Ayano Mashiro - ideal white (TV size) [CatchTheBeat] · forum

Vhy

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-10-21T10:13:12+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, August 7, 2015 at 12:20:07 AM

Artist: Ayano Mashiro
Title: ideal white (TV size)
Source: Fate/stay night [Unlimited Blade Works]
Tags: フェイト/ステイナイト remake ubw type-moon opening ufotable vhy clsw
BPM: 180
Filesize: 4361kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

Crystal's Unlimited Fruit Works (5.87 stars, 363 notes)
Platter (3.32 stars, 292 notes)
Rain (4.4 stars, 370 notes)
Salad (2.35 stars, 200 notes)

Download: Ayano Mashiro - ideal white (TV size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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wes mboh lah :3

Last edited by Vhy 2015-08-06T17:20:51+00:00, edited 21 times in total.

Lunaties

369 posts

Joined October 2012

Lunaties 2014-10-22T11:24:53+00:00

http://puu.sh/clWNb.osu

time to disappear again u.u

pieguyn

2,020 posts

Joined May 2009

pieguyn 2014-10-25T10:41:32+00:00

[Lunate's Cup]
01:11:578 (4) - recommend moving it closer to (3), might be hard for new players to make without dash

[Salad]
fine

[Platter]
-would recommend putting in another spinner somewhere - even though there's one in the map already, the length is very short, so there's hardly any room for error. same thing goes for [Rain]

[Rain]
00:33:412 (7,8,1) - the change in direction followed by a large jump is kind of unexpected here. imo move (7,8) right a bit makes it easier to play
00:36:079 (6,7,1) - ^
00:45:411 (4,1,2) - this back-and-forth is really hard to hit imo, since the 1st jump is very long but doesn't have a hyperdash. move 00:45:745 (1) - 2 or 3 grids to the right plays more natural imo
01:01:745 (1,2,3,4,1) - the change in direction followed by a huge jump threw me off the first few times I played it. imo move 01:02:411 (3) - left a bit makes the pattern less misleading. just a suggestion

don't see anything wrong here, plays really well. take some stars. good luck :3

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-10-26T06:16:28+00:00

pieguy1372 wrote:
[Salad]
fine yey!

[Platter]
-would recommend putting in another spinner somewhere - even though there's one in the map already, the length is very short, so there's hardly any room for error. same thing goes for [Rain] yeah i think one spinner is enough already

[Rain]
00:33:412 (7,8,1) - the change in direction followed by a large jump is kind of unexpected here. imo move (7,8) right a bit makes it easier to play it will ruin the distance of 00:33:245 (6,7) because they're close already. so i moved 00:33:745 (1,2) more to the left instead
00:36:079 (6,7,1) - ^ moved 00:36:079 (6,7) 2 grid to the right
00:45:411 (4,1,2) - this back-and-forth is really hard to hit imo, since the 1st jump is very long but doesn't have a hyperdash. move 00:45:745 (1) - 2 or 3 grids to the right plays more natural imo 3 grid!!
01:01:745 (1,2,3,4,1) - the change in direction followed by a huge jump threw me off the first few times I played it. imo move 01:02:411 (3) - left a bit makes the pattern less misleading. just a suggestion 2 grid!!

don't see anything wrong here, plays really well. take some stars. good luck :3

thanks for the mod and star =w=

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-10-29T10:47:48+00:00

I'm watching you. O.O

Add some tag btw.

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,578 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2014-10-30T09:18:55+00:00

Yooooo Vhy o/

[General]

Combo Colors: Change the combo colors to another color? All of them are similar/same to the background color (red, orange, dark red), you can increase the contrast.
Tags: Add 綾野, ましろ, Fate/stay night: Unlimited Blade Works, opening theme, OP
Kiai Time: Would it be better if you remove the Kiai part from 01:09:411 to 01:09:661, and add the kiai time from 01:09:745 to the place where you ended?

[

Lunate's Cup]

00:03:078 (1) - Why not adding Clap at 00:03:411 and 00:04:078?
00:05:745 (1) - Add Finish at the Head?
00:42:078 (4,5) - I recommend to have same distance as you did in 00:41:745 (3,4)
00:59:078 (1,2,3,4) - Distance between (1,2) and (3,4) should be consistent, since their stanza is the same
01:08:078 (1) - Due to the high BPM (180), plus it is just a Cup diff, it is highly recommended to increase the time difference between the spinner and 01:10:078 (1), otherwise the player cannot catch up very quickly (especially the beginners)
01:10:911 (3,4) - Distance between (3) and (4) are too big. Since it is a Cup, you should reduce the distance

NC Issues:
00:10:245 (6) - NC here for cutting a kinda-long combo here?
00:13:745 (8) - NC here
00:12:411 (5) - If you applied the previous mod and 00:10:245 (6) mod, NC this to cut the combo
00:16:411 (4) - NC
00:51:078 (6) - NC here is needed, otherwise the combo is mega long
00:56:411 (5) - ^
01:01:744 (5) - NC
01:12:411 (6) - ^
01:17:744 (6) - ^
01:25:744 (7) - NC because of stanza change?

Cup diff is nicely mapped, but some of the combos are way too long, which is the reason why I point them out, ignore if you prefer your NC styles instead of mine.

[

Salad]

At some point, I think some of the jumps are quite hard as a Salad, somehow it looks like a Platter but in lower AR. Try decreasing some of the distances (maybe it is because of slider velocity) to make it easier.

00:10:745 (6) - In my opinion it is not recommended to use 1/4 note difference except the Kiai Time parts, so it is better to change this into a 1/2 slider.
00:22:078 (3,4) - It is so weird to have Finish at the tail of (3) and then have (4), because of the pattern. Consider making the timeline like *this
00:24:745 (3,4) - ^
00:27:411 (3,4) - ^
00:33:578 (4) - Not fitting the audio background, change this note to match the audio.
00:37:411 (8,9,1) - The pattern of (6,7,8,9) is great, but the pattern at (8,9,1) is too hard for the player, change the pattern if possible.
00:42:578 (6) - Not necessary to use a 1/4 reversed slider here, it is one of the point which makes the player feel complicated
01:08:411 (1,2,3,4) - Don't use streams in Salad please, it causes Salad to be so complicated and confusing
01:22:411 (1,2) - ^, just use 1/2 sliders...
01:27:745 (1,2,3) - Change the stream into a 2/1 slider?

[

Platter]

00:01:745 (5) - NC this, so that there will be consistency with 00:04:411 (1)
00:05:078 (3,4,5) - AAAAAA (4) is so troll, make it easier here
00:48:245 (1,1) - Add HDash between the notes because of stanza change?
01:02:911 (4) - Not suiting the audio background, swap the position on the time interval of (4) and (5)
01:25:411 (1,1) - HDash between the notes?

Nice but some HDashes are missing, such as the ones I have mentioned.

[

Rain]

01:09:078 (1,2) - Lengthen this part? Add it into a stream too
01:17:661 (2,3) - HDash needed.
01:28:328 (7,8) - Here you can add troll place like HDash :3

Nice Rain! Keep it up! ~~and troll CS4.2 hue :3~~

Good luck for rank!

-AFB

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-10-31T09:56:05+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
Yooooo Vhy o/

[General]
Combo Colors: Change the combo colors to another color? All of them are similar/same to the background color (red, orange, dark red), you can increase the contrast. the current is okay
Tags: Add 綾野, ましろ, Fate/stay night: Unlimited Blade Works, opening theme, OP will add tags on future when the mapset is complete
Kiai Time: Would it be better if you remove the Kiai part from 01:09:411 to 01:09:661, and add the kiai time from 01:09:745 to the place where you ended? no

[ Salad]

At some point, I think some of the jumps are quite hard as a Salad, somehow it looks like a Platter but in lower AR. Try decreasing some of the distances (maybe it is because of slider velocity) to make it easier.
00:10:745 (6) - In my opinion it is not recommended to use 1/4 note difference except the Kiai Time parts, so it is better to change this into a 1/2 slider. i don't think so. as long as it catchable and easy enough, y not?
00:22:078 (3,4) - It is so weird to have Finish at the tail of (3) and then have (4), because of the pattern. Consider making the timeline like *this they're in purpose. having a slider on (3) is easier to catch the note (4) imo than a circle instead
00:24:745 (3,4) - ^
00:27:411 (3,4) - ^
00:33:578 (4) - Not fitting the audio background, change this note to match the audio. but the hitsound support it really well
00:37:411 (8,9,1) - The pattern of (6,7,8,9) is great, but the pattern at (8,9,1) is too hard for the player, change the pattern if possible. ok
00:42:578 (6) - Not necessary to use a 1/4 reversed slider here, it is one of the point which makes the player feel complicated no change.
01:08:411 (1,2,3,4) - Don't use streams in Salad please, it causes Salad to be so complicated and confusing
01:22:411 (1,2) - ^, just use 1/2 sliders...
01:27:745 (1,2,3) - Change the stream into a 2/1 slider? about this and two above, i'll consider again if further modder mentioned this too

[ Platter]
00:01:745 (5) - NC this, so that there will be consistency with 00:04:411 (1) ok
00:05:078 (3,4,5) - AAAAAA (4) is so troll, make it easier here ok lower the distance
00:48:245 (1,1) - Add HDash between the notes because of stanza change? no. really i don't like to add a HDash on a first note after a spinner
01:02:911 (4) - Not suiting the audio background, swap the position on the time interval of (4) and (5) okeeeeey
01:25:411 (1,1) - HDash between the notes? ok i ctrl+h'ed the note at 01:25:911 (1). quite a rough HDash tho

Nice but some HDashes are missing, such as the ones I have mentioned.

[ Rain]
01:09:078 (1,2) - Lengthen this part? Add it into a stream too i will kept my own it sounds better
01:17:661 (2,3) - HDash needed. totally no for this
01:28:328 (7,8) - Here you can add troll place like HDash :3 yeah it's good having a HDash here but since im placing (8) in change the direction, so i guess better not to add a HDash

Nice Rain! Keep it up! ~~and troll CS4.2 hue :3~~

Good luck for rank!

-AFB

thanks for the mod

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2014-11-05T13:32:48+00:00

Done!

~~Pluto jump huehuehuehue~~

http://puu.sh/cEd9D/0f28a0aff9.osu

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ArtistUnicode:綾野ましろ
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Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-11-05T15:51:07+00:00

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Lunaties

369 posts

Joined October 2012

Lunaties 2014-11-08T02:14:18+00:00

pieguy1372 wrote:
[Lunate's Cup]
01:11:578 (4) - recommend moving it closer to (3), might be hard for new players to make without dash okay

alienflybot wrote:
[ Lunate's Cup]
00:03:078 (1) - Why not adding Clap at 00:03:411 and 00:04:078? lol i missing these two. added anyway
00:05:745 (1) - Add Finish at the Head? okay
00:42:078 (4,5) - I recommend to have same distance as you did in 00:41:745 (3,4) i dont think it is neccessary. i mean the difference is just a little
00:59:078 (1,2,3,4) - Distance between (1,2) and (3,4) should be consistent, since their stanza is the same . i dont know if they have should be. okay
01:08:078 (1) - Due to the high BPM (180), plus it is just a Cup diff, it is highly recommended to increase the time difference between the spinner and 01:10:078 (1), otherwise the player cannot catch up very quickly (especially the beginners) okay removed the note at 01:10:078 (1)
01:10:911 (3,4) - Distance between (3) and (4) are too big. Since it is a Cup, you should reduce the distance already fixed in previous mod

NC Issues:
00:10:245 (6) - NC here for cutting a kinda-long combo here?
00:13:745 (8) - NC here
00:12:411 (5) - If you applied the previous mod and 00:10:245 (6) mod, NC this to cut the combo
00:16:411 (4) - NC
00:51:078 (6) - NC here is needed, otherwise the combo is mega long
00:56:411 (5) - ^
01:01:744 (5) - NC
01:12:411 (6) - ^
01:17:744 (6) - ^
01:25:744 (7) - NC because of stanza change?

