Hey! From my M4M queue.
Well, here's my mod:
Overall, great mapset. I’d say the Easy would have to be improved though. Especially the blankets.
Good Luck!
Well, here's my mod:
trammiexo's Easy:
There is some DS issues. Check AiMod and fix them.
00:06:603 (1,2) – Maybe make a blanket here instead. Like this:
00:14:306 (3,4) – Improve the blanket. Use the approach circle of 00:15:116 (4) – 00:16:738 (1,2) – Make the blanket better. Use the approach circle of 00:17:549 (2) – 00:23:225 (2,3,4) – Make this double blanket look better. It has to look something like this:
00:30:927 (5,6) – A blanket here will look better.
00:34:171 (3,4) – Try to improve the blanket00:41:468 (4,1) – Blanket.
00:42:685 (2) – This slider looks ugly. Make the curve look better by blanketing 00:42:279 (1) – 00:47:144 (3,4) – This blanket can be improved00:48:765 (1) – Place this slider here: X:168 Y:10000:48:765 (1,2) – The distance between these two notes isn’t correct. Make sure your distance snap stays the same throughout the entire diff01:04:981 (1) – Place this circle somewhere here: X:288 Y:20401:16:333 (2) – Curve this slider less. It looks ugly if you curve it too much.
There is some DS issues. Check AiMod and fix them.
00:06:603 (1,2) – Maybe make a blanket here instead. Like this:
00:14:306 (3,4) – Improve the blanket. Use the approach circle of 00:15:116 (4) – 00:16:738 (1,2) – Make the blanket better. Use the approach circle of 00:17:549 (2) – 00:23:225 (2,3,4) – Make this double blanket look better. It has to look something like this:
00:30:927 (5,6) – A blanket here will look better.
00:34:171 (3,4) – Try to improve the blanket00:41:468 (4,1) – Blanket.
00:42:685 (2) – This slider looks ugly. Make the curve look better by blanketing 00:42:279 (1) – 00:47:144 (3,4) – This blanket can be improved00:48:765 (1) – Place this slider here: X:168 Y:10000:48:765 (1,2) – The distance between these two notes isn’t correct. Make sure your distance snap stays the same throughout the entire diff01:04:981 (1) – Place this circle somewhere here: X:288 Y:20401:16:333 (2) – Curve this slider less. It looks ugly if you curve it too much.
Minao's Normal:
00:30:927 (5) – Rather place this slider here: X:400 Y:256. I think the flow will be better then.00:33:968 (3) –Place this one here: X:64 Y:120. Also better flow00:35:589 (1,2) – Place the red anchor in the middle of the slider?00:45:725 (1) – Since there’s a finish sound here: 00:45:522 – maybe do something like this instead:
00:48:968 (1) – Do the same thing here.00:51:603 (6,1) – Improve the blanket01:03:360 (6,2) – I don’t really like this overlap. Try to avoid it01:16:333 (7,3) - ^
00:30:927 (5) – Rather place this slider here: X:400 Y:256. I think the flow will be better then.00:33:968 (3) –Place this one here: X:64 Y:120. Also better flow00:35:589 (1,2) – Place the red anchor in the middle of the slider?00:45:725 (1) – Since there’s a finish sound here: 00:45:522 – maybe do something like this instead:
00:48:968 (1) – Do the same thing here.00:51:603 (6,1) – Improve the blanket01:03:360 (6,2) – I don’t really like this overlap. Try to avoid it01:16:333 (7,3) - ^
Hard:
00:00:117 (1,3) – This stack can be improved a tiny bit. Place 00:01:333 (3) – here: X:447 Y:12300:06:400 (5,2) – This stack doesn’t look good. Rather place 00:07:211 (2) - here: X:138 Y:26900:08:022 (4,5) – Tiny adjustment needed to improve the stack. Place 00:08:833 (5) – here: X:172 Y:18600:09:035 (6,7,1) – Make sure these three sliders are placed right on top of each other perfectly. Like this.
00:18:765 (1,4) – This can be a potential blanket.
It looks neater00:23:224 (2,3) – Maybe a blanket here will fit better?00:26:062 (1) – Remove NC and rather NC here: 00:26:468 (2) – 00:45:522 (1,2) - ^00:48:765 (1,2) - ^01:15:319 (2) – Just straighten this slider so it goes through 01:14:711 (1) – nicely
00:00:117 (1,3) – This stack can be improved a tiny bit. Place 00:01:333 (3) – here: X:447 Y:12300:06:400 (5,2) – This stack doesn’t look good. Rather place 00:07:211 (2) - here: X:138 Y:26900:08:022 (4,5) – Tiny adjustment needed to improve the stack. Place 00:08:833 (5) – here: X:172 Y:18600:09:035 (6,7,1) – Make sure these three sliders are placed right on top of each other perfectly. Like this.
00:18:765 (1,4) – This can be a potential blanket.
It looks neater00:23:224 (2,3) – Maybe a blanket here will fit better?00:26:062 (1) – Remove NC and rather NC here: 00:26:468 (2) – 00:45:522 (1,2) - ^00:48:765 (1,2) - ^01:15:319 (2) – Just straighten this slider so it goes through 01:14:711 (1) – nicely
Overall, great mapset. I’d say the Easy would have to be improved though. Especially the blankets.
Good Luck!