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KSHR

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Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-04-13T03:17:29+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Hi hi hi ~ KSHR request
[Easy]
00:10:580 (4,1) - the spinner is starting too soon after the circle, I know why you did it, but take in consideration this play really bad in mania mode and it will be really stressed to play for new players since they need to click and insta spin, that's why, starting the spinner in 00:10:767 - can work better.
F
00:14:142 (1) - too soon after a spinner for an easy, even the normal is giving more recovery time after the spinner I
00:48:830 (3,4,1) - this is too confuse to play for a new player, first to all the 1/1 stack is to hard to be clicked in time by a player who start playing the game today and after it you normalize the spacing again causing an uncomfotable movement, I suggest you to avoid the stack and use a properly spacing there X
01:00:080 (3,1) - same as 00:10:580 E
D!

Plus.. fixed the following by myself.

00:16:580 (3) - Extended this slider by 1/2 beat to make consistent with 00:21:642 (3) - .
01:10:580 (2) - To follow the drum, added a normal hit normal sound to this note by changing the sampleset to Normal.
01:36:080 - Removed this green line since 25% sounded a bit too inaudible.

Thanks for modding, Doki-Natsu :p

SPOILER

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Title:Tsuki ni Murakumo Hana ni Kaze
TitleUnicode:月に叢雲華に風
Artist:senya
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Creator:Vhy
Version:KSHR's Easy
Source:Touhou
Tags:th11 subterranean animism komeiji koishi last remote iceon Kamase-tora yuuhei satellite c81 hinsvar xinely kshr
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Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-04-16T06:53:39+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Hi hi hi ~ KingSuperHentaiReally request

[General]
mmm just a small issue that I personally have with your pink combo colour:
as you can notice is really hard to see the approach circle with the current colour, changing it or making the pink a bit more dark can help maybe: okay make it a bit darker :3
[Hard]
00:04:580 (1,2) - a slider will follow the vocals better, since your diff is following the vocals the most of time, a slider will represent the hold feeling of the vocals there IMO done
00:07:580 (1,2) - a bit nazi, but this blanket with the sliders can be better, similar to this: hmmm
SPOILER
00:13:580 (1) - missing finish in the head okay
00:15:455 (5,1) - well the last part of your slider blanket look pretty off hue, try to add some more control points to improve it, like: im not good at blanket but yeah tried it
SPOILER
00:16:392 (1) - missing finish in the head too i hear no cymbal here :p
00:17:611 mmm i'm a bit not ok with the rhythm here, since there are 2 more importants beats in 00:17:517 - and 00:17:517 - that I believe should be mapped, I know you're following the guitar, but also I found some times when you ignore the guitar like in 00:17:517 - 00:22:767 -, and I found them pretty inconsistent idk how to explain this.. just want keep the current
00:19:580 missing finish okay
00:28:392 ending sliders in strong beats like the measure in 00:28:580 doesn't represent nicely the music, plus it broke your combo pattern, try this instead: fixed in other way
00:32:705 (3) - similar as above what's wrong with this .__.
00:37:392 the rhythm feel really empty here, the drums sound really clearly, adding circles in 00:37:392 - and 00:37:486 - will make a really nice emphasis with the song. done.. and adjust some pattern here
00:43:205 (4) - why are you breaking the square pattern here , also your spacing is wrong actually, move (4) to x: 256 y: 256 , you'll keep a nice square pattern and your spacing consistent fixed in other way
00:47:892 (3) - same as 00:28:392 errrr.. keep it!
00:48:830 (5) - this extended slider doesn't fit the song it should be a 1/2 slider, since the sound at 00:49:017 is really clearly and important and should be mapped properly IMO keep it also :3
00:49:580 (1) - finish fit better the music instead of clap nope i think
00:52:580 finish fit better the music that clap ^
00:59:611 (4,5) - stack this properly done
01:06:642 (2,3,4) - with this sliders starting in upbeats you're breaking two importants things, 1 you're not following the strong beats in the song 2 you're not being consistent with your vocal mapping, try this instead: done
01:09:080 I don't see a point of leaving a stanza as the repeat of the slider, also this is the plae where your NC should be, try this instead: keep it :3
01:22:955 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - your combo pattern look not consistent here, since you should remove it here 01:24:080 - to keep your 2 stanzas pattern, I guess it's no problem

[Normal]
00:05:611 (2) - this slider starting in a offbeat will be really hard to play, since clicking it is really hard and taking in consideration this is just a normal diff, I thing you should make the rhythm more simple and friendly for new players, maybe like: this is just an intro, i think it's not that hard. and also hiii,, im a noob and have no problem with reading this xD
00:10:580 (5) - following your combo pattern, every 2 stanzas, the circle at 00:10:580 (5) - should be a NC o k a y
00:10:955 (1) - this spinner should start in 00:10:767 -, also is consistent with hard diff okay
00:13:580 missing finish in the head okay
00:19:580 same as above yep
00:40:205 (4) - try to don't end sliders in strong beats as the stanza in 00:40:580 -, doing this don't fit the song and it broke your comboing, try to circles instead, since both spots need a click action done
00:41:705 (3) - same as above i guess it's okay here
00:43:580 (1) - missing finish in the head okay
00:44:892 (2) - I don't get this rhythm here, also can be confused for non experienced players, try this instead: keep it
00:46:580 (6) - missing NC, following your pattern, also you have one here in hard diff okay
00:48:080 (6,7) - look like a mistake, this spacing is really hard to be readed it looks like an 1/1 gap spacing but in the timeline the gap is biggest: intentionally? i dont think it's hard but okay fixed the DS
SPOILER
00:49:580 (1) - finish fit better the music instead of clap noooo
00:50:705 (2) - I feel this rhythm a bit confused, mainly cuz the sound at 00:50:517 - is really important, try to make a 1/2 repeat slider instead like: but i prefer the current
00:52:017 similar as above, ignoring the music in such important beats in 00:52:205 - and 00:52:392 - doesn't follow the song properly, also it can be confused to play using a 1/2 repeat as the previous suggestion will suit perfectly IMO still prefer mine
00:52:580 finish fit better the music that clap nope
00:53:705 (2) - same as 00:50:705
00:55:017 (5) - same as 00:52:017
00:56:705 (2) - same as 00:50:705
01:10:955 (1) - you should remove NC here following your 2 stanzas pattern, also with this slider you're breaking your combo pattern, since it is ending in the place where the NC should be 01:12:080 -, also that beat in 01:12:080 should be mapped as slider head or circle IMO errr mine is currently fine since im not that just add NC in every stanza but when it needed to place it. so yeah keep it
If you follow my previous suggestion, you should remove the NC in 01:12:830 (1) - too
GL nice song <3

Thanks for the mod dokidoki Natsu-san xD

all updated with xinely's diff through forum PM ~

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2014-04-21T14:20:05+00:00

[Rain]
00:13:205 (6,7) - reduce this jump a bit or add hyperdash.
00:20:142 (2,3) - make a jump.
00:28:205 (4,5) - make a jump to right. (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1533904 here is my recommend.)
00:30:267 (4,5,6) - you can expand this jump more.
00:34:580 (1,2,3,4) - reduce these jumps a bit.
00:36:455 (4,5,6,1) - ^

[Xinely's Overdose]
00:26:330 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't recommend hyperdashes on this part, please convert them to regular jumps.
00:37:392 (5,6) - hmm, it looks not good. x : 492 for 6 plz.
01:07:392 (5) - x : 160
01:14:705 (4,5) - X.X can you just use circles?

I love this song, have my star!

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-04-22T06:50:45+00:00

CLSW wrote:
[Rain]
00:13:205 (6,7) - reduce this jump a bit or add hyperdash.
00:20:142 (2,3) - make a jump.
00:28:205 (4,5) - make a jump to right. (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1533904 here is my recommend.)
00:30:267 (4,5,6) - you can expand this jump more.
00:34:580 (1,2,3,4) - reduce these jumps a bit. the current feels okay for me to catch
00:36:455 (4,5,6,1) - ^

else than that.. fixed all ~

I love this song, have my star!

thanks for the mod CLSW

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-04-23T07:46:43+00:00

CLSW wrote:
[Xinely's Overdose]
00:26:330 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't recommend hyperdashes on this part, please convert them to regular jumps. removed some. i just keep hyperdashes that i think its fit with music
00:37:392 (5,6) - hmm, it looks not good. x : 492 for 6 plz. ok
01:07:392 (5) - x : 160 ok
01:14:705 (4,5) - X.X can you just use circles? i can't. its match with music xD

I love this song, have my star!

thanks 4 mod ~

~

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 62330
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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Title:Tsuki ni Murakumo Hana ni Kaze
TitleUnicode:月に叢雲華に風
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:Vhy
Version:Xinely's Overdose
Source:Touhou
Tags:th11 subterranean animism komeiji koishi last remote iceon Kamase-tora yuuhei satellite c81 hinsvar xinely kshr
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208,164,59611,2,0,L|100:244,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,59892,1,2,0:0:0:0:
8,100,60080,6,0,P|96:84|192:144,1,200,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,92,60642,2,0,L|340:260,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,336,61205,1,2,0:0:0:0:
68,284,61392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,312,61580,5,2,0:0:0:0:
328,312,61673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,308,61767,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,300,61861,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,268,61955,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,228,62048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,176,62142,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,152,62236,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,96,62330,6,0,L|172:40,1,37.5000014305115,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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212,64,64205,2,0,L|116:136,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,284,64580,6,0,L|444:368,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,296,64861,2,0,L|184:312,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,65142,2,0,L|420:120,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,65517,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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72,320,66642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,224,66830,2,0,L|296:204,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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160,256,67392,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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344,160,68142,2,0,L|228:140,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,136,68517,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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500,304,69642,2,0,L|380:128,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,140,70205,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,132,70392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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304,312,70955,2,0,P|368:316|472:216,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,252,71517,2,0,P|164:240|260:272,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,316,71892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,148,72080,6,0,P|228:140|332:160,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,296,72642,2,0,L|352:332,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,336,73017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,328,73205,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,332,73298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,136,73392,6,0,P|132:104|208:148,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,256,73955,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,260,74048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,248,74142,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,216,74236,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,168,74330,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,152,74423,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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120,192,74611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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512,256,75455,2,0,L|368:256,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,160,75830,2,0,P|248:172|328:144,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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280,224,76580,6,0,L|356:140,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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464,284,77517,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,216,77705,2,0,P|246:212|198:224,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,308,78080,6,0,L|292:311,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,320,78642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,224,78830,2,0,P|232:224|288:192,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,172,79111,2,0,P|64:124|12:92,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,264,79392,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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352,160,80142,2,0,B|304:140|304:140|236:140,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,168,80517,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,288,80705,2,0,B|328:304|328:304|384:304,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,212,81080,6,0,P|140:188|32:240,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,336,81642,2,0,P|360:256|332:140,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,160,82205,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,140,82392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,256,82580,6,0,P|140:244|80:260,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,312,82955,2,0,P|396:316|500:216,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,216,83517,2,0,P|320:204|376:212,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,312,83892,1,2,0:0:0:0:
492,144,84080,6,0,P|393:127|294:135,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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444,312,85017,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,320,85205,1,10,0:0:0:0:
512,312,85392,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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204,224,86705,2,0,L|252:237,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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128,256,88205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,252,88580,5,2,0:0:0:0:
160,264,88861,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,252,89142,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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228,204,89892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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88,260,90830,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,228,91111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,184,91392,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Serena-

454 posts

Joined December 2012

Serena- 2014-05-13T12:41:37+00:00

ah one of the song i luv :3

[Xinely's Overdose]
00:53:705 (3) - i recommend reducing the distance. the jump between 3 and 4 is quite big, making the player hard to control the ryuuta(since the HD is so fast) which is followed by another jump.
01:14:705 (4,5) - similar as above, vice versa.

no big problems, but this diff has lots of edge-jumps. abusing those jumps may make the diff hard, but it also makes the players frustrating. ill point out the jumps that i had a hard time catching. i'm not saying that these jumps are superhard, but you miss these if you hesitate for a moment. try reducing these jumps.

