Hey! M4M =)
Beginner
General
Nice map! Feels nice to play. Huge fan of Ren myself. Map is very fitting with the song.
Timing-specific mods
00:07:980 (1) - The slider point, I feel, should be in the middle to accompany the music.
00:11:958 (2) - The middle slider point is not really lined up with the music either, I feel like that would improve the map. Also, consider moving this slider a little bit down and hightening the angle like such http://puu.sh/89D5H.jpg
00:15:936 (1,2) - These sliders look inconsistent, pick one or the other.
00:21:903 (2,3) - This jump doesn't flow well, consider changing it.
00:29:196 (1) - Same on making the slider fit with the music
00:34:500 (1) - Perhaps move the red slider point towards the middle a bit more
00:49:085 (3) - ^^
00:52:400 (2,1) - Not too big of a fan of the overlapping here.
01:04:334 (2,3) - ^^
01:06:323 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/89Doe.jpg ?
Advanced
General
Map feels VERY polished. Love it.
Timing-specific mods
00:11:958 (2) - Perhaps mirror in the x axis?
00:21:240 (1) - ^^
00:40:301 (2) - Perhaps make this one curved?
00:55:052 (4) - Reverse this and mirror
01:20:909 (2) - Mirroring in the X axis feels appropriate.
01:28:864 (2) - Mirror in the x axis because not really too keen on the overlap.
Expert
General
Nice velocity! I don't really have anything to remark on this map.
Timing-specific mods
00:37:649 (2,3,2,3) - Patterns like this I would consider unfitting for this map as a hard, especially because of this being the only time you use them.
Expert
General
Nice velocity! I don't really have anything to remark on this map.
Timing-specific mods
00:10:467 (6) - Move to (96,128)?
00:16:599 (3) - Make this slider a bit more curved
00:17:096 (5,6,7,1) - I feel like these notes flow quite poorly. Consider doing something like http://puu.sh/89Eh6.jpg and http://puu.sh/89EhQ.jpg
01:23:229 (4,1) - I'm not too keen on this.
I'm sorry! I don't feel like I can mod an extra. I hope I was helpful!
Beginner
General
Nice map! Feels nice to play. Huge fan of Ren myself. Map is very fitting with the song.
Timing-specific mods
00:07:980 (1) - The slider point, I feel, should be in the middle to accompany the music.
00:11:958 (2) - The middle slider point is not really lined up with the music either, I feel like that would improve the map. Also, consider moving this slider a little bit down and hightening the angle like such http://puu.sh/89D5H.jpg
00:15:936 (1,2) - These sliders look inconsistent, pick one or the other.
00:21:903 (2,3) - This jump doesn't flow well, consider changing it.
00:29:196 (1) - Same on making the slider fit with the music
00:34:500 (1) - Perhaps move the red slider point towards the middle a bit more
00:49:085 (3) - ^^
00:52:400 (2,1) - Not too big of a fan of the overlapping here.
01:04:334 (2,3) - ^^
01:06:323 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/89Doe.jpg ?
Advanced
General
Map feels VERY polished. Love it.
Timing-specific mods
00:11:958 (2) - Perhaps mirror in the x axis?
00:21:240 (1) - ^^
00:40:301 (2) - Perhaps make this one curved?
00:55:052 (4) - Reverse this and mirror
01:20:909 (2) - Mirroring in the X axis feels appropriate.
01:28:864 (2) - Mirror in the x axis because not really too keen on the overlap.
Expert
General
Nice velocity! I don't really have anything to remark on this map.
Timing-specific mods
00:37:649 (2,3,2,3) - Patterns like this I would consider unfitting for this map as a hard, especially because of this being the only time you use them.
Expert
General
Nice velocity! I don't really have anything to remark on this map.
Timing-specific mods
00:10:467 (6) - Move to (96,128)?
00:16:599 (3) - Make this slider a bit more curved
00:17:096 (5,6,7,1) - I feel like these notes flow quite poorly. Consider doing something like http://puu.sh/89Eh6.jpg and http://puu.sh/89EhQ.jpg
01:23:229 (4,1) - I'm not too keen on this.
I'm sorry! I don't feel like I can mod an extra. I hope I was helpful!