Yeah I get it, I'm new here.

Yeah I know this is gonna be really unhelpful.

The flow just feels... interrupted at parts.

Where your hitting several notes then have to move the cursor OVER the entire slider then slide back down through it, interrupts the flow to me. Maybe its just me.

Hi There~ From my modding Queue~
Well it's the theme song from Frozen >.< ,I guess that many people are waiting for a ranked map~

[General]
First raise the volume of your audio up,it feels a bit low,maybe raise 50% feels good.
Due to the ranking system now,you can't use diff names like "Chilly" "Freezing" "Frozen",though I may prefer this. You should use Easy,Normal,Hard instead. I think both Freezing and Frozen are Hard ,so you can choose to make Freezing easier,or make your Frozen harder.The whole mapset seems a bit easy.
Do your map with Grid Level 4.
First kiai time from:02:01:006 - 02:25:531
Second kiai time from:03:02:320 - 03:29:911
Generally your map follows the vocal line too much,try to follow the instrumental line.

After I listen to the music again and again with 25% speed,I think it's out of my ability to test the right timing for you,since I think every sentence has it's own speed,OMG. So you can reserve your 137 BPM for now to just focus on the vocal line. Well,if it is done you may find there will be a lot of red lines.
You should consult some timing kings to time this map.
After your map is timed,I think you'd better have your map remapped and add the instrumental line into it.

For this reason,I'll not say the rhythm problems in your map,only point out some pattern problems.You can improve your map if the flows are well used.

[Chilly]
Remember the Easy/Normal diff should be mapped with the Distance Snap on,check your AIMod.
00:35:604 (1,2) - Doesn't look so good , change them.
00:38:232 (2) - This slider should be redrawn.
00:49:619 (1,2) - Doesn't look so good , move them apart~
00:57:064 (3) - Draw a slider like a snake may look better.
00:59:035 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - The notes stacked. move them apart.
01:34:290 (1) - This note is not at its place,make it a proper blanket.
02:12:174 (3) - ^
02:41:079 (3) - Rotate it well with 180°
02:49:838 (1,2,3) - make it a regular triangle
02:56:845 (1,2) - make them on a line
02:57:502 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Remember Easy/Normal isn't expecting so many continuous circles.You should change some of them to sliders.
03:05:166 (1,3) - Rotate it well with 180°
03:21:152 (2,3,4) - make it a regular triangle

[Freezing]
snap all your notes. Three notes are not snapped
00:52:684 (1) -
00:53:122 (2) -
00:53:560 (3) -


00:15:458 (4) - Move it a bit left to make it looks good.
00:15:896 (5) - I don't think a slider with such a large angle looks good.
00:28:050 (2) - Move it here 00:28:159. Though your map may be timed later.
00:48:086 (7,8,9) - Don't look so good,move them apart such like a triangle.
00:52:684 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 00:55:750 (1,2,3,4) - These two patterns should be exchanged.Since the song is raising up gradually.
00:59:473 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - As you see,it's not a regular hexagon,have it redrawn (You should draw under the Grid level 4).01:17:210 (3,4,5) - This pattern is not goodlooking.
01:20:276 (1,2,3) - The distance seems too far and will mislead the players.
02:22:028 (3,4,5) - Have them redrawn

[Frozen]
I think more notes will make it feels good,but since the vocal line is not exactly on the instrumental line,I know you also feels struggling to add those notes.
00:38:889 (4) - you can slow this slider down to make the map more interesting.open your timing setup and you'll find it here You can also use this on some long sliders after this.
00:47:101 (1,2,3) - make 3 parallel to the line by 1 and 2. 00:57:940 (4,5,6) - you can use a stream here.
I think the Frozen diff looks better than Chilly and Freezing.

Good Luck~

examination wrote:

Hi There~ From my modding Queue~
Well it's the theme song from Frozen >.< ,I guess that many people are waiting for a ranked map~

[General]
First raise the volume of your audio up,it feels a bit low,maybe raise 50% feels good.
Due to the ranking system now,you can't use diff names like "Chilly" "Freezing" "Frozen",though I may prefer this. You should use Easy,Normal,Hard instead. I think both Freezing and Frozen are Hard ,so you can choose to make Freezing easier,or make your Frozen harder.The whole mapset seems a bit easy.
Do your map with Grid Level 4.
First kiai time from:02:01:006 - 02:25:531
Second kiai time from:03:02:320 - 03:29:911
Generally your map follows the vocal line too much,try to follow the instrumental line.

After I listen to the music again and again with 25% speed,I think it's out of my ability to test the right timing for you,since I think every sentence has it's own speed,OMG. So you can reserve your 137 BPM for now to just focus on the vocal line. Well,if it is done you may find there will be a lot of red lines.
You should consult some timing kings to time this map.
After your map is timed,I think you'd better have your map remapped and add the instrumental line into it.

For this reason,I'll not say the rhythm problems in your map,only point out some pattern problems.You can improve your map if the flows are well used.

[Chilly]
Remember the Easy/Normal diff should be mapped with the Distance Snap on,check your AIMod.
00:35:604 (1,2) - Doesn't look so good , change them.
00:38:232 (2) - This slider should be redrawn.
00:49:619 (1,2) - Doesn't look so good , move them apart~
00:57:064 (3) - Draw a slider like a snake may look better.
00:59:035 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - The notes stacked.

