Aaay, makasih udah m4m :'3
oiya, modnya pake bahasa inggris aja ya, lebih enak hehehe
[General]
goodluck~
oiya, modnya pake bahasa inggris aja ya, lebih enak hehehe
[General]
- Suggestion, i actually prefer Preview Point starts here 02:36:093 - since it's the start of the chorus and i like it more lol well the current one is fine since you tried to capture the title inside the lyrics, but when i first load the map, i didn't grasp the melody though. So yeah idk
- Some inconsistencies in Tags you better fix
- It's better if you start mapping all diffs from the same point. It's good to keep consistencies in one mapset
- Is it just me or combo 5 and 6 looks similiar and it has no differences in gameplay. i suggest to change one of themSPOILER
my suggestion. but it's up to you - Might be better if all diffs also map the ending from 04:03:179 - to keep consistencies in whole mapset. but yeah it's your choice
- Why is there two uninherited timing points? o.o
- OD+1/HP+1 ? Never seen such low settings like this before, even in Easy diff. and to make the spread more balanced since Normal has OD4,5 and HP4
- 00:13:464 - 00:23:750 - the clap hitsound is kinda annoyingly loud sorry ><, and it doesn't really fit when the song is kinda quiet at this part. maybe you can lower the volume a bit
- 00:31:979 (3,1) - the gap between them is quiet awkward idk o.o i suggest to add a slider, it makes the rhythm flow better. won't hurt the beginners http://puu.sh/aFjZl/67db6ffdfa.jpg
- 00:38:151 (5,6) - only nazi suggestion. make them same shape is good. currently (6) is a bit too downward
- 00:46:379 (2) - nazi again, you might want to move the tail's square point to 64|96 http://puu.sh/aFkhP/630ea3749c.jpg
- 00:49:808 (3,4,5) - idk i think the rhythm is kinda weird to play here. rhythm suggestion. or if you don't want to follow, switch nc 00:51:865 (5,1) - , and then nc 00:56:665 (2) - SPOILER
well i deleted 00:56:665 (2) - anyway - 01:04:894 (4) - only suggestion http://puu.sh/aFkFr/ddd70fa739.jpg
- 01:07:636 - this beat is an important beat, and it would do a great accent if we can click this beat. so when a slider ends there, it feels kinda weird. so rhythm suggestion
- 01:15:694 (3,1) - this can be hard for beginners. not only it's stacked, but i had a hard time reading the rhythm at first try
anyway, rhythm suggestion
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you might want to delete those two green timing points if you follow - 01:27:522 (3) - the rhythm is quite awkward, since i don't know what you're following here o.o so i strongly suggest this rhythm
- 01:47:408 (1) - why not start it here 01:48:779 - ? fits the song better, i think
- 01:52:208 (1,2,1) - rhythm inconsistencies
there's a note ends here 01:52:893 - while there are none at 01:55:636 - and they're in the same pattern. so rhythm suggestion
- 02:00:436 (1) - the rhythm is kinda forced here
i suggest to put the reverse arrow at 02:01:121 - , the rhythm is more sensible
- 02:12:094 (5,1,2) - also rhythm suggestion
- 02:21:694 (5,1,2) - also rhythm suggestion, since the gap between 02:21:694 (5,1) - is really sad :'(
02:43:464 (3,1) - same as 01:15:694 (3,1) -
well overall from the beginning until the middle, the rhythm mostly follows the vocal. since this is the easiest diff, i really suggest to follow consistent beats more since it will make the diff more friendly for beginners, because rhythm which follow the vocals more are usually hard to read. but the rhythm at your last kiai is fine
- 00:42:951 (1,2) - only suggestion http://puu.sh/aFmHl/ef2d932b2d.jpg
- 01:20:664 (4) - clap at slider's tail
- 01:37:808 (1,2) - only suggestion. i make (2) a bit downward so they will be perpendicular http://puu.sh/aFmOr/3cfed7a05c.jpg
- 02:57:351 (1) - finish at slider's head
- 03:08:322 (1) - ^
- 03:16:551 (1) - finish
no major problems here. nice one
