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xChorse

765 posts

Joined December 2012

xChorse 2014-12-21T23:52:38+00:00

Really fun mapset, good luck!

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2014-12-22T00:11:17+00:00

Finishing it up soon. Once hitsounds are done will give it to you tonight. 3 retries to get good quality, let's get the show on the road ヾ(⌐■_■)ノ♪
Complete Will submit by morning

Last edited by Winnie 2014-12-23T06:26:44+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2014-12-22T00:52:15+00:00

xChorse wrote:
Really fun mapset, good luck!

Thanks xD/

Kocari wrote:
Finishing it up soon. Once hitsounds are done will give it to you tonight. 3 retries to get good quality, let's get the show on the road ヾ(⌐■_■)ノ♪

Ok~

K i A i

662 posts

Joined March 2011

K i A i 2014-12-22T05:51:55+00:00

감히 절 귀찮게 하다니.......... 올 픽스로 그 죗값을 치르셔야겠습니다..

길어도 꾸욱 참고 정독해주세요

[일단 빨간줄 첫 번째 포인트 - 168, 851]

이거 맞아요.
근데 제 생각엔 오프셋을 4~6정도는 앞으로 땡기는게 좋을거 같아요.

일단 타이밍 체크하시느라 노래 열심히 들으시면서 눈치 채셨겠지만,
이 노래, 일반 파트랑 클라이막스 파트의 드럼 소리 오프셋이 각각 달라요.
클라이막스 부분이 일반 파트에 비해 더 앞에 있어요.

네, 노래는 좋을지 모르지만 매핑하기 정말 곤란한 노래입니다, 작곡가가 개객기죠.

제가 들어보니까 851이라는 오프셋은 일반 파트에 좀 더 맞춰져 있는거 같아요.
그래서 저는 일반 파트와 클라이막스 파트의 중간정도 지점이 될 수 있도록 오프셋을 현재 상태에서 -4~6정도 하시는 것을 추천드립니다.

아, 그리고 큰 타이밍 포인트가 이동할 때는 그냥 아예 패널에서 컨트롤 에이 누르셔서 모든 포인트 선택하시고 거기에서 수정하시는게 좋을거에요

BPM168이 주를 이루고 나머지 포인트는 그냥 감속을 위한 들러리일 뿐이니깐녀 ^0^

[두 번째 빨갱이 - 162, 277993]

이상 없음

[세 번째 빨갱이 - 161, 283918]

이거 지워주시고,

161, 286881 추가
160, 288371 추가
150, 288746 추가
130, 289146 추가
88, 289607 추가
45, 290288 추가

각각의 오프셋은 첫 번째 빨갱이 168, 851의 오프셋에 따라 바꿔주세요
-3 하셨으면 저것들도 -3, -5 하셨으면 저것들도 각각 -5.

배려심 따위 없는 차가운 제 흑염룡을 봉인해제한 상태에서 마음대로 잰거라 제가 옳다고 확신할 수는 없습니다.
많은 분들께 받으라고 권해드리고 싶지만, 뱃한테 받으시는게 가장 확실합니다.

어디서 또 듣보잡한테 수정받고 오셔서 제가 열심히 수정한거 뒤집어 엎으시면 제가 응딩이 때찌할거에여 ^0^

샘플 드릴게요, 이건 첫 번째 빨갱이 오프셋을 -4하고 나머지를 거기에 맞춘겁니다.

http://puu.sh/dEFwT/432dc99b6c.zip

맵 좋네요, 이후에 또 부탁하실 일 있으면 PM 보내주세요 ㅎㅎ

특별히 또 받을지도...... 몰라요!

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2014-12-22T06:37:00+00:00

K i A i wrote:
감히 절 귀찮게 하다니.......... 올 픽스로 그 죗값을 치르셔야겠습니다.. ㅠㅠ

길어도 꾸욱 참고 정독해주세요

[일단 빨간줄 첫 번째 포인트 - 168, 851]

이거 맞아요.
근데 제 생각엔 오프셋을 4~6정도는 앞으로 땡기는게 좋을거 같아요.

일단 타이밍 체크하시느라 노래 열심히 들으시면서 눈치 채셨겠지만,
이 노래, 일반 파트랑 클라이막스 파트의 드럼 소리 오프셋이 각각 달라요. 클라이막스 부분이 일반 파트에 비해 더 앞에 있어요.
~~덕분에 중간중간 티나게 어긋나는곳듯이 있어서 찍는내내 불안했었습니다 orz~~

네, 노래는 좋을지 모르지만 매핑하기 정말 곤란한 노래입니다, 작곡가가 개객기죠.

제가 들어보니까 851이라는 오프셋은 일반 파트에 좀 더 맞춰져 있는거 같아요.
그래서 저는 일반 파트와 클라이막스 파트의 중간정도 지점이 될 수 있도록 오프셋을 현재 상태에서 -4~6정도 하시는 것을 추천드립니다.
-4를 택하겠습니다!

아, 그리고 큰 타이밍 포인트가 이동할 때는 그냥 아예 패널에서 컨트롤 에이 누르셔서 모든 포인트 선택하시고 거기에서 수정하시는게 좋을거에요
BPM168이 주를 이루고 나머지 포인트는 그냥 감속을 위한 들러리일 뿐이니깐녀 ^0^ xD

[두 번째 빨갱이 - 162, 277993]

이상 없음

[세 번째 빨갱이 - 161, 283918]

이거 지워주시고,

161, 286881 추가
160, 288371 추가
150, 288746 추가
130, 289146 추가
88, 289607 추가
45, 290288 추가

각각의 오프셋은 첫 번째 빨갱이 168, 851의 오프셋에 따라 바꿔주세요
-3 하셨으면 저것들도 -3, -5 하셨으면 저것들도 각각 -5.

배려심 따위 없는 차가운 제 흑염룡을 봉인해제한 상태에서 마음대로 잰거라 제가 옳다고 확신할 수는 없습니다. 확실할꺼라 믿습니다!
많은 분들께 받으라고 권해드리고 싶지만, 뱃한테 받으시는게 가장 확실합니다.

어디서 또 듣보잡한테 수정받고 오셔서 제가 열심히 수정한거 뒤집어 엎으시면 제가 응딩이 때찌할거에여 ^0^ @3@a

맵 좋네요, 이후에 또 부탁하실 일 있으면 PM 보내주세요 ㅎㅎ

특별히 또 받을지도...... 몰라요! ?!

Thanks for timing check!! xDD

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2014-12-23T23:45:43+00:00

From queue~

[General]
choo choo >w<

[Easy]
00:00:847 (1,2) - nothing wrong really just doesnt look good imo lol
00:27:632 - i think u can boost up the volume for this it's kinda hidden from the actual music
00:31:204 (1) - put it down here i think it's cool (and ctrl+J) http://puu.sh/dGWcC/c1df72f3ff.jpg
01:11:561 (2) - curve and move a little? http://puu.sh/dGWnU/68aba6b258.jpg
01:19:418 (1) - no stack?? O:
01:42:275 (1) - try bend the other way
01:45:132 (1,2) - looks like a failed slider blanket orz
02:05:132 (1) - i think it looks reaaaally good if it's curved omg http://puu.sh/dGWJd/bf2f4f805e.jpg
02:27:275 (4,1) - don't really look good together
02:37:989 (3,4,1) - niceeeeee but blanket the 4?
02:56:561 (1,2) - move it up so it doesnt look like a failed blaneket tehe http://puu.sh/dGWZM/67c5ddf35d.jpg
03:10:132 (3) - i think this is better http://puu.sh/dGXir/ac30ef971f.jpg <<(is this too messy lol)
03:46:561 (2) - omg this is awesome http://puu.sh/dGXqs/9b04c917e7.jpg
03:54:061 (1) - u should curve same way as 03:52:275 (3) - imo
04:14:954 (1) - you need minimum 1000ms recovery space >< you're short by about 150ms D: rules suck
04:21:204 (1) - this is a really tricky overlap that i wouldn't use in easy. strongly recommend u move it somewhere else. http://puu.sh/dGXW3/d3c8619a71.jpg 04:21:561 (2) - is stacked on 04:20:132 (4) -
04:37:989 (1) - stack ;~;
04:46:507 (4) - i think the beat on 04:46:322 - is stronger than the beat here. the 3/2 spacing is tricky too, so why not use a 1/2 slider starting on 04:46:322 and end 1/2 later?
04:46:877 (1) - curve the other way :v
04:49:372 (1) - this can end at around 04:55:617 - imo

[Kocari]
00:00:847 (1) - these normal whistles dont fit the calmness of the song imo
00:05:132 (1) - this is around 30ms short of the 750ms minimum orz
00:06:918 (4) - it'd be cool if you moved it down instead of up so it'd flow nicely
00:08:525 - why not map this one? try this

00:11:561 (2) - blanket's a bit off
00:16:561 (1) - lol, this doesn't look good nor does it flow well
00:16:561 (1) - normal whistle s: the rest im not gunna say so keep this in mind
00:18:704 (5) - is this a blanket?
00:19:418 (1) - looks kinda random lol
00:25:132 (1) - map all the 1/1s here please :<
00:27:632 - default drum clap pls
00:32:096 (3,4) - u should stack these, 1/2 spacing twice is hard to play for beginners
00:32:989 (5) - ahh this flow tho
00:41:918 (5) - make this straight or bend it the other way
00:45:846 - slidertick hitsound this?
00:50:132 (3,4,1) - i dont think these are allowed in normal owo //space them out
00:51:382 (2) - remove clap
00:54:775 - remove whistle add clap
00:54:954 (5) - remove clap
00:56:025 - remove clap
00:56:204 (8) - change whistle to clap
00:56:561 (1) - slidertick hitsound the clap and remove clap at the sliderend
00:59:061 (5) - don't stack this... it's a 3/2 spacing in the timeline so it's hard to read
00:59:954 (2) - use proper spacing here too
01:02:989 (2) - i think follow vocals is better
01:06:382 (3,4,5) - tricky overlap/// u shouldn't overlap imo
01:13:704 (1) - doesn't look very good ><
01:17:275 (2) - vocals?
01:21:561 (4,5) - i dont really know why you want to stack these but this one isnt a huuge problem so i guess its alright owo
01:22:275 (1,2) - fix blanket on 01:21:918 (5) -
01:23:525 (3) - vocals owo?
01:27:096 (4) - proper spacing pls
01:32:989 (5) - please this overlap ;w;
01:49:954 (4) - remove clap
01:54:596 (2) - ^
01:56:382 (5) - this overlap is kinda ugly sorry aaah
01:58:346 (3) - tricky stack uhh and flow isn't great either
02:10:132 (4,5,1) - same as earlier..
02:20:132 (2) - lol uhhhh just use a normal slider please x_x
02:32:989 (1) - move the anchor down more, it's easier to read and looks better too http://puu.sh/dH0xI/54c843b0b1.jpg
02:40:846 (3,5) - kinda random o.o

actually I'll stop here, I feel like you'd be pretty annoyed of me by now lol. Just look at my points about stacks and overlaps, cuz there were others that i didn't really point out. also the chosen rhythms are quite inconsistent as well. i.e. 02:40:846 (3,5) - and then you have others where the note density is rather high.
oh and you should double check your hitsounding as well, cuz i didn't want to write a wall of text of hitsounds lol

