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Mayama Rika - Liar Mask anime size

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Aerous
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Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Aerous
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年1月15日 at 15:31:25

Artist: Mayama Rika
Title: Liar Mask anime size
Source: アカメが斬る!
Tags: agk Akame ga Kill! Second Opening TV Sellenite IamKwan captin1 -Yuzuriha-inori-
BPM: 150
Filesize: 23936kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. captin's Insane (5.01 stars, 322 notes)
  2. Easy (1.45 stars, 94 notes)
  3. Insane (4.45 stars, 297 notes)
  4. KwaN's Hard (3.35 stars, 245 notes)
  5. Sellen's Normal (2 stars, 138 notes)
  6. -Yuzuriha's Insane (4.62 stars, 308 notes)
Download: Mayama Rika - Liar Mask anime size
Download: Mayama Rika - Liar Mask anime size (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#1 Akame ga Kill! Second Opening First Ranked
Mapset
Easy - Me
Sellen's Normal - Sellenite
KwaN's Hard - IamKwaN
Insane - Me
-Yuzuriha's Insane - -Yuzuriha-inori-
captin's Insane - captin1
BG: Gaia

Next Map >>


Special Thanks To : captin1 , IamKwaN , Sellenite , -Yuzuriha-inori- for accepting my GD request

Cherry Blossom

CDFA 1 week after AGK ended

Mao

jonathanlfj

Inyuschan

Modders : ありがとう ~
1Jmmxp Jmmxp so hot
2Gaia ( helped with new combo/test play/BGs/insane )
3Tician
4Tuxxy
5byfar
6NewIpas
7NcrzX
8RokYang
9Natsu
10truonant
11Kazuya
12Utogi
13wobble_owo]
14CloudSplash16
15Pho+ 2nd mod
16P A N
17Estellia-
18FORT
19wcx19911123
20pkk
21m1223961117
22Rakuen
23Tess
24-APXH
25Shohei Ohtani + 2nd mod
26Kibbleru
27ByBy_ChAn
28mangocurry
29CelsiusLK
30appleeaterx
31Cherry Blossom + Rechecks + Bubble
32tutuhaha
33guineaQ + 2nd mod
34xxdeathx
35Rakuen
-------------------------------------
36Mao - RIP
37VINXIS
38Julie
39Zero__wind
40Flask
41Xinely
42Oracle
43Kloyd
44jonathanlfj
45TicClick
46Inyuschan




To Do List :

Find BG [x] BG by Gaia
Waiting for hitsounds [x] [Check Easy]
Add Video [x]
Custom Colors [x]
Waiting for GD [x]
Finish my Easy by Oct . 25~ [x]
Update tags [x]
Ready for mod [x]
Remapped Insane [x]

Last edited by Aerous , edited 242 times in total.
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1
http://puu.sh/ci5NF.rar ~
Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Aerous

captin1 wrote:

http://puu.sh/ci5NF.rar ~
Thanks for accepting the GD Request !
Setsurei
1,149 posts
Joined May 2012
Setsurei
whoa another set o.o
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
http://puu.sh/csuAV.rar
Please use combo colors and add our names into tag.
Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Aerous

IamKwaN wrote:

http://puu.sh/csuAV.rar
Please use combo colors and add our names into tag.
Thanks for accepting GD !
Tician
215 posts
Joined March 2013
Tician
Mod from my Modding queue... hum I remember I already modded this song, but from another uploader, hope you timed it correctly with the walz part? ^^

General
Timing - yes you did \o/
Settings - disable widescreen and letterbox you only need them with a storyboard I think
AiMod - watch for the AIMod there are some setting problems with the diffs

captin's Insane
Testplay - sry I am not able to testplay this, so the mod could be worse, be careful what you'r going to change >.<
There's an unsnapped slider here 00:53:103 (8) -
00:30:271 (1) - End this on the up-beat, I think it would fit more
00:55:270 (2) - Would fit better ending on the red tick
00:56:603 (2) - same
00:57:936 (2) - same (if you want a build up use a circle in the free space if you short the sliders - sounds much better)
00:58:769 (1,2,3) - like you did here =)
Well I keep it in common maybe it's only my opinion I just think the blue endling slider fo not fit with the music (there are some exceptions in the end <.<)

