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Spiralmouth - Uka Uka Ice Creature Fight

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Senbon
480 posts
Joined September 2008
Senbon
[Easy-Normal]

00:29:18 (1) - Unecessary jump
00:47:15 (1) - Remove new combo
01:09:99 (1) - ^
01:13:87 (1) - ^
01:14:85 (1) - Maybe just change end to hitcicrle?
01:21:65 (1) - Remove new combo
01:26:99 (1,2,3) - I don't get these hitsounds
01:29:42 (1) - Remove new combo
01:45:94 (1) - ^

[Overall]

Nice song choice. ^^ Sliders need a lot of work, a lot of the shapes don't look good and take up a lot of space. Placement seems a little messy too... remember to distance snap everything and find clean patterns and arrangements to work with. I know it will be a great map once more difficulties are put out and everything is fixed.
tieff
Featured Artist
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Joined March 2009
tieff
[Easy-Normal]
00:14:12 (3,4) - Spacing.
01:06:10 (3) - New combo.
01:08:11 (4) - Move it on white tick 01:08:04.
01:34:77 (2,3) - Spacing.
01:41:32 (3) - New combo.

Star.
Call me when you finish other diffs.
GbL
332 posts
Joined February 2009
GbL
Dont see anything wrong~

(Só acho que você deve aumentar o HP pro sexto traço)

Star, nice.
Mismagius
9,266 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
Mismagius
bump~
eee
692 posts
Joined January 2008
eee
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Heath_old
9 posts
Joined April 2009
Heath_old
This beatmap only works with hitsounds?

Because i like to play without hitsounds, and i can't find a rhythm to follow in this beatmap without them :?
Mismagius
9,266 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
Mismagius
I think Hard Difficulty works only with hitsounds.
Easy-Normal can be played normally, but at some parts you will be "wtf?" D:
heintsi
1,126 posts
Joined January 2009
heintsi
Your best map.. (and only?)

was fun to play :)
starring this.. i found one stack as odd but i'll point it out later.
Mismagius
9,266 posts
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Topic Starter
Mismagius
Thanks Heintsi. ;)
Linox_old
122 posts
Joined March 2009
Linox_old
Nice mapa xD

*stars*
ztrot
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ztrot
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Mismagius
9,266 posts
Joined July 2008
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Mismagius

ztrot wrote:

Hmm offset might need about -10 or -5

neat map but seems a bit over mapped
I'm trying with offset 7828, it looks good.
GbL
332 posts
Joined February 2009
GbL
Don't see anything wrong in Hard diff, maybe need decrease volume only. :~
GbL
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GbL
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Mismagius
9,266 posts
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Mismagius
Thanks GbL. ^^
[apesar de eu ter insistido :P ]
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
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anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
Easy-Normal
SPOILER

No visible faults.

It very bland, while not being a fun map.
Maybe if you could add more beats, while keeping it "easy".

Hard
SPOILER

00:23:610 : Change [This] into [this].

Many parts need this. This dif. is better than Easy-Normal, but it's still not a good map by any means.
Mismagius
9,266 posts
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Mismagius

Loogiesquared wrote:

Easy-Normal
SPOILER

No visible faults.

It very bland, while not being a fun map.
Maybe if you could add more beats, while keeping it "easy".

Hard
SPOILER

00:23:610 : Change [This] into [this].

Many parts need this. This dif. is better than Easy-Normal, but it's still not a good map by any means.
@Easy-Normal: I think that i don't need more beats. It's good for now.
Hard: The rythm gets 'destroyed' for me... I think it's only a sound lag, but i will check it later.
Kerensa
167 posts
Joined January 2009
Kerensa
hello :)

Easy-Normal:
00:13:18 [2] Move down one tiny square. then one small square to the right.
00:27:49 [3]i think you should make the gap bigger. atleast 4 squares.
01:45:22 [5]move 3 tiny squares to the right.
01:49:11 [1] move one tiny square down.
01:51:05 [3]same thing as ^

overall :
+ the spcaing isn't constant.
+ i come across beats where the ticks are the same distance but the allignment is differnt.
+ you should keep it either 3 square apart for the white-tick to white-tick beats and 4 squares.

