1. 00:35:627 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - these seem surprisingly large compared to the music here and to the later section of this 02:18:627 - , would suggest cutting back on these jumps a bit
2. 00:48:770 (3) - try a ctrl+g on this, feels more fluid, and this spot doesn't feel like a large jump to me anyways
3. 00:56:913 (1) - not seeing the need for this NC. it'd be a good idea to cut back a bit on NC spam for a map like this, since they'll force the drain higher than it should be. of course i'm not saying get rid of it all, but some of these don't really need to be here, mainly the 2 1/2 slider groups
4. 00:57:913 (2) - I get why you'd want to have this as long relax point, but imo putting a little stress on these heavy red ticks, especially the finish on 00:58:484 - , is more important. try at least putting clicks on them like 02:40:341 -
5. 01:40:913 - to me it just seems like you randomly decided to go with half bar phrases for your NC pattern here, and then switched back at an equally random time.
6. 02:23:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the spacing of this stream doesn't fit well with the difficulty of the section around it, try reducing the spacing just a bit
7. 02:26:627 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - here it seems like the rhythm should be switched from what it currently is, during the 1/2 sliders you have a clear melody on all four beats, and then where the circles are is just drum filler
8. 03:29:770 (2,4) - would highly recommend unstacking these two just a bit, since they overlap perfectly even in play right now
9. 03:31:055 (2) - swap for two circles? to hit the strong vocal note on 03:31:198 -
10. 04:42:055 (4,5) - sounds like you're missing 1/4 in the drum here, might be cooler to have a bit more difficulty here by mapping it
11. 05:12:484 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - this is so easy to get a random miss on. not saying you have to change, but this may make people sad lol

captin1 wrote:

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1. 00:35:627 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - these seem surprisingly large compared to the music here and to the later section of this 02:18:627 - , would suggest cutting back on these jumps a bit Let's see if I did this right.
2. 00:48:770 (3) - try a ctrl+g on this, feels more fluid, and this spot doesn't feel like a large jump to me anyways Remapped this part.
3. 00:56:913 (1) - not seeing the need for this NC. it'd be a good idea to cut back a bit on NC spam for a map like this, since they'll force the drain higher than it should be. of course i'm not saying get rid of it all, but some of these don't really need to be here, mainly the 2 1/2 slider groups This is used to indicate that 00:56:341 (1,2) and 00:56:913 (1,2) are separate patterns. It would be weird for them to be on the same combo.
4. 00:57:913 (2) - I get why you'd want to have this as long relax point, but imo putting a little stress on these heavy red ticks, especially the finish on 00:58:484 - , is more important. try at least putting clicks on them like 02:40:341 - ...Did stuff I think?
5. 01:40:913 - to me it just seems like you randomly decided to go with half bar phrases for your NC pattern here, and then switched back at an equally random time. Okay, I guess this one doesn't need an NC.
6. 02:23:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the spacing of this stream doesn't fit well with the difficulty of the section around it, try reducing the spacing just a bit Sure.
7. 02:26:627 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - here it seems like the rhythm should be switched from what it currently is, during the 1/2 sliders you have a clear melody on all four beats, and then where the circles are is just drum filler ^
8. 03:29:770 (2,4) - would highly recommend unstacking these two just a bit, since they overlap perfectly even in play right now Okay then, since a few people already complained about this.
9. 03:31:055 (2) - swap for two circles? to hit the strong vocal note on 03:31:198 - Done.
10. 04:42:055 (4,5) - sounds like you're missing 1/4 in the drum here, might be cooler to have a bit more difficulty here by mapping it ^
11. 05:12:484 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - this is so easy to get a random miss on. not saying you have to change, but this may make people sad lol Well I think this is the best pattern for the music and... yeah ):

1. 00:12:055 (64,65,66,67,68) - try to follow 00:09:770 (50,51,52,53,54) - this pattern to make the better consistency
2. 00:06:627 (31) - remove. although there is a drum sound, but this 1/2 pattern is a bit stiff
3. 00:08:484 (41,42) - i think k is better way to follow drum
4. 00:12:055 (64,65,66,67,68,69) - try to follow 00:09:770 (50,51,52,53,54) - to make a good consistency
5. 00:22:055 (133) - remove.to follow the guitar would be better, and also make some break would be good
6. 00:24:341 (147) - remove. this d makes the pattern very stiff
7. 00:28:055 (168) - change to k and remove 00:28:198 (169) - to make the rhythm clearly
8. 00:32:484 (198) - remove. to make a break would be better
9. 00:32:770 (200,201) - ^
10. 00:37:341 (231) - ^
11. 00:39:341 (245) - ^
12. 01:18:055 (495) - ^
13. 01:26:770 (559) - ^
14. 00:55:484 (352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366) - you usually use this kind of pattern on whole map you can try this to make this map more variety, others part also have same problem
15. 01:16:198 (482) - change to k to follow the vocal as 01:16:627 (486,487) -
16. 01:17:913 (494) - ^
17. 01:28:484 - ~ 01:31:770 - try this. make the pattern more variety by making different break

1. 03:10:198 (2) - Is here supposed to be a whistle? I can see the reason why you add it, just want to be sure that this is on purpose
2. 03:45:627 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Increase the spacing between them gradually? I know you've already done something like that here, but you can try to improve the placement to make it more clean I think
   
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3. 04:10:484 (1,2,3) - nazi but you can make it more curve
4. 04:54:055 (1) - Drum-sampleset here? You add them on every white-ticks so I think you should put it here (or at least something)

Flask wrote:

1. 03:10:198 (2) - Is here supposed to be a whistle? I can see the reason why you add it, just want to be sure that this is on purpose Yep, on purpose.
2. 03:45:627 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Increase the spacing between them gradually? I know you've already done something like that here, but you can try to improve the placement to make it more clean I think Did something a little different by moving the second (2) a little to the left.
3. 04:10:484 (1,2,3) - nazi but you can make it more curve The current curve is enough, IMO... Any curvier and it'd look weird.
4. 04:54:055 (1) - Drum-sampleset here? You add them on every white-ticks so I think you should put it here (or at least something) Okay!

Nothing much to say actually, solid map \:D/
The one thing I could suggest you in your future map is, if you only use drum sampleset to emphasize the drum sound in the music like 03:56:913 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) -, that would be kind of not strong enough to do that, try to find some custom hitsound instead of drum-sampleset would be great I think. Hmm idk; I personally feel that the drum's subtlety goes pretty well with the music, but I'll take note of your words.

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CDFA wrote:

Oh boy.

Diff:
01:55:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1) - This is a huge pet peeve of mine like pls Post-chorus sections like this are cool and goes along with the song well IMO
03:40:341 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1) - ^ ^. Remapped this part a little, though.
05:16:770 (1) - Would prefer this to be a spinner, since there's none in the diff at all This is too short for a spinner, and a slowed down slider goes pretty well with the music o.o

Other than that, everything is approvable.