SPOILER

move them apart.
01:34:290 (1) - This note is not at its place,make it a proper blanket.
02:12:174 (3) - ^
02:41:079 (3) - Rotate it well with 180°
02:49:838 (1,2,3) - make it a regular triangle
02:56:845 (1,2) - make them on a line
02:57:502 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Remember Easy/Normal isn't expecting so many continuous circles.You should change some of them to sliders.
03:05:166 (1,3) - Rotate it well with 180°
03:21:152 (2,3,4) - make it a regular triangle

[Freezing]
snap all your notes. Three notes are not snapped
00:52:684 (1) -
00:53:122 (2) -
00:53:560 (3) -


00:15:458 (4) - Move it a bit left to make it looks good.
00:15:896 (5) - I don't think a slider with such a large angle looks good.
00:28:050 (2) - Move it here 00:28:159. Though your map may be timed later.
00:48:086 (7,8,9) - Don't look so good,move them apart such like a triangle.
00:52:684 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 00:55:750 (1,2,3,4) - These two patterns should be exchanged.Since the song is raising up gradually.
00:59:473 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - As you see,it's not a regular hexagon,have it redrawn (You should draw under the Grid level 4).

SPOILER

01:17:210 (3,4,5) - This pattern is not goodlooking.
01:20:276 (1,2,3) - The distance seems too far and will mislead the players.
02:22:028 (3,4,5) - Have them redrawn

[Frozen]
I think more notes will make it feels good,but since the vocal line is not exactly on the instrumental line,I know you also feels struggling to add those notes.
00:38:889 (4) - you can slow this slider down to make the map more interesting.open your timing setup and you'll find it here

SPOILER

You can also use this on some long sliders after this.
00:47:101 (1,2,3) - make 3 parallel to the line by 1 and 2.

SPOILER

00:57:940 (4,5,6) - you can use a stream here.
I think the Frozen diff looks better than Chilly and Freezing.

Good Luck~

Thanks a lot!
I've gone through all the changes you mentioned and polished up a couple more areas. Now I'm trying to cut down on the vocal line and follow the instrument line more.

One idea that is slightly unrelated is to change the video resolution, because currently it's stretched vertically with black bars on the side, which doesn't make too much sense in my opinion. Just a thought

insane:
01:00:568 - there shoudl be a finish hitsound here
01:02:320 - ^
01:05:823 - ^
01:07:575 - ^
01:09:327 - ^
01:11:079 (1) -^ (now i know how this thing works )
01:12:831 (3) - ^

quick little mod for now. will go through the map a bit later to see if there is anything else. modding is kinda fun ^^

I love this song and I love the beatmap as much, would love to see this in ranked.

it is brilliant, much better than other versions

rookie as i am, is there anyway to help it ranked?

I WANT THIS RANLKED!!!!


Please, people, make this map gets ranked D

Mod Time~~~~

Let It Go~~~~~

General

From the AI Mod you're Beatmap has no Problems

The Genre is SoundTrack

Normal

Replace Something on 00:49:619 to 00:50:714 it is not suitable :/

01:40:422 This Slider must be straight to Slider on 01:38:670


01:48:524 The Slider has Full Finish why not do it only in the end ?

Click the end of the slider 2x then put Finish

01:52:028 ^ The Same

02:32:977 Straight this slider to the slider on 02:34:947


03:01:882 Put a Circle There and a Finish on the center where a Hit Circle(03:03:634) can be found

03:32:539 :

SkyBearer245 wrote:

Click the end of the slider 2x then put Finish

Hard

01:07:137(5,6,7) & 01:08:889(5,6,7) turn them into Claps not Whistles OR turn them into Whistle-Clap-Whistle or Clap-Whistle-Clap

03:00:568(1,2,3,4,5,1,2) even though this is Hard there still to be mild jumps


03:32:320 :

SkyBearer245 wrote:

Click the end of the slider 2x then put Finish

Insane

JUMPS!!!~~~

00:52:685(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) Turns into this~~


03:32:320 :

SkyBearer245 wrote:

Click the end of the slider 2x then put Finish

Hi, from my queue. My english = 0

[Normal]

01:20:276 (1) - move x: 203 y: 190?
01:25:531 (3,4) - remove circles, and put slider here: start: 01:25:531 - end: 01:26:188 - ? timeline:http://puu.sh/8pkcB.jpg
----------
01:53:780 (3) - change slider end here: 01:54:217, and move 01:54:436 (4) - slider here: 01:54:655 - , and chage slider end here: 01:55:093
01:56:188 (1) - slider, and 01:55:531 (5) - move slider here: 01:55:312 - and change slider end here: 01:55:750 and add once repeat.Put circle here: 01:56:626 - ?

^----- timeline: http://puu.sh/8pkqp.jpg
----------

02:01:882 (3,1) - distance error. (Too close)

02:34:947 (2) - move: x: 303 y: 247 ?

02:39:984 (1) - move x: 29 y: 68 ?

[hard]

02:54:217 (3) - change slider end here: 02:54:655
02:54:984 (4) - move slider here: 02:55:093 and move 02:55:860 (5) - circle here: 02:55:969 ?

[Insane]

00:57:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Remove streams. It's overmapped! Idea: Put 1/2 slider here: 00:57:940 - and put circles here: 00:58:378 - 00:58:597 - 00:58:816 - ?
01:25:750 (5,6,7) - remove, and put 1/2 slider here: 01:25:860 - and add once repeat.