-Yuzuriha's insane
Testplay: sry I am not able to testplay this, so the mod could be worse, be careful what you'r going to change >.<
00:35:160 (1) - If you use the 1/3 BSD here why you don't use it at the whole part before, I think it's fitting really good (much better than ending up everything on a blue line)
Same for this diff, I mostly don't like the blue ending sliders, it sounds so wrong, but maybe that's just my opinion and not much helpful ._.
00:48:270 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Some good looking polygon would be nice here
00:56:103 (1) - end this on red, delete the second slider and use 2 circles after it
01:26:102 (4,5,4,5) - there's something wrong with this endings, but I can't figure out what exactly it is it's not fitting
(maybe you can take a tiny look at captins diff.... *runs*)

Insane
Testplay: Well I would say 65% accuracy I am still not able to testpaly it, so still the mod could be worse ._.
00:20:937 (2,3) - I would change the position in the timing line for a better play
00:52:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Give this stream more love, make a straight line out of it it looks a bit chaotic
01:16:103 (4) - end on the red line

KwaN's Hard
Testplay: yay finally I can do it :D I like this diff, there are just a few diff-spikes (Combobreaker incoming^^) making this diff a little bit bad for me =/
00:17:104 (2,3) - Are they neccessary? I don't hear any sounds I would just use a circle on the white tick to keep it running
00:30:937 (1) - This is nearkly the same part like before, I would not use 1/4 and 1/3, choose one, don't mix 'em^^

I am scared... you'r a BAT, I am a noob, I am not able to give any mentions D:

Sellen's Normal
00:18:937 (3) - end on white
01:01:269 (2,3) - don't overlap them, it's confusing for new players
01:06:603 (3,4) - ^
01:11:936 (3,4) - ^
01:17:269 (3,4) - ^
01:21:769 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this whole part feels totally off, but I don't know how to fix it, tried around a bit =/

Easy
01:21:603 (1,2,3,4,5) - same here it feels off but I don't know why =(

Sry I tried my best, but I don't have the feeling my own that this is a good mod ;_; A star for this good map (and to compensate my bad mod) >.<

Edit: well I just realized after finishing this that this is not what I wanted in my queue - lel :lol:
Tuxxy_old
204 posts
Joined May 2013
Tuxxy_old
Easy

Stuff:
Hitsounds are lacking in this map, consider adding some :) have a look at Normal
Try using a smaller distance snap for easy, 0.5-0.8?
As it is Easy put the jumps closer together.

00:04:682 no NC
00:07:862 NC
00:17:187 too far of a jump for EZ, closer :)
00:38:271 NC
00:54:936 Honestly, without many sounds this sounds very boring, add sounds! :D
01:05:936 NC
01:10:853 NC and move to 01:10:769 (you must extend)
01:15:603 no NC
01:16:103 NC

Normal

Not much to say here.

Try replacing the sounds on notes like 00:37:271, 00:39:271 and 00:41:270 to clap instead of whistle. (so every other bar)
01:09:936 You could add a note here?
Your choice to follow these or not, so have fun!!
Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Aerous

Tuxxy wrote:

Easy

Stuff:
Hitsounds are lacking in this map, consider adding some :) have a look at Normal
Try using a smaller distance snap for easy, 0.5-0.8?
As it is Easy put the jumps closer together.

00:04:682 no NC
00:07:862 NC
00:17:187 too far of a jump for EZ, closer :)
00:38:271 NC
00:54:936 Honestly, without many sounds this sounds very boring, add sounds! :D
01:05:936 NC
01:10:853 NC and move to 01:10:769 (you must extend)
01:15:603 no NC
01:16:103 NC

Normal

Not much to say here.

