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supercell feat. Hatsune Miku - BLACK ROCK SHOOTER

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scanter wrote:

Hi o3o/ present for you

A's Extra
  1. it is good you mapped following audible sound, but it doesn't matched up well almost every part imo.
  2. 00:03:877 (2) - um. its jump distance doesn't suitable well with song. V
  3. 00:10:968 (1,2,1) - 2 is really easy lead to 100. it is hidden by slider, so players might can't seperate whether it is doublet or triplet. I think it is just fine.
  4. 00:20:423 (3) - catch a glimpse, it seems to perfect overlapped. but it is not. I hope it is better now.
  5. 00:28:968 (4,5,6,7) - um. you can catch if you play this. almost players are miss or present 100 at number 6. what about change just triplet with slider one? It plays just fine.
  6. 00:52:423 (6) - this blanket can improve lol Fixed, fixed stacking with 1 as well.
  7. 00:56:696 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it is quite a lot strange for play. I'd rather start slider from white-tick. it is much better for playing and funny Played around and changed it.
  8. 01:06:605 (2,5) - it is bring down fun a lot even awkward. it is the good choice if you put this to jump pattern. You are right, changed.
  9. 01:09:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Nice streaming. Thanks! (I hope you're not sarcastic :P)
  10. 01:10:302 (1) - what about match up distance? It will be too messy like that.
well, I don't sure my mod will help your map. GL anyway :D mapset's arrangement is really good.

lsahi wrote:

Hi
Here's lsahi's M4M

[A's Extra]
00:07:968 (5,6) - ctrl+G,and move to 145,318 No thank you.
00:09:150 (5) - ?
00:10:968 (1) - use 1/4 beats I think this one plays well.
00:25:877 (3) - rotate by 180 and have it curver I like it this way more.
00:28:968 (4,5,6,7) - use 1/4 beats I mentioned it to everyone else as well, I'm leaving it as it is, I think it is fine.
00:31:696 (3,4,5,6) - here
change it into this Why?
00:34:423 (5) - delete, then 00:34:241 (4) - use 1/4 beats Again, why? It sounds fine and plays fine.
00:34:787 (7,8,9) - DS plz Whoops, fixed!
00:41:150 (8,1) - snap them Listen to the map at 25% playback rate and you'll see that they're snapped just right.
00:44:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - snap them ,and listen carefully, there's something strange ^
01:03:332 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - a little hard Hard is subjective.
01:09:877 (1,2,3,4,5) - hard to read Not really, AR 9.2 is making this just fine.
01:22:605 (4) - useing a 1/2 beat slider is okay And what's wrong with what I did?
01:23:756 (1) - 1/4 beats It is fine.

What I want to say is the sound effect sounds strange. And I'm curious about that why you perfer 1/6 beats in an 1/4 song Because a lot of parts include 1/6 and 1/12 snapped notes, I ignored a lot of them, but the ones which I feel strong in the song, I left and mapped accordingly. Please, when you mod, state REASONS as for why I would need to follow your suggestions, because I wasn't convinced at all.
SPOILER
osu file format v13

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Artist:ryo(supercell) feat. Hatsune Miku
ArtistUnicode:ryo(supercell) feat. 初音ミク
Creator:-Nya-
Version:A's Extra
Source:ブラック★ロックシューター
Tags:opening Burakku Rokku Shūtā Vocaloid Vocaloid2 tv size milan- Avishay
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Harubi Lira
[A's Extra]
00:07:968 (5,6) - ctrl+G,and move to 145,318 No thank you.
00:09:150 (5) - ?
00:10:968 (1) - use 1/4 beats I think this one plays well.
00:25:877 (3) - rotate by 180 and have it curver I like it this way more.
00:28:968 (4,5,6,7) - use 1/4 beats I mentioned it to everyone else as well, I'm leaving it as it is, I think it is fine.
00:31:696 (3,4,5,6) - here
change it into this Why?
00:34:423 (5) - delete, then 00:34:241 (4) - use 1/4 beats Again, why? It sounds fine and plays fine.
00:34:787 (7,8,9) - DS plz Whoops, fixed!
00:41:150 (8,1) - snap them Listen to the map at 25% playback rate and you'll see that they're snapped just right.
00:44:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - snap them ,and listen carefully, there's something strange ^
01:03:332 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - a little hard Hard is subjective.
01:09:877 (1,2,3,4,5) - hard to read Not really, AR 9.2 is making this just fine.
01:22:605 (4) - useing a 1/2 beat slider is okay And what's wrong with what I did?
01:23:756 (1) - 1/4 beats It is fine.

What I want to say is the sound effect sounds strange. And I'm curious about that why you perfer 1/6 beats in an 1/4 song Because a lot of parts include 1/6 and 1/12 snapped notes, I ignored a lot of them, but the ones which I feel strong in the song, I left and mapped accordingly. Please, when you mod, state REASONS as for why I would need to follow your suggestions, because I wasn't convinced at all.
Oh maybe I pay my attention too much on the vocal track rather than music track, and I think sone parttens it would sound better if you follow the vocal.
Btw, as a new mapper and modder thanks for the advice.
Rakuen
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A's Extra

  1. Personally don't like drum hitsounds for the song
  2. CS4? :\
  3. 00:01:877 (5) - Could space further like 00:00:787 (1,2) -
  4. 00:04:059 (3,4) - Hitsounds different with 00:01:150 (3,4) -
  5. 00:05:877 (1) - Reverse arrow is covered since 00:05:423 -
  6. 00:09:059 (4) - Suggest to remove, sounds when conflicting with 1/6 00:09:150 (5) -
  7. 00:10:968 (1,2,1) - This can be read as 1/8 easily, space 00:10:968 (1) - away from other 2 notes
  8. 00:19:150 - Feel not to speed up here, instead, could use it at 00:19:696 - cuz there are big jumps afterwards 00:21:150 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
  9. 00:20:059 (2) - Minor, space a bit further from 00:19:696 (1) -
  10. 00:22:605 (3) - NC for consistency with the jumps
  11. 00:34:059 (3) - ^
  12. 01:10:302 (1) - Tails sounds at 01:10:393 -
  13. 01:16:423 - If possible make the start of every beat a hit (big white tick)
  14. 01:14:968 (1,1,1) - Could try more streams here, looks a bit easy
  15. 01:27:696 - Not using drum sounds here?
  16. 01:27:696 (3) - NC for anti jump

Milan-'s Insane

  1. Looks pretty fine~

Hard

  1. 00:02:059 (1) - Might take a retry to read this, suggest not to jump
  2. 00:41:333 (1) - Prefer to remove and leave a stop at 00:41:151 (5) - , don't have to follow all vocals for good gameplay
  3. 00:53:151 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - DS here a bit messy, try to use the same one for this part

Normal

  1. Just giving a general comment cuz the diff spread from Normal to Hard is a bit far
  2. Suggest to use more red ticks, for example triple hits to harden the difficulty, so you can see some difference with Easy diff
  3. For part like 00:00:787 - to 00:03:696 - (the first combo), could try this rhythm:

Easy

  1. 00:00:787 (1,2) - Symmetry in mid line, move the set to X:72 Y:112
  2. 00:06:605 (1) - Leaving more space on the middle border would looks better imo:

Others

  • More improvements on A's Extra, and some mods on Easy, Normal and Hard would be best

Good luck.
Topic Starter
-Nya-

Rakuen wrote:

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Hard

  1. 00:02:059 (1) - Might take a retry to read this, suggest not to jump Removed the jump
  2. 00:41:333 (1) - Prefer to remove and leave a stop at 00:41:151 (5) - , don't have to follow all vocals for good gameplay Yeah, good idea
  3. 00:53:151 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - DS here a bit messy, try to use the same one for this part Looks fine to me . . .

Normal

  1. Just giving a general comment cuz the diff spread from Normal to Hard is a bit far I still think my Normal is hard enough.
  2. Suggest to use more red ticks, for example triple hits to harden the difficulty, so you can see some difference with Easy diff
  3. For part like 00:00:787 - to 00:03:696 - (the first combo), could try this rhythm: Yeah, I like it. Followed your suggestion

Easy

  1. 00:00:787 (1,2) - Symmetry in mid line, move the set to X:72 Y:112 Followed your suggestion
  2. 00:06:605 (1) - Leaving more space on the middle border would looks better imo: Fixed, I guess

Others

  • More improvements on A's Extra, and some mods on Easy, Normal and Hard would be best

Good luck.
Thanks for the mod! :D
Avishay

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A's Extra

  1. Personally don't like drum hitsounds for the song
  2. CS4? :\
  3. 00:01:877 (5) - Could space further like 00:00:787 (1,2) - V
  4. 00:04:059 (3,4) - Hitsounds different with 00:01:150 (3,4) - Fixed
  5. 00:05:877 (1) - Reverse arrow is covered since 00:05:423 - I removed the whole pattern overall, changed it.
  6. 00:09:059 (4) - Suggest to remove, sounds when conflicting with 1/6 00:09:150 (5) - V
  7. 00:10:968 (1,2,1) - This can be read as 1/8 easily, space 00:10:968 (1) - away from other 2 notes Thanks for the reasoning, fixed.
  8. 00:19:150 - Feel not to speed up here, instead, could use it at 00:19:696 - cuz there are big jumps afterwards 00:21:150 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Seems like a good suggestion.
  9. 00:20:059 (2) - Minor, space a bit further from 00:19:696 (1) - Since I changed the SV according to the previous note, this part was changed, I think it is fine now.
  10. 00:22:605 (3) - NC for consistency with the jumps V
  11. 00:34:059 (3) - ^ V
  12. 01:10:302 (1) - Tails sounds at 01:10:393 - I know, there are a lot of parts which I didn't follow on purpose, two 3/6 sliders sounds great together and it goes nicely in the pattern.
  13. 01:16:423 - If possible make the start of every beat a hit (big white tick) Fixed.
  14. 01:14:968 (1,1,1) - Could try more streams here, looks a bit easy Changed.
  15. 01:27:696 - Not using drum sounds here? No, a bit of flavor to the ending stream should be just fine imo.
  16. 01:27:696 (3) - NC for anti jump V

Good luck.
Thank you!

