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Traktion - Mission ASCII

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Squish000
1 post
Joined May 2014
Squish000
Just gonna use my first post to say that this map and song are both amazing.

I would try to help mod it but the only thing i can find is that maybe 02:13:508 (1) - should be moved to the right to make it flow to the next note.

Can't wait for it this to get ranked!
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Secretpipe
I'll try modding this then !

[General]


  1. Fix AiMod stuff (cf→Beginner and others diff)

[ErunamoJazz's Standard]


  1. 00:00:099 (1) - I'd put that note like this ! It feels better when playing !
    Amazing Slider
  2. 00:11:101 (1,2) - The rhythm here is pretty akward ! I don't get why you put that note on a blue tick !
  3. 00:12:305 (2) - Transition with that note is pretty hard ! Don't forget that it's the easiest diff of the mapset !
  4. 00:33:623 (1) - Remove that slider and add a few notes here : 00:33:623 (3) - and here :00:34:482 - ? It's better imo !
  5. 00:51:158 (3,1) - I guess that the symmetrical can be much better !
  6. 00:54:425 (3,1) - Transition is kinda akward here
  7. 00:56:660 (3,1) - I'd blanket this !
  8. 01:06:975 (2,3) - The transitition is a bit akward ! I'll curv one or two sliders or rotate them ! (Ctrl+Shift+R)
  9. 01:14:368 (1,2) - I'd do a blanket here ! Here's an example !
    Amazing Blanket
  10. 01:28:465 (1,2,3) - I'll improve the blanket quality here ! The transition between (2) and (3) is kinda decent but the transition between (1) and (2) is kinda akward when playing !
  11. 01:30:872 (1,2,3) - Same as above ! Also , try to avoid some copy/pasted sliders ! (Like this one)
  12. 01:37:405 (3) - I'd Ctrl+H that ! It fits better imo ! Try !
  13. 01:42:563 (2,3) - Remove the red points cause I think that a blanket would be better !
  14. 02:20:385 (1) - I'd put that note here : x:360 y:48 for following the straight line with 02:19:182 (3) -
  15. 02:34:139 (1,1,1) - Inconsistent New Combos here !
  16. 02:39:640 (1) - This note is a but high placed ! Move it down by some grids !
  17. 02:39:640 (1,1,1) - Same NC stuff like 02:34:139 (1,1,1) -
  18. 02:51:503 (2,3,4) - Same issue as 01:28:465 (1,2,3) -
  19. 02:58:895 (1,2) - Weird transition
  20. 03:07:147 (1,2,3) - I guess you'll know what I'll complain here !
  21. 03:09:898 (1,2,3) - Same as above!
  22. 03:18:150 (6) - I'd add a NC !


[Normal]

  1. 00:02:849 (1,2) - I'd stack these notes , it fits better !
  2. 00:11:101 (1,2,3,4) - Please avoid some overlaps !
  3. 00:13:852 (1) - I'd curv that slider for increase flow !
  4. 00:16:431 (6,1) - I'd stack these notes !
  5. 00:26:230 (1) - I think I can recognize that slider =p (Just for notice)
  6. 00:28:981 (1,2) - Blanket can be much better !
  7. 00:31:388 (3) - I'd stack (3) under (2) ! It fits better imo !
  8. 00:42:735 (1) - This slider is kinda akward for Easy/Normal diff and can be confusing for beginners ! Make it shorter !
  9. 00:46:861 (1,2) - I'd improve the blanket here !
  10. 00:48:408 (2,2) - I'd proper stack !
  11. 00:50:471 (3,4,2) - I can see an overlap here !
  12. 00:52:534 (1,2) - The blanket can be much better !
  13. 01:02:162 (1,2) - I'd blanket these notes !
  14. 01:05:084 (2,4) - The stack is good but it can be perfect ! Check it out !
  15. 01:08:007 (3,1) - Same as above !
  16. 01:10:758 (2,1) - Same as above !
  17. 01:32:419 (1,3) - Same as above !
  18. 01:46:689 (4,3) - Same as above !
  19. 02:08:007 (5) - I'd add a NC here or 02:08:694 (6) -
  20. 02:10:414 (10,11,12,13) - I'd make a square with these four objects !
  21. 02:14:712 (4,1,2) - The blanket can be much better !
  22. 02:20:041 (8,1) - Same as above !
  23. 02:23:136 (1,2) - I'd do a symmetrical pattern here ! It fits better imo !
  24. 02:25:027 (2,4) - Blanket can be much better here !
  25. 02:30:700 (7,2) - Be careful ! There's an overlap !
  26. 02:34:483 (2,3) - Blanket can be better !
  27. 02:35:514 (4,7) - Another overlap here !
  28. 02:35:686 (5) - I'd add a NC here !
  29. 02:38:781 (2,1) - Stack can be much better !
  30. 02:45:142 (5) - I'd add a NC here !
  31. 02:54:597 (7) - Same as above !
  32. 02:56:144 (1,2) - I'd do a symmetrical pattern ! Make (2) like (1) !
  33. 03:00:270 (1,2,3) - I'd add a few blankets !
  34. 03:01:474 (5,1,3) - Blanket can be better !
  35. 03:02:162 (3,9) - Stack can be much better !
  36. 03:02:505 (4,1) - Same as above !
  37. 03:03:021 (5,2) - Same as above !


