12 Girls Band - Freedom [Osu|Taiko] · forum

LKs

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LKs 2010-03-14T02:02:46+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年3月26日 at 17:12:05

Artist: 12 Girls Band
Title: Freedom
Tags: Album SHANGHAI lepidopodus
BPM: 130
Filesize: 5757kb
Play Time: 03:57
Difficulties Available:

Another (5 stars, 640 notes)
Hyper (4.96 stars, 535 notes)
lepidon! - Taiko Oni (5 stars, 1012 notes)
Standard (3.09 stars, 116 notes)

Download: 12 Girls Band - Freedom
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by LKs 2010-03-26T09:16:15+00:00, edited 13 times in total.

xBubu

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xBubu 2010-03-14T07:03:23+00:00

star!

xierbaliti

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xierbaliti 2010-03-14T07:05:35+00:00

lol好图

-Freedom-
03:10:776 (1,3) - 去掉(1)开头和(3)末尾的clap

-Hard-
00:44:239 (6) - 从第2个折返开始（就是最后2个音）用normal音效？感觉会好些

挑不出别的什么了._.

star x3

gdeath

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gdeath 2010-03-14T07:50:33+00:00

[Freedom]
03:28:546 (9) - 这个突然间的两倍速感觉不太好，我第一次play的时候，完全没有想到。
要不做个warning sb，要不修改掉。我建议是修改掉比较好，整体歌曲只有这一个地方是两倍速，显得和map整体有些突兀。
03:28:315 (x,x,x,x) - 从这一点开始连续以1/2拍为间隔，加circle就可以了(或者circle-silder-circle)以1/2拍为基准
此难度命名和title一样显得有点乏味，没创意。考虑个别的？

[Hard]
感觉clap加的有点多，hitsound稍显沉重。

我觉得关于难度命名参考IIDX[Another][Hyper][Normal]
也是个不错的选择。

Pretty nice map~
Star!

LKs

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LKs 2010-03-14T07:58:45+00:00

xierbaliti wrote:
-Freedom-
03:10:776 (1,3) - 去掉(1)开头和(3)末尾的clap 修改

挑不出别的什么了._.

star x3

喜儿

LKs

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LKs 2010-03-14T08:11:01+00:00

gdeath wrote:
[Freedom]
03:28:546 (9) - 这个突然间的两倍速感觉不太好，我第一次play的时候，完全没有想到。
要不做个warning sb，要不修改掉。我建议是修改掉比较好，整体歌曲只有这一个地方是两倍速，显得和map整体有些突兀。
03:28:315 (x,x,x,x) - 从这一点开始连续以1/2拍为间隔，加circle就可以了(或者circle-silder-circle)以1/2拍为基准
此难度命名和title一样显得有点乏味，没创意。考虑个别的？
已修改，03:28:315不太适合加，所以没加

[Hard]
感觉clap加的有点多，hitsound稍显沉重。我降低了音量

我觉得关于难度命名参考IIDX[Another][Hyper][Normal] 已修改
也是个不错的选择。

Pretty nice map~
Star!

THX gdeath~

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2010-03-14T08:56:26+00:00

star~

lepidopodus

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lepidopodus 2010-03-14T09:01:20+00:00

star~

al2e10

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al2e10 2010-03-14T09:43:00+00:00

唉=.= 怎麼像老師和kiou的傑作...都沒有什麼好mod的~

[Another] perfect !! And fun to play !!

[Hyper] Perfect again =.=

[Normal] ...

[lepidon! - Taiko Oni] I don't mod Taiko `

就star了算~~

LKs

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LKs 2010-03-14T10:02:15+00:00

al2e10 wrote:
就star了算~~

thx

SamiPale

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SamiPale 2010-03-14T10:03:58+00:00

我说了吧

Diasios

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Diasios 2010-03-14T11:50:47+00:00

[General]

• Delete the .osb file, then "full submission"

[Normal]

• 01:24:622 (7) - This slider is ugly; do something different

[Hyper]

• 01:58:776 (break) - This break is huge D: it's unrankable, sorry

[Another]

• 01:58:776 (break) - This break is huge D: it's unrankable, sorry

Mashley

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Mashley 2010-03-14T13:47:23+00:00

30 second break is really long.... you need to find a way to shortern it.

Normal
Fine

Hyper
00:53:700 (6,7,8) - I don't like how these notes reverse back, maybe respace them to flow with the pattern?
01:51:393 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - These jumps are kind of confusing... move them closer together.
For the most part, quite a brilliant difficulty

Another
Amazing ^_^

Taiko
You should remove a lot of the kiai here, it's very overused.
00:51:276 - Add a note here, the stream ends weirdly without one

Good job

LKs

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LKs 2010-03-14T13:53:22+00:00

xxheroxx wrote:
[General]

• Delete the .osb file, then "full submission"
DONE

[Normal]

• 01:24:622 (7) - This slider is ugly; do something different
DONE

[Hyper]

• 01:58:776 (break) - This break is huge D: it's unrankable, sorry
[Another]

• 01:58:776 (break) - This break is huge D: it's unrankable, sorry

01:58:776 ~ 02:34:776 .36s
01:58:776 ~ 02:27:392 .29s
30s break is unrankable?? can you give me the rules link?

