Kano - Tokyo Retro · forum

Oracle

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

Oracle 2014-05-27T12:29:02+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年11月16日 at 2:33:48

Artist: Kano
Title: Tokyo Retro
Tags: vocaloid Hatsune Miku scop すこっぷ iamkwan happy623 fycho
BPM: 126
Filesize: 22786kb
Play Time: 03:50
Difficulties Available:

Fycho's Hard (3.05 stars, 501 notes)
Insane (3.75 stars, 827 notes)
KwaN623's Normal (1.63 stars, 302 notes)

Download: Kano - Tokyo Retro
Download: Kano - Tokyo Retro (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#4
thank you mintong for help on BG and video coding!
please do watch the video~ it's very cuteee ♥
streams are quite slow...and sorry for that xD
i'll try to pick faster song next time!

Normal: IamKwaN x happy623
Hard: Fycho
With Xinely's bubble and Tari's heart! >_<

Last edited by Oracle 2014-11-19T19:50:28+00:00, edited 35 times in total.

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Crystal 2014-05-27T12:53:29+00:00

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鹿乃

Awaken

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Awaken 2014-07-12T13:23:29+00:00

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Oracle

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Oracle 2014-08-21T23:13:17+00:00

这歌怎么这么长，做不出来呜呜

EDIT:finished!

Oracle

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Oracle 2014-09-08T05:49:43+00:00

waiting for fycho and kwan & yf =A=

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-09-09T10:40:34+00:00

Done my part: http://puu.sh/brS6H/01cf4e75e4.rar

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Fycho

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Fycho 2014-09-19T05:22:17+00:00

kano - Tokyo Retro (Oracle) [Fycho's Hard].osu

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99,199,218188,2,0,L|262:173,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,137,218903,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,186,219141,2,0,P|440:170|466:65,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,137,219855,1,2,0:0:0:0:
254,97,220093,6,0,L|216:103,3,37.5,2|2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,102,220569,2,0,L|143:96,3,37.5,2|0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,83,221046,2,0,L|66:89,3,37.5,2|2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
27,111,221522,2,0,L|17:31,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,0,221998,6,0,P|176:-6|240:40,1,150,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,108,222712,1,2,0:0:0:0:
166,182,222950,2,0,P|150:229|158:271,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,275,223307,2,0,L|287:257,1,112.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,207,223903,5,0,0:0:0:0:
355,295,224141,1,2,0:0:0:0:
414,348,224379,2,0,P|457:338|486:317,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
491,237,224855,1,2,0:0:0:0:
491,237,224974,2,0,L|479:144,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,133,225331,2,0,L|480:58,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,182,225807,6,0,P|329:184|265:108,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,48,226522,1,2,0:0:0:0:
195,48,226760,2,0,L|270:33,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
134,115,227236,2,0,P|111:85|105:49,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,136,227712,5,6,0:0:0:0:
297,136,228665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,200,228903,2,0,L|256:240,2,37.5,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,229379,2,0,L|256:26,2,37.5,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,229736,12,4,230569,0:0:0:0:

happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2014-09-21T05:13:03+00:00

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sammy711

207 posts

Joined November 2012

sammy711 2014-09-21T13:24:53+00:00

飞球飞球飞球飞球飞球飞球飞球飞球飞球飞球

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

moonlightleaf 2014-09-21T14:30:35+00:00

其实真的已经quit modding了不知道怎么是好

[insane]

00:41:760 (6) - 把6放到后面2上面 6接1 正好1也是高音小跳不错然后后面的 00:42:712 (3,4,5) - 这样↓

SPOILER

00:37:236 (1) - 这边开始是8个连打 00:37:355 和 00:37:832 补note 改串吧

00:45:093 (5,6,7) - 这样↓

SPOILER

00:53:427 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 怎么感觉偷懒啊我不喜欢这个梗试试↓

SPOILER

00:56:522 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这样↓

SPOILER

01:02:236 (5) - x|244 y|224

01:07:951 (1) - 折返

01:09:617 (3) - 好别扭，换成滑条后面接俩note

SPOILER

01:00:570 (3,4) - 试试↓

SPOILER

01:14:379 (1,2,3,4) - 试试↓

SPOILER

01:16:760 (2,3) - 2折返 3删

01:19:855 (5,6) - look ↓

SPOILER

01:54:379 (1) - 首尾和前面的12叠住

01:57:236 (1) - 可以删desu

02:01:998 (1,2,1) - 分别都ctrl+g 看看

02:04:379 (2,3,4,5) - see ↓

SPOILER

02:11:522 (1,2) - 同时选中然后ctrl+g

02:56:284 (1,2) - 全选ctrl+g 再分别ctrl+g

03:08:188 (2) - x|432 y|152

03:16:879 (6) - 似乎是没声的，应该是为了和后面对称

03:36:046 (4) - 试试 ↓

SPOILER

03:49:855 (2,3) - 是否换下位子打的顺

Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2014-09-22T03:46:53+00:00

Hi Oracle, modding as you requested.

[General]

As I mentioned in-game, Normal is missing video.
Countdown is inconsistent between Insane and other difficulties. It would be nice if this setting was the same across all maps in the set.
Disable letterbox for Insane since there are no breaks.
It might be cool if you skin the spinner to look like the clock in the video.

[KwaN623]

Just wondering, why were whistles (kick) used in the first half of the map, but not the second half? I recognize that this is a collab, but it's still weird for the player when there are hitsound inconsistencies like this. Consider making the use of whistles consistent throughout the map.
00:44:379 (4) - I don't know if you care or not, but the shape of this slider looks quite sloppy. You can improve the shape and blankets with the other objects by moving the slider points on the curve (2nd and 4th points) such that they are equidistant from the points on either side of them: http://puu.sh/bIF8A/c85754d6b1.jpg
02:25:808 (3) - Maybe you meant to use normal-hitfinish88 here? (Additions: Normal)
02:32:236 (4) - You should probably add a hitsound on the end. soft-hitwhistle88 or drum-hitfinish would fit well.
02:24:855 - For this section, I suggest arranging combos like this (I think it matches better with the phrasing of the music): http://puu.sh/bIFv5/2b222b277c.jpg
02:41:522 (1) - Curved slider fits better here for a "stretched" feeling to match with the electric guitar sound in the music.
02:53:427 (3) - Missed clap on end.
03:28:665 (4,5) - Missed claps on ends.
03:34:379 (1) - Missed clap on end.

[Fycho]

I think Stack Leniency 5 would make parts like 00:31:879 (4,2) look much better.
00:30:570 (1,2,3) - I think this part will feel nicer if you space (1,2) closer and (2,3) farther. (2) is on a weak beat, so jumping to the stronger beat on (3) makes more sense.
00:34:379 (1) - Should there be a whistle on the head? It sounds a bit empty without it.
00:51:522 - Since S and SC:2 have the same hitwhistle (default), I think you can use SC:2 here if you want silenced sliderslide. The same goes for 01:21:998 - 02:22:951 - 03:32:474 - 03:32:712
03:41:998 (1) - The big overlap with HP bar makes this unpleasant to look at, and can be distracting to the player.

