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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 05 April 2015 at 12:45:32 PM

Artist: supercell feat. Hatsune Miku
Title: BLACK ROCK SHOOTER
Source: ブラック★ロックシューター
Tags: opening Burakku Rokku Shuta Vocaloid Vocaloid2 tv_size milan- Avishay ryo
BPM: 165
Filesize: 19951kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. A's Extra (5.42 stars, 469 notes)
  2. Easy (1.42 stars, 99 notes)
  3. Hard (3.24 stars, 250 notes)
  4. Milan-'s Insane (4.46 stars, 438 notes)
  5. Normal (2.02 stars, 156 notes)


Download: supercell feat. Hatsune Miku - BLACK ROCK SHOOTER
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Thanks so much for the awesome GD's, Milan- and Avishay!~

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posted
[General]

  1. Tag add "BLACK★ROCK SHOOTER" Source is written in English is required because the source of the tag now Japanese
  2. Easy diff remove Widescreen Support please


[Easy]

Easy diff distance 0.8? not sure this i think 1.0~1.1 batter

00:00:787 (1) - Head add soft finish please. Here will emphasize the beginning
00:05:150 (1,2) - Swap NC here. Since the start-up sound in a (2) slider.
00:12:423 (4,1) - same(^)
00:21:150 (1) - delete NC here i think this don't need NC
00:40:787 - add note batter. Well what is there a reason you didn't add a note?
00:49:514 (3) - spacing check please. Doesn't fit fine.
01:08:423 (4) - move 01:08:249 - here? vocal flow this
01:09:150 (1) - move 01:08:968 - here slider and 01:10:241 - here
01:10:605 (1) - add soft finish?. i feel batter there.

[Normal]

HP, OD -1 The easy difficulty setting is low. I need to lower it even normal.

00:00:787 (1) - same Easy diff "Head add soft finish"
00:05:150 (1) - Delete NC?
00:06:605 (1) - head add finish please. your missing this?
00:10:968 (3,4) - Rhythm is bad. please Change 1.1 slider to add a note. i think very best.


00:13:877 (2) - Missing blanket?. this batter


00:17:877 - drum sound flow please. add note
00:35:332 - ^
01:07:696 (1,2,3,4,5) - hmm vocal flow batter. here is photo and code
340,344,67696,6,0,P|288:336|228:344,1,110
188,356,68241,2,0,P|180:301|188:247,1,110
212,164,68968,2,0,L|40:180,1,165,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,268,69877,2,0,P|90:306|143:317,1,110
01:10:605 (1) - head add finish
01:12:059 (3,4) - swap patten is batter Rhythm.
01:16:423 (1) - head add finish

[Hard]
AR +2 now is low AR

00:00:787 (1) - same Easy diff "Head add soft finish"
00:14:969 (1,2) - I suggest a pattern


00:19:151 (2,3) - Ctrl + g Rhythm batter here
00:23:333 (1) - head and tail add Normal clap batter
00:24:060 (3) - bad distance. I think that reducing the spacing.


00:57:150 (4) - add soft finish?
01:00:969 (2,3) - Ctrl + g Rhythm batter here
01:04:787 (1) - Ctrl + g?. now is bad flowing jump patten
01:08:423 (3) - Delete Note please. flow is vocal
01:12:605 (5,6) - Ctrl + g Rhythm batter here
01:20:696 (1) - spiner start 01:20:787 - this
01:22:241 - green line resnap please.

Best of Luck~
posted

HabiHolic wrote:

[General]

  1. Tag add "BLACK★ROCK SHOOTER" Source is written in English is required because the source of the tag now Japanese Added the extra tagbut I think I have to have the japanese version for the source because in my previous map, modders told me to add the japanese version to the source
  2. Easy diff remove Widescreen Support please Ok


[Easy]

Easy diff distance 0.8? not sure this i think 1.0~1.1 batter No, I feel 1.0 or 1.1 makes the distance too far away. I like how it is now

00:00:787 (1) - Head add soft finish please. Here will emphasize the beginning Okay, added
00:05:150 (1,2) - Swap NC here. Since the start-up sound in a (2) slider. You're right. Fixed
00:12:423 (4,1) - same(^) Ok
00:21:150 (1) - delete NC here i think this don't need NC Ok
00:40:787 - add note batter. Well what is there a reason you didn't add a note? Added the note. (I missed the beat there)
00:49:514 (3) - spacing check please. Doesn't fit fine. The spacing looks fine to me . . .
01:08:423 (4) - move 01:08:249 - here? vocal flow this Followed your suggestion
01:09:150 (1) - move 01:08:968 - here slider and 01:10:241 - here Followed your suggestion
01:10:605 (1) - add soft finish?. i feel batter there. Okay

[Normal]

HP, OD -1 The easy difficulty setting is low. I need to lower it even normal.