Hard:
01:02:35 [2] wanna connect them?
01:10:25 [*] break? maybe? [sug]
01:24:58 [6] put it in the dead centre.
01:33:56 [*] delete break then re-add.
01:41:34 [1]move one tiny square up
01:46:44 [8] move up one tiny square

overall:
+ mhmm..... pretty much the same thing in normal.. but.. i think the pattern needs to be more constant. like allignment wise. - not really much a a bother this part.

good map ^^

star star for you you ^^

haisha_
Mismagius
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Mismagius

haisha_ wrote:

hello :)

Easy-Normal:
00:13:18 [2] Move down one tiny square. then one small square to the right.
00:27:49 [3]i think you should make the gap bigger. atleast 4 squares.
01:45:22 [5]move 3 tiny squares to the right.
01:49:11 [1] move one tiny square down.
01:51:05 [3]same thing as ^ fixed

overall :
+ the spcaing isn't constant.
+ i come across beats where the ticks are the same distance but the allignment is differnt. i think i should solve it, but i can't find anything @_@
+ you should keep it either 3 square apart for the white-tick to white-tick beats and 4 squares. i think it's good for normal spacing, but this is a little bit 'easy' too.

Hard:
01:02:35 [2] wanna connect them? how?
01:10:25 [*] break? maybe? [sug] i think this is not good
01:24:58 [6] put it in the dead centre. sure
01:33:56 [*] delete break then re-add. sure
01:41:34 [1]move one tiny square up
01:46:44 [8] move up one tiny square sure²

overall:
+ mhmm..... pretty much the same thing in normal.. but.. i think the pattern needs to be more constant. like allignment wise. - not really much a a bother this part. oh, i'm pretty bad at this. :s

good map ^^

star star for you you ^^

haisha_
ty for modding, kudosu for you :3
Luneko
842 posts
Joined June 2009
Luneko
Great map :3
Star~
zozozofun
zozozofun
Make this get ranked fast i can fc both
thought of an insane?
ignorethis
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Joined August 2008
ignorethis
Seriously this song is bad D:

01:56:646 - Think you can add a silenced note here? Both Normal and Hard.

Star'd :3
Mismagius
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Mismagius
Thanks, kudosu for you ;)

btw, @zozozofun: Hard looks like Insane at some parts, that's because I don't make a Insane diff.
Shinde
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707 posts
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Shinde
Hard
I didn't find anything 'wrong' with it, but it wasn't very fun to play, imo. In my opinion being the keywords. It's like 95% 1/8th streams and stacks, with a couple sliders that aren't doing much tossed in.
On a sidenote, bump your silence green line at the end up. You need to put them before the note is hit, otherwise if someone hits it early, it'll still make noise. Same applies to Easy-Normal.

Easy-Normal
I'd just rename this to Easy.
This one was actually more fun to play to me, which suprised me.
00:40:85 (3) - Consider moving this up a little. It's always weird to me when notes are hanging off, or right on the edge of the screen. The latter being the case here.

I'd recommend making a Normal+. Easy's almost Normal, and Hard's almost Insane, I think? Also, don't be afraid to map non-prominent beats. For Ex. 00:10:97 (5,1) on Hard, I could throw three notes between here and create a pattern and it'd work. I think you need to apply some of the creativity in Easy to Hard.

It also needs Tags and a Source, don't forget to add those.
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
Boa :]
Esse mapa tem algumas coisas pra "modar" mas agora to meio sem tempo.

Estrelinha para fazer uma criança feliz :D (E por que o mapa é bom xD)
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
ouranhshc
[url]Normal +[/url]
00:19:238 - remove (IMO)
01:32:841 - re-insert break

Easy
00:23:610 - start on white tick before it (IMO)
00:25:553 - start on whtie tick before it
00:27:254 - ^
00:31:383 - ^
00:33:327 - ^
00:35:270 - ^

Hard
too many whistles
Mismagius
9,266 posts
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Mismagius

ouranhshc wrote:

[url]Normal +[/url]
00:19:238 - remove (IMO) - huh... no.
01:32:841 - re-insert break - sure

Easy
00:23:610 - start on white tick before it (IMO)
00:25:553 - start on whtie tick before it
00:27:254 - ^
00:31:383 - ^
00:33:327 - ^
00:35:270 - ^ - @all: WTF? sounds bad for me

Hard
too many whistles - I just used them at one part...
btw kudosu for the break ^^
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
just pointing it out, do u wanna add a new preview point? idk, just putting out there for ya

Easy
Too easy
nothing wrong

Easy - Normal
01:10:02 (4) - hmm this seems to be a jump, either space it closer, or add a new combo to this note, or add new combo to 3
Edit: sorry, I didn't notice this diff ceases to exist, I had it already downloaded for some odd reason

Normal+
nothing wrong within the map, but this offset is different from the others, that should be like that
ooops wrong diff, well i told u over irc, this diff is okay ^^

Hard
Nothing, best diff
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Hmmm... there will be a lot of work to do...