[Oracle]

00:31:760 (1) - Unnecessary new combo. Remove it to match other parts.
00:45:332 (7,8,1) - It's just my opinion, but I feel like this doesn't flow very well. I suggest moving 00:45:093 (5,6,7) up (higher than (8)): http://puu.sh/bISEl/79b2438383.jpg or http://puu.sh/bISOH/238ef7192e.jpg
01:08:663 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:29:617 (4) - Start a new combo here to match 00:28:665 (1)
01:34:379 (1) - Make combo consistent with 00:33:427 (3)
02:55:807 (3,4,1) - The flow here is a bit awkward. Here is my suggestion: http://puu.sh/bITdv/7fd48c735a.jpg
03:03:427 (7) - I'm not sure if you broke the flow intentionally or not, but I think making it smoother here would be better. Try to make it so that the angle of release matches the direction of (1). Example: http://puu.sh/bITul/1fa0d2e01e.jpg (20 degrees clockwise and Ctrl+G)

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2014-09-22T10:28:31+00:00

( =`･ω･´) Rakuen's Modding Queue (NM/M4M)

[General]
:3
欧拉球♥

[Diff spread]
Suggest an Easy diff, Normal has a slightly fast SV and using a lot of red ticks. But most of them are easy tho, should be fine

[Song Intro]
The intro for Fycho’s Hard is slightly earlier than Normal and Insane. Suggest to make it same or at least for Insane cuz they are both harder diffs than Normal

[KwaN623’s Normal]
0.0’’ list when for whose part in description?
HP Drain: -1 (2) seems it’s the easiest diff in the map if you don’t want to make an Easy, coz I find HP drain occurs at parts like 01:06:998 -
00:22:951 (1) – Make the shape looks more like 00:23:903 (2,3) - :

Image

01:02:951 (4) – Replace this with a circle to match with the rhythm of 01:01:046 (1,2) – since nothing is put at 01:01:284 –
01:07:951 (5) – NC for easier reading and there’s a timing distance and lead to KIAI
01:23:427 (4) - ^ This one feels like a bit special after timing space
01:37:236 (3) – Minor here, the distance between tail of 01:36:284 (2) – and head of 01:37:236 (3) – is more than its tail. Try this:

Image

01:38:188 (4) – Make this one bend to up, feels better to match curvy 01:39:141 (1) –
01:52:474 (4) – This is a bit off flow, suggest to move 01:51:998 (3) – to more left part
02:03:903 (4) – Applies same with 01:02:951 (4) –
02:08:903 (5) – NC for easier reading and there’s a timing distance and lead to KIAI
02:28:427 (3) – NC for consistency of every 1 big beat from 02:24:855 (1,2,3) – to 02:30:332 (1,2,3,4) -
02:41:046 (7) – NC should be here instead of 02:41:522 (1) – for beat I guess
03:00:093 (1,2,3,4) – Feels this pattern is a bit hard to read, suggest these 2 rhythms:

Image

_

03:01:998 – A break can be at here to kill HP drain
03:46:284 (2) – imo stacking slider head and tail isn’t a best choice, new players might find it’s confusing

Stable, good normal

[Fycho’s Hard]
HP Drain: +1 (6), optional, but seems there are many NCs and jumps aren’t too big, can add to increase difficulty
00:12:951 (4,5) – Reverse selection (Ctrl+G), feels like jump should be at 00:13:427 (1) – instead of 00:12:951 (4) - , and it fits the flow better too
00:24:379 – Something can be filled here, there’s a strong drum hit and the guitar sound there too. But it should be fine if you keep the same rhythm for other place too
00:54:617 (5) – Prefer reverse select it for clockwise rotating jump 00:54:617 (5,6,1) –
01:12:474 (1) – Blanket 01:12:236 (6) - ? ww
01:21:998 (1) – Stack this on 01:21:046 (3) – (minor)
01:38:903 (1) – A bit too hard for the diff, suggest to remove it and let players to have time to recover and aim altho it might not affect cursor movement
02:24:855 (1) – imo it’s hard to read the jump, can try stacking at tail of 02:24:141 (3) – (optional, actually it’s not that hard XD)

[Insane]
Remove Letterbox in breaks and countdown
00:32:236 (3) – Reverse select (Ctrl+G), match pattern with 00:31:760 (1,2) - , not much flow needed for short sliders imo
00:41:879 – Add a circle here to match rhythm with 00:37:951 (5,6,1) - , feels better for same rhythm altho there’s no vocal there
00:53:427 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is nice

(not a mod)
00:58:903 – I heard my name here troll xd (not a mod)
01:08:427 – Suggest to add a circle here and stack on 01:07:236 (3) - to fully stick with the vocal, more excitement for jump 01:08:663 (1) – . And as you did at 02:09:379 -
01:15:808 (5) – NC this, helps in reading different pattern and density
02:32:712 (1) – Remove the reverse for this!!! Vocal is so kawaii!

This song is so kawaii! Bo bo~ 02:32:712 – omg >w< I’m healed
Please rank ora-sama!

lkx_Shore

1,453 posts

Joined January 2010

lkx_Shore 2014-09-25T13:29:30+00:00

Hi.

General

I checked repeatedly many times,I can't see any diff used S:2 and N:2 hitsound.But you add them...

Insane

You have a unsapped object at 01:08:663.
As Rakuen's words "Remove Letterbox in breaks and countdown",Cuz it is unnecessary.

00:26:522 (11) - Add heavy hitsound at here.Start jump from heavy hitsound will have a great feel.
00:37:236 - Change into 40% volume?I think this is the most suitable volume,45% is noisy but 35% is quiet.
01:19:855 (5) - I guess you missed Finish at slider tail.Cuz i hear the little heavy sound at here.
01:09:855 (4,5,6) - Parallel it better imo.
01:37:236 (1) - Slider head hitsound change into Finish?Finish hitsound more like the music sound imo.
01:38:189 (1) - Same as 00:37:236 - point of view.
01:45:332 (3,8,9,1) - Make stream more tilt or stack will be better.Now it looks a little weird.
01:47:474 (3,4,5) - Same as above~
02:06:522 (1) - This parts play feel weird,Why not use red line slider at 02:06:522 - and add a circle at 02:06:998 - ?If will be better.
img
02:21:046 (1) - Add a Finish at slider head?Same as 01:19:855 (5) - .
02:32:712 (1) - Remove slider return,Slider return is excess imo,Remove it can make "pu-pu" more prominent(The appropriate break will make player feel the sound has very stong presence.Continuous operation instead not so good).
style1
Or you can try change 02:32:712 - into circle and add 1/2 slider at 02:32:951 -.This style is largely let player click the sound.Click also have the same effect and before.
style2
03:00:093 (1,2,1,2,3) - Same as 02:06:522 (1) - point of view.
03:47:712 (1) - Same as 01:37:236 (1) - point of view.