00:14:142 (4,5) -
00:43:580 (1) -
01:07:111 (4,5,1) -
01:10:580 (1) -
01:13:392 (1) -
01:14:705 (4,5) -
01:22:955 (2) -

this is just my opinion, no need to change if you don't feel like it xD

[Rain]
00:03:080 (1) - end this slider at 00:03:455
00:19:205 (3) - ctrl+h?
01:20:517 (4) - this jump is quite hard try reducing the distance

nice map have my star :3

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-05-14T14:46:52+00:00

Serena- wrote:
ah one of the song i luv :3

[Rain]
00:03:080 (1) - end this slider at 00:03:455 end at 00:03:361 instead to follow the vocal. why i didn't notice this orz
00:19:205 (3) - ctrl+h? i'll keep this
01:20:517 (4) - this jump is quite hard try reducing the distance aaah sure moved to the right by 20 points

nice map have my star :3

thanks for the mod and star

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,594 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2014-05-15T11:32:56+00:00

Oh I rested too long :3
Mod4Mod, thanks! (Link here

[Rain]
00:51:642 (2,3,4) - Streams should connect together

00:58:017 (3,4,5) - The circle put at last, while another slider move to the start

01:01:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The streams can be separated into 4 little streams

[Xinely's Overdose]
00:10:767 (1) - Spinner ends at 00:12:033
00:12:080 - 00:12:736 - Make some 1/4 streams here to suit the rhythm
00:16:392 (1) - Slider ends at 00:16:673
00:21:455 (2,3,4,5) - Make this part harder = better

00:24:361 - Add a circle here to suits the melody
00:24:455 (1,2,3,4) - This stream should have better pattern, because it's not hard enough

00:26:330 (3) - Remove this circle
00:26:517 (4) - Slider moves to 00:26:142
00:26:892 - Add circle
00:36:923 - ^
01:02:330 (1,2,3,4) - I recommend this part of streams can make harder (It looks better like this)

01:13:955 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Streams can be harder (Consider below)

01:25:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make streams farther to make it more overdose-r

The CTB diffs are great!

Good luck!
AFB

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-05-17T04:10:37+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
Oh I rested too long :3
Mod4Mod, thanks! (Link here

[Rain]
00:51:642 (2,3,4) - Streams should connect together i prefer my own pattern here

00:58:017 (3,4,5) - The circle put at last, while another slider move to the start this would be result as jump here. im not sure about this

01:01:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The streams can be separated into 4 little streams this is my first thought about making a streams here, but i decided to make it normal stream with a various distance

The CTB diffs are great!

Good luck!
AFB

sorry no changes on my diff..
thanks for mod

Minao

219 posts

Joined November 2013

Minao 2014-05-18T09:44:49+00:00

Hiiii!

I hope you're fine since the last time ^_^
I need a M4M please :3 I'm not very good at modding I will try to do my best :<

[KSHR's Easy]
00:06:080 (4) - Maybe use the same slider curve than 00:03:080 (2).
00:07:580 (2) - This can be* curved to fit with 00:07:205 (1), like this: http://puu.sh/8QRqJ.jpg
00:44:892 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - A suggestion for this part: http://puu.sh/8QRMW.jpg ---> http://puu.sh/8QRSL.jpg ---> http://puu.sh/8QRVV.jpg
I hope it's clear enough; I don't know how to show it better '-'
01:04:580 (3) - It can make a better triangle with previous objects: http://puu.sh/8QS4g.jpg
01:10:955 (3) - Same than previously: http://puu.sh/8QS6p.jpg
01:22:955 (3) - Same than previously: http://puu.sh/8QS9M.jpg
01:27:830 (2,3) - 2 can be curved a little more and 3 can fit even better to 2 first circle: http://puu.sh/8QSg4.jpg

[Normal]
00:00:830 (1,1) - I think it can be improved by something of this kind: http://puu.sh/8QSsL.jpg. If you don't like the green slider I made, at least consider to lean the rose one as on the screenshot: so it will seems straightless than a 100% vertical one and I think it's better. What do you think?
00:24:830 (3) - Only a suggestion: http://puu.sh/8QSYo.png (I stack all the objects to take screenshots so sometime it bugs and doesn't show the numbers)
00:44:892 (2) - Try to curve this a little more so it fits with the previous slider (not easy) http://puu.sh/8QT7s.jpg
01:00:080 (4) - I think it can be curved just a little bit more: http://puu.sh/8QTcd.jpg
01:09:080 (1) - I don't think this part fits very well with the music, I think it's too much symmetric... A suggestion too keep your first idea but change the symetrical aspect: http://puu.sh/8QTIL.jpg ---> http://puu.sh/8QTM2.jpg ---> http://puu.sh/8QTOo.jpg
01:34:955 (4) - I feel that it has to be placed here 01:34:767 but it's maybe a little difficult for normal diff, I don't know...

[Hard]
Until 00:10:580 - I think it can be better if objects are not stacked, with distance spacing at 1.4x they are not stacked anymore.
00:01:580 (1) - It can be curved a little more: http://puu.sh/8QU7p.jpg
00:07:580 (1,2,3) - This part is difficult to curve but I think it can be a little better: http://puu.sh/8QUd1.jpg
00:14:142 (2) - I think it can be curved a little more better: http://puu.sh/8QUj7.jpg
01:03:830 (3,4,5) - It can be even cuter is these are a little more curved: http://puu.sh/8QUuP.jpg
01:13:017 (2) - Can be curved a little more.
01:20:142 (7) - It is a little too much curved I think, it can fit with the previous slider curve better.
From 01:30:080 until the end: Same things than until 00:10:580 .

[Hinsvar's Lunatic]
00:30:080 (1) - It can be curved better
00:31:205 (3,1,2) - I think 1 can be more curved to fit with 2 curve, maybe like that? http://puu.sh/8QV1S.png
00:50:517 (4) - Can be more curved to fit with next slider: http://puu.sh/8QV9R.jpg

I hope you will like it :3

For your mod:
Cats on Mars is my first beatmap, Easy / Normal / Hard diff, it is completed and needs a little more mods to be ranked I think. I would really really prefer a mod on this map.

But if you don't have enough time / don't like the first music you can mod Ref-Rain by Yuuhei Satellite: work in progress, only easy diff is over so it's only 1 diff to mod.

Thank you!

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-05-18T13:58:12+00:00

hweeeeeee it's MINAOOO!!!
long time no see you >////<
im not fine right now hueee, what bring you here? oh m4m? no need for m4m also you can ask me for a mod anytime since you helped me so much on my first map xD. but right now i still have some request to clean up first, so i'll mod your map later

Minao

219 posts

Joined November 2013

Minao 2014-05-18T14:31:28+00:00

It's okay mod it when you want ^_^ I only made some part of the skin you know XD I don't think I helped that much :p
If you're not fine now I hope you will be good soon >.<

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-05-19T12:08:47+00:00

Hi~Hi~，Mod request from BMT Modding Team，for Standard
Senya~Senya~Senya~
about the hitsounds，almost are flow my feeling，hope you like it

[KSHR's Easy]
00:03:642 add whistle
00:09:080 add whistle
00:15:080 (2) - slider end change to Drum addition then add whistle
00:56:892 (2) - slider end also add clap
01:25:955 (2) - change to finish
01:26:330 (3) - slider end change to finish ->I think these place continuously emphasize is so excellent，just my personal opinion
01:35:517 here add 30% may better

[Normal]
00:03:830 (4) - slider head add whistle
00:09:080 (3) - ^
00:18:830 (4) - whistle
00:22:580 change to finish
00:23:142 add finish
00:57:642 (4) - slider end change to finish
00:58:955 (2) - ^
01:00:080 (4) - head,end,reverse all change to finish
01:01:580 (1) - add finish
01:28:580 (3) - slider head add whistle
01:33:642 (2) - slider end add whistle
01:34:205 (3) - slider head cancel whistle

[Hard]
00:03:080 add whistle
00:03:830 (4) - slider head add whistle
00:19:580 (1,2,3) - actually this flow isn't good enough,change another one?
00:44:892 (1) - change to finish
00:46:580 (1,2,3) - here have a very important piano in 00:47:142，the slider should start at here imo，try this rhythm

SPOILER

00:58:205 (6) - slider head change to finish
01:01:767 (2) - delete this circle
01:08:142 (8) - slider head change to whistle，end change to clap
01:11:142 (5) - slider head add whistle
01:13:017 (2) - slider head change to clap
01:20:142 (7) - slider head remove clap

[Hinsvar's Lunatic]
cuz some stream which use N-hit are really loudly，maybe should reduce the vol. with the stream
00:16:392 (8) - add whistle
00:17:611 (6) - slider head add whistle
00:25:205 (2) - also add whistle
00:29:705 (4) - slider end add whistle
00:56:892 (1) - slider head also add whistle
01:13:580 (1) - add whistle
01:13:580 (1) - slider head also add finish
01:26:705 (1) - change to whistle

nice map

hope it help you ！
good luck~

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-05-20T05:59:39+00:00

Minao wrote:
Hiiii!
I hope you're fine since the last time ^_^
I need a M4M please :3 I'm not very good at modding I will try to do my best :<

[Normal]
00:00:830 (1,1) - I think it can be improved by something of this kind: http://puu.sh/8QSsL.jpg. If you don't like the green slider I made, at least consider to lean the rose one as on the screenshot: so it will seems straightless than a 100% vertical one and I think it's better. What do you think? ummmm,, at the very early part like this i prefer a normal flow here not blanketed one cz it's more natural
00:24:830 (3) - Only a suggestion: http://puu.sh/8QSYo.png (I stack all the objects to take screenshots so sometime it bugs and doesn't show the numbers) the current is fine already and also your screenshot shows that (1) is overlapped by (3)'s tail which is not good cz it's quite hard to read. on the next time if you want to show the screenshot that contains a lot of object, just SS it separately no need to stack them on timeline which may confuse the mapper
00:44:892 (2) - Try to curve this a little more so it fits with the previous slider (not easy) http://puu.sh/8QT7s.jpg the current is perfect already. try to prove it with approach circle D:
01:00:080 (4) - I think it can be curved just a little bit more: http://puu.sh/8QTcd.jpg yep a bit
01:09:080 (1) - I don't think this part fits very well with the music, I think it's too much symmetric... A suggestion too keep your first idea but change the symetrical aspect: http://puu.sh/8QTIL.jpg ---> http://puu.sh/8QTM2.jpg ---> http://puu.sh/8QTOo.jpg i did this intentionally. the rhythm is fits well with the music imo, but maybe not the pattern .__.
01:34:955 (4) - I feel that it has to be placed here 01:34:767 but it's maybe a little difficult for normal diff, I don't know... this object is placed at the right time

[Hard]
Until 00:10:580 - I think it can be better if objects are not stacked, with distance spacing at 1.4x they are not stacked anymore. no no no.. i'll keep the DS 1.2x. the reason why they're stacked (it's overlap obviously) is because im using lower SV here which in result lower the DS too..
00:01:580 (1) - It can be curved a little more: http://puu.sh/8QU7p.jpg move this further a bit
00:07:580 (1,2,3) - This part is difficult to curve but I think it can be a little better: http://puu.sh/8QUd1.jpg the current is okay
00:14:142 (2) - I think it can be curved a little more better: http://puu.sh/8QUj7.jpg ^
01:03:830 (3,4,5) - It can be even cuter is these are a little more curved: http://puu.sh/8QUuP.jpg ^
01:13:017 (2) - Can be curved a little more. ^
01:20:142 (7) - It is a little too much curved I think, it can fit with the previous slider curve better. ^
From 01:30:080 until the end: Same things than until 00:10:580 . this part song is calm here. that's why i lower the SV like before

Sellenite wrote:
Hi~Hi~，Mod request from BMT Modding Team，for Standard
Senya~Senya~Senya~
about the hitsounds，almost are flow my feeling，hope you like it

[Normal]
00:03:830 (4) - slider head add whistle ok
00:09:080 (3) - ^ ^
00:18:830 (4) - whistle ^
00:22:580 change to finish ^
00:23:142 add finish ^
00:57:642 (4) - slider end change to finish
00:58:955 (2) - ^
01:00:080 (4) - head,end,reverse all change to finish
01:01:580 (1) - add finish
01:28:580 (3) - slider head add whistle
01:33:642 (2) - slider end add whistle
01:34:205 (3) - slider head cancel whistle

[Hard]
00:03:080 add whistle ok
00:03:830 (4) - slider head add whistle ^
00:19:580 (1,2,3) - actually this flow isn't good enough,change another one? the angle is a bit hard right? but that's how i map this pattern
00:44:892 (1) - change to finish
00:46:580 (1,2,3) - here have a very important piano in 00:47:142，the slider should start at here imo，try this rhythm
SPOILER
i prefer my own rhythm here. and also the piano sound here isn't that loud if you compared with the vocal
00:58:205 (6) - slider head change to finish
01:01:767 (2) - delete this circle
01:08:142 (8) - slider head change to whistle，end change to clap
01:11:142 (5) - slider head add whistle
01:13:017 (2) - slider head change to clap
01:20:142 (7) - slider head remove clap
no reply means no changes :3

nice map
hope it help you ！
good luck~

thanks for mod and the star guys <3

Last edited by Vhy 2014-05-20T06:28:28+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2014-05-20T06:12:38+00:00

Minao wrote:
[Hinsvar's Lunatic]
00:30:080 (1) - It can be curved better How so? I don't have any idea lol
00:31:205 (3,1,2) - I think 1 can be more curved to fit with 2 curve, maybe like that? http://puu.sh/8QV1S.png I can't see anything wrong with the current pattern, and to be blunt, I don't really like the curve of your (1) o.o
00:50:517 (4) - Can be more curved to fit with next slider: http://puu.sh/8QV9R.jpg Done.

