LiSA - Rising Hope -TV ver.- · forum

ts8zs

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ts8zs 2014-09-01T13:25:31+00:00

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IamKwaN

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Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-09-01T13:40:53+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
My queue's rule:
I'm pro at timing 1redline song because of program's help.You shouldn't have any doubt about it.
3 hours
you break these two,so I'd put you into baka list.
baka:[_Crystal]
If not change,I'd poke this when you bubble.
o(￣ヘ￣o＃)哼
还有该给我的。

給不給KD不是你決定的

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
[KwaN's Normal]
00:32:194 (4) - 這裡的finish不合適建議移除 ok
00:53:350 - Normal-whistle 不適合阿這裡好安靜
00:55:876 (1) - remove nc 後面是big white tick嘛
01:27:767 - Finish 也好

nold_1702 wrote:
[KwaN's Normal]
00:11:828 - I can't understand why you suddenly drop the volume down here as there's no clear volume changing in the song and being even that obivious. yea, deleted
01:24:136 (2) - Players perfer to hit at 01:24:452 and 01:24:767 as this part comes hyper than all the rest parts.Moreover,there're strong drum. ;w;?

Rakuen wrote:
[KwaN's Normal]
00:02:829 (3) - Might wanna NC here seems it's Normal, and has long timing distance. Also navigates it to the break alrite
00:08:512 (2) - Nazi, move to tail point to X:40 Y:292 to match straight line with 00:08:986 (3) - ok
00:17:985 (1,2,3) - Might wanna move this set to around X:208 Y:100 cuz it's too squeezy at the corner, then make the shape of 00:19:248 (3) - a little rotate like this (picture), and then snap 00:19:879 (4) - ah, i think its fine atm
00:21:932 - Why not add a note here? ww Follow vocal is fine too imo ah, i normally map to instruments only
00:41:982 (3,4,5) - I'm not sure if you like this pattern or not, here's a rhythm suggest (3 starts from 00:41:982 - ) lol no, the circle on red tick is quite weird
00:55:560 (1) - Try this shape, which fits better to the flow and 00:56:981 (3) - yea, nice
01:20:505 (5) - Prefer to unstack, a bit hard to read with the AR. If you insist to stack, try NC 01:20:505 (5) - at least indicates something is new back to the previous note's position i will change it if there's BAT complaining about this lol

Good circle flow and arrangements Thanks!

SPOILER

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Title:Rising Hope -TV ver.-
TitleUnicode:Rising Hope -TV ver.-
Artist:LiSA
ArtistUnicode:LiSA
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:KwaN's Normal
Source:魔法科高校の劣等生
Tags:ZZHBOY Regraz IamKwaN Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei op opening
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Last edited by IamKwaN 2014-09-01T13:55:19+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Skystar

1,628 posts

Joined May 2011

Skystar 2014-09-01T13:45:27+00:00

@ts8zs: CAREFULLY check your posts 10 times,

ts8zs wrote:
offset 294
BPM 192
好了你可以大fix了。orz
发现是rank图的MP3。
高高兴兴去nuke。
这种一耳朵都能听出来不对劲的居然能rank，各种服。

ts8zs wrote:

You wrote 192 in your post, whereas the picture you provided shows 190.
Stop shitting on the mapper and get out of here, please. You didn't even help.

Also, posting something that's done by timinganlyz doesn't deserve a kd, mapper has the absolute right to decide whether or not to give you one.

Yumeno Himiko

Elite Storyboarder

1,168 posts

Joined August 2012

Yumeno Himiko 2014-09-01T13:57:55+00:00

太懒了射个星星

Kayano

1,286 posts

Joined July 2011

Kayano 2014-09-01T14:06:24+00:00

soft-sliderslide.wav, soft-sliderslide2.wav are 62 byte
Please change to official 44 byte blank file
Tags have "opening", so please remove "op"
BPM is around 190, not 192, obviously. But don't be that angry here please

Chloe

1,160 posts

Joined April 2011

Chloe 2014-09-01T14:06:58+00:00

Edit:the right timing should be: bpm:189.976 offset:289, 294 is still a bit off, i'm sry for making trouble here.

