Aka wrote:

easy

・02:54:738 (3,4) - not sure if you forgot to remake this 1/2 thingy, i mentioned this one as last in my first check 0.0 whoops sorry, fixed lel

its much better now, good job. after applying the mod i think i'll be able to say if we could move it further or i could discuss it with other bats ok :>

Aka wrote:

postreserving

to get it ranked fast i'll try to accept everything, but I may not accept something
for convenience i'll only point out what i didn't accept because it's a long mod k i'm lazy

normal

・once again im asking you to lower the SV. the current one is really fast for181bpm and spacing for 1/2 overlaps is big, which is hard to control and multiple people told you about it already
・00:09:821 (2) - can you move it out of 1st slider? just to make everything clear and a bit more neat.. at least like that

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・00:26:561 (1) - due to low ar 00:25:235 (1,1) - the overlap is visible during the gameplay and gives a feeling of something messy. also 00:27:224 (3) - actually touches the hp bar. would be good if you could rework on the pattern by letting it go down, for eхample

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though it will hurt your neхt pattern - pls done tho
・00:30:539 (1,2,3,4) - again about the visual ~mess~ 00:30:539 (1,4) - thats too much and again, visible during the gameplay. please, move it out, you have place for it. i tried to think over the comfortable pattern, maybe you could try this

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・00:40:152 (5) - this slider feels undermapped or how to call it.. you just had a rhythm like that 00:34:185 (2,3,4,5,6) - and now you are simplifying the same rhythm. simplify the first one or try to make them consistent by remaking the reverse slider to this

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・00:45:124 (4,1) - some nazi things about overlaps again. do you really like how it looks? D: cause personally i prefer objects with clear circles

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・00:47:445 (2,3) - 00:52:749 (2,3) - 01:53:743 (2,3) - try to replace circles with 1/2 slider sometimes. like there you have a long break before and wooooop - 3 approach circles. it would be hard not to get much 100s since new players can hardly ever read 1 and 2 approaches intime. so, i'd recommend you to replace these circles to 1/2 sliders
・01:02:362 (1,2) - same goes there but its about the transition to these 3 circles. if there were just 2 like there 01:09:655 (4,5,1) - i'd say ok, but there, i'd really recommend to change with 1/2 slider
・01:04:019 (6) - you can clearly hear a 1/2 sound there, which is nice to map. honestly i dont see any reason of simplifying this, you can use a 1/2 repeat slider which would perfectly suit this part
・01:06:340 (3,1) - again about overlaps

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・01:10:152 (6) - that slight change in vocal is not a really reliable reason for a circle. i could suggest a bit more comfortable pattern to click for this part 01:07:666 (1,2,3,4,5) - , but you may also want to make the same consistensy with the same part but at the end of the song 02:13:964 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . though i'd personally recommend to stick to the rhythm i tried to provide you below - I don't really think it's not comfortable pattern to click, and also the pattern you suggested also causes the overlap that you've been tellin'.

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・02:01:865 (3,1,2) - overlaaaaaaaps.
・02:10:152 (4,5) - same suggestion as there 01:04:019 (6) -
・02:18:937 (4,5,1) - this rhythm just doesnt work. 01:11:644 (3,4,5) - look how you did this rhythm before and try to make the same again, it worked nice
・02:31:036 (1) - any reason for NC?
・02:53:412 (5,6,1) - this rhythm doesnt work well as well (nice sentence, lol). - I lol'd a circle which would fit with a kind of 1/2 triplet goes there 02:53:246 - but it would be uncomfortable to click with such difficulty and objects you have now. so the solution would to simplify this part

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・03:27:887 (1) - just dont, please D: its uneхpectable and i dont really think appropriate

its much better now, good job. after applying the mod i think i'll be able to say if we could move it further or i could discuss it with other bats - kthxbai

bbj0920 wrote:

아카야 버블좀 해줘 내 똥맵때문에 버블 밀려서 미안해 죽겠잖아

Aka wrote:

last minor check pls

00:47:445 (2) - WHAT - done

take that red anchor out @_@

02:02:362 (4) - ending it on such part is pretty meh :c would be more natural to have a slider starting from there.. can you change to something like this? - Nah it follows vocal



once it updated, call me back

bbj0920 wrote:

Nah it follows vocal

HelloSCV wrote:

finally i got this, thanks Aka xDDDD

W h i t e wrote:

he said "idola, no bubbled" lol...

Sonnyc wrote:

Idola novosti

W h i t e wrote:

she said "idola, no bubbled" lol...

Sonnyc wrote:

Idola novosti

Aka wrote:

W h i t e wrote:

he said "idola, no bubbled" lol...

1. 02:01:865 (3,4) - Yeah, these don't really follow, the vocal clearly starts on 02:02:030. So just remove the slider on 02:01:865 (3) and add a note on 02:02:030.

1. 02:45:787 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Have the 1/2s jump a bit more to make the difference between the 1/2 and 1/4 a lot clearer.

Love wrote:

[Gurvy's Insane]

1. 02:45:787 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Have the 1/2s jump a bit more to make the difference between the 1/2 and 1/4 a lot clearer. fixed

Call me back after updating. yay

Love wrote:

[0920's Normal]

1. 02:01:865 (3,4) - Yeah, these don't really follow, the vocal clearly starts on 02:02:030. So just remove the slider on 02:01:865 (3) and add a note on 02:02:030. - Yes, I realized that I got Aka's modding wrong x_x

http://puu.sh/dwuE6/95c1e77926.osu ranked pls