[Hard]
tick2
00:05:132 (1) - if you move it to the right more it'd be easier to read :> http://puu.sh/dH0TM/d300e57fe6.jpg
00:09:239 (4) - move it up so u can move (1) under for more overlapping o: just a little doesn't look very good http://puu.sh/dH10X/513d6a69ba.jpg
00:12:989 (3) - curve this too since you did at 00:12:275 (1,2) -
00:16:561 (1) - maybe manual stack this so it's different from 00:16:114 (3,4) - ? people might overstream into this one lol http://puu.sh/dH1bt/115eb4fa59.jpg
00:32:632 (2) - don't overlap the beginnings?
00:43:882 (4) - i think its personal preference but why not space the 2 anchors out? http://puu.sh/dH1iW/db4bdb88b1.jpg
00:57:989 (1) - this can have a jump imo, maybe put it at (304, 240)?
01:01:739 (3) - better for hards i think

01:13:168 (3,4) - idk about this one, might be a little tricky owo
01:27:989 (1) - looks better going straight up or slightly bent going up http://puu.sh/dH1Oy/ba213375d4.jpg
01:31:204 (2) - suggestion owo curve other way
01:51:739 (4) - this flows a lot better if it was the other waay http://puu.sh/dH200/d6a8350f38.jpg
01:57:454 (2) - lol u really like these overlaps don't u xD
02:27:275 (1) - same as earlier about manualstacking if u want
02:31:382 (2,3) - oh this is cool
02:32:275 (1,2,3) - ^ C:
02:40:846 (1) - curve other way?
02:57:632 (4) - ^
03:00:489 (3) - um http://puu.sh/dH2iu/ee2aa4e27b.jpg
03:22:275 (1) - isnt it more ur style to curve this the other way?
04:04:775 (4,1) - i love and hate this at the same time lol
04:17:989 (1) - move to the right more http://puu.sh/dH2yK/6eccdb0d65.jpg

your hards are always great, good job :3

[Insane]
00:00:848 (1) - why not 1/4 repeat? it's insane
00:12:276 (1,2) - i don't really like the same slider right after another so why not curve 1 the other way?
00:40:312 (3) - this spacing though?
01:18:525 (2,3,4) - ^ might be a little misleading since this is insane, looks like a 1/4 spacing to me lol
01:27:454 (4) - might need a nc to show the different spacing
01:34:775 (3) - yeah same as earlier i think u can move this further
02:09:686 (2,3,1,2) - X_X please dont stack these all together aaa this is really hard to read cuz they're all different spacing and i guarantee u people will miss cuz they cant read this
02:15:489 (3) - move it down it looks better imo
02:19:061 (5) - ^
02:27:543 (2) - looks like an almost straight line but not really lmao, increase the distance between the anchors?
02:59:954 (2) - u should move the anchor back more owo http://puu.sh/dH3Uz/c9cb1d3750.jpg
03:30:846 (1) - lol i have mixed feelings about this s:
03:40:846 (1,2) - spacing doesnt look like it's 1/4
03:44:775 (5) - try jumping here to emphasize that drum clap?
03:46:561 (1) - ^
04:07:275 (1,1) - idk if 5% volume is rankable owo to be safe i think u should try like 10~15%
04:37:989 (1) - other way please x:

awesome
good luck and have fun! (:

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2014-12-24T01:58:59+00:00

Gaia wrote:
From queue~

[General]
choo choo >w< hehe<3

[Easy]
00:00:847 (1,2) - nothing wrong really just doesnt look good imo lol Ah, I agree with this lol But I have no idea about this orz I'll change these later!
00:27:632 - i think u can boost up the volume for this it's kinda hidden from the actual music yeah
00:31:204 (1) - put it down here i think it's cool (and ctrl+J) http://puu.sh/dGWcC/c1df72f3ff.jpg fixed
01:11:561 (2) - curve and move a little? http://puu.sh/dGWnU/68aba6b258.jpg I like current curved slider! sorry
01:19:418 (1) - no stack?? O: Cus technical and DS error!
01:42:275 (1) - try bend the other way bended 01:40:846 (2) - this instead
01:45:132 (1,2) - looks like a failed slider blanket orz Cuz current shape is better to me orz
02:05:132 (1) - i think it looks reaaaally good if it's curved omg http://puu.sh/dGWJd/bf2f4f805e.jpg cool
02:27:275 (4,1) - don't really look good together Whhhhy ;w; It's great to me orz
02:37:989 (3,4,1) - niceeeeee but blanket the 4? non-blanket is better imo ><
02:56:561 (1,2) - move it up so it doesnt look like a failed blaneket tehe http://puu.sh/dGWZM/67c5ddf35d.jpg fixed
03:10:132 (3) - i think this is better http://puu.sh/dGXir/ac30ef971f.jpg <<(is this too messy lol wwww) fixed!
03:46:561 (2) - omg this is awesome http://puu.sh/dGXqs/9b04c917e7.jpg yeah
03:54:061 (1) - u should curve same way as 03:52:275 (3) - imo No problem here to me =3=
04:14:954 (1) - you need minimum 1000ms recovery space >< you're short by about 150ms D: rules suck Oh, I forgot the that rule orz
04:21:204 (1) - this is a really tricky overlap that i wouldn't use in easy. strongly recommend u move it somewhere else. http://puu.sh/dGXW3/d3c8619a71.jpg 04:21:561 (2) - is stacked on 04:20:132 (4) - I have no idea now. I'll fix it after I get some idea!
04:37:989 (1) - stack ;~; can't stack cuz the bpm is changed(and I want to keep same DS) orz
04:46:507 (4) - i think the beat on 04:46:322 - is stronger than the beat here. the 3/2 spacing is tricky too, so why not use a 1/2 slider starting on 04:46:322 and end 1/2 later? removed the note
04:46:877 (1) - curve the other way :v placement is changed from above thing xP
04:49:372 (1) - this can end at around 04:55:617 - imo It's tooooo long spin ;w;

[Hard]
tick2 ok
00:05:132 (1) - if you move it to the right more it'd be easier to read :> http://puu.sh/dH0TM/d300e57fe6.jpg moved a bit but can the number orz
00:09:239 (4) - move it up so u can move (1) under for more overlapping o: just a little doesn't look very good http://puu.sh/dH10X/513d6a69ba.jpg fixed
00:12:989 (3) - curve this too since you did at 00:12:275 (1,2) - no problem imo cuz 00:11:561 (3) - this also straight slider!
00:16:561 (1) - maybe manual stack this so it's different from 00:16:114 (3,4) - ? people might overstream into this one lol http://puu.sh/dH1bt/115eb4fa59.jpg maybe it's fine imo cuz that's not too long stream xD
00:32:632 (2) - don't overlap the beginnings? ahh, I know this problem but I believe no issue about this overlap orz
00:43:882 (4) - i think its personal preference but why not space the 2 anchors out? http://puu.sh/dH1iW/db4bdb88b1.jpg fixed a bit
00:57:989 (1) - this can have a jump imo, maybe put it at (304, 240)? moved on (312|236)
01:01:739 (3) - better for hards i think I want to keep this cuz I used the same rhythms in this diff

01:13:168 (3,4) - idk about this one, might be a little tricky owo hmm,,maybe no problem to read?? Their numbers are all visible!
01:27:989 (1) - looks better going straight up or slightly bent going up http://puu.sh/dH1Oy/ba213375d4.jpg yeah
01:31:204 (2) - suggestion owo curve other way ;p I like current one
01:51:739 (4) - this flows a lot better if it was the other waay http://puu.sh/dH200/d6a8350f38.jpg I like current flow o3o
01:57:454 (2) - lol u really like these overlaps don't u xD overlap is really awesome x)
02:27:275 (1) - same as earlier about manualstacking if u want QwQ
02:31:382 (2,3) - oh this is cool cool!
02:32:275 (1,2,3) - ^ C: C:
02:40:846 (1) - curve other way? current way is better imo
02:57:632 (4) - ^ ^
03:00:489 (3) - um http://puu.sh/dH2iu/ee2aa4e27b.jpg fixed!
03:22:275 (1) - isnt it more ur style to curve this the other way? right
04:04:775 (4,1) - i love and hate this at the same time lol me too wwww
04:17:989 (1) - move to the right more http://puu.sh/dH2yK/6eccdb0d65.jpg moved a bit

your hards are always great, good job :3 >w<

[Insane]
00:00:848 (1) - why not 1/4 repeat? it's insane cuz I want to start easy rhythm
00:12:276 (1,2) - i don't really like the same slider right after another so why not curve 1 the other way? But I like that
00:40:312 (3) - this spacing though? gave it more DS
01:18:525 (2,3,4) - ^ might be a little misleading since this is insane, looks like a 1/4 spacing to me lol www but players already know this rhythm imo
01:27:454 (4) - might need a nc to show the different spacing fixed
01:34:775 (3) - yeah same as earlier i think u can move this further @3@
02:09:686 (2,3,1,2) - X_X please dont stack these all together aaa this is really hard to read cuz they're all different spacing and i guarantee u people will miss cuz they cant read this fixed a bit
02:15:489 (3) - move it down it looks better imo I like current 1/4 overlap
02:19:061 (5) - ^ ^
02:27:543 (2) - looks like an almost straight line but not really lmao, increase the distance between the anchors? fixed a bit
02:59:954 (2) - u should move the anchor back more owo http://puu.sh/dH3Uz/c9cb1d3750.jpg fixed
03:30:846 (1) - lol i have mixed feelings about this s: c:
03:40:846 (1,2) - spacing doesnt look like it's 1/4 this 1/2 is surely readable x.x
03:44:775 (5) - try jumping here to emphasize that drum clap? current stack is better to me ;w;
03:46:561 (1) - ^ ^
04:07:275 (1,1) - idk if 5% volume is rankable owo to be safe i think u should try like 10~15% Hmm,,maybe muted-slider's tail is available imo
04:37:989 (1) - other way please x: yeah

awesome :3
good luck and have fun! (:

Thanks for modding!!

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2014-12-24T10:18:52+00:00

Everything changed, and a lot of revising have been done. Made it simpler and hit sounds should be OK. Did a lot of looting around to get reference, but I followed the sounds you have implemented; and it sounds good so I stuck with it. Thanks Gaia for the mod, I'll do better in the future to not create so much work

Took me 2 hours to edit and move things around so it isn't complicated for the beginner players.

Code

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Song_starlog.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 230132
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:starlog
TitleUnicode:starlog
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ChouCho
Creator:Karia
Version:Kocari's Normal
Source:Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA☆ILLYA
Tags:opening Prismaillya Illyasviel von Einzbern Miyu Edelfelt Kadowaki Mai Nazuka Kaori プリズマ☆イリヤ Kocari
BeatmapID:569335
BeatmapSetID:244684

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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120,292,255668,2,0,P|180:304|256:280,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,172,256382,2,0,P|316:164|392:180,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,140,256918,2,0,P|428:200|448:260,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,372,257632,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,288,257989,6,0,P|272:276|208:292,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,324,258525,2,0,P|188:276|168:192,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,360,259418,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,260,259775,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,144,260132,2,0,P|48:160|-8:164,2,90,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,100,260846,6,0,P|168:112|264:96,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,28,261561,2,0,P|365:81|361:140,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,260,262275,2,0,B|276:276|276:276|192:264,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,232,262811,2,0,B|114:223|114:223|54:239,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,268,263346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,372,263704,6,0,B|122:381|122:381|182:368,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,324,264239,2,0,P|264:308|360:320,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,340,264775,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,300,265132,2,0,B|520:252|488:176|488:176|512:124,2,180,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,256,266561,6,0,B|332:284|264:256,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,156,267275,2,0,B|180:172|180:172|96:152,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,260,267989,2,0,B|72:244|72:244|156:264,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,236,268704,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,356,269061,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,280,269418,6,0,P|360:220|316:152,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,136,269954,2,0,P|200:156|128:144,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,88,271204,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,88,271561,2,0,P|384:46|384:-8,2,90,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,132,272275,6,0,P|444:172|412:260,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,320,272989,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,224,273346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,324,273704,2,0,P|160:332|64:332,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,212,274418,2,0,P|118:199|178:202,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,268,275132,2,0,L|292:140,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,84,275846,2,0,L|377:203,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,268,276561,6,0,P|236:256|92:272,2,180,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,348,277989,2,0,P|384:308|376:220,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,192,278544,2,0,P|304:148|288:80,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,56,279285,2,0,P|192:96|164:240,1,180
124,256,280026,2,0,P|112:300|140:384,1,120
264,248,280951,6,0,B|324:220|392:284|452:228,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,132,281877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,24,282248,2,0,B|384:-4|316:60|239:10,2,210,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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280,8,286322,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,72,286877,6,0,B|122:107|122:107|98:223|98:223|102:247,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,340,287808,2,0,P|238:350|295:333,2,120,0|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
375,253,288926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,289372,12,0,292950,0:0:0:0:

lolia

1,356 posts

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Topic Starter

lolia 2014-12-24T13:37:35+00:00

Updated!