Cup diff is nicely mapped, but some of the combos are way too long, which is the reason why I point them out, ignore if you prefer your NC styles instead of mine. i dont know what's wrong with the NC, i just place them every 2 stanza. i will just leave this for now

thanks

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Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-11-14T07:20:01+00:00

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General

preview time 00:48:161 - ? kerasa rada aneh kalo yg sekarang soalnya blm bener2 epic part ><
01:10:078 - remove kiai nya? epic partnya udah abis disini imo

Cup

00:08:411 (1) - ini tiba-tiba alur flownya berubah drastis ke kiri gtu dari yg sblmnya cuma agak lurus dikit , coba move tail sekitar x:184
00:12:411 - sampe 00:21:411 - add finish buat tiap whitetick, bener2 kerasa empty walau musiknya pelan tapi part music juga kalem jadinya suara duk duk duk itu jadi important disini
00:22:078 - 00:24:745 - 00:27:411 - semua unncessary greenlines here, remove ya
00:24:411 (1,2) - at least kalo yg sebelumnya bener2 lurus, buat yg 2 ini dibuat ada movement nya please biar ada variasinya, contoh http://puu.sh/cOWow.jpg
00:22:411 - add note disini buat consistency sama 00:23:745 - , musiknya mirip
00:25:078 - ^
00:29:411 (4) - kasih movement dikit sekitar x:32. jadi biar jarak ke next object skalian agak menantang, emphasize cymbal nya
00:31:745 (4) - flow repeat gtu kerasa boring imo, gw sih lebih suka yg ada movement dan lebih variasi misal http://puu.sh/cOXvy.jpg (p.s 00:32:411 - add finish please cymbalnya keras)
00:43:245 - increase it more 10%. kinda hard to hear the finish sounds here
00:33:078 - sampe 00:42:745 - gak ada hitsound sama skali?! add please gimana pun juga disini banyak cymbal sama suara drum (poke me di game aja kalo butuh bantuan, banyak neh kalo ditulis satu2)
00:46:745 (3) - seharusnya pny spacing lebih jauh daripada yg (1) soalnya spacing sama gak kerasa emphasize musiknya disini, kira2 kek gni buat (3) nya http://puu.sh/cOY02.jpg
00:48:411 (1) - finish di kepala buat cymbal
00:51:078 (6) - 00:56:411 (5) - 01:01:744 (5) - 01:17:744 (6) - 01:25:744 (7) - NC please, kombonya gak konsisten sama yg sebelum kiai
00:52:077 (8) - x:168, spacingnya tiba2 gak konsisten disini
hmm ini ritme dari kiai start sampe kiai end.. kayak Salad tbh, terlalu susah karena banyak 1/2 nya juga rumit. lebih enak kalo pke ritme nya 1/1 an ikut drum daripada vocal

Salad

00:00:412 (1) - finish at head please, cymbal X_X
00:02:078 (5) - flownya aneh disini soalnya dari slider ini yg move nya ke left, perginya ngejump left lagi, imo kerasa agak canggung sih, coba sekitaran https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2237312 ?
00:09:245 (4) - kasih movement buat tailnya, aneh kalo tail aja ada cymbal tapi malah gak movement sama skali, at least ya tailnya di kasih movement
00:10:745 (6) - 1/4 nya kerasa aneh, tbh overmap sih
00:12:411 (1) - coba geser ke kanan dikit? agak susah di catch disini kalo gak pke dash (atau gw yg cupu)
00:20:245 (4) - intentional disini? menurutku stacknya kerasa random disni x:344
00:21:411 (2,1,2) - tbh ini bikin pusing, soalnya abis 1/4 tiba2 lgsg dash 1/2 disini. yg gw lebih saranin sih ilangin 1/4
main problem langsung aja, ini kamu kebanyakan (banget) pake 1/2 apalagi terus abis dash, balik normal spacing terus ngejump lagi misalnya yg di 00:21:745 - sampe 00:28:245 - , tbh terlalu susah dan lebih ke Platter
yang lain gak terlalu masalah sih cuma hitsoundnya kerasa plain di awal part soalnya pke clap doang, lebih asik kalo 1 sama 3 whitetick gak pke hitsound terus 2 sama 4 pke clap jadi ada variasi
basically ritmenya juga banyak bisa di improve misal 00:33:411 (3,4,5) - (lebih enak ikut suara drum instead of vocal disini)

Platter

00:02:245 (3,4,5) - gak overmap sih cuma ini 1/4 nya spacingnya gila suer, ngagetin imo, reduce (bener2) spacingnya sampe jadi gampang di catch sama di baca
00:03:745 (3) - x:232? ini agak susah di catch tanpa jump sih. mending gw blg enakan disini gampang terus buat next nya biar ada jumpnya gtu
00:05:328 (4) - tau sih ini gak overmap tapi nyaris overmap, lagian banyak 1/4 di platter imo gak terlalu bagus karena di platter itu lebih ngenalin 1/2 jump, di rain baru kira2 ngenalin 1/4 dan jump 1/4 (yg gampang)
00:11:411 (2,3) - ini kan abis nge jump dan abis 1/4 stream, spacingnya bener2 harus kecil untuk disini soalnya buat semacam recovery time gtu abis kaget ngejump. ya design bisa dipikir sendiri untuk ini karena kalo gw anu pasti beda pendapat lol
00:11:745 (4) - ganti semua whistle disini dengan finish, suara musicnya bukan piano soalnya
00:13:745 (1) - coba lebih deketin dikit lagi sekitar x:368, soalnya disini (kalo gw sih) rawan kehilangan droplet soalnya jumpnya sedikit jauh
00:13:745 (1) - kasih movement lha dikit gtu? kerasa plain disini pas pianonya sama musik dum dum dum nya kerasa harus ada movementnya
00:17:745 (3) - x:168 biar spacingnya lebih konsisten disini, rada messy imo
00:22:745 (2,3) - kurangin spacingnya? cukup gede ini jump, kerasa forced sih imo kalo buat platter
00:22:078 - unncessary greenline
00:32:411 (1,2,3,4,5) - imo bedanya spacing pas ada suara drum gak terlalu nampak disini, lebih nyaranin buat reduce spacing dari (1) sampe (4) biar nampak gtu ada jump. sama buat semua part yg seperti ini
00:32:411 - sampe 00:42:245 - ini hitsoundnya kerasa kosong banget, banyak suara piano tapi kok gak di whistle (pke custom aja gpp, gak perlu repot2 ganti2 ke soft default) suer empty Q_Q
00:42:995 (4) - lebih nyaranin ini di remove terus bikin HDash buat 00:43:078 (1) - , ini gak ada rasa emphasize cymbalnya kalo normal spacing
00:45:745 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - kerasa boring sih spacingnya bener2 sama, coba bikin beda dengan jump gampang di awal terus spacingnya naik (DIKIT) buat selanjutnya dan seterusnya
00:48:411 (1) - finishnya di kepala C:
00:52:245 (1) - di pisah jadi circle terus 1/2 slider please, kalo dengerin vocal nya sungguh2, power nya keluar pas di stanza
01:10:745 (4) - x:224, spacingnya rada random tiba2 ganti gtu disini
01:17:578 (5,6,1,2,3,1) - ga terlalu penting sih cuma gw merasa spacingnya lebih enak dikecilin soalnya ini ngecatch semua neken space terus gw

Rain

00:03:078 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - basically spacingnya sama sih dan bikin boring imo, gimana kalo spacingnya dari awal kecil gitu terus naik dikit2 seiring berjalannya waktu
00:05:745 (1) - imo HDashnya susah di catch ini, apalagi abis ada 1/4 nya jadi rada dikit pusing sih, move ke x:408 dan fix spacing buat berikutnya kalo setuju
00:06:411 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - boring soalnya bentuknya sama dan gak beda sama sebelumnya, gw sih bakal bentuk beda flow disini (pm gw aja kalo butuh suggestion, gw buru-buru mau makan lol)
00:11:745 (4,6) - coba ganti whistle nya ke finish? suaranya lebih pas kalo pke finish imo
00:19:078 (1,3,1) - hmm 3/4 disini rada kurang nyaman imo, kerasa agak forced, selain itu overmapped o-o
00:20:745 (2) - 1/2 nya overmap juga sih disini krn gk ada musik, bikin circle space 1/1 aja atau pke slider 1/1
00:22:328 (3,5) - definitely overmapped disini
00:24:995 (3,5) - 00:27:661 (3,5) - sama ^
00:29:161 (3,7) - yg ini overmapped, gak bisa stream
00:32:411 - sampe 00:42:245 - sama kea Platter
00:36:579 (2) - ini pas ada suara drum nya kok spacingnya kecil? gak kerasa emphasize nya
00:38:661 (4) - overmap
00:40:078 (1) - ini malah gw bakal pikir bikin 1/2 slider terus 1/1 slider mulai stanza dan itu ngejump (HDash boleh) buat emphasize vocalnya
00:41:828 (6,8) - sama 00:42:328 (10) - overmap semua
00:47:078 (1,1) - menurutku kecepetan ini sumpah, nyaris gw gak bisa dapet 1 buah pun di spinner, mendingan panjangin spinner sampe 00:48:245 - atau remove spinner ganti sama apa gtu
00:53:411 (3) - kasih movement dikit lebih banyak sekitaran x:280, biar lebih natural aja sih
00:54:578 (2) - reason kek diatas, x:264
00:55:745 (1,3) - swap NC nya, tiba2 inconsistency gini o-o
01:10:161 (2) - overmap lagi
01:11:828 (4) - ^
01:17:995 (4,1,3) - semua overmap
01:27:078 (3,4) - kecilin jumpnya dikit? agak forced rasanya, terlalu jauh ><

CLSW

hmm i dont think the name is acceptable here altho this is highest diff, i prefer rename it become Overdose, well just personal thought o-o
00:10:828 - nazi, unnecessary greenline here
00:09:911 (2) - try move this circle to x:64 so you can make HDash for 00:10:245 (3) - to emphasize the music
00:11:078 - until 00:21:078 - make sure add finish for every whiteticks here. all of them have music that need to hitsounded here
00:33:078 (3) - imo this spacing a little bit too closer with previous slider so i dont feel a jump to emphasize the drum, move to x:128 maybe?
00:34:411 (3) - ^ x:480 and then move 00:34:745 (4) - to x:240 if you agree
00:37:078 (4) - should be has further jump here to emphasize the drum, x:480? o-o
00:43:411 (2) - imo you have to reduce this spacing, after 1/4 jumps on previous, our hands can't catch a timing jump here (dunno how about your hands /runs)
00:45:745 (1,2) - quite hard to catch, maybe reduce the spacing a little bit?
nothing to say in kiai, played for pro players only lol, i cant test with well but i guess fine there o-o (i need ur hands ;3;)

rhythms (i told already in above), hitsounds i think still can improve a lot here. Placements look fine for Salad,Platter,Rain, and CLSW ones but need to pay attention for Cup here

Last edited by Xinely 2014-11-19T12:41:59+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-11-14T09:29:10+00:00

merah smua... meraaaah x.x

Xinely wrote:
from m4m

General
preview time 00:48:161 - ? kerasa rada aneh kalo yg sekarang soalnya blm bener2 epic part >< dstu mah kelewat mainstream udah. pengen coba yg beda
01:10:078 - remove kiai nya? epic partnya udah abis disini imo loh chorus nya masi jalan ngga sampe dstu

Salad
00:00:412 (1) - finish at head please, cymbal X_X ok
00:02:078 (5) - flownya aneh disini soalnya dari slider ini yg move nya ke left, perginya ngejump left lagi, imo kerasa agak canggung sih, coba sekitaran https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2237312 ? uhhh
00:09:245 (4) - kasih movement buat tailnya, aneh kalo tail aja ada cymbal tapi malah gak movement sama skali, at least ya tailnya di kasih movement
00:10:745 (6) - 1/4 nya kerasa aneh, tbh overmap sih
00:12:411 (1) - coba geser ke kanan dikit? agak susah di catch disini kalo gak pke dash (atau gw yg cupu) yaiya susah lha ga pake dash :3. btw moved 00:12:245 (4) to x:360 to balance the movement a bit
00:20:245 (4) - intentional disini? menurutku stacknya kerasa random disni x:344 apus!
00:21:411 (2,1,2) - tbh ini bikin pusing, soalnya abis 1/4 tiba2 lgsg dash 1/2 disini. yg gw lebih saranin sih ilangin 1/4
main problem langsung aja, ini kamu kebanyakan (banget) pake 1/2 apalagi terus abis dash, balik normal spacing terus ngejump lagi misalnya yg di 00:21:745 - sampe 00:28:245 - , tbh terlalu susah dan lebih ke Platter
yang lain gak terlalu masalah sih cuma hitsoundnya kerasa plain di awal part soalnya pke clap doang, lebih asik kalo 1 sama 3 whitetick gak pke hitsound terus 2 sama 4 pke clap jadi ada variasi
basically ritmenya juga banyak bisa di improve misal 00:33:411 (3,4,5) - (lebih enak ikut suara drum instead of vocal disini)
nah kan dibilang ak ga jago soal rhythm + hitsound q.q
btw nerfed some part \o/

Platter
00:02:245 (3,4,5) - gak overmap sih cuma ini 1/4 nya spacingnya gila suer, ngagetin imo, reduce (bener2) spacingnya sampe jadi gampang di catch sama di baca
00:03:745 (3) - x:232? ini agak susah di catch tanpa jump sih. mending gw blg enakan disini gampang terus buat next nya biar ada jumpnya gtu
00:05:328 (4) - tau sih ini gak overmap tapi nyaris overmap, lagian banyak 1/4 di platter imo gak terlalu bagus karena di platter itu lebih ngenalin 1/2 jump, di rain baru kira2 ngenalin 1/4 dan jump 1/4 (yg gampang) totally ngga kalo mnrut ku. 1/4 di platter itu udah common loh cuman ya ga bagus kalo d pake sering2. bahkan kata BAT (sey kuro or whatever) 1/4 HDash di platter itu diperbolehkan. masa iya 1/4 low distance ga diperbolehkan :3
00:11:411 (2,3) - ini kan abis nge jump dan abis 1/4 stream, spacingnya bener2 harus kecil untuk disini soalnya buat semacam recovery time gtu abis kaget ngejump. ya design bisa dipikir sendiri untuk ini karena kalo gw anu pasti beda pendapat lol ok setuju klo yg ini. simply just lowered the distance
00:11:745 (4) - ganti semua whistle disini dengan finish, suara musicnya bukan piano soalnya nope. ak sengaja pake whistle buat represent (gk tau indo nya ap lol males gogel translet) 1/1 slider dan reverse nya
00:13:745 (1) - coba lebih deketin dikit lagi sekitar x:368, soalnya disini (kalo gw sih) rawan kehilangan droplet soalnya jumpnya sedikit jauh justru itu karna distance nya lumayan gede ak bikin slider nya melengkung. ngecilin distance ngga akan bantu
00:13:745 (1) - kasih movement lha dikit gtu? kerasa plain disini pas pianonya sama musik dum dum dum nya kerasa harus ada movementnya uhh
00:17:745 (3) - x:168 biar spacingnya lebih konsisten disini, rada messy imo ok
00:22:745 (2,3) - kurangin spacingnya? cukup gede ini jump, kerasa forced sih imo kalo buat platter wooo itu HDash loh. pasti tau jg kan buat emphasiz musik nya ini hue
00:22:078 - unncessary greenline removed
00:32:411 (1,2,3,4,5) - imo bedanya spacing pas ada suara drum gak terlalu nampak disini, lebih nyaranin buat reduce spacing dari (1) sampe (4) biar nampak gtu ada jump. sama buat semua part yg seperti ini nonono. aku ngikutin suara piano dsni. krn lagunya yg rada kalem jd ak bikin pattern nya se simple mgkn
00:32:411 - sampe 00:42:245 - ini hitsoundnya kerasa kosong banget, banyak suara piano tapi kok gak di whistle (pke custom aja gpp, gak perlu repot2 ganti2 ke soft default) suer empty Q_Q sempet jg kasi whistle bbrp dsni, cuman kerasa lebih enak kalo bi biarin kosong
00:42:995 (4) - lebih nyaranin ini di remove terus bikin HDash buat 00:43:078 (1) - , ini gak ada rasa emphasize cymbalnya kalo normal spacing
00:45:745 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - kerasa boring sih spacingnya bener2 sama, coba bikin beda dengan jump gampang di awal terus spacingnya naik (DIKIT) buat selanjutnya dan seterusnya
00:48:411 (1) - finishnya di kepala C:
00:52:245 (1) - di pisah jadi circle terus 1/2 slider please, kalo dengerin vocal nya sungguh2, power nya keluar pas di stanza pake hedset dan kedenger apa2. mgkn cuman perasaan mu aja mbak :3
01:10:745 (4) - x:224, spacingnya rada random tiba2 ganti gtu disini x:200
01:17:578 (5,6,1,2,3,1) - ga terlalu penting sih cuma gw merasa spacingnya lebih enak dikecilin soalnya ini ngecatch semua neken space terus gw d remake sesesesimple mgkn

