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orioncomet

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orioncomet 2010-01-26T12:55:38+00:00

YGOkid8 wrote:
omg omg ployyyyyyyyy ~ ♥

*ahem* sorry

General
Add at least 1 second lead-in time for all diffs. < Done~

Easy
Just suggestions.

00:06:500 (1, 1) - Time distance from end of spinner to 1st beat is a bit short for Easy IMO. Extend to 00:08:919, and...
00:09:887 - Add beat.

00:20:774 (1) - Same thing here. Maybe shorten to 00:22:468, or...
00:24:887 (1) - Remove.
00:25:371 - Add beat.

00:59:565 (1) - Spinner ends at strange place. Maybe shorten to 01:01:177?

01:41:823 (1) - Same distance thing. Shorten to 01:43:758.
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Sorry, don't have time to mod other diffs. for now, need to sleep ;_;. But nice and cute song. So star ~ ☆ < Thankyouuu >w<

all of my spinners are so long >.< then it's fine, I think

Last edited by orioncomet 2010-01-27T11:00:27+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

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poypk 2010-01-26T12:59:27+00:00

Nyan~

เพิ่งดูจบเลยเพลงน่ารักดี

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2010-01-27T07:49:53+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2010-01-27T11:01:02+00:00

SPOILER

YGOkid8 wrote:
bak

Normal
00:12:065 (5) - Timing for this is... weird. On 1/6 Beat Snap, move it back 1 tick in timeline, and extend slider length by 1 1/6 tick.
00:27:629 (2) - ^
01:06:339 (1) - ^

00:16:016 (3) - This bit is weird as well, though this time, I don't know what to do. Sorry ;_;
00:54:726 (6) - ^
01:51:339 (4) - ^

00:16:661 (1, 2) - Extend 1/3 tick.
00:51:016 (5) - ^
02:23:758 (3) - ^

Hard
Fine.

they're fine~~ >_< thankyou for modding

niedz

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niedz 2010-01-27T11:17:59+00:00

☆

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2010-01-27T11:53:42+00:00

yay my victim <3

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Lizbeth 2010-01-27T19:25:36+00:00

Delete .osb file since it doenst have SB.

Hard
00:02:387 (3,4,5) - snap it to 1/6 (you will get 4 beats)
02:00:532 - add note, so the single notes start at 02:01:177
00:12:790 (1,2,3,4,5) - didn't like this parts >.< hard to follow the rhythm

Normal
00:20:855 (1) - start this slid at 00:21:016 (remember to shorten)
00:26:661 (1) - start at 00:26:823 (remember to shorten)
00:30:048 (4) - same, start in next white tick
00:36:823 (2) - ^
00:37:790 (1) - ^
00:51:016 (2) - move 1/2 beat back and add note here: 00:51:258
01:51:178 (4) - shorten by 2/6, and move start point here: 01:51:339
01:51:823 (1) - start in next white tick (remember shorten)
02:00:048 (2) - same
02:23:758 (3) - shorten by 2/6
02:32:468 (1) - start in next white tick (remember shorten)

Easy
make circle size larger
all good

cute map
Star!

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orioncomet 2010-01-27T21:23:12+00:00

Lizbeth wrote:
Delete .osb file since it doenst have SB.

Hard
00:02:387 (3,4,5) - snap it to 1/6 (you will get 4 beats) < nah~
02:00:532 - add note, so the single notes start at 02:01:177 < nah~ if you hear the rhythm on those part you will get this note
00:12:790 (1,2,3,4,5) - didn't like this parts >.< hard to follow the rhythm

Normal I think all are fine but ok i will fix it = =
00:20:855 (1) - start this slid at 00:21:016 (remember to shorten) < fixed
00:26:661 (1) - start at 00:26:823 (remember to shorten) < fixed
00:30:048 (4) - same, start in next white tick < fixed
00:36:823 (2) - ^ < fixed
00:37:790 (1) - ^ < fixed
00:51:016 (2) - move 1/2 beat back and add note here: 00:51:258 < nah~
01:51:178 (4) - shorten by 2/6, and move start point here: 01:51:339 < fixed
01:51:823 (1) - start in next white tick (remember shorten) < fixed
02:00:048 (2) - same < fixed
02:23:758 (3) - shorten by 2/6 < fixed
02:32:468 (1) - start in next white tick (remember shorten) < fixed

Easy
make circle size larger < done
all good

cute map
Star!