-Tochi

Elite Storyboarder

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Joined November 2013

-Tochi 2014-12-26T20:55:36+00:00

♬ Insane ♬

00:00:847 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I suggest to delete this, and let the intro be it, because this is likely the slowest part. You will easy get 1 100 or 1 50 and start up with a bad accuracy.

00:03:168 - Ypu could make a slider there to here 00:04:239 - with a green line here 00:04:239 - with the volume of 5%
00:30:132 (4) - I sugest to change this part like:
^

Also it give a better flow imo.
01:17:989 (1,2,3,4) - Please avoid this overlap.
01:27:989 (1,2) - Same as above.
01:52:275 (1,2) - ^
01:56:561 (1,2) - ^
02:08:525 (2,3) - I suggest all the overlaps above to be like this.
02:25:132 (1,2) - Same as above.
02:45:132 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This is a good part for a break, since there isn't any. Move the little break thing so the hp bar goes down later here:
^
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2391898

On the green line. You can actually choose where you want it to start again; here 02:55:132 - or here 02:56:561 -
03:05:132 (1,3,4,5) - Please avoid this overlap.
03:34:418 (2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - Same as he other break, delete these and put a break in here. A 3min+ map without a break is just too hard.
03:50:311 (6) - New combo here.
03:54:418 (3,2) - Why not stack with (3)'s sliderhead
04:26:204 (6) - Make this point this way to ignore the hard reading for 04:26:561 (1) -
^
[img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/2391922[/img]

♬ Hard ♬

Why not move it up to AR8?
00:31:918 (4,1) - Why not switch places, and remove NC on (1) Remember to Ctrl + G on both sliders.
00:32:275 (5) - NC:
^
[img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/2391944[/img]
02:45:132 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Make a break here.
02:45:132 - And rememebr to make it start here.
03:18:525 (2,3) - Ugh, avoid the overlap by stacking (3) with (2)'s slidertail.
04:02:007 - The stream starts from the end of this slider 04:01:561 (4) - So make it same DS from that to 04:02:275 (1) -
04:23:525 (3,1) - To close to each other, it looks awkward. Maybe move 04:23:525 (3) - more to the right.
04:48:742 (2) - This slider ends too early, it should end on 04:48:942 -

♬ Feedback ♬

Good job man! Good luck on it!

lolia

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Topic Starter

lolia 2014-12-27T04:46:34+00:00

-Tochi wrote:

♬ Insane ♬

00:00:847 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I suggest to delete this, and let the intro be it, because this is likely the slowest part. You will easy get 1 100 or 1 50 and start up with a bad accuracy. The mapset has 2000 Audioleadin and this is an Insane diff. So no problem imo
00:03:168 - Ypu could make a slider there to here 00:04:239 - with a green line here 00:04:239 - with the volume of 5% I don't prefer it, sorry
00:30:132 (4) - I sugest to change this part like: Current flow is also not bad and I think that there is no reason I change this ;w;
^

Also it give a better flow imo.
01:17:989 (1,2,3,4) - Please avoid this overlap.
01:27:989 (1,2) - Same as above.
01:52:275 (1,2) - ^
01:56:561 (1,2) - ^
02:08:525 (2,3) - I suggest all the overlaps above to be like this.
02:25:132 (1,2) - Same as above.
//Hmm,,about overlap modding, give me the reason plz orz I use many overlaps in other maps like above, and I really like the overlap(if you saw my userpage, you know it)
02:45:132 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This is a good part for a break, since there isn't any. Move the little break thing so the hp bar goes down later here: I don't want the breaktimes in Insane diff. Sorry
^
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2391898

On the green line. You can actually choose where you want it to start again; here 02:55:132 - or here 02:56:561 -
03:05:132 (1,3,4,5) - Please avoid this overlap. Same as above overlap modding
03:34:418 (2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - Same as he other break, delete these and put a break in here. A 3min+ map without a break is just too hard. Same reason
03:50:311 (6) - New combo here. Need not it imo, but I'll consider it
03:54:418 (3,2) - Why not stack with (3)'s sliderhead ok
04:26:204 (6) - Make this point this way to ignore the hard reading for 04:26:561 (1) - They has different combo colors and angles are also not same. So not too hard to read I think..
^
[img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/2391922[/img]

♬ Hard ♬
Why not move it up to AR8? Cuz the bpm is not so high and the diff doesn't have patterns to read with AR8. I'll consider this if I got more modding this
00:31:918 (4,1) - Why not switch places, and remove NC on (1) Remember to Ctrl + G on both sliders. Hmm,,I prefer current pattern
00:32:275 (5) - NC:
^
[img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/2391944[/img]
02:45:132 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Make a break here. No problem this part to me..
02:45:132 - And rememebr to make it start here.
03:18:525 (2,3) - Ugh, avoid the overlap by stacking (3) with (2)'s slidertail. Same reason as Insane
04:02:007 - The stream starts from the end of this slider 04:01:561 (4) - So make it same DS from that to 04:02:275 (1) - It's a bit hard in Hard diff. So I did't put it at here, sorry
04:23:525 (3,1) - To close to each other, it looks awkward. Maybe move 04:23:525 (3) - more to the right. fixed a bit
04:48:742 (2) - This slider ends too early, it should end on 04:48:942 - fixed

♬ Feedback ♬

Good job man! Good luck on it!

Thanks for modding!

Nyukai

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Nyukai 2014-12-28T10:51:40+00:00

As requested.

[General]

Maybe add full version in tags as there is a TV size one?
I'd say I'm not sure about timing. For example: in Easy, 04:45:211 (3) - the end seems a bit unsnapped, because the music sounds earlier.
Note: I've also mentioned this stuff in Easy and Normal, because there are unsnapped notes.
Why have diffs different slider tick? Just leave 1 slider tick in all of them, song is kinda long so there's no need to add 2 slider ticks.
Okay, modding Hard I've noticed something: in general you are "abusing" of mapping, and this map is almost 5 min length. Unless this was a marathon, adding more breaks would make things better for sure.
Note: I've mentioned this just in Easy and Normal but keep in mind this in all diffs. Feel free to ask me where you should add breaks :>

[Easy]

00:04:418 (1) - This NC is unnecessary here.
00:16:561 (1) - Consider adding finish here since I think it would fit good with the music in that moment, also check it in all diffs.
00:33:346 (3,2) - !nazi - Shouldn't be a problem fixing this stack, would look even better.
01:17:632 (2,1) - Same, just move 01:18:704 (4) - a bit if it's necessary.
01:25:132 (1,1) - Consider adding a little break here, due the song length and the difficulty: adding that break would make things easier.
01:33:704 (1,2) - I don't think there's need to map the red line here 01:34:775 (2) - E / N diffs don't usually need to have all rhythm mapped. My suggestion is deleting 01:34:775 (2) - and make of 01:33:704 (1) - this: http://puu.sh/dMlEe/f71949f927.jpg Of course make sure DS is still fine.
02:37:989 (3,4) - !nazi - Try to curve 02:37:989 (3) - a bit more for a better blanket. And just in case it wasn't your intention, a blanket will make pattern look better xD You won't have to move (4), I guess.
03:05:846 (2,3) - I'd try this rhythm because it fits better for an Easy imo: http://puu.sh/dMlPu/65a04b55c7.jpg Anyways you'd have to fix some DS stuff so feel free to ignore this, but I recommend this.
03:28:704 (2,3,4) - For a similar reason as before, I suggest to try this which is even better for me: http://puu.sh/dMlTp/6c3dde3bcc.jpg
03:30:846 (1) - You totally missed a finish here, at least you could reduce volume a bit and add it, I'm sure it fits good here (if it's possible, check this in all diffs).
03:55:132 (2,1) - !veryverynazi - Move (2)'s end JUST A BIT to the left -1 grid exactly- for a perfect blanket~
04:14:954 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/dMm2e/3fc92a7997.jpg This rhythm is surely better for me.
Note: like before, you'll have to fix some DS stuff, I guess. Consider this anyway.
04:20:132 (4,1) - I don't really like this overlap for an Easy. It's kinda annoying for beginner players indeed. If it's possible, try something different.
04:21:561 (2) - Ctrl+J for a better flow with next slider?
04:25:132 (2) - !nazi - if you wanted to make them parallel, move (2)'s end 1 grid to the right.
04:36:204 (2,1) - Up to you, but I feel these have to be stacked.
04:48:181 (2) - The end is unsnapped, please fix this.
Note: maybe it's because timing is wrong, as I've said before. I'd ask someone experienced with timing and try to get a better one.

[Kocari's Normal]

Same CS as Easy? Reduce it in Easy or try CS:3,5 here. My high suggestion is reducing CS in Easy
HP +1 to balance it with the OD.
00:05:846 (3,4) - Swap rhythm, I mean, 00:05:846 (3) - make of this a slider, then 00:06:204 (4) - a simple note in stanza with this, that rhythm doesn't fit there.
Note: if there are more cases like this, check it. Most of stanzas need to be clicked.
Note2: another case would be this one: 00:22:989 (2,3), for example.
00:37:275 (3) - I don't consider red line too important so leaving this as a simple note would be fine enough.
Hmm... Like in Easy, I'd add NC each one stanza. There are a lot of combos and we should try that in E / N.
You have a lot of overlaps like this one 01:17:989 (3,1) - which don't look really neat. I know it's hard to fix this stuff, but try to avoid it :/
01:25:132 (1) - Same as Easy about the break. You guys have to think this song / map is pretty long and beginner players need more break.
01:35:132 (1,1) - Unrankeable:
Ranking Criteria wrote:
BPM 160

Easy: 1 full measure of recovery time -> 1500 ms
Normal: 2 beats recovery time -> 750 ms
Hard: 1 beat recovery time -> 375 ms
Insane or higher: Any (within musical reason)
So, just deleting spinner would be fine, I think.
01:50:846 (1) - This finish doesn't fit here imo.
Note: However, if you delete this spinner 01:35:132 (1) - and add a note in stanza, a finish would sound good.
01:56:382 (5) - Ctrl+H for a better flow, also you will avoid that overlap, for reasons like these I really suggest it.
Note: You might have to fix a bit DS.
01:57:632 (2,4) - Where are finish hitsounds? I totally miss them.
02:45:132 - Make break starting here. Looks better :3
03:13:704 (4,1) - Swap NC.
03:16:561 (4) - You totally missed a NC here if you add it each two stanzas ;w;
03:30:846 - Wow, the break is pretty long even when there is important music. Add a spinner here! And make it finishing at 03:33:704 ~
03:45:132 (1) - Finish?
03:59:418 (1) - Where is the clap? Should be added in the end.
04:12:811 (1) - Finishing this in the previous red line would fit better with music imo.
Note: If you don't agree and leave this as it is, at least reduce volume at the end, actually sounds weird.
04:16:382 (3) - Clap doesn't fit here xD Although you didn't map a white line, just remove it, it's fine.
04:23:346 (5) - You missed a clap here u.u
04:25:132 (4) - WHERE IS THE FINISH AND CLAP IN THE END
04:29:418 (1) - SAME ABOUT FINISH
04:35:132 (6) - NC due the stanza.
04:36:561 (1,2) - Please swap NC, especially because there is a new red point in second slider.
04:42:248 (3) - This is wrongly mapped for sure, uh.
Note: Maybe because the timing. So, this stuff needs to be checked properly.
04:47:808 (2,3) - Blanket? Actually where it is makes the flow broken.
04:48:926 (3) - Same as Easy, this is unsnapped.
Note: same as before.