Last edited by Chloe 2014-09-01T14:21:33+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-09-01T14:12:54+00:00

@星爷 @IamKwaN @[_Crystal]
抱歉，是我SB了。
我手误了我道歉。
我讨kd我道歉。
我态度恶劣我道歉。
我是baka。
I'll put myself into my bakalist.
and removed you from my bakalist.
可以在这里围观我这个baka：
p/2426685
以后还请多指出我的失误。
本来应该是这样的：
p/3347334

对不起。
谢谢你们。

我会在timing修复后重新mod的。

Last edited by ts8zs 2014-09-01T14:38:48+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

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yf_bmp 2014-09-01T14:25:41+00:00

不明觉厉快泡了

Sellenite

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Sellenite 2014-09-01T15:10:38+00:00

best timing mod

Crystal

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Topic Starter

Crystal 2014-09-02T11:19:47+00:00

lol

thank you everyone!

Marirose

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Marirose 2014-09-02T11:33:19+00:00

wowowowowow

Foreverends

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Foreverends 2014-09-03T13:53:21+00:00

OAO
怎好像我遲了(?

ZZHBOY

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ZZHBOY 2014-09-04T11:42:29+00:00

no fix thanks for mod :3

pw384

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pw384 2014-09-07T04:46:07+00:00

a star b4 bubbling

Crystal

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Topic Starter

Crystal 2014-09-07T08:35:47+00:00

384059043 wrote:
a star b4 bubbling

一拳打包384 ;w;

ZZHBOY wrote:
no fix thanks for mod :3

Fycho

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Fycho 2014-09-12T17:16:31+00:00

[General]

我建议你用第二话的正统op视频（也就是xchippy的版本里），而不是开始的那个ED视频。

[ Desire]

AR9.3 is really not needed imo, changing it into ar9 will fit better
00:17:497 (9,10) –how about changing to 40% volume? Just to emphasize the strong beat at 00:17:655 –
00:22:707 (3,1) –not an accuracy rhythm, strong beat is at 00:22:865 –while there is not ant beat at 00:23:023 -, have a try: http://puu.sh/bw401/3ec5d32ee0.jpg
00:26:654 (3) –I know you follow vocal here, but this is abuse of 3/4 sliders, please note drum is at00:26:812 -, so better to end slider there.
00:26:970 (4) –you missed an important drum beat at00:27:128 –which requires a clap hitsound, also better not abuse 3/4
00:27:838 (8)- this is overmapped, better to remove it. Also stack streams are not good to play, it breaks the flow.
00:47:652 (6,7) –need to add drums hitsounds to follow music better, your patterns are too bland.
00:53:336 (1) –remove whistle, normal-whsitle is reallu nosiy
01:00:677 (5,6) –starting triplet at white tick is not natual unless misic is this, I recommend you move 01:00:677 (5) -to01:00:835 –
01:03:203 (6) –same.
01:05:966 (3,4,5) –same, but also there is not any beat at01:05:966 -, you’d better follow strong beat at01:05:808 –, just use a 1/1slider
01:13:544 (1) –finish on head?
01:16:070 (10) –remove it, overmapped, also strong beat is at01:15:912 –
01:18:438 (7) –This plays a little weird, maybe reason is the spacing of01:18:438 (7,1) – is smaller than01:18:280 (6,7) - , I suggest you put01:18:438 (7) – on (284,291)
01:22:227 (5,6,7) –starting triplet at strong beat is not natual，按照人体工学人们总是希望在强拍处打滑条或者是连打的最后一拍
01:23:096 (2,3,4) –weird overmapped, plays not good too, suggestions: http://puu.sh/bw55Z/5a38a567cb.jpg, 嘛我包含了上一条的建议了

[Hard]

