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Mao

Elite Mapper II

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Mao 2014-04-12T12:58:28+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Mittwoch, 22. Oktober 2014 at 18:59:46

Artist: S-C-U
Title: heron
Source: DanceDanceRevolution
Tags: jubeat saucer plus fanzhen0019 Macuilxochitl Sala- Desperate-kun Shigeharu Saeki Kenterz 2013 佐伯茂治 DDR FutureTomTom Ver.2
BPM: 182
Filesize: 8463kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:

Beginner (1,51 stars, 100 notes)
Desperate's Basic (1,82 stars, 104 notes)
Expert (4,5 stars, 384 notes)
Maocuilxo's Difficult (3,53 stars, 302 notes)
Sao's Advanced (2,94 stars, 211 notes)

Download: S-C-U - heron
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#7 Ranked ヽ(´ー`)ﾉ

Mapset Info:
BEGINNER by me
BASIC by Desperate-kun
ADVANCED by Sala- and me
DIFFICULT by Macuilxochitl and me
EXPERT by me

Storyboard by Kenterz

Changelog

2014/10/18 Finished remapping EXPERT + Added ADVANCED
2014/10/19 Added Kenterz' SB <3
2014/10/19 Applied Pappy's Mod
2014/10/19 Applied Kloyd's Mod
2014/10/19 Applied Kyubey's Mod
2014/10/20 Applied Aka's Mod
2014/10/20 Bubbled by Aka
2014/10/21 Qualified by Leader
Note: Everything before hasn't been logged :<

Last edited by Mao 2014-10-22T17:00:26+00:00, edited 38 times in total.

Myxo

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Myxo 2014-04-12T12:59:44+00:00

Mao wrote:
BEGINNER by me
BASIC by Desperate-kun
DIFFICULT by fanzhen0019 and me
EXPERT by me

!report caps
Don't shout at me ;w;

Star'ed

Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Mao 2014-04-12T13:23:25+00:00

Desperate-kun wrote:
Mao wrote:
BEGINNER by me
BASIC by Desperate-kun
DIFFICULT by fanzhen0019 and me
EXPERT by me
!report caps
Don't shout at me ;w;

Star'ed

You are right, I've reported myself several times but nothing happens ;w;

AruOtta

1,296 posts

Joined May 2012

AruOtta 2014-04-12T20:22:55+00:00

SB : http://puu.sh/865dS.osb

Add these backgrounds to the folder :

SPOILER

black : http://puu.sh/865pb.jpg
bleu : http://puu.sh/865pE.jpg
bright : http://puu.sh/865qm.jpg
BW Light : http://puu.sh/865qV.jpg
BW : http://puu.sh/865rl.jpg
crepuscule : http://puu.sh/865rO.jpg
flash : http://puu.sh/865s9.png
left flash : http://puu.sh/865sD.png
right flash : http://puu.sh/865tj.png
sombre : http://puu.sh/865tX.jpg
violet flou : http://puu.sh/865ur.jpg
violet : http://puu.sh/865uV.jpg
white : http://puu.sh/865vn.jpg

Enjoy ｡₀: *ﾟ✲ฺ٩(・ヮ・*)و ✲ฺﾟ*:₀

Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Myxo 2014-04-12T20:24:49+00:00

No-kudos-Mod for my Twin-Thing

[General]

Fine :3

[BEGINNER]

Everything which is not hitsounds orz:
~

00:19:009 (3,4) - This sounds somewhat weird, because the emphasized sounds are actually 00:18:844 and 00:19:174. So I suggest this rhythm, it sounds better:
Rhythm
00:20:328 (1,2) - Same about this rhythm, it could be improved. Also, with the long slider 00:21:317 (3) you want to emphasize the piano, but it doesn't work, as the piano starts at 00:21:152 (before the slider). So, I suggest this rhythm:
Rhythm
01:03:185 (2,3) - You could make the first part of (3) parallel to (2), so that the sliders fit better together
01:15:218 - Why this gap here? You could add a circle at 01:15:053
~
Hitsounds:
~
00:09:778 (1) - It would have a cool effect, if you use Soft3 here, and add a whistle at the beginning and at the end
00:24:284 (2) - Is that finish supposed to be there? Replace with a whistle
00:46:701 (1) - Whistle? Because it is basically the same music as 00:45:383 (2)
00:52:965 - I would not emphasize this slidertick, as it's no different sound from 00:52:223 or 00:52:471 and so on...
01:15:712 (1) - Don't want to add finish here? :3
01:20:987 (1) - Remove finish at the end? Because, basically the beat stops at 01:23:542, and this slider just ends on the white tick for simplicity. A whistle might fit, but not a finish

[DIFFICULT]

fanzhen's part:
~

00:49:009 (2,3,1) - Stack that correctly. Normally I don't care about these, but for triple-stacks it will mess them up if not properly stacked.
~
Hitsounds:
~
00:04:009 (3) - Whistle at the head, because of loud instrument?
00:06:647 (3) - ^
00:07:965 (3,5) - ^ (on both circles)
00:08:954 (2) - ^
00:11:427 (1,2,3,4,5) - (1) and (4) should have the whistles, because they are the highest pitch.
00:12:910 (4) - Whistle?
00:24:943 (5) - ^
00:26:756 (1) - ^

[EXPERT]

Hitsounds:
~

00:03:844 (3) - Whistle at the tail?
00:09:284 (4) - Whistle?
00:49:668 (2,4) - Add claps on the heads? I think it would have a nice leading effect to the following stream

That's all I can find <3 Good job Mr Twin Thing oOoOoOoOo
No kudos plz

Good luck :3

Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Mao 2014-04-12T20:54:01+00:00

Fixed all, also for fanzhen: I've fixed the stack aswell ^-^

Zetera

Medal Hunter

1,019 posts

Joined November 2010

Zetera 2014-04-12T21:57:36+00:00

You wanted a mod, so here's a brief one.