Fycho's Hard

00:34:379 (1) - Add a Whistle at slider head?Cuz i hear the little heavy sound here.
00:51:522 (1) - Emm,Maybe change into normal-additions Whistle at slider head will be better.
00:52:474 - Change into 40% volume?I think this is the most suitable volume,45% is noisy but 35% is quiet.
01:23:903 (1) - Change into Finish?Will be more powerful.
01:53:427 - 50% volume?Change into 40% volume will be better,Same as 00:52:474 - point of view.
03:34:379 (1) - Change into Finish?Same as 01:23:903 (1) - .

KwaN623's Normal

00:51:522 (4) - Change into default normal-additions?It more fit music imo.
Or Change into Finish,Like 01:37:236 (3) - .

Others

Fine~
Goodluck.

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-09-25T14:40:22+00:00

師傅幫我改哇把00:51:522換成soft finish.

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Gamu 2014-09-27T11:49:46+00:00

hello~ thank you for request!

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[

General]

About Tags : You should add a composer and the name of Hatsune Miku. so please add "すこっぷ", "scop", and "Hatsune Miku".
Reference page: http://noonehears.main.jp/about.shtml http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm21113426
"Letterbox during breaks" and "Enable countdown" has not been unified. It is necessary to unify them. They don't make sense at all in this map...
Can you add collab name (SB) to Normal diff? Or, you should be described about part in the creator's word. It's necessary for the mapper and player

[

KwaN623's Normal]

00:52:474 (5,1) - About the end point of the (5), you are taking what the sound? I didn't know it. 00:53:427 (1) - Remove this, and I'd like suggest to extend (5) to 00: 53: 427. Also, this is do not forget that the Normal diff. Easy rhythm is preferred.
image
01:21:522 (3) - Add a clap at the end point. I want a sound of something
01:30:570 (4) - I think the form of this slider is strange. and there is no sound like tremble. Maybe,curve slider would be suitable.
image
01:53:426 (5,1) - The same as 00:52:474 (5,1). I think one slider is really better.
03:16:998 (4) - There is a strong sound at the end point, so add a normal-finish in order to emphasize? However volume is too large, so there will be a need to 40%~50%.

[

Fycho's Hard]

00:30:570 (1) - Why don't you create a blanket slider? Look and flow is also good, and I prefer this :3
image & code
01:21:998 (1) - I want to add the finish instead of a whistle at the start point. It's unsatisfactory in the whistle, and not emphasized much.
01:23:903 (1) - ^ The same thing
03:17:236 (9) - Add a finish in order to emphasize.
03:32:474 (1) - The same as 01:21:998 (1).
03:34:379 (1) - ^
03:48:665 (2) - Add a new combo here? If you look at the pattern of your new combo, need here.

[

Insane]

change to HP7? It has the effect of increasing the score~
01:08:663 (1) - this isn't snapped!
01:23:903 (1) - add a finish in order to emphasize.
02:06:046 (2,1,2,3) - These finish is a stange. You should be add to only 02:05:808 (1).
03:00:093 (1,2,1,2,3) - ^. You should add to 03:00:093 (1) and the end point of 03:01:522.
03:17:236 (1) - add a finish in order to emphasize~
03:34:379 (1) - ^ at the start point.

good mapset~

Last edited by Gamu 2014-10-01T05:15:57+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-09-27T13:07:58+00:00

Gamu wrote:
00:52:474 (5,1) - About the end point of the (5), you are taking what the sound? I didn't know it. 00:53:427 (1) - Remove this, and I'd like suggest to extend (5) to 00: 53: 427. Also, this is do not forget that the Normal diff. Easy rhythm is preferred. I am mapping to the drum, it's really obvious. Also, 1/2 rhythm in this case is really easy already. If you switch to 623's part, her rhythm choices are much more difficult.
01:30:570 (4) - I think the form of this slider is strange. and there is no sound like tremble. Maybe,curve slider would be suitable. nope, try to listen carefully, there're quite a number of strings
01:53:426 (5,1) - The same as 00:52:474 (5,1). I think one slider is really better. explained already

Others are fixed, thank you~

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Tokyo Retro.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 69141
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22951,38189,53427,68665,81998,83903,99141,114379,129617,144855,153427,168665,183903,199141,214379,230569
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.7000009

[Metadata]
Title:Tokyo Retro
TitleUnicode:東京レトロ
Artist:kano
ArtistUnicode:鹿乃
Creator:Oracle
Version:KwaN623's Normal
Source:
Tags:vocaloid iamkwan happy623 fycho
BeatmapID:497045
BeatmapSetID:179036

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

pkk 2014-09-27T21:57:22+00:00

I'll take a look once you apply all the mods \o/ 01:08:663 (1) - SNAP THIS OBJECT ;A;

DeletedUser_1574070

DeletedUser_1574070 2014-10-09T05:44:13+00:00

Insane

02:06:046 (2) - make copy of this and ctrl H and put here 02:07:236 - it might flow and look better
02:28:903 (1) - this one. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2115061
02:31:284 (3) - 3/4 is good enough
02:44:498 - i'd rather put triplets on 02:44:617 - here
02:56:284 (1) - 45' rotation might be better
03:31:998 (1,2,3) - consider making this pattern triangle.
03:40:807 (6) - gonna explain with this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2115070 <- its on the same line of y axis. and take a look at this 03:40:569 (5,6,1) - then u'll might understand what this pattern became better.
03:41:522 (5,6) - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2115073

prpr those KwaN623

01:51:998 (3) - make this under slider 2 in order to make better flow http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2115115
02:54:379 (4,5,6) - since u put different axis of sliders on 4,5 / 6might be better on 424:252
03:40:093 (3,4,5) - recommend putting 5 220:36

FYCHO

00:09:617 (1,2) - make these same
00:41:998 (1) - to make better overlap, this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2115128
01:23:427 - how can u express that 'tick!' sound? i'd rather put a circle 01:23:189 - at the end of the 01:23:189 (2) - and put slider .. no showing this might be better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2115134
02:16:284 (4,5) - bit hard to catch so 02:16:284 (4) - reverse this one more time? so do on 03:25:807 (4,5) -
02:23:427 (2) - better overlap comes from 1.20x spacing http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2115137 but this is good enough imo
03:48:665 (2) - plz NC on here

UNRANKABLE
- snap this 01:08:665 (1) -
- check countdown and letterbox on all diffs
.

happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2014-10-09T11:14:46+00:00

Kloyd wrote:
prpr those KwaN623

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-10-18T09:56:06+00:00

Fixed baka Kloyd's mod and also filled the prelude.
@623: 02:14:855 - 02:53:903 - 03:29:141 - 03:30:093 - 03:34:855 - missing clap

SPOILER

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Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Mei 2014-10-19T04:23:28+00:00

[insane]

先查下aimod .-.

