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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015년 2월 5일 목요일 at 오후 3:23:18

Artist: ChouCho
Title: starlog
Source: Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA☆ILLYA
Tags: Full Version opening Prismaillya Illyasviel von Einzbern Miyu Edelfelt Kadowaki Mai Nazuka Kaori プリズマ☆イリヤ Kocari ちょうちょ
BPM: 168
Filesize: 8265kb
Play Time: 04:52
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.44 stars, 280 notes)
  2. Hard (3.03 stars, 715 notes)
  3. Insane (4.31 stars, 1020 notes)
  4. Kocari's Normal (2.07 stars, 484 notes)


Download: ChouCho - starlog
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy - Done (me)
Normal - Done (Kocari)
Hard - Done (me)
Insane - Done (me)

Special Thanks
  1. K i A i - Timing check
  2. Kocari - Normal GD
  3. EvilElvis - Timing check
  4. Guy - Timing check
  5. captin1 - Timing check
  6. pishifat - Timing check
  7. All modders
  8. Kibbleru - Bubbled
  9. Sonnyc - Ranked
Changelog
  1. 12/20/2014 - finished the Insane diff
  2. 12/21/2014 - finished the Hard diff
  3. 12/22/2014 - finished the Easy diff & changed the timing-points (by K i A i)
  4. 12/23/2014 - finished the Normal diff (by Kocari)
  5. 12/24/2014 - Applied the Gaia's modding
  6. 12/27/2014 - Applied the -Tochi's modding
  7. 12/28/2014 - Applied the Inyuschan's modding
  8. 12/29/2014 - Changed the timing-points (By EvilElvis)
  9. 12/30/2014 - Changed the timing-points (By Guy)
  10. 1/1/2015 - Applied the bigfrog's modding
  11. 1/2/2015 - Applied the Ninja Bunny's modding
  12. 1/2/2015 - Applied the Fortune's modding
  13. 1/3/2015 - Applied the koreapenguin's modding
  14. 1/4/2015 - Applied the RandomEffect's modding
  15. 1/5/2015 - Applied the HabiHolic's modding
  16. 1/5/2015 - Applied the Atsuro's modding
  17. 1/7/2015 - Changed the timing-points (By captin1)
  18. 1/8/2015 - Applied the Kibbleru's modding
  19. 1/10/2015 - Applied the -Nya- 's modding
  20. 1/16/2015 - Applied the Euny's modding
  21. 1/20/2015 - Applied the No Dap's modding
  22. 1/30/2015 - Changed the MP3
  23. 1/31/2015 - Bubbled by Kibbleru
  24. 2/5/2015 - Applied the Sonnyc's modding
  25. 2/5/2015 - Ranked by Sonnyc
posted
Nice. If there is a normal GD open I'll be down to take it on :)
Other than that can't wait to see progress in the future
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Kocari wrote:

Nice. If there is a normal GD open I'll be down to take it on :)
Other than that can't wait to see progress in the future
Sure, take a Normal!
posted
Really fun mapset, good luck!
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Finishing it up soon. Once hitsounds are done will give it to you tonight. 3 retries to get good quality, let's get the show on the road ヾ(⌐■_■)ノ♪
Complete Will submit by morning
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xChorse wrote:

Really fun mapset, good luck!
Thanks xD/

Kocari wrote:

Finishing it up soon. Once hitsounds are done will give it to you tonight. 3 retries to get good quality, let's get the show on the road ヾ(⌐■_■)ノ♪
Ok~ :D
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감히 절 귀찮게 하다니.......... 올 픽스로 그 죗값을 치르셔야겠습니다..

길어도 꾸욱 참고 정독해주세요 :)









[일단 빨간줄 첫 번째 포인트 - 168, 851]

이거 맞아요.
근데 제 생각엔 오프셋을 4~6정도는 앞으로 땡기는게 좋을거 같아요.

일단 타이밍 체크하시느라 노래 열심히 들으시면서 눈치 채셨겠지만,
이 노래, 일반 파트랑 클라이막스 파트의 드럼 소리 오프셋이 각각 달라요.
클라이막스 부분이 일반 파트에 비해 더 앞에 있어요.

네, 노래는 좋을지 모르지만 매핑하기 정말 곤란한 노래입니다, 작곡가가 개객기죠.

제가 들어보니까 851이라는 오프셋은 일반 파트에 좀 더 맞춰져 있는거 같아요.
그래서 저는 일반 파트와 클라이막스 파트의 중간정도 지점이 될 수 있도록 오프셋을 현재 상태에서 -4~6정도 하시는 것을 추천드립니다.


아, 그리고 큰 타이밍 포인트가 이동할 때는 그냥 아예 패널에서 컨트롤 에이 누르셔서 모든 포인트 선택하시고 거기에서 수정하시는게 좋을거에요 :)
BPM168이 주를 이루고 나머지 포인트는 그냥 감속을 위한 들러리일 뿐이니깐녀 ^0^






[두 번째 빨갱이 - 162, 277993]


이상 없음






[세 번째 빨갱이 - 161, 283918]

이거 지워주시고,






161, 286881 추가
160, 288371 추가
150, 288746 추가
130, 289146 추가
88, 289607 추가
45, 290288 추가

각각의 오프셋은 첫 번째 빨갱이 168, 851의 오프셋에 따라 바꿔주세요
-3 하셨으면 저것들도 -3, -5 하셨으면 저것들도 각각 -5.













배려심 따위 없는 차가운 제 흑염룡을 봉인해제한 상태에서 마음대로 잰거라 제가 옳다고 확신할 수는 없습니다.
많은 분들께 받으라고 권해드리고 싶지만, 뱃한테 받으시는게 가장 확실합니다.

어디서 또 듣보잡한테 수정받고 오셔서 제가 열심히 수정한거 뒤집어 엎으시면 제가 응딩이 때찌할거에여 ^0^















샘플 드릴게요, 이건 첫 번째 빨갱이 오프셋을 -4하고 나머지를 거기에 맞춘겁니다.

http://puu.sh/dEFwT/432dc99b6c.zip












맵 좋네요, 이후에 또 부탁하실 일 있으면 PM 보내주세요 ㅎㅎ

특별히 또 받을지도...... 몰라요!
posted

K i A i wrote:

감히 절 귀찮게 하다니.......... 올 픽스로 그 죗값을 치르셔야겠습니다.. ㅠㅠ

길어도 꾸욱 참고 정독해주세요 :)

[일단 빨간줄 첫 번째 포인트 - 168, 851]

이거 맞아요.
근데 제 생각엔 오프셋을 4~6정도는 앞으로 땡기는게 좋을거 같아요.