Thankyou~ ^^

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Zekira 2010-01-28T14:01:04+00:00

Offset: -13 from current. (first part kinda helped me in this)

[General]
Raise hitsound volume a bit? That or the MP3 just sounds a bit too loud lol.

[Easy]
There are quite a number of unnecessary New Combos here...
00:12:777 (1,2) - align?
00:31:648 (1) - bit too repetitive IMO? Maybe make normal beats here or something (since I was thinking that the New Combo was a bit premature)
01:46:164 (1) - symmetry

[Normal]
00:16:661 (1,2) - Highly suggest you extend these by 1/3.
00:51:016 (2) - ^

[Hard]
01:15:532 (3) - one grid up

02:19:242 (7,8,9) - plays weird

Starred because Hard is awesome.

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orioncomet 2010-01-29T12:11:28+00:00

Zekira wrote:
Offset: -13 from current. (first part kinda helped me in this) < woa <3 thankyou, sound good XD

[General]
Raise hitsound volume a bit? That or the MP3 just sounds a bit too loud lol.

[Easy]
There are quite a number of unnecessary New Combos here...
00:12:777 (1,2) - align?
00:31:648 (1) - bit too repetitive IMO? Maybe make normal beats here or something (since I was thinking that the New Combo was a bit premature)
01:46:164 (1) - symmetry

[Normal]
00:16:661 (1,2) - Highly suggest you extend these by 1/3.
00:51:016 (2) - ^

[Hard]
01:15:532 (3) - one grid up
02:19:242 (7,8,9) - plays weird

Starred because Hard is awesome.

all fixed, thanks!!

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Sonnyc 2010-01-29T15:20:10+00:00

Hello orion~
Neko Neko

[Easy]

01:27:777 (1) De-New combo
01:49:068 (5) Make a line with (3)?
01:59:713 (1) Clap on First and last

[Normal]

(Normal with 4.12?)
00:30:197 (1) New combo?

[Hard]

No problem

Good~~

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orioncomet 2010-01-30T02:06:03+00:00

sonnyc wrote:
Hello orion~
Neko Neko

[Easy]
01:27:777 (1) De-New combo < done
01:49:068 (5) Make a line with (3)? < done
01:59:713 (1) Clap on First and last < It's already have
[Normal]
(Normal with 4.12?) < yes o:
00:30:197 (1) New combo? < done
[Hard]
No problem
Good~~

thankyou~ ^^

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DJPop 2010-01-30T02:45:58+00:00

Download: nyan.rar
Download: Yui Sakakibara - Neko Neko Ondo (orioncomet) [DJPop's Insane].osu

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orioncomet 2010-01-30T03:17:26+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

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Sushi 2010-01-30T23:31:19+00:00

[Easy]
00:17:616 (3,5) - Align
00:49:552 (4,5) - align or unalign more
00:49:552 (4,1) - stack more?
01:03:584 (1,5) - make these stack
01:06:003 (1,1) - align?
02:25:842 (3,4,5) - i suppose this unalignment was on purpose

[Normal]
00:12:132 (5) - the last repeat sounds weird
00:16:003 (3) - sounds weird
00:54:713 (3) - ^
01:04:068 (3,4,5) - center (3) better? (stack with next (1) )

[Hard]
00:02:374 (3,4,5) - put these on 1/6, better
00:16:003 (5) - remove clap on the Beginning of the slider
00:29:552 (3,1) - align?
00:32:132 (5) - remove clap on this one
00:43:745 (1) - Here, this is your choice. I think that the voice is close to 1/3, but 1/2 seems to be fine (but for me, feels a bit akward tho)
01:00:035 (2,7) - remove claps on these
01:02:132 (5) - ^
01:22:455 (1) - as 00:43:745 (1)
01:45:681 (5) - finish instead of clap?
01:52:455 (2,4) - remove clap on (2) and the end of slider?
02:07:939 (7) - remove clap
02:09:390 (2,6) - remove clap on end of (2) and (6)

[Djpop's]
maybe use the custom hitsounds as in other diffs?
00:16:164 (6) - I don't like the way the repeat sounds.. but seems fine.
02:11:326 (2,3,4,5) - Sounds weird imo. what does that match?

