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Sakakibara Yui - Happy Lucky X'mas

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Suimya
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Joined February 2011
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Suimya
Thanks Ike for your mod <3

Fixed everything on my diff! =w=/
Winnie
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Joined November 2013
Winnie
Ok Here is my mod as requested from modding queue

~General Discussion~ It was a really great song and was extrodinarily fun with all the creative sliders. The hitsounds fits the song really well. Sekai-nyan never seizes to amaze me again. Wish I could map like this, but unfortunately I can't :)

[Lanturn's Easy]

  1. 01:08:939 (1) - Move this a little more to the left for perfect blanket
  2. 01:22:251 (4) - I feel like continuing the clap hitsound pattern is fine here. It doesn't really effect the sound but keeps it consistent
  3. 03:16:251 (4) - Same as the 1st one
  4. 03:19:439 (3) - I feel the end of that slider should have a clap because you didn't have one there but instead had it here with the exact same note pattern for example - 01:25:439 (3); it occurs other places as well so why not have it the same :)
    Love that bell at the end though really great stuff during the easy difficulty. Felt relatively fun and wasn't anything out of order
[Santa's Normal]

Hitsound wise I believe it would be best to have a slider without sound. It's melodic and the scraping sound of the slider doesn't sound too well with me. I felt letting the music itself play out the note without having an etched or scratchiness when doing sliders. Seems smoother that way or just in the first 2 timing points from 00:19:439 to 00:15:214
DS was all over the place for normal. I understand when used in slow parts or fast parts but some of them like here 01:04:439 (1,2) - Where the notes were at 1.4 then all of a sudden next note isn't using the same thing, even when no speed changes has occurred just the way the vocal plays out.

  1. 00:07:843 (2) - Could this be blanketed more? http://puu.sh/dcydu/dc7d309ea8.jpg
  2. 00:13:576 (1) - NC here? It's the start of a new sequence and new sounds just right after the space sequence
  3. 00:22:439 (1) - Would this be considered DS correctly? It doesn't seem like it to me
  4. 00:24:314 (4) - Move slider end up 1 click for parallel reasons http://puu.sh/dcypw/275327a7f5.jpg
  5. 00:26:189 (2) - Snap this with DS so you can move this up 00:28:064 (5) for a perfect stack ;before it wasn't stacked and felt weird
  6. 01:10:251 (4) - DS correctly and here as well 01:14:376 (3)
  7. 01:31:251 (4) - This could be the start of a NC to follow whats being played/sounds like
  8. 01:43:251 (1) - NC for vocal change otherwise reaching up to 9 is a little bit too high
  9. 01:49:251 (2) - Pull the spine back and adjusted up a bit for a better pattern http://puu.sh/dcyLT/798416dec1.jpg
  10. 01:50:564 (4) - Snap Correctly
  11. 02:08:564 (4) - Move down a little for better blanket
  12. 02:56:939 (1) - Try a little better to stack them? You are given enough time to react on this note considering how long the time spaces are so it wouldn't be hard to read if it was on hidden
  13. 03:38:564 (6) - Move down a little for better blanket? (Your preference)
Great difficulty. My advice is just prioritize a DS there were changes all over the place. Keep them consistent; for jumps you had 1.5 and regular ones you had 1.2 but during the place there was ones with 1.3 then switch to 1.2 for no reason that I can think of. Just stick with one and the flow for players would feel better. :)

[Panely's Hard]

  1. 00:10:437 (4) - This placed there sounds really awkward because there isn't much I can find to bind that note to that area. My idea would be to 1.) Shorten the length of the slider and place it on a red tick at this time 00:10:573 or 2.) Just move the slider you had to the red tick in general. That's where there is space for the sound to travel and played where it doesn't sound off IMO 8-)
  2. 00:26:939 (1) - Little change but move 1 tick up for a perfect blanket
    (My hitsound suggestions to fit the music) Whistle at beginning 00:32:189 (3); 00:34:439 (1); 00:37:439 (1); 00:38:751 (1); both 00:39:501 (3,4); 00:40:439 (1) generally something like that and continue with it. It flows well with the claps that are involved and it doesn't feel as blank if it doesn't have a jungle to a Christmas Song, but if this was too much then you can skip past this part of the suggestion :D
  3. 01:07:064 (3,4,1) - Is this what you intended to do? There is a huge gap there but most players would just rather follow the same DS for that part rather than a fat jump out of nowhere, but if you intended that then please do leave it like that
  4. 02:11:376 (7,1) - The polarity you put in here doesn't sound as good as shortening the slider of (7) to end on a red tick IMO but right here is where it's good 02:15:501 (6,7)
  5. 03:43:064 (4) - This slider ending at a white tick by stretching it to where the spinner starts sound better. It ends with the note being hit rather than spinning on a sound :o
[Merry X'Mas]

  1. 00:31:814 (2) - Move slider end up a little to be parallel with this note 00:31:439 (1)
  2. 00:55:439 (1) - Slider at the end here seems a bit off in its on variation rather than the stream pattern; Maybe fix or it was intentional and leave it as is
  3. 02:26:939 (1,4,5,6,7) - Try making them space a little more consistently? The 2nd and 3rd 1/2 sliders are a bit further apart in spacing wise than the rest was
  4. 02:59:095 (2) - NC can start here during the stream because it follows off the fat jingle that occurs there
    As far as I'm concerned that's about it I can mod
It was a great song and should be on it's way to Christmas Extravaganza; Modding Time: ~45 minutes but it was worth it for the Jingles
Do rate me on how I do my modding on my queue by clicking on my signature for a free one way ticket, and Thanks :)
Merry Early Christmas Everyone
Last edited by Winnie , edited 5 times in total.
Axarious
Former osu! Champion: 2016
333 posts
Joined May 2013
Axarious