LKs

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LKs 2010-03-14T14:04:08+00:00

Agent Spin Here wrote:
30 second break is really long.... you need to find a way to shortern it. i dont know how to deal with this problem <_<

Taiko
You should remove a lot of the kiai here, it's very overused. x
00:51:276 - Add a note here, the stream ends weirdly without one fixed by lepidopodus

Good job

thx

Last edited by LKs 2010-03-14T14:18:47+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

lepidopodus

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lepidopodus 2010-03-14T14:14:02+00:00

Agent Spin Here wrote:
Taiko
You should remove a lot of the kiai here, it's very overused. Fixed
00:51:276 - Add a note here, the stream ends weirdly without one big notes at end of the 1/4 stream isn't allowed

Well there's some kiai I didn't intend to, so I deleted some kiai. But you said 'very overused', so I exclude 2 kiai section at the front.
and 00:51:276 is actually middle of 'authentic section', though this map isn't fully authentic.
(for kiai? oh in that time go-go time isn't existed at Taiko no Tatsujin so I can change kiai whatever I want)

Download: 12 Girls Band - Freedom (LKs) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu

Mashley

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Mashley 2010-03-14T14:23:24+00:00

You can fix that break by mapping more of it, maybe?

lepidopodus - it'd work fine as just a normal not in my opinion, better than it is now

lepidopodus

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lepidopodus 2010-03-14T16:02:43+00:00

well then just blame namco. that's authentic part and actually I didn't 'mapped' that part.

LKs

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LKs 2010-03-16T09:09:42+00:00

Agent Spin Here wrote:
You can fix that break by mapping more of it, maybe?

yeah , i made the break time = 20s . i think its OK now~~

Leorda

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Leorda 2010-03-16T15:01:28+00:00

Ni HAO!

[Skin]
1) The hitcirle.png is too big, so the hitcircle.png is out of line
Example :

You have to cut it down

[Hard]
01:50:469 (2) - Make parallel?
01:50:931 (3) - ^
02:54:162 (8) - New combo?
03:07:085 (1) - Make curve?

[Another]
00:19:084 (1) - Ugly slider
00:20:007 (3) - ^
00:20:930 (5) - ^
00:22:776 (1) - Make curve?
00:23:699 (3) - ^
00:30:160 (1) - Ugly slider

Nice song
STAR

ignorethis

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ignorethis 2010-03-16T15:28:02+00:00

offset +~3-5 ms?

<Normal>
01:21:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Use soft hitsound

others are fine. call back for recheck and pubble, star'd

LKs

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LKs 2010-03-16T15:30:16+00:00

Leorda wrote:
Ni HAO!

[Skin]
1) The hitcirle.png is too big, so the hitcircle.png is out of line
Example :

You have to cut it down
done

[Hard]
01:50:469 (2) - Make parallel?
01:50:931 (3) - ^
02:54:162 (8) - New combo?done
03:07:085 (1) - Make curve?

[Another]
00:19:084 (1) - Ugly slider
00:20:007 (3) - ^
00:20:930 (5) - ^
00:22:776 (1) - Make curve?
00:23:699 (3) - ^
00:30:160 (1) - Ugly slider
<_<
Nice song
STAR

thx

LKs

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LKs 2010-03-16T15:39:26+00:00

ignorethis wrote:
offset +~3-5 ms?
+4

<Normal>
01:21:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Use soft hitsound
done
others are fine. call back for recheck and pubble, star'd

thx~~

ignorethis

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ignorethis 2010-03-16T15:58:43+00:00

I've seen a few people talking about the long break but I think if there's no way to map it, then it can be left empty. Anyway, good job. Pubbled.

Andrea

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Andrea 2010-03-19T11:33:16+00:00

[Overall]

Add a "spinner-approachcircle.png" into the folder and full submit.

Do not use double space for the tags. The tags should be "Album SHANGHAI lepidopodus" copy and paste this.

[Difficulties]

[Normal]

Why don't call this difficulty "Standard" ?

A lot of unsnapped notes. Resnap all notes.

[Hyper]

A lot of unsnapped notes. Resnap all notes.

03:08:239 (4,5) - Too far imo. Make it more noticeable.

[Another]

A lot of unsnapped notes. Resnap all notes.

Score is too high. Reduce it, please.

Increase stack leniency by 1 tick, like other difficulties.

01:20:929 (5) - Slider repeat is totally hidden.
02:43:083 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why don't add some claps here?

[lepidon! - Taiko Oni]

A lot of unsnapped notes. Resnap all notes.

LKs

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LKs 2010-03-19T12:11:12+00:00

osuplayer111 wrote:
[Overall]

Add a "spinner-approachcircle.png" into the folder and full submit. added

Do not use double space for the tags. The tags should be "Album SHANGHAI lepidopodus" copy and paste this. fixed

[Difficulties]

[Normal]

Why don't call this difficulty "Standard" ? changed

A lot of unsnapped notes. Resnap all notes. fixed

[Hyper]

A lot of unsnapped notes. Resnap all notes. fixed

03:08:239 (4,5) - Too far imo. Make it more noticeable. fixed

[Another]

A lot of unsnapped notes. Resnap all notes. fixed

Score is too high. Reduce it, please. Reduce to 14,xxx,xxx. maybe now its OK?

Increase stack leniency by 1 tick, like other difficulties. fixed

01:20:929 (5) - Slider repeat is totally hidden. fixed
02:43:083 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why don't add some claps here? I dont think so..sorry

[lepidon! - Taiko Oni]

A lot of unsnapped notes. Resnap all notes. fixed

thx~