Hi.
[
General]
Looks fine.
[
Easy]
00:56:610 (1,2) - Shouldn't this be better as a 2/1 slider, like 00:58:485 (4) - ? Considering you made 2/1 sliders for the held vocals.
01:43:485 (1,2,3) - Something similar as above
02:42:547 (7) - Increase the volume a bit for this note, maybe it's just me but it isn't very noticeable like the previous soft hits.
[
Normal]
00:03:641 (1) - I wouldn't recoomend to do this, specially in a Normal, there's no musical intro so it may come suddenly to the player. Also I think it'd be better to begin the map in the downbeat, as it's somehow stronger.
00:30:125 (7) - Consider removing this so you keep a constant beat along with the vocals?
00:37:625 (6) - ^
00:42:547 (3,4) - *nazi* this is not as symmetric as you could think, just Ctrl+G (3) twice and it'll be.
00:50:985 (6) - Consider making it symmetric?
01:11:610 (5) - I think making the second curve a bit more noticeable would make this slider look better.
01:30:125 (4,7) - Similar as 00:30:125 (7) -
01:33:875 (5) - ^ and probably add a note in 01:35:750 - if you do.
01:39:500 (7) - Similar as 00:30:125 (7) -
01:42:547 - Increase a bit the volume here.
02:31:766 (5) - Considering this is a calm part, maybe lower a bit more the object density? Removing this note would let you emphasize the vocals nicely.
02:38:328 (3) - ^
02:42:078 (3) - Probably remove this slider and put a 1/2 triple in 02:42:547 - , it'll introduce better to the kiai imo.
[
Hard]
00:03:641 (1) - As in Normal.
The rhythm in the beginning is a bit weird, you have this 3/4 slider for a wubby sound [00:04:110 (1) - ] (but later you use 1/1 for a very similar sound [00:09:735 (1) - ]), but then you have a clear 3/4 rhythm [00:05:399 (5,6) - ], but you put a 1/4 triple [00:05:281 (4,5,6) - ]. What I suggest is to do something similar to this, variation may be done at your own style, but don't add more 3/4 rhythm in a single combo so the actual 3/4 rhythm isn't opaqued by more.
00:15:594 (2,4) - I wouldn't recommend to stack sliders like this, even if it's readable, it looks very bad considering how you mapped the rest of the song, it's like the odd one. It'd be nice being unstacked.
00:17:000 (5,1) - Stack properly? Looks weird and it's very temptful to be hit as 1/4.
00:26:375 (3,4) - The triple here isn't really necessary imo, the strong beat in 00:26:610 - would be emphasized better with a 1/1 pause or even a 1/2 jump. (I'm thinking you put this triple for emphasis, I may be wrong).
00:40:555 (7) - ^ Similar as above, but this time the 1/2 stack would play really cool.
00:41:258 (3,5) - ^ Some 1/2 jumps would fit better for the vocals, the 1/4 rhythm isn't really fitting or noticeable imo, if something , the note in 00:41:492 - should be in 00:41:024 - .
00:41:610 (1,2,3,4) - Begin the sliders on the white ticks like you're doing for the rest of this part? Feels a bit weird releasing on the strong beats, and then hitting on them while the music is very similar.
01:02:469 (1,2,3,4) - This time goes for the slider beginning on red ticks.
01:28:250 (3,4) - As 00:26:375 (3,4) -
01:42:313 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Something similar as I said in the previous part.
01:43:485 (1,2,3,4) - As in 00:41:610 (1,2,3,4) -
01:42:547 - Increase volume please ;w;
02:04:344 (1,2,3,4) - As in 01:02:469 (1,2,3,4) -
02:31:766 (5) - Remove to follow only vocals?
02:49:344 (1,2,3,4) - As in 01:02:469 (1,2,3,4) -
02:58:133 (5) - Remove this note? Background music goes on triples so I don't get why is a 5-note stream.
I think that's all, just went a bit picky on rhythm because it was the only thing that disturbed me a bit.