OD-1 to balance difficulty with normal.
00:29:812 (4,5) –how about exchanging them in rhythm? which will fit the vocal better
00:33:127 (1) –better to change this to a reverse to make 00:33:917 (2) –easier to read，http://puu.sh/bw5rc/7f21a31f2e.jpg.
00:34:706 (3) –rhythm seems a bit odd, suggestions:http://puu.sh/bw5qk/013dff9053.jpg. following snare drum will be better.
00:37:232 (2,3,4) –you can make your rhythm better by following thr drum. http://puu.sh/bw5BB/13e1d441ab.jpg.
00:39:127 (2,3) –same
00:39:442 (3,4) - 排列建议：split them out.
00:40:705 (1,2,3,4) –Don’t fit music well, though it follows the vocal. But drum is special here.
00:53:336 (1) –why you normal-whistle here, nosiy and try to remove it
01:23:332 –add note to follow snare drum here, blank rhythm doesn’t work well

[Normal]

what a decent normal diff, good job!

[Easy]

AR-0.5, OD-1, HP-1 to balance difficulty.
00:01:709 –00:02:025 - why do you use these tick hitsounds? They don’t fit the song at all.
00:12:287 (4) –clap fits sliderhead.
remove all the tick hitsounds from00:12:919 -00:16:234 , 我觉得我不需要再解释了
00:15:445 (1) –你要跟人声就跟全了，00:14:182 (2) –这里也一样，别一会人声一会鼓点
00:23:339 –add circle? Weird blank rhythm imo
000:25:549 (2) -–这里不伦不类，你要弄那些tick音，又跟着人声，然后有些2,4白线被盖掉，那些tick音孤零零的听着就特别不舒服，我强烈建议你这段改为跟鼓点，要么就去掉那难听的tick
00:26:654 (2,3,4) –avoid overlapping，丑爆
00:26:654 (3,4) –also avoid 1/2 rhythm in lowest diff
00:29:338 (2) –类似
00:28:075 (1,2) –要么包包好，看着这半包强迫症
00:29:338 (2,1) -^
00:57:756 (2) –跟的莫名其妙
01:07:229 (1,1) –too soon after a spinner, make sure there are 4 beats enough in easy diff.
01:21:754 (2,3,1) –easy里太难

节奏不够统一，要跟人声又跟不好，很多地方的tick都特难听，例如00:44:494 (1,2,3) – 还有一些我懒说了，你看看normal怎么玩的

easy看着有点蛋疼，不想继续看了。等我满意了再recheck。

Last edited by Fycho 2014-09-13T04:33:26+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

ZZHBOY

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ZZHBOY 2014-09-13T02:35:25+00:00

remove my gd plz

Mafumafu

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Mafumafu 2014-09-14T03:02:27+00:00

Fycho wrote:
[Hard]
OD-1 to balance difficulty with normal.
00:29:812 (4,5) –how about exchanging them in rhythm? which will fit the vocal better Dont quite understand your meaning, though I think it is fine here...
00:33:127 (1) –better to change this to a reverse to make 00:33:917 (2) –easier to read，http://puu.sh/bw5rc/7f21a31f2e.jpg.
00:34:706 (3) –rhythm seems a bit odd, suggestions:http://puu.sh/bw5qk/013dff9053.jpg. following snare drum will be better.
00:37:232 (2,3,4) –you can make your rhythm better by following thr drum. http://puu.sh/bw5BB/13e1d441ab.jpg.
00:39:127 (2,3) –same
00:39:442 (3,4) - 排列建议：split them out.
00:40:705 (1,2,3,4) –Don’t fit music well, though it follows the vocal. But drum is special here.
00:53:336 (1) –why you normal-whistle here, nosiy and try to remove it
01:23:332 –add note to follow snare drum here, blank rhythm doesn’t work well

Fixed!
But about the rhythm issues, I dont quite understand your suggestions, though I still tried to fix something. I would be very grateful if you can give further explanation about the issues!. Thank you anyway!

osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 57928
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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Title:Rising Hope -TV ver.-
TitleUnicode:Rising Hope -TV ver.-
Artist:LiSA
ArtistUnicode:LiSA
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:Regraz's Hard
Source:魔法科高校の劣等生
Tags:ZZHBOY Regraz IamKwaN Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei opening
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Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2014-09-14T06:07:29+00:00

[Easy]