일단 타이밍 체크하시느라 노래 열심히 들으시면서 눈치 채셨겠지만,
이 노래, 일반 파트랑 클라이막스 파트의 드럼 소리 오프셋이 각각 달라요. 클라이막스 부분이 일반 파트에 비해 더 앞에 있어요.
덕분에 중간중간 티나게 어긋나는곳듯이 있어서 찍는내내 불안했었습니다 orz

네, 노래는 좋을지 모르지만 매핑하기 정말 곤란한 노래입니다, 작곡가가 개객기죠.

제가 들어보니까 851이라는 오프셋은 일반 파트에 좀 더 맞춰져 있는거 같아요.
그래서 저는 일반 파트와 클라이막스 파트의 중간정도 지점이 될 수 있도록 오프셋을 현재 상태에서 -4~6정도 하시는 것을 추천드립니다.
-4를 택하겠습니다!

아, 그리고 큰 타이밍 포인트가 이동할 때는 그냥 아예 패널에서 컨트롤 에이 누르셔서 모든 포인트 선택하시고 거기에서 수정하시는게 좋을거에요 :)
BPM168이 주를 이루고 나머지 포인트는 그냥 감속을 위한 들러리일 뿐이니깐녀 ^0^ xD


[두 번째 빨갱이 - 162, 277993]


이상 없음


[세 번째 빨갱이 - 161, 283918]

이거 지워주시고,

161, 286881 추가
160, 288371 추가
150, 288746 추가
130, 289146 추가
88, 289607 추가
45, 290288 추가

각각의 오프셋은 첫 번째 빨갱이 168, 851의 오프셋에 따라 바꿔주세요
-3 하셨으면 저것들도 -3, -5 하셨으면 저것들도 각각 -5.

배려심 따위 없는 차가운 제 흑염룡을 봉인해제한 상태에서 마음대로 잰거라 제가 옳다고 확신할 수는 없습니다. 확실할꺼라 믿습니다!
많은 분들께 받으라고 권해드리고 싶지만, 뱃한테 받으시는게 가장 확실합니다.

어디서 또 듣보잡한테 수정받고 오셔서 제가 열심히 수정한거 뒤집어 엎으시면 제가 응딩이 때찌할거에여 ^0^ @3@a

맵 좋네요, 이후에 또 부탁하실 일 있으면 PM 보내주세요 ㅎㅎ

특별히 또 받을지도...... 몰라요! ?!
Thanks for timing check!! xDD
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From queue~

[General]
choo choo >w<


[Easy]
00:00:847 (1,2) - nothing wrong really just doesnt look good imo lol
00:27:632 - i think u can boost up the volume for this it's kinda hidden from the actual music
00:31:204 (1) - put it down here i think it's cool (and ctrl+J) http://puu.sh/dGWcC/c1df72f3ff.jpg
01:11:561 (2) - curve and move a little? http://puu.sh/dGWnU/68aba6b258.jpg
01:19:418 (1) - no stack?? O:
01:42:275 (1) - try bend the other way
01:45:132 (1,2) - looks like a failed slider blanket orz
02:05:132 (1) - i think it looks reaaaally good if it's curved omg http://puu.sh/dGWJd/bf2f4f805e.jpg
02:27:275 (4,1) - don't really look good together
02:37:989 (3,4,1) - niceeeeee but blanket the 4?
02:56:561 (1,2) - move it up so it doesnt look like a failed blaneket tehe http://puu.sh/dGWZM/67c5ddf35d.jpg
03:10:132 (3) - i think this is better http://puu.sh/dGXir/ac30ef971f.jpg <<(is this too messy lol)
03:46:561 (2) - omg this is awesome http://puu.sh/dGXqs/9b04c917e7.jpg
03:54:061 (1) - u should curve same way as 03:52:275 (3) - imo
04:14:954 (1) - you need minimum 1000ms recovery space >< you're short by about 150ms D: rules suck
04:21:204 (1) - this is a really tricky overlap that i wouldn't use in easy. strongly recommend u move it somewhere else. http://puu.sh/dGXW3/d3c8619a71.jpg 04:21:561 (2) - is stacked on 04:20:132 (4) -
04:37:989 (1) - stack ;~;
04:46:507 (4) - i think the beat on 04:46:322 - is stronger than the beat here. the 3/2 spacing is tricky too, so why not use a 1/2 slider starting on 04:46:322 and end 1/2 later?
04:46:877 (1) - curve the other way :v
04:49:372 (1) - this can end at around 04:55:617 - imo

[Kocari]
00:00:847 (1) - these normal whistles dont fit the calmness of the song imo
00:05:132 (1) - this is around 30ms short of the 750ms minimum orz
00:06:918 (4) - it'd be cool if you moved it down instead of up so it'd flow nicely
00:08:525 - why not map this one? try this
00:11:561 (2) - blanket's a bit off
00:16:561 (1) - lol, this doesn't look good nor does it flow well
00:16:561 (1) - normal whistle s: the rest im not gunna say so keep this in mind
00:18:704 (5) - is this a blanket?
00:19:418 (1) - looks kinda random lol
00:25:132 (1) - map all the 1/1s here please :<
00:27:632 - default drum clap pls
00:32:096 (3,4) - u should stack these, 1/2 spacing twice is hard to play for beginners
00:32:989 (5) - ahh this flow tho
00:41:918 (5) - make this straight or bend it the other way
00:45:846 - slidertick hitsound this?
00:50:132 (3,4,1) - i dont think these are allowed in normal owo //space them out
00:51:382 (2) - remove clap
00:54:775 - remove whistle add clap
00:54:954 (5) - remove clap
00:56:025 - remove clap
00:56:204 (8) - change whistle to clap
00:56:561 (1) - slidertick hitsound the clap and remove clap at the sliderend
00:59:061 (5) - don't stack this... it's a 3/2 spacing in the timeline so it's hard to read
00:59:954 (2) - use proper spacing here too
01:02:989 (2) - i think follow vocals is better
01:06:382 (3,4,5) - tricky overlap/// u shouldn't overlap imo
01:13:704 (1) - doesn't look very good ><
01:17:275 (2) - vocals?
01:21:561 (4,5) - i dont really know why you want to stack these but this one isnt a huuge problem so i guess its alright owo
01:22:275 (1,2) - fix blanket on 01:21:918 (5) -
01:23:525 (3) - vocals owo?
01:27:096 (4) - proper spacing pls
01:32:989 (5) - please this overlap ;w;
01:49:954 (4) - remove clap
01:54:596 (2) - ^
01:56:382 (5) - this overlap is kinda ugly sorry aaah
01:58:346 (3) - tricky stack uhh and flow isn't great either
02:10:132 (4,5,1) - same as earlier..
02:20:132 (2) - lol uhhhh just use a normal slider please x_x
02:32:989 (1) - move the anchor down more, it's easier to read and looks better too http://puu.sh/dH0xI/54c843b0b1.jpg
02:40:846 (3,5) - kinda random o.o

actually I'll stop here, I feel like you'd be pretty annoyed of me by now lol. Just look at my points about stacks and overlaps, cuz there were others that i didn't really point out. also the chosen rhythms are quite inconsistent as well. i.e. 02:40:846 (3,5) - and then you have others where the note density is rather high.
oh and you should double check your hitsounding as well, cuz i didn't want to write a wall of text of hitsounds lol