General: Just a quick note, you might want to turn the volume a bit higher right at the beginning. Like this, I didn't feel like having a nice hitsound response because they were too quiet.

BEGINNER:
00:37:635 - Just some idea, may be too hard, but looks better imo: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1506513 (If implementing, please create a properly formed blanked around 3's head.
00:51:976 (1) - The end of the slider is improvable, since it may confuse players with its actual nearly-overlap (that's what I felt.) Suggestion: pull the 6th sliderpoint a bit to the left.
01:20:328 (4,1) - Feels a bit unclean. Put the 3's slider head on x508 y124. You will have to rearrange the blanket, unless you do the next point.
01:23:954 - This is just a suggestion, you can put a circle here and make the slider a 1/3-reversed one: http://puu.sh/86bWQ.png

BASIC:

00:44:064 (1,2,1,2) - Quite uncreative in my opinion.
00:51:976 (1) - Don't like the shape of this one, you might try to curve the lines between the red points, here's some example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1506532
01:13:075 (1) - Maybe a spinner instead?

DIFFICULT:

00:04:009 (3,4,1) - I know why, but it doesn't look too good imo. thus you may want to equalize the spacing. This occurs more often.
00:57:745 (2,3) - I don't like this, but you can leave it as it is.
01:15:712 (1,2,3,4) - This is a good idea, but I think it's too much. You can orientate on this: 01:20:987 (1,2,3) -

EXPERT:

00:19:009 (1,2) - The spacing over here feels like being too less, I am having trouble with it, at least in the editor.
00:23:460 (3,4,1,2) - How's this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1506560
Nice flow, at some parts of the map it could be a bit improved though (e.g. 00:34:833 (1,2,3,4,5) - ).

Good luck.

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Setz 2014-04-12T22:30:47+00:00

gonna give this a shot... I didnt find much wrong, but that's because I am pretty new to modding.

General
Nothing really stood out

BASIC

-00:11:262 kind of awkward stop here.... this probably not a big deal, but something to consider since there are still beats going on with the music.

-01:19:668 (3) - generally in these kinds of diffs ( this is the equivalent of a normal) you want to avoid using sliders with more than one repeat, unless they are long and give the player enough time to see the second reverse..... should reconsider here because of the song's high BPM and slider velocity.

-01:23:789 (2) - ^

DIFFICULT

-00:32:526 (1,2,3) - really hard to see that these are reverse sliders if you are not expecting it because of the hit lighting from 00:31:866 (3,4,5) -

-00:51:976 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this is probably personal opinion here, but these overlaps are really hard to read and play awkwardly.

-00:57:745 (2) - you should end this slider at 00:58:075 and remove the circle there..... there is no beat on the blue line where you stopped this slider, it sounds and plays awkward.

EXPERT

Didn't find much wrong here, just 2 personal opinions :

-00:10:438 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - the way this stream overlaps into itself makes it somewhat difficult to read, but I guess this is ok, this is just my personal opinion

-01:23:624 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

Short and crappy mod because I am just not that great at it yet...... I didn't mean to ignore the PM you sent me to mod your other map, I forgot to respond, but when I looked at the map I just couldn't find anything.

Good luck with the map!

Koalazy

466 posts

Joined March 2010

Koalazy 2014-04-13T05:37:54+00:00

Hihi- PM request
hope i can find things to mod for this map lol

[EXPERT]
00:14:723 (4) - since the movement is spacing far so maybe put this note a bit further? how about put it at x77 y294?
00:21:646 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not consistent, i recommend to make it 3-notes a part. something like this↓ or just simply make the notes consistent

Image

01:24:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too sharp and overlapped too much, may be hard to read and play

[DIFFICULT]
00:41:097 (4) - blanket?
00:49:256 (3,1) - if this is a Hard diff, i wonder if this is a little bit too hard, maybe put more sliders into it

[BASIC]
00:12:416 (1) - prev 0.84x / next 0.99x not consistent
00:54:613 (1) - prev 0.70x ...i dunno if it is allowed with DS changes in Normal diff

[BEGINNER]
i've found some red tick sliders but since the music shows the beat on it so maybe fine?

good luck~

Myxo

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Joined December 2012

Myxo 2014-04-13T10:00:00+00:00

Sala- wrote:
BASIC:

00:44:064 (1,2,1,2) - Quite uncreative in my opinion. Repetetive Music - Repetetive Pattern. I think it fits
00:51:976 (1) - Don't like the shape of this one, you might try to curve the lines between the red points, here's some example: It fits the music like this, as those beats are very emphasized http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1506532
01:13:075 (1) - Maybe a spinner instead? No, in my opinion a slider fits better, as it reassembles 1-2-streams or 1-4-streams better in Normal diffs

Setz206 wrote:
BASIC

-00:11:262 kind of awkward stop here.... this probably not a big deal, but something to consider since there are still beats going on with the music. That's not awkwards at all, as the beat stops there o:

-01:19:668 (3) - generally in these kinds of diffs ( this is the equivalent of a normal) you want to avoid using sliders with more than one repeat, unless they are long and give the player enough time to see the second reverse..... should reconsider here because of the song's high BPM and slider velocity. I think it's readable for newbies because the slider is long enough to see the full reverse arrow

-01:23:789 (2) - ^ ^

Koalazy wrote:
[BASIC]
00:12:416 (1) - prev 0.84x / next 0.99x not consistent There's a huge break here so it doesn't matter
00:54:613 (1) - prev 0.70x ...i dunno if it is allowed with DS changes in Normal diff ^

Thank you for mods. Sorry, no changes ;w;

AruOtta

1,296 posts

Joined May 2012

AruOtta 2014-04-13T13:13:26+00:00

Hello, As Requested ٩(・ヮ・*)و

General

The difficulty between "Basic" and "Difficult" seems huge, It'll be better to add a diff "Advanced" or something else (imo)

Beginner

00:12:745 (2,4) - Change the patern to blanket ?

