Ringating wrote:

bg and audio mod

your bg was 16:10 (1228x767), so I used this image to make a 16:9 (1366x768) version in order to get the maximum standard resolution possible. here is the image:

bg

I also made an alternate version on which I was a bit more generous with some extra filters. here is that:

alternate

also, your mp3 was 128 kbps, so I found a higher quality (320 kbps) version and exported it at mp3 vbr level 3 (aimod won't complain, it averages <195 kbps). Here is the new mp3.

no kudosu

Nickelony wrote:

Random Mod!

[Easy:]
00:17:579 (5,1) - Fix Blanket? (make softer slider curve)
00:31:979 (3) - Softer slider curve
00:37:121 (4) - ^
00:40:208 (1) - ^ (both curves)
01:09:522 (3) - ^
01:18:608 (1) - ^
01:20:494 (2) - ^
01:27:522 (1) - ^
02:46:380 (1) - ^
02:48:264 (2) - ^
02:50:494 (4) - ^
01:11:065 (1,2) - Too soft curves!
00:14:836 (3,4) - ^
00:42:265 (2) - ^
01:17:922 (2,1) - Why 1/2... please change it into 1/1
02:45:694 (2,1) - ^
03:29:579 (3,1) - ^
03:35:065 (2,1) - ^
00:32:836 - 00:34:550 - This part is too empty!
00:46:379 (2,3) - Fix blanket
03:25:465 (3) - ^
03:33:694 (1) - ^
03:39:179 (1,2) - ^
00:53:236 (1) - unrankable shape for easy
01:29:750 - 01:47:236 - TOOOOOOO LONG BREAK!
02:57:350 - 03:19:293 - ^
02:12:094 (5) - no note here...
03:32:322 (3) - Do it like this: http://puu.sh/ckPsZ.jpg
00:34:722 (1,2) - Unrankable stack.
02:12:094 (5,1) - ^
02:16:208 (3,1) - ^

[Normal:]

00:59:408 (1) - Softer curve http://puu.sh/coF5b.jpg
00:48:436 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/coEZU.jpg
00:26:494 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/coF2c.jpg
01:12:951 (5) - remove this circle
03:05:579 (1,2) - This is unrankable...

Continue..

00:33:351 (3) - maybe do it like this: http://puu.sh/coEIv.jpg looks much better!
00:35:751 (2,3) - Blanket: http://puu.sh/coEMq.jpg
00:13:465 (2) - Softer curve please!: http://puu.sh/coEOZ.jpg
00:16:894 (3) - ^
00:38:836 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/coETp.jpg
00:45:693 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/coEWe.jpg
01:16:208 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/coF8r.jpg
01:37:122 (4) - ^ (symmetry please: http://puu.sh/coFiH.jpg)
01:45:351 (5) - ^ (symmetry again.)
02:47:751 (3) - ^ (symmetry again.)
01:59:065 (3) - ^
02:29:236 (3) - ^
02:25:808 (3) - ^
02:43:979 (2) - ^
03:06:951 (4) - ^ http://puu.sh/coFBk.jpg
02:49:122 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/coFvT.jpg
01:18:436 (5) - Remove circle.
02:40:722 (5) - ^
03:27:350 (5) - ^
01:44:322 (2,3) - No stacks like that in normal! (must fix! [unrankable!])
02:50:151 (2,3) - ^
03:19:636 (1,2) - ^
03:55:979 (2,3) - ^
02:06:608 (2) - Slider out of screen.
03:12:436 (3,4,5,6) - too many 1/2

[Hard:]

00:01:293 (1) - Remove this spinner. (unrankable)
00:12:779 - start mapping from here!
00:21:694 (2) - softer curve!
00:24:094 (2) - ^
00:26:151 (6) - ^
00:27:179 (2) - ^
00:35:408 (3) - ^
00:36:094 (4) - ^
00:51:179 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/coG4o.jpg
00:57:694 (4) - ^
01:14:494 (4) - ^
01:21:179 (8) - ^ and fix blanket!
01:22:894 (6) - ^
03:23:922 (4) - ^
00:30:608 (4,5,6,7) - fix blanket!
00:31:636 (7) - make a better wave, this one looks awful!

[Insane:]

Fine!

That's all!

Good Luck!