00:22:707 (1,2) - easy放红线不好而且如果这里放白线的话也完全没有违和感所以我还是建议放白线
00:22:549 (1) - move to 00:22:707
00:22:865 (2) - move to 00:23:023 and shortened to 00:23:339
01:18:596 (1,2) - 这里确实有点太弯了十分不美我建议调直一点

good luck

sammy711

207 posts

Joined November 2012

sammy711 2014-09-14T06:13:01+00:00

from your nazi req
00:47:652 (1,2) - 2的后半部分和1平行
00:43:231 - 无用的绿线
00:23:654 (3,1) - blanket
00:40:705 (1) - 第一个红点放在tick上

all done
妈呀第一次nazi 感觉nazi好爽啊

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,631 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-09-14T06:16:22+00:00

easy我觉得还好挺规整的

感觉飞球说看着蛋疼可能是因为奇异滑条太夸张了像00:01:394 (3) - 00:40:705 (1) -

别的没了应该

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-09-14T06:30:33+00:00

As your req to mod Easy diff.

00:05:341 (1) - change to a long slider is better, also wont against the ~~new rule~~
00:31:864 (2) - clap
00:42:284 (2,3) - no stack plz
00:43:705 - the break is not necessary imo, make some 1/1 sliders is okey
01:05:334 (4,5,6) - blanket better
01:10:071 - tick sound?
01:21:122 (5) - NC
01:26:174 (1) - clap

fine, bye

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 2014-09-14T06:52:31+00:00

yf_bmp wrote:
easy我觉得还好挺规整的

感觉飞球说看着蛋疼可能是因为奇异滑条太夸张了像00:01:394 (3) - 00:40:705 (1) -

别的没了应该

飞球说的是ZZH's Easy 由于改起来工程量比较大他又比较懒就换成我自己做的easy了

4anke

115 posts

Joined August 2013

4anke 2014-09-14T08:24:42+00:00

[easy]
easy感觉没什么问题0.0
填上break?如果break这00:47:652 (1,2) - 后面就有点突然了
00:01:394 (3,1) - 转盘之前加一些物件？突然出来一个转盘新手不太适应，随便加了个节奏

SPOILER

01:24:753 (3,1) - -^建议加一个物件和一个滑条01:25:069 (4) - 可以和01:23:648 (1) - 的开头叠，DS稍微有点误差应该没关系
感觉我在骗kudou OWO

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

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Topic Starter

Crystal 2014-09-14T11:23:27+00:00

@Awaken: 我感觉那个还行改起来比较麻烦先keep
@sammy:00:40:705换了pattern 其他fixed
@yf:^ 00:01:394先不改了
@Yuki:i don't want to change that spinner since i didn't see any problem on it. also i have no idea about that break, so keep for now. others are fixed
@4anke:那个平静的地方没有理由加节奏吧;w;

thank you!

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

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Crystal 2014-09-14T11:48:58+00:00