Good luck!

I will do hitsound mod after you finished two mods above

may I ask if I can do Easy diff?

Kazuya-sama wrote:

[Insane]

00:57:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Remove streams. It's overmapped! Idea: Put 1/2 slider here: 00:57:940 - and put circles here: 00:58:378 - 00:58:597 -

Good luck!

nuuuuu it is ok its an Insane Diff but if you're target is the Music yep its an overmapped

SkyBearer245 wrote:

Mod Time~~~~

Let It Go~~~~~

General

From the AI Mod you're Beatmap has no Problems

The Genre is SoundTrack

Normal

Replace Something on 00:49:619 to 00:50:714 it is not suitable :/

01:40:422 This Slider must be straight to Slider on 01:38:670

Just Like This (Had To Put AR0 to be more visible)

01:48:524 The Slider has Full Finish why not do it only in the end ?

Click the end of the slider 2x then put Finish

01:52:028 ^ The Same

02:32:977 Straight this slider to the slider on 02:34:947

Just Like This (Had To Put AR0 to be more visible)

03:01:882 Put a Circle There and a Finish on the center where a Hit Circle(03:03:634) can be found

03:32:539 :

SkyBearer245 wrote:

Click the end of the slider 2x then put Finish

Hard

01:07:137(5,6,7) & 01:08:889(5,6,7) turn them into Claps not Whistles OR turn them into Whistle-Clap-Whistle or Clap-Whistle-Clap

03:00:568(1,2,3,4,5,1,2) even though this is Hard there still to be mild jumps

Here Check This

03:32:320 :

SkyBearer245 wrote:

Click the end of the slider 2x then put Finish

Insane

JUMPS!!!~~~

00:52:685(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) Turns into this~~

lalalala(its only AR5)

Sorry no Image Available Download this xD

03:32:320 :

SkyBearer245 wrote:

Click the end of the slider 2x then put Finish

All done! Thanks!(Didn't know hitsounds can be placed on just the end of the slider )

Kazuya-sama wrote:

Hi, from my queue. My english = 0

[Normal]

01:20:276 (1) - move x: 203 y: 190?
01:25:531 (3,4) - remove circles, and put slider here: start: 01:25:531 - end: 01:26:188 - ? timeline:http://puu.sh/8pkcB.jpg
----------
01:53:780 (3) - change slider end here: 01:54:217, and move 01:54:436 (4) - slider here: 01:54:655 - , and chage slider end here: 01:55:093
01:56:188 (1) - slider, and 01:55:531 (5) - move slider here: 01:55:312 - and change slider end here: 01:55:750 and add once repeat.Put circle here: 01:56:626 - ?

^----- timeline: http://puu.sh/8pkqp.jpg
----------

02:01:882 (3,1) - distance error. (Too close)

02:34:947 (2) - move: x: 303 y: 247 ?

02:39:984 (1) - move x: 29 y: 68 ?

[hard]

02:54:217 (3) - change slider end here: 02:54:655
02:54:984 (4) - move slider here: 02:55:093 and move 02:55:860 (5) - circle here: 02:55:969 ?

[Insane]

00:57:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Remove streams. It's overmapped! Idea: Put 1/2 slider here: 00:57:940 - and put circles here: 00:58:378 - 00:58:597 - 00:58:816 - ?
01:25:750 (5,6,7) - remove, and put 1/2 slider here: 01:25:860 - and add once repeat.

Good luck!

All updated! Thanks!

vahn10 wrote:

I will do hitsound mod after you finished two mods above

may I ask if I can do Easy diff?

Err sorry, I'm not accepting GD since this is my first map
but I would appreciate the hitsound mod

You should add these two timing points.


This would fix an out of place triplet and give a cool slow down effect! I didn't check if a mod already fixed this, so ignore me if this is redundant.

Here's my mod !!

Hoooray for Elsa!! nice song too XD



Hard

i didn't mod Insane coz i think its just fine, still it got some prob with rhytm, u can use my advice tho.

well, thats all my mod !! hope this map get ranked soon. coz its really cool !!

Fiery_Bulblax wrote:

You should add these two timing points.


This would fix an out of place triplet and give a cool slow down effect! I didn't check if a mod already fixed this, so ignore me if this is redundant.

Haha thanks for that, I think I intended to put it there but forgot about it

WinglessAsura wrote:

Here's my mod !!

Hoooray for Elsa!! nice song too XD

1. 00:36:699 ~ 00:38:670 umm.. this part isn't correctly following the rhytm, try to fix here.
2. 01:26:626 umm instead of break why don't you fill with hitsound here? there's a background music after all.
3. 01:48:743 dont use finish here.
4. at some point, you don't really follow the song rhytm , for example 02:19:400 3,4 these 2 slider seems out of rhytm.

Hard

1. just some tips at mapping, if you having trouble coz music beats too fast or the sound is too low, try using playback rate. it makes easier

i didn't mod Insane coz i think its just fine, still it got some prob with rhytm, u can use my advice tho.

well, thats all my mod !! hope this map get ranked soon. coz its really cool !!