1. Make sure to turn off both widescreen support and epilepsy warning in each diff
2. I'm still wondering what's the use of the red timing point on 04:03:136. Well I don't know if it's a new rule (since long time haven't checking those) but timing an unmapped part of the song with half of the main BPM won't affect anything imo

1. The spread here is quite a mess tbh, while normal has 1.0x spacing and hard has 1.2x spacing, it would be weird for easy has the same spacing with hard. afaik it's probably caused by the low SV (really, I've mapped an easy diff with 0.60 SV and a BAT asked me to remap the spacing of the whole map because of it). Try SV 0.8 with 1.0x spacing so that the difference won't be that far, then recheck the whole spacing
2. The volume of the green timing point on 00:12:736 is still quite loud imo, try 15% instead of 30%
3. It should be better for you to fix the anchor point of each sliders to make a better curving behavior. For example on 00:18:222 (1) :
   
   SPOILER

   
   Try to ctrl+G it twice, and you'll get a neat-curved slider points
   
   SPOILER

   
   And yeah, doing it on all sliders on the diff makes a neat, nice slider behavior which likely easier to follow
4. 00:24:393 (1,2) - It's better not to overlap those sliders since it would confuse a newcomer, try to reduce the gradient of (2) and make a better blanket with the next slider instead
5. 00:33:307 - Ok, I failed to understand why this part is empty, while the rhythm is still going. Put notes please
6. 00:34:679 (1,2) - You know it's not recommended to put a stack in easy diff, especially this one with 2 stanza difference, newcomer will surely confuse it with 00:36:736 (3,4) - (well, removing the whole stacked pattern would be more appreciated but I'm not sure if you'll do that far)
7. 00:40:165 (1) - Um well, creating a waving slider with too many anchor point makes it looks silly, so just reduce it like this
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:43:593 (1) - No, I'm not a big fan of a random-placed spinner, I'm sure the spinner doesn't fit to emphasize the current rhythm
9. 00:53:193 (1) - This kind of slider would be a bit hard for beginner to read imo, try this one
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:09:650 (3,2) - The current rhythm may be hard to follow since it's started on the offbeat (red tick) and ended on the offbeat again, try moving it to the white tick, it won't sound weird anyway. And yeah, there's still many of it so just change what you think should be changed
11. 02:00:393 (1) - I don't know if a long slider is the best way to emphasize the rhythm here, one 2/1 slider and one 1/1 slider would be more appropriate imo

1. The volume of the green timing point on 00:12:736 is still quite loud imo, try 15% instead of 30%
2. 00:52:508 (3) - Well, assuming you intend to make a wavy slider, try to put a red anchor point on the middle of the slider. Here's a rough example, maybe you can make a better one
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:27:136 (2) - By hitsounding the tick, I'm sure you've known that the long slider isn't appropriate to be put there, since it doen't emphasize the stong beat on 01:27:821, why not divide it into 2 sliders then
4. 01:56:622 (3) - ...I'm sure you could make a better shape
5. 04:00:479 (1) - Why the rush in placing a spinner, I'm sure it won't affect the rhythm even if you place it on the red tick or the white tick after it. In fact the spinner is being too close which will make the player being in a rush and there's a high possibility of slider break
6. Ok, let's stop with the trivial things and move to the main issue here. It's not recommended for normal diff to have a speedup, looking from the green timing point with 1.00x and 1.10x SV multiplier. It would confuse the relatively new player (especially on taiko, you can really feel the difference), make all x1.00 (or change the main SV to 1.10 if you prefer the high one) and there won't be any BAT yell at you

1. Before you continue, make sure you've fixed all of the notes snapping first, since almost all notes placed on 1/8 here
2. 00:24:050 (2) - Stretch the slider, make it 3/4 to keep the consistency
3. 00:27:821 (3) - Again, 3/4 slider sounds better imo
4. 00:31:250 (5,6) - The transition from instrument based to vocal based is a bit off imo, I think it's better to follow the instrument and put 3/4 slider instead of circles
5. 00:31:592 (7) - Sigh, it's the third time I see weird way of making wavy slider, here's another rough example then
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:46:164 (3) - Basically, it's not recommended to start a slider on an offbeat since it doesn't punctuate the strong beat and would be weird when played, try to move the slider to 00:45:993 instead and following notes after it
7. 01:39:992 (1) - I'm sure this one is over-repeated since the stanza on 01:40:164 doesn't need to be emphasized. I would prefer using this rhythm
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:42:735 (9) - Try to curve it a bit? So it would look parallel with 01:43:250 (1)
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 02:45:907 (6) - Another over-repeater slider, fix please
10. 02:53:192 (6,7) - Well, I don't know how to put it but there's lot of anchor point that make it looks exaggerating, I'm sure you can think of a better shape
11. 03:29:707 (8) - Please.