Try replacing the sounds on notes like 00:37:271, 00:39:271 and 00:41:270 to clap instead of whistle. (so every other bar)
01:09:936 You could add a note here?
Your choice to follow these or not, so have fun!!
Someone is working on hitsound for me

thanks for modding
wendao
1,638 posts
Joined August 2012
wendao
I guess you should change the title to Mayama Rika - Liar Mask anime size, since there's ranked map with that title and VGMDB said so (http://vgmdb.net/album/48572 | 3rd song)
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1
vgmdb isn't an official source, but http://www.mayamarika.com/artist/mayama ... /DFCL-2098 also states that, so it is correct regardless

fixed the unsnapped slider, keeping the other sliders as a stylistic choice

thanks
SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: LIAR MASK.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 54936
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:LIAR MASK
TitleUnicode:LIAR MASK
Artist:Mayama Rika
ArtistUnicode:真山りか
Creator:Aerous
Version:captin's Insane
Source:アカメが斬る!
Tags:Akame ga Kill! Second Opening TV Size Sellenite IamKwan captin1 -Yuzuriha-inori-
BeatmapID:524096
BeatmapSetID:224203

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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433,164,47604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,130,47937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
337,347,48270,6,0,P|329:316|322:249,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,117,48937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,262,49270,2,0,P|132:264|114:262,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,199,49604,2,0,P|390:197|408:199,1,45
63,308,49937,2,0,P|49:279|46:254,1,45
78,39,50270,6,0,P|92:68|95:93,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,345,50604,2,0,P|252:319|251:291,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
434,39,50937,2,0,P|420:68|417:93,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,345,51270,6,0,P|92:316|95:291,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,39,51604,2,0,P|252:65|251:93,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
434,345,51937,2,0,P|420:316|417:291,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,91,52270,5,4,0:0:0:0:
144,296,52436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
209,104,52603,1,8,0:0:0:0:
77,227,52769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
63,255,52853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
55,285,52936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
57,316,53020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
65,346,53103,2,0,L|119:355,1,53.9999983520508
241,300,53270,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,301,53353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,302,53436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
334,303,53520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
365,304,53603,6,0,P|372:263|374:234,1,53.9999983520508,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,230,53770,2,0,P|152:189|150:160,1,53.9999983520508,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,14,53936,2,0,P|296:55|298:84,1,53.9999983520508,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
74,141,54103,2,0,P|77:114|83:88,1,53.9999983520508,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,42,54270,6,2,B|407:95|407:95|389:123|392:149|392:149|418:190|409:251,1,215.999993408203,2|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
29,255,54936,6,0,P|94:253|143:254,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,337,55270,2,0,P|287:288|285:189,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,127,55603,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,328,55770,2,0,P|164:327|209:329,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,257,56103,6,0,P|426:267|365:175,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
471,47,56603,2,0,B|471:102|471:102|447:178,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,320,56936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
382,105,57103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,261,57269,2,0,P|442:243|378:246,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,287,57603,6,0,L|315:291,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,56,57936,2,0,L|275:63,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,136,58269,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,350,58436,2,0,P|344:295|349:260,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,281,58769,6,0,P|104:209|99:102,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,51,59186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,51,59269,2,0,L|276:49,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
19,186,59603,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,223,59769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
2,278,59936,2,0,P|71:254|145:269,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,315,60269,6,0,P|358:325|480:291,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,155,60936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,361,61103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,106,61269,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,314,61436,6,0,P|95:347|12:263,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
86,97,61936,2,0,L|87:233,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,345,62269,2,0,L|224:233,1,90
13,75,62603,2,0,L|14:187,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,292,62936,5,4,0:0:0:0:
90,266,63103,2,0,P|146:261|188:263,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
475,85,63436,2,2,P|419:90|377:88,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,37,63769,1,8,0:3:0:0:
143,64,63853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
137,94,63936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
137,125,64019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,154,64103,2,2,P|211:148|256:153,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,258,64436,5,0,0:0:0:0:
393,258,64519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
393,258,64603,2,0,P|367:203|361:152,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
466,16,64936,2,0,P|469:40|469:90,1,53.9999983520508,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
469,227,65103,2,0,P|465:261|464:294,1,53.9999983520508,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,360,65269,2,0,P|268:336|268:286,1,53.9999983520508,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,149,65436,2,0,P|272:115|273:82,1,53.9999983520508,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,43,65603,6,0,P|43:82|43:152,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,268,65936,2,0,P|133:263|38:268,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,346,66269,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,171,66436,2,0,P|196:101|198:63,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,282,66769,6,0,P|351:288|251:212,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,241,67269,2,0,P|81:171|79:133,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,32,67603,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,278,67769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
