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Shiroko - A Symphony of Justice

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AlexaBM
hi~ from my queue
[Normal]
  1. 00:16:416 (1) - This object starts too fast after the spinner. Move it closer to the center?
  2. 00:18:340 (3,1) - Blanket could be better
  3. 00:29:493 (3,4) - ^
  4. 00:33:724 (3,1) - ^
  5. 00:34:109 (1,2) - ^
  6. 00:36:416 (3,1) - ^
  7. 00:40:263 (1,2,3) - ^
  8. 01:04:109 (3,1) - ^
  9. 01:58:724 (3,4) - ^
  10. 02:37:186 (1,2) - ^
  11. 02:42:570 (1,1) - ^
  12. 02:58:340 (5,1) - ^
  13. 03:20:647 (1,2) - ^
  14. 03:24:878 (3,4) - ^
  15. 00:55:647 (1,2,3) - I think beginner will missunderstand this moment and will click on (3) instead of (2). Rearrange it please
  16. 02:22:955 (2,3) - I bet that some beginners will click on the reverse. Move it to the right
  17. 02:35:647 (3,4,5) - Make a perfect triangle?
  18. 03:31:032 (3,4,5) - ^
[Hard]
  1. OD -1
  2. 00:58:340 (7,1) - Blanket
  3. 02:04:109 (3,4) - ^
  4. 02:16:416 (3,4) - ^
Pretty good map, I have nothing more to say c: good luck~
Topic Starter
Norman

AlexaBM wrote:

hi~ from my queue
[Normal]
  1. 00:16:416 (1) - This object starts too fast after the spinner. Move it closer to the center?
  2. 00:55:647 (1,2,3) - I think beginner will missunderstand this moment and will click on (3) instead of (2). Rearrange it please
  3. 02:22:955 (2,3) - I bet that some beginners will click on the reverse. Move it to the right
Pretty good map, I have nothing more to say c: good luck~
wait!

//thank you for modding!
Caffe_[Latte]
노래 좋군여 !





소나 짱짱
Topic Starter
Norman
감사합니다

소나 짱짱!
AruOtta
Hey, mod from my queue

Normal

  1. 00:33:724 (3) - I don't think this circle is needed, there's no emphasized beat, and there's no vocal here.
  2. 00:35:263 (2) - Try to use CTRL+G here, since it'll increase the flow for the transition between 00:35:263 (2,3).
  3. 00:45:263 (3) - This slider goes at the opposite way of 00:46:416 (1), so it's a problem for the flow, maybe you can try this exemple :
  4. 01:20:263 (1) - The first curve of this slider is a bit too much done, and it's not even a perfect blanket with 01:19:493 (4), try to decreade the curve a little bit ?
  5. 02:46:416 (1) - This slider's second curve is also too much done, the blanket with 02:47:570 (2) isn't perfect, try to do something like this :
  6. 02:51:801 (3) - I suggest to reverse the curve here, then it will flow better with 02:52:570 (1) :
  7. 03:33:147 (1,2) - This is one of the only 1/2 beat with a circle in the whole song, maybe it's a bit hard, and the beat is not so emphasized, so you should delete it.
  8. 03:36:416 (2) - Try to reverse this sldier's curve too, to increase the flow for 03:36:416 (2,3,4) :
  9. 03:39:301 (1,2) - Try to delete this one too (the circle)
Quite perfect diff, ready to rank, except maybe for the 1/2 circles =/

Hard

  1. 00:25:070 (2,3) - Isn't the ditsance between these 2 circles a bit huge compared to the part before ? You should fix it :3
  2. 01:37:186 (4,5,6,7,8) - I don't know if a jump pattern is a good idea, there's going to be a lot of miss here =/
  3. 03:06:032 (3,4) - The distance between these 2 circles is also a bit huge =/
  4. 03:11:224 (2,3) - Same as above for these one
  5. 03:21:416 (3,4,5) - Same as above, you should really use the same distance snap, it's a slow song in a Hard diff :3