I've tried to move some things around but I tend to automatically fall back to hitting the beat. Hate having to restrict myself how much I can put on normal

Sorry for late but here it is

For all the diffs

01:59:254 -


I recommend you to follow this hitsound pattern above (those blue x must have whistle hitsound)

02:01:006 - 02:22:904 & 03:02:320 - 03:30:349



parts you need too add both whistle and clap at the same time (Marked with red x above)

just suggesting the hitsound patterns

Since I assume you haven't read the above post, I won't mod anything about hitsound placement (though they do need some work on all difficulties)

[Whole Mapset]
You can remove these tags from all difficulties, they are automatically included as part of the Artist/Title/Source field:

frozen let it go idina menzel

You should map 01:26:626 to 01:27:721
Also just my opinion, but you can place a single note at 03:33:853

Why is a normal sampleset hitsound replaced with an overriden "clap"? It happens a few times throughout the map. You can do the same using this:

[Normal]
01:15:458 (3) - The slider head is a bit off-screen, you should fix this
01:26:626 to 01:27:721 - How about something like this?
01:43:269 (5) - Remove?
01:51:152 (4) - Also going a bit off-screen, but not as bad as 01:15:458 (3)
02:15:896 (2) - The actual word is on 02:15:787 , but it's on a blue tick
02:59:692 (2) - Same as 01:51:152 (4) above

[Hard]
00:49:619 (1) - Change it to this:
00:51:371 (4) - ^
01:47:210 (1,2,3) - (1) is overlapping very slightly with (2), and a bit more obviously with (3). I don't think there's a good way to resolve both overlaps at the same time, so I would suggest something like this:
02:58:816 (6) - New Combo here?
03:02:101 (2) - The downbeat after it isn't stressed, try this:
03:07:356 (4) - You should make it curve nicely around (3) before it:

[Insane]

Really, I don't find anything wrong myself, it's a fun map

[Remarks]
Really nice mapping, have a star!
You should push to get this ranked. Good luck!

vahn10 wrote:

Sorry for late but here it is

For all the diffs

01:59:254 -


I recommend you to follow this hitsound pattern above (those blue x must have whistle hitsound)

02:01:006 - 02:22:904 & 03:02:320 - 03:30:349



parts you need too add both whistle and clap at the same time (Marked with red x above)

just suggesting the hitsound patterns

Thanks for the hitsound mod, I modified it accordingly to what I understood (hopefully what you meant).

Your Good Self wrote:

Since I assume you haven't read the above post, I won't mod anything about hitsound placement (though they do need some work on all difficulties)

[Whole Mapset]
You can remove these tags from all difficulties, they are automatically included as part of the Artist/Title/Source field:

frozen let it go idina menzel

You should map 01:26:626 to 01:27:721
Also just my opinion, but you can place a single note at 03:33:853

Why is a normal sampleset hitsound replaced with an overriden "clap"? It happens a few times throughout the map. You can do the same using this:

SPOILER

[Normal]
01:15:458 (3) - The slider head is a bit off-screen, you should fix this
01:26:626 to 01:27:721 - How about something like this?

SPOILER

(4) is a copypasted rotated version of (3)

01:43:269 (5) - Remove?
01:51:152 (4) - Also going a bit off-screen, but not as bad as 01:15:458 (3)
02:15:896 (2) - The actual word is on 02:15:787 , but it's on a blue tick
02:59:692 (2) - Same as 01:51:152 (4) above

[Hard]
00:49:619 (1) - Change it to this:

SPOILER

00:51:371 (4) - ^
01:47:210 (1,2,3) - (1) is overlapping very slightly with (2), and a bit more obviously with (3). I don't think there's a good way to resolve both overlaps at the same time, so I would suggest something like this:

SPOILER

02:58:816 (6) - New Combo here?
03:02:101 (2) - The downbeat after it isn't stressed, try this:

SPOILER

03:07:356 (4) - You should make it curve nicely around (3) before it:

SPOILER

Before

After

[Insane]

Really, I don't find anything wrong myself, it's a fun map

[Remarks]
Really nice mapping, have a star!
You should push to get this ranked. Good luck!

Thanks for the mod, got most of the things fix but I didn't quite understand this part

furywolf wrote:

Thanks for the mod, got most of the things fix but I didn't quite understand this part

SPOILER

Why is a normal sampleset hitsound replaced with an overriden "clap"? It happens a few times throughout the map. You can do the same using this:

I'm really bad at explaining stuff, but here goes:

Basically at points where you use the 'clap' hitsound, the sound is replaced/overridden by "soft-hitclap2" in the song folder. This is essentially the same sound as the normal sampleset normal hitsound (without additions), which is available by default (no need to add it).
^ tl;dr: the normal sampleset normal hitsound (no clap/whistle/finish) = the current soft sampleset 'clap' hitsound

As such, you could just replace those "soft-hitclap2" hitsound additions with the normal sampleset normal hitsound, so you don't have to include "soft-hitclap2" in the song folder any more.

1. Select a note using 'clap'
2. Remove the clap
3. Make that particular note use the normal sampleset (change the option in the menu like in the image)
4. Repeat for the other notes

Hope that can explain it better

P.S. Your video has audio in it which is unrankable, you have to cut it out.

Your Good Self wrote:

the normal sampleset normal hitsound (no clap/whistle/finish) = the current soft sampleset 'clap' hitsound

The soft sampleset 'clap' is different to the normal sampleset 'clap' for me so I left it as it is for now

Your Good Self wrote:

P.S. Your video has audio in it which is unrankable, you have to cut it out.