Rain
00:03:078 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - basically spacingnya sama sih dan bikin boring imo, gimana kalo spacingnya dari awal kecil gitu terus naik dikit2 seiring berjalannya waktu. yep lbh asik gitu sih. tp untuk spacing dr awal jg udah gede (sengaja) jd ngga perlu d tambah2 lagi
00:05:745 (1) - imo HDashnya susah di catch ini, apalagi abis ada 1/4 nya jadi rada dikit pusing sih, move ke x:408 dan fix spacing buat berikutnya kalo setuju X:368
00:06:411 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - boring soalnya bentuknya sama dan gak beda sama sebelumnya, gw sih bakal bentuk beda flow disini (pm gw aja kalo butuh suggestion, gw buru-buru mau makan lol) hueeee
00:11:745 (4,6) - coba ganti whistle nya ke finish? suaranya lebih pas kalo pke finish imo ini gara2 ngikutin HS nya platter lol
00:19:078 (1,3,1) - hmm 3/4 disini rada kurang nyaman imo, kerasa agak forced, selain itu overmapped o-o
00:20:745 (2) - 1/2 nya overmap juga sih disini krn gk ada musik, bikin circle space 1/1 aja atau pke slider 1/1
00:22:328 (3,5) - definitely overmapped disini
00:24:995 (3,5) - 00:27:661 (3,5) - sama ^
00:29:161 (3,7) - yg ini overmapped, gak bisa stream ok yg ini setuju
00:32:411 - sampe 00:42:245 - sama kea Platter yep sama jg
00:36:579 (2) - ini pas ada suara drum nya kok spacingnya kecil? gak kerasa emphasize nya oh untuk bagian ini dan sebelum nya sengaja ak bikin random spacing nya
00:38:661 (4) - overmap
00:40:078 (1) - ini malah gw bakal pikir bikin 1/2 slider terus 1/1 slider mulai stanza dan itu ngejump (HDash boleh) buat emphasize vocalnya ummm ctrl+h'ed 00:39:078 (6,7) instead
00:41:828 (6,8) - sama 00:42:328 (10) - overmap semua
00:47:078 (1,1) - menurutku kecepetan ini sumpah, nyaris gw gak bisa dapet 1 buah pun di spinner, mendingan panjangin spinner sampe 00:48:245 - atau remove spinner ganti sama apa gtu sampe 00:47:745
00:53:411 (3) - kasih movement dikit lebih banyak sekitaran x:280, biar lebih natural aja sih x:256. agak ngeri kalo 280
00:54:578 (2) - reason kek diatas, x:264 x:296. agak ngeri jg kalo 264
00:55:745 (1,3) - swap NC nya, tiba2 inconsistency gini o-o zzz
01:10:161 (2) - overmap lagi
01:11:828 (4) - ^
01:17:995 (4,1,3) - semua overmap
01:27:078 (3,4) - kecilin jumpnya dikit? agak forced rasanya, terlalu jauh >< nono. itu yg bikin menantang trus miss trus nyoba lg trus rage quit trus trus trus

rhythms (i told already in above), hitsounds i think still can improve a lot here. Placements look fine for Salad,Platter,Rain, and CLSW ones but need to pay attention for Cup here

no reply = fixed
kecuali merah2 di rain soal nya itu yah errrr, aku ngerasa suka aja sih. kecuali tar kalo ada bbrp BAT lg yg mention itu baru ntar tak consider lg hehe
detil amad mod nya serius nih jahat bgt --a

btw makasih buat mod nya <3

Manuxz

642 posts

Joined July 2012

Manuxz 2014-11-18T20:25:30+00:00

Hi owo/

Mod from: Manuxz's CTB & Standard Modding Queue OuO

Cup

00:04:745 (3) - Move at x:208 to improve the symmetry
00:08:411 (1) - I suggest that you make this slider same that previous --> http://puu.sh/cW4CU/f93801d4d1.jpg
00:09:245 (3) - Move at x:152 to improve the symmetry
00:09:911 (5) - Move at x:367 ^
00:11:411 (1) - Move at x:276 ^
00:12:078 (3,4,5) - Try to move all these notes a little more to the right
00:21:411 (6) - Move at x:192
00:41:411 (2) - Move at x:304 XD
00:45:744 (1,2,3) - Try this ---> http://puu.sh/cW5mc/beb9375162.jpg
00:52:077 (8) -
01:06:744 (4) - Move at x:312
01:05:578 (2) - The tail of the slider finish in x:311 ; y:319 to move away a bit of the next circle as they are very close
01:11:578 (3) - Move at x:253
01:14:745 (7) - Best in x:304
01:18:745 (7) - Move at x:344
01:22:411 (5) - Move at x:172

I think there is a problem with the NC, as it gets crowded fruit, try to fix that.

Salad

00:07:745 (7) - Move at x:88
00:13:411 (2) - Ctrl+H and move at x:394 The jump is better so, think ...
00:14:411 (2) - I would like to change the shape of the slider, so ---> http://puu.sh/cW7g4/acc69c5121.jpg
00:37:578 (4) - Move at x:220 to improve the symmetry
00:36:745 (1) - Move at x:512 ^
00:48:911 (2) - Move at x:124 ^
00:51:578 (4,5) - Mmmh try this The tail of the slider finish in x:123 ; y:173 and then move (5) at x:19 (http://puu.sh/cW8ov/68b79c1de4.jpg)
01:05:245 (2) - Move at x:379
01:20:078 (4) - Maybe it would be better in x:320

Platter

00:02:328 (4) - Move at x:176 pls T_T
00:05:328 (4,5) - Move (4) at x:220 and (5) at x:273
00:10:661 (2,4) - Move (2) and (4) at x:368 :L
00:29:245 (5) - Move at x:240 to improve the symmetry
00:29:578 (7) - Move at x:276 ^
00:31:745 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Tys this --> http://puu.sh/cWbmA/bcca657fa3.jpg
00:49:078 (3) - Move at x:280
00:54:578 (2) - Move at x:180
00:58:745 (3,4,5,6,1) - Try to make this symmetrical pattern ---> http://puu.sh/cWbKa/6b948168c6.jpg
01:26:245 (2) - Move at x:260

Rain Encounter pretty well but now I'm with some laziness XD I promise to look at it more attention later. As for the difficulty made by CLSW I am unable to give you a mod because he is too ordered and all its patterns and see your maps always perfection and admiration, I promise also try of mod to the difficulty of CLSW when you return for the Rain >.<

Good luck with the map o/

CLSW

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2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2014-11-19T12:51:43+00:00

Everything has fixed, thank you xinely :3

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480,160,58578,2,0,L|416:160,1,51.999997619629,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,160,58745,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,160,58911,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,224,59078,6,0,L|480:224,2,103.999995239258,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,256,59578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,256,59661,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,256,59744,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,176,59911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,176,59994,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,176,60077,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,128,60245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,224,60411,6,0,L|32:224,2,103.999995239258,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,256,60911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,256,60994,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,256,61077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,176,61244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,176,61327,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,176,61410,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,128,61578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,80,61745,6,0,L|480:208,1,103.999995239258,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,192,62078,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,192,62161,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,62244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,80,62411,2,0,L|32:208,1,103.999995239258,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,160,62744,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,160,62827,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,160,62910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,96,63078,6,0,L|496:160,2,51.999997619629,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,64,63411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,64,63578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,96,63745,2,0,L|16:160,2,51.999997619629,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,64,64078,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,64,64245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,48,64411,6,0,P|496:128|432:144,1,155.999992858887,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,64745,2,0,L|128:144,1,103.999995239258,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,65078,2,0,L|384:192,1,103.999995239258,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,224,65411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,256,65578,6,0,P|432:176|336:80,1,207.999990478516,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,256,66078,1,8,0:0:0:0:
74,204,66161,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,154,66244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
118,112,66327,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,84,66411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,48,66578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,48,66745,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,48,66911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,128,67078,6,0,L|64:128,1,155.999992858887,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,128,67411,2,0,L|400:128,1,103.999995239258,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,176,67745,2,0,L|336:176,2,103.999995239258,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,224,68245,2,0,L|336:224,1,51.999997619629,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,224,68411,6,0,L|128:160,3,51.999997619629,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,224,68745,2,0,L|384:160,1,51.999997619629,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,224,68911,2,0,L|128:160,1,51.999997619629,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,128,69078,2,0,L|432:128,1,51.999997619629,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,69245,2,0,L|176:128,1,51.999997619629,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,69411,2,0,L|320:96,1,51.999997619629,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,69578,2,0,L|80:96,1,51.999997619629,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,96,69745,6,0,L|480:96,1,103.999995239258,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,96,70078,2,0,L|144:96,1,103.999995239258,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,70411,2,0,L|400:96,1,103.999995239258,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,70745,2,0,L|256:96,1,103.999995239258,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,96,71078,6,0,L|352:96,2,103.999995239258,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,112,71578,2,0,L|240:160,1,103.999995239258,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,112,71911,2,0,L|272:160,2,103.999995239258,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,96,72411,6,0,P|64:176|128:208,1,155.999992858887,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,208,72745,2,0,P|256:144|224:144,1,103.999995239258,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,144,73078,2,0,L|496:144,2,103.999995239258,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,144,73578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,144,73745,6,0,L|336:48,1,103.999995239258,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,144,74078,2,0,L|128:48,1,103.999995239258,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,48,74411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,48,74578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,64,74745,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,80,74911,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,112,74995,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,128,75078,6,0,L|480:128,1,103.999995239258,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,176,75411,2,0,L|256:176,2,51.999997619629,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,128,75745,2,0,L|32:128,1,103.999995239258,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,76078,2,0,L|256:176,2,51.999997619629,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,208,76411,6,0,L|256:208,1,103.999995239258,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,76745,2,0,L|160:192,1,103.999995239258,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,160,77078,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,160,77161,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,160,77244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,77411,2,0,L|256:128,1,103.999995239258,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,96,77745,5,4,0:0:0:0:
336,96,77911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,48,78078,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,48,78245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,96,78411,2,0,L|160:96,1,103.999995239258,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,96,78745,2,0,L|368:96,1,103.999995239258
136,128,79078,6,0,L|24:128,1,103.999995239258,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,128,79411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,128,79494,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,128,79577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,80,79745,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,80,79911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,80078,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,128,80245,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,240,80411,5,12,0:0:0:0:
288,224,80578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,208,80745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,80911,1,12,0:0:0:0:
272,176,81078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,160,81245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,144,81411,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,128,81578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,112,81745,5,0,0:0:0:0:
72,112,81911,1,12,0:0:0:0:
224,96,82078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,80,82245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,80,82411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,80,82578,2,8,L|464:144,1,51.999997619629,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,80,82745,2,8,L|48:144,1,51.999997619629,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,80,82911,2,8,L|464:144,1,51.999997619629,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,176,83078,6,0,L|144:176,1,103.999995239258,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,176,83411,2,0,L|192:176,2,103.999995239258,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,83911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,128,83994,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,128,84077,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,80,84245,6,0,L|48:192,1,103.999995239258,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,80,84578,2,0,L|464:192,1,103.999995239258,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,84911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,64,85078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,96,85245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,96,85328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,96,85411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,96,85578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,85745,6,0,L|16:160,1,103.999995239258,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,160,86078,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,208,86245,1,12,0:0:0:0:
108,208,86328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,208,86411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,208,86578,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,272,86745,2,0,L|0:272,1,51.999997619629,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,240,86911,2,0,L|288:240,1,51.999997619629,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,87078,5,8,0:0:0:0:
480,160,87245,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,96,87411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,112,87578,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,160,87745,2,0,L|464:224,1,51.999997619629,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,160,87911,2,0,L|48:224,1,51.999997619629,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,112,88078,2,0,L|320:176,1,51.999997619629,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,88245,2,0,L|192:176,1,51.999997619629,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,128,88411,6,0,P|385:213|330:295,1,207.999990478516,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-11-20T02:04:56+00:00