00:00:787 (1) - same Easy diff "Head add soft finish" Ok
00:05:150 (1) - Delete NC? Ok
00:06:605 (1) - head add finish please. your missing this? Good idea
00:10:968 (3,4) - Rhythm is bad. please Change 1.1 slider to add a note. i think very best. Followed your suggestion


00:13:877 (2) - Missing blanket?. this batter Yeah, that does look better. Fixed


00:17:877 - drum sound flow please. add note Note added
00:35:332 - ^ ^
01:07:696 (1,2,3,4,5) - hmm vocal flow batter. here is photo and code Yeah. I like your flow better. Followed your suggestion
340,344,67696,6,0,P|288:336|228:344,1,110
188,356,68241,2,0,P|180:301|188:247,1,110
212,164,68968,2,0,L|40:180,1,165,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,268,69877,2,0,P|90:306|143:317,1,110
01:10:605 (1) - head add finish Ok
01:12:059 (3,4) - swap patten is batter Rhythm. Yeah, you're right. Fixed
01:16:423 (1) - head add finish Okay

[Hard]
AR +2 now is low AR Ok, my AR is now 8

00:00:787 (1) - same Easy diff "Head add soft finish" Ok
00:14:969 (1,2) - I suggest a pattern Followed your suggestion


00:19:151 (2,3) - Ctrl + g Rhythm batter here Followed your suggestion
00:23:333 (1) - head and tail add Normal clap batter Good idea, added the claps
00:24:060 (3) - bad distance. I think that reducing the spacing. Ok


00:57:150 (4) - add soft finish? Good idea, added
01:00:969 (2,3) - Ctrl + g Rhythm batter here Ok
01:04:787 (1) - Ctrl + g?. now is bad flowing jump patten Yes, that looks better
01:08:423 (3) - Delete Note please. flow is vocal Ok, removed the note
01:12:605 (5,6) - Ctrl + g Rhythm batter here Ok
01:20:696 (1) - spiner start 01:20:787 - this Ok
01:22:241 - green line resnap please. Fixed

Best of Luck~ Thank you!
Thanks so much for the mod! :D
posted
Just quick mod:

I just mod metadata:
Artist is correct: Hatsune Miku change to ---> ryo(supercell) feat.初音ミク (Romaji). ryo(supercell) feat.Hatsune Miku (English) (http://vgmdb.net/album/31673 (I know is nothing but use that artist and not change Miku Hatsune)
Tittle is Correct: Black Rock Shooter change to -----> ブラック★ロックシューター (Romaji) BLACK★ROCK SHOOTER or BLACK ROCK SHOOTER (English) (http://vgmdb.net/album/31382)
Add in tags: Vocaloid and Vocaloid2

NO KDS~ and Good Luck~
posted
Hi, M4M here
Hi, M4M here~
[General]
artist should be supercell and add hatsune miku to tags .It's new rule.
[easy]
00:05:150 (4) - add fin at head
00:06:605 (1) - ^
00:32:787 (1) - ^
01:03:332 (1) - ^
00:09:514 (1) - add fin
00:21:150 (3) - ^
00:58:968 (1) - ^
01:19:514 (1) - ^

[normal]
the hitsound suggestion mostly the same as easy
00:08:787 (5,1) - fix blanket
00:27:332 (1) - move this a bit left and stack 00:27:696 (2) - on 00:25:877 (3) -
00:38:241 (5,1) - blanket
01:13:514 (1,2) - ^
01:21:877 (1,2) - ^
01:23:696 (3,4) - ^

[hard]
00:22:969 (3,4) - move to anther place ,so 2 circle become a group 2x2 suggest move to(203,172)
00:29:332 add a circle
00:56:060 (1) - change to a 1/2 slider and add a circle at 00:56:787 rhythm will be better
00:57:605 maybe can add a spinner here
01:05:333 (2) - move a bit left (366,283)

GL :)
posted

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Just quick mod:

