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himmel feat. YooSanHyakurei - Seraphim

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[Seraphin]
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Joined October 2012
[Seraphin]
very nice song

image size is way too big~

00:04:816 (3) - (nazi) x72y192 to make it centered between (1) and (2)
00:10:987 (1) - how about just a straight slider? short curved sliders look weird and are confusing for me when I read them (but thats just me...)
00:35:330 (4) - it seems kinda weird to have this be straight when (2) is a curve even though they look like they should be similar (imo)
01:10:645 (1,2,3,4) - maybe redo this so it ends up leading into 01:10:987 (1) - ?
01:44:159 (4) - x60y376 & 01:44:245 (1) - x100y360? i think it plays a bit nicer,, but just suggestion
02:50:073 (1,1) - nice
03:15:787 (3) - down 1?

i want make sb, but can't find lyric zzz
gl

sorry i have no real suggestion
no kudosu plz
fanzhen0019
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
1,723 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019

[Seraphin] wrote:

very nice song

image size is way too big~

00:04:816 (3) - (nazi) x72y192 to make it centered between (1) and (2) k
00:10:987 (1) - how about just a straight slider? short curved sliders look weird and are confusing for me when I read them (but thats just me...) no :3
00:35:330 (4) - it seems kinda weird to have this be straight when (2) is a curve even though they look like they should be similar (imo) ah..waiting for more comments about this..
01:10:645 (1,2,3,4) - maybe redo this so it ends up leading into 01:10:987 (1) - ? nono
01:44:159 (4) - x60y376 & 01:44:245 (1) - x100y360? i think it plays a bit nicer,, but just suggestion w
02:50:073 (1,1) - nice
03:15:787 (3) - down 1? k

i want make sb, but can't find lyric zzz
gl

sorry i have no real suggestion
no kudosu plz
Thank you!
Helpful=KD
Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Kiiwa
8-)
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki


From your ingame request

  1. Grey——Just some complaints.
  2. Black——My personal suggestions.
  3. Bold——Highly recommended.
  4. Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you have to fix it.

[General]
  1. 没一点点的tag吗。。。

[中国制造]
  1. ar9.3可能有点高，我个人比较建议这图用ar9；
  2. 00:39:777 (1) - default whistle? 还有后面的00:42:520 (1) - 以及其他
  3. 00:40:635 (4,5) - 4这里用note，后面白线1/2slider比较好
  4. 00:57:435 (5,2) - 2也和00:57:606 (1,1) - 一样偏移一点，后面也可以偏一点
  5. 01:54:863 (1,2) - ctrl+g一下？
  6. 02:52:806 (6) - NC？
  7. 02:58:292 (4) - ^
  8. 03:52:292 (4,1,2,1) - 这里打的不是很顺，可以考虑换一下1,2和后面1/4短滑条1,2的位置
  9. 04:13:549 (6) - 改在叠在5的头上吧？
    AIBAT
    Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    03:02:476 - snap to 03:02:492
    04:09:684 - snap to 04:09:692

Very solid map...
我感觉我就是在鸡蛋里面挑骨头憋出来上面这点东西

反震我偶像
fanzhen my idol
Dark Fang
1,981 posts
Joined February 2011
Dark Fang
[General]

  1. please BG size.
  2. current AR isn't good fit with the song. how about reduce that. i recommend 9~9.1
[you made it]

  1. 01:33:263 (1) - ok. make a little issue. this slider is very invisible by previous notes (at least, on rarely stackable). try to other way from current state. like tilt the slider angle.
  2. 01:34:292 (1) - I think this is unnecessary sv change. how about keep the sv and follow vocal? be honest, that patterns feel not good. yea. if you apply this opinion, others too seem like this pattern.
  3. 01:49:206 (1) - how about stack on 01:49:720 (1) - this slider's head? that will be more playable.IMO
  4. 02:17:835 (1) - eh hm, how about start 1/16 part on here. current state feel strange yea.
  5. 02:59:920 (2,1) - I recommend use NC at each jumpy circles instead slider.
  6. 03:35:320 (1) - please move more left than current. that part's flow too curved.
  7. 03:38:063 - start long slider until 03:38:406 - here instead of circle. it will be more stable if you use long slider. current state is too awkward because previous part is jump part but the beat, that part's beat seems like 03:36:520 (5,6,1) - this part. but placement is --sorry-- non-conscience jump. anyway, you should offer playable way to players.
  8. 03:46:977 (1) - same opinion as 02:17:835 (1) - here
  9. 03:57:606 (3,4) - how about Ctrl + G this? current flow a little awkward between (4) and (5) slider. IMO
take my mod with my bad English... ;w;
fanzhen0019
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
1,723 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019
Yuki