1. Phew, the sharp style flow is quite the opposite of my forte, but I'll try to follow the style
2. 00:12:736 I don't understand why the hitsounding on insane and on hard can be so different, try to doublecheck those
3. 00:42:907 (1,2,3,4) - Well, you could remake the pattern to look neat
4. 01:11:622 (5) - x:300 y:224 (quite nazi I know, but it's way too out of place orz)
5. 01:18:565 (1) - ctrl+G, I can quite feel the antijump here (and you can move the tail downward a bit to make it parallel with the previous stream)
6. 01:36:908 (5,6,7) - gg hello slider break
7. 01:39:136 (1) - I think it's better to map this part instead of putting spinner since the rhythm is still going, it just feels like the rhythm is being blocked
8. 02:57:308 (1) - Cmon, you could do better than this
9. 03:02:022 (5) - x:320 y:244
10. 03:03:393 (3) - x:96 y:104
11. 03:11:022 (1) - No, please re-shape it
12. 03:13:765 (1) - Too long that it doesn't feels natural at all, you could just start the spinner on 03:16:507 instead and map the rest right? Laziness won't usually be tolerated 8)
13. 03:23:022 (6) - Four diff already and the fourth time I found this kind of rusted wavy slider hue
14. 03:24:221 (6) - What's the use of antijump here? Nah, it just break the flow instead of giving a challenge
15. 03:25:593 (5) - ^
16. 03:29:365 (2,1) - Different from before, I approve this antijump style, good work
17. 03:33:993 (3,4) - Fix the slider shape first, then optionally you can make a blanket of those sliders
18. 03:35:365 (9) - Fix please
19. So, what's the use of green timing point on 04:22:507 and 04:24:907?

DevilBrute wrote:

Loving this beatmap, please rank

El SolarBeam wrote:

M4M from your queue
since I don't like doing long mod with much chitty chatty and trivias, just trying to be frank here o7

[General]

1. Make sure to turn off both widescreen support and epilepsy warning in each diff
2. I'm still wondering what's the use of the red timing point on 04:03:136. Well I don't know if it's a new rule (since long time haven't checking those) but timing an unmapped part of the song with half of the main BPM won't affect anything imo

[Crystal's Easy]

1. The spread here is quite a mess tbh, while normal has 1.0x spacing and hard has 1.2x spacing, it would be weird for easy has the same spacing with hard. afaik it's probably caused by the low SV (really, I've mapped an easy diff with 0.60 SV and a BAT asked me to remap the spacing of the whole map because of it). Try SV 0.8 with 1.0x spacing so that the difference won't be that far, then recheck the whole spacing
2. The volume of the green timing point on 00:12:736 is still quite loud imo, try 15% instead of 30%
3. It should be better for you to fix the anchor point of each sliders to make a better curving behavior. For example on 00:18:222 (1) :
   
   SPOILER

   
   Try to ctrl+G it twice, and you'll get a neat-curved slider points
   
   SPOILER

   
   And yeah, doing it on all sliders on the diff makes a neat, nice slider behavior which likely easier to follow
4. 00:24:393 (1,2) - It's better not to overlap those sliders since it would confuse a newcomer, try to reduce the gradient of (2) and make a better blanket with the next slider instead
5. 00:33:307 - Ok, I failed to understand why this part is empty, while the rhythm is still going. Put notes please
6. 00:34:679 (1,2) - You know it's not recommended to put a stack in easy diff, especially this one with 2 stanza difference, newcomer will surely confuse it with 00:36:736 (3,4) - (well, removing the whole stacked pattern would be more appreciated but I'm not sure if you'll do that far)
7. 00:40:165 (1) - Um well, creating a waving slider with too many anchor point makes it looks silly, so just reduce it like this
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:43:593 (1) - No, I'm not a big fan of a random-placed spinner, I'm sure the spinner doesn't fit to emphasize the current rhythm
9. 00:53:193 (1) - This kind of slider would be a bit hard for beginner to read imo, try this one
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:09:650 (3,2) - The current rhythm may be hard to follow since it's started on the offbeat (red tick) and ended on the offbeat again, try moving it to the white tick, it won't sound weird anyway. And yeah, there's still many of it so just change what you think should be changed
11. 02:00:393 (1) - I don't know if a long slider is the best way to emphasize the rhythm here, one 2/1 slider and one 1/1 slider would be more appropriate imo

Well then, there's already quite a lot of works, so I'll stop here in a meantime


[Yauxo's Normal]