Nya~ <3

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DJPop 2010-01-31T02:32:08+00:00

Sushi971 wrote:
[Djpop's]
maybe use the custom hitsounds as in other diffs?
More fits with claps.
00:16:164 (6) - I don't like the way the repeat sounds.. but seems fine.
Vocal snapped.
02:11:326 (2,3,4,5) - Sounds weird imo. what does that match?
Sounds from keyboard.

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orioncomet 2010-01-31T03:04:46+00:00

SPOILER

Sushi971 wrote:
[Easy]
00:17:616 (3,5) - Align <done
00:49:552 (4,5) - align or unalign more <done
00:49:552 (4,1) - stack more?
01:03:584 (1,5) - make these stack
01:06:003 (1,1) - align? <done
02:25:842 (3,4,5) - i suppose this unalignment was on purpose <done

[Normal]
00:12:132 (5) - the last repeat sounds weird <done
00:16:003 (3) - sounds weird <done
00:54:713 (3) - ^ <done
01:04:068 (3,4,5) - center (3) better? (stack with next (1) )

[Hard]
00:02:374 (3,4,5) - put these on 1/6, better <done
00:16:003 (5) - remove clap on the Beginning of the slider <done
00:29:552 (3,1) - align? <done
00:32:132 (5) - remove clap on this one <done
00:43:745 (1) - Here, this is your choice. I think that the voice is close to 1/3, but 1/2 seems to be fine (but for me, feels a bit akward tho)
01:00:035 (2,7) - remove claps on these <done
01:02:132 (5) - ^ <done
01:22:455 (1) - as 00:43:745 (1)
01:45:681 (5) - finish instead of clap? <done
01:52:455 (2,4) - remove clap on (2) and the end of slider? <done
02:07:939 (7) - remove clap <done
02:09:390 (2,6) - remove clap on end of (2) and (6) <done

Nya~ <3

thankyou~

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Iluhiwizel 2010-01-31T14:40:12+00:00

~*

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DeadAlready 2010-02-02T06:42:49+00:00

nyan nyan nyan orionyann~~~ >w</

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Matsuri_old 2010-02-02T17:54:23+00:00

โยนดาวงัฟ อย่าโยนคีห์บอร์ดคืนมานะ =[]=

sesito71

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sesito71 2010-02-03T19:05:02+00:00

Hi there~

[Easy]

00:06:810 (1) - Start the spinner here ^^
01:42:132 (1) - ^
02:26:810 (5) - Move this 1 grid up (lvl 3) (?)

[Normal]

00:06:810 (1) - Start the spinner here ^^

Have a star! *

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orioncomet 2010-02-04T22:37:16+00:00

sesito71 wrote:
Hi there~

[Easy]

00:06:810 (1) - Start the spinner here ^^ < nah~ I don't want to make a short spinner
01:42:132 (1) - ^ < done
02:26:810 (5) - Move this 1 grid up (lvl 3) (?) < It's fine

[Normal]

00:06:810 (1) - Start the spinner here ^^ < done

Have a star! *

thankyou~ ^^

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[DBF] 2010-02-11T04:54:31+00:00

[DJPop's insane]
all good. but its hard~
[Hard]
00:18:906 (1,2) - please flip horizontally.
00:57:616 (1,2) - ^
01:59:068 (1,2) - ^
02:00:517 - add bit.
02:22:777 (1,2) - please flip horizontally.
[Normal]
01:54:713 - add bit.
01:55:197 - ^
01:55:681 - ^
[Easy]
all good.

also, good skin, star~

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orioncomet 2010-02-12T13:25:55+00:00

[DBF] wrote:
SPOILER
[DJPop's insane]
all good. but its hard~
[Hard]
00:18:906 (1,2) - please flip horizontally.
00:57:616 (1,2) - ^
01:59:068 (1,2) - ^
02:00:517 - add bit.
02:22:777 (1,2) - please flip horizontally.
[Normal]
01:54:713 - add bit.
01:55:197 - ^
01:55:681 - ^
[Easy]
all good.

also, good skin, star~

they're fine~~ thankyou for modding >w<

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Agnes 2010-02-13T20:52:11+00:00

Yay, I'm modding an orioncomet map!