Manuxz wrote:
Hi owo/

Mod from: Manuxz's CTB & Standard Modding Queue OuO

Salad

00:07:745 (7) - Move at x:88
00:13:411 (2) - Ctrl+H and move at x:394 The jump is better so, think ... moved to x:176 instead
00:14:411 (2) - I would like to change the shape of the slider, so ---> http://puu.sh/cW7g4/acc69c5121.jpg i'll keep the shape
00:37:578 (4) - Move at x:220 to improve the symmetry ok
00:36:745 (1) - Move at x:512 ^ they're 1/1 beat pattern so i don't think it need to be symmetry
00:48:911 (2) - Move at x:124 ^ x:128
00:51:578 (4,5) - Mmmh try this The tail of the slider finish in x:123 ; y:173 and then move (5) at x:19 (http://puu.sh/cW8ov/68b79c1de4.jpg) fixed in my own
01:05:245 (2) - Move at x:379 x:392
01:20:078 (4) - Maybe it would be better in x:320

Platter

00:02:328 (4) - Move at x:176 pls T_T x:160 :p
00:05:328 (4,5) - Move (4) at x:220 and (5) at x:273 x:112 x:56 instead
00:10:661 (2,4) - Move (2) and (4) at x:368 :L
00:29:245 (5) - Move at x:240 to improve the symmetry ok
00:29:578 (7) - Move at x:276 ^ x:240 as well
00:31:745 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Tys this --> http://puu.sh/cWbmA/bcca657fa3.jpg
00:49:078 (3) - Move at x:280
00:54:578 (2) - Move at x:180
00:58:745 (3,4,5,6,1) - Try to make this symmetrical pattern ---> http://puu.sh/cWbKa/6b948168c6.jpg
01:26:245 (2) - Move at x:260

no reply means no fix

Rain Encounter pretty well but now I'm with some laziness XD I promise to look at it more attention later. As for the difficulty made by CLSW I am unable to give you a mod because he is too ordered and all its patterns and see your maps always perfection and admiration, I promise also try of mod to the difficulty of CLSW when you return for the Rain >.<

Good luck with the map o/

thanks for the mod

Badis

416 posts

Joined November 2010

Badis 2014-11-21T12:14:50+00:00

hey o/ Mod from my queue

(Rain and Overdose diff)
Crystal's Unlimited Fruit Works
Best run : SS , well I saw some intresting patterns at the end and the map is clean (like usual meh)
There is a thing I can notice while I play your map CLSW is that you often don't have "something-hitnormal" , my skin is pretty particular with HS so it means that the HS are pretty contrasted between my hitnormal and the map's hitsounds , I think you should add a soft-hitnormal and a normal-hitnormal
00:07:078 (1) - I think it lack intensity having a reverse slider that long
00:09:578 (1) - what about X=336 , should be easier to hit this following HD
from 00:10:911 - to 00:21:745 - this part is way too easy , its even too boring , I think it lack 1 or 2 more hyperdash or something technical even if thats a calm part I admit it
01:03:578 (3) - I think it should be a LITTLE closer to 2
01:04:245 (6) - well same suggestion here
01:20:078 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - I can see these triplets goes to the left , but it should be more clear , I mean at the end 01:22:411 (5) - should be at X=0 , I thought these triplets didn't change position while I playing hue hue

01:22:578 (6,7,8) - I think they are too far , it will decrease the stars at least ^^
01:28:411 (1) - I think he should be more in right , that will make a better intensity and this will be more readable
well I think 7.4 stars is WAY too much for this map but meh its not your fault I won't say to change things because of pp , thats dumb

Rain
best run : 99.74 % , FC
good map but I think some things are repetitives
00:02:745 (7) - make it closer to 1 , thats a pain to catch these one after a hyper
00:19:411 (2) - what you think of this ?

00:28:078 (6) - what you think of this ? (5-6 are same as 3-4)

00:31:995 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't find it very clean
00:34:411 (5,6,7,8,1) - and 00:37:078 (5,6,7,8,1) - same pattern (control J spotted c: ) change one of them please
00:41:661 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - I don't find it very clean either , the flow isn't respected
00:55:911 (4) - what you think of X=344 ?
01:09:411 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like that stream seems deformed
01:10:411 (4,5) - what you think of this ?

01:10:911 (1) - I think the curve should be more like...this ? xD I don't know how to say it...

01:11:411 (2) - I think X=192 is better for reading 01:11:745 (3,4,5) -
01:13:245 (3) - X=104 ?
01:14:828 (6,7,8)
(6) X= 392
(7) X= 312
(8) X=232 ?
01:18:745 (4) - X=208
01:20:411 (1,2,3,4) - please change X for 3 of them its too static
I think thats it

I notice no one has put "something-normal"' I think thats something important , because if you don't it means it depend of the player's skin and I don't think thats a good idea
ANYWAYS !! good luck for all of them

and I hope my modding was useful o/

StickyPicky

509 posts

Joined October 2012

StickyPicky 2014-11-27T07:28:23+00:00

Hi \o from my queue :3

[Cup]

00:22:745 (2) - move at x:264
00:25:411 (2) - ^ at x:248
00:29:411 (4) - ^ at x:40
00:50:911 (5) - start new combo
00:56:411 (5) - ^
01:01:744 (5) - ^
01:10:078 - add note here at x:256

[Salad]

00:21:411 (2) - move at x:296 and add finish
00:47:078 (1) - remove the spinner , change 00:46:911 (9) - to a slider ends at 00:47:745 ,
example:

01:28:411 (3) - remove this note

[Platter]

00:44:078 (1) - move at x:440
00:48:245 (1,1) - add HDash by moving 00:48:245 (1) - at x:384
00:48:411 (1) - press new combo

Goodluck ~

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,019 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2014-11-30T19:13:31+00:00

MOD INFO

Plain text - Suggested
Bolded text - Highly suggested
Red bolded text - Unrankable issue (must fix)

[

Lunate's Cup]

Timing

There are some unused inherited timing points (green lines). Remove them:
SPOILER
1. 00:22:078 -
2. 00:23:078 -
3. 00:24:745 -
4. 00:25:745 -
5. 00:27:411 -
6. 00:28:411 -
I don't know why it's different in this diff, but there's a part where the hitsounds are barely audible. Make the 00:32:578 - timing point use 100% volume, it will still be softly audible.

Timeline and Patterns

00:00:412 (1) - If you make this slightly vertical (for example, rotating it 30° anti-clockwise about selection centre), the horizontal movement is reduced a bit, making the start of your diff a bit more calm.
00:31:745 (4) - If you do something similar here (but rotating it clockwise), distance between fruits would be reduced and it will be easier for newer players to understand that they can stay in the middle of this, without moving, and still catch it.

New Combo
I see some serious NC problems here, with a lot of fruits stacking on the plate. I wouldn't recommend using NCs more than two stanzas apart. Check these points:

SPOILER

00:13:745 (8) - Add NC
00:15:078 (1) - Remove NC
00:16:411 (4) - Add NC
00:20:411 (4) - Add NC
00:51:078 (6) - Add NC
00:56:411 (5) - Add NC
00:57:745 (8) - Add NC
01:01:744 (5) - Add NC
01:17:744 (6) - Add NC
01:25:744 (7) - Add NC

[

Salad]

Timeline and Patterns

00:02:078 (5,1) - I'd reduce this distance a bit, since the song is just starting. Move 00:03:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - to x:96 for a smaller jump.
00:08:411 (1,2) - Reduce distance a bit. Remember dashes are being introduced on Salads, so I'd go for a smaller jump here. Move this to x:232, I know it will be catchable without dashing, but newer players will still dash to it.
00:26:745 (5,6,1) - This whole lot requires dashing, which I don't think is really suitable for a Salad. Move (6) to x:184 and (1) to x:304 for a reduced distance.
00:49:078 (3) - I would move this to x:24 to make it a bit easier to catch. It requires some level of precision to make it without dashing, but the distance isn't large enough to force players to use dash, so it's a bit hard at the moment.
01:14:911 (4,5,1) - I would move this to x:280 to reduce the distance a bit.
01:18:745 (1) - I would move this to x:272 to reduce the distance a bit, the song isn't calling for a jump like this, in my opinion.

New Combo

SPOILER

00:45:745 (4) - Add NC
00:57:745 (4) - Add NC

[

Platter]

Timeline and Patterns

00:16:245 (6,1) - A larger jump fits nicely here because of the strong piano sound. I suggest moving it to x:352.
00:19:078 (1) - ^Same idea, for a larger jump move it to x:56
00:20:411 (1) - I suggest changing this slider to create more movement. Try this:
SPOILER
00:32:328 (5,1) - A hyperdash fits nicely here. To not mess with the upcoming pattern, I suggest trying this:
SPOILER
00:41:661 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think the 1/4s can be deleted, because removing them lets you add more movement in this part.
00:42:661 (2) - Removing this note lets you add more distance between 00:42:411 (1,3) - , following the vocals nice. Try this:
SPOILER
00:43:578 (2,1) - Make them more horizontal to increase movement.
00:52:245 (1) - Move this one to x:408 to add more distance with previous note, current position is too boring.

[

Rain]

Song Settings

Using CS4.4 breaks the spread, as Crystal's diff uses CS4. I suggest using the usual CS4 for this Rain.
I would lower HP to 6.5, to make the spread a bit better (Crystal's diff uses 6) and recovering HP is hard, which may make it too difficult for players that are starting to play Rains.

Timeline and Patterns

00:03:078 (1) - I would reduce the distance with previous note for easier recovery after hyperdash. Moving it to x:368 seems good, and it helps with the "increasing distance with each slider" pattern.
00:05:328 (4,5,6) - Movement is a bit tricky here, I would move (4) so it's to the right of (5) (it's a more natural movement); least I would do is stacking them vertically.
00:32:578 (2,3) - Ctrl+G for a better flow (first note will follow hyperdash direction)
00:41:661 (1,7) - Delete this notes, they aren't supported by anything in the song. Removing them also emphasizes both the 1/4 stream and the sliders pattern that follows it. Don't forget to add a NC on 00:41:745 (6) - if you apply this.
00:43:911 (3) - More movement on this slider feels better. Try this:
SPOILER
01:00:078 (5) - Splitting this into a 1/2 slider and a circle will allow you to add a jump (or a hyperdash) at 01:00:411 - that fits nicely.
01:28:328 (7,8) - Add an hyperdash

[

Crystal's Unlimited Fruit Works]

Timeline and Patterns

00:05:245 (4) - I suggest moving it to x:368 for an easier movement, the song is just starting.
00:47:411 (3) - Delete note, there's nothing at the song.
00:48:911 (3) - This one is better as a 1/2 slider
00:55:578 (3,4) - I think a smaller hyperdahs may fit better. Consider moving 00:55:911 (4,5) - to x:240.
01:07:078 (1) - I think this one is better as a 1/2 slider
01:22:411 (5,6,7,8) - Maybe it's better to slowly increase distance, too keep with previous pattern. I suggest placing (5) at x:96 and (6) at x:416
01:26:911 (8,1,2) - Try the following: Ctrl+G on 01:26:911 (8,1) - and Ctrl+H on 01:27:245 (2) -

Kurokami

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Kurokami 2014-11-30T20:08:35+00:00

3 more to go. :3

ZiRoX

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ZiRoX 2014-12-01T03:47:29+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
3 more to go. :3

Ward.

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-12-01T14:26:06+00:00

wait... this laziness thingy is taking over me... will check these mod tomorrow
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrgghhh >w<

ZiRoX wrote:
Kurokami wrote:
3 more to go. :3
Ward.

idk what it means but yaaaay!

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-12-02T11:11:35+00:00

Badis wrote:
hey o/ Mod from my queue (Rain and Overdose diff)

Rain
best run : 99.74 % , FC
good map but I think some things are repetitives
00:02:745 (7) - make it closer to 1 , thats a pain to catch these one after a hyper ok
00:19:411 (2) - what you think of this ? hmm fixed on my own, i want to keep the DS as for consistency with others

00:28:078 (6) - what you think of this ? (5-6 are same as 3-4) hmm ok

00:31:995 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't find it very clean they're on purpose
00:34:411 (5,6,7,8,1) - and 00:37:078 (5,6,7,8,1) - same pattern (control J spotted c: ) change one of them please wait what?... i didn't even know this lol
00:41:661 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - I don't find it very clean either , the flow isn't respected ok make it faaaaaaaaaarrrrrr easier ;w;
00:55:911 (4) - what you think of X=344 ? that's a HDash xD
01:09:411 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like that stream seems deformed slow mo the movement a bit
01:10:411 (4,5) - what you think of this ? a HDash again xD

01:10:911 (1) - I think the curve should be more like...this ? xD I don't know how to say it... hmmm i'll keep this. you know. it's for a little recovery after the stream and some HDash before

01:11:411 (2) - I think X=192 is better for reading 01:11:745 (3,4,5) - ok
01:13:245 (3) - X=104 ? HDash again ><
01:14:828 (6,7,8) hmm actually it does effect nothing but visual only. but ok
(6) X= 392
(7) X= 312
(8) X=232 ?
01:18:745 (4) - X=208 i keep this
01:20:411 (1,2,3,4) - please change X for 3 of them its too static done
I think thats it

I notice no one has put "something-normal"' I think thats something important , because if you don't it means it depend of the player's skin and I don't think thats a good idea
ANYWAYS !! good luck for all of them and I hope my modding was useful o/

newtoniorock8 wrote:
Hi \o from my queue :3

[Salad]

00:21:411 (2) - move at x:296 and add finish hmmm remapped this one instead
00:47:078 (1) - remove the spinner , change 00:46:911 (9) - to a slider ends at 00:47:745 , ok
example:
01:28:411 (3) - remove this note nope, why?