Minakami Yuki wrote:



From your ingame request

  1. Grey——Just some complaints.
  2. Black——My personal suggestions.
  3. Bold——Highly recommended.
  4. Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you have to fix it.

[General]
  1. 没一点点的tag吗。。。

[中国制造]
  1. ar9.3可能有点高，我个人比较建议这图用ar9；
  2. 00:39:777 (1) - default whistle? 还有后面的00:42:520 (1) - 以及其他 感觉不用
  3. 00:40:635 (4,5) - 4这里用note，后面白线1/2slider比较好 可
  4. 00:57:435 (5,2) - 2也和00:57:606 (1,1) - 一样偏移一点，后面也可以偏一点 ok
  5. 01:54:863 (1,2) - ctrl+g一下？不用惹
  6. 02:52:806 (6) - NC？k
  7. 02:58:292 (4) - ^ k
  8. 03:52:292 (4,1,2,1) - 这里打的不是很顺，可以考虑换一下1,2和后面1/4短滑条1,2的位置改了
  9. 04:13:549 (6) - 改在叠在5的头上吧？不用
    [AIBAT]Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    03:02:476 - snap to 03:02:492
    04:09:684 - snap to 04:09:692

Very solid map...
我感觉我就是在鸡蛋里面挑骨头憋出来上面这点东西

反震我偶像
fanzhen my idol

Dark Fang

Dark Fang wrote:

[General]

  1. please BG size. okkkk i'll change it asap
  2. current AR isn't good fit with the song. how about reduce that. i recommend 9~9.1 ok
[you made it]

  1. 01:33:263 (1) - ok. make a little issue. this slider is very invisible by previous notes (at least, on rarely stackable). try to other way from current state. like tilt the slider angle. yes i made it more curve
  2. 01:34:292 (1) - I think this is unnecessary sv change. how about keep the sv and follow vocal? be honest, that patterns feel not good. yea. if you apply this opinion, others too seem like this pattern. i follow bass here.umm i thinkit's acceptable ;__;
  3. 01:49:206 (1) - how about stack on 01:49:720 (1) - this slider's head? that will be more playable.IMO changed
  4. 02:17:835 (1) - eh hm, how about start 1/16 part on here. current state feel strange yea. orz there's a very small lead-in
  5. 02:59:920 (2,1) - I recommend use NC at each jumpy circles instead slider. oh yes!
  6. 03:35:320 (1) - please move more left than current. that part's flow too curved. dpne
  7. 03:38:063 - start long slider until 03:38:406 - here instead of circle. it will be more stable if you use long slider. current state is too awkward because previous part is jump part but the beat, that part's beat seems like 03:36:520 (5,6,1) - this part. but placement is --sorry-- non-conscience jump. anyway, you should offer playable way to players. ah..okay
  8. 03:46:977 (1) - same opinion as 02:17:835 (1) - here same as above
  9. 03:57:606 (3,4) - how about Ctrl + G this? current flow a little awkward between (4) and (5) slider. IMO though 5 is slider,when do this the distance between 4 and 5 will be big
take my mod with my bad English... ;w;