[Easy]

No errors.

[Normal]

No errors.

[Hard]

00:02:294 (2,3) - Fix spacing?

[DJPop's Insane]

00:31:084 (3,4) - Fixing spacing
01:01:810 (3,4) - ^

I can't take the cuteness... @_@ Star'd!

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DJPop 2010-02-14T02:51:00+00:00

AgnesChan wrote:
[DJPop's Insane]
00:31:084 (3,4) - Fixing spacing
01:01:810 (3,4) - ^
All fixed.

Download: Yui Sakakibara - Neko Neko Ondo (orioncomet) [DJPop's Insane].osu

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orioncomet 2010-02-15T11:13:43+00:00

AgnesChan wrote:
SPOILER
Yay, I'm modding an orioncomet map!

[Easy]

No errors.

[Normal]

No errors.

[Hard]

00:02:294 (2,3) - Fix spacing? < Fixed~

I can't take the cuteness... @_@ Star'd!

fixed and updated, thankyou! for modding ~

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Breeze 2010-02-27T13:42:00+00:00

Only RED part is what I think you should fix, others are all suggestions

[General]

You forgot to delete osb.file
Countdown in DJPop's difficulty is turned off while other 3 diff. are turn on, you'd better unify them

[Easy]

Slider Tick Rate : 0.5 or 1
00:34:068 (3) - extend to 00:35:519 or add a note at 00:35:519
00:43:745 (1) - I prefer to remove finish
02:19:552 (2) - Remove finish

[Normal]

Slider Tick Rate : 1 or 2, HP Drain Rate + 1 or 2
00:27:616 (2,3) - 2 slider at 00:27:616 - 00:27:777 and 00:28:100 - 00:28:261, or 4 notes

[Hard]

This difficulty need no audio lead-in
00:13:100 (2,4) - Delete them, sounds werid
00:51:810 (2,4) - ^
01:15:035 (1,2,3,4,5) - Didn't fit lyric or music, think about how to fix...
02:15:519 (6) - Remove finish

Some of your finish added with custom clap, I think without custom clap better

[DJPop's Insane]

Hitsound volume seemed a little loud - -'', Try 50%-60%? loud normal whistle sound is terrible lol
00:43:423 x - add a note here with clap, then delete 00:43:584 (7)
01:22:132 x - ^
02:35:035 (3) - add finish?
No break? Seem not so good, even a 3-5s break would made mapset more rational

Fixed red part and call me back for a pubble

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DJPop 2010-02-27T14:00:00+00:00

Breeze wrote:
[DJPop's Insane]
Hitsound volume seemed a little loud - -'', Try 50%-60%? loud normal whistle sound is terrible lol
Fixed.
00:43:423 x - add a note here with clap, then delete 00:43:584 (7)
X
01:22:132 x - ^
X
02:35:035 (3) - add finish?
No cymbal sound in bgm.
No break? Seem not so good, even a 3-5s break would made mapset more rational
No please D:

Download: Yui Sakakibara - Neko Neko Ondo (orioncomet) [DJPop's Insane].osu

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orioncomet 2010-02-27T14:10:36+00:00

Breeze wrote:
SPOILER
Only RED part is what I think you should fix, others are all suggestions

[General]
You forgot to delete osb.file
Countdown in DJPop's difficulty is turned off while other 3 diff. are turn on, you'd better unify them
[Easy]
Slider Tick Rate : 0.5 or 1
00:34:068 (3) - extend to 00:35:519 or add a note at 00:35:519
00:43:745 (1) - I prefer to remove finish
02:19:552 (2) - Remove finish
[Normal]
Slider Tick Rate : 1 or 2, HP Drain Rate + 1 or 2
00:27:616 (2,3) - 2 slider at 00:27:616 - 00:27:777 and 00:28:100 - 00:28:261, or 4 notes
[Hard]
This difficulty need no audio lead-in
00:13:100 (2,4) - Delete them, sounds werid
00:51:810 (2,4) - ^
01:15:035 (1,2,3,4,5) - Didn't fit lyric or music, think about how to fix...
02:15:519 (6) - Remove finish
Some of your finish added with custom clap, I think without custom clap better

