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Orange Range - Asterisk (TV Size)

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-Xero-
526 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
-Xero-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Freitag, 30. April 2010 at 16:28:15

Artist: Orange Range
Title: *~Asterisk~ (TV Size)
Source: Bleach
Tags: JRock Shonen JPop
BPM: 124
Filesize: 9505kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. *Easy (1,98 stars, 89 notes)
  2. *Hard (4,61 stars, 169 notes)
Download: Orange Range - *~Asterisk~ (TV Size)
Download: Orange Range - *~Asterisk~ (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Oh geez... Finally Ranked :!:

Credits:
*Easy: Xero_HT
*Hard: Xero_HT
Hitsound Help: Hikato/gdeath/Alace
Video and Background Help: Kuroneko-sHerald
Timing Help: Astom/DJPop/deepsea/Alace
Special Thanks: Kuroneko-sHerald


Modding:
Kuroneko-sHerald
Astom
Teara
dlguiga
Mianki
Glasslake
FishHook
Fuuko
Lokamp
Garven
Hikato
emaal
DiamondCrash
James2250
xxheroxx
Gens
orioncomet
Behonkiss
DJPop
CDFA
yaya
James
(if i missed someone, tell me please)


'10/4/30 Please redownload if you have downloaded the map before.
Last edited by Gens , edited 52 times in total.
Kuroneko-sHerald
1,081 posts
Joined August 2008
Kuroneko-sHerald
I can't dl the map. I've got a 3 KB only file.
Try to reuploading it.
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
In blue suggestions, In red maybe important

[General]
-Finish kiai time
-try this offset 1.290 ~ 1.295 aprox, resnap and check the full song

[Easy]
-Acc 100%

[Hard]
-Acc 70% realy bad offset
-01:28:429 try a circle in 01:28:429 with finish sound, if u do this add circle in 01:27:945 and 01:28:187

PM me when u fix offset
-Xero-
526 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
-Xero-

Astom wrote:

In blue suggestions, In red maybe important

[General]
-Finish kiai time ??? It is finished
-try this offset 1.290 ~ 1.295 aprox, resnap and check the full song Fixed. Thanks a lot.

[Easy]
-Acc 100%

[Hard]
-Acc 70% realy bad offset
-01:28:429 try a circle in 01:28:429 with finish sound, if u do this add circle in 01:27:945 and 01:28:187 Fixed

PM me when u fix offset
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
IRC mod =p

~

Issues on easy ( hidden notes/stacks )

and some issues on hard ( jumps/combo's )

~

Void of hitsounds is sometimes good, but add a few finishes on key points.

~

Add a BG

Delete .osb =p

get more tags Make tags the same for all diffs
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
[General]
-I forget this last time, ADD background 1024x768
-Again, finish kiai time in 01:28:386, remember add this in easy and hard
-make a check in volume of hitsounds

[*easy]
-Acc 100% realy nice now
-01:27:902 (1) finish it in 01:28:386 and add finish sound

[*hard]
-Acc 95% much better now
-Run AIMod and recheck distances
-00:52:701 add a slider with repetition until 00:53:064
-01:23:669 remove this circle
-01:24:031 add circle with finish sound

Star, I like this song good luck
dlguiga
60 posts
Joined November 2009
dlguiga
Just a few suggestions:

Hard:
00:19:677 (1) - No new combo
00:24:515 (1) - ^
00:46:289 (1) - ^
01:04:193 (6,7,8) - Align with (5)?

Easy:
00:16:773 (1) - Align with previous slider
00:18:709 (3) - ^
00:26:935 (4) - ^

Nice map. Star!
-Xero-
526 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
-Xero-

dlguiga wrote:

Just a few suggestions:

Hard:
00:19:677 (1) - No new combo No
00:24:515 (1) - ^ ^
00:46:289 (1) - ^ ^, because the spacing differs
01:04:193 (6,7,8) - Align with (5)? Ok

Easy: No
00:16:773 (1) - Align with previous slider
00:18:709 (3) - ^
00:26:935 (4) - ^

Nice map. Star! Thanks.
Mianki
2,701 posts
Joined September 2008
Mianki
easy:

-01:02:257 (2.3) Distance snap these properly

hard:

-01:08:306 (5.6.7) This triple clap sounded a bit weird to me, try adding a finish to the last circle (suggestion)

Also you might wanna add a backround image because everybody doesn't play with video on.
Anyways, nicely mapped ^^
Star~
-Xero-
526 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
-Xero-

Mianki wrote:

easy:

-01:02:257 (2.3) Distance snap these properly Fixed.

hard:

-01:08:306 (5.6.7) This triple clap sounded a bit weird to me, try adding a finish to the last circle (suggestion) Fixed.