Fycho wrote:
[General]
我建议你用第二话的正统op视频（也就是xchippy的版本里），而不是开始的那个ED视频。好的

[ Desire]
AR9.3 is really not needed imo, changing it into ar9 will fit better fixed
00:17:497 (9,10) –how about changing to 40% volume? Just to emphasize the strong beat at 00:17:655 – fixed
00:22:707 (3,1) –not an accuracy rhythm, strong beat is at 00:22:865 –while there is not ant beat at 00:23:023 -, have a try: http://puu.sh/bw401/3ec5d32ee0.jpg fixed
00:26:654 (3) –I know you follow vocal here, but this is abuse of 3/4 sliders, please note drum is at00:26:812 -, so better to end slider there. i think here its better to take 3/4 sliders to emphasize the vocal sorry
00:26:970 (4) –you missed an important drum beat at00:27:128 –which requires a clap hitsound, also better not abuse 3/4 hmm same as above
00:27:838 (8)- this is overmapped, better to remove it. Also stack streams are not good to play, it breaks the flow. fixed
00:47:652 (6,7) –need to add drums hitsounds to follow music better, your patterns are too bland. fixed imo
00:53:336 (1) –remove whistle, normal-whsitle is reallu nosiy fixed
01:00:677 (5,6) –starting triplet at white tick is not natual unless misic is this, I recommend you move 01:00:677 (5) -to01:00:835 –
01:03:203 (6) –same. fixed
01:05:966 (3,4,5) –same, but also there is not any beat at01:05:966 -, you’d better follow strong beat at01:05:808 –, just use a 1/1slider fixed
01:13:544 (1) –finish on head? fixed
01:16:070 (10) –remove it, overmapped, also strong beat is at01:15:912 – i note it here to keep the sense of hitting and i have put a finish on the downbeat ;w;
01:18:438 (7) –This plays a little weird, maybe reason is the spacing of01:18:438 (7,1) – is smaller than01:18:280 (6,7) - , I suggest you put01:18:438 (7) – on (284,291) fixed
01:22:227 (5,6,7) –starting triplet at strong beat is not natual，按照人体工学人们总是希望在强拍处打滑条或者是连打的最后一拍 here its np imo
01:23:096 (2,3,4) –weird overmapped, plays not good too, suggestions: http://puu.sh/bw55Z/5a38a567cb.jpg, 嘛我包含了上一条的建议了 hmm i just followed the drums here

Easy remapped
~~rip ZZHBOY's Easy~~

thank you Fycho!

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

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Crystal 2014-09-14T12:33:04+00:00

ready for recheck

Fycho

Global Moderator

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Fycho 2014-09-15T03:15:59+00:00

Recheck, no kd for this post.

[General]

video is wrongly set, please set video offset to -150

[Insane]

00:22:391 (1,2,3,1) –写的fix结果不改是闹哪出啊？
00:47:652 (6,7) –我的意思是让你加鼓音音效来迎合，不是drum系列的，更何况drum whistle根本不是鼓音，参考hard diff那样加的方法。
01:16:070 (10) –I still recommend you change the rhythm here, if you’d like to keep the sense of hitting, try this rhythm, http://puu.sh/bzxjp/de0b8d5573.jpg. 本身节奏就不准确，前面重音加了finish反而打击感差。

[Regraz's Hard]

missing video on this diff, don’t forget to change the video offset after you add it.
00:29:812 (4,5) –我是让你ctrl+g他们，00:29:812 –这里起1/1，00:30:285 –这放圈，这里忽略人声打着很不舒服
00:33:838 (2) –sliderhead wrongly snapped, it should be snap at 00:33:917 –
00:37:232 (2) –这里我是让你00:37:074 –这儿起1/1，然后00:37:706 –这里加circle，我都给出图了，你既然写的fix为什么不改？
00:39:127 (2) –这个也是，在00:38:969 –起1/1
00:40:705 (1,2,3,4) – like this，http://puu.sh/bzy4O/f2224018e1.jpg
01:23:332 (4) –missing clap,为何改的时候音效不改？

[Easy]

Disable widescreen support for comsistency with other diffs.
00:22:865 (2) –end at 00:23:339 to follow drum better, moreover, less 1/2rhythm on easy diff
00:39:442 (1) –多余的nc
00:41:021 -00:41:653 –why do you abuse tick here。。。你这tick是表示军鼓的，这里曲子仍然是鼓点稀疏段，所以我建议这些奇怪的tick都去掉（换成没tick的音效组）
00:48:599 -00:49:862 –same remove tick hitsounds
00:52:704 (2) –better to add clap on head, not whistle
00:57:125 (2) –heavy beat is at 00:56:967 -，rhythm suggest on the whole part http://puu.sh/bzyQ4/dbddfb1da2.jpg
01:05:334 (4) –missing nc
01:05:334 (4) –missing clap on sliderend
01:07:229 (6) –为了排列梗牺牲节奏不值，节奏是基本啊，01:07:071 –重音在这，整句节奏建议：http://puu.sh/bzzgF/8e18bf1f72.jpg。光标停留时间01:06:518 -
01:15:754 (4,1) –rhythm is not accuracy, suggestion：http://puu.sh/bzzq9/7dd3308282.jpg

I highly recommend you not rush things.