SPOILER

00:19:998 (4,2) - Try to make a better blanket ? xD

Good diff. =D

Basic

00:08:295 (3,1) - Overlap :

SPOILER

00:51:976 (1) - This slider feels weird o.o
00:55:767 (3) - The clap at the end isn't needed
01:01:042 (3) - ^
01:06:317 (3) - ^
01:11:591 (3) - ^
01:23:624 (1) - Is this circle needed ? It feels hard when I'm playing the diff. =/

Basicaly it's a good diff. =D

Difficult

00:08:954 (2) - Please don't stack with (1), if feels hard with hidden ;w; Try this :

SPOILER

00:35:328 (3) - Try to remake this slider to blanket with (4) :

SPOILER

00:52:471 (3) - Try to stack properly the end with (1) ;w;
00:53:213 (3) - ^
01:06:811 (1,2) - Big jump here o.o
01:23:624 (1,2,3,4,5) - This patern is hard to understand... Try to follow this way :

Expert

00:14:064 (2,3) - 00:14:064 (2,3) - Try a better curve to blanket with 00:14:723 (4)

Really good map
Please rank it (」・ω・)」

YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

YoshinoSakura 2014-04-13T14:03:31+00:00

PM req~

[General]
nice

[Expert]
I would like ar10 on this map.
And no mods for this diff cuz too difficult for me

[Difficult]
00:01:372 (2,3,1) - I think equal spacing is better.At least the spacing between 00:01:701 (3,1) - should be larger,imo
00:15:548 (4) - why not stack on 1
00:25:273 (6) - I'll probably read this as a jump.Maybe stack on 00:25:602 (1) - can be better
00:28:734 (2,3) - ^
00:30:877 (1,2) - a little not parallel
00:51:976 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - good pattern,stack it perfecly will be better
00:57:086 (5) - maybe a 1/4 slider here is good
01:02:361 (5) - ^

[Basic]
00:01:207 (2) - i would end this slider at 00:01:701
00:43:075 (4) - add finish sounds better
00:55:767 (3) - plz remove clap on the tail.I almost laugh out when hearing that.It's so funny.

[Beginner]
00:41:427 (1,2,1) - not stack well
imo you should make the beats easy instead of using cs2.Complex beats is definitely harder to beginners than small circles.
GL

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2014-04-14T02:53:01+00:00

pm req
[Beginner]
00:28:240 (1) - add finish?
[Basic]
01:17:031 (2) - add finish?
[expert]
00:48:020 (1) - add finish and add light effect in sb?
so good the map that i can't mod more...shoot a star.-.

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-04-15T05:07:28+00:00

Hi,Mao,mod request. Sorry delay.

[General]

1.Combo color is not consistent,check "BASIC" diff , the last color is "yellow",not "blue".
2.Why the stack leniency is "3" in EXPERT diff only ? I think keep "7" is ok.

[BASIC]

00:07:635 (2) - I think add a whistle can fit the music in head ,because this head sound is empty , feel have a bit strange.
00:08:295 (3) - ^ (Btw,perhaps can stack 00:09:778 (1) ,keep the pattern neat.)
00:55:767 (3) - I feel shouldn"t add clap in redline,because it is not 24clap.
01:01:042 (3) - ^ (add whistle in end)
01:11:591 (3) - ^

[BEGINNER]

00:19:009 (3) - If follow front part music ,I think this can add a whistle this here.
00:28:569 (2) - Remove whistle in end ? Because the same part (00:18:020 (2)) you haven"t add this here.
01:15:053 (3) - Forget add whistle here? I think add this will have a good hitsound effect. (And,perhaps can stack 01:12:416 (4) ?)
01:23:789 (1) - Set a spinner , and end is 01:24:778 this here ? I feel 01:24:284 (1) not fit the rhythm.

[DIFFICULT]

00:08:295 (5) - Remove clap? (follow 24clap)
00:09:449 (4) - ^ in end? ^
00:20:328 (5) - Forgot NC here? This combo have a bit long.
00:38:789 (1) - Forgot add whistle here?
01:23:624 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you can set jump for every sliders,they can fit the music.

[EXPERT]

00:02:855 (5) - I think this is no rhythm (sound) this here,so I suggest 00:02:690 (4) change 1/2 slider,it will be play cool.
00:05:328 (3) - Same reason,change 1/2 slider will fit the music.
00:10:438 (5) - Feel this can set a NC make easy to read.
00:15:548 (4,5) - Use ctrl+g change rhythm? I think it can fit the music better (notice hitsound)
00:19:339 (2) - Have a drum rhythm here,add a note ?
00:21:975 (3) - Perhaps you can stack 00:21:316 (4) make pattern neat.
00:38:789 (1) - Forget add finish?
00:51:316 (9) - A bit long combo,set NC here?
01:00:383 (3,1) - Try use the same pattern? Make the pattern consistent shape,it will be good better.
01:24:201 (8,1) - Enlarge DS make jump? (Have a jump point)

Good Luck ,and map overall is good , shoot 1 star for you ~!

~~ZZH你騙KD也太猛~~

Okoratu

Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator

4,913 posts

Joined May 2012

Okoratu 2014-04-18T09:51:05+00:00

[EXPERT]

Generally i wished the hit-finishes were louder

00:50:657 (1,2) - any reason in partiqular for this antijump? kind of slowed me down
00:51:976 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - I'd love to have louder finished especially for this part
00:56:591 (3) - might stack this properly with 00:55:767 (1) -
01:07:141 (3) - might stack this one correctly with the end of the slider
01:15:053 (3,4) - might space this stream similar to 01:14:723 (2) - and 01:14:229 (1) -

[hitsounding?]