Fixed some more random stuff I found, here's the map:
SPOILER
osu file format v13

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344,148,51877,1,4,0:0:0:0:
180,192,52059,2,0,P|224:176|252:132,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,169,52423,2,0,P|124:251|208:272,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,220,52877,2,0,L|252:192,1,45,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,52,53150,6,0,B|240:112|280:156|256:232,1,180
152,320,53696,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,320,53787,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,320,53877,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,212,54059,2,0,P|92:152|120:124,1,90,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,212,54605,6,0,P|420:152|392:124,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,160,54968,2,0,B|135:174|135:174|156:132|136:92,1,135,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,64,55332,2,0,P|110:33|156:25,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,40,55696,1,4,0:0:0:0:
172,256,55877,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,212,56059,6,0,B|344:232|344:232|376:184,1,135
375,196,56423,2,0,B|392:172|392:172|332:184,1,90
283,191,56696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
234,201,56787,6,0,L|188:210,1,45,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
31,170,56968,2,0,L|74:158,1,45,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,326,57150,2,0,L|112:282,1,45,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,68,57332,2,0,L|207:111,1,45,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,208,57514,1,6,0:0:0:0:
196,68,58059,5,8,0:0:0:0:
264,312,58423,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,312,58605,1,4,0:0:0:0:
48,140,58968,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,232,59150,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,136,59332,2,0,B|296:99|296:99|376:111,1,135.000005149842,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,128,59605,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,164,59696,1,4,0:0:0:0:
276,252,59877,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,236,60059,2,0,L|148:100,1,135.000005149842,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,108,60332,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,108,60423,5,0,0:0:0:0:
364,176,60605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,336,60787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,108,60968,5,8,0:0:0:0:
236,96,61059,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,88,61150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,279,61332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
39,265,61514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,176,61696,5,8,0:0:0:0:
448,176,61787,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,176,61877,1,4,0:0:0:0:
372,296,62059,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,216,62241,1,4,0:0:0:0:
128,140,62423,1,12,0:0:0:0:
88,164,62514,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,200,62605,1,4,0:0:0:0:
160,320,62787,5,0,0:0:0:0:
188,188,62968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,100,63150,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,100,63241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,100,63332,5,4,0:0:0:0:
288,104,63423,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,108,63514,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,112,63605,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,172,63696,5,4,0:0:0:0:
204,180,63787,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,204,63877,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,236,63968,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,304,64059,5,4,0:0:0:0:
296,324,64150,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,324,64241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,304,64332,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,244,64423,6,0,L|28:192,1,67.5000025749208,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,168,64605,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,160,64696,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,152,64787,1,6,0:0:0:0:
236,60,64968,5,0,0:0:0:0:
404,116,65150,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,272,65332,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,256,65423,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,240,65514,1,4,0:0:0:0:
184,120,65696,2,0,L|308:171,1,135.000005149842,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,204,66059,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,137,66149,1,8,0:0:0:0:
343,90,66241,6,0,P|264:124|200:120,1,135.000005149842,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,88,66605,1,4,0:0:0:0:
44,244,66787,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,200,66968,2,0,P|284:260|224:304,1,135.000005149842,2|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,88,67332,1,4,0:0:0:0:
76,88,67696,5,4,0:0:0:0:
206,74,67877,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,120,67968,1,8,0:0:0:0:
218,163,68059,2,0,L|280:44,1,135.000005149842,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,183,68605,2,0,P|201:249|132:148,1,270.000010299683,4|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,40,69150,5,4,0:0:0:0:
156,52,69241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
206,74,69332,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,120,69423,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,172,69514,1,4,0:0:0:0:
212,220,69605,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,240,69696,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,228,69787,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,180,69877,5,4,0:0:0:0:
136,164,69968,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,180,70059,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,220,70150,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,232,70241,1,12,0:0:0:0:
300,204,70302,6,0,L|364:180,1,60,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,112,70483,2,0,L|444:88,1,60,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,196,70756,6,0,L|426:330,1,135.000005149842,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,188,71150,5,8,0:0:0:0:
64,188,71241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,188,71332,6,0,L|86:54,1,135.000005149842,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,272,71696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,188,71877,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,188,71968,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,188,72059,2,0,P|120:143|184:127,1,135.000005149842,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,164,72332,5,8,0:0:0:0:
219,164,72423,2,0,P|262:112|274:47,1,135.000005149842,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,76,72787,1,10,0:0:0:0:
240,105,72877,1,10,0:0:0:0:
301,135,72968,1,6,0:0:0:0:
368,251,73150,6,0,P|335:308|270:314,1,135.000005149842,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,244,73514,2,0,P|112:188|40:177,2,135.000005149842,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,268,74059,2,0,L|24:332,2,67.5000025749208,8|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,224,74423,2,0,P|336:152|384:124,1,112.500004291535
188,138,74787,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,138,74877,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,138,74968,5,4,0:0:0:0:
228,132,75059,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,128,75150,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,120,75241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,188,75332,5,4,0:0:0:0:
300,216,75423,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,248,75514,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,284,75605,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,324,75696,5,4,0:0:0:0:
324,300,75787,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,256,75877,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,224,75968,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,248,76059,6,0,B|320:216|320:216|400:204|400:204|464:168,1,202.500007724762,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,160,76423,2,0,P|468:224|444:192,1,135.000005149842,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,168,76787,1,6,0:0:0:0:
216,264,76968,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,224,77059,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,180,77150,1,4,0:0:0:0:
324,168,77332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,241,77514,2,0,P|110:119|232:120,1,270.000010299683,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,212,78059,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,288,78241,6,0,P|140:329|73:336,1,135.000005149842,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,120,78605,2,0,P|283:78|350:71,1,135.000005149842,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,136,78968,1,10,0:0:0:0:
172,52,79150,1,10,0:0:0:0:
328,144,79332,1,10,0:0:0:0:
340,188,79423,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,232,79514,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,288,79696,5,4,0:0:0:0:
140,96,79877,1,10,0:0:0:0:
152,140,79968,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,184,80059,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,288,80241,5,8,0:0:0:0:
272,204,80423,2,0,P|340:156|400:152,1,135.000005149842,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,160,80696,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,176,80787,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,288,80968,5,0,0:0:0:0:
164,184,81150,2,0,B|180:176|214:102|214:102|231:142|224:133,1,135.000005149842,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,112,81423,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,112,81514,2,0,B|264:104|298:30|298:30|315:70|308:61,1,135.000005149842,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,96,81787,1,4,0:0:0:0:
336,136,81877,1,4,0:0:0:0:
334,177,81968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,216,82059,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,308,82241,5,10,0:0:0:0:
448,220,82423,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,252,82514,1,4,0:0:0:0:
368,272,82605,2,0,P|316:224|196:224,1,168.75,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,200,82968,2,0,L|200:112,1,112.5,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,88,83332,1,4,0:0:0:0:
412,184,83514,2,0,L|327:258,1,112.5,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,284,83756,6,0,L|284:328,3,37.5,8|8|8|6,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,243,84059,2,0,P|202:200|149:184,1,112.5,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,180,84332,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,176,84423,1,4,0:0:0:0:
56,220,84514,2,0,L|23:174,1,56.25,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,60,84696,2,0,L|116:105,1,56.25,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,148,84968,6,0,B|279:131|279:131|199:123,1,112.5,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,48,85332,2,0,B|343:68|343:68|307:148,1,112.5,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,48,85696,2,0,B|358:78|358:78|426:91,1,112.5,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,148,86059,2,0,B|260:96|260:96|217:96,2,112.5,8|4|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,271,86787,5,10,0:0:0:0:
432,300,86968,1,10,0:0:0:0:
200,180,87150,5,10,0:0:0:0:
72,144,87331,1,6,0:0:0:0:
74,340,87696,5,8,0:0:0:0:
82,318,87787,1,10,0:0:0:0:
92,296,87877,1,10,0:0:0:0:
99,272,87968,1,10,0:0:0:0:
108,250,88059,1,6,0:0:0:0:
Narcissu

General

  1. BG use 1366*768 or 1024*768

A's Extra

  1. are you sure use drum hitsounds ? i think it's not appropriate
  2. 00:44:423 - SV1.0~SV1.5 too exaggeration imo
  3. 00:05:877 (1) - it's unrankable
  4. 01:16:059 (1,1) - i suggest separate ……
  5. 01:27:696 (3) - NC to point antijump

Milan-'s Insane

  1. why not use soft-hitnormal ? i think it's better than default soft-hitwhislte.
  2. try some straight slider ?
  3. 00:05:514 (3) - why not same as 00:05:150 (1,2) -
  4. pretty is ok √


Hard

  1. 00:04:423 (3) - use same DS with 00:04:241 (2,4) -
  2. 00:16:605 (1) - this jump is coufusion according your other part like
  3. 00:58:969 (1) - use purple color
  4. 01:09:514 (1) - normal-hitclap not appropriate imo …… try soft-hitwhistle ?


Normal

  1. Normal too easy than your Hard diff and average Normal diff, i suggest you use more note instead of 1/2 slider, stack 1/2 3hit-note .
  2. 00:01:514 (2,3) -it‘s too difficlt for new player, hard than 4 note and do not increase star rating, try this http://puu.sh/dygUA/2bb8480a64.jpg

Easy

  1. good job ~

Others

  1. Extra and Normal diff need more work imo ……
  2. good luck >,
Topic Starter
-Nya-

Narcissu wrote:

General

  1. BG use 1366*768 or 1024*768 Changed BG resolution to 1366X768

Hard

  1. 00:04:423 (3) - use same DS with 00:04:241 (2,4) - Ok, fixed
  2. 00:16:605 (1) - this jump is coufusion according your other part like Ok, I DSed that part. Removed the jump
  3. 00:58:969 (1) - use purple color Uhm . . . okay
  4. 01:09:514 (1) - normal-hitclap not appropriate imo …… try soft-hitwhistle ? Okay, followed your suggestion

Normal

  1. Normal too easy than your Hard diff and average Normal diff, i suggest you use more note instead of 1/2 slider, stack 1/2 3hit-note . Well, since I had a lot of complaints that this diff is too easy, I made a lot changes and I really hope it's harder now
  2. 00:01:514 (2,3) -it‘s too difficlt for new player, hard than 4 note and do not increase star rating, try this http://puu.sh/dygUA/2bb8480a64.jpg Followed your suggestion

Easy

  1. good job ~ Thanks!

Others

  1. Extra and Normal diff need more work imo ……
  2. good luck >,
Thanks for your mod! :D
Avishay

Narcissu wrote:

A's Extra

  1. are you sure use drum hitsounds ? i think it's not appropriate Life is hard, I think it fits fine, but if someone will give me a good alternative I will use it.
  2. 00:44:423 - SV1.0~SV1.5 too exaggeration imo That's a really strong part, I think that's just fine.
  3. 00:05:877 (1) - it's unrankable Irrelevant.
  4. 01:16:059 (1,1) - i suggest separate …… it's unrankable Irrelevant.
  5. 01:27:696 (3) - NC to point antijump it's unrankable Irrelevant.
Do you mind rechecking? Your notes are according to the older version before Rakuen's mod, it is just that Nya didn't update my diff on time :P
Eitherway, thanks for the mod.
Ichigaki
Thanks for give us a chance to mod your map :)

Called from ♪ Ichigaki's [AllMode] Modding Team ♪



General

  1. Song Setup :
    1. Metadata : I'm not sure with the title because the album was canceled (http://vgmdb.net/album/31673). Ask someone to fix this before bubbled!
    2. Other : Clear
  2. Music and background :
    1. Music : Clear
    2. Background : Clear
  3. Kiai and audio preview point :
    1. Kiai : Maybe end the kiai 01:26:423 - or 01:25:150 -
    2. Audio preview point : Maybe start 00:58:059 - , but yours is still okay

Warning

This mod mostly contain suggestion, so feel free to reject it with the reason


A's Extra

  1. 00:04:059 (3) - Unsnapped
  2. 00:04:764 (5) - Unsnapped, and please reduce the distance with last object, maybe same with 00:03:877 (2,3) -
  3. 00:05:332 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd to see you change the pattern of this, the snap in 00:06:059 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is different and look bad. Try to make it all same
  4. 00:09:150 (4) - Unsnapped
  5. 00:11:635 (1) - Unsnapped and increase the distance with 00:11:211 (1) - in x:224 (aww, i confused to tell this orz)
  6. 00:12:787 (1,3) - Make the blanket better, x:24 y:164
  7. 00:17:605 (5,2) - Blanket maybe better
  8. 00:23:332 (5,1,2) - Confusing imo, maybe re-arrange, but it's up to you
  9. 00:38:605 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Blanket here
  10. 00:40:241 (2) - Maybe stack this with 00:39:605 (4) -
  11. 00:54:968 (2,3) - Improve the blanket
  12. 01:02:059 (4,5) - How about Ctrl + G? Seems good too
  13. 01:10:756 (1) - Unsnapped
  14. 01:12:423 (2,3) - Improve the blanket
  15. 01:13:514 (2,3) - ^
  16. 01:15:332 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Confusing for me, but actually okay

