1. Hard (3.33 stars, 244 notes)
2. LZCSC's Easy (1.29 stars, 88 notes)
3. Normal (1.95 stars, 137 notes)
4. World End (4.04 stars, 333 notes)

Story

dekutai wrote:

Second !!

Anyway the song with the video is so sad

Added to favorite <3

1. 00:19:510 (1,2) - I prefer this
   
2. 00:22:510 (1) - normal slider is better in common with 00:24:224 (1,2) -
3. 01:17:364 (1) - not suit to rhythm, imo. I suggest not to reverse
4. 01:25:078- whistle
5. 01:53:364 (3,4,5) - a little difficult to find rhythm for normal. just a suggetion~
   

1. 00:25:724- add a note
2. 00:00:27:867 (2,3,4,6) - avoid overlap
3. 00:31:296 (1) - start at 00:31:081
4. 01:15:649 (6,2) - how about stack?
5. 01:32:792 (1) - curve more!
6. 01:53:578 (2,3,4,5) - rhythm suggetion
   

1. 00:06:867 (4,5,1) - don't you stack?
2. 00:12:224 (1) - I prefer to move to the center: x:256 y:192
3. 00:16:510 (4) - downward slider is better
4. 00:27:010 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - just a suggetion
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   308,316,27010,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   260,144,27224,1,0,3:0:0:0:
   132,272,27439,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   335,216,27653,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   159,172,27867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   159,172,27974,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   159,172,28081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   207,344,28296,1,8,0:0:0:0:

1. check timeng point again according to AI mod
2. 00:05:367 (1) - x:256 y:192
3. 00:38:781 (1,2,3) - curved pattern is better
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:46:484 (2,2) - this overlap is not good
5. 01:37:077 (4,1) - this stack is not good because spacing becomes not 1.0x
6. 01:43:077 (1) - uncomfortable, imo. how about this as simply
   
7. 01:48:220 (1) - yeah~ butterfly!

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[Easy]

1. check timeng point again according to AI mod fixed,i used to think that GD can be different
2. 00:05:367 (1) - x:256 y:192 fixed
3. 00:38:781 (1,2,3) - curved pattern is better fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:46:484 (2,2) - this overlap is not good i was following piano(but im not sure if its piano X.X), i will keep it now,fixed when be modded next time
5. 01:37:077 (4,1) - this stack is not good because spacing becomes not 1.0x its 1.0x ,im pretty sure,1.0sv and 1.0ds with same time slot，
6. 01:43:077 (1) - uncomfortable, imo. how about this as simply fixed
   
7. 01:48:220 (1) - yeah~ butterfly!

good timing point setting.I'm impressed!
~Good Luck~

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: eden.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 83364
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:little explorer
TitleUnicode:little explorer
Artist:Harada Hitomi
ArtistUnicode:原田ひとみ
Creator:Sellenite
Version:LZCSC's Easy
Source:eden*
Tags:シオン はるな りょう sion ryo haruna minori lzcsc
BeatmapID:427945
BeatmapSetID:175150

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[Normal]

1. 00:19:510 (1,2) - I prefer this yours also right，but I think I want to have beat at 00:20:367 with circle
   
2. 00:22:510 (1) - normal slider is better in common with 00:24:224 (1,2) - hmm..I just do a ‘blanket’
3. 01:17:364 (1) - not suit to rhythm, imo. I suggest not to reverse yes，here just my overmap in normal
4. 01:25:078- whistle add
5. 01:53:364 (3,4,5) - a little difficult to find rhythm for normal. just a suggetion~ Mmm，I want here rhythm to be continue ;w;
   

[Hard]

1. 00:25:724- add a note add
2. 00:00:27:867 (2,3,4,6) - avoid overlap fix
3. 00:31:296 (1) - start at 00:31:081 fix
4. 01:15:649 (6,2) - how about stack? nope，DS problem
5. 01:32:792 (1) - curve more! fix
6. 01:53:578 (2,3,4,5) - rhythm suggetion the same reason with normal
   

[The End of the World]

1. 00:06:867 (4,5,1) - don't you stack? nope，on purpose
2. 00:12:224 (1) - I prefer to move to the center: x:256 y:192 yeah
3. 00:16:510 (4) - downward slider is better nope，flow with 1
4. 00:27:010 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - just a suggetion yeah，more beautiful，changed
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   308,316,27010,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   260,144,27224,1,0,3:0:0:0:
   132,272,27439,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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   159,172,27867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   159,172,27974,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   159,172,28081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   207,344,28296,1,8,0:0:0:0:

good timing point setting.I'm impressed!
~Good Luck~

2391645784 wrote:

GOOD JOB.emm,this is a very nice map,and i hope it will be ranked...

zhengyuanhang wrote:

我给你一些建议吧

Normal
1. 1.3x的Distance Spacing有些大了，建议将其调整到0.9x至1.1x之间。
2. 00:12:224 (1,1) - Normal中不应该将Note放在Spinner后面太近。

Hard
1. AR改成7。
2. 00:25:510 (4,5,1)，00:27:439 (3,1)，00:28:081 (4,5,6) - 间距过大。后面的一些地方也存在类似的问题，应当修正。
3. 01:53:578 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 排列、节奏怪异，难以把握，建议修改。

The End of the World
1. AR改成8。
2. 01:20:578 (8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 这些3连之间的间距过大。

1. remove letterboxing since it otherwise it would block the video. also i noticed that you have a bunch of constant short pauses and letterboxing may get annoying q:
   
2. 00:32:818 - you may want to redo the timing abit here, you see, most music composers will have ALL timing changes within a song snapped to a downbeat (or at least a white tick) as there is no reason not to. alot of these timing points are not snapped to any ticks which i guess isn't unrankable, but it's not correct. and the fact that you have many notes snapped to blue ticks raises further suspicion of the timing being incorrect
   
3. 01:43:078 - more optional but this part of the video is quite flashy so display epilepsy warning? this is more a matter of opinion tho

1. 00:07:510 (2) - this is really a bit overmapped. just drag 00:07:081 (1) - to the white tick, there isnt a strong enough sound (or any sound at all) 00:07:510 - to support a circle
2. 00:11:367 - (optional) add a stream here? would fit better imo, this is insane diff anyway!
3. 00:25:939 - there really should be something clickable here, as it is a downbeat. i have 2 suggestions
   
   or
   
   the first one would probably take least effort to apply but you will get garven complaining about it lol
4. 00:26:581 (3,1) - why not have a bit of an antijump here? i think it fits well
5. 01:20:578 (8,9,1) - hmm this is plainly a suggestion but i believe having a rhythm like this will better emphasize the finish sounds. you can even make a bit of a jump too
   
   and of course, same goes to the rest of the parts (01:21:007 (2,3,1) - , 01:21:436 (2,3,1) - , etc...)
6. 01:33:221 (3,4) - there should be a larger jump here since (4) is a big sound and the jump is comparably smaller than the previous jumps 01:32:793 (1,2,3) -
7. 01:40:293 (3) - whoops is this clap intentional?
8. 01:49:078 (6) - nc should be on this note instead of 01:49:292 (1) - since it's stronger
9. 01:49:935 (6) - ^
10. 01:51:650 (5) - ^

1. 00:12:224 - optional have something clickable here? it IS a finish sound so
2. 00:23:153 (3) - this is a bad rhythm, the strong sounds are on 00:23:367 - and 00:23:581 - change this please
3. 01:49:935 (1) - try this rhythm instead this fits the drums better
   
   for placement you can do something like this?
   

1. 00:04:510 (2,3,4) - this may be a more personal opinion but having 3/4s in normal is really confusing for players at that skill level to play. since they have to tap off beat. but i understand if you would want to have something different than 3/4 repeat sliders since it does get kinda boring at the start otherwise
2. 01:46:507 (2) - ctrl g twice to get the last sliderpoint on grid
   ah this normal is rly well made cant find much sorry

1. 00:36:210 (2) - err end this slider on the vocal? 00:36:852 - like the other diffs? i don't really see why not at the moment, there isn't really any music at ur slider end. or at least you can put the little bump thing to where the vocal is
   
   SPOILER

   
   fk i took me 40 tries to get this picture
2. 01:07:078 (1) - wait why not just a 3 point curve lol
   
3. 01:08:792 (3) - ^.. im totaly confused why you're doing this lol
4. 01:37:078 (4,1) - ok this is a big no. too confusing for beginners. they won't expect to go back to where the slider started to click the next object
   
   01:44:363 (2,2) - optional but why not stack these? looks neater that way
5. 01:48:221 (1) - oh my god this is amazing marry me <3

Kibbleru wrote:

m4m

[General]

1. remove letterboxing since it otherwise it would block the video. also i noticed that you have a bunch of constant short pauses and letterboxing may get annoying q: well i think here use letterboxing is better to render the atmosphere..
   