I just mod metadata:
Artist is correct: Hatsune Miku change to ---> ryo(supercell) feat.初音ミク (Romaji). ryo(supercell) feat.Hatsune Miku (English) (http://vgmdb.net/album/31673 (I know is nothing but use that artist and not change Miku Hatsune)
Tittle is Correct: Black Rock Shooter change to -----> ブラック★ロックシューター (Romaji) BLACK★ROCK SHOOTER or BLACK ROCK SHOOTER (English) (http://vgmdb.net/album/31382)
Add in tags: Vocaloid and Vocaloid2

NO KDS~ and Good Luck~
I changed everything, but I just hope I understood everything.
Thanks! :D
posted

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

Hi, M4M here
Hi, M4M here~
[General]
artist should be supercell and add hatsune miku to tags .It's new rule. I already changed it. Followed Gokugohan's advice
[easy]
00:05:150 (4) - add fin at head
00:06:605 (1) - ^
00:32:787 (1) - ^
01:03:332 (1) - ^
00:09:514 (1) - add fin
00:21:150 (3) - ^
00:58:968 (1) - ^
01:19:514 (1) - ^ Followed all your hitsound suggestions

[normal]
the hitsound suggestion mostly the same as easy
00:08:787 (5,1) - fix blanket Okay, tried to improve it
00:27:332 (1) - move this a bit left and stack 00:27:696 (2) - on 00:25:877 (3) - Good suggestion. Fixed
00:38:241 (5,1) - blanket Okay
01:13:514 (1,2) - ^ Improved it a bit
01:21:877 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:23:696 (3,4) - ^ ^

[hard]
00:22:969 (3,4) - move to anther place ,so 2 circle become a group 2x2 suggest move to(203,172) I'm gonna keep it as it is for now. I just like mine better
00:29:332 add a circle Ok, added
00:56:060 (1) - change to a 1/2 slider and add a circle at 00:56:787 rhythm will be better Ok, good idea
00:57:605 maybe can add a spinner here No, I think it will then be too short
01:05:333 (2) - move a bit left (366,283) Fixed

GL :)Thanks!
Thank you for the mod! Will mod your map soon. :D
posted
m4m o-o

[General]
  1. how bout get a 1366 x 768 bg?
  2. you should honestly get a better quality mp3 =w=. or maybe its just me


[Hard]
  1. 00:03:696 (4) - NC?? more consistent imo
  2. it seems like hitsounds are a bit wip? where is that 2 4 clap pattern?
  3. 00:09:514 - honestly the claps here are kinda lound and stand out too much from the music
  4. 00:22:605 (1,2,3,4) - consider putting these into patterns of 2. would be more intuitive imo
  5. 00:28:423 (1) - not really much in the music to support such a wiggly slider shape = =
  6. 00:30:242 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - spacing makes them seem like 1/4 rhythms, also imo there is no reason for it to be spaced like this. not intuitive. just space it normally. no clear change in the music here either.
  7. 00:34:242 (1,2,3) - same as above. but the strong drum sounds REALLY suggest against your spacing here
    00:56:059 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
    00:50:241 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
    01:06:787 (2,3) - ^
    01:10:605 (1,2,3) - ^
  8. 00:35:696 (1) - the bigger jump should be to this finish sound since it's stronger and not 00:35:333 (4,5) -
  9. 00:44:969 (2,3) - ctrl g this for a better rhythm
  10. 01:06:787 (2,3) - really strong sound, map this out
  11. 01:10:605 (1,2,3) - spacing inconsistency
  12. 01:20:787 (1,1) - the time is too short between the spinner end and the slider. honestly, if you can't find a good way to fit a spinner in, just simply don't place it. however, if you insist on keeping it, then place 01:22:242 (1) - closer to the middle a bit.
  13. 01:20:787 - ene kiai here for consistency?


[normal]
  1. 00:19:696 (4,5) - blanket cud honestly be better
  2. 01:09:150 - finish sound should really be mapped out
  3. 01:26:241 (3,1) - rhythm suggestion. there isn't really anything on the downbeat so leave it empty. this is more intuitive imo


[Easy]
  1. 00:05:150 (4) - bad rhythm, strong sounds are on 00:05:514 - 00:05:877 - do this
  2. 00:44:423 (1) - consider this

    then add circle at 00:45:877 -
posted
Why you add TV Size in tittle?
I think in vgmdb, not have a write TV Size.
If In vgmdb is not a write TV Size or other name TV Size, pls not add TV Size in tittle, but add in Tags.
posted

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Why you add TV Size in tittle?
I think in vgmdb, not have a write TV Size.
If In vgmdb is not a write TV Size or other name TV Size, pls not add TV Size in tittle, but add in Tags.
Oh. My forgot. please Remove "TV Size"
posted

Kibbleru wrote:

m4m o-o

[General]
  1. how bout get a 1366 x 768 bg? I hope a 1392 × 870 is alright
  2. you should honestly get a better quality mp3 =w=. or maybe its just me I think the mp3 is ok. I also struggled to get a nice one.


