Tess wrote:
Well, looking at all your points, I don't think you quite grasped my statement. Then again, looking back at it, I think it was more of an in-joke with myself than anything else. I'll explain everything though, just so it doesn't look like I'm randomly spouting crap without any thought behind it. I'll start by replying to your points.
Amphetamine wrote:
Honestly, the only way this thread could work is if it were as objective as possible, and even then, it's still going to contain some subjectivity.
Tess wrote:
Well, how do you define objective? You say "as objective as possible", but how would you even measure said objectivity? Are you aware of how objective this thread is being? If so, could you explain how much that is, and how you got to that amount?
If you go for the dictionary definition (people rarely do), which is, quote, "(of a person or their judgment) not influenced by personal feelings or opinions in considering and representing facts.", then that would be false on both accounts, because all we can do on this forum is share our personal experiences and I doubt that a majority of the users on this forum knows of the facts that drive their subjective experiences. On top of that, you wouldn't really be able to measure that. You either are objective, or you're not.
Oh no, you did not just go there. You brought out the dictionary on me. Low blow man, low blow. However, this actually is the reason why I said, "as objective
as possible." Due to the fact that objectivity is not something that can be measured, nor present, for that matter, within a forum that is almost wholly based on subjective posts and responses. I said objective
as possible in order to show my understanding of the fact that it will not be 100% objective. Point being, you kind of agreed with me inadvertently.
Amphetamine wrote:
You should understand that rhetorical writings do not work if it's all, "I say this is this way because it works for me so it works for everyone. I'm right, do what i say." Simply leaving it at that without backing it up with at least some kind of hypothetical or real proof is what would be unwise.
Tess wrote:
Okay, step on your breaks there, Sonic. What about my post implies that I don't understand that baseless (Not rhetorical, your example had nothing to do with rhetoric at all) statements do not work under pretty much any circumstances except for sheer luck around brainless listeners? I'm not sure where you're taking that assumption from, so, if you could elaborate, that would be much appreciated. I do see what you're saying about me not backing up my statement, but perhaps I wasn't trying to give advice with my post, and rather to spark thought and discussion. Ever considered that? If so, what would be wrong with my statement? You wrote out quite a complete post with fully formulated points that you put quite some serious thought behind, and now I'm replying to said post as maturely as I can - wouldn't that mean that I've achieved my goal? If I'm overlooking something here, I'd be glad to see it pointed out, so I can prevent it in the future.
Actually, the rhetorical writing alluded to was the OP. I was stating that, had the thread not provided some form of statements of objectivity in its points of advice, it would not work. I used said "baseless statement" in order to provide some insight in to what I meant by the necessity of objectivity. The statement you called baseless was my example of a statement based purely on subjective thought. Basically what I'm saying is that, if the thread followed this subjective, as you called it, baseless, train of thought, without offering up any kind of, or facade of a solid basis--subjectivity disguised as objectivity through the use of common sense questions and statements that the reader can make sense of through their own thought process, then the impact, as well as the credibility, completely breaks down.
As for you stating, "I do see what you're saying about me not backing up my statement, but perhaps I wasn't trying to give advice with my post, and rather to spark thought and discussion. Ever considered that?" I don't quite understand this logic. I don't understand how a statement that isn't backed up by any indication of thought could ever spark a discussion considering the fact that I have no idea what you mean. If I understand your logic correctly, I could say "The ephemeral box is one of short time" and expect to spark discussion from that. I'm pretty sure any discussion arising from that statement would be along the lines of others saying, "What the hell is this person talking about?"
As to not confuse you, as i have earlier with my other baseless statement, I'll expand upon this. If I, nor anybody else, knows what you're trying to say with such a vague statement then how could it ever generate any discussion. "It's not wise to give objective advice to subjective players with arbitrary skillsets" What's your point? Is it that giving advice in general is not wise, is it that just objective advice is not wise, is it that because of arbitrary skillsets and being subjective learners that objective advice couldn't work? If so, wouldn't that mean that no advice could help regardless of being objective or subjective and that advice period is unwise? My point being that, if you don't clearly state what you're trying to say, I'll take it as I perceive it, and because of that, I may misconstrue your meaning and end up having to type a 10 page essay in responses to you going back and explaining what you really meant after the fact.
As for the last sardonic statement of "didn't I achieve my goal" let's try to keep things real. I feel as though you've taken it that I've somehow tried to discredit your intelligence, and if so, let's just end that right here. Nothing I said was against you personally.
Amphetamine wrote:
What's more important is not so much whether or not what's being said is objective, but rather, how it's presented so that the reader will subjectively take in the information in favor of the writer.
Tess wrote:
The reader always takes information in subjectively, though. However, I'm not going to be petty - I do see what you're trying to say. The thing is, it's still not a very effective approach. You can attune objective statements to the subjectivity of a listener, sure. However, the key word in that sentence is "a". That only really, truly works in one-on-one teaching - and this is assuming that this thread contains objective statements, which it does not. Only attempted objectivity, to further complicate things. If this makes you wonder why my post says "objective advice" - I was referring to advice presented as objective, there. As in "To get better, do A, B, and C. Good luck.". That's objective. That's a tutorial, an instruction, which doesn't work for this game. That's something that works when it's "To open a door, either twist the knob, pull the handle, or blow it the fuck up.". What makes one player get better makes the other player get worse, you can't write out a tutorial on how to get better because it would only work for a select amount of people. In fact, that was the entire point of my statement.