[Hyper]

  1. 00:04:053 (4,6) - I'd stack (4)'s tail with (6)'s tail!
  2. 00:10:929 (5,1,2) - Blanket can be much better !
  3. 00:18:494 (6,1) - Same as above !
  4. 00:19:869 (3,4) - Same as above !
  5. 00:20:729 - There's a huge gap here ! Add a short spinner who finish here 00:21:760 - ?
  6. 00:41:187 (5,1) - Blanket can be much better !
  7. 00:56:488 (1,2) - Same as above !
  8. 01:49:955 (5,6) - I'd space these notes !
  9. 02:10:758 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above : Notes are too close !
  10. 02:14:884 (6) - I'd add a NC here !
  11. 02:24:511 (7) - Same as above !
  12. 02:32:763 (1,2,3,4) - Space these sliders !
  13. 02:52:362 (5,6,7,1) - Blanket can be improved !
  14. 03:03:021 (7) - I'd add a NC here !
  15. 03:18:150 (5) - Same as above!

[Insane]

  1. Haven't found anything ! Amazing job you did there !



Amazing mapset ! You really did it well but you still need to work on your Easy/Normal stuff !
Good luck for ranking ! Call me in game if you need help !
Take a star (ノ·ω·)ノ︵
CrazyrabbitKGE
89 posts
Joined June 2014
CrazyrabbitKGE
is that background image even legal
jk. nice map :)
ErunamoJAZZ
osu! Alumni
2,693 posts
Joined August 2012
ErunamoJAZZ

Secretpipe wrote:

I'll try modding this then !

[General]


  1. Fix AiMod stuff (cf→Beginner and others diff)
hahaha, preview point xD!... well... That should pick the boss.

[ErunamoJazz's Standard]


  1. 00:00:099 (1) - I'd put that note like this ! It feels better when playing ! Ok, i make the top a bit more curve.
    Amazing Slider
  2. 00:11:101 (1,2) - The rhythm here is pretty akward ! I don't get why you put that note on a blue tick ! LOL, i remap 2 times this diff... so, i dont remember why this was in blue tick xD. Re made, is more simple now.
  3. 00:12:305 (2) - Transition with that note is pretty hard ! Don't forget that it's the easiest diff of the mapset ! ^
  4. 00:33:623 (1) - Remove that slider and add a few notes here : 00:33:623 (3) - and here :00:34:482 - ? It's better imo ! oh, really sorry, im following only one of the melody. To do so would try to follow the two melody, and although it can be done, but I dislike is damaging the DS 1/1 between 00:33:623 (1,2) - so.. sorry, but nope.
  5. 00:51:158 (3,1) - I guess that the symmetrical can be much better ! done
  6. 00:54:425 (3,1) - Transition is kinda akward here idont agree.
  7. 00:56:660 (3,1) - I'd blanket this ! hehe, this was blanketing, but okay, i try improve :P
  8. 01:06:975 (2,3) - The transitition is a bit akward ! I'll curv one or two sliders or rotate them ! (Ctrl+Shift+R) no change here.
  9. 01:14:368 (1,2) - I'd do a blanket here ! Here's an example ! mm... ok, done
    Amazing Blanket
  10. 01:28:465 (1,2,3) - I'll improve the blanket quality here ! The transition between (2) and (3) is kinda decent but the transition between (1) and (2) is kinda akward when playing ! no change here. moved one pixel to right(?
  11. 01:30:872 (1,2,3) - Same as above ! Also , try to avoid some copy/pasted sliders ! (Like this one) ^ moved one pixel to left(?
  12. 01:37:405 (3) - I'd Ctrl+H that ! It fits better imo ! Try ! No, bc flow.
  13. 01:42:563 (2,3) - Remove the red points cause I think that a blanket would be better ! >straight blankets
  14. 02:20:385 (1) - I'd put that note here : x:360 y:48 for following the straight line with 02:19:182 (3) - Done (but not on nazi coords xD)
  15. 02:34:139 (1,1,1) - Inconsistent New Combos here ! removed 02:38:265 (2) - and 02:43:766 (2) -
  16. 02:39:640 (1) - This note is a but high placed ! Move it down by some grids !
    Sorry, but in not necessary, this is fine :)
  17. 02:39:640 (1,1,1) - Same NC stuff like 02:34:139 (1,1,1) - ^
  18. 02:51:503 (2,3,4) - Same issue as 01:28:465 (1,2,3) - ^
  19. 02:58:895 (1,2) - Weird transition hahah, is not weird for me, sorry :P
  20. 03:07:147 (1,2,3) - I guess you'll know what I'll complain here ! moved one pixel to down (?
  21. 03:09:898 (1,2,3) - Same as above! moved one pixel to right(?
  22. 03:18:150 (6) - I'd add a NC ! is not necessary :P

Amazing mapset ! You really did it well but you still need to work on your Easy/Normal stuff !
Good luck for ranking ! Call me in game if you need help !
Take a star (ノ·ω·)ノ︵

Very thanks for mod!!

