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[General]
Combo colors blend considerably with the BG, specially the purple one.
Try these or similar.
SPOILER
[Colours]
Combo1 : 149,43,255
Combo2 : 68,162,255
Combo3 : 255,255,106
Combo4 : 255,106,255
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[Easy]
You could use CS2.5 to avoid 1/1 sliders overlapping both sides.
00:06:793 (4,1) - This could go in a single combo to fit with the vocals.
00:07:198 (1) - Remove NC? I think it's not really needed
00:26:657 (1) - I know this is a slow bpm, but I don't think this would be nice for a beginner, maybe use 2 1/1 sliders here?
00:29:901 (1) - ^
00:33:144 (1) - ^
00:34:766 (2,4) - Could it be possible to avoid this overlap?
00:35:982 (3) - Maybe put NC for vocals? If you do, remove the NC in 00:38:009 (1).
01:26:657 (3) - Remove NC? As in the first suggestion
[Normal]
00:03:144 (1) - Remove the NC here and put it in 00:03:955 (2).
00:05:576 (1) - Remove the NC here and put it in 00:06:793 (2).
00:07:198 (1) - If you followed what I said above, remove this NC.
00:16:117 (3) - Use a circle instead? This way you'd break a bit this 1/1 monotony and follow vocals nicely, which I think you're mainly following.
00:32:333 (1) - Having the end of this silenced is really awkward while playing, I suggest you to put a drum finish here with ~30% volume.
Also I'd suggest to make your combos larger, using a NC each 2 downbeats (big white tick). So there isn't too many 1,2 1,2,3, which can be a bit misleading in a Normal
[Hard]
00:05:576 (3) - This should be better ending in 00:06:387, so it fully covers the vocals there.
00:20:171 (1,3) - These should be 1/2 sliders, they would cover the vocals and instrumental better.
00:28:279 (1) - ^
00:31:725 (2,3) - I'd suggest to keep spacing consistent here, looks a bit messy as it is now.
00:50:779 (1) - Remove NC? I think it's not really needed.
00:50:880 (1) - This should be ending in 00:53:009 along with that bassy sound.
00:59:090 (1) - I feel this slider is really slow, maybe 0.75x could work better here.
01:12:063 (1) - This should be better ending in 01:12:874, it'd follow better the song imo, and same, I think this is too slow
01:18:549 (1) - Same about slow sliders.
[Insane]
To be honest I feel this could benefit with some pauses so the vocals and some strong beats are emphasized better, as there are some spots where the constant 1/2 notes kill this emphasis and make the map a bit plain ;w; . I'll point some.
00:01:928 (1) - This could begin in 00:02:130 along with vocals, without the repeat of course.
00:11:353 (6) - I really think this stream is too much for such rhythm here, maybe just deleting this note could make this less overmapped.
00:16:725 (5) - This could be removed, so this calm part gets calmer in comparison with the next.
00:19:968 (3) - ^
00:22:806 (4) - ^
00:35:779 (1) - ^
00:39:530 (2) - I think this note is a bit intrusive here, removing it would allow you to make a jump here, which could fit better imo.
00:39:630 (1,2) - Maybe make this 1/2, it'd compliment a bit better the song here, not too needed tho. And replace the claps in 00:40:036 (2) with whistles, too many claps here x_x
00:42:874 (1,2) - ^
00:46:117 (1,2) - ^
00:59:901 (1) - I know this would ruin your starry pattern, but removing this note would be nice as you're mostly mapping on vocals I think.
01:03:752 (5) - Something similar as above
01:09:630 (3) - Replace with a single circle, as above.
01:12:874 (4) - Remove it.
01:13:482 (2) - Remove the finish?
01:16:725 (3) - Remove it.
01:18:549 (1) - I felt this really awkward while playing, how about trying a 1/1 slider with a repeat, or something like this, with a jump in (2,3) to reflect the intensity better.
01:21:387 (6) - Remove it.
01:26:049 (1) - There's literally nothing in the music here, better move it to 01:26:455.
The map is really cool, but I consider this something to be considered ;~;
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