[Platter]

00:44:078 (1) - move at x:440 nope
00:48:245 (1,1) - add HDash by moving 00:48:245 (1) - at x:384 nope
00:48:411 (1) - press new combo

Goodluck ~

ZiRoX wrote:
MOD INFO
Plain text - Suggested
Bolded text - Highly suggested
Red bolded text - Unrankable issue (must fix)

[ Salad]
Timeline and Patterns
00:02:078 (5,1) - I'd reduce this distance a bit, since the song is just starting. Move 00:03:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - to x:96 for a smaller jump. hmmm nope. intended to make a jump to introduce a new stanza and the song. the jump also wont hurt since it's 1/1 gap long and it's totally readable
00:08:411 (1,2) - Reduce distance a bit. Remember dashes are being introduced on Salads, so I'd go for a smaller jump here. Move this to x:232, I know it will be catchable without dashing, but newer players will still dash to it. b-but this is salad :3.
00:26:745 (5,6,1) - This whole lot requires dashing, which I don't think is really suitable for a Salad. Move (6) to x:184 and (1) to x:304 for a reduced distance. changed to 1.6x DS.
00:49:078 (3) - I would move this to x:24 to make it a bit easier to catch. It requires some level of precision to make it without dashing, but the distance isn't large enough to force players to use dash, so it's a bit hard at the moment. oh this slider. changed to a straight up slider instead here. not because your reason but the slider shape it self is 1/2 with reverse that towards right that would a bit hard to read due a low AR. honestly, tho xD
01:14:911 (4,5,1) - I would move this to x:280 to reduce the distance a bit. okay
01:18:745 (1) - I would move this to x:272 to reduce the distance a bit, the song isn't calling for a jump like this, in my opinion. hmmm this is to introduce a new the vocal here
New Combo
SPOILER
00:45:745 (4) - Add NC ok
00:57:745 (4) - Add NC ^

[ Platter]
Timeline and Patterns
00:16:245 (6,1) - A larger jump fits nicely here because of the strong piano sound. I suggest moving it to x:352. x:360 instead as for consistency with the prev pattern like this
00:19:078 (1) - ^Same idea, for a larger jump move it to x:56 x:62
00:20:411 (1) - I suggest changing this slider to create more movement. Try this: i'll keep this
SPOILER
00:32:328 (5,1) - A hyperdash fits nicely here. To not mess with the upcoming pattern, I suggest trying this: i don't think a 1/4 HDashes fits here
SPOILER
00:41:661 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think the 1/4s can be deleted, because removing them lets you add more movement in this part. nope. quite hard too explain this x.x
00:42:661 (2) - Removing this note lets you add more distance between 00:42:411 (1,3) - , following the vocals nice. Try this: did change by my self
SPOILER
00:43:578 (2,1) - Make them more horizontal to increase movement. nope
00:52:245 (1) - Move this one to x:408 to add more distance with previous note, current position is too boring. uhhh im agreed this one

[ Rain]
Song Settings
Using CS4.4 breaks the spread, as Crystal's diff uses CS4. I suggest using the usual CS4 for this Rain. lol finally someone notice this xD
I would lower HP to 6.5, to make the spread a bit better (Crystal's diff uses 6) and recovering HP is hard, which may make it too difficult for players that are starting to play Rains. hmm i need to confirm it with CLSW first
Timeline and Patterns
00:03:078 (1) - I would reduce the distance with previous note for easier recovery after hyperdash. Moving it to x:368 seems good, and it helps with the "increasing distance with each slider" pattern. fixed in prev mod
00:05:328 (4,5,6) - Movement is a bit tricky here, I would move (4) so it's to the right of (5) (it's a more natural movement); least I would do is stacking them vertically. in-ten-ded xD
00:32:578 (2,3) - Ctrl+G for a better flow (first note will follow hyperdash direction) ok
00:41:661 (1,7) - Delete this notes, they aren't supported by anything in the song. Removing them also emphasizes both the 1/4 stream and the sliders pattern that follows it. Don't forget to add a NC on 00:41:745 (6) - if you apply this. did change this on prev mod
00:43:911 (3) - More movement on this slider feels better. Try this: nope
SPOILER
01:00:078 (5) - Splitting this into a 1/2 slider and a circle will allow you to add a jump (or a hyperdash) at 01:00:411 - that fits nicely. i don't think so. i feel better with the current
01:28:328 (7,8) - Add an hyperdash an epic ending doesn't needed imo

CLSW

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CLSW 2014-12-06T08:54:42+00:00

Sorry for late, here it is :3

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Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-12-06T15:52:43+00:00

updated CLSW's and mine ~

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-12-12T09:59:08+00:00

removed cup diff as his request q.q
updated ~

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Arlecchino 2014-12-16T00:15:33+00:00

as PM request~

Salad

meh,saladnya meh.. salad bintang 5,08 D:
jumpnya keliatan maksa buat para pemula,saran di permudah aja
gw yakin pemula pada kesusahan buat FC meski nomods
imo ama patternnya sih udh lumayan

Platter

00:05:578 (6) - x:168
00:07:745 (1,2,5) - geser 2 grid ke kiri dan 00:08:078 (3,4) - 2 grid ke kanan buat memperenggang distancenya
00:10:078 - personally gw lebih milih note di sini bwt emph asisdari pada di 00:09:745 (4) -
00:13:745 (1) - x:382
00:14:745 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - gesersampe x:224 kalo fix mod diatas
00:16:245 (6) - x:184 trus geser 00:16:411 (1) - ke x:392
00:19:745 (3) - ekornya geser ke x:480 lalu 00:20:245 (4) - geser ke x:232
00:21:578 (3) - x:96 dan geser 00:21:911 (1) - ke x:376
00:22:411 - serasa gk nyaman padahal ada beat disitu,kasih note ?
00:25:078 - ^
00:27:745 - ^
00:23:745 (7) - x:432 sama hapus reverse, trus add 1/2 slider di 00:24:245 (8) - posisi di x:352 (stack sama (5,6)),ekor di x:416 *pict
00:24:578 (1) - x:144
00:32:328 (5,1) - Dash cocok buat bagian ini padahal :l
00:51:745 (6,7,1) - disini lebih cocok kalo jumpnya dari (7) ke (1),saran 00:52:078 (7) - x:248 dan 00:52:245 (1) - x:424
00:56:411 (3) - add distance dikit geser ke x:456
01:00:911 (2,1) - diperlembut (2) ke x:186 dan (1) ke x:128
01:10:911 (1,2,3) - samain distance, seret ekor 01:10:911 (1) - ke x:128
01:28:245 (4,5,6) - ctrl+h geser x:160,biar flownya lebih natural

Rain

00:03:078 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - kinda boring, coba 00:04:411 (1) - di ctrl+G dan H,liat pict aja deh..

Pict^^

00:04:078 (4,1) - *pict
00:04:745 (2,3,4,5) - *Pic

00:10:078 (4,5) - kenapa gk HDash ? coba 00:09:911 (3) - x:224 ,00:10:078 (4) - x:112 dan 00:10:244 (5) - x:416
00:15:078 (5) - x:408 dan 00:15:245 (6) - x:328
00:15:745 (2) - ctrl+h lalu geser ke x:208 biar flownya lebih natural
00:18:578 - add note ?
00:24:995 (3) - x:418
00:23:078 (2) - geser 2 grid ke kiri dan ekornya pindahin ke x:184
00:26:911 (5,6) - kurang lembut flownya ,dibikin agak gampang di catch ,saran ctrl+g trus geser ke x:456
00:31:995 (1,2,3,4,5) - bikin lebih smooth jadi kecilin dikit distance'a geser mungkin ke x:352
00:35:745 (4,5) - agak diperenggang ke x:130
00:36:912 (4) - pindah ke x:208 biar kerasa dash dari (4) ke (5)
00:42:411 (1) - di tegakin biar gk terlalu tajem jumpnya ,coba ekornya keatasin ke x:88
00:54:578 (2,3) - x:256
01:19:911 (6) - agak susah ke balik kekanan setelah 2x zigzag ,saran kecilin distance
01:20:078 (1) - remove NC
01:22:078 (5) - x:102

sorry agak telat sibuk irl.. lagi ada classmeet disekolah
mod overdosenya nyusul.. kalo ada waktu lagi..
kalo ada yang kgk ngerti/ada salah pict.. PM ato In-game aja..
Modding Offline soalnya X3

Ichigaki

1,767 posts

Joined February 2013

Ichigaki 2014-12-17T08:33:54+00:00

Mod Requested via PM

General

Song Setup :
1. Metadata : Remove 'Lunaties' from tags
2. Other : Clear
Music and background :
1. Music : Clear
2. Background : Clear
Kiai and audio preview point :
1. Kiai : Clear
2. Audio preview point : 00:48:245 - Better imo

Warning

This mod mostly contain suggestion, so feel free to reject it with the reason

Salad

00:01:745 (4,5) - Lebih baik spacingnya disamain kaya yang sebelumnya
00:02:078 (5,1) - Lumayan jauh sih kalo aku rasa, coba lebih di deketin gitu
00:04:745 (5) - Gimana kalau jadi 1/2 slider tapi direverse? Biar lebih enak .w., jangan lupa 00:05:245 (6) - di sesuaiin kalau diterima
00:05:245 (6,1) - Cukup jauh juga ini
00:11:745 (2) - Mending jadi note normal
00:13:745 (1) - Entah kenapa kok lebih enak hadap ke kanan
00:24:745 (2,1) - Spacingnya kejauhan lagi
00:28:078 (1) - Gimana kalau arahnya dibalik? (Ctrl + G), jangan lupa 00:28:411 (2) - kalau diterima
01:14:078 (2,3) - Kayanya ini juga kejauhan
01:18:411 (4,1) - Lumayan kaget bisa dibilang
01:20:078 (4,1) - Anti jump? Cukup aneh deh kalo ditaruh disini
01:23:078 (1,2) - Menurutku ini kurang enak dimainin

Platter

00:05:495 - 00:05:661 - Kalau mau sih ini diisi juga
00:09:745 (4) - Dihapus deh kalau bisa, kurang mengena di main beatnya
00:10:828 (4,5) - Ini juga dihapus, kurang cocok imo
00:21:411 - 00:21:828 - Kalau bisa ini ikut beat 1/4nya
00:22:411 - Ini ada soft drum yang nggak dikasih, tapi kalau pengen ikut 'jeng jet'-nya ya ignore aja ini
00:38:245 (2,3) - Ini cukup aneh dan terlalu 'sudden'
00:41:661 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Ini ikut apa? Mending dijadiin normal aja sih
00:42:745 (2) - Gimana kalau patternya dijadikan kaya 00:42:411 (1) - tapi hadap kanan semacam http://puu.sh/dy95t/2c54b1b86f.jpg ?
01:22:578 (2) - Seharusnya sih mulai 01:22:411 - meskipun kamu pengen ikut vocalnya
01:25:411 (1,1) - Kurang enak dimainin menurutku

Rain

00:05:661 - Tambah note mungkin?
00:38:745 (5,6) - Kok HDash sih? Kalau aku bilang sih kaget aja liatnya
00:42:411 (1,2) - Kalau punya pattern yang sama sih lebih bagus, 00:42:411 (1) -

Crystal's Unlimited Fruit Works

Cool~

Overall

Really good mapset. Vhy, i saw that you keep use end of slider to follow the main beat, i think it isn't a good idea, especially on Platter. Anyway, good luck guys~

Sey

1,406 posts

Joined October 2010

Sey 2014-12-22T15:04:39+00:00

[General]

Remove "op" from tags, it is pointless to keep it since Tags can only be searched for if they have 3 or more letters.