Updated diff: http://puu.sh/atZ55/a55e7d98f5.osu

EDIT:
Only for security :P
osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1996
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Mission ASCII
TitleUnicode:Mission ASCII
Artist:Traktion
ArtistUnicode:Traktion
Creator:galvenize
Version:EruJazz's Standard
Source:
Tags:dnb drum and bass
BeatmapID:459196
BeatmapSetID:53249

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336,116,84167,2,0,B|324:77|324:77|300:45,1,80,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
211,45,84855,2,0,B|187:77|187:77|175:115,1,80,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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32,173,86230,2,0,L|108:224,1,80,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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446,272,88465,6,0,B|450:232|450:232|467:183,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
377,208,89153,2,0,B|381:168|381:168|398:119,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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186,66,90872,6,0,B|200:104|200:104|204:144,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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48,194,92248,2,0,B|62:232|62:232|66:272,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,308,92935,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,336,93279,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,320,93623,6,0,L|376:252,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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373,104,95686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,180,96030,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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208,244,97061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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44,72,98780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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392,276,101187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,320,101531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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248,192,104282,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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440,72,107033,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,140,108064,2,0,B|220:122|220:122|180:122,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,228,109096,5,8,0:3:0:0:
332,276,109439,1,2,0:2:0:0:
256,320,109783,1,8,0:3:0:0:
180,276,110127,1,4,0:2:0:0:
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200,184,128523,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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300,152,130242,1,0,3:0:0:0:
256,192,130758,12,4,132133,0:3:0:0:
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296,252,142792,1,8,0:2:0:0:
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92,92,144683,2,0,B|52:80|52:80|16:52,2,80,8|8|8,0:2|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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412,68,146746,2,0,P|392:132|320:156,1,120,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,176,147434,2,0,B|268:176|268:176|212:152,2,80,2|2|2,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
328,308,148637,6,0,B|248:308|248:308|200:288,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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280,88,151388,6,0,B|316:107|356:113|356:113|412:85,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
444,168,152248,2,0,L|320:240,1,120,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,240,152935,2,0,B|256:248|256:248|216:240,2,80,2|2|2,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
400,312,154139,6,0,P|256:371|112:312,2,320,4|8|0,0:3|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,261,157233,6,0,P|256:284|180:256,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,188,158265,2,0,P|201:170|161:171,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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424,316,164454,2,0,P|388:304|349:315,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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231,161,167205,2,0,L|315:125,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,48,167892,6,0,B|396:76|392:144|392:144|464:176|464:176|480:224,1,240,8|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,268,169268,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,344,169611,2,0,B|392:368|392:368|440:376,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,292,170643,6,0,P|224:280|160:304,1,120,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,260,171503,2,0,B|64:231|64:231|51:193,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
138,193,172191,2,0,B|121:157|121:157|121:117,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
204,148,172878,2,0,B|201:108|201:108|215:70,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,173394,12,4,176144,0:2:0:0:
472,180,176832,6,0,L|447:268,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,236,177520,2,0,L|339:324,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,316,178207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,256,178551,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,228,178895,6,0,B|70:209|70:209|50:177,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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316,96,180958,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,40,181302,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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452,316,183021,2,0,B|424:344|424:344|360:356,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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232,352,184053,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,148,185084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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280,240,189554,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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galvenize
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Philadelphia7
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even tho this map is so good it doesn't get ranked :/
Secretpipe
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Secretpipe

Philadelphia7 wrote:

even tho this map is so good it doesn't get ranked :/
Just wait !~
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[General]
  1. Add EruJazz to tags
  2. I highly recommend you to use normal sampleset + soft whistle addition everywhere before 00:22:104 where you use only soft whistles. It's soooo worth it. If you find it time consuming, make a custom soft set and use normal-hitnormal as a clap.
  3. Use t/131540 to push changes on the other difficulties; this will also fix some finishes missing on, for example, Hyper.
  4. Ever thought of giving grey combo colour a blue shade? http://puu.sh/b9XVG/37f2a1df65.jpg
Please note that the difficulty spread lacks balance. What you called Normal is too hard to be such, due to many 1/2 (and sometimes 1/4) sliders and their high velocity. A perfect solution would be to rename it into Hard and map an appropriate Normal which would fill the difficulty gap between Standard and Hyper. I am serious!