Also you might wanna add a backround image because everybody doesn't play with video on.
Anyways, nicely mapped ^^ Thanks.
Star~
Kuroneko-sHerald
1,081 posts
Joined August 2008
Kuroneko-sHerald
Some suggestion:

Artist: The name of the band is capitalised, so you should change it in ORANGE RANGE.
Title: The right title is *~Asterisk~
You should change it.

Note: If you change name or artist, make sure that the folder on "/osu/songs" has this name "13473 Orange Range - Asterisk (TV Size)". Otherwhise it can give some error when full submitting.

[*easy]
Increase HP drain rate by 4.
00:04:435 - Add a break.
00:12:177 - ^
In that way it should be more enjoyable for expert but mantaining the same level of facility.

[*hard]
I think that this can be consider an Insane diff, actually.

Starred*

P.S. Can I do a diff? :D
Glass
Glass
Good spacings.
I don't know how you're working those combos, but I made them in order of verses, you seemed to have divided each verse by 2 combos so try working the combos according to my mod to see if it makes sense but don't save, if you don't like it then just revert the changes.

[General]
Add a preview point; go to Timing -> the most bottom option

[*easy]
00:04:677 (x) - Feels empty, consider mapping this part?
00:12:419 (x) - Same here =/
00:30:322 (x) - Add a spinner from this point to 00:31:773
00:34:193 (1) - Remove new combo
00:38:064 (1) - Remove new combo
00:55:483 (x) - Add a spinner from this point to 00:56:935
01:03:225 (1) - Remove new combo
01:07:096 (1) - Remove new combo
01:10:967 (1) - Remove new combo
01:18:709 (1) - Remove new combo
01:27:902 (1) - Remove new combo

[*hard]
00:18:225 (1) - Remove new combo
00:24:515 (1) - Remove new combo
00:18:951 (2) - New combo
00:19:677 (1) - Remove new combo
00:34:193 (1) - Remove new combo
00:38:064 (1) - Remove new combo
00:45:564 (1) - Remove new combo
00:46:289 (1) - Remove new combo, also you're gonna have to make a storyboard with a double speed warning for this.
01:02:983 (1) - Remove new combo
01:06:612 (1) - Remove new combo

Good map, starred.
-Xero-
526 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
-Xero-

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

Some suggestion:

Artist: The name of the band is capitalised, so you should change it in ORANGE RANGE. You can use both versions. Also most of the Orange Range maps are capitalised like this.
Title: The right title is *~Asterisk~ True.
You should change it.

Note: If you change name or artist, make sure that the folder on "/osu/songs" has this name "13473 Orange Range - Asterisk (TV Size)". Otherwhise it can give some error when full submitting.

[*easy]
Increase HP drain rate by 4.That's too much. But I increased it by 1...
00:04:435 - Add a break.No need. Would stop the flow.
00:12:177 - ^ ^
In that way it should be more enjoyable for expert but mantaining the same level of facility.

[*hard]
I think that this can be consider an Insane diff, actually.Maybe, maybe not...

Starred*Thanks =D

P.S. Can I do a diff? :D Sure. But i don't know if I'll take it. If you do please map a normal.
-Xero-
526 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
-Xero-

Glasslake wrote:

Good spacings.
I don't know how you're working those combos, but I made them in order of verses, you seemed to have divided each verse by 2 combos so try working the combos according to my mod to see if it makes sense but don't save, if you don't like it then just revert the changes.

[General]
Add a preview point; go to Timing -> the most bottom option

[*easy]
00:04:677 (x) - Feels empty, consider mapping this part? Fine~
00:12:419 (x) - Same here =/ ^
00:30:322 (x) - Add a spinner from this point to 00:31:773 No. Feels wrong, next slider is too early.
00:34:193 (1) - Remove new combo No.
00:38:064 (1) - Remove new combo Yes.
00:55:483 (x) - Add a spinner from this point to 00:56:935 Yes.
01:03:225 (1) - Remove new combo Yes.
01:07:096 (1) - Remove new combo Yes.
01:10:967 (1) - Remove new combo Yes.
01:18:709 (1) - Remove new combo Yes.
01:27:902 (1) - Remove new combo No.