Video now has no sound, thanks for picking up on that

furywolf wrote:

The soft sampleset 'clap' is different to the normal sampleset 'clap' for me so I left it as it is for now

No, it's not the normal sampleset clap, it's the normal sampleset hitsound with no additions.

Actually I don't really think anyone's gonna care about this at all anyway, so you can probably just leave it as it is.

hi! random small mod.

[Normal]
01:31:663 (2,3) - distance
00:59:692 (1) - instruments get pretty soft here, i dont like the drums in the hitsounds. also, consider lowering the volume of hitsounds for this section.
02:07:137 (3,1) - maybe confusing, try putting the previous combo farther, like http://puu.sh/8KsoU.jpg

[Hard]
00:35:221 (1,4) - very tough notes to time. i know youre trying to keep them with the piano, but snapping them plays better.
01:31:225 (1,2) - consider unstacking these because the last two stacks there were 1/1, and this one is 1/2, might be confusing

[Insane]
00:35:221 (1,4) - same thing as hard

good luck

So much potential with this mapset! This is pretty good for a first (proper) attempt! (I love Frozen!)

I'm curious to see how it will progress with mods! I'll be back every now and then to check up.

hey there~
thanks for using my Q

these mod are from my personal opinion, so please understand

normal


hard

insane

thats all my mod hope it helps^^

BONUS

Thank you for the mods, fixed almost everything (I think). Had another attempt at redoing the hitsounds

Hello~
thanks for you use our Q~
and these mod from my personal.
So I hope it can help you and plz understand :3

[Notion]
This color means it is a suggestion. I prefer to do this, but you can either choose to fix or not.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
when I open the song.My first impression was that the singer spent much singer skill
So.Edit this song is so difficult,because the mapper can't all follow the Vocal or Rhythm
and just I think all diff you can add a sipnner on 03:33:853 end on 03:39:108 and use timing point change volume
Good Lucky to you~





Good luck to you
nice map~

Thank you fixed most of it

Good beatmap, good song!

Anyways:

Normal:
Decent...

01:29:473 (1) - Why is this here? This is unnecessary, and instead there should be a short break here.
02:01:444 (2) - OK, so this is an offbeat sound. Why isn't there a sound like this on the 4th beat? (Perhaps at the end of a slider?)
02:03:196 (2) - See above
02:04:290 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - The second combo would be better as a reflection or rotation of the first one.
02:58:816 (1,2,3) - This is just a matter of preference, but have you considered a slider here?
03:16:334 (1) - This is a big moment in the song. Perhaps a finish here?
03:26:407 (3) - Take out the finish at the end, it's awkward.
03:33:853 (1) - Why is this spinner so long? It lasts much longer than the end of the song, and should be shortened.

Hard:

Less straight sliders in the beginning please!

01:57:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Nowhere else in this difficulty is there a jump this big (especially 5,6,7). Can you make it a bit smaller?
02:56:845 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Could you increase the jump size gradually to the last combo? It's very sudden.
03:33:853 (1) - See the normal comment at this time.

Insane:

Same as hard, and also more 1/4 and 1/1 spacing instead of just 1/2!

01:13:707 (1) - I expect a sound here. Could you put a finish?
03:20:933 (1) - What happened here? Move the sound to the end of the previous slider.
03:33:853 (1) - See normal comment


BTW, can I map an extra difficulty? I would appreciate it very much!

Thanks for the mod , fixed half of it, the other half conflicted with previous mods
Sorry but I'm not accepting guest difficulties because this is my first map

hmm... can I steal take the mp3?

YES!~

PLEASE TAKE MA STAR ~~

SkyBearer245 wrote:

YES!~

PLEASE TAKE MA STAR ~~

Thanks for the star

Correct offset: 14171

Maybe I'll mod this ;_; I arleady watched movie it was amazing omgomg ;_;

Can I make 2nd Insane? ;_; I'm doing it now and I'm on ~50% works :c Pls XD

General

Doesn't seem to be 1 offset and bpm throughout the song, refer to Hard for what I mean

Hard

00:15:677 (5) - remove whistle
00:15:896 (1) - whistle on the start of slider
00:19:181 (4,5) - ^ same suggestion
00:23:342 (2,3) - whistle on 00:23:342 (2) instead of 00:23:780 (3)
00:31:444 (1,2,3) - somehow this rhythm lands more accurately on the vocals:
00:38:232 (3) - slider ends at 00:38:670
00:46:115 - 00:52:685 - this part sounds like the objects come late, it might be a different offset or bpm here, got to recheck this part out
01:20:714 (3,4) - could blanket better
02:01:006 (4) - finish on start of slider
02:08:013 (4) - ^
02:15:020 (1) - ^
02:16:334 (3) - ^
02:18:524 (1) - ^
02:19:838 (3) - ^
02:22:028 (3) - ^
02:47:648 (3,4) - could blanket
03:21:152 (5) - finish on start of slider

Insane

00:31:444 (1,2,3) - same thing as Hard
00:36:754 (3) - should be at 00:36:699
01:17:210 (4) - finish like 01:13:707 (1)
01:52:028 (4) - whistle like 01:48:524 (4)
02:01:006 (1) - finish on start of slider
02:08:013 (4) - ^
02:14:911 (8) - remove finish
02:15:020 (1) - finish on start of slider
02:16:334 (5) - ^
02:18:524 (6) - ^
02:22:028 (3) - ^
02:55:531 (4,5) - they sound 1/2 a beat too early, start them both from 02:55:750 onwards
03:02:320 (4) - finish on start of slider
03:09:327 (3) - ^
03:16:334 (1) - ^
03:21:152 (2) - ^
03:25:093 (3) - ^
03:26:407 (6) - ^
03:31:882 (6,7) - pace them closer together, they seem to b suited to be together instead of a jump