[Hard]

00:12:275 (1,2) - A bit untidy if you ask me, but well, it's fine, I guess.
Note: you might have some patterns like this one. I won't mention them since I think it's part of your style, but avoiding some of them is not a big problem.
00:47:811 (4) - I'd prefer stacking this with 00:47:989 (1) - it will be less confusing imo.
Note: I suggest to check this in all cases.
01:07:275 (1) - Unnecessary NC.
01:57:454 (2) - You can do this better for sure xD Move it to x:92 y:300 (more or less).
03:14:954 (4,1) - Swap NC? It fits better.
03:19:061 (3) - Something like 01:57:454 (2) - in this case move it to x:336 y:244 more or less.
03:23:525 (6,1) - Swap NC.
03:29:239 (4) - NC.
03:30:846 (1) - Finish at the end.

[Insane]

Same CS as Hard? For more variety I'd reduce Hard's CS (not much, something like 3'8) or add CS:4,2 here :3
00:15:668 (4,5,1) - This is kinda confusing even for an Insane imo, just adjust them properly.
00:41:025 (5) - I think you are missing an important vocal ><
01:18:525 (2,3,4) - Meh, this overlap can be avoided perfectly to improve the pattern... Try this http://puu.sh/dMot4/bf32321105.jpg
01:23:525 (7,1) - Swap NC due the little change of vocal's pitch?
01:34:775 (3) - Similar as before, try something like this http://puu.sh/dMoCd/6fc2eaed3b.jpg (always take care of spacing).
Note: I won't mention this anymore, so check it in all cases.
01:42:275 (1,2,3,4) - What do you think about this http://puu.sh/dMoH5/7eebdba820.jpg to improve the flow and pattern in general?
Well, you know what I've said about breaks...
03:11:204 (2) - Ctrl+G?
03:21:382 (2) - Move this to a bit down of 03:20:846 (1) - to form a blanket, pattern would be better.
03:27:989 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - wtf. Just wtf. Due the rhythm, this spacing is totally wrong :/ Please improve this.
Note: Like here 03:49:775 (2,3,4,5,6).
03:30:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2) - I'd simply add a spinner here. Then add the break D:
03:47:632 (4) - Ctrl+G?
04:12:721 - Shouldn't be a problem adding a spinner here.
04:15:489 (2) - Where is the clap.

FINALLY I'M DONE. I mean good luck~

Cute BG btw <3

Last edited by Nyukai 2014-12-28T11:46:14+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2014-12-28T11:19:38+00:00

Thanks for the mod Inyuschan - Now that I got a better understanding of a "normal difficulty" I can finally adjust hitsounds and makes rhythms a lot cleaner, I do believe in the timing but I'm not sure about it yet. As for now this is what I have until I make those precise changes necessary.

Code

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Song_starlog.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 230132
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 107993,205136,209958,213708,225136,247993,250672
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:starlog
TitleUnicode:starlog
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ChouCho
Creator:Karia
Version:Kocari's Normal
Source:Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA☆ILLYA
Tags:opening Prismaillya Illyasviel von Einzbern Miyu Edelfelt Kadowaki Mai Nazuka Kaori プリズマ☆イリヤ Kocari
BeatmapID:569335
BeatmapSetID:244684

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,165332,175241
2,210154,223812
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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5132,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
13971,-100,4,2,5,60,0,0
14329,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
16561,-100,4,2,2,30,0,0
27989,-100,4,2,2,55,0,0
39418,-100,4,2,2,45,0,0
50846,-100,4,2,2,65,0,1
56829,-100,4,2,5,65,0,1
57007,-100,4,2,2,65,0,1
66918,-100,4,2,2,65,0,0
67275,-100,4,2,2,65,0,1
67364,-100,4,2,2,65,0,0
67989,-100,4,2,2,65,0,1
84061,-100,4,2,2,75,0,0
85132,-100,4,2,2,30,0,0
90846,-100,4,2,2,45,0,0
96918,-100,4,2,2,30,0,0
111114,-100,4,2,5,40,0,0
111293,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
117632,-100,4,2,2,45,0,0
119418,-100,4,2,2,55,0,0
125132,-100,4,2,2,30,0,0
127989,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
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360,348,277989,6,0,P|384:308|376:220,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,192,278544,2,0,P|304:148|288:80,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,56,279285,2,0,P|192:96|164:240,1,180
124,256,280026,2,0,P|112:300|140:384,1,120
264,248,280951,6,0,B|324:220|392:284|452:228,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,132,281877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,24,282248,2,0,B|384:-4|316:60|239:10,2,210,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,144,283914,6,0,P|396:136|316:152,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,196,284470,2,0,P|232:208|140:200,2,120,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,96,285581,2,0,P|404:104|444:96,2,60,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,8,286322,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,72,286877,6,0,B|122:107|122:107|98:223|98:223|102:247,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,340,287808,2,0,P|238:350|295:333,2,120,0|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
228,240,288942,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,289372,12,0,292950,0:0:0:0:

lolia

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lolia 2014-12-28T14:40:27+00:00

Inyuschan wrote:
As requested.

[General]

Maybe add full version in tags as there is a TV size one? Sure~
I'd say I'm not sure about timing. For example: in Easy, 04:45:211 (3) - the end seems a bit unsnapped, because the music sounds earlier.
Note: I've also mentioned this stuff in Easy and Normal, because there are unsnapped notes.
Hmm,,I'm not good at timing ;w; I'll get more check for it!
Why have diffs different slider tick? Just leave 1 slider tick in all of them, song is kinda long so there's no need to add 2 slider ticks.
Keep for SV change!
Okay, modding Hard I've noticed something: in general you are "abusing" of mapping, and this map is almost 5 min length. Unless this was a marathon, adding more breaks would make things better for sure.
Note: I've mentioned this just in Easy and Normal but keep in mind this in all diffs. Feel free to ask me where you should add breaks :>
QwQ I just don't want that in higher diff orz

[Easy]

00:04:418 (1) - This NC is unnecessary here. Maybe this NC is too shrot in Easy diff, but I want it cuz the next (1) is very strong =w=
00:16:561 (1) - Consider adding finish here since I think it would fit good with the music in that moment, also check it in all diffs. A bit noisy to me orz
00:33:346 (3,2) - !nazi - Shouldn't be a problem fixing this stack, would look even better. ok
01:17:632 (2,1) - Same, just move 01:18:704 (4) - a bit if it's necessary. yeah
01:25:132 (1,1) - Consider adding a little break here, due the song length and the difficulty: adding that break would make things easier. I don't want it, sorry QwQ
01:33:704 (1,2) - I don't think there's need to map the red line here 01:34:775 (2) - E / N diffs don't usually need to have all rhythm mapped. My suggestion is deleting 01:34:775 (2) - and make of 01:33:704 (1) - this: http://puu.sh/dMlEe/f71949f927.jpg Of course make sure DS is still fine. Personally, I use few 1/2 sliders in Easy diff if it really fit with music. So I put this on here xD
02:37:989 (3,4) - !nazi - Try to curve 02:37:989 (3) - a bit more for a better blanket. And just in case it wasn't your intention, a blanket will make pattern look better xD You won't have to move (4), I guess. Hmm,, I can't make the to blanket cuz there are some flow-shapes that I really like!
03:05:846 (2,3) - I'd try this rhythm because it fits better for an Easy imo: http://puu.sh/dMlPu/65a04b55c7.jpg Anyways you'd have to fix some DS stuff so feel free to ignore this, but I recommend this. But there is no beat for slider's tail on 03:06:918 - here orz
03:28:704 (2,3,4) - For a similar reason as before, I suggest to try this which is even better for me: http://puu.sh/dMlTp/6c3dde3bcc.jpg I want the (2) slider cuz it has a part of stream in the music. It will work better with the music than a note imo
03:30:846 (1) - You totally missed a finish here, at least you could reduce volume a bit and add it, I'm sure it fits good here (if it's possible, check this in all diffs). fixed
03:55:132 (2,1) - !veryverynazi - Move (2)'s end JUST A BIT to the left -1 grid exactly- for a perfect blanket~ fixed
04:14:954 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/dMm2e/3fc92a7997.jpg This rhythm is surely better for me.
Note: like before, you'll have to fix some DS stuff, I guess. Consider this anyway.
I agree with that, but I chose current rhythm cuz of moving the main-rhythm from red-tick to white-tick.
04:20:132 (4,1) - I don't really like this overlap for an Easy. It's kinda annoying for beginner players indeed. If it's possible, try something different. fixed
04:21:561 (2) - Ctrl+J for a better flow with next slider? the flow is changed by above modding
04:25:132 (2) - !nazi - if you wanted to make them parallel, move (2)'s end 1 grid to the right. ^
04:36:204 (2,1) - Up to you, but I feel these have to be stacked. the BPM is changed but I want to keep the 1.1x DS, so can't change this ;w; sorry
04:48:181 (2) - The end is unsnapped, please fix this.
Note: maybe it's because timing is wrong, as I've said before. I'd ask someone experienced with timing and try to get a better one.
I can't snap this slider cuz of the BPM issue as you said. I'll get another timing check ASAP

[Hard]

00:12:275 (1,2) - A bit untidy if you ask me, but well, it's fine, I guess.
Note: you might have some patterns like this one. I won't mention them since I think it's part of your style, but avoiding some of them is not a big problem. My diff has some of patterns like this xP
00:47:811 (4) - I'd prefer stacking this with 00:47:989 (1) - it will be less confusing imo.
Note: I suggest to check this in all cases.
I stacked the note following the beats, but I agree with you about that problem! I'll consider this later ~w~
01:07:275 (1) - Unnecessary NC. I want to emphasize this small part with the KIAI fountain and NC!
01:57:454 (2) - You can do this better for sure xD Move it to x:92 y:300 (more or less). fixed
03:14:954 (4,1) - Swap NC? It fits better. Hmm,,current NC is better with music imo
03:19:061 (3) - Something like 01:57:454 (2) - in this case move it to x:336 y:244 more or less. About this, no problem with flow and read imo (and I like this c: )
03:23:525 (6,1) - Swap NC. fixed
03:29:239 (4) - NC. fixed
03:30:846 (1) - Finish at the end. yeah
[Insane]

Same CS as Hard? For more variety I'd reduce Hard's CS (not much, something like 3'8) or add CS:4,2 here :3 I don't want that DS in Insane diff ww
00:15:668 (4,5,1) - This is kinda confusing even for an Insane imo, just adjust them properly. No problem here imo cuz every players are passed clearly this!
00:41:025 (5) - I think you are missing an important vocal >< I missed that but this part follows the almost music not the vocal ><
01:18:525 (2,3,4) - Meh, this overlap can be avoided perfectly to improve the pattern... Try this http://puu.sh/dMot4/bf32321105.jpg I love the notes under the slider's path orz
01:23:525 (7,1) - Swap NC due the little change of vocal's pitch? This NC is for (1,2,3,1)'s anti-jumps
01:34:775 (3) - Similar as before, try something like this http://puu.sh/dMoCd/6fc2eaed3b.jpg (always take care of spacing).
Note: I won't mention this anymore, so check it in all cases. Same reason
01:42:275 (1,2,3,4) - What do you think about this http://puu.sh/dMoH5/7eebdba820.jpg to improve the flow and pattern in general? fixed it another way
Well, you know what I've said about breaks... I don't like that ;w;
03:11:204 (2) - Ctrl+G? This is for matching with (3,4,5)
03:21:382 (2) - Move this to a bit down of 03:20:846 (1) - to form a blanket, pattern would be better. I prefer current overlap
03:27:989 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - wtf. Just wtf. Due the rhythm, this spacing is totally wrong :/ Please improve this.
Note: Like here 03:49:775 (2,3,4,5,6). What happend here?! fixed xD
03:30:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2) - I'd simply add a spinner here. Then add the break D: Hmm..I'm consider now about the spinner, but I don't put the breaktime here ;w;
03:47:632 (4) - Ctrl+G? I prefer current flow
04:12:721 - Shouldn't be a problem adding a spinner here. fixed
04:15:489 (2) - Where is the clap. fixed
FINALLY I'M DONE. I mean good luck~

Cute BG btw <3 >w<

Thanks for modding!