Easy
[General] ... bigger circles?
00:10:97 (3) - whistle the slider and finish on its end
00:44:25 (2,3) - whistle the beat and the slider's end

I'll check the other modes later, but until then... try to fix the overall beat spacing of the song...
Some of the beats are VERY far from the others... >.<
Anyway, a star 4 you ^^
xDionysian
24 posts
Joined June 2009
xDionysian
[Easy]
01:30:89 (1) - I missed this the first time because I didn't see it up there.
No problems playing it over again with the mouse, but kind of an annoying jump on the tablet, what with it being easy.

[Normal+]
01:12:43 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too steep a drop in volume on hitsounds. Sounds weird.
01:16:32 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:28:71 (1,2,3) - ^

[Hard]
00:14:86 (7,8) - Claps? Sounds kind of flat
01:17:78 (1) - Why so far awayyyyyyy it's probably so lonely. Move it back near the center.
01:56:64 (1) - Move up a gridspace so it's centered.

But that last one's more of a nazimod

Don't rely on the gridsnap so vehemently in Normal+ and Hard. People playing those are capable of taking on a jump or two.
Needs more work, but pretty good so far.
rust45
1,088 posts
Joined May 2009
rust45
[Easy]
You don't have source or tags here.
Please lower the Drain rate by at least two ticks, remember, newbs will be playing the map, not people who can S this first try.

[Normal]
I/4ths, even only triplets, are seriously not suited for a normal.

[Hard]
01:02:47 (2) - New combo, this is so the HP isn't raped for such a long slider then forcing a player to do that with a good HP boost.
Mismagius
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Topic Starter
Mismagius
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arien666
6,290 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[Easy]
00:17:78(3) - Move 1 grid down
00:45:68(4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?

[Normal+]
00:53:73(5) - Move 1 grid up
00:58:10(6) - Move 1 grid right
01:13:40(5) - ^
01:16:32(1) - Move 1 grid left
(2)~(5) - ^

[Hard]
01:22:39(4) - Move 1 grid right(Use 3 Grid level)
01:22:63(5) - ^


Good map XD
I hope it will be ranked

STAR XD
Luneko
842 posts
Joined June 2009
Luneko
Hey,hey :D
I finished my map would be cool if you add it
You can edit it to your likin if you want to

Download: Spiralmouth - Uka Uka Ice Creature Fight (Blue Dragon) [KillerRind's Hard].osu
Armin
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Armin
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KatanAnime
58 posts
Joined November 2008
KatanAnime
All diffs are fine.(atleast I think they are).Killer Ruds map is really not normal so u can leave hard because:
1.Very small circles.
2.Big jumps.
So i guess that's it.I personally don't like the song,but ...
Star! Good luck on getting it ranked.
Mismagius
9,266 posts
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Mismagius

KatanAnime wrote:

All diffs are fine.(atleast I think they are).Killer Ruds map is really not normal so u can leave hard because:
1.Very small circles.
2.Big jumps.
So i guess that's it.I personally don't like the song,but ...
Star! Good luck on getting it ranked.
Thanks, but i put Normal/Hard because star rating is like 3,5 while Normal+ have 4 stars.
Mukku
1,434 posts
Joined February 2009
Mukku
Found nothing to complain about :d

Great!
whymeman
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whymeman
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~


[KillerRind's Normal/Hard]

00:44:25 (3,4) - When you compare this to 00:16:08 (1,4), it doesn't seem equal.
00:49:35 (6) - Not even under (3) unless this was intentional?
00:52:51 (4,5,6) - Not lined up unless this was intentional.
00:55:43 (2,3) - Too close together.
01:13:65 (5,6) - Too close toegher as well.
01:34:78 (2,3,4) - Not lined up with the slider end unless this was also intentional.
01:45:47 (2,3) - Not lined up unless this was intentional.
01:51:78 (7,1) - Too far appart.