Good luck on this

@Papcio

furywolf wrote:

Sorry but I'm not accepting guest difficulties because this is my first map

Thanks for the mod (especially all the hitsound helps)

Changed all except

00:31:444 (1,2,3) - somehow this rhythm lands more accurately on the vocals:

SPOILER

as the timing felt very wierd so I prefer to just follow the flow instead


@Papcio

furywolf wrote:

Sorry but I'm not accepting guest difficulties because this is my first map

Sorry Papico

lol It's really nice to see that you are still working on this map~

All diffs seem really better than the first ver~~

Good luck lol and carry on with it~~

Forrm my Queues

Red : Must Fix. ( Unranked )
Blue : Recommendation.
Black : My personal opinion.

[General]

1. cheak out widescreen suport.
2. change offset >> 14.101 more natural Rhythm.
3. You must cheak DS. (Normal and Hard. )
4. It is good to re-work the hit sound. Your map is going to follow the beat more vocal voices. Put a little more hit sound.

[Normal]

1. 00:24:655 (2,3) - The length of the slider (2) to increase the circle and remove circle.
2. 00:36:699 (2,3,4) - chnage like this. http://puu.sh/9hi5X/7ab4437525.jpg
3. 00:42:174 (1) - With the distance is too far from the spinner.
4. 00:47:429 (3) - add circle.
5. 00:59:692 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Rhythm and vocal voices do not go along. Does not look good at all.
   
   sorry.stop mod this diff. Singer's voice and the object does not go at all.
   Relying too beat, and does not go all voice and vocal.
   I'm really recommendation re-work this diff...

[Hard]

• 
  The difficulty is the same. Does not go with the song at all.
  like this part.
  00:18:524 (1,2,3,4,5) -
  00:31:444 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) -
  00:36:754 (3) -
  00:45:568 (3,4) - you must remvoe this circle. No rhythm and no vocal.
  00:56:188 (2) - head Hit sound.
  00:57:064 (4) - ^
  00:59:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
  01:06:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
  03:32:320 (8,1) - btw space is not good.
  
  You are the voice of the singer should be reworked to fit.
  Matchulsu vocal enough in the part of the rhythm of the beat that you are making a new. I think that this is not good.

[Insane]

1. 00:45:568 (5,6) - remove.
2. 00:50:933 (4) - ^
3. 00:52:028 (7,8) - change a slider.
4. 00:55:750 (4,1,2) - There is no need to change I do not like personally
5. 01:07:356 (6) - cheak space. a little matter.
6. 01:29:692 - add circle.
7. 01:30:130 - ^
8. 01:31:663 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - re- work space. following is not natural.
9. 01:57:502 (4,5,6,1,2) - change circle to jump.
10. 02:12:612 (6,7,8,1,2) - please. following vocal's voice....
    
    Become too focused on the beat.

There are more issues than I gave. I hope a little more carefully, hoping to work on.

Thanks for the mod , I changed some of it but I find the beat is better to follow than the vocals so I left out most of the vocal changes

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO DON'T LET THIS GRAVE

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My mod will help you improve the visual appearance of your map while at the same time improving gameplay.

If you like something, please change it! If you don't, you don't have to change it, but please explain why.

[General]

1. You must disable Widescreen Support because your mapset does not feature a storyboard.
2. You should disable letterbox during breaks because the mapset features a video. Regarding the subject of the video:
3. The current video quality is extremely low for its file size. I strongly recommend that you use better compression to increase the video quality.
4. You should strongly consider removing the kiai at 00:59:692 - (or changing it to a burst kiai) as this is a calm part of the song. A calm part of the song should not feature flashing notes from kiai. In situations like this, I would use the burst kiai to follow the first chorus, but the part is very calm from what I usually map. This is up to you.
5. You must re-snap your preview point to 02:00:349 - in all difficulties.
6. Your background is 1228x767, a 16:10 aspect ratio. For a rankable size, please consider A: Using a higher resolution image and downscale and/or crop it to 1366x768 or B: Get a new image that is 16:9. As your image features a watermark in both the bottom left and right corner, I suggest finding a new image.

[Normal]

1. General: The general difficulty of the map is great, but there are lots of questionable visual details that can look much better.
2. 00:42:612 (2) - I think this looks better when it is slightly curved towards slider 3.
3. 00:57:940 (4,5) - Ctrl+H this because you have already used the right side of the grid here -> 00:55:750 (1,2) -. It plays nicer to go in constant motion. Will also help prevent hit lighting from overlapping. You may need to Ctrl+H some of your next patterns as well.
4. 01:00:568 (3,3) - Don't overlap here. From doing some tests, it would play much nicer if 01:02:320 (3) - was the rotation of 01:00:568 (3) -. See my image below. You may need to move around a few of your next circles to do so, but well worth it.
   