Thank you! It helps a lot!
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Pretty good map indeed!
Good luck with map! :3
Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Kiiwa
8-)
nice sluider bro
Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Mao
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2014-08-26 15:34 Mao: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/437671 himmel feat. YooSanHyakurei - Seraphim [Made in China]]
2014-08-26 15:34 Macuilxochitl: yesyes
2014-08-26 15:34 Mao: we need another name for the diff first I guess lol
2014-08-26 15:34 Macuilxochitl: haha yes
2014-08-26 15:35 Mao: sooo, what's the song about?
2014-08-26 15:35 Macuilxochitl: idk since the lyric is in japanese..
2014-08-26 15:35 Mao: where is this song even from
2014-08-26 15:35 Macuilxochitl: song name is seraphim
2014-08-26 15:35 Mao: I can't find anything
2014-08-26 15:35 Macuilxochitl: from a chinese composer
2014-08-26 15:36 Macuilxochitl: will be packed into a chinese mu-game
2014-08-26 15:36 Macuilxochitl: so diff name..
2014-08-26 15:37 Mao: seraphim is plural of Seraph
2014-08-26 15:37 Mao: which is a hebrew Angel or something like this
2014-08-26 15:37 Macuilxochitl: yes
2014-08-26 15:39 Mao: well, let's find some synonyms for angel
2014-08-26 15:39 Mao: something from these might work
2014-08-26 15:39 Macuilxochitl: hard..
2014-08-26 15:39 Mao: I'd go for something like Spirit, Guardian, Seraph or Heaven
2014-08-26 15:40 Macuilxochitl: Heaven
2014-08-26 15:40 Mao: okay
2014-08-26 15:40 Macuilxochitl: soundz kool oo
2014-08-26 15:42 Mao: so then let's get into the diff
2014-08-26 15:42 Macuilxochitl: okkie
2014-08-26 15:42 Mao: 00:27:435 - these hitsounds
2014-08-26 15:42 Mao: they feel so loud and overdone
2014-08-26 15:43 Mao: it sounded so much better before these were added
2014-08-26 15:43 Mao: also they are just used in this section if I'm not mistaken
2014-08-26 15:43 Mao: which makes them also feel pretty out of place
2014-08-26 15:44 Mao: *pretty much
2014-08-26 15:44 Macuilxochitl: a..
2014-08-26 15:45 Mao: also I don't know, they feel so different from your other hitsounding :<
2014-08-26 15:45 Macuilxochitl: hmm
2014-08-26 15:45 Macuilxochitl: since it's an intro
2014-08-26 15:46 Macuilxochitl: so i think it's acceptable if i use some different hs
2014-08-26 15:46 Mao: but then at least tone down the volume a bit
2014-08-26 15:46 Mao: they are extremely loud
2014-08-26 15:46 Macuilxochitl: ah..
2014-08-26 15:46 Macuilxochitl: okay
2014-08-26 15:47 Macuilxochitl: 60
2014-08-26 15:47 Macuilxochitl: %
2014-08-26 15:47 Macuilxochitl: how about 60..?
2014-08-26 15:47 Mao: wait, lemme try something
2014-08-26 15:48 Mao: well, you don't have to turn down the volume for the whole section
2014-08-26 15:48 Mao: just for hitsounds like 00:35:663 (1) - , I'd personally go for 50~60%
2014-08-26 15:48 Mao: just for the ehad here -> http://puu.sh/b8B8U/e76f572715.jpg
2014-08-26 15:48 Mao: like this :V
2014-08-26 15:49 Macuilxochitl: okay :3
2014-08-26 15:49 Macuilxochitl: done
2014-08-26 15:50 Mao: also why are you using AR9,1 lol
2014-08-26 15:50 Mao: this is so barely different from 9
2014-08-26 15:50 Mao: decimal ARs are there to adjust it if it's needed
2014-08-26 15:50 Macuilxochitl: looks cool!
2014-08-26 15:50 Macuilxochitl: haha jok
2014-08-26 15:51 Macuilxochitl: then i can use 9 :)
2014-08-26 15:51 Mao: yep
2014-08-26 15:51 Macuilxochitl: okay done
2014-08-26 15:52 Mao: 00:24:863 (1) - Is it just me, or is the there a sound on the white tick before this ends?
2014-08-26 15:52 Mao: I'd rather shorten this to this white tick in order to cover that by the spinner's end
2014-08-26 15:53 Macuilxochitl: oh good!
2014-08-26 15:53 Macuilxochitl: yesyes :D