Make sure to double check the spacing in this map. If the misalignments in the map was not intentional, then please look it fixing it. Also, keep an eye on the drain as well. It seems to be slightly aggressive on a difficulty like this.

[Normal+]

00:53:00 (3,4) - Too close together.
00:57:37 (5,6,7) - Double check the spacing here. It doesn't seem equal.
00:58:34 (7,1,2) - ^
01:03:20 (2,3,4) - ^
01:49:11 (1,2) - Not lined up together unless it was intentional.

[Hard]

00:56:88 (1,2,3,4,5) - Just a suggestion, but maybe (1) and (5) should have the clap hitsound?
01:52:76 (1,2,3,4,5) - This sounds a bit odd. Maybe removing (2) can make this sound neater?


Overall: Not bad overall. Just needs some touchups though [KillerRind's Normal/Hard] difficulty was kinda backwards seeing that is easier than [Normal+]. Make sure to double check into the map setup to see that it is reasonable as well. When the map is fixed up and updated, forum PM me to check into it again.
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
Neat map, starred. =)

Only thing I noticed was that the last timing section on Hard should be moved up a 1/2 beat.
Mismagius
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Mismagius
Fixed, whymeman and Kytoxid. :)
whymeman
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whymeman
Everything seems to check out fine now so i'll drop my star in then.
Gens
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Gens
[Easy]
  1. I wonder why this difficulty has a different background...
00:58:34 (1) - I'd really appreciate if this spinner finished 1 beat earlier.

[KillerRind's Normal/Hard]
  1. AFAIK you need to put "KillerRind" on the tags.
  2. Stupid Star Rating, placing this difficulty below [Normal+]. =[[/list]
[Normal+]

01:51:78 (3) - I'd totally evade making these kind of sliders. They look so... unrankable. Besides, it's not pretty.

~ ~ ~

Everything else looks good.
Last edited by Gens , edited 2 times in total.
alvisto
881 posts
Joined April 2009
alvisto
Can you fix this pic's resolution somehow ? -> Crashtwin2.jpg

NORMAL +
00:19:48 (6) - Try this on next white tick ?
00:41:58 (3) - Try slider starts at the next red tick
00:50:574 - You can insert a note here
01:55:91 (2,3) - Suggestion : Remove claps ?

EASY
00:19:480 - Insert a note ?
00:50:574 - ^

HARD
00:19:480 - A note ?
00:42:800 - ^
00:50:574 - ^
01:45:22 (1) - Whistle ?

KILLER RIND'S NORMAL
00:50:088 - Map here like this part ? 00:42:31 (1,2,3,4)
01:53:73 (2) - imo, clap at end of sldier is not suitable
Lissette
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Lissette
Hi!

Easy
01:13:89 (2) - new combo?
01:15:35 - ^
01:25:55 (5) - ^
01:29:44 (4) - ^
01:34:78 (2) - ^

Normal+
00:19:23 (6) - move to the next white tick

Hard
00:43:04 - add note?

Star!
Jarby
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Joined August 2008
Jarby
Normal+:

00:42:67 (4,5) - Stack on slider end.
01:28:71 - Move inherited section 1/4 back.

KillerRind's Normal:

01:10:00 (6) - Spacing.
01:34:29 - Silence end.

Easy:

01:19:23 (1) - Spacing. Sort of.
01:43:28 (3) - New combo.
01:45:22 (3) - New combo.
01:51:05 (3) - New combo.
01:53:00 (3) - New combo.
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
KillerRind's Normal+:

01:08:06 (2) - Not stacked.

Normal+:

01:28:71 - Move inherited section 1/4 back.

Don't kudosu this.
MaxwellDemon
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MaxwellDemon
Well, in addition to JarJar's new addition, I also want to ask you of this:

[Normal+]

00:58:34 (7,2) - Slider whistle for THAT long sounds ugly. ;_;

[Hard]

It started sounding a little like a clapping march after 00:39:52... can you reduce the amount of claps a little bit? XD

EDIT: Oh yeah, and a star to boost the priority for now. XD
EDIT: Looked through it again after fix... bubble'd~ XD
Jarby
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Joined August 2008
Jarby
Enjoy your streams.
DeathxShinigami
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DeathxShinigami
KillerRind's Normal+ was brutal for a difficulty. Reminds me of MB777's Hrd for Thnks fr th mmrs.
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