00:56:262 (2) - might add a whistle
00:56:591 (3) - ^
00:58:734 - ^
00:58:899 - ^
00:59:888 - ^
01:00:053 - ^
01:01:537 (2) - ^
01:01:866 (3) -
01:05:163 (1) - ^
01:06:646 - ^
01:06:811 (2) - ^
01:07:800 (1) - ^
01:08:130 - ^
01:09:284 - ^
01:09:449 (6,7) - maybe on all 3
01:11:262 - might add a whistle?
01:11:921 - ^
01:12:086 - ^

I may or may not have forgotten some ot the whistles i'd like to add .____.

All of the above are merely suggestions and me hating antijumps

Gl
~oko

Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Myxo 2014-04-29T18:32:39+00:00

@smallboat

Fixed the whistles. I think the claps on red ticks sound ok ^-^

Maybe you'll find some diamonds in here

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 13 - heron.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 75383
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 3.099999

[Metadata]
Title:heron
TitleUnicode:heron
Artist:S-C-U
ArtistUnicode:S-C-U
Creator:Mao
Version:BASIC
Source:DanceDanceRevolution 2013
Tags:jubeat saucer fanzhen0019 Desperate-kun Shigeharu Saeki
BeatmapID:401873
BeatmapSetID:165202

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.15
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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80987,-100,4,2,3,70,0,1
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Combo3 : 0,255,255
Combo4 : 156,57,255

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190,297,13569,2,0,P|127:273|17:303,1,172.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,181,14394,2,0,L|51:67,1,115,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,27,15053,5,2,0:0:0:0:
253,92,15383,2,0,P|262:180|179:305,1,230
135,312,16207,2,0,L|314:320,1,172.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,319,17031,2,0,L|466:206,1,115,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
445,98,17690,5,2,0:0:0:0:
339,145,18020,2,0,B|262:167|252:113|168:138,1,172.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
82,212,18844,2,0,P|77:279|105:334,1,115,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,344,19504,2,0,P|271:356|387:346,1,172.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,237,20328,6,0,P|348:225|232:235,2,172.5,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,348,21646,2,0,B|194:381|224:289|35:333,1,345,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
21,218,22965,5,6,0:0:0:0:
94,129,23295,2,8,P|196:93|326:116,1,230,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,157,24119,2,0,P|341:223|396:313,1,172.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,259,24943,2,0,P|492:204|456:145,1,115,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,157,25602,5,2,0:0:0:0:
271,242,25932,2,0,P|172:276|39:242,1,230,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,203,26756,2,0,B|61:142|61:142|75:38,1,172.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,22,27580,2,0,L|169:149,1,115,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,250,28240,5,2,0:0:0:0:
255,306,28569,2,0,P|338:318|421:287,1,172.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
463,181,29394,2,0,P|456:123|468:60,1,115,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,44,30053,2,0,P|340:116|358:220,1,172.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,318,30877,6,0,L|213:332,2,172.5,2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,213,32196,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,226,32526,2,0,B|126:234|126:234|151:177|105:119,1,230,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,198,33515,6,0,P|24:280|106:342,2,172.5,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,151,34833,2,0,P|187:206|191:290,2,172.5,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,198,36152,6,0,P|24:280|106:342,1,172.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,329,36811,2,0,P|191:318|267:331,1,115,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,270,37471,2,0,P|353:188|271:126,1,172.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,139,38130,2,0,P|186:150|110:137,1,115,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,41,38789,6,0,P|224:30|300:43,1,115,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,121,39449,2,0,B|349:193|349:193|369:298,1,172.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
377,345,40108,2,0,P|281:361|238:161,1,345,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,136,41262,6,0,L|299:68,1,57.5,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
66,61,42086,1,4,0:0:0:0:
95,289,42745,1,6,0:0:0:0:
202,329,43075,1,8,0:0:0:0:
314,304,43405,2,0,P|367:298|431:311,1,115,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,204,44064,6,0,B|469:102|469:102|418:35,2,172.5,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,255,45383,2,0,B|328:199|328:199|323:97,2,172.5,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,204,46701,6,0,B|469:102|469:102|418:35,2,172.5,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,255,48020,2,0,B|328:199|328:199|323:97,1,172.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,39,48679,2,0,P|261:53|203:45,1,115,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,30,49339,6,0,B|188:209|34:177|143:360,1,345,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,359,50657,2,0,P|381:313|404:103,1,345,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,46,51976,6,0,B|249:87|249:87|176:45|176:45|93:73|93:73|136:163|88:235,1,431.25,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,310,54613,6,0,L|434:184,1,115,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,142,55108,2,0,L|422:16,1,115,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,48,55767,2,0,P|273:122|296:220,2,172.5,2|8|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
134,44,57251,6,0,B|85:75|85:75|19:84,1,115,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,137,57745,2,4,P|20:193|63:238,1,115
172,248,58405,2,0,P|245:234|348:253,1,172.5,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
437,312,59229,2,0,L|447:193,1,115,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
459,83,59888,6,0,P|405:97|335:87,1,115,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,96,60383,2,0,P|232:89|176:103,1,115,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,56,61042,2,0,P|65:144|138:213,2,172.5,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,64,62526,6,0,P|296:128|289:212,2,172.5,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,59,63679,2,0,P|121:95|5:74,1,172.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
18,200,64504,2,4,L|37:322,1,115,4|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,304,65163,6,0,L|272:323,1,115,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,308,65657,2,0,P|385:318|433:306,1,115,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,199,66317,2,0,P|446:141|467:25,2,172.5,2|8|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,90,67800,6,0,L|215:80,1,115,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,128,68295,2,4,B|119:149|119:149|61:142,1,115
47,254,68954,2,0,P|121:296|208:284,1,172.5,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,249,69778,2,0,P|369:245|440:285,1,115,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
485,171,70438,6,0,L|473:46,1,115,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,26,70932,2,0,P|387:61|318:71,1,115,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
213,51,71591,2,0,P|129:45|41:88,2,172.5,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,214,73075,6,0,P|184:310|416:193,2,460,6|2|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,100,76042,6,8,P|238:65|410:75,1,230
482,142,77031,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,255,77361,2,8,P|405:290|233:280,1,230
160,212,78350,6,0,P|89:214|22:299,1,172.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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228,74,80987,6,0,P|338:45|423:269,1,402.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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154,257,82965,2,0,L|29:266,1,115,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
55,151,83624,5,2,0:0:0:0:
105,122,83789,2,6,P|162:114|203:118,4,86.25