Mafumafu

Nomination Assessment Team

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Mafumafu 2014-09-15T10:12:13+00:00

Fycho wrote:
Recheck, no kd for this post.
[Regraz's Hard]
missing video on this diff, don’t forget to change the video offset after you add it. This should be fixed by map owner.
00:29:812 (4,5) –我是让你ctrl+g他们，00:29:812 –这里起1/1，00:30:285 –这放圈，这里忽略人声打着很不舒服 Fixed
00:33:838 (2) –sliderhead wrongly snapped, it should be snap at 00:33:917 – Fixed
00:37:232 (2) –这里我是让你00:37:074 –这儿起1/1，然后00:37:706 –这里加circle，我都给出图了，你既然写的fix为什么不改？这回懂了。不过后面用了折返代替单点。
00:39:127 (2) –这个也是，在00:38:969 –起1/1 好
00:40:705 (1,2,3,4) – like this，http://puu.sh/bzy4O/f2224018e1.jpg Fix in another way.
01:23:332 (4) –missing clap,为何改的时候音效不改？Fixed.
I highly recommend you not rush things.

Thanks for the re-check. Sorry I cant understand your previous post. Hope huge errors wont appear this time.

星星，视频offset问题你改吧。

Code:

osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 57914
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 3.099999

[Metadata]
Title:Rising Hope -TV ver.-
TitleUnicode:Rising Hope -TV ver.-
Artist:LiSA
ArtistUnicode:LiSA
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:Regraz's Hard
Source:魔法科高校の劣等生
Tags:Regraz IamKwaN Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei opening
BeatmapID:471477
BeatmapSetID:185868

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5.5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5.5
ApproachRate:8
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Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 2014-09-15T14:00:07+00:00

@Fycho: all fixed! ~~有的我写fix但是没fix的大概是忘记保存了~~

updated

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,486 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-09-15T15:42:00+00:00

[Insane]

01:15:438 (7,8) - Can you try to reduce the jump, it's too big like 1/2 somehow.

[Hard]

00:29:812 (4,5) - why not change the hitsounds after you change the pattern lol?
00:31:390 (4) - better to move it to (436,216) to avoid overlapping with 00:30:601 (1) - .

[Easy]

01:05:334 (1) - clap on sliderend, remove whistle, it's snare drum in music.
01:07:545 (3) - ^
01:15:754 (4,1) - why not fix it while you write "fixed"？

Edit: bubbled.

Last edited by Fycho 2014-09-16T14:00:07+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Crystal 2014-09-15T22:49:50+00:00

@Fycho: i cant think of anything possible for this issue. i have checked everything carefully and found it fine. i dont know why there are problems that i have certainly fixed. it may be a submission error i think. however, i will make eveything surely ready when i am back home today

i have REDOWNLOADED my last update and sure there isn't any issues on update! sorry for my fault here! REALLY READY!

EDIT: thank you Fycho!

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-09-16T16:03:03+00:00

我记得之前飞球的摸还是中文的怎么被翻译了。。。
anyway， congrats！

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-09-19T18:29:59+00:00

[General]

Combo color perhaps can keep consistent,notice the combo 3 in KwaN's normal is error : Combo3 :
```
0,255,0
```
And your combo 3 is (Include Regraz's Hard):
```
0,255,64
```
Perhaps can add the 'size' tag , make search the tv size series easily.

[Easy]

00:20:497 (5) - Add clap in slider end,because you has been added in Desire diff.
00:25:549 (2) - Remove finish,because has no downbeat in there (As like Desire diff,you has no added here.)
01:08:492 (1) - Forgot add whistle here?
01:11:018 (1) - As above reason.
01:18:596 (1) - Missed a finish here,need to fix it.
01:26:174 (1) - This volume is not in the same with Desire diff,try to keep consistent volume here (50%).

[KwaN's Normal]

00:05:341 (1) - Try to reduce a bit volume here? The spinner end have a bit loud. (Reduce to 30 or 40%)
00:23:181 (1) - Feel there is no drum beat there,remove this note?