[General]
Yo map, yo changes.
Anything with // made me cry. Don't hurt me. ;;
[Lanturn's Easy]
  1. 00:29:564 (3,4) - Maybe two white points (instead of one) before the red point on (4) for a better blanket with (3).
  2. 00:43:439 (1,3) - Eh, blanket maybe?
  3. 01:00:689 (1,2) - Move slider (2) to x:243 y:327 to match up y-coordinates from slider (1).
  4. 02:14:939 (3,1) - Move (1) to x:107 y:148 for a better blanket, also makes 1.19x distance snap.
[Santa's Normal]
  1. Any mention of "Stacks." means it could be confusing/quick for a normal. Consider changing so all notes are visible.
  2. 00:07:025 (1,2) - Sliders look awkward, maybe blanket them.
  3. 00:29:939 (4,5) - ^
  4. 00:34:439 (1,2,3,4) - //what is this what are you doing with the last slider
  5. 00:41:564 (1,2) - Stacks might be too confusing/quick for a normal.
  6. 00:46:439 (1,2,3,4) - //oh my god ugliest end of a slider pattern what why is there an ugly momentum change
  7. 00:53:564 (3,4) - Again, stacks might be confusing for a normal.
  8. 00:55:439 (1) - Bend at 00:55:626 - , 00:55:814 - (on slider tick), 00:56:001 - , 00:56:376 - .
  9. 00:58:439 (1) - Bend at 00:58:626 - , 00:58:814 - (on slider tick), 00:59:001 - , 00:59:376 - .
  10. 00:59:751 (2) - Bend on the slider tick at 01:00:126 - .
  11. 01:16:064 (3,4) - Stacks.
  12. 01:21:876 (4,5) - Looks awkward not as a ctrl HJ.
  13. 01:21:689 (3,4) - Stacks.
  14. 01:24:689 (3,5) - Weird overlap here, consider changing the pattern before this so the momentum doesn't carry it to the cramped up top left corner.
  15. 01:43:064 (5,6) - Stacks.
  16. 01:44:939 (1) - Bend at 01:45:126 - , 01:45:314 - (on slider tick), 01:45:501 - , 01:45:876 - .
  17. 01:47:939 (1) - Bend at 01:48:126 - , 01:48:314 - (on slider tick), 01:48:501 - , 01:48:876 - .
  18. 01:49:251 (2) - Blanket with (1).
  19. 01:50:001 (3) - Link Try this rhythm instead. White tick start -> red tick start for the same reverse slider is awkward.
  20. 01:52:814 (3,4) - Stacks.
  21. 01:55:064 (3,4) - Stacks.
  22. 01:55:814 (5) - Link Try this instead.
  23. 01:58:626 (4) - Link Try this instead.
  24. 02:01:626 (3,4) - Stacks.
  25. 02:02:564 (5) - Why does this have a reverse?
  26. 02:04:251 (1) - puush broke, but I was going to say this isn't the best choice of sliders (same thing with the previous of this spiral)
  27. 02:06:876 (2) - What does this contribute to the song?
  28. 02:07:814 (2,3) - Stacks.
  29. 02:08:001 (3,4) - Blanket by curving (3) more to maintain DS.
  30. 02:17:751 (5,6) - Blanket by curving (5) more to maintain DS.
  31. 02:47:939 (1) - Don't bend these sliders by ear.
  32. 02:50:939 (1) - ^
  33. 02:55:251 (3,1) - Place (1) elsewhere.
  34. 02:57:876 (2) - What does this contribute to the song?
  35. 02:58:439 (1) - Make this symmetrical, reflect back and forth along the y-axis and change slider points.
  36. 03:38:001 (5,6) - Curve (5) more to make a blanket while maintaining DS.
[Panely's Hard]
  1. 00:08:389 (1,2) - Prioritize blanket over ds here.
  2. 00:10:437 (4) - Weird, but okay, I guess.
  3. 00:12:484 (2) - Move to x:317 y:13, it isn't completely stacked on the tail of (1).
  4. 00:31:814 (2,3) - Blanket, move (3) to x:172 y:247.
  5. 00:47:189 (3,1) - Probably intentional, but they aren't blanketed.
  6. 00:53:939 (1,2) - Probably intentional, but they aren't blanketed.
  7. 01:32:564 (4) - Move to x:361 y:300 to match coordinates with (1). Looks nicer in editor, unnoticable while playing.
  8. 02:17:189 (3,4) - Prioritize blanket over ds here.
  9. 02:26:189 (4) - Move to x:34 y:28.
  10. 02:26:751 (5,2) - Move (2) to x:153 y:178.
  11. 02:30:689 (3) - Move to x:282 y:218.
  12. 03:08:939 (1) - Move to x:414 y:203.
[Merry X'Mas]
  1. AR8.5, >>Straighten out your streams<< This makes your groups of three less cluttered/messy and makes it rather smooth to play.
  2. these /stacks/ and back and forths are weird to play and don't add variety to the map, all it does is add confusion. Consider changing, like stop doing stuff like this: 03:30:126 (2,7,3,4,5,3,4,5,6,3,4,5,6,4) -
  3. 00:13:576 (1,2) - Blanket, maybe.
  4. 00:21:501 (4,5,6,7,8) - //what did you do to mutilate this stream
  5. 00:30:126 (2,3,4,6,7,8) - Make these streams straight.
  6. 00:59:564 (5,1) - Weird rhythm. Maybe a circle on (1) and a 1/2 slider on 01:00:126 - .
  7. 01:14:564 (3,4,5,6,1) - Curve or straight or wiggle? Looks really messy.
  8. 01:16:626 (2,3,4) - Straighten out stream.
  9. 01:26:939 (1,2,3,4) - Meh, doesn't really match with the song.
  10. 01:31:626 (2,3,4) - Incorrect placement. Sound and sliders should begin on white ticks, not red.
  11. 01:58:251 - A slider should start here.
  12. 03:05:189 (5,6,7) - This stream should face horizonally left.
  13. 03:08:189 (4,5,6,7,8) - Doesn't fit into the song.
  14. 03:29:939 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - //is that supposed to be a star
  15. 03:30:126 (2,7,3,4,5,3,4,5,6,3,4,5,6,4) - Stop.
Suimya
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Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
Axarious

Axarious wrote:

[Merry X'Mas]
  1. AR8.5, >>Straighten out your streams<< This makes your groups of three less cluttered/messy and makes it rather smooth to play. No, I don't think it will fit the diff much, and it'll play much slower so it won't fit
  2. these /stacks/ and back and forths are weird to play and don't add variety to the map, all it does is add confusion. Consider changing, like stop doing stuff like this: 03:30:126 (2,7,3,4,5,3,4,5,6,3,4,5,6,4) - I don't think there anything wrong with those placement tho lol
  3. 00:13:576 (1,2) - Blanket, maybe. Sure, fixed
  4. 00:21:501 (4,5,6,7,8) - //what did you do to mutilate this stream I was following the sound in the music, so yeah o3o/
  5. 00:30:126 (2,3,4,6,7,8) - Make these streams straight. it's already straight. So no changes
  6. 00:59:564 (5,1) - Weird rhythm. Maybe a circle on (1) and a 1/2 slider on 01:00:126 - . no, i wasn't following the vocal here
  7. 01:14:564 (3,4,5,6,1) - Curve or straight or wiggle? Looks really messy. Sure, fixed
  8. 01:16:626 (2,3,4) - Straighten out stream. it's already straight. So no changes
  9. 01:26:939 (1,2,3,4) - Meh, doesn't really match with the song. I'm following the song pretty well, just listen at 20% and you'll know
  10. 01:31:626 (2,3,4) - Incorrect placement. Sound and sliders should begin on white ticks, not red. lol no, i think it starts at red line here
  11. 01:58:251 - A slider should start here. No, i don't think so
  12. 03:05:189 (5,6,7) - This stream should face horizonally left. I wanted to be that way, so yeah no changes here
  13. 03:08:189 (4,5,6,7,8) - Doesn't fit into the song. it fits perfectly since there is a stream in the music
  14. 03:29:939 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - //is that supposed to be a star yup
  15. 03:30:126 (2,7,3,4,5,3,4,5,6,3,4,5,6,4) - Stop. Stop what lol