   
   ~
5. 01:13:707 (1,2,3,4) - You should try a different pattern here as it is a bit repetitive to 01:09:765 (1,2,3) -.
6. 01:20:276 (1) - Move this to x:203 y:190 to stack properly with 01:18:962 (4) -.
7. 01:21:590 (2,3,4) - Please try re-pattern and curve these sliders, current looks rather bad and is somewhat hard to play. Curves will make it much more interesting!~
8. 01:27:721 (6,1,1) - You cannot do this because this part is harder than the same part on Hard/Insane. Map this part. Add more objects so the user does not have to wait for an overlaying object and potentially click early.
9. 01:31:663 (2,3,4) - Try this instead:
   
   
   ~
10. 01:36:918 (5,2) - Don't overlap here, it looks bad when played and is somewhat confusing. You need to move sliders 3 and 5 ( 01:35:166 (3,5) - ) further away from the Y-axis to keep symmetry.
11. 01:38:232 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This whole part you are staying in the center of the grid. I don't know if this was intentional, but it is redundant. Try using a different pattern instead.
12. 01:46:772 (3) - Curve this slider for consistency with your next 01:53:780 (3) -.
13. 01:50:276 (3,6) - Slider 3 overlaps with slider 6 here. Either A: Slightly move objects so you can stack it or B: Change the pattern completely.
14. 01:56:626 (2,3,1,2,3) - To avoid overlap here and maintain flow and pattern, I did several changes. Please try this code under [HitObjects]:
    

    280,316,116626,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    364,272,117064,2,0,P|383:216|363:160,1,120
    267,160,117940,6,8,P|247:104|267:49,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    363,49,118816,2,0,P|383:105|364:161,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    348,256,119692,2,0,L|384:316,2,60,10|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

15. 02:08:013 (1,3) - Curve these sliders? It would look more visually appealing.
16. 02:11:298 (1,2,3,4) - 1/1 sliders (the white ticks) fit the song better IMO. Try using them for emphasis instead. Will also prevent the overlap of 02:15:020 (1) -.
17. 02:34:947 (2) - Move this to x:301 y:245 to stack properly with 02:32:977 (2) -.
18. 02:39:984 (1,2,3) - To avoid overlapping, try using symmetry here instead. Remember to Ctrl+H + Ctrl+G the slider 1 to get exact coordinates of where to put circle 3.
    
    
    ~
19. 02:44:582 (3) - This is the only 1/1 double repeat slider in the whole map. Consider changing it for consistency.
20. 02:53:999 (2) - Ctrl+G this slider for consistency among the flow and to prevent overlapping the slider head.
21. 03:02:320 (1,3) - If you curved the slidesr at 02:08:013 (1,3) -, then you should curve these sliders as well for consistency.
22. 03:12:393 (1) - It would play better if you moved this to x:256 y:140 to stack with the previous 03:10:641 (4) -. The next slider(s) may need to be slightly moved as well.
23. 03:12:831 (2,3) - While on the subject, it would be nice if you curved one (or both) of these sliders to make it a bit more visually appealing.
24. 03:30:787 (2,4) - I do not think straight sliders do not fit for the end of the song. Try curving them to make it feel more soothing in a sense that the song is almost finished.

[Hard]

1. General: The difficulty is ok, but the jump in amount of objects from Normal to Hard may be a bit too much.
2. 00:17:210 (3) - Move this to x:367 y:67 to stack properly with the previous 00:15:896 (1) -.
3. 00:21:152 (1) - Make this point down a bit more? Would help the player see circle 2 and not slider 3.
4. 00:23:780 (3) - This plays much better with a Ctrl+G.
5. 00:43:269 (3) - I see that you are trying to blanket slider 2 with slider 3, but please don't overlap slider 3 with circle 1!
6. 00:47:429 (1) - Curve this slider? Either works, I think curving it would look somewhat nicer.
7. 00:50:276 (3) - Try a Ctrl+G here. I think it plays better.
8. 00:52:247 - Don't overlap circle 2 with slider 3 here. Try using the right side of the grid instead. Try getting some of these objects ( 00:52:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ) more spread out from each other.
9. 01:04:290 (2) - Curve this slider for consistency with 00:47:429 (1) -?
10. 01:04:947 (3) - Curve this slider to blanket the previous slider 2. If so, you may also want to curve the next 01:05:385 (4) -.
    
    
    ~
11. 01:09:765 (2,4) - Again I think you should curve here for visual appeal. Parts like 01:13:707 (1,2,3) - are really nice without curve but I do not understand this part.
12. 01:18:524 (5) - You must end this slider on 01:18:962 - for consistency with 01:15:020 (3) -. Try blanketing slider 5 with slider 4 while stacking on slider 3's head, like so:
    
    
    ~
13. 01:33:196 - Slider 6 overlaps with circle 8 here. Please fix overlap.
14. 01:36:261 (4) - Ctrl+G this slider twice to fix its coordinates.
15. 01:41:298 (1,2,3) - This part of the song should not have a double 1/1 stack. There is nothing that calls for it.
16. 01:48:086 (3) - Move this to x:357 y:111 to stack properly with the previous 01:47:210 (1) -.
17. 01:49:838 (3,4) - I think it would play nicer if you try curving these sliders.
18. 01:55:312 (4) - Blanket this with the previous slider 2.
    
    
    ~
19. 01:57:502 (4) - There should be a slider here to follow the vocal and rhythm because the new downbeat indicates the shift in pattern to the rising climax.
20. 02:07:794 (3) -, 02:09:108 (1) - Move both of these objects to x:272 y:168 to stack properly with the previous 02:06:261 (3) -. Consider moving slider 4 ( 02:08:013 (4) - ) to x:196 y:216 for even better results.
21. 02:11:079 (1) - Try curving this slider into slider 2.
    