Milan-'s Insane

  1. 00:28:060 (6,1) - Improve the blanket
  2. 01:06:241 (1,2) - Maybe blanket
    Already good for me

Hard

  1. 00:12:787 (1,2) - Improve the blanket
  2. 00:18:150 - Add note here
  3. 01:01:878 (1,2,3,4) - Different spacing, I think it should be same here
  4. 01:04:423 (5,6) - Better if not stacked
  5. 01:09:877 (3,4) - Improve the blanket
  6. 01:14:968 (1,2,3,4) - Make the distance same especially 01:14:968 (1,2) -
  7. 01:20:605 (1) - It started on 01:20:787 - imo

Normal

  1. 00:12:423 (6,1,2) - Improve the blanket
  2. 00:20:423 (5,1) - ^

Easy already good :)

Overall

Wow, Black Rock Shooter. This mapset is good, just doubt with the metadata and some unsnapped thing in A's Extra. Good luck guys~
Topic Starter
-Nya-

Ichigaki wrote:

Thanks for give us a chance to mod your map :)

Called from ♪ Ichigaki's [AllMode] Modding Team ♪



General

  1. Song Setup :
    1. Metadata : I'm not sure with the title because the album was canceled (http://vgmdb.net/album/31673). Ask someone to fix this before bubbled! I decided to look myself and I found this album: http://vgmdb.net/album/31382 so I think the metadata is fine
    2. Other : Clear
  2. Music and background :
    1. Music : Clear
    2. Background : Clear
  3. Kiai and audio preview point :
    1. Kiai : Maybe end the kiai 01:26:423 - or 01:25:150 - Nah, I'm fine with where my kiai is now
    2. Audio preview point : Maybe start 00:58:059 - , but yours is still okay I like my preview time better. I want it to start where she says "Black rock shooter"

Warning

This mod mostly contain suggestion, so feel free to reject it with the reason

Hard

  1. 00:12:787 (1,2) - Improve the blanket Tried my best to improve it
  2. 00:18:150 - Add note here Good idea, added the note
  3. 01:01:878 (1,2,3,4) - Different spacing, I think it should be same here I'm not sure what kind of spacing you mean. Maybe be more specific
  4. 01:04:423 (5,6) - Better if not stacked Okay, unstacked the two notes
  5. 01:09:877 (3,4) - Improve the blanket Made a tiny adjustment
  6. 01:14:968 (1,2,3,4) - Make the distance same especially 01:14:968 (1,2) - Fixed the spacing
  7. 01:20:605 (1) - It started on 01:20:787 - imo No, that doesn't sound right. I think it should be on the red tick, so no change

Normal

  1. 00:12:423 (6,1,2) - Improve the blanket The blanket looks fine, but I did change it a teeny tiny bit
  2. 00:20:423 (5,1) - ^ Tried my best to improve it

Easy already good :) Thanks!

Overall

Wow, Black Rock Shooter. This mapset is good, just doubt with the metadata and some unsnapped thing in A's Extra. Good luck guys~
Hopefully the metadata is fine now.
Thanks so much for the mod! :D
Avishay

Ichigaki wrote:

Thanks for give us a chance to mod your map :)

Called from ♪ Ichigaki's [AllMode] Modding Team ♪



Warning

This mod mostly contain suggestion, so feel free to reject it with the reason


A's Extra

  1. 00:04:059 (3) - Unsnapped But it is timed correctly, listen in 25% Playback Rate
  2. 00:04:764 (5) - Unsnapped, and please reduce the distance with last object, maybe same with 00:03:877 (2,3) - It is timed correctly but I will lower the distance.
  3. 00:05:332 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd to see you change the pattern of this, the snap in 00:06:059 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is different and look bad. Try to make it all same I did it like that on purpose, the DS on the first 6 notes is 1x and then the next triple is 0.8x and the one afterwards is 1.2x, the only thing I will change here is the NC on the last triple.
  4. 00:09:150 (4) - Unsnapped 1/6 and it is snapped just fine (remember to use 25% Playback Rate.
  5. 00:11:635 (1) - Unsnapped and increase the distance with 00:11:211 (1) - in x:224 (aww, i confused to tell this orz) ^ and I moved it to x-224, the distance is lowered, not increased, and it feels and looks better.
  6. 00:12:787 (1,3) - Make the blanket better, x:24 y:164 V
  7. 00:17:605 (5,2) - Blanket maybe better They're not supposed to be related at all, it is fine atm.
  8. 00:23:332 (5,1,2) - Confusing imo, maybe re-arrange, but it's up to you Reading is one of the aspects a player needs to get good at :) The AR is 9.2 and it shouldn't be too hard to read.
  9. 00:38:605 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Blanket here It wasn't intended to be a blanket but I moved it a bit to make it look more like a blanket.
  10. 00:40:241 (2) - Maybe stack this with 00:39:605 (4) - I like this! Changed.
  11. 00:54:968 (2,3) - Improve the blanket I tried to do so few times already, I hope it is fine now.
  12. 01:02:059 (4,5) - How about Ctrl + G? Seems good too I like it because the jump goes nicely with the vocals, changed.
  13. 01:10:756 (1) - Unsnapped 25% PBR
  14. 01:12:423 (2,3) - Improve the blanket V
  15. 01:13:514 (2,3) - ^ V
  16. 01:15:332 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Confusing for me, but actually okay Thanks :P

Wow, Black Rock Shooter. This mapset is good, just doubt with the metadata and some unsnapped thing in A's Extra. Good luck guys~[/notice]
Thanks for the mod!

SPOILER
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Title:BLACK ROCK SHOOTER
TitleUnicode:BLACK★ROCK SHOOTER
Artist:ryo(supercell) feat. Hatsune Miku
ArtistUnicode:ryo(supercell) feat. 初音ミク
Creator:-Nya-
Version:A's Extra
Source:ブラック★ロックシューター
Tags:opening Burakku Rokku Shūtā Vocaloid Vocaloid2 tv size milan- Avishay
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-Tochi

  • ♬ A's Extra ♬

  1. 00:02:059 - Good place to set a circle that stacks with 00:01:877 (5) - so it doesn't feel empty.
  2. 00:04:423 (4) - This slider is hard to read imo. Try to do something like Ctrl + H, Ctrl + J, Ctrl + G, and use 8 distance spacing, and place it the same place as before, so it looks like:
  3. 00:07:696 (4,5,6) - It's so hard, and it has a weird flow. Why not try to do Ctrl + G on 00:07:696 (4) - so it gets a better flow too.
  4. 00:20:059 (2) - Make the blanket more blanket like. A bit more curvy.
  5. 00:28:968 (4,5,6) - Feels overmapped when it's 1/6, why not just 1/4? And it's hard to tap.
  6. 00:29:514 (8,3) - I personally don't like this overlap. Try to avoid it?
  7. 00:31:696 (3,4,5) - This part is really good, it reminds of this part 00:28:968 (4,5,6) - It's a good example for overmapped. 00:31:696 (3,4,5) - This part is not overmapped, but the other part is overmapped, if you understand.
  8. 00:39:150 (8,3) - Avoid overlap.
  9. 01:10:059 (3,4,5) - This end is like 80% hard to read, and the placing is a bit overmapped because it overlaps here 01:09:514 (5,6,7,3,4,5) - Try to make it more smooth.


  • ♬ Milan-'s Insane ♬


    -Fine

The rest is fine, couldn't really find any problems.


  • ♬ Feedback ♬


    Nice map, and good luck with it~
Avishay

-Tochi wrote:


  • ♬ A's Extra ♬

  1. 00:02:059 - Good place to set a circle that stacks with 00:01:877 (5) - so it doesn't feel empty. But there is not any beat there? No need to overmap for no reason, especially when it is just the beginning of the song.
  2. 00:04:423 (4) - This slider is hard to read imo. Try to do something like Ctrl + H, Ctrl + J, Ctrl + G, and use 8 distance spacing, and place it the same place as before, so it looks like: I like it as it is, it is really not hard to read.
  3. 00:07:696 (4,5,6) - It's so hard, and it has a weird flow. Why not try to do Ctrl + G on 00:07:696 (4) - so it gets a better flow too. It is not too hard, it just challenges your reading skills a bit, I like it the way it is right now.
  4. 00:20:059 (2) - Make the blanket more blanket like. A bit more curvy. I think it is fine as it is.
  5. 00:28:968 (4,5,6) - Feels overmapped when it's 1/6, why not just 1/4? And it's hard to tap. This is an Extra, maybe I should just place 1/1 sliders all over the map and that's it? It follows the rhythm and vocals correctly, it plays nicely and it is great.
  6. 00:29:514 (8,3) - I personally don't like this overlap. Try to avoid it? Played around and change pattern a bit.
  7. 00:31:696 (3,4,5) - This part is really good, it reminds of this part 00:28:968 (4,5,6) - It's a good example for overmapped. 00:31:696 (3,4,5) - This part is not overmapped, but the other part is overmapped, if you understand. I understand, but I think you are wrong.
  8. 00:39:150 (8,3) - Avoid overlap. I don't think it awful, it looks just fine.
  9. 01:10:059 (3,4,5) - This end is like 80% hard to read, and the placing is a bit overmapped because it overlaps here 01:09:514 (5,6,7,3,4,5) - Try to make it more smooth. 9.2 AR makes it just fine, how come it is overmapped because of the placing? Try to play it yourself, you barely see any overlaps.
Thank you for your time.