Thanks for your mod owo/
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
koreapenguin
Sekai-nyan's Baka Moe

General
  1. seem fine to me :3
Lanturn's Easy
  1. 00:07:025 - 00:15:214 - how about use S:C3 :D ? hear so it's really really noise on quiet part (Intro)
  2. 00:23:939 (4) - add finish on slider head, hear it :3 it's match with song very well even tail
  3. 03:43:439 (1) - nyaaa, i think it will be okay to make impact on last, 03:43:439 (1) - ex) add S:C3's finish :3 on tail really really nice bell sound
Saten's Normal
  1. what the... normal's SV D: Easy : 0.8 , Normal : 1.5 , Hard : 1.55 , Insane : 1.8, star rate is no problem but, the gap between easy and normal seems big, it may be problematic so it has to be fixed i guess, people will handle it or ask to BAT, QAT
  2. 00:29:564 (3,5) - i don't want recommed this seem semi hide so feel so bit ugly orz, how about change other place?
  3. 00:23:939 (3) - add finish here :3 same as Easy diff :3 even tail :3
  4. 00:45:876 (7,2) - same as 00:29:564 (3,5) - and i think so hide notes on beginner's diff it's not good
  5. 01:50:939 (1,2) - ya even this i don't recommend use repeat 1 or more than D: so how about change otehr rhythm ? like this http://puu.sh/dcC5g/1f8877fefa.jpg :3
  6. 03:43:439 (1) - same as Easy diff :3 it sound is good :3
Panti&Xinelazy's Hard
  1. 00:07:025 - 00:16:306 - same as Easy diff :3
  2. 00:23:939 (1,2) - same as Easy diff :D
  3. 00:29:939 (1,3) - yea even here i think so this rhythm is same as 00:23:939 (1,2) - so how about add finish :D ?
  4. 02:04:251 (1,2) - 02:05:939 (1,2) - add finish on slider's heads also for consistency with other diff :D
  5. 03:43:439 (1) - same as Easy diff
Merry X'mas
  1. 00:07:025 - 00:16:442 - same as Easy diff :D
  2. 01:31:439 (1,2,3,4) - eh... feel so weird, so how about change like this 02:32:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it's more better :D
that's all :3
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks everyone for your mods :3

Fixed most of your mods =w=
BrosephStalin
126 posts
Joined June 2013
BrosephStalin
You ask for You get for
From mai Q

Do
Suggest

Lanturn ez
00:43:439 (1,3) - Adjust (3) to be better blanketed with (1) by moving the head of (3) closer to (1)
01:25:439 (3,1) - Adjust (1) to be better blanketed by moving the sliderhead down a bit
02:20:939 (3) - Make (3) rounder (Pull the middle node out) for a better blanket with (2)
02:49:439 (2) - Cute, but why no 3-point slider? This one is 3funky5me
02:52:439 (2) - ^
03:29:939 (1) - Move sliderend (The arrow) out a little bit for a better blanket

Gud diff only nazi'd dis one a bit

Santa nm
00:07:025 (1,2) - Move (1)'s head closer to (2) until it's blanketing cuz damn son where'd you find this?
00:29:939 (4,5) - Make (5) more round (Pull out middle node) to better blanket with (4)
01:16:064 (3,4) - This stack is a bit hard for the average normal player to read, ya might wanna move (3) somewhere else?
01:21:689 (3,4) - ^
01:28:064 (3,4) - ^
02:07:814 (2,3) - ^ And by this point you should know what to look out for with stacking?
01:24:689 (3,5) - (3) Covers the start of (5), making it more difficult for the average normal player to read D:
01:28:814 (5,1) - Ugly overlap :c
01:35:939 (1) - Interesting... slider?
01:47:939 (1,2) - Move the midpoint of (2) to better align with (1)
01:47:939 (1,3) - Kinda ugly overlap here
02:08:001 (3,4) - Curve (3) more and move (4) so it blankets?
02:55:251 (3,1) - Watch out with this one, it doesn't really stack or blanket, and completely covers the start of (1). You'll want to check with some others to be sure this is O.K.
03:04:251 (4,6) - Awkward overlap here, beware the low AR!
03:05:939 (1,2) - Overlap city
03:43:439 (1) - Dude that's awesome

Nice normal, a couple of blanket and overlap issues. Also felt more like a normal+ than a normal.

Panley's HD
00:31:439 (1,2,3) - Nice blanket! Perhaps make the spacing more even between all sliders?
01:01:251 (3,4) - Maybe change this into a 1/1 slider? Purely me forcing my style onto your map to emphasize the vocals
01:16:626 (2,3,4) - No matter how many times I played this, the triplet felt a bit forced even though there is drum to support it. I could just be bad at the game though
01:20:001 (2,3,4) - ^
01:42:501 (3,4) - This felt a bit too jumpy for a hard, but then again I don't play a lot of standard sooo :? :?
02:47:189 (3,4,5) - This spacing felt a little awkward even though I could read it just fine
03:35:001 (2,4) - Perhaps improve this blanket by slightly curving (4) and moving (2) a bit more into the blanket

Nice hard!! I enjoyed playing this one :3

Merry X'Mas
Fun map to play! I noticed you used patterns such as 01:06:689 (3,4,5,6,1) - a lot throughout the map. This isn't a bad thing, per say, but it's always good to have a little variety in patterns! :3
01:47:751 - No sound here? :c
02:58:439 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Stream! :D/ maybe add a little more movement than just an arc to highlight the epic buildup that is stream?

Omg I can't find anything game-breakingly wrong with this map.

Y u do dis?
Saten
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Saten
Made some changes here and there

http://puu.sh/ddXOc/238a2a3a43.osu

Try to see the charm in overlaps like I do. The "ugly" overlaps doesn't really bother me at all during gameplay.
Seeing stuff through the editor is different.