[Hard]
  1. 00:03:696 (4) - NC?? more consistent imo Ok
  2. it seems like hitsounds are a bit wip? where is that 2 4 clap pattern? I don't really follow a specific pattern. I mix the hitsounds up
  3. 00:09:514 - honestly the claps here are kinda lound and stand out too much from the music Ok, I lowered the volume there to 40%
  4. 00:22:605 (1,2,3,4) - consider putting these into patterns of 2. would be more intuitive imo Ok (Someone else also suggested that)
  5. 00:28:423 (1) - not really much in the music to support such a wiggly slider shape = = I disagree. Hatsune's voice sounds like wavery there.
  6. 00:30:242 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - spacing makes them seem like 1/4 rhythms, also imo there is no reason for it to be spaced like this. not intuitive. just space it normally. no clear change in the music here either. Ok, spaced the notes there normally
  7. 00:34:242 (1,2,3) - same as above. Spaced normally but the strong drum sounds REALLY suggest against your spacing here
    00:56:059 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ DS'd this part
    00:50:241 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ ^
    01:06:787 (2,3) - ^ ^
    01:10:605 (1,2,3) - ^ Only DS the 1 and 2 slider
  8. 00:35:696 (1) - the bigger jump should be to this finish sound since it's stronger and not 00:35:333 (4,5) - Ok, followed your suggestion
  9. 00:44:969 (2,3) - ctrl g this for a better rhythm No, I think it sounds worse if I Ctrl+G it, no change
  10. 01:06:787 (2,3) - really strong sound, map this out I'm not sure what you mean . . .
  11. 01:10:605 (1,2,3) - spacing inconsistency Fixed
  12. 01:20:787 (1,1) - the time is too short between the spinner end and the slider. honestly, if you can't find a good way to fit a spinner in, just simply don't place it. however, if you insist on keeping it, then place 01:22:242 (1) - closer to the middle a bit. Not really. When I played it, I didn't have a problem, but I will see what the other modders say as well
  13. 01:20:787 - ene kiai here for consistency? No, I'm keeping the kiai time as it is now. But I will also look and see what other modders say


[normal]
  1. 00:19:696 (4,5) - blanket cud honestly be better Tried my best to improve the blanket
  2. 01:09:150 - finish sound should really be mapped out I didn't place a finish sound there . . .
  3. 01:26:241 (3,1) - rhythm suggestion. there isn't really anything on the downbeat so leave it empty. this is more intuitive imo Good idea. Followed your suggestion


[Easy]
  1. 00:05:150 (4) - bad rhythm, strong sounds are on 00:05:514 - 00:05:877 - do this Followed your suggestion
  2. 00:44:423 (1) - consider this No, I like my pattern better

    then add circle at 00:45:877 -
Thank you so much for the mod. Will mod your map soon! :D
posted

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Why you add TV Size in tittle?
I think in vgmdb, not have a write TV Size.
If In vgmdb is not a write TV Size or other name TV Size, pls not add TV Size in tittle, but add in Tags.

HabiHolic wrote:

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Why you add TV Size in tittle?
I think in vgmdb, not have a write TV Size.
If In vgmdb is not a write TV Size or other name TV Size, pls not add TV Size in tittle, but add in Tags.
Oh. My forgot. please Remove "TV Size"
Oops, sorry guys. Removed "TV Size"
Thanks for correcting me :D
posted


to map something out means to place a note there
posted
SEE's Modding Queue

M4M req. :)

[General]

-For me it's unnecessary Kiai, but it's only my opinion.

[Easy]

-Do not overlap notes. Try 0.9 or even 1.0 DS for this map. Eg. here: 00:00:787 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1)
-00:35:696 (1) - Make it more symmetrical, I think it's better.

[Normal]

-00:26:241 (4) - Make it more like this:
-00:25:877 (3,2) - Stack this circle end beginning of slider.
-00:42:059 (2) - Correct blanket to this: 00:43:332 (4).
-01:01:877 (1) - Try this, for me looks better:
-01:15:696 (5,1) - Correct blanket.