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RandF
hey, thanks for M4M~

[General]
  1. romanised title: ブラック★ロックシューター
    artist: supercell feat. Hatsune Miku
    romanised artist: supercell feat. 初音ミク

    and move "ryo" to tags
    source from the credit of anime OP :arrow: http://puu.sh/dF19G/d6e2c8399f.jpg
  2. The video's audio track must be removed from the video file. unranked!!!
    check Ranking Criteria :arrow: http://puu.sh/dF1S9/c46dba3a18.png
[Easy]
  1. 00:21:150- how about finish?
  2. 00:22:605- ^
  3. 00:53:150 (1,2,3) - I prefer to set more roundly for good looking
  4. 01:00:423- I don't understand this clap. I recommend to add clap at backbeat (2nd and 4th beat) like 01:10:605 ~ 01:18:968
  5. 01:01:877- ^
[Normal]
  1. spacing is too close? hard to see 1/2 rhythm especially. I prefer DS 1.0x
  2. 00:16:423 (3) - hard to find rhythm. suggetion~
  3. 00:22:605- how about finish?
  4. 00:41:514 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too long 1/2 rhythm connection, imo. suggetion~
  5. 00:58:968 ~ 01:19:332- same as easy about clap. I prefer to add clap at backbeat
  6. 01:26:241- finish?
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:150- add a note
  2. 00:08:605- add a note and remove 00:09:333 (5) -
  3. 00:29:514 (5) - Ctrl+G and stack 00:29:787 (6,7) - on the end of slider for good flow
  4. 00:40:968 (4,5) - this jump is not good. make DS 1.1x
  5. 01:07:696- finish
  6. 01:08:242 (2,3) - ^
  7. 01:08:968- ^
  8. 01:21:696 (1,2,3,1) - straight pattern is hard to play, imo
  9. 01:22:787 (2,3) - I prefer 1/1 slider
[Milan-'s Insane]
  1. 01:08:968 (3,1) - make DS smaller?
[A's Extra]
  1. I recommend to CS 4 for balance with other diffs
  2. 00:23:696 (1,2) - swap NC because hard to find rhythm
  3. 00:55:877 (5) - I prefer to delete
  4. 01:13:332- clap?
  5. 01:14:423 (4) - end at 01:14:605 and add clap at end
~Good Luck~
Avishay

RandomEffect wrote:

hey, thanks for M4M~
[A's Extra]
  1. I recommend to CS 4 for balance with other diffs Nah, this is my diff and it is not related to the other diffs.
  2. 00:23:696 (1,2) - swap NC because hard to find rhythm V
  3. 00:55:877 (5) - I prefer to delete No, why?
  4. 01:13:332- clap? Sure
  5. 01:14:423 (4) - end at 01:14:605 and add clap at end Added clap but the slider ends on the right time.
~Good Luck~
SPOILER
osu file format v13

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[Editor]
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Title:BLACK ROCK SHOOTER
TitleUnicode:BLACK★ROCK SHOOTER
Artist:ryo(supercell) feat. Hatsune Miku
ArtistUnicode:ryo(supercell) feat. 初音ミク
Creator:-Nya-
Version:A's Extra
Source:ブラック★ロックシューター
Tags:opening Burakku Rokku Shūtā Vocaloid Vocaloid2 tv size milan- Avishay
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[Difficulty]
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300,216,75423,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,248,75514,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,284,75605,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,324,75696,5,4,0:0:0:0:
324,300,75787,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,256,75877,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,224,75968,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,248,76059,6,0,B|320:216|320:216|400:204|400:204|464:168,1,202.500007724762,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,160,76423,2,0,P|468:224|444:192,1,135.000005149842,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,168,76787,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,264,76968,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,224,77059,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,180,77150,1,4,0:0:0:0:
324,168,77332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,241,77514,2,0,P|110:119|232:120,1,270.000010299683,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,212,78059,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,288,78241,6,0,P|140:329|73:336,1,135.000005149842,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,120,78605,2,0,P|283:78|350:71,1,135.000005149842,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,136,78968,1,10,0:0:0:0:
172,52,79150,1,10,0:0:0:0:
328,144,79332,1,10,0:0:0:0:
340,188,79423,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,232,79514,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,288,79696,5,4,0:0:0:0:
140,96,79877,1,10,0:0:0:0:
152,140,79968,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,184,80059,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,288,80241,5,8,0:0:0:0:
272,204,80423,2,0,P|340:156|400:152,1,135.000005149842,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,160,80696,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,176,80787,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,288,80968,5,0,0:0:0:0:
164,184,81150,2,0,B|180:176|214:102|214:102|231:142|224:133,1,135.000005149842,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,112,81423,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,112,81514,2,0,B|264:104|298:30|298:30|315:70|308:61,1,135.000005149842,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,96,81787,1,4,0:0:0:0:
336,136,81877,1,4,0:0:0:0:
334,177,81968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,216,82059,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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448,220,82423,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,252,82514,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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104,180,84332,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,176,84423,1,4,0:0:0:0:
56,220,84514,2,0,L|23:174,1,56.25,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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307,148,84968,6,0,B|279:131|279:131|199:123,1,112.5,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,48,85332,2,0,B|343:68|343:68|307:148,1,112.5,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,48,85696,2,0,B|358:78|358:78|426:91,1,112.5,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,148,86059,2,0,B|260:96|260:96|217:96,2,112.5,8|4|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,271,86787,5,10,0:0:0:0:
432,300,86968,1,10,0:0:0:0:
200,180,87150,5,10,0:0:0:0:
72,144,87331,1,6,0:0:0:0:
74,340,87696,5,8,0:0:0:0:
82,318,87787,1,10,0:0:0:0:
92,296,87877,1,10,0:0:0:0:
99,272,87968,1,10,0:0:0:0:
108,250,88059,1,6,0:0:0:0:

Also, incase you didn't see the in-game message nya, here's the new video without sound http://puu.sh/dGwWU/d6db0387fa.avi
Topic Starter
-Nya-

RandomEffect wrote:

hey, thanks for M4M~

[General]
  1. romanised title: ブラック★ロックシューター
    artist: supercell feat. Hatsune Miku
    romanised artist: supercell feat. 初音ミク You mixed up the romanised title and the artist. The romanised artist is the english version

    and move "ryo" to tags Fixed
    source from the credit of anime OP :arrow: http://puu.sh/dF19G/d6e2c8399f.jpg
  2. The video's audio track must be removed from the video file. unranked!!! Removed the audio thanks to Avishay
    check Ranking Criteria :arrow: http://puu.sh/dF1S9/c46dba3a18.png
[Easy]
  1. 00:21:150- how about finish? Yeah, good idea. Fixed
  2. 00:22:605- ^ ^
  3. 00:53:150 (1,2,3) - I prefer to set more roundly for good looking Okay, followed your suggestion
  4. 01:00:423- I don't understand this clap. I recommend to add clap at backbeat (2nd and 4th beat) like 01:10:605 ~ 01:18:968 Yeah, I realized my current claps doesn't sound that good. So placed it on other notes, and now it sounds much better. But I didn't place it where you had suggested. I like my placements better.
  5. 01:01:877- ^ ^
[Normal]
  1. spacing is too close? hard to see 1/2 rhythm especially. I prefer DS 1.0x Ok, changed the DS to 1.0x
  2. 00:16:423 (3) - hard to find rhythm. suggetion~ Followed your suggestion
  3. 00:22:605- how about finish? Ok, good idea. Fixed
  4. 00:41:514 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too long 1/2 rhythm connection, imo. suggetion~ Followed your suggestion
  5. 00:58:968 ~ 01:19:332- same as easy about clap. I prefer to add clap at backbeat No, I like my claps as they are placed now
  6. 01:26:241- finish? Ok
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:150- add a note No, I don't think it fits with the rhythm. I want a different rhythm
  2. 00:08:605- add a note and remove 00:09:333 (5) - No, I want a different rhythm
  3. 00:29:514 (5) - Ctrl+G and stack 00:29:787 (6,7) - on the end of slider for good flow Okay, followed your suggestion
  4. 00:40:968 (4,5) - this jump is not good. make DS 1.1x Ok, fixed
  5. 01:07:696- finish Ok, added finish
  6. 01:08:242 (2,3) - ^ ^
  7. 01:08:968- ^ ^
  8. 01:21:696 (1,2,3,1) - straight pattern is hard to play, imo Yeah, I also thought about changing that. Changed the pattern. Think it will be easier to play now
  9. 01:22:787 (2,3) - I prefer 1/1 slider Good idea. Changed.
~Good Luck~
Thanks so much for the mod! Will mod your map soon.
RandF

-Nya- wrote:

RandomEffect wrote:

  1. romanised title: ブラック★ロックシューター
    artist: supercell feat. Hatsune Miku
    romanised artist: supercell feat. 初音ミク You mixed up the romanised title and the artist. The romanised artist is the english version

    and move "ryo" to tags Fixed
    source from the credit of anime OP :arrow: http://puu.sh/dF19G/d6e2c8399f.jpg
:arrow:

:o :o :o
oh...sorry... Im very very foolish...
you're right, I mixed up about "romanised"
Zweib
Hello~ M4M,. sorry for delay because the Editor is soooooo lag after I update osu orz.

[Easy]
01:19:332 (1) - this spinner may be too short in Easy. It would be better if auto can spin 7~8k. And 01:21:877 (1) is also too close to the spinner. According to ranking criteria, you shouldn't put any note until 01:22:241

[Normal]
00:21:150 (1) - move down by 2 grid, it is overlapped with the score bar.
00:40:059 (4) - move 2 grid left?
00:44:423 (1) - 1 grid left?
00:54:605 (4) - move 1 grid right

[Hard]
00:06:242 (4) - 276,224?
00:41:151 (5,1) - why not stack? I didn't see any other similar pattern in this diff
00:46:605 (5) - keep consistent DS
00:48:059 (3,1) - slider bodies may be too close, move 00:48:787 (1) left by several grid.
00:59:696 (4,1) - make them symmetric to the center?
01:12:788 (3) - move left by several grid?
I'm clear that you set NC according to the vocal but the combo pattern looks kinda random. maybe you should add an NC every 2 stanzas, try to make them consistent.

[Milan-'s Insane]
fun diff :D
00:09:150 (5,6,7) - this triple is not consistent to others imo, you should move 00:09:240 (6) to 00:08:696
00:10:968 (1,2) - snapped to 1/6 to follow the drum? They are sliders so I think it would not be hard for play.
01:23:696 (1,2) - ^
00:09:877 (3,5,7) - add NC to these, make colorhax?

A's Extra is fun too but still needs much work with the rhythm and hitsound. sorry but I have no idea how to help ;w;

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
-Nya-

Zweib wrote:

Hello~ M4M,. sorry for delay because the Editor is soooooo lag after I update osu orz.

[Easy]
01:19:332 (1) - this spinner may be too short in Easy. It would be better if auto can spin 7~8k. And 01:21:877 (1) is also too close to the spinner. According to ranking criteria, you shouldn't put any note until 01:22:241 I left the spinner there, but I did delete that slider and placed a note 01:22:241 - instead.

[Normal]
00:21:150 (1) - move down by 2 grid, it is overlapped with the score bar. Okay, the tail's not overlapping the score bar anymore
00:40:059 (4) - move 2 grid left? I still have to keep my DS in mind and I'm not sure why you want me to move it . . .
00:44:423 (1) - 1 grid left? Fixed, I guess
00:54:605 (4) - move 1 grid right ^

[Hard]
00:06:242 (4) - 276,224? Okay
00:41:151 (5,1) - why not stack? I didn't see any other similar pattern in this diff Nah, I like my pattern like that
00:46:605 (5) - keep consistent DS Ok, fixed
00:48:059 (3,1) - slider bodies may be too close, move 00:48:787 (1) left by several grid. Ok, fixed
00:59:696 (4,1) - make them symmetric to the center? Fixed
01:12:788 (3) - move left by several grid? I decided to stack the slider on 01:12:605 (2) -
I'm clear that you set NC according to the vocal but the combo pattern looks kinda random. maybe you should add an NC every 2 stanzas, try to make them consistent. Made changes to the NC'ing in this diff. Hopefully it's better now
Good Luck! Thanks!
Thanks so much for your mod! :D
Shurelia
おっす!やったよ!



~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~


[General]
- I suggest to add "Black Rock Shooter" to the tags. since most people search this anime by using that name.

[Easy]
  1. 00:34:241 (2) - add finish on the head to make it syncronize with (1).
  2. 00:50:241 (1) - Add finish on the head so it'll sounds better
  3. 01:03:332 (3) - add clap on the reverse slider.
  4. 01:10:605 (1) - how about to change it so it'll looks like this ? http://puu.sh/dLlzq.jpg. Because the current one make 01:10:968 - feels empty.