[Hard]
tick2
00:05:132 (1) - if you move it to the right more it'd be easier to read :> http://puu.sh/dH0TM/d300e57fe6.jpg
00:09:239 (4) - move it up so u can move (1) under for more overlapping o: just a little doesn't look very good http://puu.sh/dH10X/513d6a69ba.jpg
00:12:989 (3) - curve this too since you did at 00:12:275 (1,2) -
00:16:561 (1) - maybe manual stack this so it's different from 00:16:114 (3,4) - ? people might overstream into this one lol http://puu.sh/dH1bt/115eb4fa59.jpg
00:32:632 (2) - don't overlap the beginnings?
00:43:882 (4) - i think its personal preference but why not space the 2 anchors out? http://puu.sh/dH1iW/db4bdb88b1.jpg
00:57:989 (1) - this can have a jump imo, maybe put it at (304, 240)?
01:01:739 (3) - better for hards i think
01:13:168 (3,4) - idk about this one, might be a little tricky owo
01:27:989 (1) - looks better going straight up or slightly bent going up http://puu.sh/dH1Oy/ba213375d4.jpg
01:31:204 (2) - suggestion owo curve other way
01:51:739 (4) - this flows a lot better if it was the other waay http://puu.sh/dH200/d6a8350f38.jpg
01:57:454 (2) - lol u really like these overlaps don't u xD
02:27:275 (1) - same as earlier about manualstacking if u want
02:31:382 (2,3) - oh this is cool
02:32:275 (1,2,3) - ^ C:
02:40:846 (1) - curve other way?
02:57:632 (4) - ^
03:00:489 (3) - um http://puu.sh/dH2iu/ee2aa4e27b.jpg
03:22:275 (1) - isnt it more ur style to curve this the other way?
04:04:775 (4,1) - i love and hate this at the same time lol
04:17:989 (1) - move to the right more http://puu.sh/dH2yK/6eccdb0d65.jpg

your hards are always great, good job :3

[Insane]
00:00:848 (1) - why not 1/4 repeat? it's insane
00:12:276 (1,2) - i don't really like the same slider right after another so why not curve 1 the other way?
00:40:312 (3) - this spacing though?
01:18:525 (2,3,4) - ^ might be a little misleading since this is insane, looks like a 1/4 spacing to me lol
01:27:454 (4) - might need a nc to show the different spacing
01:34:775 (3) - yeah same as earlier i think u can move this further
02:09:686 (2,3,1,2) - X_X please dont stack these all together aaa this is really hard to read cuz they're all different spacing and i guarantee u people will miss cuz they cant read this
02:15:489 (3) - move it down it looks better imo
02:19:061 (5) - ^
02:27:543 (2) - looks like an almost straight line but not really lmao, increase the distance between the anchors?
02:59:954 (2) - u should move the anchor back more owo http://puu.sh/dH3Uz/c9cb1d3750.jpg
03:30:846 (1) - lol i have mixed feelings about this s:
03:40:846 (1,2) - spacing doesnt look like it's 1/4
03:44:775 (5) - try jumping here to emphasize that drum clap?
03:46:561 (1) - ^
04:07:275 (1,1) - idk if 5% volume is rankable owo to be safe i think u should try like 10~15%
04:37:989 (1) - other way please x:

awesome
good luck and have fun! (:
posted

Gaia wrote:

From queue~

[General]
choo choo >w< hehe<3


[Easy]
00:00:847 (1,2) - nothing wrong really just doesnt look good imo lol Ah, I agree with this lol But I have no idea about this orz I'll change these later!
00:27:632 - i think u can boost up the volume for this it's kinda hidden from the actual music yeah
00:31:204 (1) - put it down here i think it's cool (and ctrl+J) http://puu.sh/dGWcC/c1df72f3ff.jpg fixed
01:11:561 (2) - curve and move a little? http://puu.sh/dGWnU/68aba6b258.jpg I like current curved slider! sorry
01:19:418 (1) - no stack?? O: Cus technical and DS error!
01:42:275 (1) - try bend the other way bended 01:40:846 (2) - this instead
01:45:132 (1,2) - looks like a failed slider blanket orz Cuz current shape is better to me orz
02:05:132 (1) - i think it looks reaaaally good if it's curved omg http://puu.sh/dGWJd/bf2f4f805e.jpg cool
02:27:275 (4,1) - don't really look good together Whhhhy ;w; It's great to me orz
02:37:989 (3,4,1) - niceeeeee but blanket the 4? non-blanket is better imo ><
02:56:561 (1,2) - move it up so it doesnt look like a failed blaneket tehe http://puu.sh/dGWZM/67c5ddf35d.jpg fixed
03:10:132 (3) - i think this is better http://puu.sh/dGXir/ac30ef971f.jpg <<(is this too messy lol wwww) fixed!
03:46:561 (2) - omg this is awesome http://puu.sh/dGXqs/9b04c917e7.jpg yeah
03:54:061 (1) - u should curve same way as 03:52:275 (3) - imo No problem here to me =3=
04:14:954 (1) - you need minimum 1000ms recovery space >< you're short by about 150ms D: rules suck Oh, I forgot the that rule orz
04:21:204 (1) - this is a really tricky overlap that i wouldn't use in easy. strongly recommend u move it somewhere else. http://puu.sh/dGXW3/d3c8619a71.jpg 04:21:561 (2) - is stacked on 04:20:132 (4) - I have no idea now. I'll fix it after I get some idea!
04:37:989 (1) - stack ;~; can't stack cuz the bpm is changed(and I want to keep same DS) orz
04:46:507 (4) - i think the beat on 04:46:322 - is stronger than the beat here. the 3/2 spacing is tricky too, so why not use a 1/2 slider starting on 04:46:322 and end 1/2 later? removed the note
04:46:877 (1) - curve the other way :v placement is changed from above thing xP
04:49:372 (1) - this can end at around 04:55:617 - imo It's tooooo long spin ;w;