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-05-16T08:05:44+00:00

Hi, from in-game.

Revive the map please!!!!!!!

General

Combo colors are not consistent throughout all diffs. Combo 1 in 'BASIC' differs from others.
Add a 2000 ms audio lead-in manually.
Check your storyboard folder, 'bright.jpg' and 'crepuscule.jpg' are unused. Remove them please.

EXPERT

Delete this redundant green line: 00:01:866.
00:04:174 (4) - The clap on tail sounds quite noisy with two consecutive claps on one slider. And I don't see any boost in the prelude or similar sound in the music. Consider removing it. Same applies on 00:06:811 (5) and 00:08:295 (4) and 00:09:449 (5).
00:10:438 (5,6,7,8,9) - The angle is too acute which makes the stream uncomfortable to click and read. Would this be better? Also, NC on (9) for indicating players there's a spacing change even the music itself doesn't provide an atmosphere for such change imo.
SPOILER
00:18:350 (4) - Delete this for consistency of following the 'ding' sounds instead of 'drum'. Same applies on 00:18:679 (6). If you feel deleting these two sounds hollow, replace 00:18:185 (3,5) by two 1/2 sliders instead coz slider tails do not sound as heavy as circles.
00:22:471 (6) - NC this. I just can't figure out why you raise the DS on this circle provided that the ambiance doesn't alter much. I simply resist the mapping style of 'raising difficulty without listening to the rhythm'.
00:24:943 (3) - Add a whistle like 00:27:580 (3).
00:26:756 (1) - Whistle on tail like 00:24:119 (1).
00:31:207 (2) - Why placing a 3/4 slider + circle here? The circle is following the drum alone. It's kinda inconsistent in the sense you change from following 'ding' to 'drum' unexpectedly.
00:39:284 (2,3,4) - Make them as a straight line without using the grid snap.
00:45:383 (1) - Finish on head too like 00:44:064 (1). Musically they are similar, though the volume can be reduced a bit.
00:52:471 (1,1,1,1) - Doesn't really need NC imo, even though they are justly slightly 1/4 jumps. It's inconsistent with what you did on 00:46:701 (1,2,3) and 00:48:020 (1,2,3).
00:58:075 (3,4) - Change this to a slider instead? 00:58:240 doesn't deserve a circle imo, the drum is too soft :3 It really plays better if you change it to a slider. Instead, you can replace 00:58:899 (2) with two circles, based on the two solid 'ding' sounds.
01:04:504 (3,4) - Finish on these two, coz there's cymbal sound in the background.
01:08:295 (2) - Move a bit upwards to avoid tail of (2) overlapping partially with (1).
01:08:624 (3,4) - Same as 00:58:075 (3,4). I think what you are trying to do as a whole is to follow the instrument other than the drum. Consequently, 01:08:789 (4) shouldn't be treated as a stress. placing a slider there is far enough to catch the stress on 01:08:624.
To prevent same score for every player, add a spinner at the end till 01:26:262 for EVERY diff.

DIFFICULT

Delete this redundant green line: 00:01:866.
00:04:174 (4) - Like EXPERT, also for tail of 00:06:647 (3) and 00:08:295 (5) (Also, why whistle?) and 00:09:449 (4).
Hitsound suggestions are basically the same with EXPERT.
00:37:800 (2) - Kinda weird for the halt of (1). Second, you change to follow the drum on 00:37:800 which make me feel inconsistent to play. I can think of one alternative which can maintain your clap pattern. Make (1) as a 3/4 slider for the continuing 'ding' sound.
01:13:569 (1) - CTRL+G to create a slightly symmetric pattern with 01:13:075 (1).