1. The volume of the green timing point on 00:12:736 is still quite loud imo, try 15% instead of 30%
2. 00:52:508 (3) - Well, assuming you intend to make a wavy slider, try to put a red anchor point on the middle of the slider. Here's a rough example, maybe you can make a better one
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:27:136 (2) - By hitsounding the tick, I'm sure you've known that the long slider isn't appropriate to be put there, since it doen't emphasize the stong beat on 01:27:821, why not divide it into 2 sliders then
4. 01:56:622 (3) - ...I'm sure you could make a better shape
5. 04:00:479 (1) - Why the rush in placing a spinner, I'm sure it won't affect the rhythm even if you place it on the red tick or the white tick after it. In fact the spinner is being too close which will make the player being in a rush and there's a high possibility of slider break
6. Ok, let's stop with the trivial things and move to the main issue here. It's not recommended for normal diff to have a speedup, looking from the green timing point with 1.00x and 1.10x SV multiplier. It would confuse the relatively new player (especially on taiko, you can really feel the difference), make all x1.00 (or change the main SV to 1.10 if you prefer the high one) and there won't be any BAT yell at you

There'll be some works such as fixing spacing and slider resnapping after the SV change, so I'll just say a little here


[Hard]

1. Before you continue, make sure you've fixed all of the notes snapping first, since almost all notes placed on 1/8 here
2. 00:24:050 (2) - Stretch the slider, make it 3/4 to keep the consistency
3. 00:27:821 (3) - Again, 3/4 slider sounds better imo
4. 00:31:250 (5,6) - The transition from instrument based to vocal based is a bit off imo, I think it's better to follow the instrument and put 3/4 slider instead of circles
5. 00:31:592 (7) - Sigh, it's the third time I see weird way of making wavy slider, here's another rough example then
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:46:164 (3) - Basically, it's not recommended to start a slider on an offbeat since it doesn't punctuate the strong beat and would be weird when played, try to move the slider to 00:45:993 instead and following notes after it
7. 01:39:992 (1) - I'm sure this one is over-repeated since the stanza on 01:40:164 doesn't need to be emphasized. I would prefer using this rhythm
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:42:735 (9) - Try to curve it a bit? So it would look parallel with 01:43:250 (1)
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 02:45:907 (6) - Another over-repeater slider, fix please
10. 02:53:192 (6,7) - Well, I don't know how to put it but there's lot of anchor point that make it looks exaggerating, I'm sure you can think of a better shape
11. 03:29:707 (8) - Please.

Well, the most frequent problem is the sliders which started on the red tick, in extreme cases it may ruin the flow and rhythm so it's recommended to prevent doing it too often


[Insane]

1. Phew, the sharp style flow is quite the opposite of my forte, but I'll try to follow the style
2. 00:12:736 I don't understand why the hitsounding on insane and on hard can be so different, try to doublecheck those
3. 00:42:907 (1,2,3,4) - Well, you could remake the pattern to look neat
4. 01:11:622 (5) - x:300 y:224 (quite nazi I know, but it's way too out of place orz)
5. 01:18:565 (1) - ctrl+G, I can quite feel the antijump here (and you can move the tail downward a bit to make it parallel with the previous stream)
6. 01:36:908 (5,6,7) - gg hello slider break
7. 01:39:136 (1) - I think it's better to map this part instead of putting spinner since the rhythm is still going, it just feels like the rhythm is being blocked
8. 02:57:308 (1) - Cmon, you could do better than this
9. 03:02:022 (5) - x:320 y:244
10. 03:03:393 (3) - x:96 y:104
11. 03:11:022 (1) - No, please re-shape it
12. 03:13:765 (1) - Too long that it doesn't feels natural at all, you could just start the spinner on 03:16:507 instead and map the rest right? Laziness won't usually be tolerated 8)
13. 03:23:022 (6) - Four diff already and the fourth time I found this kind of rusted wavy slider hue
14. 03:24:221 (6) - What's the use of antijump here? Nah, it just break the flow instead of giving a challenge
15. 03:25:593 (5) - ^
16. 03:29:365 (2,1) - Different from before, I approve this antijump style, good work
17. 03:33:993 (3,4) - Fix the slider shape first, then optionally you can make a blanket of those sliders
18. 03:35:365 (9) - Fix please
19. So, what's the use of green timing point on 04:22:507 and 04:24:907?