Sellenite wrote:
[Hinsvar's Lunatic]
cuz some stream which use N-hit are really loudly，maybe should reduce the vol. with the stream I don't think so... but I'll consider.
00:16:392 (8) - add whistle Done!
00:17:611 (6) - slider head add whistle The instrument here is weaker than the end of the slider.
00:25:205 (2) - also add whistle I personally feel that it's unnecessary and redundant.
00:29:705 (4) - slider end add whistle Done.
00:56:892 (1) - slider head also add whistle ^
01:13:580 (1) - add whistle ^
01:13:580 (1) - slider head also add finish I don't think the instrument here is that heavy...
01:26:705 (1) - change to whistle No; same reason as 00:25:205 (2).

Thanks for the mod!

ahue

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TitleUnicode:月に叢雲華に風
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Creator:Vhy
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kamisamaaa

606 posts

Joined July 2011

kamisamaaa 2014-05-20T08:12:33+00:00

from BMT modding team
just a few suggestions
[Lunatic]
00:11:142 (2) - a little far from prev. because music is really soft here. you can compare with 00:10:205 (4) - this. I think this is much stronger than 00:11:142 (2) - . but it has a little distance.
00:58:392 (2,2) - maybe stack these two will look better imo
01:02:330 (3) - why use little distance here? and flow to the next feel strange
[hard]
you add too many whistle in this diff...it almost sounds like a hitnormal >.< maybe delete some of them will feel better imo
00:00:830 (1) - move the whistle from head to tail
00:01:580 (1) - remove the whistle on the tail
00:07:580 (1) - remove the whistle on the head?
00:09:080 (3) - ^
00:10:205 (2,4) - suggest remove the whistle on these two.
these are just a example. if you think these kind of hitsound sound better you can change others by yourself
01:18:642 (2,3) - flow is not so good imo
01:19:580 (5,6,7) - I know you follow the drum. but vocal here is special and so strong. change rhythm like 00:17:330 (4,5) - sounds better imo.
[normal and easy]
nothing. all look fine to me

KSHR

osu! Alumni

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-05-20T10:01:37+00:00

Minao wrote:
[KSHR's Easy]
00:06:080 (4) - Maybe use the same slider curve than 00:03:080 (2). No change. It seems like there is no stuff to make consistent with it.
00:07:580 (2) - This can be* curved to fit with 00:07:205 (1), like this: http://puu.sh/8QRqJ.jpg If you don't mind, give me a code for this slider.
00:44:892 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - A suggestion for this part: http://puu.sh/8QRMW.jpg ---> http://puu.sh/8QRSL.jpg ---> http://puu.sh/8QRVV.jpg
I hope it's clear enough; I don't know how to show it better '-' Rearranged 00:45:830 (3,1,2,3,4) - referring to your images.
01:04:580 (3) - It can make a better triangle with previous objects: http://puu.sh/8QS4g.jpg Fixed
01:10:955 (3) - Same than previously: http://puu.sh/8QS6p.jpg Fixed
01:22:955 (3) - Same than previously: http://puu.sh/8QS9M.jpg It looks like this one is enough to me.
01:27:830 (2,3) - 2 can be curved a little more and 3 can fit even better to 2 first circle: http://puu.sh/8QSg4.jpg Fixed

Sellenite wrote:
Hi~Hi~ Yo, ~~Satellite~~ Sellenite

[KSHR's Easy]
00:03:642 add whistle No change since there is no piano sound here.
00:09:080 add whistle Added at the lower volume.
00:15:080 (2) - slider end change to Drum addition then add whistle No change. Sorry, I personally don't like drum hitsounds.. Change the sampleset to Normal instead.
00:56:892 (2) - slider end also add clap Nice catch! Added.
01:25:955 (2) - change to finish No change since the finish sound doesn't go here.
01:26:330 (3) - slider end change to finish ->I think these place continuously emphasize is so excellent，just my personal opinion As I explained above.
01:35:517 here add 30% may better Okay, fixed.

Thanks for your modding!

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Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-05-21T04:26:22+00:00

kamisamaaa wrote:
from BMT modding team
just a few suggestions
[hard]
you add too many whistle in this diff...it almost sounds like a hitnormal >.< maybe delete some of them will feel better imo well.. i just put whistle in some certain place tho. removed a little of them
00:00:830 (1) - move the whistle from head to tail no
00:01:580 (1) - remove the whistle on the tail ^
00:07:580 (1) - remove the whistle on the head? ^
00:09:080 (3) - ^ ^
00:10:205 (2,4) - suggest remove the whistle on these two.
these are just a example. if you think these kind of hitsound sound better you can change others by yourself ^
01:18:642 (2,3) - flow is not so good imo okay. changed
01:19:580 (5,6,7) - I know you follow the drum. but vocal here is special and so strong. change rhythm like 00:17:330 (4,5) - sounds better imo. yeah it is but i prefer mine

thanks for mod

EDIT : all updated ~

Minao

219 posts

Joined November 2013

Minao 2014-05-21T12:54:11+00:00

Vhy wrote:
thanks for mod and the star guys <3

As you saw I'm not very good for modding XD

Hinsvar wrote:
00:30:080 (1) - It can be curved better How so? I don't have any idea lol

The current* slider is like this: http://puu.sh/8V7QA.jpg
I thought of doing this:~~http://puu.sh/8V7XS.jpg~~ http://puu.sh/8Vbnn.jpg
(Yeah I'm very "curve nazi" on this one ^_^" )

KSHR wrote:
00:07:580 (2) - This can be* curved to fit with 00:07:205 (1), like this: http://puu.sh/8QRqJ.jpg If you don't mind, give me a code for this slider.

I didn't save the last one but I tried to make it again:
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hoshisorakiseki

300 posts

Joined January 2012

hoshisorakiseki 2014-05-21T14:24:04+00:00

hello,
random mod
diff:rain
00:03:830 (3) - i prefer split it to 2 sliders
00:08:142 (3) - this is unrank in standard mode, but i don't know in ctb mode...and so many slider like this...
00:56:892 (6,1) - add finish and delete clap
diff:lunatic
00:24:080 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - let the hitsound quieter and quieter.
01:14:705 (1,2,3,4) - follow the music, i prefer to 1 and 3 is higher than 2 and 4.
diff:overdose
怎么感觉像是standard模式的图
00:12:830 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 音量渐增比较好（let the sound more and more loud）
00:36:830 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这些在音乐中的音效相似，可以考虑使用相同的hitsound（try the same hitsound, because they are like with each other）
diff:hard
00:08:517 (2,3) - why not follow the vocal here?
00:35:705 (3) - maybe a little hard in the "hard"...
00:37:111 - can you add a note here?
01:26:330 (4,5) - try to let them slide to the diffrent side.
diff:normal
00:52:017 (5) - delay to 00:52:205
00:55:017 (5) - delay to 00:55:205
01:25:580 (2,3,4,5) - add finish?
diff:easy
i think it's ok
good luck

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-05-21T15:45:49+00:00

Minao wrote:
Vhy wrote:
thanks for mod and the star guys <3
As you saw I'm not very good for modding XD

ahueheueheue don't worry. you'll get improved and better xD

Minao

219 posts

Joined November 2013

Minao 2014-05-22T12:35:51+00:00

Hi, just to say that this beatmap uses the same background than yours

I don't know if it matters for you, I only wanted to inform.

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,826 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2014-05-22T13:48:36+00:00

kamisamaaa wrote:
[Lunatic]
00:11:142 (2) - a little far from prev. because music is really soft here. you can compare with 00:10:205 (4) - this. I think this is much stronger than 00:11:142 (2) - . but it has a little distance. Reduced the distance.
00:58:392 (2,2) - maybe stack these two will look better imo Will only make them look better in the editor; this won't do anything while playing.
01:02:330 (3) - why use little distance here? and flow to the next feel strange Also reduced the spacing.

hoshisorakiseki wrote:
diff:lunatic
00:24:080 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - let the hitsound quieter and quieter. Okay, but I decided to start from 00:25:205.
01:14:705 (1,2,3,4) - follow the music, i prefer to 1 and 3 is higher than 2 and 4.

Thanks!

yay

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Yumeno Himiko

Elite Storyboarder

1,168 posts

Joined August 2012

Yumeno Himiko 2014-05-22T16:47:41+00:00

Hi~ From BMT modding Queue~
senya >.<
hope my suggestions will be helpful~

[General]
After my test,I think the red line should be BPM 160 , Offset 1592
The red line should be on the first instrumental point~

[KSHR's Easy]
hmm...the only thing I feel it can be improved is that better sliders can be created. //I mean something like heart?
Well this diff is nice in my opinion.

[Normal]
00:00:830 (1,1) - Make a blanket here will feel good, you can refer to KSHR's Easy as an example.
00:17:705 (3,4,5,1,2) - Maybe you can make this go more fluently here.

SPOILER

60,120,18830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,92,19205,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,140,19580,6,0,B|294:159|279:97|357:95,2,150,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,228,21080,2,0,P|207:275|233:318,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,364,21830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,316,22205,1,8,0:0:0:0:

00:48:830 (3,1) - better make a blanket
01:35:517 (1) - flip it vertically looks better

[Hard]
00:02:705 (2) - 2 grid left to make it a blanket
00:04:580 (1) - This angle can be smaller, it feels not so good
00:41:892 00:42:267 00:42:642 00:43:017 - You may consider put some notes in these points to make it feel consistent.
00:46:580 (1,2,3,4) - I think put notes like this sounds better

SPOILER

01:01:580 (1,2,3,4,5) - And here, I suggest you put notes like this,you can use a reverse slider to substitude the stream

SPOILER

01:04:580 (5,6) - extand the slider 5 to a 3/4 slider,which feels better~
01:16:580 (5,6) - ^

hmm..In my opinion,this diff sounds a bit boring,you may try to change some sliders to fit the vocal and this diff will be very interesting ;w;

[Hinsvar's Lunatic]
I can't play Lunatic,so I won't give suggestions here ._.

[Rain]
In my opinion,it looks more like Overdose,you may try to make this diff easier

00:08:142 (3,4,5,6) - The distance should be cut down here,it's hard to react TUT (In fact I can't catch that pattern
00:17:892 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I think a streem is no need here,also 5&6 which change the direction which makes it even harder.You can just put a long slider instead.
01:01:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The stream changing the direction is extremely hard to catch,which is an Overdose pattern,you may try to make 4 fruits in a group and move every 4/4, like this

SPOILER

The later stream and other parts of this diff seems nice.