[*hard]
00:18:225 (1) - Remove new combo No.
00:24:515 (1) - Remove new combo No.
00:18:951 (2) - New combo No.
00:19:677 (1) - Remove new combo Yes.
00:34:193 (1) - Remove new combo No.
00:38:064 (1) - Remove new combo Yes.
00:45:564 (1) - Remove new combo No.
00:46:289 (1) - Remove new combo, No.also you're gonna have to make a storyboard with a double speed warning for this. I dunno how. But i'll search the forums for that.
01:02:983 (1) - Remove new combo Yes.
01:06:612 (1) - Remove new combo Yes.

Good map, starred.Thanks.
FishHook
192 posts
Joined September 2009
FishHook
Some nazi modding on [Easy] since its pretty much near tip top shape.

0:24:515 (1) move up 1 unit.
0:24:999 (2) move up 2 units.
0:26:451 (3) (4) decrease spacing the match rest of combo.
0:28:386 (1) (2) match spacing after changing above spacing. (Or leave be since its a new combo, but suggest changing due to it being an [Easy] diff.
0:39:031 (4) (5) increase spacing to match rest of combo.
1:18:225 (3)-(3) of next combo all move down 1 unit.

Likewise with [Hard]
0:14:112 (2) Spacing is unequal. Maybe move to the left with distance snapping to get the beat move in-line with the middle of the slider. ( I think its down 1 , right 6 for units. Tho the middle might be in-between two units, can't tell.)
0:16:048 Same as ^ (It might be possible to increase the spacing after each note for added difficulty instead of giving the beats equal spacing. If you consider that suggestion. Make the spacing increments larger. See how it looks.)
0:39:031 (7) (8) (9) Move down 1 unit.
0:46:289 (This is if you want your slider to look more symmetrical) Move the middle anchor point 3 units right and 2 units up. Then move the end anchor 1 unit left.
1:11:693 (1) Move down 3 units.
1:12:177 (1) Move down 5 units.
1:12:660 (2) Move down 2 units.

Very groovy map. +star
FishHook
192 posts
Joined September 2009
FishHook
Also, add a timing section at the end of each difficulty to end the Kiai mode.
Kinaya
45 posts
Joined July 2009
Kinaya
YööööööööY Bleach <3 :) Star!
Kuroneko-sHerald
1,081 posts
Joined August 2008
Kuroneko-sHerald
Here is my diff :D
Download: Orange Range - ~Asterisk~ (TV Size) (Xero_HT) [Kuro].osu

Hope that you'll like it. If there is something to change, just tell me ;)

Another suggestion:
The video is stretched (the original video should be 4:3 but this is 16:9 or something like).
4:3 version:

16:9 version:


I suggest to you to change it.
If you want I've uploaded a video:
http://up.ppy.sh/files/bleach_hd_op_1280x720p.avi


Last edited by Kuroneko-sHerald , edited 1 time in total.
Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Fuuko
Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA! <33'

General:

Add more tags, like Anime, Ichigo...
Silence slider roll.
The mp3 ends in a weird way...maybe getting a new mp3 is a good idea.
*easy

00:03:234 (3) - Extend by 1/2 beat.
00:10:967 (3) - ^
00:14:838 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:10:967 (5) - New combo.
01:22:096 (2) - Clap.
*hard

01:22:096 (3) - Clap at the beggining of the slider.

What bothered me on this diff is that the slider velocity is a bit slow on some parts...maybe you could make it 2,10 or 2,20.
Star for the efforts, keep up the good work. :*
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
*easy (capitalize the e into E in the title! Remember to full submit after that.)
00:03:225 (3) - whistle on this slider's start and end
00:38:064 (3,4,5) - move them a square up (and move 4th and 5th a square right, too!)
00:46:289 (3) - remove the "2x speed" storyboarded message for this mode

*hard (same thing as on easy mode)
00:45:564 (1,2,3,1) - refine spacing, please
01:07:580 (5,6) - move them a square left (and an additional square down for 6th)

This fine beatmap needs some hitsound-placing and new combo refines, the rest was ok.
Have your star!
-Xero-
526 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
-Xero-

Lokamp wrote:

*easy (capitalize the e into E in the title! Remember to full submit after that.) ? why cant it be lowercase? looks ugly with an E
00:03:225 (3) - whistle on this slider's start and end ok
00:38:064 (3,4,5) - move them a square up (and move 4th and 5th a square right, too!) ok
00:46:289 (3) - remove the "2x speed" storyboarded message for this mode fixed

*hard (same thing as on easy mode)
00:45:564 (1,2,3,1) - refine spacing, please no? i dont see why
01:07:580 (5,6) - move them a square left (and an additional square down for 6th) why that? they're snapped correctly and i dont see any reason for nazi either

This fine beatmap needs some hitsound-placing and new combo refines, the rest was ok.
Have your star! Thanks
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
[General]

The way the mp3 just cuts out at the end feels jarring. Maybe find one with a fade out?