Also, if you solely looking at the SV differences and not the actual difficulty, something is wrong.
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
[Easy]
00:44:939 (3) - Whistle at the reverse doesn't sounds well personally.
03:43:439 (1) - Make some space at the top. That would definitely be more readable. http://puu.sh/ddUFF/6c01f291b9.jpg

Will finish later.
litoluna
1,073 posts
Joined April 2011
litoluna
hi Sekai-nyan

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]
  1. I think good
[Easy]
  1. 00:07:025 - ~00:15:214 - I felt fiting default soft-hitsound.
    this part is not drum beats
  2. 01:00:689 (1) - this slider, seem to protrude outside a frame.
    You should little up this point.
    SPOILER
  3. 03:43:439 (1) - nice BELL slider :oops:
[Normal]

  • I felt SV1.5 is Speedy for normal diff.
    I think fiting SV1.1~1.2
    and Hard diff SV1.55... so Because there are not many differences, balance is bad
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:025 - ~00:15:214 - I felt fiting default soft-hitsound.
    this part is not drum beats
  2. 01:16:626 (2,3,4) - I felt this stream to match spacing is good.
  3. 01:28:814 (5) - This note protrude outside a frame
    SPOILER
  4. 02:15:876 (7) - umm I think that the sound here is important ->02:16:064 -
    idea:
    02:15:876 (7) - end at 02:16:064 -
    02:16:251 - add note
[Merry X'mas]
  1. 01:02:564 (4,5) - If it is me, I make a jump here
  2. 01:09:314 (2) - blanket does 01:08:564 (6) -
    01:09:314 (2) - Ctrl+R Selection Centre +10°
  3. 01:31:626 (2,3,4) - umm. I think slider begin at 01:31:626 - (Downbeat)is the best fit.
    01:32:751 (1) - delete note
    01:31:626 (2) - move at 01:31:814 -
    01:32:001 (3) - move at 01:32:189 -
    01:32:376 (4) - move at 01:32:564 -
    01:31:626 - add note.
  4. 02:47:376 (3) - I felt don't need note.
    drum beats begin at 02:47:470 (4) -
  5. 03:28:064 - add note?
    but vocal begin at 03:28:251 - . I feel like saying either :oops:
Sorry not good english

nice Christmas song :)
s...s...star~(I don't have kudosu :( )

Good Luck :)
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks for modding litoluna owo/

Fixed everything <3

and still waiting for Sonnyc's mod o3o/
Saten
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Joined August 2010
Saten
speed alone isn't difficulty, keep that in mind
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
no kd this post

[Saten's Normal]
01:02:751 (1) - I believe the readablility can be improved. http://puu.sh/deaSa/5ef90cccd3.jpg Image is just an example, but I wouldn't be happy to let the current pattern in a [Normal]... or to at least like 02:04:251 (1).
01:31:814 (5) - NC if you feel distributed.
02:33:314 (4) - ^?
Some long notes might have trouble, but I'm sure it will be fine.

[Panely's Hard]
00:15:760 (1) - Imo this NC doesn't seem necessary.
02:01:251 (1,3,1) - Combo consistency with 00:59:751 (5,1) please.
02:05:939 (1,2) - It would've been better if these were a perfect parallel.

[X'mas]
01:02:751 (5) - I think placing somewhere down will make the flow interesting, but up to you.
01:32:845 (1) - Umm I think this note is way too harsh. Strongly suggesting to remove this.
03:26:939 (1,2,3,4,5) - Mind a volume reduction? The custom sound feels too loud compared to the song.
Suimya
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Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks for modding Sonnyc owo/

Fixed everything on my diff!
Saten
Global Moderator
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Joined August 2010
Saten
Changed sv slightly to fit with my other santa maps, and applied changes from Sonnyc's mod.
The slider might not look the same because of changed sv and I had less to work with.

http://puu.sh/degeZ/ad567077b5.osu
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
Oh hey. I got a skin request for once.

[Skin]
As you haven't skinned the slider parts and the hitburst it can create a weird clash with skins if you are using a custom, I suggest that you skin them too or set the preferred skin to default to avoid that.

Right now if you play at the default skin the score looks too spaced apart (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2302920) compared to the old skin (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2302927). As a large part of the player base is using the default it might be a good idea to make that one look better.

spinner-metre has bigger lines that doesn't really align with spinner-background.. I guess it supposed to be glow but because of that it dosn't go outside the background it looks kinda ugly (Especially on widescreen). (In general the spinner doesn't work well on widescreen)

soft-hitfinish3 is absurdly bigger than the other sound effects. There is a lot of silence in it so cut it down.

As it's over 10 MB you could lower the quality on the jpg images because the are pretty big right now.



Hope this was useful.
Suimya
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Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks for checking, fixed some parts of the skin.

And deleted the spinner since it don't fit the map.
koreapenguin
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koreapenguin
Doooo
Lanturn
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Lanturn
AndreasHD

AndreasHD wrote:

[Lanturn's Easy]

01:00:689 (1) - This is probably rankable, since it's not out of screen, but it's like one pixel away from doing that, maybe drag it up one grid or something. If you do that, the blanket around 01:02:189 (2) - will actually be perfect too! :D I moved a bunch of notes up so it won't be as bad. and blanketed,

01:39:126 (1,2,3) - Make these curve? It'll look nice, make them like this: I actually prefer the straight sliders for variety.

02:34:439 add a note here please. k

03:17:939 (1,2) - curve these aswell same thing here. thanks for the suggestion though :3

Not much to say, the rest seems ok :)
Thanks <3

Momochikun

Momochikun wrote:

[Easy]
00:07:025 (1) - You should just end it at 00:07:843 - instead since there're no instrument that can be covered with its end now -w- went to 1/1 before the next note.
00:19:439 (1) - Missing finish i guess ? added
01:50:939 (1,2) - I'd prefer 3/2 slider reverse instead since i can hear cymbal on the red tick. But since its hard to fix so stfu ww I wanted more variety, but you're right. so changed.
02:11:189 (2) - This slider give so much momentum to the downside that make your next note placement become weird, i'd prefer this being curved slider instead Sure. added curve.
02:49:439 (2) - Am i the only one that think this slider is a bit weird ? orz Yup. It is, but Idk. I like it I guess?
02:59:939 (1) - I didn't prefer anti jump here..beginners may suddenly click this a bit faster since its appeared a bit fast after 02:58:439 (2) - ends due to low AR. i'd make this like something below for easier pattern Hmm. I never really considered this much of an issue. I think there is more than enough time for new players to catch on. I think it should be fine.
SPOILER
03:25:251 (2) - Make this symmetrical or at least same shape with (1) ? made it more unsymmetrical lol.
Pretty low SV you using here, but that's fine though >< Any faster SV and the map would be much higher in difficulty so yeah :(
Thanks <3