[Normal]

  • - Already fine for me~

[Hard]
  1. 00:01:514 (3) - Move this a bit so it become straight from (2). Example : x : 172 , y:304
  2. 00:17:423 (7) - Should be removed since it didn't fit well with the song.
  3. 00:29:787 (6,7) - I'm recommending for stacking this, since it'll be too hard for a "hard" diff.
  4. 00:41:151 (5) - Since you usually stacking this with the next object, why not stacking this? I suggest to stack this so it'll be easy to read.

[Milan's Insane]

  • - Nothing to say here

Sorry but i had to skip extra diff since i'm still not good enough to mod it.

That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!
Avishay

Zweib wrote:

A's Extra is fun too but still needs much work with the rhythm and hitsound. sorry but I have no idea how to help ;w; :( :(

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
-Nya-

Shurelia wrote:

おっす!やったよ!



~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~


[General]
- I suggest to add "Black Rock Shooter" to the tags. since most people search this anime by using that name. Ok, added that to the tags

[Easy]
  1. 00:34:241 (2) - add finish on the head to make it syncronize with (1). Ok, fixed
  2. 00:50:241 (1) - Add finish on the head so it'll sounds better Ok
  3. 01:03:332 (3) - add clap on the reverse slider. Ok
  4. 01:10:605 (1) - how about to change it so it'll looks like this ? http://puu.sh/dLlzq.jpg. Because the current one make 01:10:968 - feels empty. Ok, followed your suggestion

[Normal]

  • - Already fine for me~ Yay!

[Hard]
  1. 00:01:514 (3) - Move this a bit so it become straight from (2). Example : x : 172 , y:304 Ok, good idea
  2. 00:17:423 (7) - Should be removed since it didn't fit well with the song. Ok
  3. 00:29:787 (6,7) - I'm recommending for stacking this, since it'll be too hard for a "hard" diff. I think it's fine
  4. 00:41:151 (5) - Since you usually stacking this with the next object, why not stacking this? I suggest to stack this so it'll be easy to read. I still think it's fine, cuz I want to make the diff a bit harder.
That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!
Thanks for your mod! :D
Topic Starter
-Nya-
@ Milan- and Avishay - Please update to latest version since I changed the tags.
moonlightleaf
[Easy]

00:18:605 (1) - i think use the shape(crtl+h) to void overlap

00:58:968 (1,4) - avoid overlap ,can try this

01:05:150 (4,3) - struck

[Normal]

00:09:514 (1) - blanket with 5,use this to check?(this is my way for checking blanket)

00:11:696 (4,5) - try

00:20:241 (4) - delete it, real stream is 00:20:241-00:20:332-00:20:423 imo

01:10:423 (5) - delete

01:14:059 (2) - change to note at 01:14:241

01:24:059 (4) - blanket will be more better

[Hard]

00:04:787 (4) - x|200 y|136

00:06:605 (1) - ds

00:08:059 (1) - maybe folw will be better

00:08:968 (3) - delete will better to play and read

00:10:968 (1) - change to 2notes? better to play

00:19:877 (5) - no vol here , delete

00:22:787 (2,3,4) - try

00:30:423 (2) - vol( 00:30:605 - ) in slider's middle listen badly

00:31:878 (5) - ^

01:04:605 (6,1) - bad flow,try

01:14:605 (4,1,2,3) - try

01:27:333 (4,1) - maybe 4 return 1time to end ?

-Actor-
~Testplay request~
☯Easy
Everything is really good but some notes (just soooomee) are just like extras that don't really need to be there.
☯Normal
All good but when it came to Kiai time you repeated the pattern sometimes of putting the circles near/close the sliders.
☯Hard
-All good-
Avishay

-Actor- wrote:

~Testplay request~
☯Easy
Everything is really good but some notes (just soooomee) are just like extras that don't really need to be there.
☯Normal
All good but when it came to Kiai time you repeated the pattern sometimes of putting the circles near/close the sliders.
☯Hard
-All good-
Try to be more specific about where, so Nya will be able to respond to your notes accurately.
Tsumetaku
HIIII
From My Vocaloid Queue~~

Haha I always looks forward to that someone could make a new version for BRS >u<!!!

  1. = Some overall comments
  2. = Suggestions
  3. = Unrankable stuffs

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  1. Black Rock Shooter in TAGS overlap with title...

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  1. Great :3!!

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    01:04:787 (1,2) - I feel kinda confused on this rhythm since it between at which the previous pattern follows 1/1 and next pattern follows vocal...
    01:10:423 (5) - Maybe u can delete this one cuz on you follow vocal on previous pattern,and it doesn't affect in flow~ (and i feel more suit without 1/2 in here while clicking

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    00:18:060 (8,9,10) - these triplets touches previous slider cuz to stack setting,u can pull them further to get rid of overlapping :>
    00:59:514 (2,3,4) - ^
    00:41:151 (5) - imo u should keep these more closer to 0.1x or further,because there's only an example like this in this map.
    01:03:696 (2) - I think the bg drums can support little jumps here,try X:120 Y:212,These would be fun :D
    01:04:423 (5) - ^ and X:308 Y:84
    01:17:878 (4) - NC at here will be nice
    01:19:696 (2,3) - Make the ds to 1.1x,looks kinda narrow now.

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  1. Very Interesting Diff!!! I enjoy playing things like this XD
    00:00:423 (1) - Ctrl+G will be more visible on these 4+1 pattern

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  1. I think the Drum hitsounds is a little bit annoying at here...
    maybe can change by lowering the volume or replacing the hitsound sample(like using normal hitsound as clap at Insane
  2. Maybe just set CS to 4? it's an Extra and lower diff uses 4,3.5 is not forbidden but 4 is more suitable here.
    00:09:150 (4) - remove the first and second clap on this reverse slider,sounds weird
    00:29:211 (7) - remove finish,weird also espically its using 1/6
    00:34:241 (2) - NC?
    00:48:968 (1) - stack them,or unstack them~
    00:52:423 (6) - Move the slider point to X:128 Y:256 to get better blanket

ag i tried new reply arrangement XD
Avishay

Tsumetaku wrote:

HIIII
From My Vocaloid Queue~~

Haha I always looks forward to that someone could make a new version for BRS >u<!!!

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  1. I think the Drum hitsounds is a little bit annoying at here...
    maybe can change by lowering the volume or replacing the hitsound sample(like using normal hitsound as clap at Insane The only thing I'll do is decrease the volume by 5%
  2. Maybe just set CS to 4? it's an Extra and lower diff uses 4,3.5 is not forbidden but 4 is more suitable here. No thank you! :)
    00:09:150 (4) - remove the first and second clap on this reverse slider,sounds weird You are right, removed.
    00:29:211 (7) - remove finish,weird also espically its using 1/6 Nope, it fits just perfectly with the beats.
    00:34:241 (2) - NC?No need to spam it anymore, 1 starts the new pattern.
    00:48:968 (1) - stack them,or unstack them~ Stacked!
    00:52:423 (6) - Move the slider point to X:128 Y:256 to get better blanket Fixed, thank you!
Thanks :)

SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 58968
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 3.699998

[Metadata]
Title:BLACK ROCK SHOOTER
TitleUnicode:ブラック★ロックシューター
Artist:supercell feat. Hatsune Miku
ArtistUnicode:supercell feat. 初音ミク
Creator:-Nya-
Version:A's Extra
Source:ブラック★ロックシューター
Tags:opening Black Rock Shooter Burakku Rokku Shuta Vocaloid Vocaloid2 tv size milan- Avishay ryo
BeatmapID:522317
BeatmapSetID:217628

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9.2
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

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56,200,62605,1,4,0:0:0:0:
160,320,62787,5,0,0:0:0:0:
188,188,62968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,100,63150,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,100,63241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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56,160,64696,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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224,220,70150,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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64,188,71877,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,188,71968,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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220,164,72332,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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240,105,72877,1,10,0:0:0:0:
301,135,72968,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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188,138,74877,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,138,74968,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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308,120,75241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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300,216,75423,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,248,75514,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,284,75605,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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324,300,75787,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,256,75877,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,224,75968,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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464,176,80787,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,288,80968,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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248,112,81423,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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336,136,81877,1,4,0:0:0:0:
334,177,81968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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[ Joey ]
Hey Nya! Sorry it took me so long to get to your mod =/

General

Easy
  1. 00:03:696 - Remove the NC here, and add a NC here 00:05:150. I would also remove this NC 00:06:605
  2. 00:08:059 (2) - To match the pattern of your previous hitsounds, add a whistle here
  3. 00:13:150 (2) - I would adjust the position of this slider, so the head is at x: 288 y: 276, and then adjust the blanket accordingly. This makes it so you keep a nice curved cursor movement through these notes 00:11:696 (4,1,2)
  4. 00:12:787 - How come you don't use any claps in this section? You should be putting them on these beats 00:14:968 , 00:15:696 , 00:16:423 . For the claps in the middle of the slider, you should use a slidertick hitsound. Also, you should use this custom hitsound: http://puu.sh/dOAw3/d45f99dc93.wav . It's very commonly used, and it matches your music.
  5. No reason to skip this note
  6. 00:29:514 (4) - I'd rather not see a slider end on a strong note like this. Try a rhythm like this: http://puu.sh/dOBi5/2b9ea16933.jpg You can adjust it however you want, as long as there is a note starting on this beat 00:29:877 -
  7. 00:33:877 - I highly recommend you add a note here, especially because it sounds like the music is building up here
  8. 00:35:332 - ^
  9. 00:41:150 (3,1) - The change in flow is too much here. I recommend placement that looks more like this: http://puu.sh/dOBYj/a20bca3751.jpg
  10. 00:52:787 - Add a note here.
  11. 00:56:059 (1) - Move this slider to x:477 y:170 so it forms a nice triangle with 00:54:605 (4,5,1) -
  12. 00:58:968 (1,2) - Can improve blanket
  13. 01:00:787 (3,4) - ^
  14. 01:01:877 - I prefer that you adjust your combo so that a note starts on this important beat.
  15. 01:01:150 (4,1) - Something like this: http://puu.sh/dOD0t/84f1f992dc.jpg has better flow.
  16. 01:08:241 (1) - hmmm, I'm not sure about this one. I think when you start a slider on a red tick like this, it is too hard for someone playing an Easy difficulty. You should ask someone who is experienced with Easy diffs.
  17. 01:26:787 (2) - ^
  18. 01:10:605 (1) - Lower this slider just a little. To around x:191 y:76

Normal
  1. 00:03:150 (6,1) - I would prefer something more like this: http://puu.sh/dODTH/e3c91a6c77.jpg
  2. 00:05:150 (3,4,5,1) - For this combo, I would turn hitcircles 3 and 4 into a slider. And I would turn slider 1 into two hitcircles. It matches the music better this way.
  3. 00:15:332 (1) - You shouldn't use extended slider when it causes you to miss a beat in the music. Refer to Kibbleru's Userpage If you scroll down, he talks about the use of extended sliders. I recommend you end the slider here 00:15:696 and go from there
  4. 00:21:150 (1,2,3) - The flow with this combo could use some work. Think about which way your cursor is moving to the slider heads. It kinda of creates an unpleasant feeling because the notes are lined up straight, but the sliders are forcing you to make these curvy movements. Sorry, I am aware I'm not explaining myself well. Here is what I would do with this combo: http://puu.sh/dOFKh/f7b89c679c.jpg
  5. So where there is a really strong note like this, I highly encourage you to start a note here, rather than end a slider on it. This is a very important beatmapping practice that you should always be thinking about.
  6. 00:33:877 (4,5) - The flow here is lacking a little. Bending slider #5 the other way will help.
  7. 00:50:241 (1,2,3,4,5) - I recommend you keep combos with a lot of half notes to a minimum in Normal difficulties. They are very hard for newbie players.
  8. 01:12:059 (4) - This isn't that big of a deal, but could you put the red anchor right in the middle of this slider, so it matches up with the clap? ;)
  9. 00:58:968 - You have your claps on the wrong beats in the kiai. They should be on these beats: 00:59:332 - 01:00:059 - 01:00:787 - 01:01:514 - 01:02:241 - (i think you get the point lol)
  10. 01:03:332 (3) - I think a better way to express these finish notes is to make it 3 hitcircles, rather than a reverse slider.
  11. 01:21:877 (1,2) - Blanket could be better
  12. 01:23:696 (3,4) - ^
  13. 01:26:787 (1,2,1) - Something more like this looks better: http://puu.sh/dOHw1/e4dc7dbae9.jpg