5,119,67936,2,0,P|10:74|20:30,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,60,68269,5,4,0:0:0:0:
118,119,68436,2,0,L|224:118,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,246,68769,2,0,P|329:286|228:235,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,150,69269,2,2,P|456:177|462:290,1,180,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,331,69769,6,0,P|190:308|181:293,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,302,69936,2,0,P|72:267|73:249,1,45,8|0,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
14,175,70103,2,0,P|24:140|35:126,1,45,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,48,70269,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,76,70353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
258,106,70436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,137,70519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,70603,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,362,70769,6,0,P|159:289|185:187,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,58,71269,2,0,P|339:131|328:208,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,255,71603,1,0,0:0:0:0:
143,102,71769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
345,29,71936,1,8,0:0:0:0:
154,216,72103,6,0,P|100:228|31:141,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,162,72603,2,0,P|367:157|403:158,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,311,72936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,139,73103,2,0,P|111:90|109:42,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,276,73436,6,0,P|324:270|447:278,1,180,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,191,73936,2,0,P|265:146|262:98,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,34,74269,1,0,0:0:0:0:
365,228,74436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,223,74603,1,8,0:0:0:0:
390,110,74769,6,0,P|444:112|482:110,1,90
221,48,75103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
221,48,75186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
221,48,75269,2,0,P|167:46|129:48,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,37,75603,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,133,75769,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,133,76103,6,0,P|221:119|322:145,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
59,225,76603,5,8,0:0:0:0:
274,243,76769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
19,109,76936,5,8,0:0:0:0:
234,91,77102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
27,308,77269,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,260,77436,6,0,P|147:187|157:51,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,21,77853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
119,21,77936,1,8,0:0:0:0:
205,312,78103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
307,134,78269,5,12,0:2:0:0:
317,104,78353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,74,78436,2,0,P|330:57|333:20,1,45
149,213,78603,5,12,0:2:0:0:
139,243,78687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
130,273,78770,2,0,P|126:290|123:327,1,45
357,290,78936,5,8,0:0:0:0:
370,289,79019,1,8,0:0:0:0:
383,288,79103,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,287,79186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
409,286,79269,1,8,0:0:0:0:
235,220,79436,2,0,P|185:230|99:224,1,135,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
239,302,79769,2,0,L|350:309,1,90,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
488,196,80019,2,0,L|377:191,1,90,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
314,129,80269,5,8,0:0:0:0:
315,142,80352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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317,168,80519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
318,181,80602,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,174,80769,2,0,P|149:183|51:185,1,135,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
267,74,81103,2,0,L|362:77,1,90,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
299,225,81353,2,0,L|394:228,1,90,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
445,174,81603,5,0,0:0:0:0:
445,174,81686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
445,174,81769,1,10,0:0:0:0:
325,349,81936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
311,320,82019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,289,82103,1,10,0:0:0:0:
293,119,82269,1,2,0:0:0:0:
462,253,82436,1,8,0:0:0:0:
462,253,82519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
462,253,82603,2,0,L|348:251,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
81,312,82936,6,0,L|195:314,1,90,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,201,83269,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,201,83353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,201,83436,1,10,0:0:0:0:
165,47,83603,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,67,83686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
126,95,83769,1,8,0:0:0:0:
127,127,83853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,155,83936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,184,84019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
154,216,84103,1,8,0:0:0:0:
141,244,84186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,263,84269,6,0,P|82:266|53:266,1,58.4999973220826
228,197,84436,2,0,P|257:198|287:201,1,58.4999973220826,12|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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488,53,85103,2,0,P|454:56|425:56,1,58.4999973220826,12|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,184,85269,2,0,P|292:150|292:121,1,58.4999973220826
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284,326,85686,1,8,0:0:0:0:
243,324,85769,1,8,0:0:0:0:
201,322,85853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,320,85936,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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261,17,86436,2,0,P|255:78|258:136,1,116.999994644165,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
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153,67,86936,5,8,0:0:0:0:
154,107,87019,1,8,0:0:0:0:
155,148,87103,1,8,0:0:0:0:
157,188,87186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
159,228,87269,1,8,0:0:0:0:
386,307,87436,2,0,P|315:299|222:343,1,175.499991966248,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
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274,284,88269,5,8,0:0:0:0:
241,258,88353,1,8,0:0:0:0:
227,219,88436,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,178,88519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,141,88603,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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277,350,89103,2,0,L|271:225,1,116.999994644165,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
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Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Aerous

wendao wrote:

I guess you should change the title to Mayama Rika - Liar Mask anime size, since there's ranked map with that title and VGMDB said so (http://vgmdb.net/album/48572 | 3rd song)
Yea I'll change it when I double check with other people
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Lanturn
captin1 is correct. Go with that info. Remove size from tags.



If you want double proof. You can find it on the official anime site: http://akame.tv/news.html
Do a quick control+f for Liar mask and you'll find the info.

Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Aerous

Lanturn wrote:

captin1 is correct. Go with that info. Remove size from tags.



If you want double proof. You can find it on the official anime site: http://akame.tv/news.html
Do a quick control+f for Liar mask and you'll find the info.


Thanks for helping !
Piine
1,573 posts
Joined March 2012
Piine
This almost gave me a heart attack thinking the other set was unqualified. Though good luck with the set!
byfar
1,186 posts
Joined July 2014
byfar
[Insane]
00:53:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - vary these jumps? dont like it. instead try 00:53:603 (3) - x460 y288 00:53:770 (4) - x392 y100 00:53:936 (5) - x496 y:340 00:54:103 (6) - x348 y56

00:17:604 (6) - NC
00:28:271 (6) - ^
00:30:271 (1) - delete NC
00:30:937 (2) - re NC here
00:33:604 (7) - NC

i love this map style btw. great job on this map!!
[captin's Insane]

01:20:269 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:18:936 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think these are waayyy too loud.


also I ahve 1 question. how do you make the small red thing (that changes slider shape to be pointy, not curvy)?
Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Aerous

byfar wrote:

[Insane]
00:53:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - vary these jumps? dont like it. instead try 00:53:603 (3) - x460 y288 00:53:770 (4) - x392 y100 00:53:936 (5) - x496 y:340 00:54:103 (6) - x348 y56 I kept the original because I liked that kind of jumps

00:17:604 (6) - NC Changed
00:28:271 (6) - ^ Changed
00:30:271 (1) - delete NC Changed
00:30:937 (2) - re NC here Changed
00:33:604 (7) - NC Changed

Thanks for the quick mod
Rizen
1,662 posts
Joined August 2013
Rizen
Hello~
SPOILER
[Easy]
  1. 00:07:862 (1,2) - Blanket these together
  2. 00:20:271 (1,2) - Fix blanket
  3. 00:25:604 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:30:937 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:32:937 (4) - Move slightly up so the slider starts from a straight line from where the previous slider ended
  6. 00:44:270 (1) - Make it perfectly horizontal?
  7. 00:52:270 (1) - Uneven beat spacing. Should be the same throughout an Easy diff :/
  8. 00:53:603 (3) - End at 00:54:270?
  9. 00:56:269 (4) - Make perfectly vertical?
  10. 01:16:103 (2) - Blanket this better?
[Sellen's Normal]
  1. 00:58:769 (3) - Can be confusing for new players. Try do what you did at 00:59:103
  2. Combo colours are inconsistent with other diffs MAJOR PROBLEM DESIGN-WISE
[KwaN's Hard]
  1. 00:42:104 (6,1) - Slight touchup for blanket
[Insane]
  1. 00:55:936 (5,1) - Slight touchup for blanket

I don't mod difficulties I can't FC so didn't do captin's or -Yuzuhira's :/
Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Aerous

[ Rizen ] wrote:

Hello~
SPOILER
[Easy]
  1. 00:07:862 (1,2) - Blanket these together
  2. 00:20:271 (1,2) - Fix blanket
  3. 00:25:604 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:30:937 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:32:937 (4) - Move slightly up so the slider starts from a straight line from where the previous slider ended
  6. 00:44:270 (1) - Make it perfectly horizontal?
  7. 00:52:270 (1) - Uneven beat spacing. Should be the same throughout an Easy diff :/
  8. 00:53:603 (3) - End at 00:54:270?
  9. 00:56:269 (4) - Make perfectly vertical?
  10. 01:16:103 (2) - Blanket this better?
[Sellen's Normal]
  1. 00:58:769 (3) - Can be confusing for new players. Try do what you did at 00:59:103
  2. Combo colours are inconsistent with other diffs MAJOR PROBLEM DESIGN-WISE
[KwaN's Hard]
  1. 00:42:104 (6,1) - Slight touchup for blanket
[Insane]
  1. 00:55:936 (5,1) - Slight touchup for blanket

I don't mod difficulties I can't FC so didn't do captin's or -Yuzuhira's :/

Thanks for modding! I changed my easy
Ipas
806 posts
Joined September 2013
Ipas
[Easy]
00:11:062 (5) - Weird slider :/ Change it to spinner or change it with another sliderstyle
01:29:519 - End of spinner

[Sellen's Normal]
00:45:270 (2) - Weird ._.
01:29:519 - End of spinner

[KwaN's Hard]
01:22:936 (1) - Move to x:248 y:48

Good :D I didn't find lot of problems here :D

[Insane]
00:07:082 (1) - Ooopss ._. Weird slider
00:27:604 (5) - Ctrl+D . Then, Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J
00:27:604 (5) - End of the slider
01:29:353 (8) - Change this to slider and finish it at 01:29:519

[-Yuzuriha's Insane]
00:19:604 (4) - Weird ._.
01:29:603 - Add note?

That's all
Good Luck
NcrzX
22 posts
Joined November 2014
NcrzX
Easy :
No Prob for me

Sellen's Normal :
no Prob for me

KwaN's Hard :
00:31:604(1,2) the sound does not fit into the music
00:57:936(2) Ctrl +G
00:59:936(6) ^
01:29:103(1) shorten a slider and add finish end 01:29:353

Insane :
01:29:103(7,8) I think a better spinner end

Yuzuriha's Insane :
00:35:604(2) Ctrl + G
01:29:186 i think a better spinner or slider end , you can remove the circle at 01:29:353

captin's Insane :
00:02:982(3) I think it is better to remove
00:30:937(1) I doubt it will snapped

scary diff
-Yuzuriha
574 posts
Joined March 2012
-Yuzuriha
Yuzuriha's Insane :
00:35:604(2) Ctrl + G OK
01:29:186 i think a better spinner or slider end , you can remove the circle at 01:29:353 Sorry


scary diff[/quote]

mod thanks! :)
-Yuzuriha
574 posts
Joined March 2012
-Yuzuriha
[-Yuzuriha's Insane]
00:19:604 (4) - Weird ._. Sorry no change
01:29:603 - Add note? no

That's all
Good Luck[/quote]

mod thanks! :)


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up plz! XD
Sem
51 posts
Joined July 2013
Sem
I'm a noob so my opinions shouldn't hold much value

General

Timing - Perfect as far as I can tell

These maps are fun d:^)

Insane

00:14:938 through 00:36:271 feels like there could be more notes in there, either way it's fine.

captin's Insane

Only thing I would say is that at 00:54:936 and 01:05:603 1.1x slider velocity felt smoother when I was playing.

-Yuzuriha's insane

maybe for the first slider have it bounce once? seems better

00:47:270 Circle 2, 1 - the spacing on these circles feels too close here

01:04:103 Slider 5 - I feel this should be moved left a bit, x108 or x112

01:19:436 Circle 1, 2, 3 - In my opinion, the circles should be distanced a bit farther, the same for 01:20:769

01:21:436 Slider 4 - It seems unnecessary
Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Aerous

NewIpas wrote:

[Easy]
00:11:062 (5) - Weird slider :/ Change it to spinner or change it with another sliderstyle Changed to spinner
01:29:519 - End of spinner Changed


Good Luck
Thanks for modding
Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Aerous

NcrzX wrote:

Easy :
No Prob for me

Insane :
01:29:103(7,8) I think a better spinner end I'll think about it
Thanks for modding
Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Aerous

RokYang wrote:

I'm a noob so my opinions shouldn't hold much value


Insane

00:14:938 through 00:36:271 feels like there could be more notes in there, either way it's fine.

