. 05:34:297 (2) - consider nc here since the slow down due to the bpm change is quite darastic
2. 00:23:924 (6) - i dont think this needs normal sampleset?
   01:26:702 - ^
   02:48:183 - ^
   03:59:294 - ^
3. 00:29:480 (4) - doesn't need clap?
4. 01:37:257 - auto sample
5. 01:37:443 (3) - soft sample
   01:38:924 - ^
   01:39:850 - ^
   01:40:405 - ^
   02:59:480 (4) - ^
   03:01:887 - ^
   03:03:368 - ^
   04:12:998 - ^
   04:14:480 - ^
   im not quite sure if i was too consistent with these, so if you find anything that was inconsistent please apply them too
6. 02:24:110 (1,2) - why not copy paste one slider
7. 03:47:813 (5) - isnt there some kind of clap you can put here maybe?
   03:50:776 - ^
   03:53:739 - ^
   03:56:702 - ^
   
   these hitsounds are great, feel free to reject any of my hitsound suggestions since i don't understand your kick pattern too much (i wouldn't really mind if you rejected all of them just have a reason)

Kibbleru wrote:

recheck

1. 05:34:297 (2) - consider nc here since the slow down due to the bpm change is quite darastic……ok，i move 05:33:554 (4) - NC to here ……
2. 00:23:924 (6) - i dont think this needs normal sampleset?
   01:26:702 - ^
   02:48:183 - ^
   03:59:294 - ^
3. 00:29:480 (4) - doesn't need clap?
4. 01:37:257 - auto sample
5. 01:37:443 (3) - soft sample
   01:38:924 - ^
   01:39:850 - ^
   01:40:405 - ^
   02:59:480 (4) - ^
   03:01:887 - ^
   03:03:368 - ^
   04:12:998 - ^
   04:14:480 - ^
   im not quite sure if i was too consistent with these, so if you find anything that was inconsistent please apply them too
   
   i add hit-normal in 1/1slider and almost note …… skip some 1/2 slider tail …… of course music is “x-ox-xo-” all part ……but it's too hard to compose for me orz ……so i add some change
   
6. 02:24:110 (1,2) - why not copy paste one slider …… a…… copy now orz ……
7. 03:47:813 (5) - isnt there some kind of clap you can put here maybe?……just i am too lazy LOL …… all add ……
   03:50:776 - ^
   03:53:739 - ^
   03:56:702 - ^
   
   these hitsounds are great, feel free to reject any of my hitsound suggestions since i don't understand your kick pattern too much (i wouldn't really mind if you rejected all of them just have a reason)
   
   don't be so humble orz ……

1. 04:03:369 (1) - touches hp bar
2. make combo color 1 and combo color 3 more different from each other
3. and maybe make combo color 5 a bit darker too
4. did you want to keep letterboxing? you choice on this one
5. delete storyboard if you're not going to have one
6. drum-hitclap has a slight delay use this one http://puu.sh/ejokB/a4b5b5521c.wav
7. your current mp3 is only 128 kbps, could you possibly find a better one?
8. not important, lol using the song name as difficulty name is just.. not creative
9. uh i THINK could put marathon in tags

Kibbleru wrote:

1. 04:03:369 (1) - touches hp bar ……i down 04:01:146 (2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - part
2. make combo color 1 and combo color 3 more different from each other……;w; ……but i don't know to choose what is good , it's not important ？
3. and maybe make combo color 5 a bit darker too……color 5 “128→164 ”and color 6 “192→212”
4. did you want to keep letterboxing? you choice on this one……keep >,
5. delete storyboard if you're not going to have one …… fix orz …… i don't kown why it always appear ……
6. drum-hitclap has a slight delay use this one http://puu.sh/ejokB/a4b5b5521c.wav ……fix~
7. your current mp3 is only 128 kbps, could you possibly find a better one?……192kbps are rare orz …… and i need offest check orz ……
   
8. not important, lol using the song name as difficulty name is just.. not creative ……yse ，not creative orz…… do you have a better name /
9. uh i THINK could put marathon in tags……ok …… but i think it's not marathon 233

Narcissu wrote:

Kibbleru wrote:

1. make combo color 1 and combo color 3 more different from each other……;w; ……but i don't know to choose what is good , it's not important ？ this is quite an important issue, if combo colors are too similar, it can lead to an unrank
   