[Hard]

-00:07:333 (3) - No reverse 1/2 long.
-00:32:787 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe square?
-00:53:151 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Generally really good mapset. :) Good luck~ :D
posted
Hi Nya~! Sorry for late mod T_T
Here we go~

[General]
  1. Make Insane~! Make Insane~!
  2. Your BG size seems a bit weird. Better to keep the ratio 4:3. So you better do some cutting. Maybe try 1022x767~?
[Easy]
  1. I read the previous mod a bit and I think I kinda agree to increase the DS multiplier a bit. Since 1/1 note like these 00:00:787 (1,2) - overlap each other with 0.8x DS. It looks untidy. But yeah, you have to remap a bit -,-
  2. 00:05:150 (4) - Maybe would look better if you curve it the other way... http://puu.sh/c7MAm/1c6017a512.jpg Still not look that good though... But at least I think better...
  3. 00:21:150 (3,4) - The flow from (3) don't seems to be really good.... Maybe you can try to make (3) leads directly to (4) and then make a little modification of (4)'s shape. Like this : http://puu.sh/c7MR5/32c31e18b5.jpg
  4. 00:41:514 (1,2) - I don't want to mention blanket... But these two could blanket better.
  5. 01:01:150 (3,1) - I think you better stack (1)'s head with (3)'s end... Move (4) a bit if you want.
  6. 01:08:605 Why ignore this? there's kinda big sound here... Add a note.
  7. 01:12:059 (3,4) - Blanket their bodies better?
  8. 01:17:877 (3) - This rhythm is good. But maybe would be better with a note here 01:17:877 and a single slider (wave slider would be good ~) here 01:18:605 because the vocal kinda change. Just personal opinion :)
  9. 01:23:696 (1,2,3,1,2) - Maybe remake the rhythm a bit. Let's start with empty timeline. 01:23:696 A note here is correct, add a note there. 01:24:423 here, instead of starting a slider, add a note instead. 01:25:150 Start a 1 1/2 reverse slider here. 01:26:787 Start a slider and end it here 01:27:696 Last, add a note here 01:28:059 http://puu.sh/c7Nfa/478e45e755.jpg I think that would follow the music better.
[Normal]
  1. Maybe AR 5 would fit the map better because the SV is kinda high...
  2. 00:03:696 (1,2) - This don't look too good imo... Maybe move (2) a bit upward and make it less curvy... http://puu.sh/c7Nti/c6ccfb611c.jpg Would lead to (3) better that way.
  3. 00:10:968 (3) - I think... better curve this the other way...
  4. 00:16:787 (4) - Make the rhythm just like this 00:15:332 (1,2) - Use identical slider if you want to. It makes a repeating-like pattern which is cool imo B)
  5. 00:25:877 (3,2) - Stack? o-o
  6. 00:29:514 (4,5) - I think this rhythm is not too good for Normal. Newbies will click (5) kinda late. Just like 1/4 slider with a note in the end for us. Just change it to 1/2 reverse slider maybe?
  7. 00:42:059 (2) - Move this 1/2 tick backward and add a note here 00:42:059 Follows the music better. http://puu.sh/c7NHA/88629c3347.jpg
  8. 00:50:241 (1,2,3) - Adjust the position a bit. Try to make (3)'s point placed at (1)'s blanket with (3) still blanketing (2). Around like this : http://puu.sh/c7NMY/f0ebda23ac.jpg And just move the pattern a bit upward so you won't have to DS the next notes.
  9. 01:13:514 (1,2) - Maybe this rhythm follows the music better. Because there's kinda big vocal here 01:14:059 : http://puu.sh/c7NTc/74bddefb25.jpg Kinda tricky indeed.
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:151 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe just make a rectangle shape outta these?
  2. 00:07:151 (2,3) - Swap these two in timeline. Make better triplet sound. http://puu.sh/c7O2w/3ff91f1142.jpg
  3. 00:08:060 (1) - This is... undermapped... Just make the same rhythm as this 00:06:605 (1,2,3,4,5) - With a little creation like using 3 circles for triplet or something.
  4. 00:09:514 (1,2,3) - Would be good to increase the hitsound for every slider.
  5. 00:30:242 (1,2,3) - Did you change the DS multiplier? I don't think it's necessary, the music doesn't change much o-o
  6. 00:42:242 (3) - Ctrl+g this, the flow would be better.
  7. 00:46:969 (6) - Change this to stream. Like this : http://puu.sh/c7OeZ/4b62eedbfd.jpg The music supports it.
  8. 00:50:787 (2) - Move this 1/2 tick backward and add a note here 00:50:787
  9. 00:57:605 Good to start a spinner here. End it here 00:58:605
  10. 01:06:242 (1,2,3) - You change DS a lot o-o I don't understand...
  11. 01:08:787 (4) - Better move this 1/2 tick backward. Just follow the vocal this time
  12. 01:18:242 (2) - Undermapped, follow the vocal. Add note every 1/2 tick.