[Salad]

Use CS3, making reference to some older Guideline we have: t/151744&start=0.
00:07:745 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - This whole pattern can be a little dashier in order to increase the loud beats at 00:08:411 - , 00:08:911 - , 00:09:911 - . Give thought to some dashes there.
00:10:745 (6,1) - Optional to add some dash here, too. You used a Finish hitsound and it can be enhanced that way.
00:13:411 (2,1) - , 00:16:078 (2,1) - , 00:18:578 (2,1) - These also can have a little dash to give more significance to the piano.
00:16:411 (1) - CTRL + G this and move it back to x:72 for a better flow.
00:21:411 (2,1) - , 00:22:078 (2,1) - , 00:22:078 (2,1) - , and so on... until 00:28:078 - : Why not using any dashes here as well? Listen to these beats, they are outstanding and you almost used stacks though. If you do not like the idea behind 1/1 dashes you can add notes at spots like 00:21:578 - , 00:22:578 - , 00:24:245 - , and so on... until 00:27:911 - , to have only 1/2 dashes.
00:41:578 (3) - Again CTRL + G and move it a bit to the left for some better flow.
00:49:078 (3) - Requires some movement, especially directly on the wall it plays kinda awkward, try this instead:
SPOILER
01:08:411 (1) - Actually vocals start at 01:08:245 - already, but I'd keep that tick empty to have some more distance between note and spinner. This is still a Salad and note/spinner are relatively close to each other. Recommend to erase 01:08:245 (4) - .
01:14:911 (4,5,1) - For a Salad it feels a bit rough, decrease distances between this triplet a little, please. Or do the following:
SPOILER

[Platter]

00:13:078 (2) - CTRL + G and x:72, same reason as in your Salad.
00:21:578 (3,1) - , 00:22:745 (2,3) - I do understand your thinking, you also can keep the Hypers, no problem at all. But decrease the distance a bit anyway, for a Platter these feel a little bit too rough. Same with 00:23:745 (6,1) - and 00:25:411 (2,3) - . The subsequent ones feel fine.
00:31:745 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Looks awkward to play. Try a cleaner pattern as this one, please. Also it will give more movement than your recent pattern:
SPOILER
00:42:745 (2,1) - Decrease that slightly as well. After such a rough Hyper it's also hard to catch the droplets of the following slider because your catcher might start to slip.
00:45:745 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Can also be decreased, especially Hypers directly before a spinner are a pain in a Platter since it's hard to reach the spinner in time afterwards.
00:57:578 (5,1) - A little rough as well. Try x120 for 00:57:745 (1) -
Kiai is nice, it can keep rough hypers because it makes sense there. But not in the non-kiai parts, please. Wanna make you think twice about nerfing the previously mentioned parts a little.
One last thing: 01:27:578 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't like this pattern at all, it looks weird. It's hard to make a proper suggestion with your actual timeline, this might be cleaner, otherwise please think of something else if you don't like my suggestion:
SPOILER

[Rain]

00:22:661 (5,6) - Increase distance between these to have a better launch effect for the Hyper and to express that strong beat at 00:22:745 - . Try for example x352 for 00:22:661 (5) - and x448 for 00:22:745 (6) - . The stack movement between 00:22:411 (4,5) - makes the next Hyper more surprising and interesting.
00:34:828 (6,7,8) - Are you sure some rhythm follows the 1/4 ticks at 00:34:828 - and 00:34:995 - ? I'd remove these notes and keep a more simple rhythm to follow.
00:37:495 (6,7,8) - Same goes with this, there is nothing that follows the 1/4 ticks that much.
00:38:661 (4) - No real beat here as well, or it's too faint to be even recognized properly.
00:41:745 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above... No idea... Can't find anything special on these 1/4 ticks. Check the rest of the difficulty by yourself. It's pointless to list up all sections where you mapped similar.
01:12:911 (2) - Nah, create a bit of more movement, for example like this it plays a wee bit smoother:
SPOILER
More something optional, you can add very small HDashes here, it would make the ending a bit more interesting: 01:28:161 (5,6) - , optionally here, too: 01:28:328 (7,8) - .

[Crystal's Unlimited Fruit Works]

Use at least HP7 for a better spread starting with HP5 and ending with HP7, also it's better to follow Deif's guideline: t/151744&start=0
00:13:411 (4,1) - I think a HDash could fit to compliment the Piano beats, similar as you did at 00:10:911 (5,1) - . Same with 00:16:245 (5,1) - , 00:18:744 (4,1) - . In Rain, Platter or both diffs Vhy did that as well, so you might wanna keep some better spread.
00:32:245 (8) - CTRL + G and move it back to x128 for a better interlude of the Hyper that goes to the right at 00:32:245 (8,1) -
00:45:745 (1,2) - , 00:46:245 (3,4) - , 00:46:745 (5,1) - Well could have some more variety, playing 3 consecutive times a Hyper to the left is a bit boring... Why not doing one Hyper to the right at least?
Nothing more to say, Kiai is really cool. And this difficulty is well structured and tidy, good job.

Mh... I do not like the mapping structure too much in general. It's not the tidiest mapping style you're accustomed to. The general placing of notes seems more random and careless to me. Of any kind whatsoever I saw Kurokami wanted to take this over, so he shall feel free to do so. As likely I won't participate on any qualification process. Good luck anyway.

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-12-22T16:40:11+00:00

woaaa 3 mods...
too lazy to check these ;w;

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-12-22T23:16:18+00:00

Call me when you finished checking these. I won't promise you anything, my only reason currently is because I like the song and its for CtB.

@Sey Don't worry, I will ask your opinion later on. :3

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2014-12-23T04:34:58+00:00

Sey wrote:
[General]
Remove "op" from tags, it is pointless to keep it since Tags can only be searched for if they have 3 or more letters. done
[Crystal's Unlimited Fruit Works]
Use at least HP7 for a better spread starting with HP5 and ending with HP7, also it's better to follow Deif's guideline: t/151744&start=0 done
00:13:411 (4,1) - I think a HDash could fit to compliment the Piano beats, similar as you did at 00:10:911 (5,1) - . Same with 00:16:245 (5,1) - , 00:18:744 (4,1) - . In Rain, Platter or both diffs Vhy did that as well, so you might wanna keep some better spread.
00:32:245 (8) - CTRL + G and move it back to x128 for a better interlude of the Hyper that goes to the right at 00:32:245 (8,1) - Remapped those parts, so better re-check it.
00:45:745 (1,2) - , 00:46:245 (3,4) - , 00:46:745 (5,1) - Well could have some more variety, playing 3 consecutive times a Hyper to the left is a bit boring... Why not doing one Hyper to the right at least? I tried to flip 1 set on right side, and its flow became more awful. Not really cool :<
Nothing more to say, Kiai is really cool. And this difficulty is well structured and tidy, good job.
Mh... I do not like the mapping structure too much in general. It's not the tidiest mapping style you're accustomed to. The general placing of notes seems more random and careless to me. Of any kind whatsoever I saw Kurokami wanted to take this over, so he shall feel free to do so. As likely I won't participate on any qualification process. Good luck anyway.

Thanks!

SPOILER

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Artist:Ayano Mashiro
ArtistUnicode:綾野ましろ
Creator:Vhy
Version:Crystal's Unlimited Fruit Works
Source:Fate/stay night [Unlimited Blade Works]
Tags:type-moon opening ufotable lunaties clsw
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368,128,69078,6,0,L|432:128,1,51.999997619629,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,69245,2,0,L|176:128,1,51.999997619629,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,69411,2,0,L|320:96,1,51.999997619629,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,69578,2,0,L|80:96,1,51.999997619629,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,96,69745,6,0,L|480:96,1,103.999995239258,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,96,70078,2,0,L|144:96,1,103.999995239258,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,70411,2,0,L|400:96,1,103.999995239258,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,70745,2,0,L|256:96,1,103.999995239258,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,96,71078,6,0,L|352:96,2,103.999995239258,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,112,71578,2,0,L|240:160,1,103.999995239258,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,112,71911,2,0,L|272:160,2,103.999995239258,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,96,72411,6,0,P|64:176|128:208,1,155.999992858887,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,208,72745,2,0,P|256:144|224:144,1,103.999995239258,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,144,73078,2,0,L|496:144,2,103.999995239258,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,144,73578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,144,73745,6,0,L|336:48,1,103.999995239258,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,144,74078,2,0,L|128:48,1,103.999995239258,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,48,74411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,48,74578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,64,74745,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,80,74911,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,112,74995,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,128,75078,6,0,L|480:128,1,103.999995239258,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,176,75411,2,0,L|256:176,2,51.999997619629,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,128,75745,2,0,L|32:128,1,103.999995239258,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,76078,2,0,L|256:176,2,51.999997619629,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,208,76411,6,0,L|256:208,1,103.999995239258,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,76745,2,0,L|160:192,1,103.999995239258,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,160,77078,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,160,77161,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,160,77244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,77411,2,0,L|256:128,1,103.999995239258,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,96,77745,5,4,0:0:0:0:
336,96,77911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,48,78078,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,48,78245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,96,78411,2,0,L|160:96,1,103.999995239258,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,96,78745,2,0,L|368:96,1,103.999995239258
136,128,79078,6,0,L|24:128,1,103.999995239258,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,128,79411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,128,79494,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,128,79577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,80,79745,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,80,79911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,80078,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,128,80245,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,240,80411,5,12,0:0:0:0:
288,224,80578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,208,80745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,80911,1,12,0:0:0:0:
272,176,81078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,160,81245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,144,81411,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,128,81578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,112,81745,5,0,0:0:0:0:
72,112,81911,1,12,0:0:0:0:
224,96,82078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,80,82245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,80,82411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,112,82578,2,8,L|368:176,1,51.999997619629,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,128,82745,2,8,L|160:192,1,51.999997619629,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,80,82911,2,8,L|464:144,1,51.999997619629,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,176,83078,6,0,L|144:176,1,103.999995239258,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,176,83411,2,0,L|192:176,2,103.999995239258,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,83911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,128,83994,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,128,84077,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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448,80,84578,2,0,L|464:192,1,103.999995239258,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,84911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,64,85078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,96,85245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,96,85328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,96,85411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,96,85578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,85745,6,0,L|16:160,1,103.999995239258,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,160,86078,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,208,86245,1,12,0:0:0:0:
108,208,86328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,208,86411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,208,86578,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,272,86745,2,0,L|0:272,1,51.999997619629,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,240,86911,2,0,L|288:240,1,51.999997619629,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,87078,5,8,0:0:0:0:
480,160,87245,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,96,87411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,112,87578,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,160,87745,2,0,L|464:224,1,51.999997619629,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,160,87911,2,0,L|48:224,1,51.999997619629,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,112,88078,2,0,L|320:176,1,51.999997619629,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,88245,2,0,L|192:176,1,51.999997619629,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,160,88411,6,0,P|497:245|442:327,1,207.999990478516,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Sey

1,406 posts

Joined October 2010

Sey 2014-12-27T18:24:41+00:00

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Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-12-28T10:33:16+00:00

sorry for the late reply. that's just my habit q.q

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:
as PM request~

Salad
meh,saladnya meh.. salad bintang 5,08 D:
jumpnya keliatan maksa buat para pemula,saran di permudah aja
gw yakin pemula pada kesusahan buat FC meski nomods
imo ama patternnya sih udh lumayan

Platter
00:05:578 (6) - x:168 hmm sengaja spacing d bikin low biar flow agak gampangan buat HDash nya
00:07:745 (1,2,5) - geser 2 grid ke kiri dan 00:08:078 (3,4) - 2 grid ke kanan buat memperenggang distancenya @1 grid deh
00:10:078 - personally gw lebih milih note di sini bwt emph asisdari pada di 00:09:745 (4) - ummm.. kurang tau klo yg ini. tp punya ku lebih masuk sih
00:13:745 (1) - x:382 ok
00:14:745 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - gesersampe x:224 kalo fix mod diatas woloh. 248 aja de
00:16:245 (6) - x:184 trus geser 00:16:411 (1) - ke x:392 errr. no klo yg ini. tar ga konsisten ama pattern sebelum nya
00:19:745 (3) - ekornya geser ke x:480 lalu 00:20:245 (4) - geser ke x:232 no
00:21:578 (3) - x:96 dan geser 00:21:911 (1) - ke x:376 eh jgn de, jadi jump lho ini :3
00:22:411 - serasa gk nyaman padahal ada beat disitu,kasih note ? gpp. seenggak nya part dsni lg unik2 nya
00:25:078 - ^
00:27:745 - ^
00:23:745 (7) - x:432 sama hapus reverse, trus add 1/2 slider di 00:24:245 (8) - posisi di x:352 (stack sama (5,6)),ekor di x:416 *pict pattern rusak tar orz
00:24:578 (1) - x:144 no
00:32:328 (5,1) - Dash cocok buat bagian ini padahal :l yep harus nya. cuman dari personal taste sih, kurang suka soal nya dstu part nya kalem
00:51:745 (6,7,1) - disini lebih cocok kalo jumpnya dari (7) ke (1),saran 00:52:078 (7) - x:248 dan 00:52:245 (1) - x:424 hmmm aku atur sndri deh
00:56:411 (3) - add distance dikit geser ke x:456 nope
01:00:911 (2,1) - diperlembut (2) ke x:186 dan (1) ke x:128 orz jgn
01:10:911 (1,2,3) - samain distance, seret ekor 01:10:911 (1) - ke x:128 done
01:28:245 (4,5,6) - ctrl+h geser x:160,biar flownya lebih natural pertahankan punya ku dulu deh

Rain
00:03:078 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - kinda boring, coba 00:04:411 (1) - di ctrl+G dan H,liat pict aja deh.. pdhl aku suka bgt lho ama pattern ini.. keep aja deh. sorry :3
Pict^^
00:04:078 (4,1) - *pict
00:04:745 (2,3,4,5) - *Pic
00:10:078 (4,5) - kenapa gk HDash ? coba 00:09:911 (3) - x:224 ,00:10:078 (4) - x:112 dan 00:10:244 (5) - x:416 hmmmm added. juga nerf pattern dsni dikit
00:15:078 (5) - x:408 dan 00:15:245 (6) - x:328 nope
00:15:745 (2) - ctrl+h lalu geser ke x:208 biar flownya lebih natural hmmm ngga de. tar jadi jump ke next note
00:18:578 - add note ? bagus nya sih di kasih. cuman pengen buat break dikit di bbrp tempat. dsni bagus soal nya ga ada beat ato macem apa gitu hue
00:24:995 (3) - x:418 nope
00:23:078 (2) - geser 2 grid ke kiri dan ekornya pindahin ke x:184 geser doang
00:26:911 (5,6) - kurang lembut flownya ,dibikin agak gampang di catch ,saran ctrl+g trus geser ke x:456 e buset itu malah gmpng banget loh :3. flow mgkn iya makanya aku bikin spacing nya seminimal mgkn dsni
00:31:995 (1,2,3,4,5) - bikin lebih smooth jadi kecilin dikit distance'a geser mungkin ke x:352 hmmm lebih suka punya sndri
00:35:745 (4,5) - agak diperenggang ke x:130 meh 160 aja de
00:36:912 (4) - pindah ke x:208 biar kerasa dash dari (4) ke (5) 240 deh. saran mu kejauhan deh
00:42:411 (1) - di tegakin biar gk terlalu tajem jumpnya ,coba ekornya keatasin ke x:88 udah common mah itu. seenggak nya next slider aku bkin agak tegak buat flow jg
00:54:578 (2,3) - x:256 tahan dlu. ntah knp jump nya malah makin kerasa
01:19:911 (6) - agak susah ke balik kekanan setelah 2x zigzag ,saran kecilin distance ahahaha lagian dsni beat nya intense bgt sih. aku pertahanin sebisa mgkn dsni
01:20:078 (1) - remove NC well
01:22:078 (5) - x:102 flow :3

sorry agak telat sibuk irl.. lagi ada classmeet disekolah
mod overdosenya nyusul.. kalo ada waktu lagi..
kalo ada yang kgk ngerti/ada salah pict.. PM ato In-game aja..
Modding Offline soalnya X3 X3