    
    ~
22. 02:12:174 (3) - Try blanketing this with the previous slider 2.
23. 02:12:831 (5,6,1,2) - Avoid doing symmetry here as there are multiple overlaps that look quite bad when played.
24. 02:18:524 (1,2,3) - In the current pattern your slider 3 does not go through slider 1's center. Try this instead:
    
    
    ~
25. 02:35:823 (1) - Move this to x:158 y:229 to stack with the previous 02:34:072 (5) -.
26. 02:39:108 (4) - Move this to x:368 y:184 to stack with the previous 02:37:356 (4) -. You may also need to adjust the next notes so they have the same 2.00x distance snap.
27. 02:41:079 (4) - Try using the same slider shape as you did on 02:40:203 (2) - (Copy/paste, Ctrl+> twice, then Ctrl+G and add the repeat). When you do so, it would be nice to also stack the tail of the next slider 1 ( 02:42:831 (1) - ) on the head of slider 4. This would mean that you would need to re-Ctrl+H your next slider to keep the symmetry ( 02:43:707 (2) - ).
28. 02:47:648 (3,1) - Don't overlap here. Either A: stack properly or B: make the slider end flow into it. You may need to re-pattern the next objects.
29. 03:01:663 (1,1) - Try curving these sliders for emphasis of "Let it" in the song.
30. 03:11:736 (3) - Try moving this to x:204 y:112 and 03:11:955 (4) - to x:248 y:192.
31. 03:15:239 (3) - Curve this to stack with the previous slider 2? It will also help lead into the next 03:15:677 (4) -.
32. 03:23:780 (5) - Try x:336 y:156 instead to avoid overlap with 03:22:904 (3) -.
33. 03:26:407 (5) - Slightly move this slider so the head of slider 3 does not touch it.

[Insane]

1. General: The Insane is nice~
2. 00:21:809 (4) - Move this to x:409 y:317 to stack properly with the next 00:22:685 (6) -.
3. 00:26:188 (3) - Move this closer to the center of the previous 00:24:874 (6) -.
4. 00:36:042 (2) - Try a Ctrl+G here. Either way works.
5. 00:38:670 (4) - Curve this slider to help it lead into the next slider 5?
   
   
   ~
6. 00:43:269 (4,1) - Don't overlap here. Try using a different pattern instead.
7. 00:47:648 (3) - Move this to x:171 y:243 to stack properly with the previous 00:46:772 (4) -.
8. 01:02:758 (2) - It plays better when you Ctrl+G here.
9. 01:13:707 (1) - Move this to x:77 y:245 to stack properly with the previous 01:12:831 (3) -.
10. 01:32:539 (5) - Move this to x:261 y:297 to stack properly with the previous 01:31:225 (1) -.
11. 01:32:977 (1) - Move this to x:241 y:118 to stack properly with the previous 01:32:101 (4) -.
12. 01:36:042 (1,3) - Don't overlap here. Try giving the objects ( 01:36:480 (2,3,4,1) - ) a bit more spacing with the scale function.
13. 01:46:334 (3) - Slightly curve this slider to blanket the previous slider 2?
    
    
    ~
14. 01:47:210 (1,2,3) - I think these sliders curve too much.
15. 01:59:692 (3,4,5) - Please fix the inconsistent jump spacing here. Use 01:59:911 (4) - for reference.
16. 02:00:349 (1,1) -, 02:02:101 (1,4) - Try to make these circles be in the center of the sliders, like you did with 02:03:634 (6,3) -.
17. 02:18:524 (6) - Move this to x:245 y:130 to stack properly with the previous 02:17:648 (3) -.
18. 02:36:699 (3) - Move this to x:265 y:55 to stack properly with the previous 02:35:604 (4) -.
19. 02:42:831 (3) - Move this to x:329 y:72 to stack properly with the previous 02:42:393 (2) -.
20. 03:05:604 (3) - Move this to x:377 y:125 to stack properly with the previous 03:04:947 (5) -.
21. 03:12:612 (2) - Curve this slider to blanket the visible circle 4.
22. 03:14:363 (4) - Move this to x:122 y:153 to stack properly with the previous 03:13:488 (1) -.
23. 03:18:305 (6) - Try moving this to x:252 y:100 instead.
24. 03:19:838 (3) - Curve this slider for emphasis of vocal?

Good job mapping it. It's really nice.
mod time: 5 hours

Thank you so much for the mod Project Railgun
Been neglecting this for a bit too long.

I pretty much changed everything you mentioned, hopefully without creating new problems.

I used a new image and video, unfortunately the new video size is larger (19.4 MB) as compressing it any further had a more significant quality loss. I hope the size is still acceptable though.

Cant say anything to hard or normal

Insane

Thanks for the mod FlobuFlobs

FlobuFlobs wrote:

00:13:926 - first note would be here
Offset = 14185

Currently going under different changes but I have changed the rest accordingly

hai~! gira's been busy irl running 3000 mile triathlons and hunting polar bears. hes very tired from those hobbies of his. so ill be modding in his place~





eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeegoodluck~

Thanks a bunch Kinhou for modding, I fixed them all up as best I can.
Now I just need to find someone to help me fix the timing...

wish this wasn't dead...

RMaltsaar wrote:

wish this wasn't dead...

I agree

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