Natteke desu

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Natteke desu 2014-12-29T03:16:52+00:00

delete all red lines in the end and add these

278004,370.37037037037,4,2,2,45,1,0
279298,370.37037037037,4,2,2,45,1,0
280943,375,4,2,1,30,1,0
282263,370.37037037037,4,2,1,30,1,0
283919,370.37037037037,4,2,1,30,1,0
285215,370.37037037037,4,2,1,30,1,0
286877,375,4,2,1,50,1,0
288186,375,4,2,1,50,1,0
289354,400,4,2,1,50,1,0

It sounds a bit better (at least for me), but i still suggesting you to try get a better timing check because i'm exhausted and not that good with timing

lolia

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lolia 2014-12-29T03:43:10+00:00

Updated and maybe need more work..
(Thanks a lot EvilElvis xD)

[ Setsuna ]

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[ Setsuna ] 2014-12-29T03:50:37+00:00

full version O_o

lolia

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lolia 2014-12-29T04:15:05+00:00

c:

Winnie

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Winnie 2014-12-29T05:37:25+00:00

No it's just a really long TV Size for some reason. Maybe we should make that rather clear

bigfrog

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bigfrog 2015-01-01T07:51:10+00:00

hi, from queue :3
same as you said i only mod 3 diffs and i also not good at modding Insane. ww
nice song~

Easy
00:23:704 (3) - still prefer this pattern for blanket

:

01:11:204 (1) - move to 164|328? maybe flow better
01:54:061 (1) - maybe can perfect stack 01:51:561 (2)? sorry i'm carp...
02:05:132 (1) - bending up? just think mostly not bent looks a little weird...but still my think~
02:37:989 (3,4) - blanket ?

Kocari's Normal
00:04:775 (5,6) - change to this rhythm looks more fit the rhythm

:

00:08:882 (2,3) - this rhythm maybe better :

00:19:418 (1) - remove and place again and this slider would be bent like other slider
00:56:204 (8) - add clap here instead clap on 00:55:668 (7) end, and i suggest to use circle - slider, not slider - circle

00:57:989 (3) - add clap on this slider end instead clap on 00:58:525 (4), but if it's intention, i'll stop here
01:50:846 (1,2) - the rhythm over here looks very easy to confused i think

, maybe try other pattern??
01:54:596 (2,3) - ^same as above
03:09:061 (3,4) - ^, sorry i really don't want to propose this, but it's worth to fix i think ><
03:16:561 (4) - maybe move the red point of this slider 2 grid down? :

04:06:025 (2) - move to 04:06:204 looks more fit

this diff still need more work i think

not only rhythm but also hitsound...
but the pattern looks neat~

Hard
00:46:561 (1) - move to 00:46:739 (2) start?
01:33:704 (1,2) - maybe try to symmetry
01:51:739 (4) - try this? might better :

01:59:418 (1) - prefer this pattern since flow better to next slider

:

02:10:311 (2) - delete? since this part before KIAI time sound only lyric, maybe not fit to put much circle here

that all i can mod, spent much time modding this map xDDD
Good Luck~~

lolia

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lolia 2015-01-01T09:32:55+00:00

bigfrog wrote:
hi, from queue :3
same as you said i only mod 3 diffs and i also not good at modding Insane. ww
nice song~

Easy
00:23:704 (3) - still prefer this pattern for blanket : fixed
01:11:204 (1) - move to 164|328? maybe flow better Hmm,,I prefer current flow
01:54:061 (1) - maybe can perfect stack 01:51:561 (2)? sorry i'm carp... I don't prefer that same space ;w;
02:05:132 (1) - bending up? just think mostly not bent looks a little weird...but still my think~ ww I like current shape!
02:37:989 (3,4) - blanket ? Intentional shape xD

Hard
00:46:561 (1) - move to 00:46:739 (2) start? fixed
01:33:704 (1,2) - maybe try to symmetry feels weird shape to me orz
01:51:739 (4) - try this? might better : Current flow is better to me, sorry
01:59:418 (1) - prefer this pattern since flow better to next slider : But (3,4,5,1)'s flow will be bad imo
02:10:311 (2) - delete? since this part before KIAI time sound only lyric, maybe not fit to put much circle here 1st part followed the vocal, 2nd part followed vocal and hitsounds, and last 3rd part followed only hitsounds xP

that all i can mod, spent much time modding this map xDDD haha xD
Good Luck~~

Thanks for modding!

Skyhmer

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Skyhmer 2015-01-01T22:49:18+00:00

rankrankrank

lolia

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lolia 2015-01-02T00:33:13+00:00

Gleipnir wrote:
rankrankrank

x)

Winnie

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Winnie 2015-01-02T01:07:18+00:00

Give me another day and I'll release the new and improved normal, I'll get lots of people to review it over for me until it's a masterpiece

In the meantime I'll get it reworked because the other one is just awful. I'll keep in mind everything that the modders said so I can make it cleaner

lolia

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lolia 2015-01-02T02:43:54+00:00

Kocari wrote:
Give me another day and I'll release the new and improved normal, I'll get lots of people to review it over for me until it's a masterpiece In the meantime I'll get it reworked because the other one is just awful. I'll keep in mind everything that the modders said so I can make it cleaner

Ok, ww

aigoh

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aigoh 2015-01-02T04:57:56+00:00

짧은모딩 죄송합니다 ㅠㅠ

[Insane]
[*Timing/composition/flow]
*00:00:668 - 피아노 여기부터들려요. 근데 시작점은 00:00:847 - 여서 약간 어색했습니다. 맵의시작은사람 첫 인상과도 같은데 어색하면 안되니
00:00:668 -에다가 http://puu.sh/dISrx.jpg 이렇게하면어떨까요? 치기쉬운 슬라이더이기도하니 플레이어가 노래에 적응되기 좋구요.
*04:45:905 - 여기 큰 "쿵" 이 들리기는 하는데 polarity때문에 매핑 안하신거라면, 04:45:766 (2) -
를 이렇게바꾸면 어떨까요? http://puu.sh/dIShg.jpg
* 00:01:382 (3) - 여기피아노는 부드러운 느낌을 주니 bezier 슬라이더쓰는게 어떨까요?
* 00:02:275 (1,2,3,4) -개인적인 생각. unstack? 보컬아닌 악기 매핑할때 음정이 달라지는 부분에 노트세개이상 스텍하는건 안어울린다고생각해요. 플로우하고 재미를 없앤달까...
*00:17:275 (2,3) - overlap때문에 보기 않좋아요.
*01:48:704 (3,5) - (5)가 잘 안보였어요. AR10이였으면 이게 됐을지도 모르지만 approach circle 때문에 답답한느낌이였어요.
*00:04:596 (1) - remove NC--색 변화가 갑작스러우면 리듬변화로 인식될수있으니까요
*00:36:561 (1) - make into two 1/2 sliders? 보컬 체인지가 명확한 이상 플레이도중 슬라이더브레이크생겼었어요
*02:27:275 (1,2,1) - 리듬적으론 이거 괜찮긴한데, 02:27:543 (2,1) - DS높여주세요. 02:27:275 (1,2) - 이랑 스페이싱 비슷하면 리듬적으로 비슷하다고 착각될수있습니다
*01:07:275 (1,2,3) - (3)slider tail이 키아이 시작에 있고... 여기에 hitfinish 넣으셨는데
더 임펙트주기위헤 (3)을 그냥 노트고 바꾸는거 추천합니다. '-'

good luck!!

Fortune_old_1

Fortune_old_1 2015-01-02T06:34:19+00:00

lol 1st post

꼭 고쳐야하는 부분은 발견 못했습니다.

아래 내용 모두 추천하는 부분이니까 고치든 안고치든 마음대로 하세염

Insane

01:59:954 (3,4,5,6,7) - 큰 문제는 아니지만 동선이 약간 애매하네요. 이렇게 바꿔보시는건 어떠세요
Open
다음 1번 노트는 384||308 정도에 두면 되겠네요.
02:04:418 (1) - 02:03:882 (6) 아래쪽 (375||270) 에 두면 좋을 것 같지만 다음노트가 맘에 안드시면 패스
02:07:811 - 확실히 가사 들리는데 박자가 없으니 좀 이상하네요. 287||141에 두시는거 추천드립니다.
02:39:954 (2) - 88||154
03:15:311 (2) - 모양 다듬어주세요
03:30:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 스트림을 넣은 이유가 궁금해요. 만약 소리에 맞춰서 넣으셨다면 실제로 들리는 곳은 03:31:204 에서 부터네요.
03:44:775 - 이 부분 조금 강조하면 좋을 거 같아요. 이런식으로..
03:55:668 - 02:15:132 (1,2,3) 이 부분이랑 같은 박자로 해주시면 좋을듯
04:43:791, 04:43:853 - 1/6박자 뭔가 넣고 싶지만 상관없을 것 같아요.

Hard

00:32:275 (1) - 00:32:275 (1) 끄적끄적..
01:33:704 (1,2) - 뭔가 맞물리고 싶은 욕구가..
02:10:668 - 여기 박자는 비워두는게 좋을 거 같아요 이렇게 강조해주는건 어떄요
02:34:061 (2,3) - 좀더 둥글게
02:41:918 (4) - 3번노트 감싸주세요
03:56:471 - 노트 추가

Easy

02:37:989 (3,4) - 감싸주세요
03:05:846 (2,3) - 평행하게 고쳐주세요

랭되도 충분한 퀄리티네요. 쿠도스 주시면 별 쏴드릴게요 굿럭

lolia

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lolia 2015-01-02T08:00:37+00:00