2014-08-26 15:54 Mao: 00:35:663 (1,2,3) - I still love that
2014-08-26 15:54 Mao: <3
2014-08-26 15:55 Macuilxochitl: xD yea
2014-08-26 15:57 Mao: btw, where did you actually get this song
2014-08-26 15:58 Mao: if I try to search for it on the internet, I can't find anything else than your osu! thread xD
2014-08-26 15:59 Macuilxochitl: i got it from weibo, a social site like twitter
2014-08-26 15:59 Mao: hm okay :/
2014-08-26 15:59 Mao: since it is pretty risky here
2014-08-26 15:59 Macuilxochitl: the composer posted it on the site and submitted to a music share website
2014-08-26 15:59 Mao: I can't check the metadata properly :<
2014-08-26 16:00 Macuilxochitl: i've checked with the composer
2014-08-26 16:01 Macuilxochitl: he plays osu too haha
2014-08-26 16:01 Macuilxochitl: but not frequently
2014-08-26 16:01 Mao: ooh that's nice
2014-08-26 16:01 Macuilxochitl: the first account in the favorite list
2014-08-26 16:02 Mao: good, so I don't have to worry about the metadata? o3o
2014-08-26 16:03 Macuilxochitl: yes :D
2014-08-26 16:04 Mao: 01:10:635 (1,2,3,4) - Nothing you have to apply but I'd like S:C2 here much more as the sounds in the Music aren't that strong for such loud Hitsounds
2014-08-26 16:04 Mao: but that's just me I guess
2014-08-26 16:05 Mao: also all the others have S:C2 as well
2014-08-26 16:05 Macuilxochitl: maybe i'd better lower the volumn
2014-08-26 16:05 Mao: that could work as well
2014-08-26 16:06 Macuilxochitl: okk
2014-08-26 16:06 Macuilxochitl: done
2014-08-26 16:08 Mao: 01:31:892 (2) - Please, what does this actually follow?
2014-08-26 16:08 Mao: that bg sound doesn't seem to land on any ticks
2014-08-26 16:08 Mao: also it's pretty quiet
2014-08-26 16:08 Mao: I'd go for a simple 1/2 Slider
2014-08-26 16:09 Macuilxochitl: aha i think is's okay..
2014-08-26 16:12 Mao: well, I don't know
2014-08-26 16:12 Mao: I know what you want to follow there
2014-08-26 16:13 Mao: if you want to keep it I'd still remove some repeats
2014-08-26 16:13 Mao: just until the red tick
2014-08-26 16:13 Mao: as the sound actually ends there
2014-08-26 16:15 Macuilxochitl: uh..
2014-08-26 16:16 Mao: well, take you time to think about it
2014-08-26 16:17 Mao: do you want me to go on?
2014-08-26 16:17 Macuilxochitl: lemme think..
2014-08-26 16:17 Mao: ok
2014-08-26 16:17 Macuilxochitl: players wont feel anything weird tho
2014-08-26 16:18 Mao: I felt a weird sound ingame
2014-08-26 16:18 Macuilxochitl: but the audio is actually stop at red line
2014-08-26 16:18 Macuilxochitl: hmm
2014-08-26 16:19 Macuilxochitl: im trying drum-hitnormal
2014-08-26 16:19 Macuilxochitl: it covers the audio
2014-08-26 16:19 Mao: lol
2014-08-26 16:19 Macuilxochitl: but..then it becomes what we call as overmap..?
2014-08-26 16:19 Mao: I guess it does
2014-08-26 16:20 Macuilxochitl: anyway i feel acceptable to it
2014-08-26 16:21 Mao: woudl shortening it be such a problem? =v=
2014-08-26 16:21 Mao: ACTION runs
2014-08-26 16:21 Mao: xD
2014-08-26 16:22 Macuilxochitl: oo shorten it
2014-08-26 16:22 Macuilxochitl: yea i can :D
2014-08-26 16:22 Macuilxochitl: done
2014-08-26 16:22 Mao: ok
2014-08-26 16:23 Mao: 01:34:292 (1) -
2014-08-26 16:24 Mao: this is a must fix
2014-08-26 16:24 Mao: these slow sliders are unreadable and unfitting
2014-08-26 16:24 Mao: even though I've played the map several times I always think this is faster
2014-08-26 16:24 Mao: I've also asked other BATs and they agree
2014-08-26 16:24 Macuilxochitl: orz..
2014-08-26 16:24 Macuilxochitl: i want to keep it ;w;
2014-08-26 16:24 Mao: but it feels wrong
2014-08-26 16:25 Macuilxochitl: the bass
2014-08-26 16:25 Mao: the bass is the less dominant thing here
2014-08-26 16:25 Mao: and even though it gets kinda lower it's not worth to foll0w with a slowdown