BASIC

00:08:295 (3,5) - Improve this blanket a bit.
00:32:526 (3) - Also, blanket issue. I have tried to adjust it for you. Feel free to take it.
SPOILER
```
240,226,32526,2,0,B|126:234|126:234|145:173|107:124,1,230,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
00:45:383 (2) - I wonder if the kink is being placed wrongly with the sound on 00:44:311. Instead, place the kink in the middle of the slider, same goes to 00:45:383 (2,1,2):
SPOILER
00:51:976 (1) - Missing a kink on 00:52:965. Just curving seems missing something imo. Btw, there're 4 red anchors in the middle, why not trying a symmetric slider?
00:58:405 (3) - Curve more towards head of 00:59:229 (4) to improve the flow slightly.
01:06:317 (3) - Make it like this by CTRL+H. It looks far more aesthetic.
SPOILER
Hitsound --> EXPERT

BEGINNER

Why the circle density is even higher in the lowest difficulty? You need more long sliders to further reduce the difficulty, coz the setting imo is too low. OD and HP+1 would fit better the whole set.

Quite a number of inconsistencies are found in EXPERT, you need to be more considerate and careful about this.
Also, I am quite worried about the difficulty of BEGINNER, I can understand that you try to lower the settings as much as possible. But, this not only ruins the difficulty spread, it's also still tough, especially the note and slider density.
Anyway, good luck!

Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Mao 2014-10-18T19:51:55+00:00

Remapped Expert, adjusted Beginner and my parts in Difficult. SB is going to be remade as well!
I want to rank this! :3

Pappy

1,020 posts

Joined August 2013

Pappy 2014-10-18T22:12:41+00:00

From in-game lel

Begginer

00:00:548 (1,2) - This part is useless in this diff, hard to feel rhytm. Suggesting delete this. D:
00:14:064 (4) - Move to x:340|y:354 for better triangle with (2) and (3).
Why low OD and HP? +1 is better imo

Advanced

01:05:493 (2,3) - You should blanket it.

Difficult

00:39:943 (4,1) - Move (1) little right for nicer blanket, cuz this looks bad. :<
01:07:635 (1,1) - Why NCs here? It is useless
01:13:569 (1) - It is ruining the flow, Ctrl+G maybe? :3

Other diffs are excellent <3~

Sorry, I'm still learning how2mod good + sleepy ;w;

DeletedUser_1574070

DeletedUser_1574070 2014-10-19T04:36:53+00:00

Beginner

01:04:504 (3) - u can revise this slider by moving first red dot 304:280
01:12:416 (4,3) - can be stacked

Nothing else

Basic

00:55:767 (3) - instead of reversing this, 00:56:591 (4) - consider putting 1/1 slider here.
01:08:295 (2) - consider centered-reddot

Advanced

00:34:833 (1) - for better shape, just few grid down plz
00:37:965 (4,1) - completely stack

Difficult

00:08:460 (1,2) - misstacked a grid here
01:07:635 (1,2,1) - i think nc is useless cuz hard diff can include triplets.
01:23:624 (1,2,3,4,5) - i found here difficult but safe imo.

Expert

00:10:438 (5) - stream begins here so NC?
00:17:690 (1) - overlap is someway weird. can u take these apart a bit?
00:31:206 (2) - i understand ur thought to blanket this but i think putting that around 150:20 can have better flow.
00:38:460 (5,5) - can u take this same-spaced?

Kyubey

osu! Alumni

3,097 posts

Joined December 2012

Kyubey 2014-10-19T10:03:48+00:00

hi! mod due your request because konami will sue
why did you use capsed difficulty names? they are not http://puu.sh/cigTJ/df2cf6d1aa.png
and are you going to make the SB? if not, then disable epilepsy warning
and use AudioLeadIn: 1500 since your map starts very early
[BENIGGER]
Why different tickrate?
00:04:504 (1) - this is overlapping with score meter
00:24:284 (2,3) - how about rotating them a little? (i just don't like how linear horisontal and vertical sliders look) and then make 00:24:943 (3,1,2) - perfect triangle
00:41:427 (1) - try to use this code:

141,49,41427,6,0,B|216:32|224:84|312:60,2,160,4|4|4,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:

that will follow shape of next slider much better
00:49:339 (1,2) - this little touching is unneat
00:54:613 (1) - move it a little higher
01:07:141 (3) - overlapping with hp bar, try to move it
01:09:778 (1) - this is even touching the down side of screen on 1366x768 resolution, try to avoid it
[BASIC]
00:09:119 (4) - to 487|92 and 00:09:449 (5) - to 376|127, you'll keep the perfect triangle, but you'll get better blanket. and then you can stack 00:09:778 (1) - with 00:08:295 (3) -
01:19:668 (3) -

Mao wrote:
I know exactly what you want to get with this but as you didn't do anything like this before I don't really recommend that to you. This can kick of newbies players very easily! I'd personally remove one repeat and add a circle because if you take a closer listen you can actually hear how on the last white tick a guitar starts a build-up to the downbeat which can be seperated pretty well.

that was about the same pattern on my normal for Troublemaker

rest is pretty clean
[ADVANCED]
00:12:251 (1) - how about stacking with head of 00:10:767 (4) - ? and then you can stack 00:13:734 (3) - it too and 00:12:910 (2) - move it for keeping the triangle
00:59:723 (2,3,4) - that triangle can be better
01:20:657 (4,2) - (2) is pretty hard to notice after that (4), unstack them? example: http://puu.sh/cii15/cf0a387519.jpg
[DIFFICULT]
00:01:207 (1,2) - just move it left a little for making the triangle better
00:07:965 (3,4,5) - flow with 4→5→3 plays better imo
00:15:053 (1,2,3,4) - 2→3→1→4?
00:17:690 (4) - NC?
00:20:328 (5) - ^
and if you accept that, swap NCs there 00:21:317 (8,1) -