[Hard]
tick2 ok
00:05:132 (1) - if you move it to the right more it'd be easier to read :> http://puu.sh/dH0TM/d300e57fe6.jpg moved a bit but can the number orz
00:09:239 (4) - move it up so u can move (1) under for more overlapping o: just a little doesn't look very good http://puu.sh/dH10X/513d6a69ba.jpg fixed
00:12:989 (3) - curve this too since you did at 00:12:275 (1,2) - no problem imo cuz 00:11:561 (3) - this also straight slider!
00:16:561 (1) - maybe manual stack this so it's different from 00:16:114 (3,4) - ? people might overstream into this one lol http://puu.sh/dH1bt/115eb4fa59.jpg maybe it's fine imo cuz that's not too long stream xD
00:32:632 (2) - don't overlap the beginnings? ahh, I know this problem but I believe no issue about this overlap orz
00:43:882 (4) - i think its personal preference but why not space the 2 anchors out? http://puu.sh/dH1iW/db4bdb88b1.jpg fixed a bit
00:57:989 (1) - this can have a jump imo, maybe put it at (304, 240)? moved on (312|236)
01:01:739 (3) - better for hards i think I want to keep this cuz I used the same rhythms in this diff

01:13:168 (3,4) - idk about this one, might be a little tricky owo hmm,,maybe no problem to read?? Their numbers are all visible!
01:27:989 (1) - looks better going straight up or slightly bent going up http://puu.sh/dH1Oy/ba213375d4.jpg yeah
01:31:204 (2) - suggestion owo curve other way ;p I like current one
01:51:739 (4) - this flows a lot better if it was the other waay http://puu.sh/dH200/d6a8350f38.jpg I like current flow o3o
01:57:454 (2) - lol u really like these overlaps don't u xD overlap is really awesome x)
02:27:275 (1) - same as earlier about manualstacking if u want QwQ
02:31:382 (2,3) - oh this is cool cool!
02:32:275 (1,2,3) - ^ C: C:
02:40:846 (1) - curve other way? current way is better imo
02:57:632 (4) - ^ ^
03:00:489 (3) - um http://puu.sh/dH2iu/ee2aa4e27b.jpg fixed!
03:22:275 (1) - isnt it more ur style to curve this the other way? right
04:04:775 (4,1) - i love and hate this at the same time lol me too wwww
04:17:989 (1) - move to the right more http://puu.sh/dH2yK/6eccdb0d65.jpg moved a bit

your hards are always great, good job :3 >w<

[Insane]
00:00:848 (1) - why not 1/4 repeat? it's insane cuz I want to start easy rhythm
00:12:276 (1,2) - i don't really like the same slider right after another so why not curve 1 the other way? But I like that :D
00:40:312 (3) - this spacing though? gave it more DS
01:18:525 (2,3,4) - ^ might be a little misleading since this is insane, looks like a 1/4 spacing to me lol www but players already know this rhythm imo
01:27:454 (4) - might need a nc to show the different spacing fixed
01:34:775 (3) - yeah same as earlier i think u can move this further @3@
02:09:686 (2,3,1,2) - X_X please dont stack these all together aaa this is really hard to read cuz they're all different spacing and i guarantee u people will miss cuz they cant read this fixed a bit
02:15:489 (3) - move it down it looks better imo I like current 1/4 overlap :)
02:19:061 (5) - ^ ^
02:27:543 (2) - looks like an almost straight line but not really lmao, increase the distance between the anchors? fixed a bit
02:59:954 (2) - u should move the anchor back more owo http://puu.sh/dH3Uz/c9cb1d3750.jpg fixed
03:30:846 (1) - lol i have mixed feelings about this s: c:
03:40:846 (1,2) - spacing doesnt look like it's 1/4 this 1/2 is surely readable x.x
03:44:775 (5) - try jumping here to emphasize that drum clap? current stack is better to me ;w;
03:46:561 (1) - ^ ^
04:07:275 (1,1) - idk if 5% volume is rankable owo to be safe i think u should try like 10~15% Hmm,,maybe muted-slider's tail is available imo
04:37:989 (1) - other way please x: yeah

awesome :3
good luck and have fun! (:
Thanks for modding!!
posted
Everything changed, and a lot of revising have been done. Made it simpler and hit sounds should be OK. Did a lot of looting around to get reference, but I followed the sounds you have implemented; and it sounds good so I stuck with it. Thanks Gaia for the mod, I'll do better in the future to not create so much work :) Took me 2 hours to edit and move things around so it isn't complicated for the beginner players.

Code
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Title:starlog
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Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ChouCho
Creator:Karia
Version:Kocari's Normal
Source:Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA☆ILLYA
Tags:opening Prismaillya Illyasviel von Einzbern Miyu Edelfelt Kadowaki Mai Nazuka Kaori プリズマ☆イリヤ Kocari
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160,256,243704,2,0,L|32:280,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,176,244418,2,0,L|244:152,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,96,245132,6,0,P|392:108|464:96,2,120,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,76,246025,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,48,246382,2,0,L|156:180,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,220,246918,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,252,247275,2,0,L|240:116,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,72,247989,6,0,P|404:84|476:72,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,164,248704,2,0,P|316:164|272:228,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,292,249418,2,0,P|164:304|80:292,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,188,250132,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,292,250489,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,192,250846,6,0,P|324:216|408:228,2,120,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,92,251918,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,92,252096,2,0,P|261:82|336:96,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,108,252632,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,252811,12,0,254061,0:0:0:0:
124,56,254954,6,0,B|140:88|140:88|120:244,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,292,255668,2,0,P|180:304|256:280,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,172,256382,2,0,P|316:164|392:180,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,140,256918,2,0,P|428:200|448:260,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,372,257632,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,288,257989,6,0,P|272:276|208:292,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,324,258525,2,0,P|188:276|168:192,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,360,259418,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,260,259775,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,144,260132,2,0,P|48:160|-8:164,2,90,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,100,260846,6,0,P|168:112|264:96,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,28,261561,2,0,P|365:81|361:140,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,260,262275,2,0,B|276:276|276:276|192:264,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,232,262811,2,0,B|114:223|114:223|54:239,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,268,263346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,372,263704,6,0,B|122:381|122:381|182:368,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,324,264239,2,0,P|264:308|360:320,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,340,264775,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,300,265132,2,0,B|520:252|488:176|488:176|512:124,2,180,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,256,266561,6,0,B|332:284|264:256,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,156,267275,2,0,B|180:172|180:172|96:152,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,260,267989,2,0,B|72:244|72:244|156:264,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,236,268704,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,356,269061,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,280,269418,6,0,P|360:220|316:152,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,136,269954,2,0,P|200:156|128:144,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,88,271204,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,88,271561,2,0,P|384:46|384:-8,2,90,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,132,272275,6,0,P|444:172|412:260,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,320,272989,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,224,273346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,324,273704,2,0,P|160:332|64:332,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,212,274418,2,0,P|118:199|178:202,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,268,275132,2,0,L|292:140,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,84,275846,2,0,L|377:203,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,268,276561,6,0,P|236:256|92:272,2,180,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,348,277989,2,0,P|384:308|376:220,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,192,278544,2,0,P|304:148|288:80,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,56,279285,2,0,P|192:96|164:240,1,180
124,256,280026,2,0,P|112:300|140:384,1,120
264,248,280951,6,0,B|324:220|392:284|452:228,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,132,281877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,24,282248,2,0,B|384:-4|316:60|239:10,2,210,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,144,283914,6,0,P|396:136|316:152,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,196,284470,2,0,P|248:204|140:200,2,120,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,96,285581,2,0,P|404:104|444:96,2,60,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,8,286322,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,72,286877,6,0,B|122:107|122:107|98:223|98:223|102:247,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,340,287808,2,0,P|238:350|295:333,2,120,0|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
375,253,288926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,289372,12,0,292950,0:0:0:0:
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Updated!
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  • ♬ Insane ♬