Hard
  1. 00:06:242 (4,1) - This jump is lacking. Increase the distance to match the previous jumps.
  2. 00:12:787 - Like in the other diff, claps should be in this section
  3. I wouldn't skip this 1/4 beat, because you have been mapping them previously in this diff, like right here: 00:14:514 (4) -
  4. This note can be easily mistaken as a 1/2 note away because of it's distance snap. Either create a stacked anti-jump with 00:20:423 (7) , or increase the distance.
  5. 00:45:878 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - I really like this combo :) Good job
  6. The flow can be improved by doing something like this: http://puu.sh/dP4Ml/72ab395f43.jpg
  7. 01:23:696 (4) - You skip a lot of 1/4 beat with this slider. I would consider mapping them
  8. 01:25:151 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You skip some beats that should be mapped imo. Try something more like this: http://puu.sh/dP5bh/80a9eefbd7.jpg

Milan-'s Insane
  1. Of course it's up to you, but I would personally name the difficulty Milan's Insane (without the -)
  2. 00:05:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I would just repeat the same rhythm like this: http://puu.sh/dP5Jr/54b973fcf6.jpg
  3. 00:44:968 - A note should be clickable on this beat. I recommend a rhythm more like this: http://puu.sh/dP6eF/a6ae36061d.jpg Adding some slightly larger jumps at this part would feel nice also.
  4. 01:06:241 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can make these jumps look a little neater. Try something like this (sorry its hard to see. I didnt move slider #1): http://puu.sh/dP6L5/74ef8b5066.jpg
  5. 01:25:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is just personal preference, but I would like it if these jumps were a little bigger. It feel like it would go with the music, and be a good way to close out the song.
  6. Really solid difficulty. Nice work.

A's Extra
  1. I highly recommend you don't use drum hitsounds for the whole thing. It's ok to use them to emphasize some notes, but I don't think it sounds good for the whole map. It also doesn't match the rest of the mapset. I remember reading your response to one of the other mods and you said something like "this is my diff and it's not related to the other difficulties." You shouldn't think that way. Your difficulty is supposed to coordinate with the other difficulties, making a nice spread for a mapset.
  2. 00:10:968 (1,2,1) - I don't think you heard the music here correctly. These are just 1/4 notes. No need to use 1/6 notes here.
  3. 00:28:968 (4,5,6,7) - You shouldn't be using 1/6 notes in this map. Although in this part I hear some 1/8 notes. Like this: http://puu.sh/dP9G3/46f010a138.jpg
  4. I don't have much to say about this diff, because you have so much freedom in an Extra, it all comes down to opinion really
  5. I think you should work on some neater / cleaner object placement. A lot of the times it feels like your objects have no purpose with the other objects, and it looks a little messy.
  6. EDIT: Also, I forgot to mention, your difficulty name "A's Extra" might be unrankable. I believe it's a fairly new rule, but GD's have to be the mapper's name. That's why Azer had to change his "Extrazer" diff names to "Azer's Extra"

Really nice mapset -Nya-!
Thanks so much for the m4m
Good luck!
Avishay

[ Joey ] wrote:

A's Extra
  1. I highly recommend you don't use drum hitsounds for the whole thing. It's ok to use them to emphasize some notes, but I don't think it sounds good for the whole map. It also doesn't match the rest of the mapset. I remember reading your response to one of the other mods and you said something like "this is my diff and it's not related to the other difficulties." You shouldn't think that way. Your difficulty is supposed to coordinate with the other difficulties, making a nice spread for a mapset. I meant that as for I have my own maaping / hitsounding style and my difficulty represents it correctly.
  2. 00:10:968 (1,2,1) - I don't think you heard the music here correctly. These are just 1/4 notes. No need to use 1/6 notes here. Well you should listen to this part at 25% Playback rate and you'll find you are wrong.
  3. 00:28:968 (4,5,6,7) - You shouldn't be using 1/6 notes in this map. Although in this part I hear some 1/8 notes. Like this: http://puu.sh/dP9G3/46f010a138.jpg ^ In this case it follows the vocals then the beat.
  4. I don't have much to say about this diff, because you have so much freedom in an Extra, it all comes down to opinion really
  5. I think you should work on some neater / cleaner object placement. A lot of the times it feels like your objects have no purpose with the other objects, and it looks a little messy. Every circle was placed with a thought and if you find anything messy, mention it specifically.
  6. EDIT: Also, I forgot to mention, your difficulty name "A's Extra" might be unrankable. I believe it's a fairly new rule, but GD's have to be the mapper's name. That's why Azer had to change his "Extrazer" diff names to "Azer's Extra" If that's true I will have to change it, but I will wait for a BAT to mention it.

Really nice mapset -Nya-!
Thanks so much for the m4m
Good luck!
Thank you for mod!
[ Joey ]

Avishay wrote:

[ Joey ] wrote:

[*]I think you should work on some neater / cleaner object placement. A lot of the times it feels like your objects have no purpose with the other objects, and it looks a little messy. Every circle was placed with a thought and if you find anything messy, mention it specifically.

/quote]

Thank you for mod!
Ok, if you insist. :)

Lack of blankets and stacking, with frequent overlapping cause your map to have a very messy look. You can say it's just your style, but most people dislike messy maps.

00:01:150 (3,4) - 00:04:059 (3,4) - 00:06:968 (2,3) - inconsistent with distance snap
00:03:696 (1,2,3) - Every note here is overlapping a previous note, and none of them have any sort of interaction with another note (i.e stack or blanket).
00:02:787 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - This pattern feels pretty unpleasant. Maybe a picture will help you. I'll draw the cursor movement through this combo. http://puu.sh/dQq17/829dae19d4.jpg It feels so much nicer when patterns have a lot of sharp, back and forth, angles. Such as a star pattern or something. This pattern you have only has one sharp angle, from 7 to 1. The rest of your combo is very linear. Of course, this is all situational, you will find both linear patterns and angled in beatmaps. But this awkward flow you make, just feels funny. Even something simple like this would feel better: http://puu.sh/dQqP7/1b3785e336.jpg
00:06:787 (1,2) - Sloppy blanket
00:10:968 (1,2,1) - Even if there are 1/6 notes here (which I still disagree with), you still shouldn't use 1/6 notes. 1/4 and 1/8 notes work just fine. These 1/6 notes just feel random and don't sound good =/
00:11:877 (1,2,3,4,5) - It looks like you tried to make the hitcircles symmetrical with the slider, but.....didn't i guess. I recommend making these symmetrical or adjusting this pattern.
00:20:059 (2,3) - Not blanketed
00:25:877 (3,4,5) - These sliders have no synergy with each other. The first one doesn't flow into the other one, they aren't the same shape, and don't even look good next to each other.
00:32:968 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These NC's are unecessary
00:38:605 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Looks like you tried to blanket the hitcircle with the stream, but missed.
00:52:059 (5,6) - Can blanket better
01:10:302 (1,2,1) - These 1/6 notes should seriously be removed (sorry to be redundant)

I asked a high level player to test play your map and tell me what he thought, just to make sure I wasn't the only one who thinks this way. This is what he had to say: http://puu.sh/dQrer/0358bf5f8b.jpg http://puu.sh/dQs6T/ca1beee454.jpg

Just overall, your object placement needs a lot of work. It's really hard to explain what makes good object placement. Really it just comes from experience and learning from other experienced beatmappers.

Also, I think you should consider modders' suggestions a little more. I know it's your map, and you want to keep your style, but from reading all these other mods, you seem a little stubborn to be honest. (I'm not saying you should accept every recommendation in a mod) I'm really not trying to be mean, and I sincerely apologize if I have hurt your feelings with anything I have said. I will gladly answer any questions you have for me. Message me any time :)
Good luck!!
hehe
m4m
[extra]
00:11:332 - map this. very awkward gap

apart from that, i'm going to refrain from modding this, i cannot understand your mapping style. if i do it'll probably a waste of your time and mine. apologies

EDIT: Also, I forgot to mention, your difficulty name "A's Extra" might be unrankable. I believe it's a fairly new rule, but GD's have to be the mapper's name. That's why Azer had to change his "Extrazer" diff names to "Azer's Extra"
this is not necessary. A is fine if you think Avishay is too long.
[insane]
00:12:787 (2,3,4) - just neaten this by making one slider, copypaste and rotate by 120.
00:44:423 - drums in this portion are very distinct, instead of following the regular slider rhythm, you can use circles only for intensity. distinct drums on sliderends such as 00:44:968 - 00:45:514 - should really be emphasized with a circle, in my opinion.
00:58:059 (1) - here's a nice slider tip. since the voice is on the red tick at 00:58:423 - , you can make the elbow of the slider precisely at that point: http://i.imgur.com/tYpY3GW.png
[hard]
00:29:877 (7,1) - this is unnecessarily far. i dont see a need for much larger spacing here.
[easy]
00:21:150 (1,2,3,4) - weird rhythm, i think following vocals is fine. http://i.imgur.com/Dg19cEB.png plus you can NC 3 for a proper NC pattern here.
01:16:059 (4,1) - swap nc
nothing really stood out to me for normal. both are nice, flow diffs. really like the kiai in normal.
Avishay
Ok, if you insist. :)

Lack of blankets and stacking, with frequent overlapping cause your map to have a very messy look. You can say it's just your style, but most people dislike messy maps. Lack? They're not a must.