Ichigaki wrote:
Mod Requested via PM

General
Song Setup :
Metadata : Remove 'Lunaties' from tags
Other : Clear
Music and background :
Music : Clear
Background : Clear
Kiai and audio preview point :
Kiai : Clear
Audio preview point : 00:48:245 - Better imo better tapi mainstream bgt orz

Warning
This mod mostly contain suggestion, so feel free to reject it with the reason

Salad
00:01:745 (4,5) - Lebih baik spacingnya disamain kaya yang sebelumnya eehhh why? kalo pribadi sih spacing sama kalo pattern posisi satu arah. karena ini berubah arah, spacing boleh beda. malahan kalo di bikin sama rasanya nga rapi gitu
00:02:078 (5,1) - Lumayan jauh sih kalo aku rasa, coba lebih di deketin gitu oke
00:04:745 (5) - Gimana kalau jadi 1/2 slider tapi direverse? Biar lebih enak .w., jangan lupa 00:05:245 (6) - di sesuaiin kalau diterima ummm kurang cocok kayak nya
00:05:245 (6,1) - Cukup jauh juga ini fixed dari 00:02:078 (5,1) soal nya ngubah bbrp pattern
00:11:745 (2) - Mending jadi note normal note normal mksd nya? circle gt?
00:13:745 (1) - Entah kenapa kok lebih enak hadap ke kanan lol ok
00:24:745 (2,1) - Spacingnya kejauhan lagi oke2
00:28:078 (1) - Gimana kalau arahnya dibalik? (Ctrl + G), jangan lupa 00:28:411 (2) - kalau diterima errrr... flow jd aneh. ini jg bukan nya malah ngancurin pattern ya :3
01:14:078 (2,3) - Kayanya ini juga kejauhan nope
01:18:411 (4,1) - Lumayan kaget bisa dibilang hmmmm kecilin dkit
01:20:078 (4,1) - Anti jump? Cukup aneh deh kalo ditaruh disini yep :p
01:23:078 (1,2) - Menurutku ini kurang enak dimainin mgkn cuma perasaan mu aja kali hue

Platter
00:05:495 - 00:05:661 - Kalau mau sih ini diisi juga woooh jadi stream dong
00:09:745 (4) - Dihapus deh kalau bisa, kurang mengena di main beatnya yep emang. tapi itu note buat ngedukung flow aja sih. jadi pertahanin
00:10:828 (4,5) - Ini juga dihapus, kurang cocok imo lol ngga ah
00:21:411 - 00:21:828 - Kalau bisa ini ikut beat 1/4nya ah kurang ngerti. tp kayak nya kurang sedep di pandang de
00:22:411 - Ini ada soft drum yang nggak dikasih, tapi kalau pengen ikut 'jeng jet'-nya ya ignore aja ini ngga perlu. kan epic part dsni xD
00:38:245 (2,3) - Ini cukup aneh dan terlalu 'sudden' spacing mksd mu? kurang tau jg sih. pertahanin dlu de
00:41:661 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Ini ikut apa? Mending dijadiin normal aja sih vokal njerit?
00:42:745 (2) - Gimana kalau patternya dijadikan kaya 00:42:411 (1) - tapi hadap kanan semacam http://puu.sh/dy95t/2c54b1b86f.jpg ? agreed.
01:22:578 (2) - Seharusnya sih mulai 01:22:411 - meskipun kamu pengen ikut vocalnya jadi kedengeran aneh malahan. lagian itu note tar jg mau di taruh dmn hue
01:25:411 (1,1) - Kurang enak dimainin menurutku agak susah jg buat ngubah ini. soal nya harus bakal nerf pattern sebelum dan sesudah jg ini. mgkn lain kali aja de

Rain
00:05:661 - Tambah note mungkin? ahaha jgn de
00:38:745 (5,6) - Kok HDash sih? Kalau aku bilang sih kaget aja liatnya oh wait. kok bisa? oke HDash di buang
00:42:411 (1,2) - Kalau punya pattern yang sama sih lebih bagus, 00:42:411 (1) nope. anggep aja slider tegak di 00:42:745 (2) itu buat break dikit soal nya HDash di slider sebelum nya agak2 gmn juga gitu

Overall
Really good mapset. Vhy, i saw that you keep use end of slider to follow the main beat, i think it isn't a good idea, especially on Platter. Anyway, good luck guys~

Sey wrote:
[General]
Remove "op" from tags, it is pointless to keep it since Tags can only be searched for if they have 3 or more letters. okay
[Salad]
Use CS3, making reference to some older Guideline we have: t/151744&start=0. :c
00:07:745 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - This whole pattern can be a little dashier in order to increase the loud beats at 00:08:411 - , 00:08:911 - , 00:09:911 - . Give thought to some dashes there. added more spacing on these note, except 00:07:745 (7,8,1,2) because the pattern it self. the spacing is quite high already for zigzag pattern
00:10:745 (6,1) - Optional to add some dash here, too. You used a Finish hitsound and it can be enhanced that way. did as following above
00:13:411 (2,1) - , 00:16:078 (2,1) - , 00:18:578 (2,1) - These also can have a little dash to give more significance to the piano. done
00:16:411 (1) - CTRL + G this and move it back to x:72 for a better flow. ctrl+g 00:16:078 (2) instead and did manage a pattern a bit. there's no space for 00:16:411 (1) to flip due the changes from the suggestion above
00:21:411 (2,1) - , 00:22:078 (2,1) - , 00:22:078 (2,1) - , and so on... until 00:28:078 - : Why not using any dashes here as well? Listen to these beats, they are outstanding and you almost used stacks though. If you do not like the idea behind 1/1 dashes you can add notes at spots like 00:21:578 - , 00:22:578 - , 00:24:245 - , and so on... until 00:27:911 - , to have only 1/2 dashes. i've tried this before and they're really makes the pattern untidy in my view of mapping. someone have ever told me the dashes between those beats feels forced or smth like that. i know the beats are intense here, but i decided to make a small antijump between those beats because it's the best i could do for now. sorry but no changes for now
00:41:578 (3) - Again CTRL + G and move it a bit to the left for some better flow. ok
00:49:078 (3) - Requires some movement, especially directly on the wall it plays kinda awkward, try this instead: okay
SPOILER
01:08:411 (1) - Actually vocals start at 01:08:245 - already, but I'd keep that tick empty to have some more distance between note and spinner. This is still a Salad and note/spinner are relatively close to each other. Recommend to erase 01:08:245 (4) - nice. somehow ignoring vocal feels good atm
01:14:911 (4,5,1) - For a Salad it feels a bit rough, decrease distances between this triplet a little, please. Or do the following: hmmm just decrease the spacing. also i make the slider on 01:14:411 (3) headed straight to the left to improve the flow
SPOILER
[Platter]
00:13:078 (2) - CTRL + G and x:72, same reason as in your Salad. done
00:21:578 (3,1) - , 00:22:745 (2,3) - I do understand your thinking, you also can keep the Hypers, no problem at all. But decrease the distance a bit anyway, for a Platter these feel a little bit too rough. Same with 00:23:745 (6,1) - and 00:25:411 (2,3) - . The subsequent ones feel fine. i have no idea how to reply this one. but i'll keep this
00:31:745 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Looks awkward to play. Try a cleaner pattern as this one, please. Also it will give more movement than your recent pattern: fixed but not completely similar
SPOILER
00:42:745 (2,1) - Decrease that slightly as well. After such a rough Hyper it's also hard to catch the droplets of the following slider because your catcher might start to slip. i don't understand what you mean. but i did change the slider on 00:42:745 (2) from the prev mod to improve flow. so the HDash here feels more easy and im unsure about that slip thing.
00:45:745 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Can also be decreased, especially Hypers directly before a spinner are a pain in a Platter since it's hard to reach the spinner in time afterwards. sorry but im against this. the HDash is completely fine here. also i don't think it's hard to get max spinner score since the first banana drop near on the last note before the spinner as you can see it on gameplay. also this is platter. a short timeline between note and spinner like that won't hurt. i'll keep this
00:57:578 (5,1) - A little rough as well. Try x120 for 00:57:745 (1) - flipped as well
Kiai is nice, it can keep rough hypers because it makes sense there. But not in the non-kiai parts, please. Wanna make you think twice about nerfing the previously mentioned parts a little.
One last thing: 01:27:578 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't like this pattern at all, it looks weird. It's hard to make a proper suggestion with your actual timeline, this might be cleaner, otherwise please think of something else if you don't like my suggestion: actually i like the current but, changed to a simple one
SPOILER
[Rain]
00:22:661 (5,6) - Increase distance between these to have a better launch effect for the Hyper and to express that strong beat at 00:22:745 - . Try for example x352 for 00:22:661 (5) - and x448 for 00:22:745 (6) - . The stack movement between 00:22:411 (4,5) - makes the next Hyper more surprising and interesting. wait.. are you sure about this? somehow it's make the pattern more like a tricky
00:34:828 (6,7,8) - Are you sure some rhythm follows the 1/4 ticks at 00:34:828 - and 00:34:995 - ? I'd remove these notes and keep a more simple rhythm to follow. i'll consider more this in future. for now i'll keep this because somewhat it makes the flow better on the following rhythm
00:37:495 (6,7,8) - Same goes with this, there is nothing that follows the 1/4 ticks that much. ^
00:38:661 (4) - No real beat here as well, or it's too faint to be even recognized properly. removed this one
00:41:745 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above... No idea... Can't find anything special on these 1/4 ticks. Check the rest of the difficulty by yourself. It's pointless to list up all sections where you mapped similar. for me it fits well with the pitch on vocal
01:12:911 (2) - Nah, create a bit of more movement, for example like this it plays a wee bit smoother: that's a HDash again :3
SPOILER
More something optional, you can add very small HDashes here, it would make the ending a bit more interesting: 01:28:161 (5,6) - , optionally here, too: 01:28:328 (7,8) - an epic ending doesn't needed here imo
Mh... I do not like the mapping structure too much in general. It's not the tidiest mapping style you're accustomed to. The general placing of notes seems more random and careless to me. Of any kind whatsoever I saw Kurokami wanted to take this over, so he shall feel free to do so. As likely I won't participate on any qualification process. Good luck anyway.

thanks for the mod guys <3

removed some tags
~~will update later because BSS yolo huee~~
Updated ~

Katy-xD

Katy-xD 2015-01-29T08:05:23+00:00

Small mod, pretty much complete diff, I'll just try make it more fun. All of this is optional, and I won't care if you decide to decline everything lol.

Salad
00:00:412 (1) - move pt1 to x:32, y:160, move pt2 to x:192, y:256
00:01:078 (2) - move x:288
00:01:411 (3) - move x:384
00:01:745 (4) - move x:480
00:02:078 (5) - move pt1 x:288 y:192, move pt2 x:128 y:192
^ map spread increase

00:04:078 (4) - replace slider with this one: pt1 x:352 y:192, pt2 x:384 y:128, pt3 x:480,y:96
^ I didn't like the out of place drop, so I just made a new slider which moves outwards instead of inwards

00:14:911 (4) - move x:36
00:15:078 (1) - move x:196
^ spread left instead of diagonal jumps

I think single notes are better for stronger sounds (and you can increase gap) so I'm replacing sliders here: spacing locked at medium
00:21:745 - add note x:192
00:21:911 - add note x:288 (finish)
00:22:745 - add note x:160
00:22:911 - add note x:256 (finish)
00:24:411 - add note x:96
00:24:578 - add note x:192 (finish)
00:25:411 - add note x:320
00:25:578 - add note x:416 (finish)
00:27:078 - add note x:344
00:27:245 - add note x:240 (finish)
00:28:078 - add note x:144
00:28:245 - add note x:240 (finish)

00:42:578 (6) - hflip, move x:416
00:43:745 (2) - hflip, move x:144
00:44:245 (3) - move x:224
00:44:411 (1) - move x:320
^ more spread

No kudosu if nothing used. Thanks

Kurokami

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Kurokami 2015-01-31T16:41:30+00:00

Random check. o/

[General]

A few more tag can be added: "フェイト/ステイナイト, remake, ubw, tohsaka rin".

