OK, DONE updated
GGFFQQ55 wrote:
摸一下Ins好了。。。h和n感觉没啥好摸的orz
general
感觉总体已经很不错了,有些节奏可以下的更好玩的(kiai有点空
HP-1?感觉对于这难度来讲HP7高了点 OK
唔,感觉开头一段音效大了一些,试试-15% 好
音效
总体音效声音有点大,盖过曲子的感觉
00:50:132 (1,2) - 这里声音可以小些 好
01:19:586 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里段的finish有点违和,试着改改看 在 try try
节奏
00:10:041 从这里开始有背景开始有一段电子乐感觉的音轨,Ins的话可以跟这根,会有趣很多
01:03:495 (3,4) - 这两个中间可以加个Note
01:10:041 (1,2,3,4) - 这里试试二连节奏,比单点好玩一些
01:11:950 (9,1,2,3,4,5) - 这里太空了
节奏其他好像都可以,但是感觉整体都可以更有趣一点。。。
节奏我觉得还是这样吧,因为动了的话改动比较大 跟了电音的话控不住容易做坏
排列
00:07:859 (1,2) - blanket? 因为接的是五角星跳还是不改了
00:47:132 (4) - 给这根加个弧度吧 不了
00:47:950 (5,6,7,8) - 钝角跳有点不太好看。。。 我觉得还行啊
00:54:223 (1,2) - 这个滑条组排列不好看0.0 ^
01:01:041 (8,1,2,3) - 四方跳有点无聊,问题不大啦
01:19:041 (2,3) - 间距有点挤 还好
01:22:859 (3,1) - 这里的blanket有点歪了。。。fixed
01:27:768 (2,3) - flow不太好...
conclusion
图问题不大,但我觉得可以试着做的有意思一些
音效大部分很棒呢;w;
排列感觉风格很一致,但是就是太普通了。。。唔,可以尝试一些新鲜的摆法,节奏也是一样
因为跟了电音的话,做图难度较大,所以普通点也没什么拉
good map!
Chaoslitz wrote:
NM from my queue
Easy
00:25:859 (1) - Move it upper for a better flow
01:04:041 (7) - Change the shape for a better flow also
01:23:677 (4,1,2) - Same^ :3
thxs but i think EZ flow good enough sorry
Hard
00:26:677 (5) - Not flow >_> Change this OK
00:40:315 (2) - Shorten the slider- i know but not well
Insane
00:17:677 (5) - Change to this? ^
Not really long, because I like it :3
thxssodarose wrote:
[Normal]
打起来非常不舒服!
间距有点怪,我在AImod里看到有些奇怪的间距 我觉得没什么事
4围太高了,OD比AR还高什么情况,OD5开DTHR后是OD9了 OD改3了
wcx19911123 wrote:
[General]
offset need to be about 1324(+10), the current one is not that accurate OK
[Easy]
01:19:859 - finish?
01:24:223 - ^
01:28:314 - I strongly suggest to end this slider at here, it would fit the song much better imo
all fixed
[Normal]
00:07:586 - end at here to follow the vocal? if you accepted this, don't forget to fix the spacing to the next note too
00:53:677 (2,3,4) - these anti-jumps are really hard to read for newbies, it's confusing, better to use normal spacing here
01:02:950 (1,2) - ^
01:17:404 - same as 00:07:586 -
01:26:950 (3,4) - same as 00:53:677 (2,3,4) -
done
[Hard]
00:44:950 (4) - how about changing it to a 3/4 slider to follow the music better? don't forget to fix the spacing to the next note if you accepted this
01:06:768 - finish?
01:15:495 - ^
01:19:859 - ^
OK
[Insane]
00:22:041 (4,5) - switch them? flow would be a bit better imo
00:42:495 - if you want to follow the music accurately here, why not try this kind of rhythm? http://puu.sh/bAedk/1f83391fa6.jpg they fit the heavy beats
better
01:04:314 (5,6,1) - I'd like you to move the (6) away, let here be the normal spacing of jump, would play better imo
01:28:314 - use S:C1 for the last 2 green sections, it would sound much better
all done
音效还有待改进
S2部分听上去比S1大声很多,虽然为了合曲,不过感觉过头了,建议考虑整体缩小S2的音量 都减小了
之后就是我提的那几个finish,对全diff都适用,顺带I的01:19:586 - 01:22:859 - 这一段也要考虑去掉点finish 嗯嗯
顺带我建议使用slidertick音效补足clap
自己琢磨改改就好,之后叫我吧
thxxxxxswcx19911123 wrote:
we fixed many little things, bubbled
iMage-- wrote:
gratz #1ranked~