[Xinely's Overdose]
this diff looks wonderful lol~~

Good luck with this nice touhou song~~

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-05-23T15:20:14+00:00

hoshisorakiseki wrote:
hello,
random mod
diff:rain
00:03:830 (3) - i prefer split it to 2 sliders you mean circles? it changes nothing since i want to make this part slow movement for ryuuta
00:08:142 (3) - this is unrank in standard mode, but i don't know in ctb mode...and so many slider like this... this is allowed as long as it's still playable
00:56:892 (6,1) - add finish and delete clap
diff:hard
00:08:517 (2,3) - why not follow the vocal here? just my taste, nothing more. i feel the rhythm here better
00:35:705 (3) - maybe a little hard in the "hard"... find me a better pattern and i will change this u,u
00:37:111 - can you add a note here? keep the rhythm
01:26:330 (4,5) - try to let them slide to the diffrent side. done
diff:normal
00:52:017 (5) - delay to 00:52:205 no
00:55:017 (5) - delay to 00:55:205 no
01:25:580 (2,3,4,5) - add finish? k added. removed clap
i think it's ok
good luck

examination wrote:
Hi~ From BMT modding Queue~
senya >.<
hope my suggestions will be helpful~

[General]
After my test,I think the red line should be BPM 160 , Offset 1592 you really need to see the 1st page
The red line should be on the first instrumental point~

[KSHR's Easy]
hmm...the only thing I feel it can be improved is that better sliders can be created. //I mean something like heart?
Well this diff is nice in my opinion. no no.. you must be wrong ;w;

[Normal]
00:00:830 (1,1) - Make a blanket here will feel good, you can refer to KSHR's Easy as an example. just as i explained on the mod reply before. for a starter i prefer not to make a blanket here, and it flows better
00:17:705 (3,4,5,1,2) - Maybe you can make this go more fluently here. i prefer to keep mine since 00:18:830 (4,5) is simmetrycal with 00:15:455 (4,5)
SPOILER
60,120,18830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,92,19205,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,140,19580,6,0,B|294:159|279:97|357:95,2,150,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,228,21080,2,0,P|207:275|233:318,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,364,21830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,316,22205,1,8,0:0:0:0:
00:48:830 (3,1) - better make a blanket it will ruin the DS badly
01:35:517 (1) - flip it vertically looks better nope i think

[Hard]
00:02:705 (2) - 2 grid left to make it a blanket. there's no reason to make a blanket here. the distance is quite far
00:04:580 (1) - This angle can be smaller, it feels not so good ok
00:41:892 00:42:267 00:42:642 00:43:017 - You may consider put some notes in these points to make it feel consistent. this part vocal goes high pitch here. so i won't change this
00:46:580 (1,2,3,4) - I think put notes like this sounds better sorry i prefer mine
SPOILER
01:01:580 (1,2,3,4,5) - And here, I suggest you put notes like this,you can use a reverse slider to substitude the stream ^
SPOILER
01:04:580 (5,6) - extand the slider 5 to a 3/4 slider,which feels better~ nope
01:16:580 (5,6) - ^ ^

hmm..In my opinion,this diff sounds a bit boring,you may try to change some sliders to fit the vocal and this diff will be very interesting ;w; too much 1/2 rhythm usage isn't it? but yeah i like this kind of rhythm really

[Rain]
In my opinion,it looks more like Overdose,you may try to make this diff easier the amount of HDash isn't that many. and also the jump usage here is very suitable for rain diff imo[/color]
00:08:142 (3,4,5,6) - The distance should be cut down here,it's hard to react TUT (In fact I can't catch that pattern) ok decreased the distance of 00:09:267 (6) but i will keep 00:08:705 (4)
00:17:892 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I think a streem is no need here,also 5&6 which change the direction which makes it even harder.You can just put a long slider instead. welcome to the rain.. a long slider isn't really fits and challenging here
01:01:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The stream changing the direction is extremely hard to catch,which is an Overdose pattern,you may try to make 4 fruits in a group and move every 4/4, like this errr... an overdose could be even worst than this. believe me :3
SPOILER

The later stream and other parts of this diff seems nice.

Good luck with this nice touhou song~~

thanks for the mod guys

Minao wrote:
Hi, just to say that this beatmap uses the same background than yours I don't know if it matters for you, I only wanted to inform.

oh i just realized this. but yeah i don't care tho :3

KSHR

osu! Alumni

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-06-13T05:27:47+00:00

Minao wrote:
KSHR wrote:
00:07:580 (2) - This can be* curved to fit with 00:07:205 (1), like this: http://puu.sh/8QRqJ.jpg If you don't mind, give me a code for this slider.
I didn't save the last one but I tried to make it again:
180,104,7580,2,0,B|244:120|292:80|292:80|340:132|316:200,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

oops, I forgot to post about this lol
I will update with future mods~ Thanks Minao!

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-10-03T14:39:15+00:00

hype..

PuttyoU

172 posts

Joined October 2011

PuttyoU 2014-10-09T14:27:55+00:00

from modding queues~

[Hinsvar's Lunatic]

00:35:142 (2) - I think it is good that have curve
00:38:892 (5) - the placement not good. stack 00:38:142 (3) or 00:38:330 (4) - change direction and blanket 00:38:892 (5) -
01:09:830 (5,6) - I want more jump there.
01:23:892 (7) - move x:180 y:170. After looks good.
01:36:173 (1) - fit other diff spinner end 01:37:580 -

[Hard]

00:10:017 (1,2,3,4) - a little boring suggestion : 1-2 DS1.2 , 2-3 DS1.4 , 3-4 DS1.5
00:37:955 (2,4) - stack?
00:45:642 (3,4) - (3)x:182 y:146 (4)x:84 y:235
01:04:580 (5,6) - how about stack there

[Normal]

00:51:642 (4,5) - not good rhythm.change it and same 00:54:642 (4,5) - there

01:04:205 (3,4) - how about plavement?

69,168,64205,1,8,0:0:0:0:
2,107,64580,2,0,P|47:82|95:81,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:06:830 (3,4) - Um~~I want blanket it.

[KSHR's Easy]

00:16:205 - ここに音がないのはなんか寂しいです．
00:44:517 - ^
00:49:580 (1) - 少し曲げるのもいいかなと思います．2nd point x:134 y:312 , 3rd poind x:99 y:332
01:14:330 (3) - スライダーにしたほうがよさげです．01:14:705 - slider end

That's all．All good maps

Good luck!

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-10-10T08:43:14+00:00

PuttyoU wrote:
from modding queues~

[Hard]
00:10:017 (1,2,3,4) - a little boring suggestion : 1-2 DS1.2 , 2-3 DS1.4 , 3-4 DS1.5 fixed on my own
00:37:955 (2,4) - stack?
00:45:642 (3,4) - (3)x:182 y:146 (4)x:84 y:235 ok
01:04:580 (5,6) - how about stack there no i prefer the current.

[Normal]
00:51:642 (4,5) - not good rhythm.change it and same 00:54:642 (4,5) - there the current is easy enough to read
01:04:205 (3,4) - how about plavement? no, intended not to make a blanket here
69,168,64205,1,8,0:0:0:0:
2,107,64580,2,0,P|47:82|95:81,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:06:830 (3,4) - Um~~I want blanket it. same as above
That's all．All good maps
Good luck!

thanks for modding

KSHR

osu! Alumni

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-10-12T05:55:39+00:00

PuttyoU wrote:
[KSHR's Easy]
00:16:205 - ここに音がないのはなんか寂しいです
Maybe this is just because of a hit normal at 00:15:830 - (which is my mistake..). Instead of rearranging the rhythm, removed this hitsound. It should be fine now.
00:44:517 - ^
This rhythm is following the vocal line closely as you can listen. So it should be fine as it is imo. I will reconsider fixing if 2 other modders also point out this.
00:49:580 (1) - 少し曲げるのもいいかなと思います．2nd point x:134 y:312 , 3rd poind x:99 y:332

Sorry. but let me keep the current placement as it is. I prefer mine.
01:14:330 (3) - スライダーにしたほうがよさげです．01:14:705 - slider end
Agreed. Fixed.

Minao wrote:
I didn't save the last one but I tried to make it again:
180,104,7580,2,0,B|244:120|292:80|292:80|340:132|316:200,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Tried your code, but it seems to be the same code as mine.. Well fixed on my own.

Thanks for modding.

Additionally fixed the following things on my own.

00:10:767 (1,1) - In order to give enough recovery, removed 00:13:580 (1) - and extended the end of 00:10:767 (1) - to 00:13:580 - .
01:02:330 (1) - For the same reason as above, removed this slider.

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: tsuki ni.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 62330
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Tsuki ni Murakumo Hana ni Kaze
TitleUnicode:月に叢雲華に風
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:Vhy
Version:KSHR's Easy
Source:Touhou
Tags:th11 subterranean animism komeiji koishi last remote iceon Kamase-tora yuuhei satellite c81 hinsvar xinely kshr
BeatmapID:390101
BeatmapSetID:158128

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-10-12T21:56:55+00:00

Re-check for this mapset.

[Rain]

00:10:392 (4,5) - This distance is a bit high after the HDash between (3,4) Move (5) a few grid right to avoid edge dash.
00:26:892 (4,1) - I want a bit bigger jump here. (1) follows a high pitched vocal after all.
01:01:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This stream is way too hard for this level. The problem is with 01:02:423 (2,4). Both of them should be moved 1 grid left to make the stream a bit easier to fc.
01:30:080 (1,2,3) - I don't really get this triangle jump since the music is calm here. I know there should be a jump if we listen to the music in the background but the sound at 01:30:080 (1) is much stronger and overlap everything else here. This creates a strange feeling towards the jumps. I suggest moving (2) a bit closer.

Everything else seems fine to me, not my style but fine. :3

[Overdose]

Turn off Widescreen Support. :3

00:14:517 (5) - I know this is Overdose, but move this a bit back to left. Its kinda hard to handle this distance.
00:17:330 (4,5) - The distance between these are a bit high and after this jump the player need to move to right. I suggest you to move (5,6) a few grid right to avoid this.

Thats all. Its an Overdose after all so it should be a bit harder. :3
[]

Call me back after these are checked. I will apple it. :3

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-10-13T08:14:01+00:00

fixed all from Kurokami ><
yeah this is my first overdose.. i'm not really fit to be evil mapper lol
anyway thanks 4 mod :3

~

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Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-10-13T08:29:08+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
Re-check for this mapset.

[Rain]

00:10:392 (4,5) - This distance is a bit high after the HDash between (3,4) Move (5) a few grid right to avoid edge dash. ok moved (5) to x:376
00:26:892 (4,1) - I want a bit bigger jump here. (1) follows a high pitched vocal after all. fixed and remapped some part before this note to make it easier
01:01:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This stream is way too hard for this level. The problem is with 01:02:423 (2,4). Both of them should be moved 1 grid left to make the stream a bit easier to fc. moved 01:02:517 (3) by 2 grid to the right instead. i want to keep the distance of 01:02:330 (1,2)
01:30:080 (1,2,3) - I don't really get this triangle jump since the music is calm here. I know there should be a jump if we listen to the music in the background but the sound at 01:30:080 (1) is much stronger and overlap everything else here. This creates a strange feeling towards the jumps. I suggest moving (2) a bit closer. sure. reduced by 2 grid, and also i flipped the position of 01:30:080 (1,2,3) to make less movement from its current

Everything else seems fine to me, not my style but fine. :3

Call me back after these are checked. I will apple it. :3

thanks for the recheck kurokami

all updated.

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-10-13T10:59:03+00:00

Checked once more. seems fine to me although I'm kinda new with Overdoses. Good luck. o/

Appled~

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-10-13T11:20:38+00:00

i love you <3

Birdy

5,757 posts

Joined April 2011

Birdy 2014-10-13T19:48:39+00:00

[Easy]
Good. Very good.

[Normal]
00:42:455 (4,1) - Should be stacked, they are just a little bit off.
00:44:892 (2) - Curve's point could be moved to y:156 for prettier turn and blanket.
01:00:080 (4) - First curve's point could be moved to y:284 for prettier turn and blanket.
01:18:080 (1) - This slider looks a bit compressed, please make the form/pattern a little bigger, that would look better.
01:24:080 (1) - The ending curve looks really odd, consider using a more usual shape?