[Salad]

00:04:078 (4) - The sliderend is a little bit stronger so a jump would be nice there.
00:23:078 (2) - Ctrl+g?
00:31:745 (2,3,1) - This part sounds really strange if you listen it closely. It mostly ignores everything from the music. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/fhebt/aa95aa5428.jpg
00:33:245 - This beat is quite important since the new vocal starts here. And to make it consistent with your 00:12:078 (3,4), 00:14:745 (3,4) I would like to place a note there.
00:35:745 (2,3) - Use the same rhythm here as at 00:33:411 (2,3) please.
00:41:078 (2) - 1/2 repeat slider instead.
00:42:411 (5,6) - To be honest I would like to remove (6) completely. I know you followed the drum but at this part that is very weak compared with the vocal. It would be better to use a 1/2 repeat slider here.
00:43:078 (1,2,3) - At this part for a little better rhythm I would like to recommend you to delete (3), move (2) 1/2 later and add a repeat to (1).
00:45:578 (3) - This beat is not really important to be mapped.
00:48:245 (1) - If you want to keep this note, at least add a bigger jump between this and the next note to introduce the kiai start, otherwise just remove it since its not really important.
00:48:911 (2,3) - Remove (2) and move (3) back with 1/2.
00:53:078 (3,4) - ^ Same, to follow the drums.
00:58:245 - Add a note to make it consistent with 00:56:911 (2).
01:00:411 (4,5) - It would be better to just use a slider imo.
01:06:745 (2,3) - I would like to recommend you to delete (3) and move (2) 1/1 later to follow the high pitched voice with it. If you apply this, just place a circle at 01:06:745 and 01:08:078 to separate the vocals and make the rhythm better.
01:10:578 (3,1) - This is again sounds a little strange imo. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/fhfy7/fd5cc31452.jpg. You can try to add notes to the white ticks as well to follow the drums too.
01:16:745 (1) - Just two circle please.
01:22:411 (1,2,1) - Ah yes. Good job. o/
01:27:745 (1,2,3) - This can be a spinner imo as you did it at 01:08:411 (1).

Not bad diff by the way. Just the rhythm makes it sounds a little strange.

[Platter]

00:02:578 (6,7) - This HDash is unnecessary imo. It follows a very weak sound which is unrecognizable during actual play. If somewhere, it should be a bigger dash between (7,1).
00:09:745 (4) - Unnecessary note. It has nothing to do with the music.
00:11:745 (4,5,1) - Try this instead: http://puu.sh/fhvud/e94b6c7481.jpg
00:16:245 (6,1) - A HDash would be nice here to follow the high pitched sound.
00:25:245 - Add a circle here.
00:27:911 - ^
00:43:578 (2,1,2) - These makes a little sense imo. Better follow the beats as you did with 00:45:078 (3,4). 1/2 suits this place nicely.
00:48:245 (1,1) - Why stacked? A HDash would be nice here. o.o
01:01:245 (2) - This note is a little bit unnecessary. I think its better if you remove it.
01:09:577 (8,1) - 1/4 HDash is not allowed on Platter. Remove it.
01:14:411 (5,6) - Remove this HDash as its not really good to play. The drum itself is just not strong enough.
01:25:411 (7) - Imo a HDash would be nice at 01:25:745 instead of sliderend.

It would be nice to add a few more HDash during the kiai. For example: 00:50:911 (3,4), 00:55:911 (2,3), 01:01:411 (3,1), 01:20:078 (5,1).

I think the diff itself is fine but it can be much better. o.o

[Rain]

00:17:245 (3,4) - A HDash would be nice here to follow the vocal.
00:21:411 (4,5) - A small stream would be nice here with a HDash on the last note.
00:38:745 (4) - Ctrl+g.
00:42:078 (5,1) - HDash?
01:15:078 (1) - A HDash would be nice at 01:15:411. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/fhyFr/d99ef44eed.jpg
01:17:078 (4,2) - A HDash would fit at both note.

Other than these I found nothing here. Good difficulty.

[Overdose]

Oh god, nooo!

00:33:078 (3,4) - A similar movement as at 00:32:411 (1,2) would be nice. A little left-right movement w/o dash to follow the music at this part as well.
00:35:745 (4,5,1) - Are you sure you don't want to follow the vocal with HDashes as well? It would be nice imo.
01:06:911 (9,1) - A HDash would be nice here to follow the high pitched voice.
01:10:411 (3) - Ctrl+g please. A HDash would fit here nicely.

Because of your triplets the difficulty feels terribly overmapped. I know you probably won't remove them but they are really unnecessary imo. o.o Anyway, somehow this difficulty is surprisingly good. o.o
[]

Nice mapset but needs a little bit more work. Around 1-2 good quality mod should be enough to move this mapset forward. Call me when you got them.

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2015-02-01T07:13:13+00:00

Katy-xD wrote:
Small mod, pretty much complete diff, I'll just try make it more fun. All of this is optional, and I won't care if you decide to decline everything lol.

Salad
00:00:412 (1) - move pt1 to x:32, y:160, move pt2 to x:192, y:256
00:01:078 (2) - move x:288
00:01:411 (3) - move x:384
00:01:745 (4) - move x:480
00:02:078 (5) - move pt1 x:288 y:192, move pt2 x:128 y:192
^ map spread increase uh well, i don't see any huge difference than mine but just some adjustment on slider tail. i will keep mine

00:04:078 (4) - replace slider with this one: pt1 x:352 y:192, pt2 x:384 y:128, pt3 x:480,y:96
^ I didn't like the out of place drop, so I just made a new slider which moves outwards instead of inwards you're right. just simplified in other way. i think a straighten one is better

00:14:911 (4) - move x:36
00:15:078 (1) - move x:196
^ spread left instead of diagonal jumps alright. but did the placement not completely similar as yours

I think single notes are better for stronger sounds (and you can increase gap) so I'm replacing sliders here: spacing locked at medium
00:21:745 - add note x:192
00:21:911 - add note x:288 (finish)
00:22:745 - add note x:160
00:22:911 - add note x:256 (finish)
00:24:411 - add note x:96
00:24:578 - add note x:192 (finish)
00:25:411 - add note x:320
00:25:578 - add note x:416 (finish)
00:27:078 - add note x:344
00:27:245 - add note x:240 (finish)
00:28:078 - add note x:144
00:28:245 - add note x:240 (finish)

sorry, gonna decline all of them. i see your point here of making separate them into a two circles. but for me a slider is fits more and easier to follow with

00:42:578 (6) - hflip, move x:416 dat spacing tho. i keep mine
00:43:745 (2) - hflip, move x:144 do agree with this
00:44:245 (3) - move x:224 this note is removed due following the mod from kuro
00:44:411 (1) - move x:320 x:312
^ more spread

No kudosu if nothing used. Thanks

Kurokami wrote:
Random check. o/

[General]
A few more tag can be added: "フェイト/ステイナイト, remake, ubw, tohsaka rin". ok added. but no "tohsaka rin" :p

[Salad]

00:04:078 (4) - The sliderend is a little bit stronger so a jump would be nice there. keep as it is because the current spacing is already enough for this early part
00:23:078 (2) - Ctrl+g? did changes on my own
00:31:745 (2,3,1) - This part sounds really strange if you listen it closely. It mostly ignores everything from the music. Try this instead: ok http://puu.sh/fhebt/aa95aa5428.jpg
00:33:245 - This beat is quite important since the new vocal starts here. And to make it consistent with your 00:12:078 (3,4), 00:14:745 (3,4) I would like to place a note there. i follow the drum sound on whole pattern at this part. as you see the slider on 00:32:745 (1) followed with ignoring vocal on 00:33:245 should lead to them
00:35:745 (2,3) - Use the same rhythm here as at 00:33:411 (2,3) please. as i said above. you may listen to drum cover more
00:41:078 (2) - 1/2 repeat slider instead. eh why? it broke the rhythm hard :3
00:42:411 (5,6) - To be honest I would like to remove (6) completely. I know you followed the drum but at this part that is very weak compared with the vocal. It would be better to use a 1/2 repeat slider here. yep the drum c:
00:43:078 (1,2,3) - At this part for a little better rhythm I would like to recommend you to delete (3), move (2) 1/2 later and add a repeat to (1). ok
00:45:578 (3) - This beat is not really important to be mapped. and it's not really important to be removed. i feel adding a note here fits well with the upcoming rhythm
00:48:245 (1) - If you want to keep this note, at least add a bigger jump between this and the next note to introduce the kiai start, otherwise just remove it since its not really important. yep you're right. some modders might suggest a jump here due that reason. but personally i like an anti-jump on lower diff in this kind of part. so no changes here
00:48:911 (2,3) - Remove (2) and move (3) back with 1/2. dunno why but looks weird
00:53:078 (3,4) - ^ Same, to follow the drums. ^
00:58:245 - Add a note to make it consistent with 00:56:911 (2). ok
01:00:411 (4,5) - It would be better to just use a slider imo. ok
01:06:745 (2,3) - I would like to recommend you to delete (3) and move (2) 1/1 later to follow the high pitched voice with it. If you apply this, just place a circle at 01:06:745 and 01:08:078 to separate the vocals and make the rhythm better. kkk
01:10:578 (3,1) - This is again sounds a little strange imo. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/fhfy7/fd5cc31452.jpg. You can try to add notes to the white ticks as well to follow the drums too. kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
01:16:745 (1) - Just two circle please. i feel better as a slider
01:22:411 (1,2,1) - Ah yes. Good job. o/
01:27:745 (1,2,3) - This can be a spinner imo as you did it at 01:08:411 (1). oh right. a short one owo

Not bad diff by the way. Just the rhythm makes it sounds a little strange.

[Platter]

00:02:578 (6,7) - This HDash is unnecessary imo. It follows a very weak sound which is unrecognizable during actual play. If somewhere, it should be a bigger dash between (7,1). dunno why but i feel it need a HDash there. can i keep it? :c
00:09:745 (4) - Unnecessary note. It has nothing to do with the music. to increase the intense-ness ofc. leaving all of them in 1-1 beat while the music is loud is just plays weird
00:11:745 (4,5,1) - Try this instead: http://puu.sh/fhvud/e94b6c7481.jpg did my own rhythm as consistency with the other pattern, i just forgot to do this orz
00:16:245 (6,1) - A HDash would be nice here to follow the high pitched sound. a regular jump is enough tho this part is calm-ish
00:25:245 - Add a circle here. well nope. i bet you know why
00:27:911 - ^ ^
00:43:578 (2,1,2) - These makes a little sense imo. Better follow the beats as you did with 00:45:078 (3,4). 1/2 suits this place nicely. ok
00:48:245 (1,1) - Why stacked? A HDash would be nice here. o.o :c
01:01:245 (2) - This note is a little bit unnecessary. I think its better if you remove it. wait... leaving empty here also kinda weird to play. keep this better i guess
01:09:577 (8,1) - 1/4 HDash is not allowed on Platter. Remove it. LOL FUCK DAMN IT didn't notice this. wtfwtdfwtftwtfwtfttqwftwteftwe T_T
01:14:411 (5,6) - Remove this HDash as its not really good to play. The drum itself is just not strong enough. divide 01:14:745 (6) into a 1/2 slider and circle. added HDash on between them since i put the finisher at 01:15:078
01:25:411 (7) - Imo a HDash would be nice at 01:25:745 instead of sliderend. hmmm i like the current :p

It would be nice to add a few more HDash during the kiai. For example: 00:50:911 (3,4), 00:55:911 (2,3), 01:01:411 (3,1), 01:20:078 (5,1). ignoring this due the diff is already have the amount of HDashes i needed

I think the diff itself is fine but it can be much better. o.o

[Rain]

00:17:245 (3,4) - A HDash would be nice here to follow the vocal. ok
00:21:411 (4,5) - A small stream would be nice here with a HDash on the last note. sadly sey didn't agree with this
00:38:745 (4) - Ctrl+g. wheeee better not to x.x
00:42:078 (5,1) - HDash? keeping this follow the prev stream pattern is better imo
01:15:078 (1) - A HDash would be nice at 01:15:411. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/fhyFr/d99ef44eed.jpg hmmm i still prefer the current mine
01:17:078 (4,2) - A HDash would fit at both note. \:D/

Other than these I found nothing here. Good difficulty.

Nice mapset but needs a little bit more work. Around 1-2 good quality mod should be enough to move this mapset forward. Call me when you got them. tell me how? we ran out of modders already :c

thanksies xD

will update after CLSW replies ~

Last edited by Vhy 2015-02-06T13:01:57+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kurokami

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Kurokami 2015-02-01T08:59:48+00:00

True, but I still have some spare modders in mind.

Also, due to CLSW's diff I contacted with Spec so he will take a look as well (hopefully).

Edit: Damn that high amount of red on salad. q.q

Vhy

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Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2015-02-01T10:17:33+00:00

hueeee sorry :3
/me pats kurokami

CLSW

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Joined October 2010

CLSW 2015-02-20T09:44:32+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
Random check. o/

[General]
A few more tag can be added: "フェイト/ステイナイト, remake, ubw, tohsaka rin". Added as Vhy's one.
[Overdose]

Oh god, nooo!

00:33:078 (3,4) - A similar movement as at 00:32:411 (1,2) would be nice. A little left-right movement w/o dash to follow the music at this part as well. fixed with my own.
00:35:745 (4,5,1) - Are you sure you don't want to follow the vocal with HDashes as well? It would be nice imo. The hyperdash flow follows its drum effects, not on vocal.
01:06:911 (9,1) - A HDash would be nice here to follow the high pitched voice. Added.
01:10:411 (3) - Ctrl+g please. A HDash would fit here nicely. Added.

Because of your triplets the difficulty feels terribly overmapped. I know you probably won't remove them but they are really unnecessary imo. o.o Anyway, somehow this difficulty is surprisingly good. o.o
[]

Nice mapset but needs a little bit more work. Around 1-2 good quality mod should be enough to move this mapset forward. Call me when you got them.

Sorry for super late, here it is!

SPOILER

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