As far as I can see... Your Hard is undermapped a lot o-o This could be a lot harder, don't use too many pause, try to fill every 1/2 tick for hard. Add more triplets and stream. It's good, but it can be better :)
Okay, that's all~!
Good luck ~:3
posted

Kibbleru wrote:



to map something out means to place a note there
Thanks for filling me in on that :D
posted

streeteelf wrote:

SEE's Modding Queue

M4M req. :)

[General]

-For me it's unnecessary Kiai, but it's only my opinion. I think I should definitely have kiai time

[Easy]

-Do not overlap notes. Try 0.9 or even 1.0 DS for this map. Eg. here: 00:00:787 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) Ok, changed the DS to 1.0
-00:35:696 (1) - Make it more symmetrical, I think it's better. It looks a bit ugly so I made the wave better.

[Normal]

-00:26:241 (4) - Make it more like this Ok:
-00:25:877 (3,2) - Stack this circle end beginning of slider. Okay, stacked
-00:42:059 (2) - Correct blanket to this: 00:43:332 (4). Ok, fixed
-01:01:877 (1) - Try this, for me looks better Followed your suggestion:
-01:15:696 (5,1) - Correct blanket. Tried my best to improve the blanket

[Hard]

-00:07:333 (3) - No reverse 1/2 long. Ok, removed the reverse and made the slider a bit longer
-00:32:787 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe square? I don't really understand what you mean by square . . .
-00:53:151 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^

Generally really good mapset. :)Thank you very much Good luck~ :DThanks!
Thanks for the mod! :D
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hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hi Nya~! Sorry for late mod T_T
Here we go~