[Hard]
01:01:955 (2,3,4) - A real flowbreaker - symmetry shouldn't be used like this. This part should be fun to play, too, not only to look at. Maybe it's a personal preference, but I don't like it myself

Many parts in the chorus section could be mapped more to the song, not only the beat. I'm not going to point out everything, you should be able to figure it out yourself. Like a wise man once said, if the map fits any other song of the same BPM, it's (probably) not a good map. Otherwise, it's a rather nice difficulty.

[Hinsvar's Lunatic]
I usually can't mod anything this difficult, and even less this time, because it looks really overmapped to me. But I'm not advanced with Lunatics and Extras and such. I don't know. Maybe I'm just a newbie. Maybe.

Sorry for a short mod, overall it's quite good already. Good luck!

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-10-18T10:25:49+00:00

Static Noise Bird wrote:
[Normal]
00:42:455 (4,1) - Should be stacked, they are just a little bit off. fixed
00:44:892 (2) - Curve's point could be moved to y:156 for prettier turn and blanket. that was very nazi. fixed anyway
01:00:080 (4) - First curve's point could be moved to y:284 for prettier turn and blanket. ^
01:18:080 (1) - This slider looks a bit compressed, please make the form/pattern a little bigger, that would look better. its fine
01:24:080 (1) - The ending curve looks really odd, consider using a more usual shape? idk but i made it with a reverse so it should be okay

[Hard]
01:01:955 (2,3,4) - A real flowbreaker - symmetry shouldn't be used like this. This part should be fun to play, too, not only to look at. Maybe it's a personal preference, but I don't like it myself lol yeah as do i, changed the pattern
Many parts in the chorus section could be mapped more to the song, not only the beat. I'm not going to point out everything, you should be able to figure it out yourself. Like a wise man once said, if the map fits any other song of the same BPM, it's (probably) not a good map. Otherwise, it's a rather nice difficulty. im just to lazy to think. thats all :3

Sorry for a short mod, overall it's quite good already. Good luck!

thanks for the mod

KSHR

osu! Alumni

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-10-19T23:02:42+00:00

Title: 月に群雲華に風 (PV ver.)
Fixed the romanized one as well please :p

http://www.yuuhei-satellite.jp/?p=724 (Track No.8)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_iec7noWoh4#t=101

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-10-22T12:31:06+00:00

thanks doki2!!

changed the title and updated ~

TEKON_old

73 posts

Joined October 2012

TEKON_old 2014-10-23T19:58:57+00:00

Hello |’。ω。）
I hope this helps.
Very pretty map.

Easy
Question: Why does easy have so many inherited timing sections?
00:16:392 (3) - I find how this slider starts quite difficult for easy, even if it follows the music. try this (the beat in the middle has clap hitsound)?

clickety

00:20:330 (2,3) - might want to try it^ here too. The music pattern is not as obvious as in the later parts of the song

Normal
00:05:611 (2) - remove overlap
00:46:580 (1) - the middle of this reverse could be a finish sound
01:10:955 (1,2,1) - doesn't really fit into the previous pattern, can you think of something else? (sounds a bit boring, too sorry)

Hard
00:16:205 (6) - start nc here and remove from 00:16:392 (1)
00:39:830 (4) - remove clap from slider's end or is it purpose just like 00:44:705 (5) ?
01:05:330 (7,8,9,10) - I find this a bit close ~~and boring~~ might want to try this? (9 is underneath 7; reduce distance if needed)

clickety

Lunatic
00:10:017 (3,4,5) - Place like this

clickety

Sorry, If I wasn't much help

Good luck, still, your map looks great.

KSHR

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Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-10-25T12:55:00+00:00

TEKON wrote:
Easy
Question: Why does easy have so many inherited timing sections?
> Because of volume changes and slider tick sounds. I personally like this way of adding hitsounds.
00:16:392 (3) - I find how this slider starts quite difficult for easy, even if it follows the music. try this (the beat in the middle has clap hitsound)?
clickety
00:20:330 (2,3) - might want to try it^ here too. The music pattern is not as obvious as in the later parts of the song
> Fixed both.

Thanks for modding.
Additionally rearranged 00:59:330 (2,3) - and 01:18:080 (1,2) - .

SPOILER

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Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-10-30T07:43:05+00:00

TEKON wrote:
Hello |’。ω。）
I hope this helps.
Very pretty map.
Normal
00:05:611 (2) - remove overlap no they're not
00:46:580 (1) - the middle of this reverse could be a finish sound tried before but it sounds odd for me
01:10:955 (1,2,1) - doesn't really fit into the previous pattern, can you think of something else? idk but i prefer the current (sounds a bit boring, too sorry)

Hard
00:16:205 (6) - start nc here and remove from 00:16:392 (1) i am following stanza here so no
00:39:830 (4) - remove clap from slider's end or is it purpose just like 00:44:705 (5) ? yes they're
01:05:330 (7,8,9,10) - I find this a bit close ~~and boring~~ might want to try this? (9 is underneath 7; reduce distance if needed) changed on my own
clickety

Sorry, If I wasn't much help
Good luck, still, your map looks great.

thanks for the mod

just click

245 posts

Joined May 2014

just click 2014-11-02T02:57:17+00:00

Mod from #modrequest.

Only modded Hard and Hinsvar's Lunatic.

Hard

General

SPOILER

No problems here.

Map

SPOILER

00:08:517 (2) - This slider should end at 00:08:705

00:08:892 - Add a circle here after the above has been done. ^

00:09:080 (3) - This slider should end at 00:09:267

00:09:455 - Add a circle here again after the above has been done. ^

00:16:017 - Add a circle here?

Hinsvar's Lunatic

General

SPOILER

Nothing really to say here, but I suggest you make this AR 9 because it feels a little slow, especially with the streams.

Map

SPOILER

00:03:455 (2) - This slider feels random to me, I don't think it should be here. Remove it and place a circle at 00:03:642

00:24:080 - This stream feels really awkward, especially the reverse sliders. The circles should be stacked closer to each other.

Sakura

osu! Alumni

7,979 posts

Joined March 2010

Sakura 2014-11-07T00:23:24+00:00

From my modding queue:
(Suggestion, Feel free to choose whether to change or not)
(Personal criteria, Inconsistencies, Issues)
(Unrankable, Major issues.)

[Hinsvar's Lunatic]
00:03:455 (2) - The position of this slider feels more like you ran out of space more than anything, you could move 00:02:892 (4) - further to the top right so you can move 00:03:080 (1) - up and then blanket it with this slider? the overlap feels kinda meh
00:24:080 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I think this stream would fit better the guitar if it was full of sliders rather than having circles in the middle.

[Hard]
00:10:392 (5,6) - Why such a jump on hard, it feels awkward and doesn't fit the music.

[KSHR's Easy]
00:26:330 (2) - Add whistle to match the higher tone in the lyric?

Unrelated:

Sey wrote:
Xinely wrote:
Sey for BAT
Probably won't ever happen, but that's fine

I giggled

PS: KSHR diff is kawaii

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-11-07T02:47:40+00:00

Breezy wrote:
Mod from #modrequest.

Only modded Hard and Hinsvar's Lunatic.

Hard

Map

00:08:517 (2) - This slider should end at 00:08:705

00:08:892 - Add a circle here after the above has been done. ^

00:09:080 (3) - This slider should end at 00:09:267

00:09:455 - Add a circle here again after the above has been done. ^

00:16:017 - Add a circle here?

no changes sorry.

Sakura wrote:
From my modding queue:
(Suggestion, Feel free to choose whether to change or not)
(Personal criteria, Inconsistencies, Issues)
(Unrankable, Major issues.)

[Hard]
00:10:392 (5,6) - Why such a jump on hard, it feels awkward and doesn't fit the music. ok changed

PS: KSHR diff is kawaii totally no!!

thanks for the mod

KSHR

osu! Alumni

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-11-10T05:20:50+00:00

Sakura wrote:
[KSHR's Easy]
00:26:330 (2) - Add whistle to match the higher tone in the lyric?
Added! Apparently the previous version of my difficulty has not been updated probably, so you maybe should check rearranged patterns I mentioned in that post when rechecking.

PS: KSHR diff is kawaii ~~Sakura is kawaii~~

Thanks for modding, Sakura!

Vhy wrote:
Sakura wrote:
PS: KSHR diff is kawaii totally no!!

**** you. It's more kawaii than at least yours :p

Don't Forget Updating this time, VeryHentaiYeah

osu file format v13

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Countdown: 0
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Mode: 0
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TitleUnicode:月に叢雲華に風 (PV ver.)
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:Vhy
Version:KSHR's Easy
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Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-11-13T11:20:37+00:00

KSHR wrote:
**** you.

kk updated q,q

EDIT : ~~waiting for hinsvar only huee~~

EDIT 2 : updated all diffs. as well as new preview point ~

Last edited by Vhy 2014-11-15T17:09:54+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,826 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2014-11-15T13:41:26+00:00

PuttyoU wrote:
[Hinsvar's Lunatic]
00:35:142 (2) - I think it is good that have curve I personally feel that it's okay as is.
00:38:892 (5) - the placement not good. stack 00:38:142 (3) or 00:38:330 (4) - change direction and blanket 00:38:892 (5) - ^. It flows nicer and is more fun to play the current way.
01:09:830 (5,6) - I want more jump there. That's unnecessary IMO.
01:23:892 (7) - move x:180 y:170. After looks good. Why?
01:36:173 (1) - fit other diff spinner end 01:37:580 - Sure.

TEKON wrote:
00:10:017 (3,4,5) - Place like this That doesn't look like it'd work better than the current pattern, honestly...
clickety

Breezy wrote:
Hinsvar's Lunatic
General

SPOILER
Nothing really to say here, but I suggest you make this AR 9 because it feels a little slow, especially with the streams. Sure. Also, OD7.5.

Map

SPOILER
00:03:455 (2) - This slider feels random to me, I don't think it should be here. Remove it and place a circle at 00:03:642 I'm sure it's okay and does belong there.

00:24:080 - This stream feels really awkward, especially the reverse sliders. The circles should be stacked closer to each other. I can't see any problem here honestly...

Sakura wrote:
[Hinsvar's Lunatic]
00:03:455 (2) - The position of this slider feels more like you ran out of space more than anything, you could move 00:02:892 (4) - further to the top right so you can move 00:03:080 (1) - up and then blanket it with this slider? the overlap feels kinda meh Did... something? idk tho; the current overlap looks okay to me actually.
00:24:080 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I think this stream would fit better the guitar if it was full of sliders rather than having circles in the middle. Changing all of the circles into sliders would make the stream lose its impact in emphasizing the guitar, so no. It'd feel flat, actually.

Thanks!

yay for being late

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 57642
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:Tsuki ni Murakumo Hana ni Kaze (PV ver.)
TitleUnicode:月に叢雲華に風 (PV ver.)
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:Vhy
Version:Hinsvar's Lunatic
Source:Touhou
Tags:th11 subterranean animism komeiji koishi last remote iceon Kamase-tora yuuhei satellite c81 hinsvar xinely kshr
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BeatmapSetID:158128

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Narcissu

1,764 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2014-11-22T13:47:30+00:00

i think the BG not suitable for the song ……

[lunatic]

i suggest slider rate use 1 unless theme‘s BPM double than drum such Luv Letter

i think normal-hitwhistle.wav not suitable for the song …… very ugly ……

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-12-04T20:21:27+00:00

Just a small check because of the CtB difficulties.

[General]

Remove the Widescreen Support. You don't have SB.
Use S:C11 on Normal/Hard after 01:27:080, there won't be any change in the hitsounding but you can delete soft-sliderslide3 after this. Sliderslide is not audible in CtB anyway.

[Normal]

00:36:080 (2,5,1,2,3) - Maybe my eyes are bad but the blankets here are kinda misplaced. o.o (1,2) is not perfectly curved around (3) and (2,5). And also, (1,2) maybe a bit too hard for Normal level.
00:43:580 (1,2) - This can be improved a bit as well.
00:49:580 - Use S:C2 here for consistency with Hard.
01:01:580 (1) - Clap maybe?
01:28:580 (3) - Whistle in the head.