    00:00:847 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I suggest to delete this, and let the intro be it, because this is likely the slowest part. You will easy get 1 100 or 1 50 and start up with a bad accuracy.
  1. 00:03:168 - Ypu could make a slider there to here 00:04:239 - with a green line here 00:04:239 - with the volume of 5%
  2. 00:30:132 (4) - I sugest to change this part like:


    Also it give a better flow imo.
  3. 01:17:989 (1,2,3,4) - Please avoid this overlap.
  4. 01:27:989 (1,2) - Same as above.
  5. 01:52:275 (1,2) - ^
  6. 01:56:561 (1,2) - ^
  7. 02:08:525 (2,3) - I suggest all the overlaps above to be like this.
  8. 02:25:132 (1,2) - Same as above.
  9. 02:45:132 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This is a good part for a break, since there isn't any. Move the little break thing so the hp bar goes down later here:
    ^
    https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2391898


    On the green line. You can actually choose where you want it to start again; here 02:55:132 - or here 02:56:561 -
  10. 03:05:132 (1,3,4,5) - Please avoid this overlap.
  11. 03:34:418 (2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - Same as he other break, delete these and put a break in here. A 3min+ map without a break is just too hard.
  12. 03:50:311 (6) - New combo here.
  13. 03:54:418 (3,2) - Why not stack with (3)'s sliderhead
  14. 04:26:204 (6) - Make this point this way to ignore the hard reading for 04:26:561 (1) -
    ^
    [img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/2391922[/img]
  • ♬ Hard ♬

  1. Why not move it up to AR8?
  2. 00:31:918 (4,1) - Why not switch places, and remove NC on (1) Remember to Ctrl + G on both sliders.
  3. 00:32:275 (5) - NC:
    ^
    [img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/2391944[/img]
  4. 02:45:132 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Make a break here.
  5. 02:45:132 - And rememebr to make it start here.
  6. 03:18:525 (2,3) - Ugh, avoid the overlap by stacking (3) with (2)'s slidertail.
  7. 04:02:007 - The stream starts from the end of this slider 04:01:561 (4) - So make it same DS from that to 04:02:275 (1) -
  8. 04:23:525 (3,1) - To close to each other, it looks awkward. Maybe move 04:23:525 (3) - more to the right.
  9. 04:48:742 (2) - This slider ends too early, it should end on 04:48:942 -
  • ♬ Feedback ♬



    Good job man! Good luck on it! :D
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-Tochi wrote:

  • ♬ Insane ♬



    00:00:847 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I suggest to delete this, and let the intro be it, because this is likely the slowest part. You will easy get 1 100 or 1 50 and start up with a bad accuracy. The mapset has 2000 Audioleadin and this is an Insane diff. So no problem imo
  1. 00:03:168 - Ypu could make a slider there to here 00:04:239 - with a green line here 00:04:239 - with the volume of 5% I don't prefer it, sorry
  2. 00:30:132 (4) - I sugest to change this part like: Current flow is also not bad and I think that there is no reason I change this ;w;


    Also it give a better flow imo.
  3. 01:17:989 (1,2,3,4) - Please avoid this overlap.
  4. 01:27:989 (1,2) - Same as above.
  5. 01:52:275 (1,2) - ^
  6. 01:56:561 (1,2) - ^
  7. 02:08:525 (2,3) - I suggest all the overlaps above to be like this.
  8. 02:25:132 (1,2) - Same as above.
    //Hmm,,about overlap modding, give me the reason plz orz I use many overlaps in other maps like above, and I really like the overlap(if you saw my userpage, you know it)
  9. 02:45:132 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This is a good part for a break, since there isn't any. Move the little break thing so the hp bar goes down later here: I don't want the breaktimes in Insane diff. Sorry
    ^
    https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2391898


    On the green line. You can actually choose where you want it to start again; here 02:55:132 - or here 02:56:561 -
  10. 03:05:132 (1,3,4,5) - Please avoid this overlap. Same as above overlap modding
  11. 03:34:418 (2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - Same as he other break, delete these and put a break in here. A 3min+ map without a break is just too hard. Same reason
  12. 03:50:311 (6) - New combo here. Need not it imo, but I'll consider it
  13. 03:54:418 (3,2) - Why not stack with (3)'s sliderhead ok
  14. 04:26:204 (6) - Make this point this way to ignore the hard reading for 04:26:561 (1) - They has different combo colors and angles are also not same. So not too hard to read I think..
    ^
    [img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/2391922[/img]
  • ♬ Hard ♬

  1. Why not move it up to AR8? Cuz the bpm is not so high and the diff doesn't have patterns to read with AR8. I'll consider this if I got more modding this
  2. 00:31:918 (4,1) - Why not switch places, and remove NC on (1) Remember to Ctrl + G on both sliders. Hmm,,I prefer current pattern
  3. 00:32:275 (5) - NC:
    ^
    [img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/2391944[/img]
  4. 02:45:132 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Make a break here. No problem this part to me..
  5. 02:45:132 - And rememebr to make it start here.
  6. 03:18:525 (2,3) - Ugh, avoid the overlap by stacking (3) with (2)'s slidertail. Same reason as Insane
  7. 04:02:007 - The stream starts from the end of this slider 04:01:561 (4) - So make it same DS from that to 04:02:275 (1) - It's a bit hard in Hard diff. So I did't put it at here, sorry
  8. 04:23:525 (3,1) - To close to each other, it looks awkward. Maybe move 04:23:525 (3) - more to the right. fixed a bit
  9. 04:48:742 (2) - This slider ends too early, it should end on 04:48:942 - fixed
  • ♬ Feedback ♬



    Good job man! Good luck on it! :D
Thanks for modding!
posted
As requested.