Kibbleru

Kibbleru wrote:

[Lamp]
  1. cuz lamps are cooler [/color]
  2. 00:34:064 (4) - uh maybe whistle Why not >_<
  3. 01:50:939 (1,2) - i think 3/2 repeat would work better here =w= Changed with Momochikun's mod yay!
  4. 01:56:189 (4,1) - uh. idk bout this probably something to think about a bit. the thing is, if that part was completely silent during the antijump, it probably would've been fine. but it isnt. Yeah. i fixed it with Momo's mod as well.
  5. 02:04:251 (3) - consider nc here yeah..... But then I'd want to NC at 03:40:439 (3,4) - lol so Idk.
  6. 02:34:439 - how bout drag the break to here q: I added a note from an earlier mod yay.
  7. 02:49:439 (2) - you could probably make this candy cane look better with some anchors A what?
    02:52:439 (2) - ^
  8. 02:55:251 (4) - mm you can use a smooth slider here imo, there isnt really anything at 02:55:626 - although not too important but it's pretty so I want to keep it.
  9. 03:43:439 (1) - damn nice yay
  10. 03:48:501 - could add note :D
Nah. I think that's too trollish lol.
Thanks. I really almost missed this mod because I wasn't expecting.. Lamp :3

CloudSplash16

CloudSplash16 wrote:

[Lanturn's Easy]
  1. 00:19:439 (1) - I think a cymbal sound (soft-hitfinish) would be suitable here. Added with earlier mod, thanks!
  2. 02:04:251 (3) - New combo to match 01:02:751 (1) ok, added cause everyone says so. Gonna also NC 03:40:439 (1) - because yeah.
  3. 02:34:439 - Probably makes no significant difference, but push the start of the break to here? added a note there anyways.
  4. 03:08:939 (1) - Add a finish to match the other similar parts. Done!

Thanks!

Kocari

Kocari wrote:

[Lanturn's Easy]

  1. 01:08:939 (1) - Move this a little more to the left for perfect blanket ok
  2. 01:22:251 (4) - I feel like continuing the clap hitsound pattern is fine here. It doesn't really effect the sound but keeps it consistent Hmm. I actually like the setup i have here. Thanks though :3
  3. 03:16:251 (4) - Same as the 1st one Same as above.
  4. 03:19:439 (3) - I feel the end of that slider should have a clap because you didn't have one there but instead had it here with the exact same note pattern for example - 01:25:439 (3); it occurs other places as well so why not have it the same :) Was missing yeah. Thanks :3
    Love that bell at the end though really great stuff during the easy difficulty. Felt relatively fun and wasn't anything out of order

Thanks!

Axarious

Axarious wrote:

[Lanturn's Easy]
  1. 00:29:564 (3,4) - Maybe two white points (instead of one) before the red point on (4) for a better blanket with (3). Changed this slider.
  2. 00:43:439 (1,3) - Eh, blanket maybe? I think it's blanketed well enough.
  3. 01:00:689 (1,2) - Move slider (2) to x:243 y:327 to match up y-coordinates from slider (1). I changed this with other mods. I like how it is now.
  4. 02:14:939 (3,1) - Move (1) to x:107 y:148 for a better blanket, also makes 1.19x distance snap. Done.
Thanks!

koreapenguin

koreapenguin wrote:

Lanturn's Easy
  1. 00:07:025 - 00:15:214 - how about use S:C3 :D ? hear so it's really really noise on quiet part (Intro) SC3 has no Soft slider slide so I don't want it.
  2. 00:23:939 (4) - add finish on slider head, hear it :3 it's match with song very well even tail Done on head.
  3. 03:43:439 (1) - nyaaa, i think it will be okay to make impact on last, 03:43:439 (1) - ex) add S:C3's finish :3 on tail really really nice bell sound idk. I get the finish sound. I need to redownload and see after.
Thanks <3

BrosephStalin

BrosephStalin wrote:

Do
Suggest

00:43:439 (1,3) - Adjust (3) to be better blanketed with (1) by moving the head of (3) closer to (1) [/color]
01:25:439 (3,1) - Adjust (1) to be better blanketed by moving the sliderhead down a bit [/color]
02:20:939 (3) - Make (3) rounder (Pull the middle node out) for a better blanket with (2) [/color]
02:49:439 (2) - Cute, but why no 3-point slider? This one is 3funky5me [color=#0000FF]yay lol :D I'll probably fix these one day.[/color]
02:52:439 (2) - ^
03:29:939 (1) - Move sliderend (The arrow) out a little bit for a better blanket [/color]
Thanks!

litoluna

litoluna wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:07:025 - ~00:15:214 - I felt fiting default soft-hitsound.
    this part is not drum beats yeah.. I'll fix this after it updates I think.
  2. 01:00:689 (1) - this slider, seem to protrude outside a frame. Moved it up yeah.
    You should little up this point.
  3. 03:43:439 (1) - nice BELL slider :oops:

Thanks!