00:51:976 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - i'm not sure about that pattern, 00:52:471 (3,1) - this looks like a 1/2 gap since player got used to thing like 00:52:223 (2,3) - this is 1/4, and second triangle is reeeally hard to catch in time. try to think about this pattern and maybe change it, because it plays very bad
01:23:872 (2) - that clap sounds really unnatural
01:24:613 (5) - ^
[EXPERT]
00:01:042 (1,1,1) - are you sure? thing like this are played very bad and uncomfortable, maybe 1/8 repeater instead of this?
00:10:438 (5) - NC
00:17:361 (4,1) - make it move overlapping?
00:21:316 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - how about making the spacing between 1s and 2s higher? thats pretty uncomfortable to almost stop cursor on patterns like this but with little moving
00:32:526 (1) - and 00:32:855 (3) - Ctrl+G?
01:10:932 (3) - Ctrl+G?
01:23:953 (3,5) - same what i told about claps in previous diff

Good luck with ranking!

Zetera

Medal Hunter

1,019 posts

Joined November 2010

Zetera 2014-10-19T19:00:22+00:00

Fixed everything in Kloyd's mod.

Kyubey wrote:
[ADVANCED]
00:12:251 (1) - how about stacking with head of 00:10:767 (4) - ? and then you can stack 00:13:734 (3) - it too and 00:12:910 (2) - move it for keeping the triangle Liked my idea better, sorry.
00:59:723 (2,3,4) - that triangle can be better
01:20:657 (4,2) - (2) is pretty hard to notice after that (4), unstack them? example: http://puu.sh/cii15/cf0a387519.jpg Is to be fixed by Mao.

Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Mao 2014-10-19T19:20:26+00:00

Pappy

Pappy wrote:
From in-game lel

Begginer

00:00:548 (1,2) - This part is useless in this diff, hard to feel rhytm. Suggesting delete this. D: You think so? I feel like it's pretty normal rhythm here :/ Keeping it for now.

Difficult

01:13:569 (1) - It is ruining the flow, Ctrl+G maybe? :3 Not my part, but I love this. D:

Kloyd

Kloyd wrote:
Expert
00:17:690 (1) - overlap is someway weird. can u take these apart a bit? It's symmetrical and I really like this kind of overlaps. Gonna keep it D;
00:31:206 (2) - i understand ur thought to blanket this but i think putting that around 150:20 can have better flow. Hm, I'm kinda unsure about this. I really like how this flow works and I've used it more often over the map. Gonna keep that for now.
00:38:460 (5,5) - can u take this same-spaced? The first one is much stronger in the music so I think jumps emphasize these better.

Kyubey

Kyubey wrote:
[BENIGGER]
Why different tickrate? Because 2 would be too high for the Easy imo
00:24:284 (2,3) - how about rotating them a little? (i just don't like how linear horisontal and vertical sliders look) and then make 00:24:943 (3,1,2) - perfect triangle Did they triangle but I like horizontal stuff \o/
00:54:613 (1) - move it a little higher Why? Don't really see a reason. this follows the curves nicely.

[DIFFICULT]
00:15:053 (1,2,3,4) - 2→3→1→4? Going to keep this for now as long as fanzhen doesn't want to change his ones.
00:51:976 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - i'm not sure about that pattern, 00:52:471 (3,1) - this looks like a 1/2 gap since player got used to thing like 00:52:223 (2,3) - this is 1/4, and second triangle is reeeally hard to catch in time. try to think about this pattern and maybe change it, because it plays very bad Up to fanzhen

[EXPERT]
00:17:361 (4,1) - make it move overlapping? It's about symmetry and I like the look. Overlapping enough imo :/
00:21:316 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - how about making the spacing between 1s and 2s higher? thats pretty uncomfortable to almost stop cursor on patterns like this but with little moving Doesn't really play wrong to me as it plays very similiar to double stacks which was my intention here. ;w;
00:32:526 (1) - and 00:32:855 (3) - Ctrl+G? I see your idea but I've tried to do something different here. If there's some more complain, I'll come back to this suggestion.
01:10:932 (3) - Ctrl+G? Jump would be too big which would feel overemphasized here imo. Going to keep it!

Thanks for the great mods! Everythinf not listed was either in Sala's parts (see the post above) or applied!

Myxo

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3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Myxo 2014-10-19T20:52:27+00:00

Kloyd wrote:
Basic
00:55:767 (3) - instead of reversing this, 00:56:591 (4) - consider putting 1/1 slider here. Sorry, I don't really hear a beat that would be worth following o.o
01:08:295 (2) - consider centered-reddot fixed

Kyubey wrote:
[BASIC]
00:09:119 (4) - to 487|92 and 00:09:449 (5) - to 376|127, you'll keep the perfect triangle, but you'll get better blanket. and then you can stack 00:09:778 (1) - with 00:08:295 (3) -
01:19:668 (3) -
Mao wrote:
I know exactly what you want to get with this but as you didn't do anything like this before I don't really recommend that to you. This can kick of newbies players very easily! I'd personally remove one repeat and add a circle because if you take a closer listen you can actually hear how on the last white tick a guitar starts a build-up to the downbeat which can be seperated pretty well.
that was about the same pattern on my normal for Troublemaker

rest is pretty clean I don't know what you were talking about exactly but remember that this is 5 months old ;_; Fixed!

o////o Thanks for modding!

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Aka

1,777 posts

Joined January 2012

Aka 2014-10-19T22:42:24+00:00

gave some suggestions and adjusted some minor stuff via irc. it should be ready to go now