[Insane]
  1. 00:11:617 (3) - replace with note + 1/4th slider to fit the sound? not sure tho
  2. 00:24:339 (3,4,5,6,7) - I'd compress it down to 1x just to lessen the spacing difference; 00:29:841 (3,4,5,6,7) - same
  3. 00:35:342 (3,4,5,6,7) - that too (could use 1.2x)
  4. 00:46:861 (1,3) - why don't you make these curvy? looks better, I believe: http://puu.sh/b9YWI/712e8fc794.jpg
  5. 00:51:846 (2,3,4) - could use 1.2x or something; also there's a bit missing @ 00:52:104, mind mapping it? You could end it with a 1/4 repeating slider: http://puu.sh/b9Z2s/c5277d52ad.jpg
  6. 01:03:881 (2,3,4,5,6) - looks sloppy; I'd like you to align last notes to the red line: http://puu.sh/b9Zcf/efe8f33d32.jpg
  7. 01:10:758 (2,3) - why the antijump? It kills the movement
  8. 01:16:603 (3) - mind shifting it somewhere? Just a little, so that the player notices better that there's a new slider
  9. 01:27:262 (4,2) - add claps! Such a nice variation, also follows the track
  10. 01:36:374 (1) - to follow the music, stack it with the next note, not 01:36:202 (7) -
  11. 01:38:093 (7,15) - add claps? They are still in music; you could add them and silence a little, by 10−15%
  12. 01:41:187 (4) - you probably want to add a new combo here, like you did at 01:30:185 (1) -
  13. 01:49:096 (5,7,10,13) - please, add claps!
  14. 02:01:130 (1) - missing soft finish
  15. 02:08:523 (3) - remove whistle from the repeat?
  16. 02:10:328 (3,4,5,6) - add whistles for consistency with 00:42:305 (3,4,5,6) -
  17. 02:12:133 (1) - normal sampleset is a must
  18. 02:15:829 (3) - should probably move it back into the stream, or move the whole stream itself down a bit
  19. 02:18:494 (3) - why the antijump? I'd move it down: http://puu.sh/ba01O/c841eb8695.jpg
  20. 02:20:729 (2) - same; 1x spacing works better than a stack
  21. 02:21:503 - missing a note?
  22. 02:38:093 (5) - better stack it with (6) to avoid killing the movement
  23. 02:39:124 (3) - mind shifting it somewhere? Just a little, so that the player notices better that there's a new slider
  24. 02:46:689 (1,2) - you could use a bigger spacing here
  25. 02:55:285 (2,4) - add claps! Just for the sake of altering the rhythm, and also because the music itself has them
  26. 03:06:116 (7,15) - claps
  27. 03:17:119 (7,9,12,15) - claps again!
  28. 03:18:150 (19) - you could try experimenting and increaring the volume here by 15−20%
Such an excellent example of offbeat sliders used correctly, I must say.

[Hyper]
Why didn't you call it Hard? Having your difficulties follow the same name convention would be great and make more sense.

OD+0.5 to nullify the gap
Use hitsounds in the beginning, will you? Copy them from Insane.
  1. 00:34:311 (5) - umm.. well, this is acceptable
  2. 00:55:113 (5) - NC! If you want to have long combos here, better start them from 00:49:611 (remove new combo from 00:50:987 , put it at 00:52:362, and so forth)
  3. 01:22:620 (1) - remove clap and put it on 01:22:276 (7) -
  4. 01:27:778 (1) - no! Don't end this at the time kiai starts, make it so the player is *able* to hit the very first beat of kiai
  5. 01:45:141 (1) - you want to remove new combo and set it on 01:46:173 -
  6. 01:47:720 (3,4) - make it at most 1.3
  7. 02:03:881 (1) - I'd remove the repeat to emphasize that little pause in music
  8. 02:09:038 (1) - not sure you need a new combo here
  9. 02:13:164 (3) - missing clap; 02:01:130 (1) - missing finish (but these shouldn't be a problem after the copy)
  10. 02:42:391 (6) - NC
  11. 02:49:439 (7) - NC
  12. 02:56:144 - considering this is Hard, you need to nerf jumps on the kiai part. Like, really. Like, all of them < skip this if you add a proper Normal
  13. 03:05:772 (10) - NC
I may have skipped something regarding new combos, so please make sure to also check them by yourself and fix where appropriate (esp. the whole part after 00:49:611):
  1. 00:49:611 until the kiai
  2. 02:56:144 (the whole section)
[Normal]
Your sliders are way too fast! I'd like you to reduce SV to 1.2, otherwise it's not any different from Hyper.

HP+2, OD+2, AR+0.5 when you add a proper Normal.
  1. 00:22:620 (1) - I'd remove it to give a player more time to restore hand's position after the spinner will be okay if there's a proper Normal
  2. 00:33:064 - I am pretty sure you wanted this slowdown to start at 00:22:104
  3. 00:41:531 (1) - this will likely cause a player to miss; consider the following: http://puu.sh/ba3hm/8424579b3e.jpg will be okay if there's a proper Normal
  4. 01:03:021 (3) - I'd prefer this to not end on downbeat
  5. 01:04:396 (3) - same as above
  6. 01:37:577 (1,1) - wish the gap was bigger; the spinner feels too short and needless, to be honest will be okay if there's a proper Normal
  7. 02:12:133 (1) - shouldn't there be a finish?
  8. 03:02:162 (3) - add a repeat and remove it from 03:02:505 (4) -
  9. 03:11:273 (6) - NC
[EruJazz's Standard]
HP+1, OD+1 because 1 is too low and I think you were aiming to map Easy.
  1. 00:11:101 (1) - I am not sure the drum sampleset sounds good here
  2. 00:16:603 (1) - same as above; there's nothing like drums in the music
  3. 00:22:620 (1) - I'd remove it to give a player more time to restore hand's position after the spinner
  4. 00:31:732 (2) - could you please remap it in such a way that it doesn't end on the downbeat? You put there a finish yet you don't give a newbie player a single chance to hit it with the new part of music
  5. 00:42:734 (1,2) - the claps are too loud and unfitting, mind replacing with normal hits only?