Ninja Bunny wrote:
짧은모딩 죄송합니다 ㅠㅠ

[Insane]
[*Timing/composition/flow]
*00:00:668 - 피아노 여기부터들려요. 근데 시작점은 00:00:847 - 여서 약간 어색했습니다. 맵의시작은사람 첫 인상과도 같은데 어색하면 안되니
00:00:668 -에다가 http://puu.sh/dISrx.jpg 이렇게하면어떨까요? 치기쉬운 슬라이더이기도하니 플레이어가 노래에 적응되기 좋구요. 여긴..생각을 해봐야겠어요, 모든 난이도의 시작/끝지점을 동일하게 하고싶기도 하고..
*04:45:905 - 여기 큰 "쿵" 이 들리기는 하는데 polarity때문에 매핑 안하신거라면, 04:45:766 (2) -
를 이렇게바꾸면 어떨까요? http://puu.sh/dIShg.jpg 여기 1/8박이 살짝 튀긴 해서 찍을때도 버릴지말지 고민을 했었었는데 1/8박을 막상 넣어보니 어색하게 들려서 뺐었습니다
* 00:01:382 (3) - 여기피아노는 부드러운 느낌을 주니 bezier 슬라이더쓰는게 어떨까요? 좀 부드럽게 다듬었습니다
* 00:02:275 (1,2,3,4) -개인적인 생각. unstack? 보컬아닌 악기 매핑할때 음정이 달라지는 부분에 노트세개이상 스텍하는건 안어울린다고생각해요. 플로우하고 재미를 없앤달까... fixed
*00:17:275 (2,3) - overlap때문에 보기 않좋아요. 이건..그냥 두고싶네요 ㅜ
*01:48:704 (3,5) - (5)가 잘 안보였어요. AR10이였으면 이게 됐을지도 모르지만 approach circle 때문에 답답한느낌이였어요. 제 난이도들에 이런 식의 점프들이 꽤 있어서,,헷갈린다는 말은 가끔 들었던적이 있는데 크게 문제될껀 없다고 해서 그냥 쓰고있네요..
*00:04:596 (1) - remove NC--색 변화가 갑작스러우면 리듬변화로 인식될수있으니까요 흠..전 연타에 NC는 DS변화를 보여주기위해 쓰기때문에 이건 괜찮을꺼같아요
*00:36:561 (1) - make into two 1/2 sliders? 보컬 체인지가 명확한 이상 플레이도중 슬라이더브레이크생겼었어요 신경은 쓰고있던 부분인데 고치기 힘든부분을 지적하시다니...fixed
*02:27:275 (1,2,1) - 리듬적으론 이거 괜찮긴한데, 02:27:543 (2,1) - DS높여주세요. 02:27:275 (1,2) - 이랑 스페이싱 비슷하면 리듬적으로 비슷하다고 착각될수있습니다 여기도 신경쓰이던 부분이긴한데 사실 앞에서 같은 리듬이 나왔기때문에 이 리듬도 리딩이 가능하다고 생각해요
*01:07:275 (1,2,3) - (3)slider tail이 키아이 시작에 있고... 여기에 hitfinish 넣으셨는데
더 임펙트주기위헤 (3)을 그냥 노트고 바꾸는거 추천합니다. '-' 그생각도 해봤었는데..제 실력으론 마음에드는 배치가 안나와서 이대로 뒀습니다 ㅜㅜ

good luck!!

Fortune wrote:
lol 1st post

꼭 고쳐야하는 부분은 발견 못했습니다.

아래 내용 모두 추천하는 부분이니까 고치든 안고치든 마음대로 하세염

Insane
01:59:954 (3,4,5,6,7) - 큰 문제는 아니지만 동선이 약간 애매하네요. 이렇게 바꿔보시는건 어떠세요
Open
다음 1번 노트는 384||308 정도에 두면 되겠네요. 개인적으로 지금 동선이 마음에들어서 이대로 두고싶네요..
02:04:418 (1) - 02:03:882 (6) 아래쪽 (375||270) 에 두면 좋을 것 같지만 다음노트가 맘에 안드시면 패스 나쁘진않은거같은데 고치면 뒤의것들이 단체로 이사해야하기때문에 좀 힘들꺼같아요 ;w;

02:07:811 - 확실히 가사 들리는데 박자가 없으니 좀 이상하네요. 287||141에 두시는거 추천드립니다. 일부러 안따라가려고 3/4로 끊어놓고 다음 (1)슬라를 오버랩시켜서 찍은거라..이대로 두고싶은욕구가 앞서네요

02:39:954 (2) - 88||154 84|152로 옮겼습니다

03:15:311 (2) - 모양 다듬어주세요 살짝 다듬었습니다

03:30:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 스트림을 넣은 이유가 궁금해요. 만약 소리에 맞춰서 넣으셨다면 실제로 들리는 곳은 03:31:204 에서 부터네요. 살짝 바꿨습니다
03:44:775 - 이 부분 조금 강조하면 좋을 거 같아요. 이런식으로.. 음..개인적으론 그렇게 강조하지않아도 되는부분같아요
03:55:668 - 02:15:132 (1,2,3) 이 부분이랑 같은 박자로 해주시면 좋을듯 여기는 휘슬사운드까지 같이 묶어서 찍은부분이라 괜찮지않을까싶어요

04:43:791, 04:43:853 - 1/6박자 뭔가 넣고 싶지만 상관없을 것 같아요. 1/6은 리버스를 안넣는이상 선호하는편은 아니라서 이대로 두고싶어요
Hard
00:32:275 (1) - 00:32:275 (1) 끄적끄적.. @3@a

01:33:704 (1,2) - 뭔가 맞물리고 싶은 욕구가.. ㅋㅋㅋㅋ fixed
02:10:668 - 여기 박자는 비워두는게 좋을 거 같아요 이렇게 강조해주는건 어떄요 fixed
02:34:061 (2,3) - 좀더 둥글게 fixed
02:41:918 (4) - 3번노트 감싸주세요 fixed

03:56:471 - 노트 추가 fixed
Easy
02:37:989 (3,4) - 감싸주세요 이 부분 모딩이 꽤 왔었지만 일부로 둔 부분이라 이대,,,로 두고싶네요 ㅜ

03:05:846 (2,3) - 평행하게 고쳐주세요 fixed

랭되도 충분한 퀄리티네요. :p 쿠도스 주시면 별 쏴드릴게요 굿럭

Thanks for moddings!

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

koreapenguin 2015-01-02T17:50:11+00:00

아니... 양심이없으신건가 맵잘만들어놓고 모딩해달라면 그게 말인가...

General

seem AudioLeadIn: 2000 is so long, just add 1000ms
should fix this http://puu.sh/dXZ3Z/83872e0ec8.png on 'Hard, Insane' diff
do you think slider's tick rate 2 is fit with song? (on Hard, Insane diff) i recommed just 1

Easy

04:45:951 - about this... isn't 1/3? i think so there is 1/3, like this http://puu.sh/dY0h5/9154211682.jpg

Kocari's Normal

00:54:954 (5,6) - this overlap isn't sure http://puu.sh/dYskr/320ba04a8f.jpg
01:54:596 (2) - i don't understand what did you followed sound... yea hear so there is have some string sounds but 01:54:775 - here there is has strong sound right? it's make weird, don't skip this. so how about just place circle on 01:54:775 - here? and play it there. sound is more better
03:06:025 (2,3) - hum... this rhythm is weird to me, how about more emphasize to vocal? like this http://puu.sh/dYtsn/07372b27c9.jpg
03:09:061 (3,4) - i don't recommend this, it's unnatural to play on beginner diff. i think so you can change other smooth pattern
03:50:132 (3,1) - also even this... this part might be too hard for beginners
04:06:025 (2) - this rhythm is wrong, i think so it should be here 04:06:204 - . hard to explain... just try it then will be know
04:12:811 (1) - look this spinner's end there is quiet, so how about make 5% vol on end
04:42:248 (3) - how think about this? on slider middle i don't think there is have sound... so you must change other rhythm, piano sound is already gone 04:42:803 - on here
04:45:581 (3) - about slider's end... seem there are 1/3 check it
04:49:320 (1) - how about make same as other diff? make end vol 5%

Hard

00:01:382 (2,1) - i don't understand why you did this, it just make some unnatural. i think so http://puu.sh/dYvln/6c7fea9860.jpg it's better than previous thing
00:41:561 (5) - i think so it's not special enough to new combo, so delete newcombo here, also it would be easier to learn
00:44:418 (1) - same here ^ 02:01:561 (5) - 02:04:418 (1) - come on... it just hard diff, doesn't need make hader
02:30:846 (1,2) - it's some unnatural to play, but i don't know why .... how think about this? even this 04:22:632 (2,3,1) -
02:38:882 (3,4,1) - this, how about make sure? like this http://puu.sh/dYx6D/fc69c75637.jpg it better to play
02:44:418 (3,4) - even this try this http://puu.sh/dYxd1/67064c0f14.jpg
03:25:132 (1) - it doesn't fit this slider also 03:25:400 - there is havent anysounds and string or some sound is until 03:25:311 - here, try just make http://puu.sh/dYxwd/375795b22f.jpg 1/2 slider
04:11:561 (3,4) - same as 02:44:418 (3,4) - like this http://puu.sh/dYxL7/9b750dee83.jpg
04:45:890 - isn't 1/3 on here? 1/4 is so late check it

Insane

03:26:561 (1,2,3,4,5) - you should fix them, unsnap check them. it should be snap 1/3
04:45:951 (3) - same as hard diff

that's all gooood map \o/

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2015-01-02T18:57:00+00:00

koreapenguin wrote:
아니... 양심이없으신건가 맵잘만들어놓고 모딩해달라면 그게 말인가...
맵 퀄이 너무 안좋아서 화나신듯 QwQ

General
seem AudioLeadIn: 2000 is so long, just add 1000ms fixed to 1100
should fix this http://puu.sh/dXZ3Z/83872e0ec8.png on 'Hard, Insane' diff fixed
do you think slider's tick rate 2 is fit with song? (on Hard, Insane diff) i recommed just 1 ok

Easy
04:45:951 - about this... isn't 1/3? i think so there is 1/3, like this Mainly I followed the piano sounds and they are on 1/4 snap imo
http://puu.sh/dY0h5/9154211682.jpg
Hard
00:01:382 (2,1) - i don't understand why you did this, it just make some unnatural. i think so http://puu.sh/dYvln/6c7fea9860.jpg it's better than previous thing 가끔 인센에서 이런느낌으로 오버랩시키는걸 좋아하는데 플레이상으론 현제 하드에서도 문제가 없을꺼같아요
00:41:561 (5) - i think so it's not special enough to new combo, so delete newcombo here, also it would be easier to learn 개인적으로 이 파트에 그렇게 길게 찍을 필요가 있을까 생각되기도 하고 음악상으론 이렇게 뉴콤을 끊어주는게 나을꺼같아서 하드, 인센에는 이렇게 나눠봤습니다. 일단 킵하고싶은데 이 부분은 나중에 지적이 더 들어오면 고치겠습니다 orz
00:44:418 (1) - same here ^ 02:01:561 (5) - 02:04:418 (1) - come on... it just hard diff, doesn't need make hader 같은 이유입니다
02:30:846 (1,2) - it's some unnatural to play, but i don't know why .... how think about this? even this 04:22:632 (2,3,1) - 마음에 들어하는 것들중 하난데...ㅜ
02:38:882 (3,4,1) - this, how about make sure? like this http://puu.sh/dYx6D/fc69c75637.jpg it better to play fixed
02:44:418 (3,4) - even this try this http://puu.sh/dYxd1/67064c0f14.jpg fixed
03:25:132 (1) - it doesn't fit this slider also 03:25:400 - there is havent anysounds and string or some sound is until 03:25:311 - here, try just make http://puu.sh/dYxwd/375795b22f.jpg 1/2 slider fixed
04:11:561 (3,4) - same as 02:44:418 (3,4) - like this http://puu.sh/dYxL7/9b750dee83.jpg fixed
04:45:890 - isn't 1/3 on here? 1/4 is so late check it Same as Easy

Insane
03:26:561 (1,2,3,4,5) - you should fix them, unsnap check them. it should be snap 1/3 fixed
04:45:951 (3) - same as hard diff Same as Easy
that's all gooood map \o/ \o/

Thanks for modding xD

RandF

1,245 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2015-01-03T15:44:31+00:00

From my queue~

[Easy]

00:36:561 (1) - too close from life gauge
01:24:418 (3) - ^
03:55:132 (2,1) - this arrow pattern is not good for easy. the overlapping on slider's start or end is hard to see for beginner
04:36:204 (2,1) - stack correctly

[Hard]

02:09:239 (1,2) - I feel a little difficult jump. decrease DS or change better flow like 00:49:239 (1,2) -
02:53:525 (4) - I recommend to move to 02:53:346-
it is better to keep 1/1 rhythm at this part
04:14:329 (1,1) - I prefer not to stack because hard to find rhythm

[Insane]

Good!