[Regraz's Hard]

00:31:075 (3) - Sounds like this music seems can make a jump here,why not do it? Perhaps can try this and keep curve : [
SPOILER
img]https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2051101[/img]
00:55:862 (1) - Forgot add finish? (Downbeat)
01:23:648 (1) - Same as above.
01:25:701 (3) - Why not continute to follow the vocal and add a note here? Make play easy better.

[Desire]

00:00:289 (2) - This hitsound (Remove whistle,and add finish) is not in the same with Easy diff,should be removed this and add it.
00:02:815 (6) - Why not set NC here? Will be played good better or add a bit HP bar,too.
00:10:393 (1) - Same reason with 00:00:289 (2).
00:12:919 (1) - Remove whistle,because there is no whistle hitsound at this slider head in Easy diff.
00:32:180 (3) - Forgot add finish here?
01:23:648 (1) - Missed a finish here,need to fix it.

[Other]

Overall looks fine,just a bit small problem need to fix it,if you are done it, call me back.

Last edited by smallboat 2014-09-20T02:39:07+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-09-19T18:41:01+00:00

Fixed first one. As for second one, I can hear a drum, although it's quite weak.

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: lisa - rising hope.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 57914
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 7881,17985,33141,43245
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Rising Hope -TV ver.-
TitleUnicode:Rising Hope -TV ver.-
Artist:LiSA
ArtistUnicode:LiSA
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:KwaN's Normal
Source:魔法科高校の劣等生
Tags:Regraz IamKwaN Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei opening
BeatmapID:471476
BeatmapSetID:185868

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3.5
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3.5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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0,0,"3.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
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2,53536,54346
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Mafumafu

Nomination Assessment Team

3,372 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2014-09-20T05:12:33+00:00

smallboat wrote:
[General]
[Regraz's Hard]
00:31:075 (3) - Sounds like this music seems can make a jump here,why not do it? Perhaps can try this and keep curve : [
SPOILER
img]https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2051101[/img]

00:55:862 (1) - Forgot add finish? (Downbeat)
01:23:648 (1) - Same as above.
01:25:701 (3) - Why not continute to follow the vocal and add a note here? Make play easy better.

ALL FIXED! Thank you smallboat! :3
Code:

[code]osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: lisa - rising hope.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 57914
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 3.099999

[Metadata]
Title:Rising Hope -TV ver.-
TitleUnicode:Rising Hope -TV ver.-
Artist:LiSA
ArtistUnicode:LiSA
Creator:[_Crystal]
Version:Regraz's Hard
Source:魔法科高校の劣等生
Tags:Regraz IamKwaN Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei opening
BeatmapID:471477
BeatmapSetID:185868

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5.5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5.5
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"3.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,3014,4433
2,5540,6485
2,53536,55112
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

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Topic Starter

Crystal 2014-09-20T05:30:59+00:00

smallboat wrote:
[General]
Combo color perhaps can keep consistent,notice the combo 3 in KwaN's normal is error : Combo3 :
0,255,0
And your combo 3 is (Include Regraz's Hard):
0,255,64
Perhaps can add the 'size' tag , make search the tv size series easily.
okay
[Easy]
00:20:497 (5) - Add clap in slider end,because you has been added in Desire diff. i removed that in my insane diff since it doesnt sound very good imo
00:25:549 (2) - Remove finish,because has no downbeat in there (As like Desire diff,you has no added here.)
01:08:492 (1) - Forgot add whistle here? its on purpose, since it sounds noisy with whistle. however i changed that in insane diff (removed some whistles and claps with finish)
01:11:018 (1) - As above reason. the same
01:18:596 (1) - Missed a finish here,need to fix it.
01:26:174 (1) - This volume is not in the same with Desire diff,try to keep consistent volume here (50%). i changed the whole kiai part to 50% to keep consistent
[Desire]
00:00:289 (2) - This hitsound (Remove whistle,and add finish) is not in the same with Easy diff,should be removed this and add it.
00:02:815 (6) - Why not set NC here? Will be played good better or add a bit HP bar,too. to make a better sight. because there's a line which leads to next circle without NC. if i added that NC, it will be harder to read
00:10:393 (1) - Same reason with 00:00:289 (2).
00:12:919 (1) - Remove whistle,because there is no whistle hitsound at this slider head in Easy diff.
00:32:180 (3) - Forgot add finish here? on purpose here
01:23:648 (1) - Missed a finish here,need to fix it.
[Other]
Overall looks fine,just a bit small problem need to fix it,if you are done it, call me back.

no reply = fixed! thank you!
also, did some minor changes in insane diff!

ready for it.