    I am not sure why you mapped the whole next part to red ticks, because lower difficulties are traditionally mapped to white ones to make them easier and less complicated for an average beginner. What you did could work better if the drum line wasn't that audible.

  6. 00:45:657 (3) - by replacing claps with soft whistles you improve your hitsounding, because claps sound too harsh
  7. 00:51:158 (3) - same here. I don't mention drum hitsounds here, though
  8. 00:53:737 (2,3) - now when there's a solid beat in the music, these claps don't sound strange, see? Or, rather, "hear?"
  9. 00:56:660 (3) - same. just replace them from now on, okay? I won't mention it anymore
  10. 01:26:918 (1) - I'd appreciate if you shorten it by 1/1: "no! Don't end this at the time kiai starts, make it so the player is *able* to hit the very first beat of kiai" (explanation copied from Hyper)
  11. 01:49:096 (1,3) - sorry these drums don't fit at all; better use hitnormal
  12. 02:37:233 (1) - why the claps, all of a sudden? You didn't even use them for a similar part: 01:06:116 (1) -
  13. 02:53:394 (1) - use normal finish just because soft one is too harsh and unfitting here
  14. 03:05:428 (3) - forgot your claps
  15. 03:17:119 (3,5) - sorry these drums don't fit at all; better use hitnormal
Standard could be mapped better if you used less copypaste. Slider shapes like 01:28:465 (1) - look good when they are not abused, but for some reason (I am convinced this is due to laziness, not lack of free time) you decided to paste them everywhere. The whole difficulty *before* the first kiai looks much, much better than what happens next. It was also that pre-kiai section from 02:01:130 to 02:50:643 that gave me hope, but when I saw that poor thing at 02:51:503, I changed my opinion back.

Summary:
  1. Standard could be mapped better, use the above recommendations in your free time;
  2. Normal is missing;
  3. Hard is called Normal;
  4. Hyper is mostly good (FOR TRAKTION'S SAKE, DON'T FORGET HITSOUNDS)
  5. Insane, apart from a few claps missing, and also other things, is just great!
You can have my support when you're done with Normal and a mod or two for it.
galvenize
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Normal has been replaced. I think it balances the difficulties better than the previous one.
I applied most of your modding for Insane and Hard, including the change in hitsounds at the beggining, new combos, missing claps and other stuff.

Thank youuuu for modding.
Secretpipe
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We hope you liked our stuff :P
Seijiro
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Oh...I love this kind of music. I hope I'll have time to mod this as soon as possible. (If I can't make it in time because you already ranked this, sorry :P)
ErunamoJAZZ
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Sorry for late....

TicClick wrote:

[EruJazz's Standard]
HP+1, OD+1 because 1 is too low and I think you were aiming to map Easy. Done
  1. 00:11:101 (1) - I am not sure the drum sampleset sounds good here for me, listen fine
  2. 00:16:603 (1) - same as above; there's nothing like drums in the music fix here
  3. 00:22:620 (1) - I'd remove it to give a player more time to restore hand's position after the spinner done
  4. 00:31:732 (2) - could you please remap it in such a way that it doesn't end on the downbeat? You put there a finish yet you don't give a newbie player a single chance to hit it with the new part of music mm.. ok
  5. 00:42:734 (1,2) - the claps are too loud and unfitting, mind replacing with normal hits only? o.. k..

    I am not sure why you mapped the whole next part to red ticks, because lower difficulties are traditionally mapped to white ones to make them easier and less complicated for an average beginner. What you did could work better if the drum line wasn't that audible.
    My intention was to follow the loudest sound, and also be simple (ie, it was easily identifiable)
  6. 00:45:657 (3) - by replacing claps with soft whistles you improve your hitsounding, because claps sound too harsh done in all
  7. 00:51:158 (3) - same here. I don't mention drum hitsounds here, though
  8. 00:53:737 (2,3) - now when there's a solid beat in the music, these claps don't sound strange, see? Or, rather, "hear?" :3
  9. 00:56:660 (3) - same. just replace them from now on, okay? I won't mention it anymore okay ;)
  10. 01:26:918 (1) - I'd appreciate if you shorten it by 1/1: "no! Don't end this at the time kiai starts, make it so the player is *able* to hit the very first beat of kiai" (explanation copied from Hyper) hai desu!
  11. 01:49:096 (1,3) - sorry these drums don't fit at all; better use hitnormal :/
  12. 02:37:233 (1) - why the claps, all of a sudden? You didn't even use them for a similar part: 01:06:116 (1) - use soft clap
  13. 02:53:394 (1) - use normal finish just because soft one is too harsh and unfitting here im not agree
  14. 03:05:428 (3) - forgot your claps lel, ty
  15. 03:17:119 (3,5) - sorry these drums don't fit at all; better use hitnormal :/ x2
Standard could be mapped better if you used less copypaste. Slider shapes like 01:28:465 (1) - look good when they are not abused, but for some reason (I am convinced this is due to laziness, not lack of free time) you decided to paste them everywhere. The whole difficulty *before* the first kiai looks much, much better than what happens next. It was also that pre-kiai section from 02:01:130 to 02:50:643 that gave me hope, but when I saw that poor thing at 02:51:503, I changed my opinion back.