2014-08-26 16:26 Mao: I barely hear the bass while playing
2014-08-26 16:26 Macuilxochitl: when i first listened to this song the bass here impressed me
2014-08-26 16:27 Mao: well, you are right
2014-08-26 16:27 Mao: they do fit
2014-08-26 16:27 Mao: but
2014-08-26 16:27 Mao: 1,00 -> 0,5 SV change is too much
2014-08-26 16:27 Mao: way too much
2014-08-26 16:27 Macuilxochitl: yea
2014-08-26 16:27 Macuilxochitl: so i think 0.6 or 0.7..instead?
2014-08-26 16:27 Mao: 0,8 ~ 0,75 coudl work
2014-08-26 16:27 Macuilxochitl: k
2014-08-26 16:27 Macuilxochitl: lemme try
2014-08-26 16:28 Macuilxochitl: kk 0.75
2014-08-26 16:28 Macuilxochitl: good
2014-08-26 16:28 Mao: send me a .osu after you've redone that
2014-08-26 16:28 Mao: I want to see how it works
2014-08-26 16:30 Macuilxochitl: http://puu.sh/b8DGA/0a623c15f3.osu
2014-08-26 16:31 Macuilxochitl: i have something to cope with
2014-08-26 16:31 Macuilxochitl: will be back soon!
2014-08-26 16:33 Mao: call me when you're back
2014-08-26 16:42 Macuilxochitl: aa
2014-08-26 16:42 Macuilxochitl: yea back!
2014-08-26 16:42 Mao: feels better now
2014-08-26 16:43 Mao: also wb
2014-08-26 16:43 Macuilxochitl: xD
2014-08-26 16:45 Mao: 01:56:577 (1,2,1,2,1) - I know you like the pattern but I feel like the flow is pretty forced due to the movement from 01:56:749 (2) - into 01:56:920 (1,2) -
2014-08-26 16:45 Mao: it just simply doesn't feel smooth
2014-08-26 16:46 Mao: the main problem is that 01:57:092 (2) -
2014-08-26 16:46 Mao: follows the path of 1
2014-08-26 16:46 Mao: rather than changing the direction
2014-08-26 16:46 Mao: a direction change to the right would flow so much better
2014-08-26 16:47 Mao: gwah, these objects locations are pretty unfortunate because of the slider
2014-08-26 16:47 Mao: there's not much you can do different here lol
2014-08-26 16:47 Mao: http://puu.sh/b8EHT/09174bf33b.jpg
2014-08-26 16:47 Mao: this would work well imo
2014-08-26 16:48 Macuilxochitl: ah
2014-08-26 16:49 Macuilxochitl: hmm
2014-08-26 16:49 Macuilxochitl: lemme draw
2014-08-26 16:50 Macuilxochitl: http://puu.sh/b8ESg/73eda18fc5.png
2014-08-26 16:50 Mao: lemme draw
2014-08-26 16:52 Mao: http://puu.sh/b8EZt/4024ab87b9.jpg
2014-08-26 16:52 Mao: I personally aim the second 1 pretty fast
2014-08-26 16:52 Macuilxochitl: oh yes
2014-08-26 16:52 Mao: and then have to slow down there in order to get 2 properly
2014-08-26 16:53 Mao: which felt very harsh while playing it first
2014-08-26 16:53 Mao: I mean, obviously it would play smooth if it would be played like this wavy movement youÄve drawn
2014-08-26 16:55 Macuilxochitl: http://puu.sh/b8ESg/73eda18fc5.png
2014-08-26 16:55 Macuilxochitl: how about this
2014-08-26 16:55 Mao: what, didn't you sent me this already? :V
2014-08-26 16:57 Mao: *send
2014-08-26 17:02 Macuilxochitl: OTZ
2014-08-26 17:02 Mao: xD
2014-08-26 17:02 Mao: disconnect?
2014-08-26 17:03 Macuilxochitl: yea..
2014-08-26 17:03 Macuilxochitl: so did you recieve the pic..?
2014-08-26 17:03 Mao: send it again
2014-08-26 17:04 Macuilxochitl: http://puu.sh/b8Fai/6e59b0471d.jpg
2014-08-26 17:04 Mao: lemme test it
2014-08-26 17:05 Mao: yeah, looks good
2014-08-26 17:05 Macuilxochitl: xD weee
2014-08-26 17:06 Macuilxochitl: u'll be the best BAT <3
2014-08-26 17:06 Macuilxochitl: u check everything carefully
2014-08-26 17:07 Mao: 02:18:006 (1) - isn't this sound 1/8?
2014-08-26 17:07 Mao: I hear it on every blue/red/white tick
2014-08-26 17:07 Mao: and always 1 time between them
2014-08-26 17:07 Mao: which indicated 1/8
2014-08-26 17:07 Mao: I try my best ^^'
2014-08-26 17:08 Macuilxochitl: LOL
2014-08-26 17:08 Macuilxochitl: it's 1/16 now
2014-08-26 17:09 Mao: yeah, but the slider should be 1/8 to follow the music properly lol