ZZHBOY

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ZZHBOY 2014-09-20T05:45:04+00:00

恭喜rank

smallboat

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smallboat 2014-09-20T06:12:34+00:00

IRC with mapper ,fix miised video in Regraz diff and some hitsound.

Ranked~ !

IRC

2014-09-20 13:38 [_Crystal]: hi
2014-09-20 13:38 [_Crystal]: ready now
2014-09-20 13:39 smallboat: 好
2014-09-20 13:40 [_Crystal]: minor changes in insane diff
2014-09-20 13:40 [_Crystal]: 可能需要check一下
2014-09-20 13:40 smallboat: 嗯我重下一下
2014-09-20 13:41 smallboat: 看看irc能否
2014-09-20 13:46 smallboat: Regraz missed video
2014-09-20 13:51 smallboat: 所以你改了什麼
2014-09-20 13:51 [_Crystal]: insane?
2014-09-20 13:51 smallboat: 恩
2014-09-20 13:52 [_Crystal]: 00:19:076 (1,2) -
2014-09-20 13:52 [_Crystal]: 原来是1/4滑条+单点后来我发现这个比较卡手
2014-09-20 13:52 [_Crystal]: 改成了2个折返
2014-09-20 13:52 smallboat: 行
2014-09-20 13:52 [_Crystal]: 00:31:390 (2,3,4,5) - 这个改了一下pattern
2014-09-20 13:52 [_Crystal]: 原来的比较纸张
2014-09-20 13:53 [_Crystal]: 还有就是kiai part
2014-09-20 13:53 smallboat: 好這看起來looks fine
2014-09-20 13:53 [_Crystal]: 有些whistle+finish和clap+finish
2014-09-20 13:53 [_Crystal]: 都改成了单独的finish
2014-09-20 13:53 smallboat: 恩對那個
2014-09-20 13:53 smallboat: 有些有加whistle跟clap
2014-09-20 13:53 smallboat: 有點混亂
2014-09-20 13:53 smallboat: 要對照一下easy的
2014-09-20 13:54 [_Crystal]: 啊我看一下
2014-09-20 13:54 smallboat: 然後regraz的video 沒加
2014-09-20 13:55 [_Crystal]: 我貌似把所有带finish的都改成了单独的finish
2014-09-20 13:56 [_Crystal]: ..又没加么
2014-09-20 13:56 [_Crystal]: 好等一下
2014-09-20 13:56 smallboat: 恩
2014-09-20 13:56 smallboat: 看那video code只有regraz沒有
2014-09-20 13:57 [_Crystal]: 好的
2014-09-20 13:57 smallboat: 看了看好像昨天忘了講一個
2014-09-20 13:57 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/471475 LiSA - Rising Hope -TV ver.- [Desire]]
2014-09-20 13:58 smallboat: 00:12:840 (9,1) - suggest streanm DS keep consistent?
2014-09-20 13:58 smallboat: 這個
2014-09-20 13:58 [_Crystal]: 嗯?
2014-09-20 13:59 smallboat: 00:12:761 (8,9) 跟 00:12:840 (9,1) 的串子間距不一樣
2014-09-20 14:00 [_Crystal]: 也好
2014-09-20 14:00 [_Crystal]: 本来是故意的可能间距改一下更舒服吧
2014-09-20 14:00 [_Crystal]: 嗯好了
2014-09-20 14:00 [_Crystal]: 我可以update了吗?
2014-09-20 14:01 smallboat: ok可

Taskmaster

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Taskmaster 2014-09-20T06:14:39+00:00

Congrats ! OvO

Mafumafu

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Mafumafu 2014-09-20T06:16:14+00:00

yeah!~

Crystal