[Hard]

01:19:767 (6,7) - This blanket is a bit ugly. Please fix it.
01:28:580 (3) - Whistle to the repeat.
01:31:580 (5) - Add whistle to the tail.

[Lunatic]

00:45:455 (2) - It placed under the combo numbers. This can distract players.
01:28:580 (3) - Whistle on the head.

[Rain]

01:02:986 (8,1) - This should be a HDash. o.o
01:19:205 (6,1) - HDash?
01:20:986 (8,1) - HDash?
01:33:080 (1,2,3) - I would like to see bigger dash between (2,3) than (1,2) as the piano is much stronger there.
[]

Rest seems fine to me.

Edit:
Contacted with Mystyk to make the mod more useful. I'm not sure if she will post here as well, but give her kudo as well.

Last edited by Kurokami 2014-12-04T21:47:47+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Sakura

osu! Alumni

7,979 posts

Joined March 2010

Sakura 2014-12-04T20:51:04+00:00

I needed to recheck this ~~and i forgot~~
If you still need me after going through Kurokami's mod then let me know.

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-12-05T05:54:42+00:00

Narcissu wrote:
i think the BG not suitable for the song …… hmmm i dunno. since my brother ask me to use this BG, so yeah :3

Kurokami wrote:
Just a small check because of the CtB difficulties.

[General]
Remove the Widescreen Support. You don't have SB. ok
Use S:C11 on Normal/Hard after 01:27:080, there won't be any change in the hitsounding but you can delete soft-sliderslide3 after this. Sliderslide is not audible in CtB anyway. removed soft-sliderslide3 yeeeee. and also removed some greenline in rain that used soft-sliderslide3 anyway
[Normal]

00:36:080 (2,5,1,2,3) - Maybe my eyes are bad but the blankets here are kinda misplaced. o.o (1,2) is not perfectly curved around (3) and (2,5). And also, (1,2) maybe a bit too hard for Normal level. hmmm do you mean 00:36:080 (2,5,3) for not being stacked well? lol they're not even connected
00:43:580 (1,2) - This can be improved a bit as well. i can't do better than the current wew. i need code :3
00:49:580 - Use S:C2 here for consistency with Hard. intended here dunno why lol
01:01:580 (1) - Clap maybe? finish instead
01:28:580 (3) - Whistle in the head. nope

[Hard]

01:19:767 (6,7) - This blanket is a bit ugly. Please fix it. blanket is ok here. maybe you said it ugly cause the slider body of (6)
01:28:580 (3) - Whistle to the repeat. nope
01:31:580 (5) - Add whistle to the tail. added, also remove the whistle on head

[Rain]

01:02:986 (8,1) - This should be a HDash. o.o i was wondering why the note before the starter of kiai is always using HDash. this is so unfair. so i can't create my own fantasy here? hueee xD
01:19:205 (6,1) - HDash? ok
01:20:986 (8,1) - HDash? ok
01:33:080 (1,2,3) - I would like to see bigger dash between (2,3) than (1,2) as the piano is much stronger there. ok
[]

Rest seems fine to me.

Edit:
Contacted with Mystyk to make the mod more useful. I'm not sure if she will post here as well, but give her kudo as well.

thankiessssss xD
should i kd this?

now waiting for hinsvar (?)

Kurokami

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Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-12-06T08:43:34+00:00

Vhy wrote:
Kurokami wrote:
Just a small check because of the CtB difficulties.

[Normal]

00:36:080 (2,5,1,2,3) - Maybe my eyes are bad but the blankets here are kinda misplaced. o.o (1,2) is not perfectly curved around (3) and (2,5). And also, (1,2) maybe a bit too hard for Normal level. hmmm do you mean 00:36:080 (2,5,3) for not being stacked well? lol they're not even connected Well, a stack would solve this blanket problem. o.o
00:43:580 (1,2) - This can be improved a bit as well. i can't do better than the current wew. i need code :3 Here:
388,112,43580,6,0,P|360:152|317:176,2,100,6|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
You can play with the red point a bit to move it closer to (2) but I think this looks good enough.

[Rain]

01:02:986 (8,1) - This should be a HDash. o.o i was wondering why the note before the starter of kiai is always using HDash. this is so unfair. so i can't create my own fantasy here? hueee xD You can have fantasy, but the kiai start is mostly a strong beat which requires bigger movement (since in CtB jumps is the only way to feel the song). If the kiai is calm then you don't need to use jump. :3
thankiessssss xD
should i kd this? You can add kudo to mods if long time passed between the two post and the second one is also useful to you. But if you ask me, I dunno as well, due to the BAT Ranking I need mods and mods are only recognized by kudo. Sakura will decide it. \:3/

now waiting for hinsvar (?)

Hinsvar

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Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2014-12-06T10:26:59+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
[Lunatic]

00:45:455 (2) - It placed under the combo numbers. This can distract players. Uh, I don't understand what are you trying to say... It's completely fine (objectively).
01:28:580 (3) - Whistle on the head. I intentionally didn't place a whistle here to emphasize the whistle (and piano note) at 01:28:861.

Thanks!

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-12-06T12:24:16+00:00

- nah if i do stack them it would break the polygon pattern
- about the code you show... are you sure that's a correct one? because i don't see any difference in gameplay. i've checked every number of your code and compared with mine, and they're totally the same code. i guess i'll keep mine xD
- in rain diff, yeah added HDash there since i wrote it in green text, but an easy one. also i did a little remap on some part about the distance which i think it could be better
- added kudo there. and yeah sakura will decide if it worth of kudo or not, but i need to kidnap her first \:D/
- any last word?

anyway... updated all diffs xD
now please, where is my cookies?

EDIT :
@Sakura : you can do recheck now

Sakura

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Sakura 2014-12-06T15:25:09+00:00

Deleted unusued silent-sliderslide3.wav
No kudosu
Bubbled!
Good Luck!

Kurokami

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Kurokami 2014-12-08T09:23:56+00:00

Let's do a final check.

[Rain]

01:02:423 (2,3) - I think this jump in the middle of an 1/4 stream is too hard for Rain. It would be better to place few notes to the left side of (3) to make some flow. Currently the player needs to go back to right immediately after the jump.
01:28:580 (2,3) - Honestly (3) follows a very weak beat. How about changing (2) into a slider?
01:29:517 (5,6) - (5) follows nothing, delete it. And lower the hitsounds volume on this note. That whistle is too loud compared with the music.
01:32:517 - Why you leaved it empty? The previously deleted note can be added back here.

[Overdose]

01:34:955 (2) - Shorten this slider by 1/2 to follow the beat at the red tick.

I wonder about some HDashed stream but this is Overdose so it should be fine. o.o
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I just want to get answers to these then this mapset should be fine to go. :3

Vhy

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Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-12-08T11:52:47+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
Let's do a final check. ummm this is your 4th mod :3

[Rain]

01:02:423 (2,3) - I think this jump in the middle of an 1/4 stream is too hard for Rain. It would be better to place few notes to the left side of (3) to make some flow. Currently the player needs to go back to right immediately after the jump. moved (4) to x:296 instead. and aldo did a rearranged the distance of the stream a bit
01:28:580 (2,3) - Honestly (3) follows a very weak beat. How about changing (2) into a slider? done
01:29:517 (5,6) - (5) follows nothing, delete it. And lower the hitsounds volume on this note. That whistle is too loud compared with the music. if you listen it more more more carefully, 01:29:517 (5) has a piano sound but it very weak compared to others (you can prove it by deleting the note 1st). decided to change it to a 1/2 slider with the lower volume. 15% on head and 25% on tail. this should be okay now
01:32:517 - Why you leaved it empty? The previously deleted note can be added back here. k added
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I just want to get answers to these then this mapset should be fine to go. :3

thanks again xD
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaand oh wait...
will update after xinely reply the mod as well :p

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-12-08T19:55:18+00:00

fixed, also i tweaked some jumps which i felt quite hard to catch ><

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Vhy

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Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-12-09T01:21:35+00:00

ok.
all updated ~

Kurokami

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Kurokami 2014-12-09T01:45:08+00:00

Now, let's see how far this will go~

(ノ>∨<)ノ

Sellenite

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Sellenite 2014-12-09T01:47:33+00:00

congrats!

Sakura

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Sakura 2014-12-09T02:33:06+00:00

Nice congrats!

Natsu

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Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-12-09T02:41:30+00:00

nice congrats, that easy diff is so dokidoki

Xinely

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Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-12-09T02:45:22+00:00

Natsu wrote:
nice congrats, that easy diff is so dokidoki

Sakura

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Sakura 2014-12-09T02:46:19+00:00

Sakura wrote:
PS: KSHR diff is kawaii

BeatofIke

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-12-09T05:22:34+00:00

Yay. Congrats

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-12-09T05:30:33+00:00

Sakura wrote:
PS: KSHR diff is kawaii

worst quote of the year!!

Natsu wrote:
nice congrats, that easy diff is so dokidoki

best quote of the year!!

Kyouren

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Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-12-09T05:33:55+00:00

Gratzz~

Time-

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Joined July 2013

Time- 2014-12-09T08:05:13+00:00

00:13:017 (5,6,7) - this part on Rain diff is so tricky, the volume is too low :/

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined June 2012

Satellite 2014-12-09T08:39:48+00:00

nice!

Len

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined June 2012

Len 2014-12-10T11:12:16+00:00

Vhy wrote:
~~map requested by Lunaties-sama =w=~~ nvm he's gone alr. so what am i doing with this map?

...?

Vhy

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Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-12-10T11:13:49+00:00

Fast wrote:
Vhy wrote:
~~map requested by Lunaties-sama =w=~~ nvm he's gone alr. so what am i doing with this map?
...?

becacuse xinely wanted me to rank this so badly lol :3

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

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Joined April 2010

Deif 2014-12-14T23:31:28+00:00

Generally the CtB diffs need to be improved. The bolded parts are the main reasons of the dq, and the rest are mere suggestions to improve the mapset:

[Rain]

00:11:892 (1) - 1/8s don't make much sense there. The melody suggests to use 1/4s instead.
00:12:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Disagreed with the stream. (1,2) are perfectly removable, since there's no characteristic beat in there. For the rest of the notes, they can be cropped from 1/4 to 1/2s and make a slightly jumpy pattern instead.
00:17:986 (2) - The note can be removed. The beat at 00:17:892 (1) - is understandable, but the stream should start from 00:18:080 (3) - on.
00:18:642 (9,10) - The jump is cool and has a good flow, but it's not really fitting imo. There's not such an important beat to enhance and therefore you should reduce the distance there.
00:37:017 (1,2,3) - Increase the distance of the notes of this triplet to make a bigger difference with the previous 00:36:267 (2,3,4) - . The mentioned one look more important, since it introduces a new section of the song.
01:04:205 (6) - To give more importance to the lyrics, you should move that slider more to the right. What about at around x:400?
01:13:392 (1) - A better placement for this slider is to set it away from (8). Try sth similar as in here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2346309
01:24:642 (2) - To create a jumpy effect to the next slider, I recommend you to place this note at about x:80. You can do sth similar to the next note 01:25:392 (4) - .
01:25:580 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Looks pretty in the editor, but not really enjoyable to play...

[Overdose]

00:05:330 (3,4,5) - A bit uncorfortable to play, having an HDash at the end. Reducing the distance slightly between the 1/4s could help.
00:15:080 (1,2,3) - Disagreed with the usage of 1/4 beats, specially with such big distance. Better to use a simpler rhythm of 1/2s and keep a dashy pattern if you want.
00:17:330 (4,5,6,1,2) - The timeline sounds quite odd. I propose you to the following placement, having a jump at 00:17:705 - http://puu.sh/duUYK/efa8e3d9b2.jpg
00:24:455 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Please no x____x It's doable, but the difficulty peak is definitely out of context.
00:33:080 (1,2,3,4) - The intensity of the lyrics gets decreased, while you're increasing the distance of the sliders. Do it the other way around, like in this example (only moved 2 and 3): https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2346381.
00:59:892 (6) - Try avoiding that kind of double HDashes. Move it to ~x:116?
01:24:642 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - The end of the kiai is more enjoyable than the beginning. At the beginning it's consisting of a rather straight line of fruits, which isn't that enjoyable to play. I'd recommend you ro rearrange it if possible.
01:32:517 (4,5) - And suddenly, in the calm part a compounded HDash appears D: Move (4) more to the left.