00:14:855 (5,4) - 没叠好
00:22:236 这个地方建议加上，因为后面鹿乃‘啵啵’那里你都加了这个也加上呗,-.
00:45:093 (5,6,7) - 建议移到x68 y120，这样的话00:45:093 (5,6,7,8,1) - 能组成一个三角形感觉好打
00:53:189 (7) - 这7放在这里有什么意义么？试试放在x240 y200或者其他间距相等的地方

[fycho's hard]

01:23:189 (2) - 缩短1/2在白线结尾？
01:48:546 (2) - 前面三连是有vocal，这里可以不用三连了吧

nm fine
编了半天编不出什么来，射你一星放过我吧;w;

Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

Oracle 2014-10-20T22:19:12+00:00

Flandre_ErMei wrote:
其实真的已经quit modding了不知道怎么是好

[insane]

00:41:760 (6) - 把6放到后面2上面 6接1 正好1也是高音小跳不错然后后面的 00:42:712 (3,4,5) - 这样↓
SPOILER

00:37:236 (1) - 这边开始是8个连打 00:37:355 和 00:37:832 补note 改串吧没事跟的鼓

00:45:093 (5,6,7) - 这样↓
SPOILER

00:53:427 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 怎么感觉偷懒啊我不喜欢这个梗试试↓ 还是喜欢现在的
SPOILER

00:56:522 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这样↓
SPOILER

01:02:236 (5) - x|244 y|224

01:07:951 (1) - 折返

01:09:617 (3) - 好别扭，换成滑条后面接俩note remap了
SPOILER

01:00:570 (3,4) - 试试↓
SPOILER

01:14:379 (1,2,3,4) - 试试↓
SPOILER

01:16:760 (2,3) - 2折返 3删

01:19:855 (5,6) - look ↓
SPOILER

01:54:379 (1) - 首尾和前面的12叠住感觉没必要

01:57:236 (1) - 可以删desu 我跟的whistle

02:01:998 (1,2,1) - 分别都ctrl+g 看看喜欢现在的

02:04:379 (2,3,4,5) - see ↓
SPOILER

02:11:522 (1,2) - 同时选中然后ctrl+g 没动

02:56:284 (1,2) - 全选ctrl+g 再分别ctrl+g 没动

03:08:188 (2) - x|432 y|152

03:16:879 (6) - 似乎是没声的，应该是为了和后面对称

03:36:046 (4) - 试试 ↓
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03:49:855 (2,3) - 是否换下位子打的顺故意反过来的

没提的都改了谢谢二妹

CloudSplash16 wrote:
Hi Oracle, modding as you requested
[Oracle]
00:31:760 (1) - Unnecessary new combo. Remove it to match other parts.
00:45:332 (7,8,1) - It's just my opinion, but I feel like this doesn't flow very well. I suggest moving 00:45:093 (5,6,7) up (higher than (8)): http://puu.sh/bISEl/79b2438383.jpg or http://puu.sh/bISOH/238ef7192e.jpg
01:08:663 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:29:617 (4) - Start a new combo here to match 00:28:665 (1)
01:34:379 (1) - Make combo consistent with 00:33:427 (3)
02:55:807 (3,4,1) - The flow here is a bit awkward. Here is my suggestion: http://puu.sh/bITdv/7fd48c735a.jpg
03:03:427 (7) - I'm not sure if you broke the flow intentionally or not, but I think making it smoother here would be better. Try to make it so that the angle of release matches the direction of (1). Example: http://puu.sh/bITul/1fa0d2e01e.jpg (20 degrees clockwise and Ctrl+G)i think this could go either way. and there's a 1/1 gap between the next object so flow is not that fatal in this case!

i fixed everything i didn't mention! thank you for modding moecloud!

Rakuen wrote:
( =`･ω･´) Rakuen's Modding Queue (NM/M4M)

[Song Intro]
The intro for Fycho’s Hard is slightly earlier than Normal and Insane. Suggest to make it same or at least for Insane cuz they are both harder diffs than Normal
we filled up the intro~
[Insane]
Remove Letterbox in breaks and countdown
00:32:236 (3) – Reverse select (Ctrl+G), match pattern with 00:31:760 (1,2) - , not much flow needed for short sliders imo
00:41:879 – Add a circle here to match rhythm with 00:37:951 (5,6,1) - , feels better for same rhythm altho there’s no vocal there i am following vocal so i didn't change this
00:53:427 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is nice (not a mod) thank you!!
00:58:903 – I heard my name here troll xd (not a mod) xD
01:08:427 – Suggest to add a circle here and stack on 01:07:236 (3) - to fully stick with the vocal, more excitement for jump 01:08:663 (1) – . And as you did at 02:09:379 -
01:15:808 (5) – NC this, helps in reading different pattern and density
02:32:712 (1) – Remove the reverse for this!!! Vocal is so kawaii!

This song is so kawaii! Bo bo~ 02:32:712 – omg >w< I’m healed
Please rank ora-sama!

non-mentioned=fix!!! xDDD

lkx_Shore wrote:
Hi.

General

I checked repeatedly many times,I can't see any diff used S:2 and N:2 hitsound.But you add them... removed!

Insane
You have a unsapped object at 01:08:663.
As Rakuen's words "Remove Letterbox in breaks and countdown",Cuz it is unnecessary.
00:26:522 (11) - Add heavy hitsound at here.Start jump from heavy hitsound will have a great feel.
00:37:236 - Change into 40% volume?I think this is the most suitable volume,45% is noisy but 35% is quiet.
01:19:855 (5) - I guess you missed Finish at slider tail.Cuz i hear the little heavy sound at here.
01:09:855 (4,5,6) - Parallel it better imo. remade this part
01:37:236 (1) - Slider head hitsound change into Finish?Finish hitsound more like the music sound imo.
01:38:189 (1) - Same as 00:37:236 - point of view.
01:45:332 (3,8,9,1) - Make stream more tilt or stack will be better.Now it looks a little weird. prefer my own one
01:47:474 (3,4,5) - Same as above~ same~
02:06:522 (1) - This parts play feel weird,Why not use red line slider at 02:06:522 - and add a circle at 02:06:998 - ?If will be better.
img
yeah good point!
02:21:046 (1) - Add a Finish at slider head?Same as 01:19:855 (5) - .
02:32:712 (1) - Remove slider return,Slider return is excess imo,Remove it can make "pu-pu" more prominent(The appropriate break will make player feel the sound has very stong presence.Continuous operation instead not so good).
style1
Or you can try change 02:32:712 - into circle and add 1/2 slider at 02:32:951 -.This style is largely let player click the sound.Click also have the same effect and before.
style2
03:00:093 (1,2,1,2,3) - Same as 02:06:522 (1) - point of view.
03:47:712 (1) - Same as 01:37:236 (1) - point of view.

Others

Fine~
Goodluck.

thanks for modding!!

Gamu wrote:
hello~ thank you for request!

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[ General]
About Tags : You should add a composer and the name of Hatsune Miku. so please add "すこっぷ", "scop", and "Hatsune Miku".
Reference page: http://noonehears.main.jp/about.shtml http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm21113426 done! thank you for metadata check~!
"Letterbox during breaks" and "Enable countdown" has not been unified. It is necessary to unify them. They don't make sense at all in this map...
Can you add collab name (SB) to Normal diff? Or, you should be described about part in the creator's word. It's necessary for the mapper and player okay!