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471,175,114689,2,0,B|471:237|471:237|441:297,2,120,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:3:0:0:
404,108,116189,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,60,116939,6,0,B|164:60|164:60|140:48|140:48|88:48,2,120,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,112,118439,2,0,L|376:112,2,79.9999999999999,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,284,119939,6,0,B|164:284|164:284|140:296|140:296|88:296,2,120,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,320,121439,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,320,121814,1,2,0:0:0:0:
462,247,122189,6,0,P|500:190|495:134,2,120,2|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,168,123689,2,0,L|362:168,1,40
316,250,124251,6,0,P|263:310|184:330,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,120,125939,2,0,P|128:72|188:60,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,112,127439,6,0,L|408:192,1,79.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,252,128189,2,0,P|446:279|409:286,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,244,128939,2,0,P|264:228|208:244,2,120,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,320,130439,6,0,P|220:336|180:332,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,300,131189,2,0,P|56:260|24:192,2,120,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,248,132689,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,133439,6,0,L|352:72,1,79.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,156,134189,2,0,L|200:156,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,72,134939,2,0,P|104:52|40:80,2,120,2|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,148,136439,6,0,L|75:232,1,79.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,312,137189,2,0,P|164:340|228:332,2,120,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,248,138689,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,228,139064,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,280,139439,6,0,P|400:300|464:300,1,79.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,208,140189,2,0,P|472:203|527:171,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,116,140939,2,0,P|375:129|335:183,2,120,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,32,142439,5,2,0:0:0:0:
308,68,142814,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,148,143189,2,0,L|256:208,1,40
308,268,143751,2,0,B|368:327|390:266|458:329,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,84,145439,6,0,B|424:68|424:68|372:68,1,79.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,144,146189,2,0,L|236:144,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,212,146939,2,0,B|104:244|104:244|32:244,2,120,2|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,264,148439,6,0,L|336:264,1,79.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,224,149189,2,0,P|374:174|319:168,2,120,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,320,150689,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,360,151064,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,328,151439,6,0,B|148:328|148:328|112:304,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
114,113,152751,2,0,B|147:90|147:90|227:90,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,160,153689,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,256,154064,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,328,154439,5,4,0:0:0:0:
164,112,167939,6,0,P|116:80|56:80,2,120,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,169439,2,0,B|292:48|312:36|336:32|364:40|384:60|384:100,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,272,170939,6,0,P|396:304|456:304,2,120,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,304,172439,2,0,B|220:336|200:348|176:352|148:344|128:324|128:284,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,116,173939,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,64,174314,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,116,174689,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,260,175251,2,0,B|276:272|256:304|256:304|236:272|192:260,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,40,176939,6,0,B|304:96|304:96|288:164,2,120,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,100,178439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,168,179939,6,0,L|68:168,1,79.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,252,180689,2,0,L|204:252,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,192,181439,2,0,P|328:172|388:192,2,120,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,116,182939,6,0,P|256:92|300:84,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,84,183689,2,0,P|460:124|488:172,2,120,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,168,185189,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,292,185939,6,0,P|160:320|120:328,1,79.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,276,186689,2,0,P|32:232|40:196,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,128,187439,2,0,B|148:63|148:63|152:16,2,120,2|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,196,188939,6,0,L|256:196,1,79.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,160,189689,2,0,L|380:44,2,120,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,252,191189,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,248,191564,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,332,191939,6,0,P|356:348|304:324,2,120,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,252,193439,2,0,P|384:188|360:136,2,120,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,200,194939,5,2,0:0:0:0:
212,260,195314,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,212,195689,2,0,L|88:164,1,40
148,96,196251,2,0,B|195:102|219:71|219:71|259:93|297:52,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,248,197939,6,0,L|440:336,1,79.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,288,198689,2,0,L|280:352,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,252,199439,2,0,P|200:236|144:256,2,120,2|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,332,200939,6,0,P|153:350|104:340,1,79.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,304,201689,2,0,P|20:244|44:184,2,120,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,244,203189,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,200,203564,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,152,203939,6,0,B|96:96|96:96|120:36,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,104,205251,2,0,P|358:82|425:111,2,120,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,208,206939,6,0,P|144:264|52:268,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,148,208251,2,0,P|198:123|251:140,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,100,209189,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,148,209564,1,2,0:0:0:0:
472,68,209939,6,0,P|506:115|508:175,2,120,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,148,211439,2,0,P|416:207|451:254,2,120,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,88,212939,5,2,0:0:0:0:
250,53,213314,2,0,P|172:59|115:113,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,208,214439,2,0,B|148:268|104:268|124:328,2,120,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,156,215939,6,0,L|292:200,1,79.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,100,216689,2,0,L|396:100,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,44,217439,2,0,P|472:112|444:168,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,352,218939,5,4,0:0:0:0:
220,321,219314,2,0,P|184:249|220:173,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,132,220439,6,0,P|296:88|240:16,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,144,221939,2,0,P|44:188|100:260,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,352,223439,6,0,B|352:372|424:324|424:324|404:168|288:96|288:96|300:64|256:38|256:38|212:64|224:96|224:96|108:168|88:324|88:324|160:372|212:352,1,959.999999999999,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

so many mods XD
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
lol yeah, and updated =w=/
nanoK
79 posts
Joined September 2014
nanoK
[Merry X'mas]

  • 00:41:939 (1,2,3,4) - The jump from slider to slider goes in the opposite direction. This makes newbies to insane want to just not move their cursor because the slider circle still wraps around their cursor even if they don't move, which is bad in general. At least make them closer together, or change it all.
    02:14:939 (1,2,3,4,5) - These jumps are really annoying...
    03:29:939 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I prefer to make this a correctly measured star. To make a star like that first do Ctrl-shift-D, make it 5 beats, arrange it so it goes around in a star, and replace this ugly stuff.
    03:35:939 (1,2) - Same as the first mod. make them closer together or change them.
    HP drain rate of 7 is harsh especially for an insane.
[Panely's Hard]
  • 01:08:001 (2,3) - Again, it goes against the sliders, change this as it especially applies to those who are starting / currently on hard.
    01:48:689 (3,4,5,6,7) - This doesn't matter much and I don't know how else you could change it to fit the song (except maybe doing ctrl-G to flip each one) but, This also promotes people starting hard to just hold at the beginning of the slider, instead of actually moving, which is bad. Flipping it will at least allow jumps to help them with jumping.
[Skin]

  • Crop the sides of the numbers because when you have multiple digits, the transparent space at the edges creates space between the two digits, making times when you have a combo of 10 or more it's really really ugly.
Other than that I love the skin. :)

:D
Sincerely, finap
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks for checking Fixed some stuff :3
Ujimatsu Chiya
2,480 posts
Joined December 2013
Ujimatsu Chiya
As PM requested
Sorry late ; ^ ;

SPOILER
Bold : should be Fix it. (or Unrankable)
Green : High Recommend.
Black : suggestions.

[General]
  1. well.. you have not been used yet for SB, cheak out wide screen now. ( easy ~ hard )
  2. I think this is not really need. recommended remove.
    SPOILER
  3. soft-hitfinish2 , soft-hitfinish4 << Why are practically the same sound using the two?
  4. remove ' Collab ' at tag. I do not think this is necessary because already 'Collaboration'.

[Skin]
  1. I can't understand why you use ' section-fail ' jpg. I think that it is better to use X mark with character.
    Difficult to know the difference between success and failure.
  2. It's really need? http://puu.sh/dlZAP/4d69280337.png
  3. Just.. my opinion try with these skins. make more cute. ww // http://puu.sh/dlZCR/59958a9df9.zip
    SPOILER
    follow point ↓

    sliderb0~5 ↓

    Lighting ↓

    HP bar ↓
    << ?!!?!!!?!