00:01:150 (3,4) - 00:04:059 (3,4) - 00:06:968 (2,3) - inconsistent with distance snap I know they're not consistent but I think it looks fine and plays fine as well.
00:03:696 (1,2,3) - Every note here is overlapping a previous note, and none of them have any sort of interaction with another note (i.e stack or blanket).
00:02:787 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - This pattern feels pretty unpleasant. Maybe a picture will help you. I'll draw the cursor movement through this combo. http://puu.sh/dQq17/829dae19d4.jpg It feels so much nicer when patterns have a lot of sharp, back and forth, angles. Such as a star pattern or something. This pattern you have only has one sharp angle, from 7 to 1. The rest of your combo is very linear. Of course, this is all situational, you will find both linear patterns and angled in beatmaps. But this awkward flow you make, just feels funny. Even something simple like this would feel better: http://puu.sh/dQqP7/1b3785e336.jpg I agree, it was awkward indeed and your explanation was great. I made a similar pattern.
00:06:787 (1,2) - Sloppy blanket Could've just said to fix the blanket, done.
00:10:968 (1,2,1) - Even if there are 1/6 notes here (which I still disagree with), you still shouldn't use 1/6 notes. 1/4 and 1/8 notes work just fine. These 1/6 notes just feel random and don't sound good =/ I have to disagree, first of all they sound great and play nicely, and just try to listen to it on 25% Playback rate while looking at the time line, those are 1/6 notes.
00:11:877 (1,2,3,4,5) - It looks like you tried to make the hitcircles symmetrical with the slider, but.....didn't i guess. I recommend making these symmetrical or adjusting this pattern. No I didn't try to do that, it would have been less curvy if I tried to, and it looks just fine.
00:20:059 (2,3) - Not blanketed Yes it is? I just don't want the slider to be too curvy.
00:25:877 (3,4,5) - These sliders have no synergy with each other. The first one doesn't flow into the other one, they aren't the same shape, and don't even look good next to each other. They do have a synergy, there's a break point right between them, I didn't want 3 to flow directly into 5 and I think they have cool synergy.
00:32:968 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These NC's are unecessary They follow the drums, and there's no clear rules for NC, I've seen new ranked maps with NC spammed on streams.
00:38:605 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Looks like you tried to blanket the hitcircle with the stream, but missed. Fixed.
00:52:059 (5,6) - Can blanket better Nya needs to update the map from the mod before you, it was fixed then :)
01:10:302 (1,2,1) - These 1/6 notes should seriously be removed (sorry to be redundant) Nope.

I asked a high level player to test play your map and tell me what he thought, just to make sure I wasn't the only one who thinks this way. This is what he had to say: http://puu.sh/dQrer/0358bf5f8b.jpg http://puu.sh/dQs6T/ca1beee454.jpg

Just overall, your object placement needs a lot of work. It's really hard to explain what makes good object placement. Really it just comes from experience and learning from other experienced beatmappers.

Also, I think you should consider modders' suggestions a little more. I know it's your map, and you want to keep your style, but from reading all these other mods, you seem a little stubborn to be honest. (I'm not saying you should accept every recommendation in a mod) I'm really not trying to be mean, and I sincerely apologize if I have hurt your feelings with anything I have said. I will gladly answer any questions you have for me. Message me any time :)
Good luck!! I do consider every small note, before I deny something I check it several times to make sure I really think that it is not right. Whenever I say "It is my style", I mean that I don't want to be regular and repetitive, I do it in my way to be unpredictable and original. And obviously some people will dislike it, just like a lot of people dislike Doko's and Skystar's mapping styles, but some people like those too.
Thank you, I've learned some new stuff thanks to you.

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Avishay

handsome wrote:

m4m
[extra]
00:11:332 - map this. very awkward gap Hm? It is mapped, as the end of 00:11:211 (1) - If you're talking about what afterwards, it is not even a beat gap.

apart from that, i'm going to refrain from modding this, i cannot understand your mapping style. if i do it'll probably a waste of your time and mine. apologies

EDIT: Also, I forgot to mention, your difficulty name "A's Extra" might be unrankable. I believe it's a fairly new rule, but GD's have to be the mapper's name. That's why Azer had to change his "Extrazer" diff names to "Azer's Extra"
this is not necessary. A is fine if you think Avishay is too long.
Grrum
Hi! M4M from your queue. Hope this helps!

[Easy]

00:24:423 (1,2) – move 2 down for better flow out of 1

00:30:605 (1,2,3) – the linear part of the 3 slider does not have the same slope as 1 and 2. Fix it so they have the same slope

00:44:423 (1,2) – blanket these better

00:54:605 (4,5,1) – it looks like you're running out of room. See if curving 00:53:150 (1) - and friends out further gives you more room like this: http://puu.sh/dUZwX/c8627a8dd1.jpg

00:59:696 (2,3,4) – these don't have perfect linear flow, as shown by this picture:
http://puu.sh/dUVsD/a05f8ee0c6.jpg
I recommend having these be linear. Try putting 01:00:787 (3,4) - at 111, 169

01:10:605 (1,2) – blanket these better

01:22:968 (2,3) – I think you should rotate this 35 degrees Counterclockwise for better flow from 1.
01:26:787 (2) – I think you should move left a little for better flow out of 1


[Normal]

00:06:605 (1,2) – 2 having better linear flow would be nice

00:08:787 (5) – move to 314, 106 for better linear flow out of 4

00:17:877 (6,7) – I'd like to see the flow into 7 be more circular and less triangular. Either that or make 00:18:605 (1) – lower to have better flow out of 7. Or both.

00:58:968 (1,2) – blanket these better
01:11:332 (3,4) – blanket these better

The hitsounds at the kiai felt like they could be improved. Right now the claps sometimes feel distracting, maybe because the volume is too loud. I tried putting the clap on the 3rd white tick of each measure and it works though it has its own problems. Definitely get some more opinions. These are what I didn't like about it.
The claps under sections like this were sorely missed 01:03:332 (3) - .
For a section like this that didn't fit the pattern, 01:07:696 (1,2,3,4) - try having the head of 2 and 3 be claps.
01:14:059 (2) – this clap felt bad on a slider end, which I think is more indicative of the problem with the hitsound pattern than with the notes.
01:22:241 (2,3) – try having 3 be a finish and the reverse part of 2 not be a finish

01:13:514 (1,2) – odd. I don't like having this have x bigger than 240, try 240, 152

01:17:514 (3) – try 496, 232 for better flow

01:26:787 (1,2,1) – I think if 2 and 1 aren't perfect linear flow out of the slider, then the slider should curve further away from the linear flow. Basically, I would change it to something like this:
http://puu.sh/dULeJ/6d11c3c3db.jpg
or like this: http://puu.sh/dVQ2h/2590f47510.jpg

[Hard]

00:10:968 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – change the claps to finishes, you need different hitsounds than the previous combo because they are too different.

00:17:514 (7,8,9,10) – 7 and 8 overlap when playing the game because 8, 9, 10, are stacked. Move 8, 9, 10 over right 8 and down 8.
00:59:514 (2,3,4) – same issue ^
01:16:059 (5,6,7,1) - ^
00:23:333 (5,6) – same issue ^, the blanket is messed up, plus I think 00:24:060 (8) – isn't perfectly blanketed either.

00:32:423 (6) – try 447, 365
00:46:968 (1,2,3,4,1) – try 330, 76
00:52:241 (6,7) – try 250, 288

00:58:969 (1,2,3,4,5) – move all these down so you flow into 01:00:968 (6) - better

01:06:060 (5,6) – blanket these better

01:08:242 (2) – I think this should come directly out of the previous slider. i.e. move it +6 to y so that the slope from the end of 1 to 2 is 1.5, the same slope from the anchor to the end. Alternatively change the end of 1 to flow directly into 2

01:13:878 (2,3) – blanket these better

01:20:423 (5,1) – try these and slider head as drum-claps to continue that hitsound pattern

01:23:696 (4) – I liked the finish on the head and not on either the middle or tail.

01:23:696 (4,5) – 5 has a weird flow off of 4

01:23:696 (4,1) – I don't like this overlap

[Insane]

The claps sound really heavy and kind of take over the song too much. Try a volume of around 60% throughout the beatmap

00:33:514 (3,4) – I don't like stacking these on 1 and 2, instead I would rather see a contrast to the pattern 00:21:150 (1,2,3,4) - . Try seeing if a symmetrical pattern would work.

00:41:150 (6,7,8) – didn't like the triple, try deleting 7. I like this change because it feels more of a rest time than an energy time. Miku stops singing, you come off a not common jump pattern, and you're about to launch into a new pattern. For all these reasons, I think it's better for the player to calm down with a simple stack instead of a triple.

00:58:968 (1) – consider making a slight sv increase here to emphasize the kiai section (I'm thinking about 1.1 or 1.15)

01:25:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – This didn't feel big enough as a finale. Try having 01:25:878 (5,6) - be spaced out more. I really think bigger jumps here has a good ending feel to it.

[Extra]

The drums did not sound good. The whistles here did sound good though 00:40:241 (2) - . I know it has been said in other mods, but I'll still fight you on this. The drums add way too much emphasis on parts that don't deserve emphasis. Because of this, your hitsounds overtake the music and I can't appreciate the song as much. Furthermore, when we get to the kiai section, a generally higher energy part of the song, the drums make it feel banal and boring because I'm so accustomed to the drums. There's no corresponding increase in energy in your map with the song. To make a comparison with distance snapping, it's as if you're putting really high jumps on really slow parts of the song. These are all concerns that I'd like to see addressed by argument rather than just hide behind the word style.

00:52:059 (5) - -1 to y for better blanket with 6

01:24:968 (1,2,3,4) – I like to think of this as a climactic part of the song, and I don't think the stacks do it justice. Make me jump. For this reason, you may need to calm down 01:24:059 (2,3,4,5,6) – to give the player a small rest before jumping into a climax. But I think of the two sections, 01:24:968 (1,2,3,4) – this should feel stronger, and I feel strongly about this.

Good map overall, but please please please please please change the drum hitsounds.
Avishay

pinataman wrote:

[Extra]

The drums did not sound good. The whistles here did sound good though 00:40:241 (2) - . I know it has been said in other mods, but I'll still fight you on this. The drums add way too much emphasis on parts that don't deserve emphasis. Because of this, your hitsounds overtake the music and I can't appreciate the song as much. Furthermore, when we get to the kiai section, a generally higher energy part of the song, the drums make it feel banal and boring because I'm so accustomed to the drums. There's no corresponding increase in energy in your map with the song. To make a comparison with distance snapping, it's as if you're putting really high jumps on really slow parts of the song. These are all concerns that I'd like to see addressed by argument rather than just hide behind the word style.

00:52:059 (5) - -1 to y for better blanket with 6

01:24:968 (1,2,3,4) – I like to think of this as a climactic part of the song, and I don't think the stacks do it justice. Make me jump. For this reason, you may need to calm down 01:24:059 (2,3,4,5,6) – to give the player a small rest before jumping into a climax. But I think of the two sections, 01:24:968 (1,2,3,4) – this should feel stronger, and I feel strongly about this.

Good map overall, but please please please please please change the drum hitsounds.
I honestly don't dislike the hitsounds, but I guess they can be better, I've fixed / changed what you've noted and I will rework the hitsounds tomorrow.
Avishay
Alright, I finished doing the hitsounds again, I used the normal and soft sets, but without any custom hitsounds, I think it is fine, I also changed some patterns in the diff as well.