[ Insane]
change to HP7? It has the effect of increasing the score~
01:08:663 (1) - this isn't snapped!
01:23:903 (1) - add a finish in order to emphasize.
02:06:046 (2,1,2,3) - These finish is a stange. You should be add to only 02:05:808 (1). i keep this as i heard something from the song x.x
03:00:093 (1,2,1,2,3) - ^. You should add to 03:00:093 (1) and the end point of 03:01:522. same~
03:17:236 (1) - add a finish in order to emphasize~ feels a bit loud to me
03:34:379 (1) - ^ at the start point.

good mapset~

useful hitsound mod =w=
thanks gamu!

Kloyd wrote:
Insane
02:06:046 (2) - make copy of this and ctrl H and put here 02:07:236 - it might flow and look better tried but like the original one
02:28:903 (1) - this one. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2115061
02:31:284 (3) - 3/4 is good enough
02:44:498 - i'd rather put triplets on 02:44:617 - here
02:56:284 (1) - 45' rotation might be better it breaks the blanket
03:31:998 (1,2,3) - consider making this pattern triangle.
03:40:807 (6) - gonna explain with this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2115070 <- its on the same line of y axis. and take a look at this 03:40:569 (5,6,1) - then u'll might understand what this pattern became better.
03:41:522 (5,6) - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2115073
UNRANKABLE
- snap this 01:08:665 (1) -
- check countdown and letterbox on all diffs fixed everything
.

very helpful mod.

Mei wrote:
[insane]

先查下aimod .-.
00:14:855 (5,4) - 没叠好

00:22:236 这个地方建议加上，因为后面鹿乃‘啵啵’那里你都加了这个也加上呗,-. 这里想留空因为video这里很强力啊（虽然没人会看video打

00:45:093 (5,6,7) - 建议移到x68 y120，这样的话00:45:093 (5,6,7,8,1) - 能组成一个三角形感觉好打

00:53:189 (7) - 这7放在这里有什么意义么？试试放在x240 y200或者其他间距相等的地方

nm fine
编了半天编不出什么来，射你一星放过我吧;w;

其他都fix！
-----------------------------------------------------------
not mentioned=fixed!!
thanks for modding guys!

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-10-21T13:38:38+00:00

as your request here

General

在Normal diff里还没有SB mapper的名字，可能你忘了加名字的files

Bakwan623's Normal

00:12:951 (2) - nazi,the blanket could be better here, move the slider to 80,220
00:29:617 (4) - the rhythm can improved here since you skip to map 00:30:093 - which it has drum sound here,改slider成http://puu.sh/ckxm9.jpg
00:34:141 - add note here to following the guitar's sound? it feels kinda empty imo when the sound is quite loud for me
00:45:808 (1) - ctrl+G for this slider? imo the flow could be more natural like circular flow here after ctrl+G
00:52:474 (5) - shorten the slider to 00:52:951 - to map the drum, you can add circle at 00:53:189 - to make 1/2 rhythm (make it a little bit harder!)
00:54:855 (3,4) - nazi but blanket looks a little bit off here, move slider's head node to 384,180
01:05:570 - the drum sound is loud here, try http://puu.sh/ckJQG.jpg (i know you mapped 01:06:046 - 01:06:522 - because drums but you can skip it with follow vocal instead)
01:21:522 (3) - use sampleset normal and remove the clap here. the music is stong same as 01:21:522 -
01:30:570 (4) - same as 00:29:617 (4) -
01:35:093 - same as 00:34:141 -
01:44:855 (3) - nazi but blanket could be better by move this circle to 420,196
01:53:426 (5) - same as 00:52:474 (5) - (but the music that i say here is crystal sound that sounds loud at 01:53:903 - )
02:02:474 (2) - just personal taste but i prefer move the tail of the slider to 344,376 for the flow
02:05:807 (1) - add finish on head because the cymbal (that "psssh" sound) here, if you add it please add in 01:04:855 (1) - too lol
02:06:522 - same as 01:05:570 -
02:14:141 (2) - remove this circle. the rhythms are too long here, this is Normal as easiest diff so it should be have easier rhythm
02:18:665 (2,3) - unstack here, we already know that newbie usually have problem to read stack pattern
02:36:760 (5) - the slider a little bit too upward here so it feels kinda bad for me, try make it smoother example http://puu.sh/ckKAm.jpg
02:41:046 (7,1) - swap the NC? imo NC on the circle giving emphasize the cymbal too ><
02:47:712 (5) - nazi but the curve slider a little bit too curvy here, imo the flow become nicer when you move the tail to 152,68 (dont forget to fix rest spacings when you fix it)
02:51:522 (6) - according both music and vocal, this slider should be separated into 2 circles here
03:02:236 - until 03:03:665 - you should map this because they still have musics that quite loud here
03:03:903 - until 03:17:712 - owait Normal diff w/o break here? sadly but i have to say that i really recommand to remove all objects here to give a break for newbies. 3:50 lengths w/o break feels so painful for newbie here
03:23:665 (2) - same as 02:14:141 (2) -
02:24:379 (2) - and 03:33:903 (2) - please use N:C88 80% volume with whistle here like kwan did. tbh with N 20% clap i cant hear the hitsounds here

Hard

00:12:474 (3) - since the part is still calm and the normal diff is the easiest diff here, would be better to keep make easy with ctrl+G here
00:22:236 (2,3) - hmm ctrl+G? imo it would be better when you give normal spacing in (2) and jump to (3) so player have much time to preparing the jump
00:24:260 (4) - actually i feel the slider a little bit weird here because it skip drum sound at 00:24:379 - , it would be nicer (imo) if you do http://puu.sh/cll9I.jpg
00:28:070 (5) - for this slider i prefer to change into 1/2 and start on 00:28:189 - , since the blue tick has weak sound when the whitetick has a quite loud drum sound here
00:31:284 (2) - try move the circle to 128,324, have a jump for 00:31:522 - to emphasize the music feels better here since it has louder sound than red tick one
00:31:879 (4) - same as 00:24:260 (4) -
00:31:879 (4,2) - nazi but you can better stack here if you didnt fix from above
00:36:403 (1,1) - make the gap from spinner to next slider become 1/1, i know the bpm is low but if Garven says 1/1 for "normally" 160 bpm, so 1/2 only can be used from 80 bpm here
00:43:903 (1) - actually the jump a little bit feels forced for here because the music is relaxing, also the flow from previous slider to this slider kinda sharp
00:52:712 (2,3,4) - hmm imo after the 1/4 on previous i feel a little bit hard to catch this one, i prefer to make it become 1/4 slider repeat to make easier :3
00:53:427 - until 01:00:808 - imo you put too much of jumps here, i feel they are kinda hard for Hard here, you should to remove some of jumps here to make balance jump pattern with other parts
01:05:570 (2) - the flow a little bit bad for me since according the curve slider from previous, the circle should be on leftward instead of rightward here
01:08:189 (2) - i almost can't hear a hitsound in tail here, how about add whistle there? to emphasize the vocal as well
01:20:570 (2,3) - aa just my personal taste but i prefer to make the curve on (3) become to upward https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2158291 since it giving more natural flow imo
01:23:427 - please map this song since after the so relax previous time, this sound feels so loud, totally empty when you skip it
01:23:903 (1) - add finish because the cymbal
01:39:141 (2) - finish at head because cymbal
01:41:760 (3,4) - same explanation as 01:05:570 (2) -
02:00:570 (2) - missing whistle?
02:05:808 (1) - finish on head? that "pppssh" sound looks like cymbal here
02:22:951 - the music is quite loud here, hitnormal of default normal sound would be nice here
02:24:379 - same as 01:23:427 -
02:32:951 (2) - nazi but ctrl+G gives more natural flow here for me since it making circular flow from the circle to this slider
03:04:855 - until 03:11:284 - omg almost no hitsound here? you can add whistle on every whiteticks imo and adding some whistles for emphasize the vocal example 03:08:427 -
03:21:046 (1) - nazi thing but aa jump on slider to next circle a quite sharp here imo, i prefer to ctrl+G this one actually
03:31:522 (3) - same as 01:23:427 -
03:34:379 (1) - add finish because the cymbal
03:43:307 (4) - same as 00:28:070 (5) -
Actually hitsounds on kiai times can improved more here, try add some claps on 2nd and 4th whiteticks?