2. 00:32:818 - you may want to redo the timing abit here, you see, most music composers will have ALL timing changes within a song snapped to a downbeat (or at least a white tick) as there is no reason not to. alot of these timing points are not snapped to any ticks which i guess isn't unrankable, but it's not correct. and the fact that you have many notes snapped to blue ticks raises further suspicion of the timing being incorrect timing here I can't judge until BATs saying something..I don't know if they are right，too ;w;
   
3. 01:43:078 - more optional but this part of the video is quite flashy so display epilepsy warning? this is more a matter of opinion tho yeah I consider is too flash here,but it is a video not a storyboard..I can't judge，too

[End of the world]

1. 00:07:510 (2) - this is really a bit overmapped. just drag 00:07:081 (1) - to the white tick, there isnt a strong enough sound (or any sound at all) 00:07:510 - to support a circle just my overmap
2. 00:11:367 - (optional) add a stream here? would fit better imo, this is insane diff anyway! make the rhythm easy...
3. 00:25:939 - there really should be something clickable here, as it is a downbeat. i have 2 suggestions Yeah，changed，I used first
   
   or
   
   the first one would probably take least effort to apply but you will get garven complaining about it lol haha
4. 00:26:581 (3,1) - why not have a bit of an antijump here? i think it fits well some emphasize here，I give a jump
5. 01:20:578 (8,9,1) - hmm this is plainly a suggestion but i believe having a rhythm like this will better emphasize the finish sounds. you can even make a bit of a jump too yeah，all changed
   
   and of course, same goes to the rest of the parts (01:21:007 (2,3,1) - , 01:21:436 (2,3,1) - , etc...)
6. 01:33:221 (3,4) - there should be a larger jump here since (4) is a big sound and the jump is comparably smaller than the previous jumps 01:32:793 (1,2,3) - fix
7. 01:40:293 (3) - whoops is this clap intentional? yes，on purpose
8. 01:49:078 (6) - nc should be on this note instead of 01:49:292 (1) - since it's stronger fix
9. 01:49:935 (6) - ^ fix
10. 01:51:650 (5) - ^ fix

[Hard]

1. 00:12:224 - optional have something clickable here? it IS a finish sound so I know，but I don't want to use three circles here so
2. 00:23:153 (3) - this is a bad rhythm, the strong sounds are on 00:23:367 - and 00:23:581 - change this please just my overmap..
3. 01:49:935 (1) - try this rhythm instead this fits the drums better yeah，changed
   
   for placement you can do something like this?
   

[Normal]

1. 00:04:510 (2,3,4) - this may be a more personal opinion but having 3/4s in normal is really confusing for players at that skill level to play. since they have to tap off beat. but i understand if you would want to have something different than 3/4 repeat sliders since it does get kinda boring at the start otherwise prevent so may sliders..fit the rhythm is ok
2. 01:46:507 (2) - ctrl g twice to get the last sliderpoint on grid fix
   ah this normal is rly well made cant find much sorry

nice song! good luck with the map, hope my mod was helpful ^_^ yeah，thanks~


Q_Q i cant read the story nooo D: someone create the picture with Chinese..

Fort wrote:

hello Mod by Fort!

(but first look at this, this is pissing me off http://puu.sh/aaSlX/8481c89c8e.png) sad..

[Insane]
00:54:221 - add some circle in here
00:17:367 (1) - slider overlapping 00:16:081 (1) - and maybe 00:16:296 (2,3,4) - . there is two ways you can fix it use 1 but some different with yours
1. 00:16:296 (2,3,4,5) - try this pattern for this http://puu.sh/aaSNO/488552fcb2.jpg and 00:17:153 (6,7,1) - like this http://puu.sh/aaSSd/168b7c5c96.jpg
2. 00:16:081 (1) - just move this crcle to slider 00:17:367 (1) - (Only stack it)

00:19:724 (3,4,5,6) - maybe this pattern like this http://puu.sh/aaSZu/56f38806a6.jpg no sound in 00:19:831

00:21:653 (1) - change circle to 1/4 slider
00:23:153 (3) - this pattern seems not really giving sense, maybe try like this http://puu.sh/aaT95/6a6b6fad81.jpg nice,changed
01:49:507 (3,4,5,6,1) - try this one http://puu.sh/aaTtw/817934b5b4.jpg (change 01:49:721 (5,6) - to 1/4 slider) a bit confused
01:53:150 (8) - keep using 1/6 reverse slider, since this map was AR9, so dont worry ^
01:55:186 (1) - i think slider end is in 01:59:364 Yes,all diff changed