[General]

  1. Maybe add full version in tags as there is a TV size one?
  2. I'd say I'm not sure about timing. For example: in Easy, 04:45:211 (3) - the end seems a bit unsnapped, because the music sounds earlier.
    Note: I've also mentioned this stuff in Easy and Normal, because there are unsnapped notes.
  3. Why have diffs different slider tick? Just leave 1 slider tick in all of them, song is kinda long so there's no need to add 2 slider ticks.
  4. Okay, modding Hard I've noticed something: in general you are "abusing" of mapping, and this map is almost 5 min length. Unless this was a marathon, adding more breaks would make things better for sure.
    Note: I've mentioned this just in Easy and Normal but keep in mind this in all diffs. Feel free to ask me where you should add breaks :>


[Easy]

  1. 00:04:418 (1) - This NC is unnecessary here.
  2. 00:16:561 (1) - Consider adding finish here since I think it would fit good with the music in that moment, also check it in all diffs.
  3. 00:33:346 (3,2) - !nazi - Shouldn't be a problem fixing this stack, would look even better.
  4. 01:17:632 (2,1) - Same, just move 01:18:704 (4) - a bit if it's necessary.
  5. 01:25:132 (1,1) - Consider adding a little break here, due the song length and the difficulty: adding that break would make things easier.
  6. 01:33:704 (1,2) - I don't think there's need to map the red line here 01:34:775 (2) - E / N diffs don't usually need to have all rhythm mapped. My suggestion is deleting 01:34:775 (2) - and make of 01:33:704 (1) - this: http://puu.sh/dMlEe/f71949f927.jpg Of course make sure DS is still fine.
  7. 02:37:989 (3,4) - !nazi - Try to curve 02:37:989 (3) - a bit more for a better blanket. And just in case it wasn't your intention, a blanket will make pattern look better xD You won't have to move (4), I guess.
  8. 03:05:846 (2,3) - I'd try this rhythm because it fits better for an Easy imo: http://puu.sh/dMlPu/65a04b55c7.jpg Anyways you'd have to fix some DS stuff so feel free to ignore this, but I recommend this.
  9. 03:28:704 (2,3,4) - For a similar reason as before, I suggest to try this which is even better for me: http://puu.sh/dMlTp/6c3dde3bcc.jpg
  10. 03:30:846 (1) - You totally missed a finish here, at least you could reduce volume a bit and add it, I'm sure it fits good here (if it's possible, check this in all diffs).
  11. 03:55:132 (2,1) - !veryverynazi - Move (2)'s end JUST A BIT to the left -1 grid exactly- for a perfect blanket~
  12. 04:14:954 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/dMm2e/3fc92a7997.jpg This rhythm is surely better for me.
    Note: like before, you'll have to fix some DS stuff, I guess. Consider this anyway.
  13. 04:20:132 (4,1) - I don't really like this overlap for an Easy. It's kinda annoying for beginner players indeed. If it's possible, try something different.
  14. 04:21:561 (2) - Ctrl+J for a better flow with next slider?
  15. 04:25:132 (2) - !nazi - if you wanted to make them parallel, move (2)'s end 1 grid to the right.
  16. 04:36:204 (2,1) - Up to you, but I feel these have to be stacked.
  17. 04:48:181 (2) - The end is unsnapped, please fix this.
    Note: maybe it's because timing is wrong, as I've said before. I'd ask someone experienced with timing and try to get a better one.


[Kocari's Normal]

  1. Same CS as Easy? Reduce it in Easy or try CS:3,5 here. My high suggestion is reducing CS in Easy :P
  2. HP +1 to balance it with the OD.
  3. 00:05:846 (3,4) - Swap rhythm, I mean, 00:05:846 (3) - make of this a slider, then 00:06:204 (4) - a simple note in stanza with this, that rhythm doesn't fit there.
    Note: if there are more cases like this, check it. Most of stanzas need to be clicked.
    Note2: another case would be this one: 00:22:989 (2,3), for example.
  4. 00:37:275 (3) - I don't consider red line too important so leaving this as a simple note would be fine enough.
  5. Hmm... Like in Easy, I'd add NC each one stanza. There are a lot of combos and we should try that in E / N.
  6. You have a lot of overlaps like this one 01:17:989 (3,1) - which don't look really neat. I know it's hard to fix this stuff, but try to avoid it :/
  7. 01:25:132 (1) - Same as Easy about the break. You guys have to think this song / map is pretty long and beginner players need more break.
  8. 01:35:132 (1,1) - Unrankeable:

    Ranking Criteria wrote:

    BPM 160

    Easy: 1 full measure of recovery time -> 1500 ms
    Normal: 2 beats recovery time -> 750 ms
    Hard: 1 beat recovery time -> 375 ms
    Insane or higher: Any (within musical reason)
    So, just deleting spinner would be fine, I think.
  9. 01:50:846 (1) - This finish doesn't fit here imo.
    Note: However, if you delete this spinner 01:35:132 (1) - and add a note in stanza, a finish would sound good.
  10. 01:56:382 (5) - Ctrl+H for a better flow, also you will avoid that overlap, for reasons like these I really suggest it.
    Note: You might have to fix a bit DS.
  11. 01:57:632 (2,4) - Where are finish hitsounds? I totally miss them.
  12. 02:45:132 - Make break starting here. Looks better :3
  13. 03:13:704 (4,1) - Swap NC.
  14. 03:16:561 (4) - You totally missed a NC here if you add it each two stanzas ;w;
  15. 03:30:846 - Wow, the break is pretty long even when there is important music. Add a spinner here! And make it finishing at 03:33:704 ~
  16. 03:45:132 (1) - Finish?
  17. 03:59:418 (1) - Where is the clap? Should be added in the end.
  18. 04:12:811 (1) - Finishing this in the previous red line would fit better with music imo.
    Note: If you don't agree and leave this as it is, at least reduce volume at the end, actually sounds weird.
  19. 04:16:382 (3) - Clap doesn't fit here xD Although you didn't map a white line, just remove it, it's fine.
  20. 04:23:346 (5) - You missed a clap here u.u
  21. 04:25:132 (4) - WHERE IS THE FINISH AND CLAP IN THE END
  22. 04:29:418 (1) - SAME ABOUT FINISH
  23. 04:35:132 (6) - NC due the stanza.
  24. 04:36:561 (1,2) - Please swap NC, especially because there is a new red point in second slider.
  25. 04:42:248 (3) - This is wrongly mapped for sure, uh.
    Note: Maybe because the timing. So, this stuff needs to be checked properly.
  26. 04:47:808 (2,3) - Blanket? Actually where it is makes the flow broken.
  27. 04:48:926 (3) - Same as Easy, this is unsnapped.
    Note: same as before.