[General]
  1. Make Insane~! Make Insane~! I'm really not good at making an Insane. Is it really required?
  2. Your BG size seems a bit weird. Better to keep the ratio 4:3. So you better do some cutting. Maybe try 1022x767~? Ok, followed your suggestion
[Easy]
  1. I read the previous mod a bit and I think I kinda agree to increase the DS multiplier a bit. Since 1/1 note like these 00:00:787 (1,2) - overlap each other with 0.8x DS. It looks untidy. But yeah, you have to remap a bit -,- Yeah, I changed the DS to 1.0x
  2. 00:05:150 (4) - Maybe would look better if you curve it the other way... http://puu.sh/c7MAm/1c6017a512.jpg Still not look that good though... But at least I think better... No, I think it looks better like I have it now, so no change
  3. 00:21:150 (3,4) - The flow from (3) don't seems to be really good.... Maybe you can try to make (3) leads directly to (4) and then make a little modification of (4)'s shape. Like this : http://puu.sh/c7MR5/32c31e18b5.jpg Ok, followed your suggestion
  4. 00:41:514 (1,2) - I don't want to mention blanket... But these two could blanket better. Tried my best to improve the blanket
  5. 01:01:150 (3,1) - I think you better stack (1)'s head with (3)'s end... Move (4) a bit if you want. I already did something else there
  6. 01:08:605 Why ignore this? there's kinda big sound here... Add a note. Yeah, thanks for pointing that out. Note added
  7. 01:12:059 (3,4) - Blanket their bodies better? Made a tiny modification to (4)
  8. 01:17:877 (3) - This rhythm is good. But maybe would be better with a note here 01:17:877 and a single slider (wave slider would be good ~) here 01:18:605 because the vocal kinda change. Just personal opinion :)I like your opinion. Followed your suggestion
  9. 01:23:696 (1,2,3,1,2) - Maybe remake the rhythm a bit. Let's start with empty timeline. 01:23:696 A note here is correct, add a note there. 01:24:423 here, instead of starting a slider, add a note instead. 01:25:150 Start a 1 1/2 reverse slider here. 01:26:787 Start a slider and end it here 01:27:696 Last, add a note here 01:28:059 http://puu.sh/c7Nfa/478e45e755.jpg I think that would follow the music better. Thanks for helping me with that part. Followed your suggestion
[Normal]
  1. Maybe AR 5 would fit the map better because the SV is kinda high... Ok, changed AR to 5
  2. 00:03:696 (1,2) - This don't look too good imo... Maybe move (2) a bit upward and make it less curvy... http://puu.sh/c7Nti/c6ccfb611c.jpg Would lead to (3) better that way. Ok, followed your suggestion
  3. 00:10:968 (3) - I think... better curve this the other way... Ok
  4. 00:16:787 (4) - Make the rhythm just like this 00:15:332 (1,2) - Use identical slider if you want to. It makes a repeating-like pattern which is cool imo B) I agree. Followed your suggestion
  5. 00:25:877 (3,2) - Stack? o-o Stacked
  6. 00:29:514 (4,5) - I think this rhythm is not too good for Normal. Newbies will click (5) kinda late. Just like 1/4 slider with a note in the end for us. Just change it to 1/2 reverse slider maybe? Ok
  7. 00:42:059 (2) - Move this 1/2 tick backward and add a note here 00:42:059 Follows the music better. http://puu.sh/c7NHA/88629c3347.jpg Ok
  8. 00:50:241 (1,2,3) - Adjust the position a bit. Try to make (3)'s point placed at (1)'s blanket with (3) still blanketing (2). Around like this : http://puu.sh/c7NMY/f0ebda23ac.jpg And just move the pattern a bit upward so you won't have to DS the next notes. Followed your suggestion
  9. 01:13:514 (1,2) - Maybe this rhythm follows the music better. Because there's kinda big vocal here 01:14:059 : http://puu.sh/c7NTc/74bddefb25.jpg Kinda tricky indeed. Good idea. Followed your suggestion
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:151 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe just make a rectangle shape outta these? No, I like the parallelogram shape better
  2. 00:07:151 (2,3) - Swap these two in timeline. Make better triplet sound. http://puu.sh/c7O2w/3ff91f1142.jpg Ok
  3. 00:08:060 (1) - This is... undermapped... Just make the same rhythm as this 00:06:605 (1,2,3,4,5) - With a little creation like using 3 circles for triplet or something. Removed that single slider and made a stream or something like that
  4. 00:09:514 (1,2,3) - Would be good to increase the hitsound for every slider. No, I don't want the hitsounds to drown out the music, so no change
  5. 00:30:242 (1,2,3) - Did you change the DS multiplier? I don't think it's necessary, the music doesn't change much o-o Not really, I just disabled the DS function and moved the notes closer, but I DS'ed them now
  6. 00:42:242 (3) - Ctrl+g this, the flow would be better. Yeah, followed your suggestion
  7. 00:46:969 (6) - Change this to stream. Like this : http://puu.sh/c7OeZ/4b62eedbfd.jpg The music supports it. Ok, made a stream there
  8. 00:50:787 (2) - Move this 1/2 tick backward and add a note here 00:50:787 Good idea, followed your suggestion
  9. 00:57:605 Good to start a spinner here. End it here 00:58:605 Ok, added a spinner
  10. 01:06:242 (1,2,3) - You change DS a lot o-o I don't understand... I didn't DS it, I just placed them closer together, but I did DS them now
  11. 01:08:787 (4) - Better move this 1/2 tick backward. Just follow the vocal this time Ok
  12. 01:18:242 (2) - Undermapped, follow the vocal. Add note every 1/2 tick. Ok, mapped that part more

As far as I can see... Your Hard is undermapped a lot o-o This could be a lot harder, don't use too many pause, try to fill every 1/2 tick for hard. Add more triplets and stream. It's good, but it can be better :)Well, I made a lot of changes so hopefully it's better now
Okay, that's all~!
Good luck ~:3 Thanks!
Thanks so much for the mod, Hanyuu! If you ever post another mapset and want me to take a look at it, don't hesitate to PM me :D
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-Nya- wrote:

  1. Make Insane~! Make Insane~! I'm really not good at making an Insane. Is it really required?
I don't think it's a must, but it'd fit nice to the mapset><. Can i try to make one please? www
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Milan- wrote:

I don't think it's a must, but it'd fit nice to the mapset><. Can i try to make one please? www
Sure! That would be great :D
Thanks for helping me out! :)
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