K2J wrote:

[Easy-Normal]
00:27:48 (3) - Hmm... very obviously a copy of #2. Tweak it a bit.
00:31:36 (1,2) - Move these so that the ending points of each meet. You might need to turn off grid and distance snap temporarily.
00:47:21 (1) - Re-snap
01:06:16 (3,4) - ^
01:09:99 (1,1), others similar - I wouldn't put the spinner so close to the preceding circle...
01:29:48 (1) - Re-snap

Overall, it's a pretty good start, and I look forward to seeing this map further down the line.

EDIT: I'm a stickler, but could you capitalize the "f" in "fight" in the title? I think it would look better...

K2J wrote:

Oh, sorry. You have two sliders. Each slider has two points (circles): a starting point and an ending point. The ending point of each slider (the endpoint) are very close together. I suggest having them in the exact same position.

What you have:

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What I suggest:

[attachment=0:810fa]screenshot128.png[/attachment:810fa]

I hope that clears it up. If not, send me a message.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

01:10:41 (1) - I would rather have this and the next few spinners follow the lyrics better to get rid of the eight snap and to make the beginning of the slider have a more comprehensible start

ztrot wrote:

Hmm offset might need about -10 or -5

neat map but seems a bit over mapped

Loogiesquared wrote:

Easy-Normal

SPOILER

No visible faults.

It very bland, while not being a fun map.
Maybe if you could add more beats, while keeping it "easy".

Hard

SPOILER

00:23:610 : Change [This] into [this].

Many parts need this. This dif. is better than Easy-Normal, but it's still not a good map by any means.

haisha_ wrote:

hello

Easy-Normal:
00:13:18 [2] Move down one tiny square. then one small square to the right.
00:27:49 [3]i think you should make the gap bigger. atleast 4 squares.
01:45:22 [5]move 3 tiny squares to the right.
01:49:11 [1] move one tiny square down.
01:51:05 [3]same thing as ^ fixed

overall :
+ the spcaing isn't constant.
+ i come across beats where the ticks are the same distance but the allignment is differnt. i think i should solve it, but i can't find anything @_@
+ you should keep it either 3 square apart for the white-tick to white-tick beats and 4 squares. i think it's good for normal spacing, but this is a little bit 'easy' too.

Hard:
01:02:35 [2] wanna connect them? how?
01:10:25 [*] break? maybe? [sug] i think this is not good
01:24:58 [6] put it in the dead centre. sure
01:33:56 [*] delete break then re-add. sure
01:41:34 [1]move one tiny square up
01:46:44 [8] move up one tiny square sure²

overall:
+ mhmm..... pretty much the same thing in normal.. but.. i think the pattern needs to be more constant. like allignment wise. - not really much a a bother this part. oh, i'm pretty bad at this. :s

good map ^^

star star for you you ^^

haisha_

ouranhshc wrote:

[url]Normal +[/url]
00:19:238 - remove (IMO) - huh... no.
01:32:841 - re-insert break - sure

Easy
00:23:610 - start on white tick before it (IMO)
00:25:553 - start on whtie tick before it
00:27:254 - ^
00:31:383 - ^
00:33:327 - ^
00:35:270 - ^ - @all: WTF? sounds bad for me

Hard
too many whistles - I just used them at one part...

KatanAnime wrote:

All diffs are fine.(atleast I think they are).Killer Ruds map is really not normal so u can leave hard because:
1.Very small circles.
2.Big jumps.
So i guess that's it.I personally don't like the song,but ...
Star! Good luck on getting it ranked.

1. I wonder why this difficulty has a different background...

1. AFAIK you need to put "KillerRind" on the tags.
2. Stupid Star Rating, placing this difficulty below [Normal+]. =[[/list]