[Kocari's Normal]

00:26:561 (3) - NC?
01:46:561 (3) - ^
00:53:346 (2) - too close from life gauge
00:56:025- move clap to 00:56:204 (8) -
00:59:061 (5) - clap
01:10:846 (1) - end at 01:11:204 or remove clap form slider's end
01:17:989 (3,4) - I recommend to move clap to backbeat (2nd,4th beat) in the same way as other notes
02:18:704 (4) - start at 02:18:525 like 02:18:704 (4) -
02:32:811- clap is necessary?
03:00:489 (3) - suggetion for following vocal
03:06:025 (2) - suggetion
03:52:275 (3,4,1) - claps on the red line is not good, imo
03:59:775- clap

you really like illya<3
my first shooting star in 2015 ~☆
~Good Luck~

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2015-01-03T17:26:29+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~

[Easy]
00:36:561 (1) - too close from life gauge fixed a bit
01:24:418 (3) - ^ fixed
03:55:132 (2,1) - this arrow pattern is not good for easy. the overlapping on slider's start or end is hard to see for beginner But that overlapping is really small so not big problem imo ;w;
04:36:204 (2,1) - stack correctly Can't do it cuz BPM and DS orz
[Hard]
02:09:239 (1,2) - I feel a little difficult jump. decrease DS or change better flow like 00:49:239 (1,2) - fixed
02:53:525 (4) - I recommend to move to 02:53:346- fixed
it is better to keep 1/1 rhythm at this part
04:14:329 (1,1) - I prefer not to stack because hard to find rhythm fixed
[Insane]

Good! xD
you really like illya<3 hehe <3
my first shooting star in 2015 ~☆ >< /
~Good Luck~

Thanks for modding!

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2015-01-03T18:52:30+00:00

Ok, new and improved I hope. Everything that the modders said has changed and in some places changed things around so hitsound doesn't sound too boshy anymore. I hope this will do. Thanks for the MODS

Update

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Song_starlog.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 230132
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 107993,205136,209958,213708,225136,247993,250672
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:starlog
TitleUnicode:starlog
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ChouCho
Creator:Karia
Version:Kocari's Normal
Source:Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA☆ILLYA
Tags:Full Version opening Prismaillya Illyasviel von Einzbern Miyu Edelfelt Kadowaki Mai Nazuka Kaori プリズマ☆イリヤ Kocari
BeatmapID:569335
BeatmapSetID:244684

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,164260,175241
2,210154,223812
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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288174,382.165605095541,4,2,2,30,1,0
292951,-100,4,2,2,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,189,157
Combo2 : 255,255,176
Combo3 : 255,181,255
Combo4 : 185,255,255

[HitObjects]
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368,304,152275,2,0,P|364:256|404:184,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,144,152811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,144,152989,6,0,B|416:72|416:72|436:12,2,120,2|8|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,260,154061,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,332,154418,2,0,L|224:336,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,260,155132,2,0,L|284:232,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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420,304,179418,6,0,P|388:288|292:288,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,312,179954,2,0,P|208:324|120:328,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,300,180489,1,2,0:0:0:0:
52,252,180668,2,0,P|36:216|48:128,1,120
68,80,181204,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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228,36,181918,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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232,284,190489,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,344,190846,6,0,P|108:296|132:208,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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360,144,198704,2,0,P|420:132|488:152,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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240,92,204418,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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476,60,205489,2,0,P|481:119|505:173,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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108,348,207632,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,272,207989,6,0,B|30:244|-10:184|-10:184|2:160,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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268,64,209239,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,160,209596,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,76,209954,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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192,156,250132,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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352,164,250846,6,0,P|408:188|492:200,2,120,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,72,251918,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,72,252096,2,0,P|216:64|157:74,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,88,252632,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,252811,12,0,254061,0:0:0:0:
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372,204,256561,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,132,256918,2,0,P|492:192|480:252,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,352,257632,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,288,257989,6,0,P|272:276|208:292,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,324,258525,2,0,P|188:276|168:192,2,120,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,360,259418,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,256,259775,1,10,0:0:0:0:
88,140,260132,2,0,P|40:140|-8:156,2,90,0|10|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,164,260846,6,0,P|180:176|276:160,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,88,261561,2,0,P|377:141|373:200,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,304,262275,2,0,B|376:320|376:320|292:308,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,284,262811,2,0,B|206:275|206:275|146:291,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,308,263346,1,10,0:0:0:0:
48,196,263704,6,0,B|106:205|106:205|166:192,1,120,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,160,264239,2,0,B|264:144|264:144|412:168,1,180,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,248,265132,2,0,B|464:184|504:120|504:120|488:72,2,180,6|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,308,266561,6,0,B|316:336|248:308,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,267275,2,0,B|164:220|164:220|80:200,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,308,267989,2,0,B|56:292|56:292|140:312,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,288,268704,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,336,269061,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,248,269418,6,0,P|448:188|404:120,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,100,269954,2,0,P|288:120|232:108,2,120,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,252,271204,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,252,271561,2,0,P|456:210|456:156,2,90,10|8|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,216,272989,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,125,273346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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lolia

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lolia 2015-01-04T04:33:35+00:00

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HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2015-01-04T13:04:13+00:00

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[General]

오디오 리드인이 노멀 난이도와 다릅니다. 동일화 시켜주시길 바랍니다.

[Easy]

00:00:847 (1) - 이 슬라이더 끝에 휘슬 넣어보세요. 피아노 소리 강조하기 좋네요
00:16:561 (1) - 앞부분이 둥근 슬라이더니까 얘도 곡선으로 바꿔서 흐름 괜찮게 해보시는게 어떠신가요?
00:24:775 (4) - 휘슬 추가해주세요. 베이스소리가 분명히 들리는데 안들어가 있네요
01:07:275 (3) - 끝부분도 클랩이랑 피니쉬 같이 넣어보세요 강조가 훨씬 살아서 더 좋아보입니다.
01:11:561 (2) - 이거 흐름이 약간 이상한데 조금 끝부분 다듬어보세요
SPOILER
01:36:561 ~ 01:46:204 - 히트사운드가 너무 커보이는데 힛사 파일 특징상 그런것같은데... 힛사 파일 불륨 작게 바꿔보세요..
01:50:846 - 휘슬 빼먹으셨군요
02:27:275 (4) - 이거 아까 말한거랑 비슷한 내용입니다. 01:07:275 (3) - 이것
02:29:418 (3) - 이건 개인적으로 모양을 약간 바꿔서 담요처리 해보시는것도 나쁘지 않을것 같아요
SPOILER
02:44:418 (3) - 끝부분에 피니쉬가 소프트라서 좀 많이 약한것 같아요 이 히트사운드는 어떠세요? http://puu.sh/e3wlj/8ddfd60fc4.wav
04:14:954 (1) - 끝부분에 클랩?
04:16:025 (2) - 시작부분에 휘슬 넣어주세요 좀 없으니까 허전해서..
04:24:775 (2) - 여기에 클랩 넣어주세요

[Kocari's Normal]

00:00:847 (1,2) - add whistle please. No custom sound. only head and tail add
00:02:275 (3,4) - same (^)
00:10:400 - add clap here.
00:26:561 (3) - flow piano sound here. so add whistle please (No custom hitsound)
00:32:275 (5) - this slider Made of round down
SPOILER
00:47:632 (5) - add custom1 whistle batter
00:58:346 - clap?
01:25:132 (1) - this missing Blanket. Fixed this
SPOILER
01:29:239 (3) - flow is bad. like this?
SPOILER
01:32:989 (5,1) - bad spacing >_>. please Fixed distance
01:36:918 ~ 01:46:204 - please use custome 4 clap sound. your diff only not use
02:27:275 - whistle
02:27:811 - same (^)
02:37:989 (3) - Reduce the slider to the white tick. now is bad rhythm
02:45:132 - break start here
03:08:704 (2,3) - (2) note stack (3) slider batter
03:14:954 (2) - add whistle on the head and tail.
03:30:846 - break time start here
03:50:668 - whistle
04:14:954 (1) - How to change the curve slider thing?
SPOILER
04:20:132 - Finish?
04:35:132 (6,1) - swap NC batter

[Hard]

00:11:204 (2) - Ctrl+G 하셔서 좁은 점프를 넣어보시는것도 재미요소가 될 것 같습니다.
00:17:989 (1) - 이것도 Ctrl+G 해보시는게 어떠신가요? 개인적으로 점프가 없는 편이 플로우가 좋아보여요
00:48:525 (1) - 이건 안고쳐도 상관이 없는건데 개인적으로 전 디스턴스 맞추는 편이 좋아보여요
00:56:382 (4) - 이건 연타가 별로 안어울리는데 그냥 단타형식으로 바꿔보세요
01:49:418 (1,2) - 이건 리듬을 약간 변화할 필요가 있어보이네요 01:49:775 - 여기에 노트를 추가하고 01:49:954 - 빨간틱부터 1/1 슬라이더 만드신 후 01:50:489 - 여기에 노트 추가하는게 좋을것 같아요. 보컬 플로우가 되도록.
01:57:989 (1) - 디스턴스 맞춰주세요 고의라고 해도 별로 좋아보이지 않네요
02:07:989 (1,1,2) - 변속이 얼마 차이가 나질 않고 별로 변속이 들어갈 부분은 아니라고 생각해요 그냥 변속을 빼시는게 어떠세요?
02:45:132 (1) - 이건 이지와 동일한데 시작부분 피니쉬 넣어주세요
03:09:061 (3) - 이거 약간 왼쪽으로 이동시켜서 담요처리 되도록 해보세요
SPOILER
03:57:275 (3) - 담요가 약간 어긋낫네요. 담요 고쳐주세요~
SPOILER
04:15:311 - 여기에는 휘슬 들어가도 될것같아요
04:23:525 (3) - 이거 매우매우 겹침이 안좋아보이는데 차라리 슬라이더에 스택하는 편이 좋다고 생각해요

[Insane]

00:02:454 (2) - 이건 (4) 슬라이더 끝부분에 스택해서 점프 형식으로 만들어보는것도 좋다고 생각해요
SPOILER
00:04:596 (1) - 여기에는 뉴콤의 의미가 딱히 없어보이는데 그냥 제거하시는게 어떠신가요?
00:21:918 (4) - 이건 Ctrl+G 하는게 플로우 좋을거예요. 아마도
00:23:704 (1) - 이것도 Ctrl+G 하시는게 어떠신가요? 아래로 향하게 하면 치기에 훨씬 편하더라고요.
00:55:668 (4) - 아무 힛사도 없는게 좀 어색하네요. 그냥 힛사 알맞게 넣어보시는게 어떠신가요?
02:20:846 (1,3) - 이거 뉴콤 바꾸시는게 좋을것 같아요
02:30:132 (4) - 시작부분에 휘슬 넣어주세요
02:45:132 (1) - 이지와 동일하게 강조가 약하다는 의견입니다.
02:59:061 (5) - Ctrl+G
04:15:311 - 휘슬 넣어주세요

Best of Luck~

Atsuro

1,290 posts

Joined January 2013

Atsuro 2015-01-04T20:14:28+00:00

Hello!
Sorry for being late

[Easy]

02:44:418 (3) - I think a circle after this slider instead of the repeat would work better, to emphasize the finish.
04:09:418 (3) - Clap at the end? i think it fits better than whistle
04:24:775 (2) - Missing clap here

Great easy!