2014-08-26 17:09 Macuilxochitl: ok done
2014-08-26 17:12 Mao: 02:51:349 - Hey, it would be cool to have a note here as this is a build up to the downbeat
2014-08-26 17:13 Mao: just an idea though :3
2014-08-26 17:14 Macuilxochitl: hmm
2014-08-26 17:14 Macuilxochitl: 1/8 is enough :D
2014-08-26 17:15 Mao: 03:01:035 (1) - Please, I really disagree with this one
2014-08-26 17:15 Mao: is there even such a sound to follow?
2014-08-26 17:15 Mao: http://puu.sh/b8Gob/5465bea059.jpg
2014-08-26 17:15 Mao: this works much better
2014-08-26 17:16 Macuilxochitl: 03:01:035 (1) - like here
2014-08-26 17:16 Mao: what?
2014-08-26 17:17 Macuilxochitl: 03:01:035 (1) -
2014-08-26 17:17 Mao: yeah, this is the one I want you to change lol
2014-08-26 17:17 Macuilxochitl: ..copy failed
2014-08-26 17:18 Macuilxochitl: 01:31:892 (2) -
2014-08-26 17:18 Mao: nah, the sound at 01:31:892 (2) - is louder
2014-08-26 17:18 Mao: and more obvious imo
2014-08-26 17:21 Macuilxochitl: hmm
2014-08-26 17:22 Macuilxochitl: ..uh?
2014-08-26 17:22 Macuilxochitl: http://puu.sh/b8GQq/22c6c0435c.jpg
2014-08-26 17:23 Mao: 03:01:035 (1) - is the problem not 03:01:377 (1) -
2014-08-26 17:23 Mao: :<
2014-08-26 17:24 Macuilxochitl: ooo i se
2014-08-26 17:24 Macuilxochitl: e
2014-08-26 17:24 Macuilxochitl: eee
2014-08-26 17:25 Macuilxochitl: idk in fact..
2014-08-26 17:25 Macuilxochitl: but it's fine..?
2014-08-26 17:26 Mao: I don't think so :/
2014-08-26 17:26 Macuilxochitl: like a hold slider
2014-08-26 17:27 Mao: let me get some more opinions on that
2014-08-26 17:28 Mao: well, got agreement
2014-08-26 17:28 Mao: it sounds overmapped
2014-08-26 17:28 Macuilxochitl: orzz
2014-08-26 17:30 Mao: as I've said [http://puu.sh/b8HmN/95047e234b.jpg this] works fine ;b
2014-08-26 17:31 Macuilxochitl: T.T
2014-08-26 17:31 Macuilxochitl: okay..
2014-08-26 17:36 Mao: 03:05:149 (1) - I've liked the old slider better ;w;
2014-08-26 17:36 Mao: ACTION runs
2014-08-26 17:37 Macuilxochitl: orz
2014-08-26 17:38 Mao: my old mod still has the cold
2014-08-26 17:38 Mao: *code
2014-08-26 17:38 Mao: ACTION runs faaar away
2014-08-26 17:38 Mao: but well, personal preference I guess
2014-08-26 17:39 Macuilxochitl: ;w;
2014-08-26 17:39 Macuilxochitl: anyway it's still long
2014-08-26 17:40 Mao: 03:02:406 (1) - Why does this end on the blue tick btw?
2014-08-26 17:40 Mao: Is that intentional? owo
2014-08-26 17:41 Macuilxochitl: ooooo by mistake
2014-08-26 17:41 Mao: 03:26:577 (1) - lol wtf sliderslide hitsounds xD
2014-08-26 17:43 Mao: is that even allowed?
2014-08-26 17:43 Macuilxochitl: yea
2014-08-26 17:44 Macuilxochitl: see Rootus
2014-08-26 17:44 Mao: lemme see
2014-08-26 17:50 Macuilxochitl: O.O
2014-08-26 17:51 Mao: ok it is, just wanted to know ;b
2014-08-26 17:52 Mao: not that I let something unrankable pass without asking
2014-08-26 17:53 Mao: but as it's fine, we don't have to worry :D/
2014-08-26 17:53 Macuilxochitl: yayaya
2014-08-26 17:54 Mao: 03:47:149 (1) - same as the one before the second kiai, it's 1/8
2014-08-26 17:56 Macuilxochitl: yes
2014-08-26 17:57 Mao: 03:52:635 (2) - stop overlapping my poor little HP-Bar ;w;
2014-08-26 17:59 Macuilxochitl: okkk
2014-08-26 18:02 Mao: 03:55:377 (1,2,3,4,5) - meh, what are you following with 03:55:463 (2) - ?
2014-08-26 18:02 Mao: 03:55:377 (1) - and 03:55:549 (3,4,5) - are completely different
2014-08-26 18:02 Mao: and therefore shouldn't be connected imo
2014-08-26 18:03 Mao: Please delete 03:55:463 (2) -
2014-08-26 18:03 Macuilxochitl: a
2014-08-26 18:04 Macuilxochitl: why.. a bit overmap
2014-08-26 18:04 Mao: it feels unintuitive :<
2014-08-26 18:08 Macuilxochitl: orz
2014-08-26 18:10 Mao: brb dinner
2014-08-26 18:10 Macuilxochitl: k