[Merry X'mas]
  1. HP > 7
  2. 00:11:938 (2) - remove whistle instead, add 00:12:211 (3) - here. It is sufficient for the finish because of the small sound than 00:12:484 (4) - and
    heard a small voice from 00:12:211 (3) -
  3. 00:12:757 (5) - same here add whistle Add attaching to the reason like here. 00:08:662 (3,4) -
  4. 00:15:623 (6) - how about change fininsh? I think better know. :P
  5. 00:21:595 (5,6,7,8) - just opinion how about change two 1/4 slider? 00:21:782 (7) - beat is strong and... have more fun. lol
  6. 00:25:439 (1) - try make blank with 00:24:689 (4) - better to design
  7. 00:35:939 (1) - cheak blank at tail
  8. 00:45:689 (3,5) - add whislte better
  9. 01:02:751 (5) - ctrl + J?
  10. 01:06:689 (3,4,5,6) - just opinion.. try this follow
    SPOILER
  11. 01:12:689 (3) - ctrl+g?
  12. 01:20:939 (1) - make blank with 01:20:564 (6) - better.
  13. 01:32:564 (1) - I think need NC here. speed change is greater
  14. 01:56:564 (8) - why not stack with 01:55:064 (6) - ?
  15. 02:15:501 (4,5) - hm... ctrl + g? think follow is better than ever
  16. 03:29:939 (1,3) - Please narrow street. make perfect star I guess.
  17. 03:37:814 (3) - make blank better.

[Pan & Xinely]
  1. 00:12:484 (2) - try perfect stack
  2. 00:21:501 (2) - cheak blank
  3. 00:32:095 (3) - cheak blank, you missed the tail
  4. 00:39:876 (4) - same ^ missed head
  5. 00:41:189 (4) - cheak DS prev, DS seems to be no reason to increase.
  6. 00:42:501 (3) - ^ Please increase.
  7. 02:26:189 (4,2) - blank little wrong.
  8. 03:08:939 (1) - ^
  9. 03:40:439 (1) - ^

I think Easy , Normal diff fine. :3

GL with X'mas~
yeah~ 100 kds xD
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks so much for the mod eINess ww

Fixed everything on my diff!
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
I'll check this today

General:

  1. Unused Image Files: follow point.png
Merry X'mas

  1. try OD8, since the hitwindow of OD7 is too big for AR9.
  2. mmm HP +1?
  3. 00:07:843 (2) - missing whistle in the tail, since you have whistle in 00:08:662 (3,4) - which are the same in the music.
  4. 00:15:487 (5,6,7,8,9) - this is really off, you can listen at 50% or 25%
  5. 00:18:782 (2) - so nothing in the music there, your triplet should be in 00:18:970
  6. 00:21:501 (4,5,6) - really weird rhythm and a bit uncomfortable to play, I'll suggest you to try this instead:
  7. 00:34:251 why this pause? feel really weird when playing
  8. 01:08:189 (3,4,5) - shouldn't be this stacked with the previous 01:07:064 (5) -
  9. 01:17:001 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - this rhythm doesn't fit the song nicely, try this:
  10. 01:31:814 (3,4,5) - shouldn't be these nc due to the sv changes?
  11. 01:47:470 (5) - this is not following nothing in the music, but you forgot adding one circle in 01:47:282 -
  12. 01:47:751 why are you ignoring this circle? thepause feel really bad, considering that you are mapping to every sound in the music
  13. 02:05:939 (2,3,4) - this is really confused to play
  14. 02:18:689 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - your current rhythm doesn't follow the song properly, try this:
  15. 02:27:689 (4,5,6,7,1) - similar as above, for this case try this:
  16. 02:30:782 (6) - there is nothing in the music as well
  17. 03:08:470 (7) - ^
  18. 03:11:189 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - your rhythm selection doesn't fit the music, try this:
  19. 03:26:939 (1,2,3,4,5) - why the jumps and overmap when the music is in the slow part? remove this 03:27:126 (2,3) -
  20. 03:40:439 (1,2,3) - why the spacing is the same if the spacing in the timeline is different?
  21. 03:41:939 (1,2,3) - ^
    I'm not fan of overmap and there are some beats and rhythm that doesn't follow the song like it is, will be nice if you recheck your rhythm selections again
work with this for now, also try to get a timing check as well, maybe I'll check this again later :3
Deif
Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon
3,564 posts
Joined April 2010
Deif
Timing help incoming /o/

1. Offset: 612ms / BPM: 110,00
2. Offset: 4.839ms / BPM: 110,00
3. Offset: 17.929ms / BPM: 160,00

Hope it's helpful, ho ho ho!
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks so much for the Timing help Deif and Ike <3
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
I'll be here today, sorry for delay

General:

  1. so your BG is 16:9 and your storyboard is 4:3 , try to be consistent, since actually looks really ugly, since your bg got cropped (seems like the sb still wip
  2. Inconsistency in timing sections (first like is not the same in all diffs)
Merry X'mas

  1. 00:19:051 (4) - this need another repeat according to the music, be careful with the spacing 00:19:051 (4,1) -
  2. 00:21:676 (5,6) - remove 6 and add a repeat in 5, since 1/4 slider jump to a circle play really bad, slider to slider is better
  3. 00:24:582 (4) - there is nothing in the music with this circle, I suggest you to remove it
  4. 00:54:301 (2,3,4,5) - according to the music this should be a 5 circle stream, so add a circle in 00:54:582
  5. 01:05:176 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this should be a full stream, so add circles in 01:05:457 - and 01:05:832
  6. 01:11:457 (7) - remove this circle and add one in 01:11:269 - sound better with the music
  7. 01:11:926 (1,2) - this spacing is too short, consider to add more spacing to fit the next jump in 01:12:301 (2,3) -
  8. 01:14:551 (3,4,5,6) - shouldn't be a stream here, if you listen careful, remove 01:14:644 (4,6) -
  9. 01:16:707 (3) - nothing in the music here, remove that circle, if you want you can add a circle in 01:16:894
  10. 01:18:863 (4,5) - this jump is a bit uncomfortable to play, reduce a bit the spacing, since can be confused with a 1/1 gap
  11. 01:20:457 (5) - nothing in the music here, but yes in 01:20:269
  12. 01:23:269 (6) - remove circle, since there is no beat in the music
  13. 01:31:801 (3,4,5) - this is fine without NC, since the music make you read it without warning
  14. 01:56:363 (7,8) - this jump is really evil lol.. consider that is 1/4 jump and this is just an insane diff, I suggest you to reduce the spacing like a lot
  15. 02:06:676 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - this should be a big stream :c
  16. 02:09:957 (5) - remove this circle there is nothing in the music as well
  17. 02:19:144 (7) - there is nothing in the music here, but yes in 02:18:957
  18. 02:21:957 (7) - nothing here, but in 02:21:769
  19. 02:22:332 add a circle here, since the sound is really prominent
  20. 02:24:957 (6) - nothing here, but in 02:24:769
  21. 02:26:176 (5) - CTRL G flow better IMO
  22. 02:27:957 (6) - nothing here, but yes in 02:27:769
  23. 02:31:332 (2) - remove this circle, there is nothing in the music
  24. 02:46:988 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this play really weird, mainly cuz the stream is starting in a blue tick, also cuz you are not mapping the beat at 02:46:801 - mmm try this:
  25. 02:57:676 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - this should be a full stream as well, but try some 1/4 repeat sliders here, since there is another long stream after it
  26. 03:14:457 (5) - nothing here, but yes in 03:14:269
  27. 03:17:176 (4,5,6,7) - should be a 5 circle stream
  28. 03:22:894 (3) - there is nothing in the music here
  29. 03:23:832 add a circle here there is a sound in the music
  30. 03:32:457 (5) - nothing here, but yes in 03:32:269
  31. 03:35:457 (6) - nothing here, but in 03:35:269
  32. 03:43:332 stream should continue here
work with this, I'm modding the rest now :3
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks for modding Natsu, fixed everything on my diff. Really it's much better now :3
Nepu
211 posts
Joined September 2013
Nepu
Sorry for being so late orzorz final exam sucks.
The sb is done now
http://puu.sh/dDGBa/e5bf165648.zip

