1. Please Remove the following hitsounds as they are not used. :
   
   Found unused .wav files:
   - soft-whistle3.wav
   - soft-whistle2.wav
   - soft-whistle5.wav
   - soft-whistle.wav
   

1. 00:07:186 (3) - Finish in the start fits but is the wrong one , go to "Additions" in the top corner and change it to Normal, that finish fits so much better to me.
2. 00:10:386 (3) - ^
3. 00:18:586 (1) - Spacing.
4. 01:46:586 (1) - Why don't you try to make them blanket like this : http://puu.sh/dZDWj.jpg
5. 01:57:786 (1) - The slider end touches the hp bar sadly.
6. 04:12:586 (2) - New combo derp, that long slider kinda kills drain.
7. 04:19:786 (2) - Please make this overlap slightly just to be safe.

1. 00:11:186 (5,1) - Swap the new combo.
2. 00:19:986 (3) - Need to move this down, touches the HP Bar.
3. 02:07:386 - You missed a really strong beat, I think a note should be added here.
4. 02:26:386 (6) - Spacing.
5. 04:01:586 (4) - Spacing.

1. 00:22:186 (8) - The stacking is on purpose?
2. 03:50:586 (1) - New combo, the spacing is hard to read without it. (must fix too imo)
3. 04:05:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Change to a reverse slider please, this is rather really hard for this diff, considering you never do this before now. must fix this imo

Tari wrote:

I love this song,

[General]

1. Please Remove the following hitsounds as they are not used. :
   
   Found unused .wav files:
   - soft-whistle3.wav
   - soft-whistle2.wav
   - soft-whistle5.wav
   - soft-whistle.wav
   

lol the map is full of whistles and im sure that im using all of them. Also lanturn changed something to them, i dont remember what was exactly x.x



[Easy]

HP - 1.5 ok

1. 00:07:186 (3) - Finish in the start fits but is the wrong one , go to "Additions" in the top corner and change it to Normal, that finish fits so much better to me. nice ;3
2. 00:10:386 (3) - ^
3. 00:18:586 (1) - Spacing. fixed
4. 01:46:586 (1) - Why don't you try to make them blanket like this : http://puu.sh/dZDWj.jpg i tried but i like more mine
5. 01:57:786 (1) - The slider end touches the hp bar sadly.fixed
6. 04:12:586 (2) - New combo derp, that long slider kinda kills drain.ok
7. 04:19:786 (2) - Please make this overlap slightly just to be safe.fixed i guess

[Normal]

HP - 1 ok

1. 00:11:186 (5,1) - Swap the new combo. isnt need i think, cuz im followin vocals mainly in the previous combo and from the (1) i follow drums :3
2. 00:19:986 (3) - Need to move this down, touches the HP Bar.ok
3. 02:07:386 - You missed a really strong beat, I think a note should be added here.sure
4. 02:26:386 (6) - Spacing.
5. 04:01:586 (4) - Spacing. fixed both

[Hard]

1. 00:22:186 (8) - The stacking is on purpose?yess ;3
2. 03:50:586 (1) - New combo, the spacing is hard to read without it. (must fix too imo)ok
3. 04:05:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Change to a reverse slider please, this is rather really hard for this diff, considering you never do this before now. must fix this imo considering that this is the hardest diff, why no add a bit more challenge? Also its only 150 bpm

Fine anyways.

pkhg wrote:

If someone cares, plz i want a dq to fix just a minor mistake, idk if that's possible but plz

00:10:386 (5) - i just want to remove that whislte ._.

1. I recommend OD7 (Overall Difficulty 7) since this is the hardest difficulty.
2. 01:23:986 (5) - I can hear a cymbal sound here. Try adding a soft-finish to emphasize it. Same as start of 01:22:586 (1) - 02:39:386 (1) - 02:43:986 (5) - start of 02:58:586 (1) - start of 03:04:986 (1) - start of 03:30:586 (1) - 04:07:186 (5) - start of 04:12:186 (1).
3. 03:28:986 (1) - You don't really need a soft-finish here. consider removing it. Same as the start of 03:33:786 (1).

DakeDekaane wrote:

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