    Nothing else to say for this diff, it's quite ready to be ranked I think

Good luck for rane \:D/
Topic Starter
Norman

Kenterz wrote:

Hey, mod from my queue

Normal

  1. 01:20:263 (1) - The first curve of this slider is a bit too much done, and it's not even a perfect blanket with 01:19:493 (4), try to decreade the curve a little bit ? well, I think that now is better..
Quite perfect diff, ready to rank, except maybe for the 1/2 circles =/

Hard

  1. 01:37:186 (4,5,6,7,8) - I don't know if a jump pattern is a good idea, there's going to be a lot of miss here =/ I will think little more about this part.
  2. 03:21:416 (3,4,5) - Same as above, you should really use the same distance snap, it's a slow song in a Hard diff :3 Ummm.. I can think taht it is no problem..maybe

    Nothing else to say for this diff, it's quite ready to be ranked I think

Good luck for rane \:D/
Thank you for modding!
wcx19911123
bubbled
Beige
\:D/ 능력자 노만님
Topic Starter
Norman

wcx19911123 wrote:

bubbled
OMG, Thank you very much!!

W h i t e wrote:

\:D/ 능력자 노만님
모딩 왔을까? 하고 스레드 들어왔더니 1페이지 버블 보고 엄청 당황했어요.

하하.. 감사합니다
Gloria Guard
좋은 곡 하나 랭크되겠네~
Topic Starter
Norman
남은 랭크까지 힘내겠습니다 :>
HabiHolic
오 버블ㅊㅋㅊㅋㅊㅋ 랭크 ㄱㄱㄱ!!!!

그리고 저보고 버블 획득 비법 물어보지 마시길
Topic Starter
Norman
하하 농담입니다

축하 감사합니다.
HelloSCV
Thanks wcx you're my hero :D

축하드립니다! 역시 남는건 쿠도스뿐
Topic Starter
Norman
SCV님 덕분인걸요<3

쿠도스 감사합니다
Shohei Ohtani
tunak tunak tun da da da

Overall:
Sooo. . . I found the version using miku

this is not using miku

this is league of legends shit

make the source league of legends (Or if I'm wrong on the source, make it the right source and give me a webiste saying what the right source is)

everything else is good
Topic Starter
Norman
hard talk..

-delete source
Shohei Ohtani
hope the metadata isn't wrong like I checked.
bilqiscutee
a
Akiyama Mizuki
b

yes
Len
오오오오오 이거 ㅋㅋ HelloSCV 님 수능 보기전에 오 이거 노래좋네요 하고 랭크ㄱㄱ해달라는 소리하고 별 몇개던진게 엊그제같은데
Stefan
Congrats ♥
HabiHolic
측하축하!!!!
Kaburagi Kotetsu
으갸갸갉

랭 축하합니다!
Frobe
Garven
So you're using a hitnormal with a 10 ms delay on it. Use this instead.

http://puu.sh/chP17/3b9a442319.wav

Source isn't LoL since the original song is a miku song, and the lyrics are transliterated to be about Sona instead. It's weird.

[Hard]
01:37:186 (4,5,6,7,8) - This was surprising to come across considering the rest of the map isn't using spacing like this.
Frobe
xLolicore-
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :C
Beige

Frobe wrote:

Topic Starter
Norman
Thank you for tutto congratulations.

Upload :3
Shohei Ohtani
FUCK
koreapenguin

CDFA wrote:

FUCK
Garven
Sorry Norman,

Normally we have other BATs take care of the map after it's been DQ'd. I forgot to mention it in my text, so I'll take care of this one for ya.
Shohei Ohtani
[b]GOTIME[/b]

p3n said yes
koreapenguin
Nice requ <3
Frobe
Akiyama Mizuki
whoa yes
simply because I'm so glad to see this reranked
Topic Starter
Norman
lol

Thanks, guys.
HelloSCV
생각나서 와봤는데 랭크 ㅊㅊ 개굿
Topic Starter
Norman
감사합니다 <3
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