First and foremost, I said take in information subjectively
in favor of the writer. Naturally the reader always takes in information subjectively, however, they can take a position against an argument, or, they can take a position for the argument. I was trying to high-light the taking in of information, naturally subjective, that leads them to agree with the writer. That would be why I didn't end the sentence with the word "subjectively."
The way I take this is that you're agreeing with me. I said that it could only work if it were objective. Yes, osu! is not a game that can be broken up into steps as simple as opening up a door, that's obviously true. With that being said, I don't understand how attempted objectivity could further complicate anything. If anything, providing as much objectivity as possible would be nothing but beneficial to this argument. You said "You can attune objective statements to the subjectivity of a listener, sure. However, the key word in that sentence is "
a". That only really, truly works in one-on-one teaching - and this is assuming that this thread contains objective statements, which it does not."
Is this true? Does this kind of advice only work when being given one-on-one? How do you know? Let's say we live in a world where that is a proven fact. If so, then wouldn't trying to emulate that be the best course of action when giving advice regardless of whatever medium was being used? I don't think giving advice changes all that much between one-on-one and writer to reader. Sure, in the real world, you can edit your statements and attune them to one specific person based on their personality and the reactions of that person, but is that really something you can't do when writing to a specific audience? Do you not think that the OP is attuned to a certain audience? Keywords being "a" and "audience" meaning that it is written this way because it seems like the most effective way to get the point across to the intended
general audience. I'm just gonna leave it there and leave the thinking up to you.
Amphetamine wrote:
To wrap this up: statements of objectivity in an argument creates credibility for the writer because it represents them having tangible evidence(regardless of existence)
Tess wrote:
Providing evidence along with your statement makes you more credible, yes. What kind of evidence would a "GUYS THIS IS TURLY THE METHOD WITH HOW YOU GET BETTER >>>THE REAL DEAL RIGHT HERE<<<" thread OP have to provide that would not only convince the reader before they tried it for themselves, but also work for every single player that tries it? Because that's what a fact is, you know. Gravity is there for everyone. 2 is always more than 1. A feather is lighter than a truck, everywhere. If your method doesn't work for everyone, it's a subjective method, and presenting it objectively is wrong and only leads to misunderstandings, which people are quite good at causing.
If I'm getting what you mean, you're basically saying that trying to market a subjective argument as an objective one will only confuse others. Sure, that may be the case if I was arguing an objective matter, that contained proven facts, in my own subjective way. That's called tricking people. That can only happen if what you're saying can be proven wrong or right with factual data. You could argue that a red car is better than a yellow car. That's subjective. You could tell them that red cars are better because they get pulled over less than yellow cars. That could be objective or subjective. You vehemently refuse show them the data behind your statement that red cars get pulled over less. Now you're untrustworthy because your statement that could be considered either objective or subjective is now compromised and looks more subjective.
Basically what I'm saying is that not providing facts, for an argument based on facts, could indeed confuse(trick) people, sure. But does arguing something that can't be proven and backing yourself up as much as possible have the same effect? Say I argue that it's best to study while listening to music. Could that be proven, most likely not, and if so, probably fairly inconclusively. Why is that? It's because everybody is different. In order to convince others that my argument is correct, I'll try to back it up with subjective statements that sound credible, basically making seemingly objective statements out of subjective thoughts.
Amphetamine wrote:
credibility increases the affinity for the readers to agree with the writer
Tess wrote:
But that I agree with you doesn't mean that what you said will help me~
I never said it would help you. Have a nice day?
Amphetamine wrote:
and also, increases thought on their end on what is being said on whatever topic.
Tess wrote:
This didn't make sense to me.
When someone finds something more real and something they can relate to, they'll be more likely to question it and how it affects them because it is relevant.
Amphetamine wrote:
You want to know the secret though...
This entire thread is subjective advice.
Guess it worked, eh?
Tess wrote:
And down the drain goes your entire post, which makes me pretty sad. It was a good post, fun to reply to, yet you disagree with everything you've said with your little "secret". First you say that the only way this thread could work is if it were as objective as possible. Then you go on to say that said objective information should be presented in such a way that it can be interpreted subjectively, by everyone, so that it can work for as many people as possible. Then you go on to say that objectivity in an argument creates credibility for the writer, and makes the reader more eager to agree with him and think about stuff.
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No. Actually, this is where your post goes entirely down the drain. What you seem to have not grasped is the fact that I told what I said was subjective for a reason. You said "giving objective advice to subjective players with arbitrary skillsets blah blah blah." Point being that the
advice comes across as objective although it is actually not. Like I said, what's more important is how the writing comes across to the reader, and judging from your first comment, it came across as objective.
Now you can kick and scream and argue all you want, however, they're your words. You can say "oh well i was just trying to say that so(insert excuse here" be my guest. My point is that the post is marketed in a way that makes subjective advice look more objective to readers, and as such, is more relevant to the reader, is more credible, is more relatable, and creates food for thought on the subject at hand in an organized way that makes it look more like it's based on fact.
That was my point for saying it needs to be as objective as possible. Regardless of whether it helps anyone is another matter entirely, however, you seem to be arguing over something so trivial as objectivity and subjectivity so vehemently that I felt it would be almost insulting to not respond. Truthfully, we both are. What's the point in arguing over a misunderstanding?
You don't have to agree with me, you can think anything you want. I appreciate other schools of thought, however, I like to see the reasons behind them. I appreciate you taking the time to write all this out, because honestly, it was pretty fun arguing with you (psst. don't take that the wrong way) It's rare to find someone who actually makes me think this much. Well played sir. (handhshake)