Insane

00:22:236 - maybe add 1/2 slider here to emphasize that music? a little bit empty
00:36:760 (2,3) - the flow a little bit plain here imo, it would be nicer when you curve the sliders a little bit http://puu.sh/clFtI.jpg
00:43:903 (1,2,3,4) - the square shape a little bit messy for me, also the spacing kinda small for me, i prefer to arrange them like http://puu.sh/clFCT.jpg
01:04:855 (1) - add finish, "ppssh" sounds like cymbal here
01:07:951 (1) - hmm maybe use specific colour for 1,50x SV here, i got trap on this slider at first testplay lol
01:18:903 (4) - how about move the circle to 208,56? imo the really straight flow from previous to this circle feels kinda bad for me, a little bit curvy flow better
01:20:093 (6,1) - based your NC pattern, it should be swap NC here. the combos look inconsistency
01:37:712 (2,3) - same as 00:36:760 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/clJv1.jpg
01:39:141 (1) - add finish on head because cymbal
01:39:617 (2) - actually i feel a huge jump doesnt fit here, i prefer move this circle to 372,356
01:50:570 (1) - same as 01:04:855 (1) -
02:01:284 (2,1) - the spacing (on the circle) feels kinda low here. i prefer move them to 304,256 (if you fix this then move 02:02:474 (2) - 220,200)
02:05:808 (1) - add finish because the cymbal sound here
02:25:570 (2) - maybe just for me but the jump is too far for me. how about reduce it around 376,336 here. also looks nicer when the first jump is small and getting higher until 02:31:046 -
02:56:284 (1) - ctrl+G this one? i guess this slider needs a jump to emphasize the cymbal sound
03:00:093 (1) - add finish because cymbal
03:05:569 (5) - nazi but the flow feels better when you do circular flow with move this circle to 96,252

Good luck ~

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,480 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-10-23T04:09:27+00:00

Xinely wrote:

Hard
00:12:474 (3) - since the part is still calm and the normal diff is the easiest diff here, would be better to keep make easy with ctrl+G here It's just to match the high pitch in music, and this is sliderjump not that hard, also their distance of place(not ds) is same
00:22:236 (2,3) - hmm ctrl+G? imo it would be better when you give normal spacing in (2) and jump to (3) so player have much time to preparing the jump The anti-jump and jump are made intentionally, just to emphasize music here. People won't be hard to hit/read as the music is it.
00:24:260 (4) - actually i feel the slider a little bit weird here because it skip drum sound at 00:24:379 - , it would be nicer (imo) if you do http://puu.sh/cll9I.jpg I don't follow the main drum here and all of them are fine to play/ not overmapped, keep it
00:28:070 (5) - for this slider i prefer to change into 1/2 and start on 00:28:189 - , since the blue tick has weak sound when the whitetick has a quite loud drum sound here^
00:31:284 (2) - try move the circle to 128,324, have a jump for 00:31:522 - to emphasize the music feels better here since it has louder sound than red tick one nono I am not going to emphasize the white tick here. And jump of slider to circle is MUCH EASIER than circle to circle, so that jump00:30:570 (1,2) - can't be compared with00:31:284 (2,3) -
00:31:879 (4) - same as 00:24:260 (4) -^
00:31:879 (4,2) - nazi but you can better stack here if you didnt fix from above ok
00:36:403 (1,1) - make the gap from spinner to next slider become 1/1, i know the bpm is low but if Garven says 1/1 for "normally" 160 bpm, so 1/2 only can be used from 80 bpm here This is hard diff, 1/2 as such low bpm song for hard is enough. And it's not rule, I am sure with it
00:43:903 (1) - actually the jump a little bit feels forced for here because the music is relaxing, also the flow from previous slider to this slider kinda sharp just to emphasize the big white tick and the high pitch of vocal, they are fine to play
00:52:712 (2,3,4) - hmm imo after the 1/4 on previous i feel a little bit hard to catch this one, i prefer to make it become 1/4 slider repeat to make easier :3 circle-triplet-circle is not that hard to play even if it's high bpm song. I just to blance the difficulty as Insane diff uses a lot of jumps/long streams with large distance snap.
00:53:427 - until 01:00:808 - imo you put too much of jumps here, i feel they are kinda hard for Hard here, you should to remove some of jumps here to make balance jump pattern with other parts, Most of them are slider jumps, to emphasize 1/2 rhythms here, of course they are not hard to play for such low bpm song
01:05:570 (2) - the flow a little bit bad for me since according the curve slider from previous, the circle should be on leftward instead of rightward here ok, rearrange them.
01:08:189 (2) - i almost can't hear a hitsound in tail here, how about add whistle there? to emphasize the vocal as well whistle sounds bad for me.
01:20:570 (2,3) - aa just my personal taste but i prefer to make the curve on (3) become to upward https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2158291 since it giving more natural flow imo Not a big deal, flow is fine now
01:23:427 - please map this song since after the so relax previous time, this sound feels so loud, totally empty when you skip it Following vocal is better and more natual when playing(I try it with dt)
01:23:903 (1) - add finish because the cymbal done
01:39:141 (2) - finish at head because cymbal done
01:41:760 (3,4) - same explanation as 01:05:570 (2) - flow is fine
02:00:570 (2) - missing whistle? not, I don't add it at00:55:808 (2) - too
02:05:808 (1) - finish on head? that "pppssh" sound looks like cymbal here yes, added
02:22:951 - the music is quite loud here, hitnormal of default normal sound would be nice here done
02:24:379 - same as 01:23:427 - ^
02:32:951 (2) - nazi but ctrl+G gives more natural flow here for me since it making circular flow from the circle to this slider keep it, not a big deal
03:04:855 - until 03:11:284 - omg almost no hitsound here? you can add whistle on every whiteticks imo and adding some whistles for emphasize the vocal example 03:08:427 - I added some whistle on my way
03:21:046 (1) - nazi thing but aa jump on slider to next circle a quite sharp here imo, i prefer to ctrl+G this one actually yea, fixed
03:31:522 (3) - same as 01:23:427 -I can't understand what's your meaning
03:34:379 (1) - add finish because the cymbal fixed
03:43:307 (4) - same as 00:28:070 (5) -^
Actually hitsounds on kiai times can improved more here, try add some claps on 2nd and 4th whiteticks? I am not going to add claps on 2nd and 4th whiteticks, they would break the current hitsounds patterns. This is a "Japanese-style" song, and the usage of 和风音效 does't require 2nd/4th claps

Sorry I refuse most of your mod, but thank for modding.

