Sorry it took me so long to get to this. *.*
[General]
*There are two "trance" tags, so remove one of them from all diffs
*"happy30" tag should only be in their own diff (same for the other two guest diff name tags)
[Easy]
00:16:786 (1,2,3,4) - Too hard of a pattern for an Easy diff. I'd delete 1 and 2, since an Easy diff doesn't need to be mapped to every lyric/note/whatever, and this would make a much easier pattern. Also, have 3 a little bit more on top of 4 like you do at the beginning of this diff with 00:11:619 (1,2).
00:20:952 (6) - delete this note
00:22:786 (1) - too far from the center of the spinner
00:36:119 (1) - ^
00:39:453 (2) - shorten to the red tick
00:43:119 (2,1) - I don't like the pause between these.
00:46:286 (2,3,4) - I'd make this into a short, repeating slider. 3 1/2 notes in a row at 180BPM is kinda difficult for Easy.
00:50:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd try to avoid these upbeats for an Easy diff. Maybe make (1,2,3) into medium-size repeating slider and then (4,5,6) into a short, repeating one?
00:56:786 (6,7,8) - same as 46:286
01:14:119 (2,1,2,3,1) - Try to avoid these stacks since they're a bit difficult to read. Perhaps add a grid or two space between notes to make reading it as easy as possible.
01:22:119 (3,4,5) - same as 46:286
01:23:619 (1) - move closer to previous and remove a repeat so that the next note is easier to see and hit
01:24:452 (2) - don't have this stacked under 01:22:786 (6).
01:27:452 (3,4,5) - same as 46:286...
01:30:452 (2) - remove a repeat
01:34:786 (2,3,4) - you know the drill...
01:40:119 (1) - too far from center
01:46:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't really like this stack. =X It's kinda boring imo
01:53:452 (1) - shouldn't this go back to normal sampleset?
01:52:452 (1) - closer to center please (OR exactly in the center xp)
01:56:452 (4,5) - make into a repeating slider
01:57:452 (2,3,4) - dddddd
01:58:452 (1,2,3) - ;x
01:59:452 (1,2) - make into a repeating slider..
02:02:119 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - stacks...
02:08:452 (4,5,6) - ^
02:12:786 (2,3,4,5) - too hard to read
02:17:452 (4) - end kiai here like in Normal.
02:27:119 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - stacks
02:28:786 (2,3,4) - ^
02:32:786 (5,6,7) - too hard
[Normal]
01:53:452 (3) - start kiai here in like Easy.
*lots of craziness that I didn't get to mod x_x;;;
[taka's Hard]
*lower Overall Difficulty a notch or two ;x
00:21:452 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too hard to read under the 100/300's from the previous stream.
00:35:286 (4,5,6) - difficult to read
01:12:786 (5) - ^
01:17:452 (1) - end kiai on the end of this instead of the middle o-o
*stopped here
[happy30]
*no custom colors?
Sorry that I didn't mod all diffs, but I was getting kinda dizzy from the high OD and crazy spacing (sick from surgery atm). I didn't get to play and do an offset check either, but if anything, it might only be a few ms late. Some of these diffs really need work, but I'll leave that up to regular modders to help. Good luck x.x;
EDIT: Forgot to mention that I'd add a 1/2 or 1 second audio lead-in to all diffs so that the song fades in nicer.
EDIT 2: My mistake; tags should be the same in all diffs. Just remove the trance one as I said. Also, lead-in isn't really important. :p
[General]
*There are two "trance" tags, so remove one of them from all diffs
[Easy]
00:16:786 (1,2,3,4) - Too hard of a pattern for an Easy diff. I'd delete 1 and 2, since an Easy diff doesn't need to be mapped to every lyric/note/whatever, and this would make a much easier pattern. Also, have 3 a little bit more on top of 4 like you do at the beginning of this diff with 00:11:619 (1,2).
00:20:952 (6) - delete this note
00:22:786 (1) - too far from the center of the spinner
00:36:119 (1) - ^
00:39:453 (2) - shorten to the red tick
00:43:119 (2,1) - I don't like the pause between these.
00:46:286 (2,3,4) - I'd make this into a short, repeating slider. 3 1/2 notes in a row at 180BPM is kinda difficult for Easy.
00:50:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd try to avoid these upbeats for an Easy diff. Maybe make (1,2,3) into medium-size repeating slider and then (4,5,6) into a short, repeating one?
00:56:786 (6,7,8) - same as 46:286
01:14:119 (2,1,2,3,1) - Try to avoid these stacks since they're a bit difficult to read. Perhaps add a grid or two space between notes to make reading it as easy as possible.
01:22:119 (3,4,5) - same as 46:286
01:23:619 (1) - move closer to previous and remove a repeat so that the next note is easier to see and hit
01:24:452 (2) - don't have this stacked under 01:22:786 (6).
01:27:452 (3,4,5) - same as 46:286...
01:30:452 (2) - remove a repeat
01:34:786 (2,3,4) - you know the drill...
01:40:119 (1) - too far from center
01:46:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't really like this stack. =X It's kinda boring imo
01:53:452 (1) - shouldn't this go back to normal sampleset?
01:52:452 (1) - closer to center please (OR exactly in the center xp)
01:56:452 (4,5) - make into a repeating slider
01:57:452 (2,3,4) - dddddd
01:58:452 (1,2,3) - ;x
01:59:452 (1,2) - make into a repeating slider..
02:02:119 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - stacks...
02:08:452 (4,5,6) - ^
02:12:786 (2,3,4,5) - too hard to read
02:17:452 (4) - end kiai here like in Normal.
02:27:119 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - stacks
02:28:786 (2,3,4) - ^
02:32:786 (5,6,7) - too hard
[Normal]
01:53:452 (3) - start kiai here in like Easy.
*lots of craziness that I didn't get to mod x_x;;;
[taka's Hard]
*lower Overall Difficulty a notch or two ;x
00:21:452 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too hard to read under the 100/300's from the previous stream.
00:35:286 (4,5,6) - difficult to read
01:12:786 (5) - ^
01:17:452 (1) - end kiai on the end of this instead of the middle o-o
*stopped here
[happy30]
*no custom colors?
Sorry that I didn't mod all diffs, but I was getting kinda dizzy from the high OD and crazy spacing (sick from surgery atm). I didn't get to play and do an offset check either, but if anything, it might only be a few ms late. Some of these diffs really need work, but I'll leave that up to regular modders to help. Good luck x.x;
EDIT 2: My mistake; tags should be the same in all diffs. Just remove the trance one as I said. Also, lead-in isn't really important. :p
, usually new combos on white ticks are easier
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