Ok, i remap copy/paste sections... Initially I seemed a good idea try a straight symmetrical pattern with these sliders ... but well, I remapped those sections. I think they are better now. hehe
http://puu.sh/bkjG5/1e4d9e0b9c.osu


Pls, add "ErunamoJAZZ" in tags, not EruJazz :P
TicClick
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random check

galvenize wrote:

I applied most of your modding for Insane and Hard, including the change in hitsounds at the beggining
aaaaaa that;'s not what I meant exactly

I highly recommend you to use normal sampleset + soft whistle addition everywhere before 00:22:104 where you use only soft whistles
whistle → normal set + whistle addition
everything else should have been left untouched (keep soft sampleset on everything that has no whistles in the beginning part)
sorry that I made it unclear
galvenize
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That does make more sense indeed! Fixed.
aush
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I love this map (insane). I enjoy playing it so much that I don't even care if it's ranked or not =) Thank you, here is a little gift for you.
galvenize
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aush wrote:

I love this map (insane). I enjoy playing it so much that I don't even care if it's ranked or not =) Thank you, here is a little gift for you.
Thanks man, much appreciated. The map will be ranked as soon as possible!
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galvenize wrote:

aush wrote:

I love this map (insane). I enjoy playing it so much that I don't even care if it's ranked or not =) Thank you, here is a little gift for you.
Thanks man, much appreciated. The map will be ranked as soon as possible!
I hope it gets ranked, i love that map too! Really fun to play.
kamisamaaa
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go go rank this!
really cool music and map!
I can just starred this >.< (why I'm not a bat...if so I can rank this :) )
ErunamoJAZZ
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kamisamaaa wrote:

go go rank this!
really cool music and map!
I can just starred this >.< (why I'm not a bat...if so I can rank this :) )
No need be BAT for find issues, and prevent QAT unrank :P
Yui Fujiwara
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Great Map, I love the song. Galvenize, I hope your map gets ranked!! :D
Nyukai
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General:

  1. Make sure you've disabled Widescreen Support in all diffs since you don't have SB.
  2. Standard is equivalent as Normal, as far as I know. I mean, Eru's diff should be named EruJazz's Easy.
  3. If you customized Standard, why not Normal? Collab Normal maybe.
EruJazz's Standard:

  1. 00:13:508 (3) - Termina el slider aquí, suena más ~fuerte~ y es mejor que no esa cosa que parece Normal. (?)
  2. 00:16:603 (1, 2, 3) - Evitaría tantos sliders seguidos de este tipo siendo Easy.
  3. 00:33:107 (3, 1) - El NC debería estar aquí. >_>
  4. 00:50:471 (2) - Yo lo quitaría y pondría una nota en 00:50:643 - pero allá tú.
  5. 01:26:918 (1) - Innecesario NC. xD
  6. 02:37:233 (1) - El NC ya está en el stanza así que quita éste. (Hay otro caso igual así que, ya sabes)
  7. 03:00:270 (1) - ¿No estabas añadiendo NC cada dos stanzas? Más consistencia pls.
  8. 03:18:150 (6) - NC.

    Well, clean diff, a bit difficult for me though, since it's Easy. I would've done it easier, but I can understand seeing the actual spread. Nice blankets, btw.
Normal:

  1. SV 1,40? Too much for a Normal imo. xD
  2. It's more like a Hard- QwQ
  3. I would prefer AR:5 for a Normal. But your choice.

    Nothing to say.
Hard:

  1. 00:32:419 (1) - Unnecessary NC imo.
  2. 01:12:821 (4) - This slider doesn't fit here, I would try something different.
  3. 01:50:127 (6) - NC.
  4. 02:08:007 (10) - Same, lol.
  5. 02:19:010 (7) - Same.
  6. 02:30:013 (7) - ^, do it in all cases.

    Impressive, as always. Just some NCs which I didn't understand, but seriously, I really liked it.
Insane:

  1. 00:46:001 (2, 3) - Ctrl+G.
  2. 00:47:376 (1) - Remove NC.
  3. 00:55:113 (5) - NC. Because stanza.
  4. I'm a bit sad with kiais. I mean, I know it's Insane, but in my opinion you abused of simple notes, some sliders wouldn't be a problem. D:
  5. 03:18:150 (9) - NC.

    Really good, just wanted to point out some stuff.
Well, it's starred and I think your mapping is good enough, so, I wish the best for this map!