Nice flow, it's been a while I handle a sharp-flowed mapping style

El SolarBeam wrote:

M4M from your queue
since I don't like doing long mod with much chitty chatty and trivias, just trying to be frank here o7

[General]

1. Make sure to turn off both widescreen support and epilepsy warning in each diff
2. I'm still wondering what's the use of the red timing point on 04:03:136. Well I don't know if it's a new rule (since long time haven't checking those) but timing an unmapped part of the song with half of the main BPM won't affect anything imo

[Crystal's Easy]

1. The spread here is quite a mess tbh, while normal has 1.0x spacing and hard has 1.2x spacing, it would be weird for easy has the same spacing with hard. afaik it's probably caused by the low SV (really, I've mapped an easy diff with 0.60 SV and a BAT asked me to remap the spacing of the whole map because of it). Try SV 0.8 with 1.0x spacing so that the difference won't be that far, then recheck the whole spacing actually i didn't see any problem on the use of spacing, since i use 0.6 SV, the real spacing isn't as large as normal does, and that SV fits the difficulty imo. however, i may consider the problem if it's a real trouble
2. The volume of the green timing point on 00:12:736 is still quite loud imo, try 15% instead of 30% ok
3. It should be better for you to fix the anchor point of each sliders to make a better curving behavior. For example on 00:18:222 (1) :
   
   SPOILER

   
   Try to ctrl+G it twice, and you'll get a neat-curved slider points hmm yes, but does it really matter? adjusting the anchor to the tick doesn't seem to change the shape, blanket, etc
   
   SPOILER

   
   And yeah, doing it on all sliders on the diff makes a neat, nice slider behavior which likely easier to follow
4. 00:24:393 (1,2) - It's better not to overlap those sliders since it would confuse a newcomer, try to reduce the gradient of (2) and make a better blanket with the next slider instead sure i changed that in my way
5. 00:33:307 - Ok, I failed to understand why this part is empty, while the rhythm is still going. Put notes please maybe you didn't update, i fixed this in my last update
6. 00:34:679 (1,2) - You know it's not recommended to put a stack in easy diff, especially this one with 2 stanza difference, newcomer will surely confuse it with 00:36:736 (3,4) - (well, removing the whole stacked pattern would be more appreciated but I'm not sure if you'll do that far) o.o is that confusing? maybe it's not a thing because the speed is low enough not to make a newcomer confused
7. 00:40:165 (1) - Um well, creating a waving slider with too many anchor point makes it looks silly, so just reduce it like this i like this slider Q.Q
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:43:593 (1) - No, I'm not a big fan of a random-placed spinner, I'm sure the spinner doesn't fit to emphasize the current rhythm fix'd maybe
9. 00:53:193 (1) - This kind of slider would be a bit hard for beginner to read imo, try this one ok
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:09:650 (3,2) - The current rhythm may be hard to follow since it's started on the offbeat (red tick) and ended on the offbeat again, try moving it to the white tick, it won't sound weird anyway. And yeah, there's still many of it so just change what you think should be changed a newcomer may probably click the beats depending on the vocal at first imo
11. 02:00:393 (1) - I don't know if a long slider is the best way to emphasize the rhythm here, one 2/1 slider and one 1/1 slider would be more appropriate imo this is to emphasize that finish so i want to keep it

Well then, there's already quite a lot of works, so I'll stop here in a meantime thank you, i know i need a lot of improvements here, since i mapped it when i was a newbie mapper. some of the problems will be considered in the near future

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: [DnB] - Tristam & Braken - Frame of Mind [Monstercat Release].mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 156093
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 111520,133463,144434,221234,232206
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Frame of Mind
TitleUnicode:Frame of Mind
Artist:Tristam & Braken
ArtistUnicode:Tristam & Braken
Creator:Fort
Version:Crystal's Easy
Source:
Tags:Monstercat monster cat release liquid drum and bass dnb featuring yauxo crystal [_crystal]
BeatmapID:441525
BeatmapSetID:177523

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2.5
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Combo5 : 255,102,255
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CDFA wrote:

Looking at this again

Timing:
12874 Sounds like a better offset. I forget what that would be for the first offset . You can also remove the final red point, since it doesn't really need it .

Overall:
03:19:298 - aaa. 80% volume is WAY too loud here. Have the impact come from the mapping, not the volume

Everything else is fine. Lots of good work happening since I first modded it! Call me back

-Tochi wrote:

• 
  

  ♬ General ♬

1. There is some places where you use 100% volume. I think 100% is too loud, but it's just a preference.

• 
  

  ♬ Another ♬

1. 00:45:993 (2,1) - Why not stack?
2. 00:47:879 (7,1) - I prefer not to overlap so it touches the circle. But it's fine when it only touches the slider-middle or what u call it x3
3. 01:18:908 (2) - Blanket? Also so it doesn't overlap.
4. 01:37:251 (12,4,5,6) - Stack?
5. 02:16:851 (1,7) - Use same shape would be nice.
6. 02:21:308 (2,2) - I personally don't really like this overlap. But if you were to change it, it would probably destroy your pattern.