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Tokyo Retro.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 69141
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 221998
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 3.199999

[Metadata]
Title:Tokyo Retro
TitleUnicode:東京レトロ
Artist:kano
ArtistUnicode:鹿乃
Creator:Oracle
Version:Fycho's Hard
Source:
Tags:vocaloid Hatsune Miku scop すこっぷ iamkwan happy623 fycho
BeatmapID:503841
BeatmapSetID:179036

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"video.avi"
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,84103,96336
2,153627,165860
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

Oracle 2014-10-23T19:36:38+00:00

Xinely wrote:
as your request here

General
在Normal diff里还没有SB mapper的名字，可能你忘了加名字的files 我重新update了，希望没事

Insane
00:22:236 - maybe add 1/2 slider here to emphasize that music? a little bit empty intended to emphasize the scene in video ww
00:36:760 (2,3) - the flow a little bit plain here imo, it would be nicer when you curve the sliders a little bit http://puu.sh/clFtI.jpg sure
00:43:903 (1,2,3,4) - the square shape a little bit messy for me, also the spacing kinda small for me, i prefer to arrange them like http://puu.sh/clFCT.jpg i didn't aim for square here~
01:04:855 (1) - add finish, "ppssh" sounds like cymbal here done
01:07:951 (1) - hmm maybe use specific colour for 1,50x SV here, i got trap on this slider at first testplay lol ;_; it's not really hard and i would like to keep the combo color consistent
01:18:903 (4) - how about move the circle to 208,56? imo the really straight flow from previous to this circle feels kinda bad for me, a little bit curvy flow better looks good
01:20:093 (6,1) - based your NC pattern, it should be swap NC here. the combos look inconsistency yeah
01:37:712 (2,3) - same as 00:36:760 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/clJv1.jpg ok
01:39:141 (1) - add finish on head because cymbal done
01:39:617 (2) - actually i feel a huge jump doesnt fit here, i prefer move this circle to 372,356 i guess it's fine since the bpm is quite low, also refer the original place
01:50:570 (1) - same as 01:04:855 (1) - can't do so due to sampleset confliction
02:01:284 (2,1) - the spacing (on the circle) feels kinda low here. i prefer move them to 304,256 (if you fix this then move 02:02:474 (2) - 220,200) i think i would keep this
02:05:808 (1) - add finish because the cymbal sound here don't feel like doing this due to the finish spam after this note
02:25:570 (2) - maybe just for me but the jump is too far for me. how about reduce it around 376,336 here. also looks nicer when the first jump is small and getting higher until 02:31:046 - i think the current spacing is also fine~
02:56:284 (1) - ctrl+G this one? i guess this slider needs a jump to emphasize the cymbal sound ;_; feels not good to me
03:00:093 (1) - add finish because cymbal same reason as above
03:05:569 (5) - nazi but the flow feels better when you do circular flow with move this circle to 96,252 ok!
Good luck ~

the points i fixed were really helpful! thanks for modding~

Fycho also gave the permission to fix mods for him so....
@moecloud: added whistle on 00:34:379 (1) - and fixed the HP bar issue. i didn't change the stack leniency since i want to make it consistent.
@rakuen: fixed the spinner thing and the blanket. while i don't feel like applying those ctrl+Gs as they might ruin the patterns.
@lkx: i fixed everything from your mod!
@gamu: i added whistle/finish on 01:23:903 (1) - and 03:34:379 (1) - . didn't do anything on other notes since that would be a bit noisy if i do so.
@kloyd: fixed the overlapping thing. didn't change much rhythm-wise since fycho liked them that way.
@mei: first one was intentional. fixed the triplet thing.

updated!

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-10-24T05:40:49+00:00

Only points which aren't fixed are mentioned below.

CloudSplash16

02:41:522 (1) - Curved slider fits better here for a "stretched" feeling to match with the electric guitar sound in the music. fixed in another way

Rakuen

00:22:951 (1) – Make the shape looks more like 00:23:903 (2,3) - it's fine as it is
01:07:951 (5) – NC for easier reading and there’s a timing distance and lead to KIAI no for consistency
01:23:427 (4) - ^ This one feels like a bit special after timing space ^
01:37:236 (3) – Minor here, the distance between tail of 01:36:284 (2) – and head of 01:37:236 (3) – is more than its tail. i wont tell u i really hate nazi mods, fixed
01:38:188 (4) – Make this one bend to up, feels better to match curvy 01:39:141 (1) – the rhythm has been rearranged
01:52:474 (4) – This is a bit off flow, suggest to move 01:51:998 (3) – to more left part fixed in some other mods
02:08:903 (5) – NC for easier reading and there’s a timing distance and lead to KIAI mentioned above
03:00:093 (1,2,3,4) – Feels this pattern is a bit hard to read fixed in another way
03:01:998 – A break can be at here to kill HP drain no break for consistency

Gamu

03:16:998 (4) - There is a strong sound at the end point, so add a normal-finish in order to emphasize? However volume is too large, so there will be a need to 40%~50%. fixed in another way

Kloyd

All fixed

Xinely

00:12:951 (2) - nazi,the blanket could be better here, move the slider to 80,220 fuck blanket
00:29:617 (4) - the rhythm can improved here since you skip to map 00:30:093 changed in another way
00:34:141 - add note here to following the guitar's sound? it feels kinda empty imo when the sound is quite loud for me mainly followed drums
00:54:855 (3,4) - nazi but blanket looks a little bit off here, move slider's head node to 384,180 i have rearranged the placement
01:30:570 (4) - same as 00:29:617 (4) - same
01:35:093 - same as 00:34:141 - same
02:02:474 (2) - just personal taste but i prefer move the tail of the slider to 344,376 for the flow it's fine
02:47:712 (5) - nazi but the curve slider a little bit too curvy here, imo the flow become nicer when you move the tail to 152,68 (dont forget to fix rest spacings when you fix it) fine
02:51:522 (6) - according both music and vocal, this slider should be separated into 2 circles here eh, why
03:02:236 - until 03:03:665 - you should map this because they still have musics that quite loud here it acts like a small break, let it go
03:03:903 - until 03:17:712 - owait Normal diff w/o break here? sadly but i have to say that i really recommand to remove all objects here to give a break for newbies. 3:50 lengths w/o break feels so painful for newbie here no please

kay, all done. 我他媽星數只升了0.01
also, video is added.