Good luck~
galvenize
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Thanks for the mod. I changed Erunamo's diff name, removed widescreen support, fixed combos etc...
ErunamoJAZZ
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Inyuschan wrote:



EruJazz's Standard:

  1. 00:13:508 (3) - Termina el slider aquí, suena más ~fuerte~ y es mejor que no esa cosa que parece Normal. (?) Justamnete por ser el más fuerte es que debería haber algo para presionar. fijate que estoy manteniendo algo qué presionar siempre cada dos ticks blancos grandes.
  2. 00:16:603 (1, 2, 3) - Evitaría tantos sliders seguidos de este tipo siendo Easy. lol, tampoco lo puedo llenar de circulos.. y colocar slider laaargos, bueno, eso ya lo hice al inicio.
  3. 00:33:107 (3, 1) - El NC debería estar aquí. >_> Yes!
  4. 00:50:471 (2) - Yo lo quitaría y pondría una nota en 00:50:643 - pero allá tú. podría poner miles de notas... lo sé xD, pero me toca por simplicidad no hacerlo, además, estoy siguiendo el sonido de la organeta (o no sé como se llamrá ese instrumento que suena xD), no los tambores.
  5. 01:26:918 (1) - Innecesario NC. xD yep
  6. 02:37:233 (1) - El NC ya está en el stanza así que quita éste. (Hay otro caso igual así que, ya sabes) mm... el problema es que el slider es tan largo, que creo que estos NC sí lo ameritan.
  7. 03:00:270 (1) - ¿No estabas añadiendo NC cada dos stanzas? Más consistencia pls. oks, ahí lo quité, Gracias o3o
  8. 03:18:150 (6) - NC. nope

    Well, clean diff, a bit difficult for me though, since it's Easy. I would've done it easier, but I can understand seeing the actual spread. Nice blankets, btw.

Well, it's starred and I think your mapping is good enough, so, I wish the best for this map!

Good luck~

Updated diff: http://puu.sh/bGMzO/be29002969.osu


[normal]
01:50:127 - miss notes??, like 03:17:978 (5,1) -
02:02:505 (4) - improve blanket (for being a slow part it shows more)
02:25:027 (2,1) - stack are not purfect xD
02:43:078 (3) - miss clap in tail???
AruOtta
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ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

[normal]
01:50:127 - miss notes??, like 03:17:978 (5,1) -
02:02:505 (4) - improve blanket (for being a slow part it shows more)
02:25:027 (2,1) - stack are not purfect xD
02:43:078 (3) - miss clap in tail???
All fixed, thanks :3

http://puu.sh/bGPLt.osu
No Pulse
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Jeez galv, again you've done an awesome map! Pls ressurect it </3 I promise i will play it everyday XD
Exote
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Exote
if I had a star I'd throw it here, get it ranked asap~
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  • General
  1. ErunamoJazz is captialized differently in the Easy difficulty. Please make the tags consistent.
  2. You can already tell from the star rating that the naming of the difficulties is messed up:
    1. Easy has way too many 1/2-gaps and complex rhythms to be called an Easy. It is also really dense, especially in the kiais.
    2. Normal is also far too difficult - It is very dense, filled with 1/2 and uses high spacing.
    3. Hard is borderline acceptable as a difficulty name, but it is still pretty difficult for a Hard.
    4. Conclusion: There are two possibilities, but I'd highly recommend you to choose one of those. Rename your spread to either Normal | Hard | Light Insane/Hyper | Insane or Normal | Advanced/Normal+ | Hard | Insane. I'd prefer the first version, since the current Normal diff is more like a Hard instead of a Normal actually.


  • EruJazz's Easy
  1. The low difficulty settings aren't acceptable for this difficulty due to the readability of complex red-tick-rhyhms. Since it will be renamed to Normal anyways when you will be following my General advices, difficulty settings like this would be more appropriate: AR4 | OD3 | HP3
  2. 02:43:766 (2,3) - The transition could be a bit more smooth for the easiest difficulty of the mapset. For example: http://puu.sh/cv6uV/29ea29ff2e.jpg
  3. 03:18:150 (6) - NC please, for consistency with the other diffs.
  4. Overall fine. The high amount of 3/2-gaps is worrysome, but they are all followed by sliders, so if you will change the difficulty settings + difficulty name it should be fine.


  • Normal
  1. Just a suggestion, but you could rename it to Collab <insert diffname here> or <insert diffname here> Collab since ErunamoJazz also included his username into the title of his diff.
  2. To be perfectly readable, this difficulty will need higher difficulty settings. Since it will be renamed to either Advanced / Normal+ / Hard anyways when you follow my General advices, these would fit the difficulty level: AR6 | OD5 | HP5
  3. 00:36:717 (2,3,4) - The spacing looks weird here. Try to make it consistent in this pattern, so that the circles and sliderheads don't overlap!
  4. 00:43:078 (1) - Depending on wether this diff will be renamed to Advanced / Normal+ / Hard or whatever, the 1/1-gap after the spinner could be okay or not. When you rename it to Hard, it can stay, otherwise you need atleast a 2/1-gap of recovery time after the spinner.
  5. 02:11:789 (1) - This NC doesn't make sense to me.
  6. 02:26:230 - Missing clap.
  7. 02:42:391 (1,2,3) - Try to rearrange the rhythm like this: http://puu.sh/cv6gu/15b974de0f.jpg It will fit the instrument much better.
  8. 03:08:694 (1,2) - Ctrl+G'ing these objects (rhythm-wise) would create a much better rhythm, since it fits to the pitch of the instrument you are following.
  9. Many patters feel quite cramped since the objects are overlapping a lot, for example 00:22:964 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - It just doesn't feel tidy. Your spacing is also quite variable although I don't see the reason. It's nothing you can / must change of course, but it's something to consider for future mapping. If this is going to be renamed to either Advanced/Normal+/Hard, the map itself will be objectively alright. It could use some more rhythm checks though.