- 00:23:064 (4) - only suggestion for slider shape lol 00:21:694 (2,3,4) - can make a good formation http://puu.sh/aFno6/cce9d73052.jpg
- 01:31:294 (7) - the vast emptiness seems..... idk derp since i can still hear the instruments until 02:12:093 - , so i would suggest this rhythm to fill the gap http://puu.sh/aFnGL/5bcb4f6069.jpg
- 03:30:265 (1) - finish at slider's head
nice, but the some rhythm at some parts are a bit inconsistent. like these 00:23:751 (1,2) - i was expecting the same rhythm at 00:26:493 - since they're still in the same verse. also same at 00:29:236 - i was also expecting the same rhythm like 00:23:751 (1,2) - . and also this rhythm mainly follow the vocal 00:32:665 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and kinda ruin the polarity in previous patterns so it's quite awkward when i play it. just pointing those out. you might want to make the rhythm more consistent next time
- 00:24:779 (4) - 00:24:779 (4) - the rhythm is quite inconsistent at this part
- 00:34:722 (1,2) - 00:29:236 (1,2) - 00:37:465 (1,2) - 00:40:208 (1,2) - only suggestion, snap them at blue ticks is better. to make it consistent with 00:23:751 (1,2) -
- 00:42:950 - also i can still hear the instrument until 00:44:321 - so i suggest to fill the gap between them http://puu.sh/aFowe/657d7befd8.jpg
- 01:07:636 (1) - finish at slider's head? i hear a loud cymbals there
- 01:18:608 (1) - ^
- 01:29:579 (1) - ^
- 01:40:551 (1) - ^
- 01:47:408 (1) - would fit the song better if you start this spinner from 01:48:779 - and then fill the gap between them
- 02:09:008 (2,3) - nazi, you can improve the blanket more http://puu.sh/aFoLv/6146507684.jpg
- 02:12:093 - i strongly suggest to add a note there, to make it a balanced rhythm with 02:11:408 (3) -
- 02:35:408 (1) - finish at slider's head
- 02:46:379 (1) - ^
- 02:57:008 (9) - clap at slider's head
- 02:57:351 (1) - finish at slider's head? i hear a loud cymbals there
- 03:09:351 (6) - clap
- 03:59:321 - add a note here to make a triplet, since you make one at 03:55:979 (1,2,3) -
there are some parts with inconsistent triplets rhythm, you should be careful. like for example, i'm expecting a triplet in this pattern 01:00:779 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - since previous pattern also have triplets. and a bit weird when 02:24:436 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - don't have a single triplets since they're quite similiar with this pattern 00:56:665 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - well it's up to you, but you should keep the rhythm consistency
- 00:20:921 - 00:23:664 - add a note here? since you added one at 00:15:436 (9) - and 00:18:179 (9) -
- 00:45:693 - 01:37:294 (12) - why not use normal-hitsound? like other diffs, and it's better if you use normal-hitsound
- 01:07:636 (1) - finish at slider's head? i hear a loud cymbals there
- 01:18:608 (1) - ^
- 01:21:950 - add a note here? to make it balanced with this triplet 01:20:322 (2,3,4) -
- 01:29:579 (1) - finish at slider's head? i hear a loud cymbals there
- 01:37:294 (12) - add clap at reverse arrow
- 01:40:551 (1) - finish at slider's head? i hear a loud cymbals there
- 01:45:694 (8) - clap at slider's head
- 02:35:408 (1) - finish at slider's head? i hear a loud cymbals there
- 02:46:379 (1) - ^
- 02:46:722 (2,1) - feels missing a triplet
- 02:57:351 (1) - finish at slider's head? i hear a loud cymbals there
- 03:00:951 (7,9) - you could make a blanket
- 03:08:322 (1) - finish at slider's head? i hear a loud cymbals there
- 03:16:379 - add a note? to keep the rhythm flow
- 03:19:294 (1) - finish at slider's head? i hear a loud cymbals there
- 03:30:265 (1) - ^
- 03:27:179 (1) - clap
- 03:32:494 (2) - random finish out of nowhere o.o i suggest to remove
- 03:33:694 (1) - ^, it doesn't really fit the song
- 03:36:350 - add a note? feels like missing a triplet here
to make it balanced with 03:34:722 (1,2,3) -
pretty much same issues like insane, so yeah
goodluck~