You should fix all the .osu files to add following lines
Sprite,Background,Centre,"<your background file name here>",320,240
 S,0,0,,0.625
 F,0,0,223426,0
 F,0,223426,227926,0,1
 F,0,227926,239099,1
Also remember to turn on the wide-screen support~

Hopefully this will get qualified before 12.25 >.<
IamKwaN
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Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
Requested on hitsounds, storyboard and skinning check.
[Storyboard]
  1. 1-15.png disappears too fast provided that the lyric (いらないから) hasn't ended.
  2. 1-30.png appears too slowly, the singer has sung もう but lyric doesn't show up.
  3. 1-34.png - Same as 1-15.png.
[Skinning]
  1. Reference: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Skinning#osu.21standard
  2. Missing 'cursormiddle.png' to fulfill the Cursor set.
  3. Missing 'scorebar-marker.png' to fulfill the Scorebar set.
[Hitsound]
  1. Oriental delay is detected on 'soft-hitclap.wav', use this instead: http://puu.sh/dDHNB.wav
@Sekai: LOL merry x'mas everyone
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Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
Finally updated and add the SB <3

Thanks a lot Google owo/

EDIT: I really didn't like the skin, so i removed it and kept the section-fail, and section-pass o3o/
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare
lyrics are fine. at the end, she saying "merry Christmas". but not found in the lyric i wonder.
thats all.

no kds pls.
Suimya
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Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks for checking Rare owo
Nepu
211 posts
Joined September 2013
Nepu
Updated sb fixed things metioned by Kwan
http://puu.sh/dDLsm/e1bb16a96d.zip

:P
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
updated owo/
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
so sb is done?

kk later in night, soon!
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Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya

Natsu wrote:

so sb is done?
Yes, it's finally finished o3o/
Melophobia
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2,230 posts
Joined September 2011
Melophobia
I'm waiting <3
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu

Melophobia wrote:

I'm waiting <3
I'm modding brb

General

  1. timing seems fine already confirmed with other people, anyways bar line should be omitted in 00:18:676 (apply to every diff)
    SPOILER
Insane:

  1. 00:19:051 (4,1) - use less spacing make them overlap so is easy to read, actually people can be confused thinking that it is 1/2
  2. 00:21:488 (4) - x: 404 y: 180 similar reason as above
  3. 01:05:832 (10,1) - this spacing is really bad and confused, use the same spacing as 01:05:176 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
  4. 02:07:332 (12,1) - same as above
  5. 03:28:238 (1,2) - music is really strong make a jump here as well
  6. 03:43:332 (11,1) - spacing
Hard:

  1. 00:08:385 (2,3) - blanket is really off
  2. 00:32:176 (3) - mm I feel that 1/2 repeat slider will fit the vocals better, is kinda weird that youa re ignoring the one in 00:32:363
  3. 00:39:488 (3,4) - blanket can be improved
  4. 00:47:176 (3,1) - is this supposed to be a blanket? if yes then fix it pls, is really off
  5. 00:53:926 (1,2) - blanket is off as well
  6. 01:04:426 (1) - add a circle with finish and start the spinner 1/4 later, like you did here 02:31:426 (5,1) -
  7. 02:09:488 (2) - this slider should end in 02:09:676 - where the music is prominent, also this is not consistent with the first kiai.
  8. 02:17:176 (3,1) - is this supposed to be a blanket? cuz actually looks really bad
  9. 02:34:332 (5) - I prefer if you remove this circle there is nothing in the music or almost inaudible and doesn't sound nice with the song.
  10. 02:47:551 (4,5) - 1/4 repeat slider can be better, since there is a stream, but w/e
  11. 02:50:551 (4) - this slider should be 1/2 there is nothing in the music at the blue tick
  12. 02:56:926 (1) - add a circle with finish and start the spinner 1/4 later
  13. 03:26:926 (1,2) - this is so confused to play lol, mainly in hidden, is confused cuz you didn't map this beat 03:27:488 - and is weird cuz is the same music and vocal as 03:27:676
  14. 03:36:113 add a circle for the cute vocals?? T-T merry x`mas
  15. 03:37:426 (1,2) - this diff is fine but those blamkets make me sad, they are really off, pls check the diff and improve them
Normal:

  1. HP drain is really hight and is not balanced with the settings in this mapset, try HP 4 instead
  2. 02:54:301 (1,2,3) - spacing error? I see what you are doing here, I'm ok with this, just pointing in case of that is not on purpose
  3. 00:45:863 (7,2) - this overlap looks kinda ugly in game
  4. 00:15:749 (1) - the end of this spinner is not properly snapped, probably happen when sekai apply the new timing LOL
  5. 02:07:988 (3,4) - try a better blanket?
  6. 02:47:926 - 0.50 sv maybe is too slow, what about 0.75? normal diff players are not familiarized with this kind of sv changes tho
  7. 03:04:801 add a circle? the music is really strong and I feel that you shouldn't be ignoring it
  8. 03:43:426 (1) - D: nice
Easy:

  1. this is fine to me
:)
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