  • Hard
  1. You know that your Insane is really difficult - I failed it on my first try, although I am not the worst player, due to the constant 1/2-patterns in the kiais. That's why many players will play this Hard diff instead, when they can't pass the Insane. Don't fear to make the difficulty settings a bit higher, so it will be more fun! My suggestion is AR8 | OD7 | HP6.5.
  2. 01:50:127 (1) - Remove the NC for consistency with all other difficulties.
  3. Very impressive mapping.

Insane

All I can say

If you will rename the difficulties and fix the difficulty settings, you can call me back. Before you do that, please search for some more mods on the Normal difficulty, preferably from modders who focus on rhythm. If you don't find anyone I can check it irc with the mappers.
Nice mapset! Good job :)
galvenize
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Thanks for the mod, I'll be gone for a while so I'll update then.
ErunamoJAZZ
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All done.
17:49 ErunamoJAZZ: Hi o/
17:49 Desperate-kun: hi :)
17:49 ErunamoJAZZ: i have a litte question
17:49 *ErunamoJAZZ is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/459196 Traktion - Mission ASCII [EruJazz's Easy]]
17:50 Desperate-kun: hmm?
17:50 ErunamoJAZZ: im agree with change the name
17:50 Desperate-kun: that's good
17:50 ErunamoJAZZ: but, if this will be a Normal diff, so...
17:51 ErunamoJAZZ: can i add a note in 02:56:832 - ??
17:51 ErunamoJAZZ: (a little slider)
17:51 Desperate-kun: yes you can
17:51 ErunamoJAZZ: yey!!!!!
17:52 ErunamoJAZZ: u know... GARVEN BLAME
17:52 ErunamoJAZZ: :P
17:52 ErunamoJAZZ: ahhaa
17:52 Desperate-kun: :D
17:56 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/cvyvF/901e4030d3.jpg
17:57 Desperate-kun: looks good
17:58 Desperate-kun: i really hope galv will agree with the difficulty name changes
17:58 Desperate-kun: because otherwise i won't bubble it..
17:59 Desperate-kun: i don't know what 2014 did to the minds of some mappers, but honestly
17:59 Desperate-kun: when i look at this normal
17:59 *Desperate-kun is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/369347 Traktion - Mission ASCII [Normal]]
17:59 Desperate-kun: 03:17:290 (3,4) -
17:59 Desperate-kun: lol
18:00 ErunamoJAZZ: lel, is cool.. but yeah, for "normal" is hard :P
18:01 Desperate-kun: the whole diff
18:01 Desperate-kun: is a hard
18:01 Desperate-kun: :D
18:02 Desperate-kun: nah, i just hope they'll change the names
18:02 Desperate-kun: and everything will be fine
18:03 ErunamoJAZZ: for me, BMS names convention will works fine
18:03 ErunamoJAZZ: standard > advance > Hyper > asdasd
18:04 Desperate-kun: yea but this is not BMS
18:04 Desperate-kun: so it would be a bit weird
18:04 ErunamoJAZZ: but listen like videogame song
18:04 Desperate-kun: Hyper can also be considered as a Hard+ though
18:04 Desperate-kun: so Normal / Hard / Hyper / Insane would work just fine
18:04 Desperate-kun: also, Light Insanes are the new thing
18:04 Desperate-kun: if he prefers that, it would also be a possibility
18:05 ErunamoJAZZ: hehe, he is the boss.. :P
18:07 Desperate-kun: my mod on Insane is best
18:07 Desperate-kun: that's how you get BAT, you know
18:07 Desperate-kun: >.<
18:07 ErunamoJAZZ: hahaha
18:07 ErunamoJAZZ: hey, i will post this in thread.
18:08 ErunamoJAZZ: :)
18:08 Desperate-kun: okay

new diff name: EruJazz's Normal -> http://puu.sh/cvzhT/6f27114bcd.osu
helix
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Love this map, can't wait for it to get ranked :D
AruOtta
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Thank you Depserate-kun, me and Secretpipe fixed everything <3

Update : http://puu.sh/cLj2P.osu
galvenize
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galvenize
Difficulty names have been changed.

I also raised OD by one in Hard/Hyper, left drain as is.
ErunamoJAZZ
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ErunamoJAZZ
Is happening
Myxo
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Recheck~

[EruJazz]

03:16:431 - I'd place a Clap here
03:17:119 - ^ (Additions Auto, not drum)

[KenPipe]

00:41:359 (1) - Normal Samplset sounds strange here - Auto sounds better
01:06:975 - This clap sounds unfitting, especially because it's the only one in this section that breaks your pattern
01:25:715 - Missing Clap

Call me back

EDIT: I talked to some BATs, because of the difficulty naming (yes, again *sigh*). It's not that it wouldn't make perfect sense now, but it's a bit weird to mix Standard and other difficulty naming like that. We came to the conclusion that it would be better if you could rename Insane to "Another", if that's not a problem for you.
galvenize
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galvenize
All good.
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Bubbled (ﾉ 'ω')ﾉ
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YES
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Oh it's galvenize, someone i haven't seen in a while
I might mod this later
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Secretpipe wrote:

YES
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