2. not important, lol using the song name as difficulty name is just.. not creative ……yse ，not creative orz…… do you have a better name / i cant seem to find any lyrics of the song lol, usually i pull something out from the lyrics

[Colours]
Combo1 : 212,212,212
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 0,128,128
Combo4 : 86,90,148
Combo5 : 255,128,255
Combo6 : 130,130,130

Kibbleru wrote:

whoops, remote is in the tag twice, please remove one and ill rebubble it

lkx_Shore wrote:

Nostalgia
01:21:487 (3) - 换成1/2滑条？……厚~
03:53:153 (1,2,3) - 真的和03:53:524 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 不同，不换个梗摆放区分音乐变化？……當作本來就是這樣的吧orz
04:44:079 (1) - 我还是觉得换成note就好(……的確note比較合曲但是我更傾向打的合適……和上面那個一樣……3/4的note肯定會墜毀的&&
05:07:783 (1) - 同上.
05:25:560 (3) - 滑条折返处换W?……厚~

最后的那里是滑条折返处对不上，要按的地方都对上了，我觉得无伤大雅.

1. Timing is quite questionable at the end. You should add a timing point at 05:33:807 -, the piano is actually here. (05:33:524 (4) –‘s reverse point is not at ticks on your timing). Also offset at 05:33:523 –is a little early, try the timing below:
   
   
   code

   376,370.37037037037,4,2,1,50,1,0
   332968,444.444444444444,4,2,1,50,1,0
   333537,496.894409937888,4,2,1,50,1,0
   333807,740.740740740741,4,2,1,50,1,0
   334267,895.522388059701,4,2,1,50,1,0
   335400,1071.42857142857,4,2,1,50,1,0 

2. soft-hitwhistle is delayed more than 5ms,
   SPOILER

   
   please use this file instead: http://puu.sh/epADr/929651301e.wav

1. 01:10:653 –How about adding a circle to follow drums better？
2. 01:17:968 (2,3) –make them a same shape for better view
3. 02:17:783 (4) –it shoud be snapped to 1/3 ticks like 00:20:746 (5) –
4. 03:33:709 (1) –I suggest you to move it far away from 03:33:338 (6) –to make jump to emphasize the stress here, for example (345,232)
5. 03:33:894 (1) –I think you forget set sampleset to normal to the spinner.
6. 03:54:079 (3) –I think you can remove it, for following piano well.
7. 05:26:301 (1) –end it at 05:26:579 –to follow music track like your followed at 05:25:560 (3) –

Emik wrote:

加油 期待中
here's my mod:
Kibbleru are is the best one of all the modders
233

Fycho wrote:

Popped due to several issues:

~General~

1. Timing is quite questionable at the end. You should add a timing point at 05:33:807 -, the piano is actually here. (05:33:524 (4) –‘s reverse point is not at ticks on your timing). Also offset at 05:33:523 –is a little early, try the timing below: …… 換上了√……不過為了能全部用滑條而且不改文件所以換了紅線的設置位置……
   
   
   code

   376,370.37037037037,4,2,1,50,1,0
   332968,444.444444444444,4,2,1,50,1,0
   333537,496.894409937888,4,2,1,50,1,0
   333807,740.740740740741,4,2,1,50,1,0
   334267,895.522388059701,4,2,1,50,1,0
   335400,1071.42857142857,4,2,1,50,1,0 

2. soft-hitwhistle is delayed more than 5ms, …… fix ~
   SPOILER

   
   please use this file instead: http://puu.sh/epADr/929651301e.wav

~Nostalgia~

1. 01:10:653 –How about adding a circle to follow drums better？……不想下前面下五連orz……
2. 01:17:968 (2,3) –make them a same shape for better view……ok~
3. 02:17:783 (4) –it shoud be snapped to 1/3 ticks like 00:20:746 (5) – fix……而且拉近了後面圈的距離……我總是覺得最後那個音是落在1/2的……
4. 03:33:709 (1) –I suggest you to move it far away from 03:33:338 (6) –to make jump to emphasize the stress here, for example (345,232)……ok~
5. 03:33:894 (1) –I think you forget set sampleset to normal to the spinner.fix~
6. 03:54:079 (3) –I think you can remove it, for following piano well.3/4的圈會墜毀的啦……當作本來就是這樣吧111
7. 05:26:301 (1) –end it at 05:26:579 –to follow music track like your followed at 05:25:560 (3) –ok~

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