[Kocari's Normal]

00:03:346 - A spinner would fit here from 00:03:346 - to 00:04:418 -
00:08:882 (2,3) - Try this rhythm to map the downbeat you're skipping, sounds better imo
img
00:15:132 (2) - Finish on the return?
00:16:561 (1) - I think finish on the beginning would fit
00:32:275 (5) - Whistle on the slider start, since this slider has it 00:32:989 (6) -
00:41:561 (4) - Remove whistle and add a finish, i can hear a cymbal here on the song.
00:41:918 (5) - I think the end of this slider should have clap instead of finish
00:55:132 (1,2) - This rhythm would fit the voice better imo
img
00:57:989 (3,4) - Clap should be on the end of the slider, remove it from the circle
00:59:418 (1,2) - Same as above, try to keep consistent claps on the white ticks
01:05:668 (2,3) - Same as above, there are more like this.
01:47:632 (4) - Clap here
02:37:989 (3,4) - Try to avoid using slider tick hitsounds when you can on normal, reduce the lenght of "3" by 1/2 a beat and add a circle 02:38:525 -
02:44:061 -Would be better to start the break here 02:45:132 - imo, just add a slider and a circle
something like this
03:03:346 (2) - I suggest this rhythm to map the cymbal here 03:03:525 - and to give more variety
img
03:18:704 (7) - Move this slider back 1/2 beat and extend it to where it ended to follow better the guitar
img
03:21:204 (3,4) - Clap should be on "3" and the end of "4" and not on the beginning of "4"
04:06:204 (2) - To follow better the voice try this
img
04:14:954 (1,2) - For consistency since you are following that instrument on the rest of the song.
http://puu.sh/e4l77/fd6727b7c1.jpg
04:26:561 (1,2,3) - Same as above
04:35:846 (7) - Same, here you can move the slider 1/2 a beat back and extend it for the clap

The diff is nice, but it needs work on the hitsounds

[Hard]

02:21:382 (3,4,5,6) - Try reducing the volume of the hitsounds a bit on these streams, they are too loud imo
02:49:061 (2) - Remove the repeat and add a circle instead, it would give a better effect.
02:53:704 (1) - To follow better the vocals i suggest something like this
img
03:01:114 - Try adding a circle, it would fit.
03:29:239 (1,2,3) - Small suggestion: it would be more fun if these notes were jumps instead of being stacked.
04:12:811 - A spinner would be great here, i see why you didn't add it but the spinner was made for these parts :p. Consider it

[Insane]

03:25:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream doesn't follow anything on the music i think, the instrument is still 1/3. Try:
img

That's all, fun diff!

Good luck

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2015-01-05T01:07:42+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:

your request

[General]

오디오 리드인이 노멀 난이도와 다릅니다. 동일화 시켜주시길 바랍니다. fixed
[Easy]

00:00:847 (1) - 이 슬라이더 끝에 휘슬 넣어보세요. 피아노 소리 강조하기 좋네요 fixed
00:16:561 (1) - 앞부분이 둥근 슬라이더니까 얘도 곡선으로 바꿔서 흐름 괜찮게 해보시는게 어떠신가요? 흐름은 좀 비슷할꺼같은데 전 지금모양이 더 예뻐서...ㅜ
00:24:775 (4) - 휘슬 추가해주세요. 베이스소리가 분명히 들리는데 안들어가 있네요 fixed
01:07:275 (3) - 끝부분도 클랩이랑 피니쉬 같이 넣어보세요 강조가 훨씬 살아서 더 좋아보입니다. added the clap
01:11:561 (2) - 이거 흐름이 약간 이상한데 조금 끝부분 다듬어보세요 maybe fixed
SPOILER
01:36:561 ~ 01:46:204 - 히트사운드가 너무 커보이는데 힛사 파일 특징상 그런것같은데... 힛사 파일 불륨 작게 바꿔보세요.. 약 72.25%로 줄였는데 좀 너무 줄인느낌도 있네요 orz
01:50:846 - 휘슬 빼먹으셨군요 fixed
02:27:275 (4) - 이거 아까 말한거랑 비슷한 내용입니다. 01:07:275 (3) - 이것 fixed
02:29:418 (3) - 이건 개인적으로 모양을 약간 바꿔서 담요처리 해보시는것도 나쁘지 않을것 같아요 이건 원하는 모양이 안나와서 그냥 제 스타일대로 오버랩시켰습니다
SPOILER
02:44:418 (3) - 끝부분에 피니쉬가 소프트라서 좀 많이 약한것 같아요 이 히트사운드는 어떠세요? http://puu.sh/e3wlj/8ddfd60fc4.wav 음..뭔가 노래에비해 웅장하다해야하나..그런 비슷한 느낌이 드네요. 일단 볼륨을 올렸습니다
04:14:954 (1) - 끝부분에 클랩? fixed
04:16:025 (2) - 시작부분에 휘슬 넣어주세요 좀 없으니까 허전해서.. fixed
04:24:775 (2) - 여기에 클랩 넣어주세요 fixed
[Hard]

00:11:204 (2) - Ctrl+G 하셔서 좁은 점프를 넣어보시는것도 재미요소가 될 것 같습니다. fixed
00:17:989 (1) - 이것도 Ctrl+G 해보시는게 어떠신가요? 개인적으로 점프가 없는 편이 플로우가 좋아보여요 하드치곤 살짝 먼 점프가 되는거같기도하고..좀 거리가 애매해서 일단 이대로 두고싶네요
00:48:525 (1) - 이건 안고쳐도 상관이 없는건데 개인적으로 전 디스턴스 맞추는 편이 좋아보여요 fixed
00:56:382 (4) - 이건 연타가 별로 안어울리는데 그냥 단타형식으로 바꿔보세요 fixed
01:49:418 (1,2) - 이건 리듬을 약간 변화할 필요가 있어보이네요 01:49:775 - 여기에 노트를 추가하고 01:49:954 - 빨간틱부터 1/1 슬라이더 만드신 후 01:50:489 - 여기에 노트 추가하는게 좋을것 같아요. 보컬 플로우가 되도록. (1)도 보컬을 따라간게 아니라서 (2)만 고치면 저한테는 좀 어색하게 들리네요..지금 리듬도 아마 괜찮을꺼같은데 여기는 일단 이대로 쓰고싶어요 ㅎㅎ
01:57:989 (1) - 디스턴스 맞춰주세요 고의라고 해도 별로 좋아보이지 않네요 엌ㅋㅋ 이건 좀 생각을 해봐야할꺼같아요. 디스턴스는 다르지만 앞의 00:37:989 (1,2,3) - 여기와 세트로 점프를 넣으려 했던 음이라..
02:07:989 (1,1,2) - 변속이 얼마 차이가 나질 않고 별로 변속이 들어갈 부분은 아니라고 생각해요 그냥 변속을 빼시는게 어떠세요? 변속이 약하게 느껴지기는 하지만 앞의 키아이 시작전에도 이미 넣어줬기도하고 개인적으로 여긴 꼭 변속을 넣고싶어서,,죄송합니다 ㅜ
02:45:132 (1) - 이건 이지와 동일한데 시작부분 피니쉬 넣어주세요 fixed
03:09:061 (3) - 이거 약간 왼쪽으로 이동시켜서 담요처리 되도록 해보세요 fixed
SPOILER
03:57:275 (3) - 담요가 약간 어긋낫네요. 담요 고쳐주세요~ 담요처리하려고 찍은부분이 아니라서 일단 애매하게 안보이게 고쳤습니다
SPOILER
04:15:311 - 여기에는 휘슬 들어가도 될것같아요 음악에 아무런 음이 없어서 좀 이상하게 들리네요 ;w;
04:23:525 (3) - 이거 매우매우 겹침이 안좋아보이는데 차라리 슬라이더에 스택하는 편이 좋다고 생각해요 이..건 이미 앞에서도 같은걸 썼고 개인적으로 좋아하는 거라서 ㅜ
[Insane]

00:02:454 (2) - 이건 (4) 슬라이더 끝부분에 스택해서 점프 형식으로 만들어보는것도 좋다고 생각해요 좀 다르게 고쳤습니다
SPOILER
00:04:596 (1) - 여기에는 뉴콤의 의미가 딱히 없어보이는데 그냥 제거하시는게 어떠신가요? 전 연타의 흐름이나 DS가 변할때 , 혹은 연타가 너무 길어질때 뉴콤을 넣어주기때문에 여기는 이대로 쓰고싶네요..
00:21:918 (4) - 이건 Ctrl+G 하는게 플로우 좋을거예요. 아마도 음..1/4슬라라서 흐름의 차이는 크게 없는거같은데 전 지금이 더 예뻐보여서..
00:23:704 (1) - 이것도 Ctrl+G 하시는게 어떠신가요? 아래로 향하게 하면 치기에 훨씬 편하더라고요. fixed
00:55:668 (4) - 아무 힛사도 없는게 좀 어색하네요. 그냥 힛사 알맞게 넣어보시는게 어떠신가요? fixed
02:20:846 (1,3) - 이거 뉴콤 바꾸시는게 좋을것 같아요 확실히 그것도 괜찮긴한데 ..전 뉴콤은 일단 규칙성을 제일 중요시여겨서 orz
02:30:132 (4) - 시작부분에 휘슬 넣어주세요 fixed
02:45:132 (1) - 이지와 동일하게 강조가 약하다는 의견입니다. fixed
02:59:061 (5) - Ctrl+G fixed
04:15:311 - 휘슬 넣어주세요 하드랑 같은 이유입니다
Best of Luck~

Thanks for modding!!!

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2015-01-05T01:29:18+00:00

Atsuro wrote:
Hello!
Sorry for being late No problem!

[Easy]
02:44:418 (3) - I think a circle after this slider instead of the repeat would work better, to emphasize the finish. fixed
04:09:418 (3) - Clap at the end? i think it fits better than whistle Hmm,,whistle is better to me ;w;
04:24:775 (2) - Missing clap here fixed

Great easy! x)
[Hard]
02:21:382 (3,4,5,6) - Try reducing the volume of the hitsounds a bit on these streams, they are too loud imo but almost all stream has same volume QwQ
02:49:061 (2) - Remove the repeat and add a circle instead, it would give a better effect. I want to keep current rhythm cuz this rhythm has blue-tick
02:53:704 (1) - To follow better the vocals i suggest something like this fixed
img
03:01:114 - Try adding a circle, it would fit. The Insane also has no note here, so keeping current rhythm is better imo
03:29:239 (1,2,3) - Small suggestion: it would be more fun if these notes were jumps instead of being stacked. fixed a bit
04:12:811 - A spinner would be great here, i see why you didn't add it but the spinner was made for these parts :p. Consider it I can't do it cuz of the spinner rule x.x

[Insane]
03:25:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream doesn't follow anything on the music i think, the instrument is still 1/3. Try: fixed
img

That's all, fun diff!
Good luck

Thanks for modding!!

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2015-01-05T05:42:18+00:00

Changed everything that Karia HabiHolic and Atsuro said Thanks for the mod guys

Update

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Song_starlog.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1100
PreviewTime: 230132
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 107993,205136,209958,213708,225136,247993,250672
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:starlog
TitleUnicode:starlog
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ChouCho
Creator:Karia
Version:Kocari's Normal
Source:Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA☆ILLYA
Tags:Full Version opening Prismaillya Illyasviel von Einzbern Miyu Edelfelt Kadowaki Mai Nazuka Kaori プリズマ☆イリヤ Kocari
BeatmapID:569335
BeatmapSetID:244684

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,165332,175241
2,210154,223812
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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67989,-100,4,2,2,65,0,1
84061,-100,4,2,2,75,0,0
85132,-100,4,2,2,30,0,0
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225132,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
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lolia

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lolia 2015-01-05T06:15:43+00:00

Updateddd!

@Kocari : fixed the spinner issue (01:35:132 (1) - this) as I said in-game , and I'll look for the hitsound modding as Atsuro said! xP

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