• 
  

  ♬ Insane ♬

1. 00:16:851 (3) - Ctrl + G?
2. 01:04:507 (4,4,5,6) - I prefer to stack these.
3. 01:38:622 (5) - Reverse this slider so it doesn't feel empty.
4. 02:50:451 (1,3) - I would avoid this overlap, what about you?
5. 03:13:765 (1) - I prefer u to make this spinner end here 03:16:507 - without any finish/hitsound, and then enable a break between it and the next object

• 
  

  ♬ Feedback ♬

  
  Please give me your hitsounding skillz ;w; I like this map sooo much! Good luck with it, i want to see it ranked!

Yauxo wrote:

Sorry for the delay, but I lost motivation halfway through. I'll try to get the remap in before this weekend.

Neil Leo wrote:

From NLOMQ, here I go...

[Hard]
00:43:593 (1,1) - Not NC SV changes needs new combos

[Another]
02:35:365 (1) - Why not do this similar to 02:34:679 (1,2) cuz SV changes i dont change it

Yauxo wrote:

remapapapapapap

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
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Artist:Tristam & Braken
ArtistUnicode:Tristam & Braken
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-Tochi wrote:

Good luck with the map Fort ^^

Shooted 2 kd<3

• [ Hard]

1. 01:00:392 (5) - can you give more space ? like spacing 00:59:707 (3,4)
2. 01:25:764 (4,5) - blanked please
3. 01:38:450 - bookmark here? the sound is changing .. i know you following the white-red tick http://puu.sh/dKKXA/88adffed3c.jpg . but i think this changing to white-blue tick . can you fixed that ? http://puu.sh/dKL4c/425671676f.jpg - it just my recommendation
4. 03:05:535 (1) - maybe add finish ?
5. 02:06:221 (2) - unsight not , can you just give that space ?
6. 02:48:221 (3,4) - blanked properly please?

• [ Insane]

1. 01:11:193 (2,3) - ctrl+g i think ?

• [ Chill]

1. 00:20:878 - add not ?
2. 01:15:564 - ^
3. 02:54:051 (2) - ctrl+g? make better flow

Sky Trias wrote:

whoaa .. drop from #indonesian

• [ Hard]

1. 01:00:392 (5) - can you give more space ? like spacing 00:59:707 (3,4)
2. 01:25:764 (4,5) - blanked please
3. 01:38:450 - bookmark here? the sound is changing .. i know you following the white-red tick http://puu.sh/dKKXA/88adffed3c.jpg . but i think this changing to white-blue tick . can you fixed that ? http://puu.sh/dKL4c/425671676f.jpg - it just my recommendation sounds weird
4. 03:05:535 (1) - maybe add finish ?
5. 02:06:221 (2) - unsight not , can you just give that space ?
6. 02:48:221 (3,4) - blanked properly please?

• [ Insane]

1. 01:11:193 (2,3) - ctrl+g i think ?

i think this one not really good

• [ Chill]

1. 00:20:878 - add not ? looks overmapped if i do
2. 01:15:564 - ^
3. 02:54:051 (2) - ctrl+g? make better flow

its a reverse slider, so if i ctrl + g, flow will be bad i guess

Pliss jangan di bully , aku noob kaka woles aja kk

neonat wrote:

in-game as well

SPOILER

2014-12-28 01:23 Fort: hi
2014-12-28 01:23 neonat: ?
2014-12-28 01:23 neonat: hi
2014-12-28 01:23 Fort: neonat mod my map by IRC mod pls
2014-12-28 01:23 neonat: what map
2014-12-28 01:23 Fort: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/441128 Tristam & Braken - Frame of Mind]
2014-12-28 01:24 neonat: all diffs
2014-12-28 01:24 neonat: or wut
2014-12-28 01:25 Fort: Hyper, insane, and Chill
2014-12-28 01:26 neonat: hyper eh
2014-12-28 01:26 Fort: yes
2014-12-28 01:26 neonat: 00:15:478 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - makes no sense to place whistle on all white lines
2014-12-28 01:26 Fort: done
2014-12-28 01:27 neonat: same with 00:20:964 (1,2,3,4) -
2014-12-28 01:27 neonat: because 00:23:707 (1) - onwards with the vocals
2014-12-28 01:27 Fort: already done
2014-12-28 01:27 neonat: it makes more sense for that kind of pattern
2014-12-28 01:28 neonat: 00:32:621 (1) - found this weird, felt there shouldn't be something at 00:32:793 where the slider ended, just too much sounds here in this section i guess
2014-12-28 01:29 neonat: with it being so cramped with objects as well
2014-12-28 01:29 neonat: 00:40:850 (1) - same
2014-12-28 01:29 Fort: wait
2014-12-28 01:30 Fort: i think i overmapped this diff
2014-12-28 01:30 neonat: so i wait?
2014-12-28 01:31 Fort: okay done
2014-12-28 01:31 neonat: 00:56:621 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - spacing varies quite a bit 1.19x - 1.26x
2014-12-28 01:31 neonat: kinda awkward
2014-12-28 01:32 neonat: visibly noticeable hence I went to check
2014-12-28 01:34 neonat: might as well make the NC for the start similar to the rest in the kiai time
2014-12-28 01:34 neonat: you made it such that NC starts with vocals
2014-12-28 01:34 neonat: so NC at 01:08:278 (4) -
2014-12-28 01:35 neonat: not at 01:09:307 (1) -
2014-12-28 01:35 Fort: okay done
2014-12-28 01:36 neonat: '01:21:992 (2) - NC here instead
2014-12-28 01:37 neonat: 01:38:964 - add a note, feels more complete rhythm this way
2014-12-28 01:38 Fort: can i add jump in there?
2014-12-28 01:38 neonat: idk lol
2014-12-28 01:39 neonat: just make it like 01:38:450 (2,3) - ?
2014-12-28 01:39 neonat: 01:40:507 (1) - finish for more impact? lol
2014-12-28 01:39 Fort: yep
2014-12-28 01:39 Fort: done
2014-12-28 01:40 neonat: you broke ur combo pattern again here lol 01:44:278 (1) -
2014-12-28 01:41 neonat: you can follow the pattern at 01:34:507 (1) -
2014-12-28 01:41 neonat: by NC 01:45:478 (6) - instead then lol
2014-12-28 01:43 neonat: 02:13:421 - shouldn't the break line be here?
2014-12-28 01:43 Fort: but that combo is in red line
2014-12-28 01:43 Fort: no
2014-12-28 01:43 Fort: lol
2014-12-28 01:43 neonat: like i said
2014-12-28 01:43 neonat: cuz u did it here 01:34:507 (1) -
2014-12-28 01:43 neonat: which I conclude you did for the lead in
2014-12-28 01:43 neonat: for the 2nd phrase in the section
2014-12-28 01:43 Fort: oh i see
2014-12-28 01:44 neonat: which is the same as 01:45:478 (6) -
2014-12-28 01:44 Fort: i change it to circle
2014-12-28 01:44 neonat: 02:31:936 (1) - NC because?
2014-12-28 01:45 Fort: ummm distance change
2014-12-28 01:45 neonat: 02:33:650 (4) - this kinda sticks out cuz
2014-12-28 01:45 neonat: it isn't rotated the same as 02:32:621 (1,2,3) -
2014-12-28 01:45 Fort: because i manually creat that sliders
2014-12-28 01:46 Fort: create*
2014-12-28 01:46 neonat: 02:36:050 (4) - NC, remove NC 02:36:735 (1) - like 1st kiai
2014-12-28 01:46 neonat: 02:38:792 (2) - NC here instead
2014-12-28 01:46 neonat: eehhhh
2014-12-28 01:47 neonat: why doesnt this kiai follow the first
2014-12-28 01:47 neonat: it's totally different lol
2014-12-28 01:47 Fort: done
2014-12-28 01:47 neonat: forget it
2014-12-28 01:47 neonat: i give up on NCs
2014-12-28 01:47 neonat: keep changing lol
2014-12-28 01:47 Fort: i will do self mod on that thing
2014-12-28 01:48 neonat: 03:04:164 (6) - remove that whistle at the start
2014-12-28 01:48 neonat: place it at the end of the slider
2014-12-28 01:49 neonat: 03:15:478 (7) - whistle on end of slider
2014-12-28 01:50 neonat: 03:15:821 (8) - whistle on start of slider
2014-12-28 01:50 Fort: okay done
2014-12-28 01:52 neonat: 04:00:564 (2,3) - I find that this rhythm feels better http://imgur.com/mWNRYSE