[Hard]

  1. 00:12:275 (1,2) - A bit untidy if you ask me, but well, it's fine, I guess.
    Note: you might have some patterns like this one. I won't mention them since I think it's part of your style, but avoiding some of them is not a big problem.
  2. 00:47:811 (4) - I'd prefer stacking this with 00:47:989 (1) - it will be less confusing imo.
    Note: I suggest to check this in all cases.
  3. 01:07:275 (1) - Unnecessary NC.
  4. 01:57:454 (2) - You can do this better for sure xD Move it to x:92 y:300 (more or less).
  5. 03:14:954 (4,1) - Swap NC? It fits better.
  6. 03:19:061 (3) - Something like 01:57:454 (2) - in this case move it to x:336 y:244 more or less.
  7. 03:23:525 (6,1) - Swap NC.
  8. 03:29:239 (4) - NC.
  9. 03:30:846 (1) - Finish at the end.


[Insane]

  1. Same CS as Hard? For more variety I'd reduce Hard's CS (not much, something like 3'8) or add CS:4,2 here :3
  2. 00:15:668 (4,5,1) - This is kinda confusing even for an Insane imo, just adjust them properly.
  3. 00:41:025 (5) - I think you are missing an important vocal ><
  4. 01:18:525 (2,3,4) - Meh, this overlap can be avoided perfectly to improve the pattern... Try this http://puu.sh/dMot4/bf32321105.jpg
  5. 01:23:525 (7,1) - Swap NC due the little change of vocal's pitch?
  6. 01:34:775 (3) - Similar as before, try something like this http://puu.sh/dMoCd/6fc2eaed3b.jpg (always take care of spacing).
    Note: I won't mention this anymore, so check it in all cases.
  7. 01:42:275 (1,2,3,4) - What do you think about this http://puu.sh/dMoH5/7eebdba820.jpg to improve the flow and pattern in general?
  8. Well, you know what I've said about breaks...
  9. 03:11:204 (2) - Ctrl+G?
  10. 03:21:382 (2) - Move this to a bit down of 03:20:846 (1) - to form a blanket, pattern would be better.
  11. 03:27:989 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - wtf. Just wtf. Due the rhythm, this spacing is totally wrong :/ Please improve this.
    Note: Like here 03:49:775 (2,3,4,5,6).
  12. 03:30:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2) - I'd simply add a spinner here. Then add the break D:
  13. 03:47:632 (4) - Ctrl+G?
  14. 04:12:721 - Shouldn't be a problem adding a spinner here.
  15. 04:15:489 (2) - Where is the clap.


FINALLY I'M DONE. I mean good luck~

Cute BG btw <3
posted
Thanks for the mod Inyuschan - Now that I got a better understanding of a "normal difficulty" I can finally adjust hitsounds and makes rhythms a lot cleaner, I do believe in the timing but I'm not sure about it yet. As for now this is what I have until I make those precise changes necessary.

Code
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Song_starlog.mp3
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Title:starlog
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Artist:ChouCho
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Creator:Karia
Version:Kocari's Normal
Source:Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA☆ILLYA
Tags:opening Prismaillya Illyasviel von Einzbern Miyu Edelfelt Kadowaki Mai Nazuka Kaori プリズマ☆イリヤ Kocari
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500,300,265132,2,0,B|520:252|488:176|488:176|512:124,2,180,4|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,256,266561,6,0,B|332:284|264:256,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,156,267275,2,0,B|180:172|180:172|96:152,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,260,267989,2,0,B|72:244|72:244|156:264,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,236,268704,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,356,269061,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,280,269418,6,0,P|360:220|316:152,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,136,269954,2,0,P|200:156|128:144,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,88,271204,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,88,271561,2,0,P|384:46|384:-8,2,90,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,132,272275,6,0,P|444:172|412:260,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,320,272989,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,224,273346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,324,273704,2,0,P|160:332|64:332,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,212,274418,2,0,P|118:199|178:202,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,268,275132,6,0,L|292:140,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,84,275846,2,0,L|377:203,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,268,276561,2,0,P|236:256|92:272,2,180,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,348,277989,6,0,P|384:308|376:220,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,192,278544,2,0,P|304:148|288:80,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,56,279285,2,0,P|192:96|164:240,1,180
124,256,280026,2,0,P|112:300|140:384,1,120
264,248,280951,6,0,B|324:220|392:284|452:228,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,132,281877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,24,282248,2,0,B|384:-4|316:60|239:10,2,210,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,144,283914,6,0,P|396:136|316:152,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,196,284470,2,0,P|232:208|140:200,2,120,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,96,285581,2,0,P|404:104|444:96,2,60,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,8,286322,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,72,286877,6,0,B|122:107|122:107|98:223|98:223|102:247,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,340,287808,2,0,P|238:350|295:333,2,120,0|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
228,240,288942,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,289372,12,0,292950,0:0:0:0:
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Inyuschan wrote:

As requested.

[General]

  1. Maybe add full version in tags as there is a TV size one? Sure~
  2. I'd say I'm not sure about timing. For example: in Easy, 04:45:211 (3) - the end seems a bit unsnapped, because the music sounds earlier.
    Note: I've also mentioned this stuff in Easy and Normal, because there are unsnapped notes.

    Hmm,,I'm not good at timing ;w; I'll get more check for it!
  3. Why have diffs different slider tick? Just leave 1 slider tick in all of them, song is kinda long so there's no need to add 2 slider ticks.
    Keep for SV change!
  4. Okay, modding Hard I've noticed something: in general you are "abusing" of mapping, and this map is almost 5 min length. Unless this was a marathon, adding more breaks would make things better for sure.
    Note: I've mentioned this just in Easy and Normal but keep in mind this in all diffs. Feel free to ask me where you should add breaks :>

QwQ I just don't want that in higher diff orz

[Easy]