[DJPop's Insane]
Hitsound volume seemed a little loud - -'', Try 50%-60%? loud normal whistle sound is terrible lol
00:43:423 x - add a note here with clap, then delete 00:43:584 (7)
01:22:132 x - ^
02:35:035 (3) - add finish?
No break? Seem not so good, even a 3-5s break would made mapset more rational

Fixed red part and call me back for a pubble

All Fixed!! and re-submit :3
thankyou for modding >w<

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Breeze 2010-02-27T14:28:51+00:00

Here's your and my 1st
Proto - Bubbled

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orioncomet 2010-02-27T14:45:35+00:00

Thankyouuuuu >3<!!!
I appreciate <3

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abalee 2010-03-09T04:45:30+00:00

IMO no breaktime in DJPop's hurt my hand.
others are fine.

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orioncomet 2010-03-09T07:21:13+00:00

Fixed, Thankyou for modding.. ^^

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gdeath 2010-03-13T17:22:57+00:00

Late Star xD

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Natteke 2010-03-13T19:25:35+00:00

Beautiful~

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Kecco 2010-03-14T17:22:23+00:00

Easy:
-Try slider tick rate 2
Normal:
-^
Hard:
1)00:04:552 (4) - Try this way http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot014-27.jpg
2)00:08:906 (1) - Fix the spacing?
3)00:41:326 (4) - Fix it like number 1)
4)01:20:035 (4) - ^
5)02:02:616 (4) - Align with 3?
6)02:18:100 (4) - Same of n 1) and 4)
7)02:27:616 (5) - 4 grid up?
8)02:34:068 (1,2,3) - Make a equilateral triangle?

DjPop's Insane:
-02:34:552 (1,2,3) - More close?

Beautiful Song&Map <3
Star~

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Sure 2010-03-14T18:17:49+00:00

Nyan

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jockeytiyan 2010-03-18T10:31:02+00:00

AgnesChan wrote:
Yay, I'm modding an orioncomet map!

AgnesChan wrote:
I can't take the cuteness... @_@ Star'd!

orz. My face is about to explode because of the cuteness. It's been 1 hour and my face is still red.

Overall: I think it's better that the preview point is at the middle (at about 00:47:495) rather than at the start. This map may sound good with the claps. But it's ok to not do so. :33333333333

Will skip Easy since it's too cute~

Normal:

SPOILER

00:14:552 - I suggest adding a beat here. But if so, 00:14:713 (4) - needs to get deleted to not confuse the newbies.

Hard:

SPOILER

00:12:777 (1,2,3) - Sliders here doesn't sound good IMO. Having them extended by a tick in the timeline or giving them repeat arrows might be good ideas. ^_^;
00:51:487 (1,2,3) - ^
00:18:906 (1,2,1,2) - Lol, the pattern was a bit confusing since it wasn't like the previous pattern (00:11:164 (1,2,3,4) - ) where the 3rd beat is underneath the 2nd beat. But you can leave it as it is if you want.
00:57:616 (1,2,1,2) - ^

DJPop's Insane:

SPOILER

General: Contrary to the Overall comment, I think this diff needs more whistles.

00:54:874 (6,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I actually failed to read this. >.< I didn't see/hear anything that indicated it to be snapped in 1/4.
02:11:326 (2,3,4,5) - ^

Lol, I'm amazed at this song because it's soooooooo cute and it's full of cats. Also, I'm amazed that you are able to pull off a Hard and DJPop for resorting to (a bit) confusing patterns for an Insane (only the 1/4 snapped notes are the one's that I dislike, though).

(2/3 Ploy maps to mod complete. :3)

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orioncomet 2010-03-18T11:27:04+00:00

Fixed!! Thankyou jockeynyann ~~

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abalee 2010-03-20T01:27:02+00:00