take my cute emoticon and have a good night

bubbled ~

log thing if anyone is wondering

SPOILER

00:39 Mao: btw, look at difficult as an Hyper~Light Insane
00:39 Mao: it has some hard patterns
00:39 Mao: Advanced is the real hard
00:53 Aka: i swer
00:54 Aka: i look like some lazy noob bat who is bubbling sets without modding
00:54 Mao: you are doing your job great dw
00:54 Mao: I didn't really know your modding before but as much as I saw now you are very skilled
00:55 Aka: nice to hear thouh uh
00:55 Aka: THOUGH
00:56 Aka: this word
00:56 Aka: please
01:03 Aka: owow
01:03 *Aka is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/401875 S-C-U - heron [Maocuilxo's Difficult]]
01:03 Aka: 01:09:778 (3,4,5) - 
01:03 Aka: 01:09:778 (3,4,5,1) - 
01:04 Aka: dis
01:04 Aka: tiny spacing
01:05 Mao: damn, fanzhen is inactive afaik D:
01:05 Aka: whose this part D:
01:05 Mao: fanzhen
01:05 Aka: eeeeeeeh jeez
01:05 Mao: ;_;
01:05 Aka: thats really much lol
01:06 Aka: would be nice to have there 06 or 07 u_u
01:06 Mao: lemme change it for him
01:06 Mao: :/
01:06 Mao: to 0,6
01:06 Mao: that won't be significant
01:06 Aka: yeah
01:07 Aka: and yeah [2]
01:10 Mao: ok done
01:13 Aka: cute expert uwu
01:14 Mao: yeah, it's supposed to be super cute :D
01:17 Aka: dunno if its necessary, i'd make this extension or inceasing or whatever this word was 00:21:316 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -  a bit more noticeable, like 00:21:811 (2) - ~0,22 prev, for next 2 ~0,26, next ~32
01:17 Aka: its fine as it is pretty much, lel
01:17 Aka: im just bzbbzzb
01:17 Aka: wanna sleep 
01:18 Aka: 00:38:789 (1,1) - 
01:18 Aka: o
01:18 Aka: thought its 1/1
01:18 Aka: 1/2*
01:18 Mao: the jump is because the instrument changes :/
01:19 Aka: yeea i hear
01:19 Aka: 01:22:306 (1,2) - elvizzz
01:20 Mao: XD
01:20 Mao: it was rather a try to get unconfusing jumps in there
01:20 Aka: xxD
01:21 Mao: anything you really want me to change here?
01:21 Aka: mm
01:23 Aka: seems like nope, im okay with everything but (with my attempt to play with autopilot) i fcked up last stream
01:23 Aka: lel
01:23 Aka: cause of that white thingy where last slider's body is
01:23 Mao: streaming with autopilot is hard as hell .o.
01:24 Aka: like, thought the end is already there since i heard a sound
01:24 Aka: 0.0
01:24 Aka: oh
01:24 Mao: I know what you mean
01:25 Aka: that weird gap
01:25 Aka: ahgud
01:25 Aka: ufhisdfal*
01:25 Mao: what xD
01:25 Aka: in music
01:25 Aka: @_@
01:25 Mao: it is the music xD
01:27 Aka: STILL THIS TRANSITION IS WEIRD
01:27 Aka: UGH
01:27 Aka: okay
01:27 Aka: prepare your as
01:27 Aka: for my pos
01:27 Aka: tu
01:27 Aka: t
01:27 Aka: uwu
01:27 Mao: is there more than you've told me
01:27 Mao: or can I update? xD
01:27 Aka: ok
01:27 Aka: you have
01:27 Aka: 2 files of bg
01:27 Mao: these are required
01:27 Mao: one is sized lower for SB
01:27 Mao: the other one has therefore higher quality
01:28 Aka: a i see
01:28 Mao: cause it's 1366x768 and won't scaled ingame
01:29 Mao: more?
01:29 Aka: hs seems okay too
01:29 Aka: okay updeeto uwu
01:30 Mao: you want me to fix that last slider badly in expert?
01:30 Mao: then gimme a suggestion ;_;
01:30 Aka: thats the problem that i have no suggestions cause i have no idea :D
01:30 Aka: i can try to think though
01:30 Mao: I can't think of anything better myself
01:30 Mao: this is how I feel the music xD
01:32 Aka: maybe just 01:23:542 (9,1) - make the distance between them like 1.80
01:32 Aka: or smth like that
01:32 Aka: just a bit less
01:33 Mao: using 1,8
01:33 Mao: looks like it plays much better
01:33 Aka: it should 
01:33 Aka: >_<
01:33 Mao: lemme update!
01:33 Aka: lettin u update
01:34 Mao: done

Last edited by Aka 2014-10-19T22:46:50+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Mao

Elite Mapper II

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Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Mao 2014-10-19T22:43:16+00:00

Thanks <3

Leader

osu! Alumni

1,849 posts

Joined January 2011

Leader 2014-10-20T15:48:36+00:00

IRC

17:06 Leader: 00:53:624 (1,2,3,4) - what about ctrl+h on these
17:06 Leader: would be great
17:06 Leader: (on expert)
17:07 Mao: [http://puu.sh/cjwgy/064a9db5e2.jpg 1] or [http://puu.sh/cjwhQ/d683ec0479.jpg 2]
17:07 Mao: for the stream
17:08 Leader: 2 imo
17:09 Mao: oki
17:10 Leader: 00:57:745 (2) - and I'd make it further to emphasize this
17:10 Leader: I can barely notice the difference between 1/2 and 1/4 in that whole pattern
17:11 Mao: http://puu.sh/cjwwE/9f4ef14205.jpg
17:11 Mao: better?
17:12 Leader: yea
17:15 Leader: in Maocuilxo's diff
17:15 Leader: 01:23:624 (1,2,3,4,5) - the whole pattern would be better if moved 1/2 later in the timeline actually
17:15 Leader: I feel like the loudest sound should be clickable there
17:16 Mao: damn fanzhen xD
17:16 Leader: 01:23:624 - you should just add a 1/4 or 2 notes here then
7:24 Leader: 01:24:284 (1) - rhythm is kinda hard to catch for a beginner in this case
17:24 Mao: suggestion for this? D:
17:24 Leader: either add a spinner
17:24 Mao: I know what you mean but I didn't know how to fix ;_;
17:25 Leader: or just a final note
17:25 Leader: on 01:24:778
17:25 Leader: 01:24:778 -
17:26 Mao: oki

Tell me when fanzhen will fix his part and I'll rank this.

Zetera

Medal Hunter

1,019 posts

Joined November 2010

Zetera 2014-10-21T08:39:16+00:00

So quick..

fanzhen0019

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,723 posts

Joined July 2010

fanzhen0019 2014-10-21T14:51:45+00:00

CODE

osu file format v13

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