  1. 00:04:418 (1) - This NC is unnecessary here. Maybe this NC is too shrot in Easy diff, but I want it cuz the next (1) is very strong =w=
  2. 00:16:561 (1) - Consider adding finish here since I think it would fit good with the music in that moment, also check it in all diffs. A bit noisy to me orz
  3. 00:33:346 (3,2) - !nazi - Shouldn't be a problem fixing this stack, would look even better. ok
  4. 01:17:632 (2,1) - Same, just move 01:18:704 (4) - a bit if it's necessary. yeah
  5. 01:25:132 (1,1) - Consider adding a little break here, due the song length and the difficulty: adding that break would make things easier. I don't want it, sorry QwQ
  6. 01:33:704 (1,2) - I don't think there's need to map the red line here 01:34:775 (2) - E / N diffs don't usually need to have all rhythm mapped. My suggestion is deleting 01:34:775 (2) - and make of 01:33:704 (1) - this: http://puu.sh/dMlEe/f71949f927.jpg Of course make sure DS is still fine. Personally, I use few 1/2 sliders in Easy diff if it really fit with music. So I put this on here xD
  7. 02:37:989 (3,4) - !nazi - Try to curve 02:37:989 (3) - a bit more for a better blanket. And just in case it wasn't your intention, a blanket will make pattern look better xD You won't have to move (4), I guess. Hmm,, I can't make the to blanket cuz there are some flow-shapes that I really like!
  8. 03:05:846 (2,3) - I'd try this rhythm because it fits better for an Easy imo: http://puu.sh/dMlPu/65a04b55c7.jpg Anyways you'd have to fix some DS stuff so feel free to ignore this, but I recommend this. But there is no beat for slider's tail on 03:06:918 - here orz
  9. 03:28:704 (2,3,4) - For a similar reason as before, I suggest to try this which is even better for me: http://puu.sh/dMlTp/6c3dde3bcc.jpg I want the (2) slider cuz it has a part of stream in the music. It will work better with the music than a note imo
  10. 03:30:846 (1) - You totally missed a finish here, at least you could reduce volume a bit and add it, I'm sure it fits good here (if it's possible, check this in all diffs). fixed
  11. 03:55:132 (2,1) - !veryverynazi - Move (2)'s end JUST A BIT to the left -1 grid exactly- for a perfect blanket~ fixed
  12. 04:14:954 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/dMm2e/3fc92a7997.jpg This rhythm is surely better for me.
    Note: like before, you'll have to fix some DS stuff, I guess. Consider this anyway.

    I agree with that, but I chose current rhythm cuz of moving the main-rhythm from red-tick to white-tick.
  13. 04:20:132 (4,1) - I don't really like this overlap for an Easy. It's kinda annoying for beginner players indeed. If it's possible, try something different. fixed
  14. 04:21:561 (2) - Ctrl+J for a better flow with next slider? the flow is changed by above modding
  15. 04:25:132 (2) - !nazi - if you wanted to make them parallel, move (2)'s end 1 grid to the right. ^
  16. 04:36:204 (2,1) - Up to you, but I feel these have to be stacked. the BPM is changed but I want to keep the 1.1x DS, so can't change this ;w; sorry
  17. 04:48:181 (2) - The end is unsnapped, please fix this.
    Note: maybe it's because timing is wrong, as I've said before. I'd ask someone experienced with timing and try to get a better one.

I can't snap this slider cuz of the BPM issue as you said. I'll get another timing check ASAP

[Hard]

  1. 00:12:275 (1,2) - A bit untidy if you ask me, but well, it's fine, I guess.
    Note: you might have some patterns like this one. I won't mention them since I think it's part of your style, but avoiding some of them is not a big problem. My diff has some of patterns like this xP
  2. 00:47:811 (4) - I'd prefer stacking this with 00:47:989 (1) - it will be less confusing imo.
    Note: I suggest to check this in all cases.

    I stacked the note following the beats, but I agree with you about that problem! I'll consider this later ~w~
  3. 01:07:275 (1) - Unnecessary NC. I want to emphasize this small part with the KIAI fountain and NC!
  4. 01:57:454 (2) - You can do this better for sure xD Move it to x:92 y:300 (more or less). fixed
  5. 03:14:954 (4,1) - Swap NC? It fits better. Hmm,,current NC is better with music imo
  6. 03:19:061 (3) - Something like 01:57:454 (2) - in this case move it to x:336 y:244 more or less. About this, no problem with flow and read imo (and I like this c: )
  7. 03:23:525 (6,1) - Swap NC. fixed
  8. 03:29:239 (4) - NC. fixed
  9. 03:30:846 (1) - Finish at the end. yeah


[Insane]

  1. Same CS as Hard? For more variety I'd reduce Hard's CS (not much, something like 3'8) or add CS:4,2 here :3 I don't want that DS in Insane diff ww
  2. 00:15:668 (4,5,1) - This is kinda confusing even for an Insane imo, just adjust them properly. No problem here imo cuz every players are passed clearly this!
  3. 00:41:025 (5) - I think you are missing an important vocal >< I missed that but this part follows the almost music not the vocal ><
  4. 01:18:525 (2,3,4) - Meh, this overlap can be avoided perfectly to improve the pattern... Try this http://puu.sh/dMot4/bf32321105.jpg I love the notes under the slider's path orz
  5. 01:23:525 (7,1) - Swap NC due the little change of vocal's pitch? This NC is for (1,2,3,1)'s anti-jumps :D
  6. 01:34:775 (3) - Similar as before, try something like this http://puu.sh/dMoCd/6fc2eaed3b.jpg (always take care of spacing).
    Note: I won't mention this anymore, so check it in all cases. Same reason
  7. 01:42:275 (1,2,3,4) - What do you think about this http://puu.sh/dMoH5/7eebdba820.jpg to improve the flow and pattern in general? fixed it another way
  8. Well, you know what I've said about breaks... I don't like that ;w;
  9. 03:11:204 (2) - Ctrl+G? This is for matching with (3,4,5) :)
  10. 03:21:382 (2) - Move this to a bit down of 03:20:846 (1) - to form a blanket, pattern would be better. I prefer current overlap
  11. 03:27:989 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - wtf. Just wtf. Due the rhythm, this spacing is totally wrong :/ Please improve this.
    Note: Like here 03:49:775 (2,3,4,5,6).
    What happend here?! fixed xD
  12. 03:30:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2) - I'd simply add a spinner here. Then add the break D: Hmm..I'm consider now about the spinner, but I don't put the breaktime here ;w;
  13. 03:47:632 (4) - Ctrl+G? I prefer current flow
  14. 04:12:721 - Shouldn't be a problem adding a spinner here. fixed
  15. 04:15:489 (2) - Where is the clap. fixed


FINALLY I'M DONE. I mean good luck~

Cute BG btw <3 >w<
Thanks for modding!
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delete all red lines in the end and add these
278004,370.37037037037,4,2,2,45,1,0
279298,370.37037037037,4,2,2,45,1,0
280943,375,4,2,1,30,1,0
282263,370.37037037037,4,2,1,30,1,0
283919,370.37037037037,4,2,1,30,1,0
285215,370.37037037037,4,2,1,30,1,0
286877,375,4,2,1,50,1,0
288186,375,4,2,1,50,1,0
289354,400,4,2,1,50,1,0
It sounds a bit better (at least for me), but i still suggesting you to try get a better timing check because i'm exhausted and not that good with timing
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Updated and maybe need more work..
(Thanks a lot EvilElvis xD)
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full version O_o
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