1,2,3,4(space),5,6,7
you should put more notes. A lot of drums/sounds were skipped.
you should play bms patterned beatmaps.... like davteezy, doorknob's converts... because you can learn how2map mania.
[Hard]
00:06:694 - add at 7. strong beat
00:06:694 (6694|1,7000|0,7306|1) - how about this? http://puu.sh/dJW5o/071e849014.jpg move to 1,2,1
00:07:765 (7765|1,7765|5,7765|4) - delete one note. not a strong beat.
00:10:214 - add at 1
00:11:592 - ^^
00:14:041 - ^^
00:14:959 (14959|1) - move 3 and add note at 7. 12312 incomplete? stair pattern looks awkward.
00:15:265 - add
00:18:327 - add at7. Symmetrical pattern looks stable.
00:23:837 - add here
00:26:286 (26286|2) - http://puu.sh/dJWkf/1961952bf8.jpg ?
00:28:429 (28429|1) - delete this and 00:28:123 (28123|6) - move it to 00:28:429 -
00:35:776 (35776|1) - http://puu.sh/dJWnb/9f7aa10571.jpg looks awkward. rearrange this.
00:45:725 - add at 1
00:50:163 - http://puu.sh/dJWr6/185bd1ce04.jpg
00:53:378 (53378|2,53531|1,53531|0) - move right (+1 column)
00:55:367 - ~~ add notes at every 1/1 lines.
02:25:674 (145674|5,145827|6,145827|4) - ctrl + h
02:25:980 - add note at 2,4 (strong beat)
[normal +]
00:12:510 - http://puu.sh/dJWMA/daba5625fc.png this way might be better
00:14:959 - move some notes to 1 or add note at 1
00:18:327 (18327|4,18480|6,18633|4) - move to 626, I dont recommend repeating same columns.
00:18:327 (18327|4,18480|6,18633|4) - move to 6
00:20:010 - add 1,6. strong beat
00:20:776 (20776|4,20929|5,21082|6) - vocal's tone is go down, but note is go up. you should re arrange this
00:21:694 (21694|1) - move to 00:21:847 -
00:22:000 (22000|2) - move to 4 or 5
00:23:225 (23225|0,23378|1,23531|6,23531|0,23684|5) - This pattern makes finger-stress(?), 00:23:378 (23378|1,23684|5) - move to 3,5
00:25:214 (25214|2) - move to 2.
00:25:980 strong drum beat but only one note?
I recommend delete these unnecessary notes 00:37:612 (37612|6,38225|5) -
00:44:500 (44500|6,44653|5,44806|4,44959|6,45112|4) - you should think about two-hand balancing. left handed line is empty
00:45:725 - add 1 or 7 or both
00:46:031 (46031|3) - move to 1. looks strange
01:00:265 (60265|3) - ^^
01:20:470 (80470|2,80776|1,81082|2) - move this to 1,2,1
01:21:235 (81235|4,81235|3) - this longnotes looks very awkward
01:22:000 (82000|5,82153|3,82306|1,82306|5,82612|1,82918|1,82918|5,83225|1,83531|5,83684|1,83684|5) - nah...
01:27:510 - ~~ 6,7 line is empty... pls re arrange this part
01:39:755 - ~~ first line is empty... you should add notes are rearrange here
01:47:255 (107255|2,107408|3,107408|4) - move to left (-1 columns)
space jack is not a good idea in normal diff. 01:52:153 (112153|3) -
01:53:531 (113531|6,113531|0,113684|0,113684|6) - move to 3,5.
you should put more notes. A lot of drums/sounds were skipped.
you should play bms patterned beatmaps.... like davteezy, doorknob's converts... because you can learn how2map mania.
[Hard]
00:06:694 - add at 7. strong beat
00:06:694 (6694|1,7000|0,7306|1) - how about this? http://puu.sh/dJW5o/071e849014.jpg move to 1,2,1
00:07:765 (7765|1,7765|5,7765|4) - delete one note. not a strong beat.
00:10:214 - add at 1
00:11:592 - ^^
00:14:041 - ^^
00:14:959 (14959|1) - move 3 and add note at 7. 12312 incomplete? stair pattern looks awkward.
00:15:265 - add
00:18:327 - add at7. Symmetrical pattern looks stable.
00:23:837 - add here
00:26:286 (26286|2) - http://puu.sh/dJWkf/1961952bf8.jpg ?
00:28:429 (28429|1) - delete this and 00:28:123 (28123|6) - move it to 00:28:429 -
00:35:776 (35776|1) - http://puu.sh/dJWnb/9f7aa10571.jpg looks awkward. rearrange this.
00:45:725 - add at 1
00:50:163 - http://puu.sh/dJWr6/185bd1ce04.jpg
00:53:378 (53378|2,53531|1,53531|0) - move right (+1 column)
00:55:367 - ~~ add notes at every 1/1 lines.
02:25:674 (145674|5,145827|6,145827|4) - ctrl + h
02:25:980 - add note at 2,4 (strong beat)
[normal +]
00:12:510 - http://puu.sh/dJWMA/daba5625fc.png this way might be better
00:14:959 - move some notes to 1 or add note at 1
00:18:327 (18327|4,18480|6,18633|4) - move to 626, I dont recommend repeating same columns.
00:18:327 (18327|4,18480|6,18633|4) - move to 6
00:20:010 - add 1,6. strong beat
00:20:776 (20776|4,20929|5,21082|6) - vocal's tone is go down, but note is go up. you should re arrange this
00:21:694 (21694|1) - move to 00:21:847 -
00:22:000 (22000|2) - move to 4 or 5
00:23:225 (23225|0,23378|1,23531|6,23531|0,23684|5) - This pattern makes finger-stress(?), 00:23:378 (23378|1,23684|5) - move to 3,5
00:25:214 (25214|2) - move to 2.
00:25:980 strong drum beat but only one note?
I recommend delete these unnecessary notes 00:37:612 (37612|6,38225|5) -
00:44:500 (44500|6,44653|5,44806|4,44959|6,45112|4) - you should think about two-hand balancing. left handed line is empty
00:45:725 - add 1 or 7 or both
00:46:031 (46031|3) - move to 1. looks strange
01:00:265 (60265|3) - ^^
01:20:470 (80470|2,80776|1,81082|2) - move this to 1,2,1
01:21:235 (81235|4,81235|3) - this longnotes looks very awkward
01:22:000 (82000|5,82153|3,82306|1,82306|5,82612|1,82918|1,82918|5,83225|1,83531|5,83684|1,83684|5) - nah...
01:27:510 - ~~ 6,7 line is empty... pls re arrange this part
01:39:755 - ~~ first line is empty... you should add notes are rearrange here
01:47:255 (107255|2,107408|3,107408|4) - move to left (-1 columns)
space jack is not a good idea in normal diff. 01:52:153 (112153|3) -
01:53:531 (113531|6,113531|0,113684|0,113684|6) - move to 3,5.