[]
I'm getting some help to get it requalified asap

PD: Now that we're at it, uncheck the option "widescreen SB" in Hinsvar's difficulty. It's the only one with it.

those

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those 2014-12-14T23:32:28+00:00

PreviewTime seems random. The leadin to the chorus seems more fitting 01:02:330 -

Xinely

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Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-12-14T23:34:14+00:00

i know this one will be happening, checking deif's mod now

Last edited by Xinely 2014-12-15T00:02:38+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

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Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2014-12-14T23:36:46+00:00

Lost the mod while in the middle of Rain ;_;

MOD INFO

Plain text - Suggested
Bolded text - Highly suggested
Red bolded text - Unrankable issue (must fix)

[

Platter]

Took this space to say this mapset should have a Platter in my opinion, the standard diffs don't create a proper spread covering it.

[

Rain]

Timeline and Patterns

00:00:830 (1,2) - This should have more movement, setting it to x:464 feels fine to me
00:03:642 (2,3) - Same idea, I would move it to x:280
00:11:892 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - I think you should delete this and make the spinner finish at 00:12:830 -
00:13:580 (1) - This slider creates a "brake" feeling that I don't like. What I would do is set it to SV x1.0 (or even higher, x1.20 or x.125) and move it to the left border, it follows the guitar better thay way, in my opinion
00:16:955 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This has too much spacing and it's quite unexpected. Reduce distance
00:20:705 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Reduce spacing on this as well, it feels more adequate for the Kiai Time.
00:37:580 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These triplets in this part feel overmapped to me, and don't flow really well, so I'd take their middle note out and move the sliders to create a proper distance with previous note
00:48:080 (1,2,3) - This spacing is too tricky, reduce it a bit
01:07:767 (2,3,4) - Move it a bit to the right to make it a bit easier
01:08:705 (3,4,5,6) - I'd keep the 1/2s here, the 1/4s feel overmapped

[

Overdose/Deluge]

Timeline and Patterns

00:05:330 (3,4,5) - A 3/4 repeat slider would actually fit the vocals, change it
00:15:361 (2,3) - Map this to the 1/2, it currently doesn't fit
00:21:923 (4,5) - The stressed note is (5), so the hyperdash should be between (4,5) and not between (4) and its previous note. Try this:
SPOILER
00:30:830 (3,4) - Reduce distance on this one, either by making the hyperdash to (3) smaller or by moving (4) a little bit to the right
00:37:580 (1,2) - I think it is better if you Ctrl + H this and move (1) a bit to the right to create a hyperdash

Sakura

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Sakura 2014-12-14T23:52:04+00:00

DQ for an issue in the CTB diffs huh

Don't ask me for bubbles or hearts on maps with CTB diffs again orz

Xinely

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Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-12-15T00:00:16+00:00

Deif wrote:
Generally the CtB diffs need to be improved. The bolded parts are the main reasons of the dq, and the rest are mere suggestions to improve the mapset:

[Overdose]
00:05:330 (3,4,5) - A bit uncorfortable to play, having an HDash at the end. Reducing the distance slightly between the 1/4s could help. reduced the spacing then
00:15:080 (1,2,3) - Disagreed with the usage of 1/4 beats, specially with such big distance. Better to use a simpler rhythm of 1/2s and keep a dashy pattern if you want. guitar snare sound aaaa orz changed since it's bold and im lazy make drama
00:17:330 (4,5,6,1,2) - The timeline sounds quite odd. I propose you to the following placement, having a jump at 00:17:705 - http://puu.sh/duUYK/efa8e3d9b2.jpg ok
00:24:455 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Please no x____x It's doable, but the difficulty peak is definitely out of context. actually easy even i can catch them okay HDash at all for broking hands
00:33:080 (1,2,3,4) - The intensity of the lyrics gets decreased, while you're increasing the distance of the sliders. Do it the other way around, like in this example (only moved 2 and 3): https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2346381. ok
00:59:892 (6) - Try avoiding that kind of double HDashes. Move it to ~x:116? nope, it's quite easy to have 2 HDash here, also i made jump to emphasize the cymbals
01:24:642 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - The end of the kiai is more enjoyable than the beginning. At the beginning it's consisting of a rather straight line of fruits, which isn't that enjoyable to play. I'd recommend you ro rearrange it if possible. it's being weird when the opening is same like ending, opening should be easier and ending should be harder to make it more fun in logic
01:32:517 (4,5) - And suddenly, in the calm part a compounded HDash appears D: Move (4) more to the left.literally i made this coz i suck at timing jump, i prefer to HDash and HDash wont be hurt here
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I'm getting some help to get it requalified asap

PD: Now that we're at it, uncheck the option "widescreen SB" in Hinsvar's difficulty. It's the only one with it.

ZiRoX wrote:
Lost the mod while in the middle of Rain ;_;

[ Overdose/Deluge]
Timeline and Patterns
00:05:330 (3,4,5) - A 3/4 repeat slider would actually fit the vocals, change it no no no no no no, i need to emphasize 00:05:611 -
00:15:361 (2,3) - Map this to the 1/2, it currently doesn't fit literally same reason for Deif
00:21:923 (4,5) - The stressed note is (5), so the hyperdash should be between (4,5) and not between (4) and its previous note. Try this: literally i want 1/2 HDash instead of 1/4. it feels quite harsh
SPOILER
00:30:830 (3,4) - Reduce distance on this one, either by making the hyperdash to (3) smaller or by moving (4) a little bit to the right finally you realized it, i thought this one would be reason of dq
00:37:580 (1,2) - I think it is better if you Ctrl + H this and move (1) a bit to the right to create a hyperdash yaa, changed coz i realized before

thanks 4 mods~

@Sakura : sorry for the dq D:
as my experience got DQ on taiko diff from map that i ranked it, i didnt get any impact score for that, i dont know for this one D:

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Kurokami

osu! Alumni

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Kurokami 2014-12-15T02:55:04+00:00

Deif, you know nothing about Xinely's mapping style.

@Sakura Slipping past Deif is almost impossible. He only likes CLSW's maps. \o/ /me runs

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-12-15T04:41:12+00:00

i know this will happen, but not the CtB diff. fuck myself!
can't check the mod for now because some irl issues happens lately. will be back around 2 days hopefully :3

@Sakura : im really sorry for this :c

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-12-15T19:52:17+00:00

Sakura wrote:
DQ for an issue in the CTB diffs huh
Don't ask me for bubbles or hearts on maps with CTB diffs again orz

You understand my life now.

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-12-16T06:32:02+00:00

Deif wrote:
Generally the CtB diffs need to be improved. The bolded parts are the main reasons of the dq, and the rest are mere suggestions to improve the mapset:

[Rain]
00:11:892 (1) - 1/8s don't make much sense there. The melody suggests to use 1/4s instead. somehow i want to keep this 1/8 since it looks better for me, but yea changed to 1/4 instead as piano sound highlighted on 1/4
00:12:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Disagreed with the stream. (1,2) are perfectly removable, since there's no characteristic beat in there. For the rest of the notes, they can be cropped from 1/4 to 1/2s and make a slightly jumpy pattern instead. i will keep the note at 00:12:455 to fill the gap as introducing well the upcoming stream, also changed the rest of the pattern and so
00:17:986 (2) - The note can be removed. The beat at 00:17:892 (1) - is understandable, but the stream should start from 00:18:080 (3) - on. nope. the guitar sound completely start from 00:17:892 (1) and last over
00:18:642 (9,10) - The jump is cool and has a good flow, but it's not really fitting imo. There's not such an important beat to enhance and therefore you should reduce the distance there. if it's cool and has a good flow then why it's not fitting? this pattern plays well here. even there's no beat emphasizing it but the hitsound i put on these notes is support it well
00:37:017 (1,2,3) - Increase the distance of the notes of this triplet to make a bigger difference with the previous 00:36:267 (2,3,4) - . The mentioned one look more important, since it introduces a new section of the song. increase the distance between 00:36:830 (6,1) and changed the pattern a bit
01:04:205 (6) - To give more importance to the lyrics, you should move that slider more to the right. What about at around x:400? done
01:13:392 (1) - A better placement for this slider is to set it away from (8). Try sth similar as in here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2346309 ok
01:24:642 (2) - To create a jumpy effect to the next slider, I recommend you to place this note at about x:80. You can do sth similar to the next note 01:25:392 (4) - ok
01:25:580 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Looks pretty in the editor, but not really enjoyable to play...
[]
I'm getting some help to get it requalified asap

PD: Now that we're at it, uncheck the option "widescreen SB" in Hinsvar's difficulty. It's the only one with it.

ZiRoX wrote:
Lost the mod while in the middle of Rain ;_;

MOD INFO
Plain text - Suggested
Bolded text - Highly suggested
Red bolded text - Unrankable issue (must fix)

[ Platter]
Took this space to say this mapset should have a Platter in my opinion, the standard diffs don't create a proper spread covering it.

[ Rain]
Timeline and Patterns
00:00:830 (1,2) - This should have more movement, setting it to x:464 feels fine to me nope. as an early part i would keep the distance here as low as possible since the background also calm
00:03:642 (2,3) - Same idea, I would move it to x:280 nope
00:11:892 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - I think you should delete this and make the spinner finish at 00:12:830 - totally no. as i replied on deif's mod, there should be clear
00:13:580 (1) - This slider creates a "brake" feeling that I don't like. What I would do is set it to SV x1.0 (or even higher, x1.20 or x.125) and move it to the left border, it follows the guitar better thay way, in my opinion yep, sometimes im also have the feeling that this slider somehow plays weird
00:16:955 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This has too much spacing and it's quite unexpected. Reduce distance intended. guitar sound asked for it
00:20:705 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Reduce spacing on this as well, it feels more adequate for the Kiai Time. reduced the general spacing
00:37:580 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These triplets in this part feel overmapped to me, and don't flow really well, so I'd take their middle note out and move the sliders to create a proper distance with previous note honestly the triplet pattern idea is taken from satellite's old map and ofc this was intended. and yes im really disagree with the flow matter, cz as for me it plays well and easy to read for an average player like me. i've tried so many and never miss that part tho
00:48:080 (1,2,3) - This spacing is too tricky, reduce it a bit yes it is but totally readable
01:07:767 (2,3,4) - Move it a bit to the right to make it a bit easier ok
01:08:705 (3,4,5,6) - I'd keep the 1/2s here, the 1/4s feel overmapped imo there's nothing 1/4 is overmapped in insane diff when it comes to stream and a slider as the end. that's common

thanks for the mod xD
also i was thinking a nice stream pattern that start at 01:25:580 and im stuck lol. since there's another map that got qualified recently, i guess we can't re-qualify this asap. so i'll take this time to thinking of the stream pattern

anyway updated all diff

Last edited by Vhy 2014-12-16T08:23:03+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kurokami

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Kurokami 2014-12-16T06:55:14+00:00

As I see the replies to the two mod, this dq was meaningless. Anyway, it was your choice Deif, though every BAT who participated in this set so far will get an impact score for this. Yes, the CtB diff could be better but I decided to not touch them more as the patterns felt nice enough to me and these diffs are kinda old. The new ones feels better for sure bit they are new.

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

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Joined April 2010

Deif 2014-12-16T18:56:18+00:00

Recheck:

[Rain]

01:25:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - I've tried making an appropriate stream measured for a relatively calmed Rain like this one. The last 5 notes can be placed closer or further from the rest though. I can look for more ideas, if this one doesn't like you that much (no hitsounds btw):

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[Overdose]

HP7? Could be a bit more demanding and differenciated from Rain.
00:15:830 (4,5,6,1) - Think of placing (4) at a place about x:120. Right now you have a... triple HDash? (lost the count lol), which doesn't match for that part. Maybe for the kiai or so, where there's more intensity.
01:24:642 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I see your point, though some curves could've made it "prettier". You even added a cymbal sound at 01:24:830 (4) - which means it's a rather strong beat, which is represented by only a straight line and not even a slight dash.