[easy]

01:12:419 [8, 1] Spacing.
01:16:773 During this combo of white circles, plus the kiai, plus the background of the movie at that point hurt my eyes a bit.

[hard]

From lokamp's post, he mentioned a storyboad element about the 2x speed warning, but it doesn't seem to be in the hard mode.
00:14:838 Maybe remove the finishes here except for the ones on 4 and 5 of this combo.

Pretty solid map, though. Star.
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Hikato
Sorry. :3

SPOILER
[Easy(Sound)]
ATTACH[Orange Range - ~Asterisk~ (TV Size) (Xero_HT) [Easy Sound Mod].osu]
Redownload the easy.
[Hard(Sound)]
ATTACH[Orange Range - ~Asterisk~ (TV Size) (Xero_HT) [Hard Sound Mod].osu]

Hope you find them useful.

Nice map. :D

Download: Orange Range - ~Asterisk~ (TV Size) (Xero_HT) [Hard Sound Mod].osu

Download: Orange Range - ~Asterisk~ (TV Size) (Xero_HT) [Easy Sound Mod].osu
AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
Hard

00:16:773 move this timing point to left
00:32:257 ^
.
.
.

i like this song :3
maal
maal
Lower volume It's a very low song.
That's all I can say. I didn't really take my time, but meh.
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
Hard;

OD down a couple.
00:16:773 - This section is a bit loud.

That's it.
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
easy and hard are almost always shown as Easy and Hard so I would strongly recommend you change it..
you don't need anime on tags as it will show that on the genre
it is preferred kiai time remain the same on all difficulties to remain consistent
is there any way for you to fix the mp3 so it doesn't stop so suddenly? Try going on audacityand making the end fade out

Easy:
00:04:677 (4) - add note
00:12:419 (4) - ^
00:20:644 (1,3) - align these and make 2 and 4 in the center
01:00:806 (4) - add note with clap (stacked on top of 2)
01:14:354 (2) - add clap

Hard:
00:14:838 (1,2,3) - I don't like finish placement here
in Easy it doesn't sound too bad but I would lower the audio for the 00:16:77 timing section by 1 tick
00:22:580 (9) - new combo
00:22:822 (1) - remove new combo
00:38:064 (5) - new combo
lower audio on 00:56:93 timing section by at least 1 tick
01:04:193 (1) - remove new combo
lower audio on 1:20:16 and 01:20:64 timing sections

*star*
-Xero-
526 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
-Xero-

James2250 wrote:

easy and hard are almost always shown as Easy and Hard so I would strongly recommend you change it.. fine..
you don't need anime on tags as it will show that on the genre ok
it is preferred kiai time remain the same on all difficulties to remain consistent ok
is there any way for you to fix the mp3 so it doesn't stop so suddenly? Try going on audacityand making the end fade out
i added a new .mp3. i need help with the hitsounds now! the mp3 is louder than the old one

Easy:
00:04:677 (4) - add note no... sorry but i dont think that would fit
00:12:419 (4) - ^ ..
00:20:644 (1,3) - align these and make 2 and 4 in the center I like it how they are..
01:00:806 (4) - add note with clap (stacked on top of 2) .
01:14:354 (2) - add clap ok

Hard:
00:14:838 (1,2,3) - I don't like finish placement here w-w-why :,(
in Easy it doesn't sound too bad but I would lower the audio for the 00:16:77 timing section by 1 tick new mp3 -> useless
00:22:580 (9) - new combo nah. the guitar accords are changing on the 1
00:22:822 (1) - remove new combo .
00:38:064 (5) - new combo ok
lower audio on 00:56:93 timing section by at least 1 tick new mp3 -> useless
01:04:193 (1) - remove new combo well, hikki said new combo here. but whatever
lower audio on 1:20:16 and 01:20:64 timing sections new mp3 -> useless

*star*
Mianki
2,701 posts
Joined September 2008
Mianki
Audio and video seems on time to me, watched and compared to a youtube vid
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