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pkk

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pkk 2014-10-26T13:50:04+00:00

Sorry I'm late 'w'

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oh my god unsnapped bookmarks why

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no breaks? what if my hand gets tired ;w;
03:44:855 (5,6,1) - since this is going counter-clockwise, it would make sense to ctrl+G 03:46:284 (2) - . You could also extend the slider to 03:47:712 - to map that strong beat.

sexy diff

Fycho's Hard

hi fycho o/

00:23:665 (2) - I think it flows better into 00:23:903 (3) - if you move to ~x344 y180
00:31:879 (4,2) - did you want this to be stacked
02:32:951 (2,3) - I feel that more emphasis is created when you use 1/1 slider instead of 1/2 + circle. There is a silence between 02:33:189 - and 02:33:427 - , and you can map this by using 1/1 slider since a 1/2 slider will have the slider tail sound at 02:33:189 - .

looks great

Insane

00:41:998 (1,2) - hmm I feel this jump is a little too big, especially when you consider the spacing at 00:42:951 (5,6) - . Try moving (2) to x 307 y 47
00:49:855 (2,3,4,1) - maybe it will look better if you have the same distance between each circle
SPOILER
00:53:189 (7) - if you move this closer to the previous object and make a jump to the next, I think it will transition well into the new vocal part at 00:53:427 - . Try putting it around x 285 y 165. Same concept with 03:05:569 (5) - , etc
01:04:141 (1,2,1) - !!! try this
SPOILER
I think curved slider emphasizes vocal nicely
01:15:808 (1,2,3,4) - consider putting whistles on the tails to match that sound in the music
01:56:760 (2,3) - jump feels uncomfortable to play, there are other ways of emphasizing the drum sound without having a big jump. Here 01:58:427 (2,1) - you have the sound again but no jump, so it would seem weird to have a really big jump but then no jump for the same sound. hmm try moving 01:56:760 (2) - to x 432 y 48 so you get three fourths of a square, I think it still matches the drum sound nicely.
01:59:617 (4,1) - spacing is a bit low, it might not be a problem (idk if there are any players who would confuse this for 1/4) but anyways use at least 1.2 DS (like at 02:01:284 (2,3) - ). The spacing at 01:54:379 (1,2,3) - is fine since there are two circles after the slider with same spacing, I just thought that at 01:59:617 (4,1) - the spacing seemed too small. You can also emphasize vocal if you increase DS o/
02:06:998 (1,1) - not using grid snap means you will have objects that are not perfectly snapped
02:24:855 (1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this is where you would have a giant red/blue bar on your success rate graph when this gets ranked
/me runs
02:56:046 (4) - imo this flows better if you place it around x 336 y 104 (who cares if it overlaps ;A;)
03:35:807 (3,4) - NOOOOOO ORACLE NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooo..............
lower spacing please \o/ well it's hard to read the first time you play it, and it's not nice to do this at the end of the song. It's not hard to play, but that's a huge jump out of nowhere

o-oracle san, p-please be gentle with the streams

sorry mod is so short, I hope at least that it helps

nice map, have fun~

Atrue

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Oracle

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Oracle 2014-10-31T10:03:50+00:00

I have reviewed the spread myself:

Normal: mostly 1/1 rhythm with a tiny bit of 1/2, with ds rigidly followed
Hard: mostly 1/2 rhythm with a tiny bit of 1/4, with ds followed in most parts
Insane: massive usage of 1/2+1/4 rhythm, with quite random spacing at times

the pattern usage among the diffs provide a logical and nice difficulty progression.
so i assume it looks like the star-rating is a bit inaccurate this time.

Oracle

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Oracle 2014-11-06T06:37:52+00:00

only quoted things i didn't fix. other things are really helpful and i took everything other than these.

pkk wrote:
Sorry I'm late 'w' not really, my reply is even later lol

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oh my god unsnapped bookmarks why

Fycho's Hard

hi fycho o/

00:23:665 (2) - I think it flows better into 00:23:903 (3) - if you move to ~x344 y180 i guess that's intentional

02:32:951 (2,3) - I feel that more emphasis is created when you use 1/1 slider instead of 1/2 + circle. There is a silence between 02:33:189 - and 02:33:427 - , and you can map this by using 1/1 slider since a 1/2 slider will have the slider tail sound at 02:33:189 - . couldn't think of a better placement with 1/1 stuff

looks great
Insane
01:04:141 (1,2,1) - !!! try this
SPOILER
I think curved slider emphasizes vocal nicely it breaks my pattern arrangement ;_;

01:56:760 (2,3) - jump feels uncomfortable to play, there are other ways of emphasizing the drum sound without having a big jump. Here 01:58:427 (2,1) - you have the sound again but no jump, so it would seem weird to have a really big jump but then no jump for the same sound. hmm try moving 01:56:760 (2) - to x 432 y 48 so you get three fourths of a square, I think it still matches the drum sound nicely.
i intended to have a relatively huge jump to emphasize the instrumental part of the song. bpm is 120+ so i guess it's fine!

02:24:855 (1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this is where you would have a giant red/blue bar on your success rate graph when this gets ranked
/me runs
this is where gives huge amount of pp for the DT run(not reallly)
in fact i like how the huge jumps emphasizing the heavy beats!

03:35:807 (3,4) - NOOOOOO ORACLE NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooo..............
lower spacing please \o/ well it's hard to read the first time you play it, and it's not nice to do this at the end of the song. It's not hard to play, but that's a huge jump out of nowhere
as i mentioned before, the bpm is really low. players will be able to cath them. also having plain streams everywhere feels quite boring as well... so i think i'm gonna keep this

sorry mod is so short, I hope at least that it helps it really does!

nice map, have fun~

edit:thank you atrue for starssss!!! ;~;

Xinely

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Xinely 2014-11-06T23:00:11+00:00

我回来了

Normal

avoid stack as Oracle gave me the new guideline that easiest diff needs to avoid stack such as 03:28:665 (4) - 00:14:379 (4,5) - (you can make 1/2 slider repeat instead here), 02:14:141 (2,3) - , 03:23:665 (2,3) - , 03:33:903 (4,1) -
01:15:332 (4) - move the curve to leftward to give more natural flow here http://puu.sh/cG5fd.jpg
01:46:760 (1,2) - tbh the design a little bit bad for me.. well maybe just for me
02:36:284 (4,5,1) - i still feel that the flow feels kinda bad here. i prefer to do flow that following based the curve of the slider example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2211221

Hard

01:09:141 (2,3,4) - kinda feel weird here for me, maybe coz you make the 3/4 slider on (2) or you added whistle for (3) and (4)'s tails, i prefer to remove the whistles for this one
01:16:760 (2,3,4) - same as above, if you keep this suggestion at least keep consistency by add whistle on 01:17:951 -
01:04:855 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - make sure keep consistency hitsounds with 02:05:808 (1,2,3,4,1) -

Insane

AiBAT said that 00:36:284 (1) - , 01:37:236 (1) - 03:47:712 (1) - are unsnapped. i thought firstly that it was baka that didnt know with 1/12 but i set the snap divisor at 1/12 here and it still say that those slider are unsnapped http://puu.sh/cG6F1.png

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