Kurokami wrote:
As I see the replies to the two mod, this dq was meaningless. Anyway, it was your choice Deif, though every BAT who participated in this set so far will get an impact score for this. Yes, the CtB diff could be better but I decided to not touch them more as the patterns felt nice enough to me and these diffs are kinda old. The new ones feels better for sure bit they are new.

A dq is a decision of the QAT as a team, so don't get confused about that. The fact that one dq'd and posted in the thread doesn't imply anything. No dqs are meaningless if their intention is to improve the quality of the beatmap, so think that those 7 days as a pre-phase to get the maps rechecked again (and eventually improved), and not as a safe zone for them.

See the underlined line, please. You appled the set and ranked it afterwards, so you implied with that that the mapset was READY and not that it COULD be better. In case of doubt, ask for a second opinion and a little help cos that's what teams are for.

Enough talking! @Vhy/Xinely: Please take a look at those suggestions and reply here. I'll probably be good to be bubbled, since the standards look good too.

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-12-16T22:44:06+00:00

Deif wrote:
Recheck:

[Overdose]
HP7? Could be a bit more demanding and differenciated from Rain. ok berjayalah sekali kepleset modar ww
00:15:830 (4,5,6,1) - Think of placing (4) at a place about x:120. Right now you have a... triple HDash? (lost the count lol), which doesn't match for that part. Maybe for the kiai or so, where there's more intensity. sure, nice idea. altho having triple HDash were fun either
01:24:642 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I see your point, though some curves could've made it "prettier". You even added a cymbal sound at 01:24:830 (4) - which means it's a rather strong beat, which is represented by only a straight line and not even a slight dash.aaa, i prefer keep with this stream, having dash/HDash suddenly for circles look quite weird for me

>3<

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Title:Tsuki ni Murakumo Hana ni Kaze (PV ver.)
TitleUnicode:月に叢雲華に風 (PV ver.)
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:Vhy
Version:Xinely's Overdose
Source:Touhou
Tags:th11 subterranean animism komeiji koishi last remote iceon Kamase-tora yuuhei satellite c81 hinsvar xinely kshr
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Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-12-17T00:46:30+00:00

Deif wrote:
Recheck:

[Rain]
01:25:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - I've tried making an appropriate stream measured for a relatively calmed Rain like this one. The last 5 notes can be placed closer or further from the rest though. I can look for more ideas, if this one doesn't like you that much (no hitsounds btw):
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160,112,87080,1,0,0:0:0:0:

changed, similar but not completely :3

updated ~

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,565 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2014-12-17T16:17:08+00:00

Let's bring it back to the place it belongs to!

Bubbled!

Sey

1,406 posts

Joined October 2010

Sey 2014-12-17T16:57:17+00:00

Deif asked me to take a look on it quick. Rain is very clean, I see nothing to mod here anymore. Good job, Vhy.
However, I do have some small concerns about Xinely's Overdose.

[Xinely's Overdose]

00:37:580 (1,2,3) - If you decide to use a "zigzag" pattern (left-right-left) you cannot just stop doing that in the middle of a stanza. Normally a CTB player expects to move to the right after 00:38:330 (3) - , but here he continues going left which can be confusing. Move 00:38:705 (4) - to x: 344 and select 00:39:080 (1,2) - and CTRL + H these.
00:39:455 (2,3) - Why are these even stacked? Move 00:39:830 (3) - to x: 300 or something close. This will give a better launch into the Hyper.
01:05:142 (3,4,5) - Again some weird launch into a Hyper. Move 01:05:517 (4) - to x: 320 for a triangle shape, then move 01:05:705 (5) - to x: 56. Plays much smoother than your actual pattern.
01:24:736 (3,4) - You could add a Dash here inside the stream if you want, to stress the Cymbal a bit more.
01:25:486 (11,1) - I would consider making a HDash out of that, Hypers at the end of a stream are always a nice pattern, especially for an Overdose.

I'll observe that Thread a while.

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2014-12-17T17:08:09+00:00

Successfully ninja'ed ~~Sey~~ Deif <_<

no kds, since I already modded this map 8 months ago.

[Xinely's Overdose]
00:18:830 (3) - Could you add hyperdash at the end? It seems too blind to see the next one.
00:28:205 (4) - Since 00:27:830 (3) - is on right side, so it's pretty boring. How about on x : 144 for better?
00:37:205 (5,6) - tbh I got a big pressure on this part. There was a hyperdash on 00:36:830 (3) , and the next was, yeah. Like this. Just replace 00:37:205 (5) on x : 188 would be okay, I want a hyperdash placed there for a lot of full-combo challengers.
00:38:330 (3,4) - A lack of movement.

try this.

00:41:330 (4,5) - Unexpected jump. Try to reduce its general distance til a hyperdash-limit of 00:41:517 (5) .
00:49:017 (4) - I would be happy if you replace this on x : 336.
01:02:330 (1) - A combobreaker part. Please add hyperdash at the end.
01:13:955 (2) - x : 304 for a kindness jump.
01:24:642 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - And finally. Just try to use this pattern. Since I didn't touch your slider shapes

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512,280,86892,2,0,L|464:293,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:27:830 (2,3) - Ctrl + G for better flow.
01:29:517 (4) - Ctrl + H for better flow.

[Rain]
00:37:205 (3) - x : 72 for its hyperdash flow.
00:37:955 (4,1) - Could you make more movements here?

like this

00:48:173 (2) - Hyperdash could be better imo. It's pretty unexpected after the spinner.
00:51:267 (1,2) - Doesn't feel its movement is too insufficient? Try to move (1) on x : 260.
00:54:267 (1) - Same as above, x : 256 please.
00:55:111 (3,4,5) - Anti-flow for (3) and (4) doesn't feel good.

try this

01:27:080 (9) - You can add a small jump here. Try to replace on x : 136.
01:35:892 (2,3) - Add a small anti-flow jump here. Replace (3) on x : 224.

Okay that's all! Call me back if you were done.

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-12-17T17:36:48+00:00

CLSW, you can't rank it now, there is an other one on the qualified list, you need to wait till its gone.

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2014-12-17T17:43:37+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
CLSW, you can't rank it now, there is an other one on the qualified list, you need to wait till its gone.

Sure I will.

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,565 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2014-12-17T17:50:08+00:00

Dec 21 at 20:13 is the exact time \o/

Sakura

osu! Alumni

7,979 posts

Joined March 2010

Sakura 2014-12-17T19:11:56+00:00

Just gonna drop by to say Good Luck! and hoping to see it back into Ranking /o/ (I love the standard diffs in this set too much)

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-12-17T22:57:24+00:00

Sey wrote:
Deif asked me to take a look on it quick. Rain is very clean, I see nothing to mod here anymore. Good job, Vhy.
However, I do have some small concerns about Xinely's Overdose.

[Xinely's Overdose]
00:37:580 (1,2,3) - If you decide to use a "zigzag" pattern (left-right-left) you cannot just stop doing that in the middle of a stanza. Normally a CTB player expects to move to the right after 00:38:330 (3) - , but here he continues going left which can be confusing. Move 00:38:705 (4) - to x: 344 and select 00:39:080 (1,2) - and CTRL + H these. sure
00:39:455 (2,3) - Why are these even stacked? Move 00:39:830 (3) - to x: 300 or something close. This will give a better launch into the Hyper. dunno, changed already coz your suggestion on above lol
01:05:142 (3,4,5) - Again some weird launch into a Hyper. Move 01:05:517 (4) - to x: 320 for a triangle shape, then move 01:05:705 (5) - to x: 56. Plays much smoother than your actual pattern. i dont suppose to make triangle so i prefer mine
01:24:736 (3,4) - You could add a Dash here inside the stream if you want, to stress the Cymbal a bit more. ~~nah Deif told already but i feel 1/4 dash suddenly on middle of stream is bad~~ fixed coz 3 red ppl said this one
01:25:486 (11,1) - I would consider making a HDash out of that, Hypers at the end of a stream are always a nice pattern, especially for an Overdose. ok
I'll observe that Thread a while.

CLSW wrote:
Successfully ninja'ed ~~Sey~~ Deif <_<

no kds, since I already modded this map 8 months ago.

[Xinely's Overdose]
00:18:830 (3) - Could you add hyperdash at the end? It seems too blind to see the next one. k
00:28:205 (4) - Since 00:27:830 (3) - is on right side, so it's pretty boring. How about on x : 144 for better? intentionally coz no music for the gap, i prefer ~~stacked~~ i mean less movement
00:37:205 (5,6) - tbh I got a big pressure on this part. There was a hyperdash on 00:36:830 (3) , and the next was, yeah. Like this. Just replace 00:37:205 (5) on x : 188 would be okay, I want a hyperdash placed there for a lot of full-combo challengers. k
00:38:330 (3,4) - A lack of movement. changed on Sey's mod
try this.
00:41:330 (4,5) - Unexpected jump. Try to reduce its general distance til a hyperdash-limit of 00:41:517 (5) . changed, dunno if they are fine or not x.x
00:49:017 (4) - I would be happy if you replace this on x : 336. oh it's supposed for HDash, thanks 4 reminding
01:02:330 (1) - A combobreaker part. Please add hyperdash at the end. ups, fixed
01:13:955 (2) - x : 304 for a kindness jump. k
01:24:642 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - And finally. Just try to use this pattern. Since I didn't touch your slider shapes so cruel... ugh actually i dont like those stream too much well changed then since deif sey and you mention this one and i dont want make another issue x.x
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01:27:830 (2,3) - Ctrl + G for better flow.
01:29:517 (4) - Ctrl + H for better flow.

Okay that's all! Call me back if you were done.

thanks ><

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TitleUnicode:月に叢雲華に風 (PV ver.)
Artist:senya
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Creator:Vhy
Version:Xinely's Overdose
Source:Touhou
Tags:th11 subterranean animism komeiji koishi last remote iceon Kamase-tora yuuhei satellite c81 hinsvar xinely kshr
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Vhy

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Vhy 2014-12-18T02:38:55+00:00

and finally a non-red person appear!
im here to bring laziness over the world!

CLSW wrote:
Successfully ninja'ed ~~Sey~~ Deif <_<

no kds, since I already modded this map 8 months ago.

[Rain]
00:37:205 (3) - x : 72 for its hyperdash flow. yeeee. i dunno about this but a 16 point of x axis wont make any difference in gameplay since the current is stacked with the prev note
00:37:955 (4,1) - Could you make more movements here? fixed as similar as i could
like this
00:48:173 (2) - Hyperdash could be better imo. It's pretty unexpected after the spinner. i'll keep this as main part of my mapping since beginning
00:51:267 (1,2) - Doesn't feel its movement is too insufficient? Try to move (1) on x : 260. this should have same reason as above. i prefer to have this no movement
00:54:267 (1) - Same as above, x : 256 please.
00:55:111 (3,4,5) - Anti-flow for (3) and (4) doesn't feel good. changed on my own. did change on 00:52:111 (3,4) as well
try this
01:27:080 (9) - You can add a small jump here. Try to replace on x : 136. i really want to make this stream as calm as possible. so i guess an epic ending isn't necessary here
01:35:892 (2,3) - Add a small anti-flow jump here. Replace (3) on x : 224. how about x:274? it seems your x point is too far after a HDash for an calm ending

Okay that's all! Call me back if you were done.

thanks for the mod <3
updated ~

Sey

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Sey 2014-12-21T22:01:35+00:00

There had been some changes through mine and CLSW's mods, so I double-checked everything and see no problem anymore. Will only re-bubble it do double-secure here, let CLSW do the final process once this isn't existing in the qualified section anymore - which will be a matter of a few minutes/hours.

CLSW

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CLSW 2014-12-22T08:08:52+00:00

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Natsu 2014-12-22T11:24:18+00:00

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Vhy 2014-12-22T12:09:52+00:00

oh hi kawaii c:

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