2014-12-28 01:52 neonat: how that repeat slider ended botheredme
2014-12-28 01:52 Fort: yea i guess
2014-12-28 01:52 neonat: in regards to being able to click along with the music
2014-12-28 01:53 neonat: so yea, check up ur NCs
2014-12-28 01:53 neonat: shall look at insane
2014-12-28 01:54 Fort: already fixed all Ncs
2014-12-28 01:54 neonat: 00:51:136 (1,2) - i rather you don't stack these
2014-12-28 01:55 Fort: done
2014-12-28 01:56 Fort: i think you look to nc's again
2014-12-28 01:56 Fort: nbs*
2014-12-28 01:56 Fort: ncs*
2014-12-28 01:56 neonat: ?
2014-12-28 01:57 Fort: nevermind
2014-12-28 01:57 neonat: 01:47:364 (1,2,3,4) - i find the intensity here very weird lol
2014-12-28 01:58 Fort: maybe remove hitsound or what?
2014-12-28 01:58 neonat: if u asked me
2014-12-28 01:58 neonat: i would say do a reduction in density, but not that drastic lol
2014-12-28 01:58 neonat: like http://i.imgur.com/i9JqhCD.png
2014-12-28 01:59 Fort: [http://puu.sh/dLsJr/8c795ace33.png heck]
2014-12-28 01:59 Fort: site blocked in my isp
2014-12-28 02:00 neonat: lmao
2014-12-28 02:00 neonat: so the other one as well?
2014-12-28 02:00 Fort: puush it maybe can help
2014-12-28 02:01 neonat: http://puu.sh/dLsP2.jpg
2014-12-28 02:01 neonat: the first one for the repeat slider was just
2014-12-28 02:01 neonat: 2 1/2 sliders and a circle to replace that pattern
2014-12-28 02:02 neonat: 02:57:307 (1) - finish on start of slider
2014-12-28 02:03 neonat: 03:18:564 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - don't totally 100% stack on each other
2014-12-28 02:04 neonat: even a slight movement along the stream would be good
2014-12-28 02:04 Fort: okay done
2014-12-28 02:04 neonat: chill
2014-12-28 02:05 Fort: wait
2014-12-28 02:05 Fort: how about this notes
2014-12-28 02:05 Fort: 02:49:079 (1,2,3,4,5) -
2014-12-28 02:05 Fort: you like it?
2014-12-28 02:05 neonat: how is it so diff from the rest around it lol
2014-12-28 02:06 neonat: im not fond of sliders starting on beats like 02:49:593 (4) - but then again
2014-12-28 02:06 neonat: it's not the only one around
2014-12-28 02:06 neonat: u got the sudden whistle spams for sections 2 and 4 at the start of chill as well
2014-12-28 02:06 Fort: okay
2014-12-28 02:08 neonat: 00:47:279 (3,8) - don't see what you mapping these triplets to
2014-12-28 02:08 neonat: this whole part in the music is 1/2 beats
2014-12-28 02:08 Fort: it feels good
2014-12-28 02:08 Fort: hahaha
2014-12-28 02:08 neonat: if u wanted some lead in triplets 00:47:621 - would be most natural
2014-12-28 02:09 neonat: i won't complain that much really about such triplets
2014-12-28 02:09 neonat: but as long as they fit more naturally
2014-12-28 02:10 Fort: okay fix pattern
2014-12-28 02:10 neonat: 01:16:508 (1) - remove clap on start
2014-12-28 02:10 neonat: place it on end of slider
2014-12-28 02:11 Fort: chnaged
2014-12-28 02:11 Fort: changed*
2014-12-28 02:11 neonat: 01:23:193 (2) - either whistle all the rest like this, or no whistle for places like these
2014-12-28 02:13 Fort: done
2014-12-28 02:13 neonat: 01:43:593 (2) - clap on start
2014-12-28 02:13 neonat: 01:45:651 (8) - ^
2014-12-28 02:14 Fort: done
2014-12-28 02:16 neonat: 02:05:193 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - similar to 01:54:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - no?
2014-12-28 02:17 neonat: 02:35:365 (1) - finish on start of slider
2014-12-28 02:17 Fort: i think not similiar
2014-12-28 02:17 neonat: 02:46:336 (1) - ^
2014-12-28 02:18 Fort: eh why big notes are not in finish HS
2014-12-28 02:18 neonat: shouldsoft sampleset the end of slider 03:13:422 (6) -
2014-12-28 02:19 neonat: 03:30:222 (1) - finish on start of slider
2014-12-28 02:19 neonat: 03:38:279 (10) - maybe NC
2014-12-28 02:20 Fort: i nc on 03:37:765 (1) -
2014-12-28 02:20 neonat: 03:49:422 (3) - swap this with 03:49:079 (1,2) -
2014-12-28 02:21 neonat: so slider holds with vocals
2014-12-28 02:21 neonat: these are things I felt most strongly
2014-12-28 02:21 neonat: so yea
2014-12-28 02:21 Fort: weird
2014-12-28 02:22 Fort: i look at this notes 03:50:108 (1,2) -
2014-12-28 02:22 Fort: but i think its nice idea
2014-12-28 02:22 Fort: cause same like 03:54:565 (7) -

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