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308,172,42605,6,0,P|260:204|208:204,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,132,43059,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,92,43150,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,96,43332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,268,43514,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,268,43605,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,268,43696,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,172,43877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,268,44059,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,316,44423,5,8,0:0:0:0:
232,256,44696,2,0,P|164:204|48:248,1,202.500007724762,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,108,45211,2,0,L|320:174,1,67.5000025749208,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,128,45483,2,0,B|168:100|168:100|232:136|280:108,1,157.500006008148,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,108,45756,2,0,L|408:96,1,67.5000025749208,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,208,46059,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,264,46241,5,8,0:0:0:0:
188,52,46423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,300,46605,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,272,46696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,236,46787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,196,46877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,136,46968,5,8,0:0:0:0:
284,164,47059,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,164,47150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,144,47241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,100,47332,5,8,0:0:0:0:
176,300,47514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,204,47696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,188,47877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,236,47968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,284,48059,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,136,48241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,40,48423,2,0,B|228:48|176:76|176:76|140:116,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,204,48968,5,0,0:0:0:0:
175,297,49150,2,0,P|179:253|203:215,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,188,49423,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,160,49514,2,0,B|219:128|219:128|194:130,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,284,49877,2,0,B|316:315|316:315|341:313,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,201,50241,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,168,50423,1,2,0:0:0:0:
431,135,50605,1,10,0:0:0:0:
228,102,50787,5,2,0:0:0:0:
105,137,50968,2,0,L|79:223,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,68,51332,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,272,51514,5,0,0:0:0:0:
328,238,51696,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,192,51787,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,148,51877,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,192,52059,2,0,P|224:176|252:132,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,169,52423,2,0,P|128:256|208:272,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,220,52877,2,0,L|252:192,1,45,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,52,53150,6,0,B|240:112|280:156|256:232,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,320,53696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,320,53787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,320,53877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,212,54059,2,0,P|92:152|120:124,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,212,54605,6,0,P|420:152|392:124,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,160,54968,2,0,B|135:174|135:174|156:132|140:101,1,135,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,60,55332,2,0,P|112:28|164:24,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,40,55696,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,256,55877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,212,56059,6,0,B|344:232|344:232|376:184,1,135,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,196,56423,2,0,B|392:172|392:172|332:184,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,191,56696,1,2,0:0:0:0:
234,201,56787,6,0,L|188:210,1,45,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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304,208,57514,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,68,58059,5,0,0:0:0:0:
264,312,58423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,312,58605,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,140,58968,5,8,0:0:0:0:
144,232,59150,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,136,59332,2,0,B|296:99|296:99|376:111,1,135.000005149842,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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444,164,59696,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,252,59877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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364,176,60605,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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236,96,61059,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,88,61150,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,280,61332,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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448,176,61696,5,2,0:0:0:0:
448,176,61787,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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228,280,62241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,140,62423,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,164,62514,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,200,62605,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,320,62787,5,2,0:0:0:0:
328,284,62968,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,100,63150,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,100,63241,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,100,63332,5,8,0:0:0:0:
288,104,63423,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,108,63514,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,112,63605,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,172,63696,5,8,0:0:0:0:
204,180,63787,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,204,63877,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,236,63968,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,304,64059,5,8,0:0:0:0:
296,324,64150,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,324,64241,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,304,64332,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,244,64423,6,0,L|28:192,1,67.5000025749208,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,168,64605,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,160,64696,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,152,64787,1,12,0:0:0:0:
236,60,64968,5,0,0:0:0:0:
404,116,65150,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,272,65332,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,256,65423,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,240,65514,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,120,65696,2,0,L|308:171,1,135.000005149842,2|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,204,66059,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,137,66149,1,2,0:0:0:0:
343,90,66241,6,0,P|264:124|200:120,1,135.000005149842,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,88,66605,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,244,66787,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,200,66968,2,0,P|284:260|224:304,1,135.000005149842,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,88,67332,1,12,0:0:0:0:
76,88,67696,5,0,0:0:0:0:
206,74,67877,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,120,67968,1,2,0:0:0:0:
218,163,68059,2,0,L|280:44,1,135.000005149842,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,183,68605,2,0,P|201:249|132:148,1,270.000010299683,4|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,40,69150,5,10,0:0:0:0:
156,52,69241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
206,74,69332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,120,69423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,172,69514,1,10,0:0:0:0:
212,220,69605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,240,69696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,228,69787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,180,69877,5,10,0:0:0:0:
136,164,69968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,180,70059,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,220,70150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,232,70241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,204,70302,6,0,L|364:180,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,112,70483,2,0,L|444:88,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,196,70756,6,0,L|426:330,1,135.000005149842,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,188,71150,5,2,0:0:0:0:
64,188,71241,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,188,71332,6,0,L|86:54,1,135.000005149842,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,272,71696,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,188,71877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,188,71968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,188,72059,2,0,P|120:143|184:127,1,135.000005149842,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,164,72332,5,2,0:0:0:0:
219,164,72423,2,0,P|268:112|268:44,1,135.000005149842,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,76,72787,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,105,72877,1,2,0:0:0:0:
301,135,72968,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,251,73150,6,0,P|335:308|270:314,1,135.000005149842,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,244,73514,2,0,P|100:188|32:188,2,135.000005149842,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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316,224,74423,2,0,P|336:152|384:124,1,112.500004291535,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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188,138,74877,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,138,74968,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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300,216,75423,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,248,75514,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,284,75605,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,324,75696,5,8,0:0:0:0:
324,300,75787,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,256,75877,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,224,75968,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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480,160,76423,2,0,P|468:224|444:192,1,135.000005149842,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,168,76787,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,264,76968,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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172,180,77150,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,168,77332,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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232,120,78605,2,0,P|283:78|350:71,1,135.000005149842,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,136,78968,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,52,79150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,144,79332,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,188,79423,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,232,79514,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,288,79696,5,8,0:0:0:0:
140,96,79877,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,140,79968,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,184,80059,1,10,0:0:0:0:
192,288,80241,5,2,0:0:0:0:
272,204,80423,2,0,P|340:156|400:152,1,135.000005149842,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,160,80696,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,176,80787,1,2,0:0:0:0:
316,292,80968,5,0,0:0:0:0:
164,184,81150,2,0,B|180:176|214:102|214:102|231:142,1,135.000005149842,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,204,81423,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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448,220,82423,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,252,82514,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Pappy
LATE but M4M here. Sorry for delay.

General
  1. Remove tv size from tags and add tv_size. When you write "tv" in search, you'll find nothing. (it's too short word)
  2. Hitsounding is strange, the good way to it choosed Milan-. You should do these like him. :>
A's Extra
  1. Hitsounding is strange. You should use Hitsound Copier or something and copy Milan-'s or -Nya-'s hitsounds (if he agree.)
  2. This diff is really overmapped. Unwanted 1/6 sounds/plays bad.
Milan
  1. 00:05:514 (3) - It should be 1/2 than note at 00:05:787 , it's confusing. ;w;
  2. No problems here, nice diff as always. <3
Hard
  1. 00:07:332 (2,3,4) - It's not good place for jump, music doesn't call for it.
  2. 00:09:878 (2) - Ctrl+G for nice flow with (1)
  3. 00:46:968 (1,2,3,4) - plz no 170 BPM streams in hard diff. ;_;
  4. 01:07:696 (1) - What about deleting it and insert here Ctrl+C 01:06:968 (8) (Use Ctrl+G on it after copy) for better looking.
  5. 01:12:060 (4) - You should do the same with 01:11:332 (3) (after it move 01:12:605 (5) )
  6. 00:54:605 (1,2,3) - What about this? If you want it, delete previous ones and insert into .osu this:
    Here
    256,192,54605,6,0,P|277:144|268:107,1,70
    348,98,54968,2,0,P|378:140|414:150,1,70
    382,224,55332,2,0,P|330:228|303:255,1,70
Normal
  1. It isn't bad. I don't have any advices to this diff, sorry. :<
Easy
  1. 00:21:877 (2,3,4) - Try to dothisfor symmetry
The map isn't bad, but you should improve visual side of map, spacing issues on hard and definietly hitsounds. :)

Good luck with this! :D
Sorry for a bit short mod. >.<
Arcubin
from Q :D

it's my 3rd time modding BRS song `w` nvm that

[General]
  1. Remove normal-slidertick from folder since you doesn't use it to tick anything the whole mapset
  2. personally i don't like your hitsounding :3
[Easy]
00:21:150 (1) - i don't think this flow is good ._.
00:44:423 (1,2) - blanket
00:55:696 (5) - if you want, this circle can be removed so it follow vocal better and lower the diff a bit (tho.. it's your oppinion)
00:58:968 (1,2) - if this is supposed to be blanket then fix it... if no then ignore this
01:00:787 (3,4) - blanket better
01:08:241 (1) - move the tail a bit upper to get better flow
01:18:241 (3,4) - fix blanket?

quite good, but note intensity is kind like harder than easy

[Normal]
00:01:696 (3,4) - blanket with end better
00:08:787 (5,1) - blanket better
00:10:605 (2,3) - ^
00:20:423 (5,1) - ^
00:22:241 (2,3) - ^
00:29:514 (6) - maybe change 00:29:877 - to circle since it's a potential downbeat
00:35:332 (7,1) - blanket?
00:40:059 (4) - fix the end part as a standing slider?
00:46:241 (3,4) - blanket
01:11:332 (3,4) - wanna fix
01:18:241 (4,5,6) - might too harsh for a "real" normal
01:21:877 (1,2,3,4) - blanket

so much blanket problem, too much 1/2 stream for a normal

[Hard]
00:07:696 (4,1) - not good anti-jump :3
00:29:514 (5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/dXcuZ.jpg some hard player can't read circle behind slider :<
00:30:423 (2,3) - why don't make a better flow? like http://puu.sh/eheQT.jpg http://puu.sh/ehf1V.jpg
00:34:241 (1,2,3,4,5) - make this look nicer?
00:41:151 (5,1) - this anti-jump isn't inteded to follow anything... consider to stac properly
00:42:060 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:45:514 (3,4) - make this straight look nicer http://puu.sh/ehfwd.jpg
00:46:968 (1,2,3,4) - in many case, stream with more than 5 note isn't pleased for hard. well, just pointing out don't mind this if you want this stream
00:49:877 (4,1) - blanket fix (slider body blanket i mean)
01:02:605 (3) - ctrl+g, rotate by -53 degree and move to (176,320)
01:14:605 (4,1) - please change... ;w; this is so bad
01:16:423 (1,2) - fix blanket
01:19:696 (2,3) - ^
01:26:787 (1,2,3) - it will be good if you separate each note

[Milan-'s Insane]
00:41:514 (1) - add finish at start
00:47:332 (1) - ^

this one is good :>

[A's Extra]
i can't get what you're following :> by the way, it's not an extra. it's till considered as insane tho it's harder than milan-'s insane. and NC placing is still bad

00:12:423 (5) - add finish
00:25:150 (1) - why there's finish on head?
00:25:150 - normal hitsound? not good... change it to soft instead
00:25:150 (1,3) - please this overlap... =w=
00:44:696 (2) - this slider kinda bad. cause it's occur 3/4 beats before a circle. try remap this section
00:52:877 (7,1) - overlap =w=
01:10:756 (1) - what this slider is following?
01:16:059 (1) - slider isn't visible cause of hitburst. try move it away
01:24:514 (5) - ctrl+g

i don't know... there's so much overmapped note ;w;
Avishay

azintairin710 wrote:

[A's Extra]
i can't get what you're following :> by the way, it's not an extra. it's till considered as insane tho it's harder than milan-'s insane. and NC placing is still bad

00:12:423 (5) - add finish V
00:25:150 (1) - why there's finish on head? Oops.
00:25:150 - normal hitsound? not good... change it to soft instead Nope
00:25:150 (1,3) - please this overlap... =w= That's fine.
00:44:696 (2) - this slider kinda bad. cause it's occur 3/4 beats before a circle. try remap this section The only thing I fixed is 00:44:423 (1) - 's placement
00:52:877 (7,1) - overlap =w= You'll survive, I think this overlap is neat.
01:10:756 (1) - what this slider is following? The beat? Listen to the song at 25% Playback rate.
01:16:059 (1) - slider isn't visible cause of hitburst. try move it away I think it's fine since you can see the slider itself, but I also have fixed the arrangement of 01:15:696 (1,2,3,4) -
01:24:514 (5) - ctrl+g It is on purpose.

i don't know... there's so much overmapped note ;w; I'll have to disagree :)
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