[Hard]
AR7 or 7.5 better for this map change to 7.5
00:27:010 (1) - keep this note clearly visible or add jump on it or stack it with 00:28:296 (5) -
00:28:939 (7) - stack with 00:27:224 (2) - better cause that circle overlap with 00:30:010 (1) - not necessary..
00:54:221 - add circle here follow the piano

01:07:935 (2,3,4) - nah this slider is good!, maybe do same for 01:20:792 (1,2,3) - , and 01:22:935 (2,3,4) - and 01:22:935 (2,3,4) - make them different..

really i cant do better mods for Hard below diffs and i cant mod Normal and Easy (pattern seems okay for me), sorry for that
but this one is beautiful in Easy 01:48:221 (1) - haha butterfly！

okay see ya! thanks~

wcx19911123 wrote:

[General]
cancel letterbox please, or the video is hidden when break fix
cancel wildscreen, it useless fix
hope you can find some timing pro to check the timing.. I'm not sure about it.. 我去问问别人，我也不知道谁是pro啊。。

[LZCSC's Easy]
00:12:224 (1,1) - this circle is too soon to play after the spinner, I suggest either delete it or shorter the spinner 他afk了，我帮他改一下，还有最后那个地方我删了点东西，fix
00:25:939 (1) - add finish? fit the song better imo fix
01:06:649 (5,1) - blanket can be better fix
01:19:935 - same as 00:12:224 (1,1) - , but this one might be accepted cuz the song is intense here. anyway I still suggest you to shorter the spinner fix
01:32:792 (3,1) - the distance gap is too big imo 这里他好像改变了DS，我变回正常的然后re了一下，你看看行不行

[Normal]
00:31:081 - make the spinner following music but not drums would be better imo, for example, start the spinner at here fix
00:35:749 - 01:00:221 - how about make this parts more slowly? smaller spacing, smaller slider speed(as fast as 00:39:663 (3) - this slider). if you want to fix this please pay attention to the bpm changing, to make this part speed entirety smoothly, you need to set more green lines to switch the SV 减慢和re了
01:48:221 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - they sound too quiet imo, use clap instead of drum-hitnormal, or turn their volume up a bit, would be better fix，2/4 clap、1/3 drum instead
01:54:007 (4) - this circle's rhythm is hard to read for newbies even if it fits the song well, I suggest to use 01:53:364 (3) - slider repeat instead of it yes，fix
normal的00:12:224 (1) - 转盘我看了也缩短了，怕出事

[Hard]
00:20:581 (5,1,2) - I suggest to make the spacing smaller a bit, or the rhythm is a little hard to read 这个是想强调一下激情的地方，故意弄大一下
01:48:221 - 01:51:650 - same as Normal here fix

[The End of the World]
*really long diff name lol* main of the story233
OD+1 please, it's too low for this diff imo fix
01:41:364 (1,2,4) - you can stack them better, close the distance snap and the gird snap fix
01:51:864 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think here whould be 1/4, if you want to follow the guitar fix，不过好像跟1/4后好像有点overmap，那个1/6的地方我又跟了，不知道现在行不行
01:54:650 (6) - change it into 2 1/4 sliders? feel better imo yes，changed

feel free to call me back when the timing is confirmed ↓

wcx19911123 wrote:

timing confirmed
bubbled

imoutosan wrote:

即将泡够一个月 也是比较感人

CDFA wrote:

when u get kicked out of the BAT but ur bubbled still get ranked B) sad

(Hopefully, I mean. I always type a little message before I actually mod, so I don't actually know how good the map is or not at this moment)

Insane:
00:39:653 (4,5) - Like. . . the rhythm is. . . correct? The thing about it though is that she isn't intentionally singing the rhythm, she's just sort of delaying the next note a little bit like a weirdo. It'd be nice if something like this was put into place. Something like this would work: http://puu.sh/d2z5k/8a9e488ef4.jpg fix

Hard:
00:39:653 (1,2) - Same as insane ahh hard use tick 2 so...very strange if use this

Everything else is fine. Yay!!!

CDFA wrote:

Great!!!

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

哇 恭喜恭喜

Satellite wrote:

good job !!

keeeeeeko wrote:

gratz!

Zweib wrote:

恭喜恭喜~

Minakami Yuki wrote:

I feel the offset a little off, maybe 10ms earlier is better.
Need another guys helping test this.

Anyway, gratz!

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

Gratz

imoutosan wrote:

gratz 大凤怎么样了啊

Sellenite wrote:

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

Gratz

没有柚子的gd好不习惯