No changed, I don't want to overmap it
Thanks for modding !
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
As requested

General:

  1. Inconsistency in combo colours (check Sellen's Normal)
  2. Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks (Since you don't have breaks, better turn it off in every diff)
  3. Inconsistency in Widescreen support
captin's Insane:

  1. 00:02:282 add whistle? there is a similar sound in the music
  2. swap NC 00:07:615 (1,2) - make more sense with the music in 00:07:862 (2) -
  3. 00:46:187 (1) - this circle is really weird to play, I'll suggest you to remove it instead
  4. 01:16:103 (1,1,2,1) - why the combo spam? o.o atleast I don't see a valid reason for this one 01:16:603 (1) -
-Yuzuriha's insane:

  1. why insane? is not better to keep consistency with the other diff names? Insane
  2. why the low OD? use OD8 instead, try to don't have OD -2 respect to AR
  3. 00:02:282 (2) - add whistle? is consistent with the music, plus it follow your hitsound pattern
  4. 00:05:882 ^
  5. 00:07:082 (1) - this clap sound really bad lol, mainly cuz there is nothing in the music that support it, whistle is a better option for this part.
  6. 00:07:082 (1) - a 1/1 slider fit better the song, also the slider end have a wrong snap, should end in 1/3 00:07:748 - 00:07:082 (1,1) - also ugly overlap :(
  7. 00:08:662 this finish sound really unnecesary, mainly cuz there are nothing in the music that suggest you this
  8. 00:11:862 (3,4) - why the extended sliders where the music is clearly in 1/2?
  9. 00:15:438 (2) - this should be snapped in 1/3 in 00:15:493 -
  10. 00:15:604 (3) - why this 1/4 slider that doesn't fit the music is merged in the 1/3 part?
  11. 00:16:937 (3,4) - similar as above, just use 1/2 sliders instead.. to be honest I really dislike those 1/4 extended sliders that doesn't fit the music. Mainly cuz you use both 1/4 and 1/3 together 00:22:271 (3,4) - , cause of this your diff is really uncomfortable to play
  12. 00:24:104 (6) - this should be snapped in 1/3, just add a single circle in 00:24:160
  13. 00:26:604 (4,5) - again this is wrongly snapped, the vocal is here 00:26:826 in 1/3
  14. 00:31:271 (2) - this should end in 1/3
  15. 00:32:104 (5,6,1) - this should be 1/3
  16. I'll stop modding this diff here, since this will become really long, pls check your snap there are a lot of wrongly snapped objects and try to don't overuse extended 1/4 sliders in the 1/3 part :(
Insane:

  1. 00:04:282 (4,5) - try to change the rhythm at this part, since the current one is not following the song nicely IMO, try this:
    SPOILER
  2. 00:04:682 - if you follow my previous suggestion add a NC here
  3. 00:07:082 (1) - similar problem as 00:04:282 (4,5) try this instead:
    SPOILER
  4. 00:15:438 (2) - this should be snapped in 1/3 in 00:15:493
  5. 00:19:521 add a circle following the vocals? even the hard diff got one here
  6. 00:20:937 (2,3) - try a single slider instead? fit better this part to me
  7. 00:26:771 (3) - this should be snapped in 1/3 at 00:26:826
  8. 00:28:271 add NC?
  9. 00:34:104 (2) - this should be 1/3
  10. 00:34:937 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is overmaped and wrongly snapped, this is how the music goesin this part:
    SPOILER
  11. 00:52:270 (1) - there is nothing in 1/4 but in 1/2, your stream should start in 00:52:770 - until 00:54:270
  12. 01:19:269 (2) - remove this and add two more repeats in 01:18:936 (1) -
  13. 01:21:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this is really overmapped
  14. 01:29:353 (8) - this should end in 01:29:519 -
  15. try to work more with your rhythms, also your comboing is really inconsistent, try to use one every 1 or 2 stanzas
KwaN's Hard:

  1. try to don't have OD -2 respect to AR, atleast use 6.5
  2. 00:15:438 (2) - this should be in 1/3 at 00:15:493
  3. 00:16:104 (4) - same as above, this should be snapped in 1/3 in 00:16:160
  4. 00:21:437 (5) - this should be 1/3 as well
  5. 00:24:104 (5) - same as above
  6. 00:26:771 (5) - ^
  7. 00:32:937 (2) - this sound kinda overmapped, try this instead:
    SPOILER
  8. 00:41:770 (5) - to be honest I don't know what are you following with this circle
  9. 00:43:604 (5) - just saying this will make people mad lol (combo breaker)
  10. 01:09:936 (3,4) - this will be really confused to play, since both sliders have a different amount of repeats, my suggestion is to remove 1 repeat from 01:10:269 (4) - and add a circle in 01:10:603 -
  11. 01:26:103 (2,3) - this will be really hard to play, since you are hiding a big amount of the slider shape
Sellen's Normal:

  1. 00:07:082 (1) - this single combo doesn't make sense to me.
  2. 00:23:937 (3) - actually this slider should end in 1/3 but this is a normal diff.. so add a single circle instead of the slider
  3. 00:26:771 (3) - this should be 1/3 as well, I'll suggest you to remove the circle instead
  4. 00:31:937 (2) - same as 00:23:937
  5. 00:34:104 (2) - this should be 1/3 as well, just remove the circle
  6. 00:44:270 (1,2) - blanket could be improved a bit
  7. 00:49:270 unnecesary NC
  8. 00:54:270 (1) - too soon after a spinner for a normal diff
  9. 01:08:269 (1) - this slider is fine, but I feel you can fit the rhythm even better:
    SPOILER
  10. 01:21:103 (2) - unsnapped, check aimod
  11. 01:29:519 the spinner should end here: 01:29:519
Easy:

  1. HP 2 and OD 2 is better for this diff
  2. 00:07:862 (1,2) - this looks a bit ugly IMO, you cand do a nice blanket there:
    SPOILER
  3. 00:20:271 (1,2) - same as above
  4. 00:25:604 (1,2) - same here too, seems like you have problems when blanking, hereis a tip, use the approach circle of the next or previous object to make a perfect blanket, here is an example:
    your current one:
    SPOILER
    how it should be (see how the approach circle of 2 help me to make it nicely):
    SPOILER
  5. 00:30:937 (1,2) - blanket can be improved here as well, use my tip for this and the next ones
  6. 01:10:269 (1) - this single combo is totally unnecessary
  7. 01:11:603 (2,3) - this is really hard to play for an easy diff, remove 01:12:603 (3) - and add repeat in this slider 01:11:603 (2) -
  8. 01:20:269 this is touching the HP bar
  9. 01:29:519 the spinner should end here: 01:29:519
GL with this :3
truonant
408 posts
Joined October 2013
truonant
Hello M4M~ from your que

Easy
00:07:862 (1) –better blanket, otherwise the flow is weird
00:20:271 (1) – better blanket
00:25:604 (1) - ^
00:26:937 (3) - ^
00:30:937 (1) - ^
00:53:270 (2) – delete note

Normal
00:17:937 (1) – remove the repeat slider and just use 1/1 slider and add circle at 00:17:604 –
00:22:937 (1) – better blanket – centre point too close
00:24:937 (5) – shorten this slider to 00:25:271 –
00:25:604 – start a slider here for emphasis on sustained vocal + downbeat
00:34:104 (2) – looks kinda strange, move x384 y352 for better flow

insane
Hitsounding could use improvements. Random claps?
00:56:936 (3) –
00:57:603 (1) –
00:58:269 (3) –
00:59:603 (1) –
00:59:936 (2) –
01:08:269 –
01:08:936 –
01:09:603 –
01:11:603 –
01:12:269 –
01:12:936 –
01:14:269 –
01:17:603 -
01:23:436 (3) –
01:24:269 (6) –
01:26:936 (1) –
00:07:862 – start a note here for emphasis
00:15:438 (2) - note doesn't fit
00:19:437 (5) - ^
00:34:104 (2) - ^
00:56:103 (1) - blanket
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