What has been changed:
  1. Fixed some overmapping/general Rhythm
  2. Slight overall flow/pattern adjustments
  3. General Stuff

Since you apparently went to bed while I was at dinner, call me back once you've updated and applied that stuff. I'll check the rest (General Stuff, Metadata etc.) then.
fanzhen0019
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woooooo all done! thank you mao-chan! <3
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So, after checking this again with the mapper, we've fixed some Spinners and other General stuff. Log

Bubble #1 (ﾉ 'ω')ﾉ
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa i love u!!!
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Something minor was changed. Rebubble~ (This is bubble #1)
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好！
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卧槽空间音效
反爷爷教我怎么放音效
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irc modded with the mapper, mainly focus on the wrong timing in the begining (used half-bpm which is not needed), and some nazi things, a handful of unsanpped green lines caused by changing timing.

LOG:
SPOILER
2014-09-07 18:22 Macuilxochitl: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/437671 himmel feat. YooSanHyakurei - Seraphim]
2014-09-07 18:22 Macuilxochitl: dun dun dun dun
2014-09-07 18:27 Macuilxochitl: 我疯狂掉线
2014-09-07 18:27 Fycho: 那怎么搞
2014-09-07 18:28 Macuilxochitl: 趁现在还活着
2014-09-07 18:28 Macuilxochitl: 只能鄙视联通在山区的信号了
2014-09-07 18:42 Macuilxochitl: 我活了
2014-09-07 18:42 Fycho: 话说能不能改成sl3
2014-09-07 18:42 Macuilxochitl: hao
2014-09-07 18:43 Macuilxochitl: sl3
2014-09-07 18:43 Fycho: 那些二分拍完全重合打着有点蛋疼
2014-09-07 18:43 Fycho: 可能我不习惯
2014-09-07 18:43 Macuilxochitl: wokankan
2014-09-07 18:43 Fycho: 或者manual stack下
2014-09-07 18:44 Macuilxochitl: stack不是很多吧
2014-09-07 18:45 Fycho: 02:04:635 (6,1) - 这manual下?
2014-09-07 18:45 Fycho: 我去洗澡了 马上回来继续
2014-09-07 18:45 Fycho: 有人催我
2014-09-07 18:46 Macuilxochitl: 好
2014-09-07 18:48 Fycho: 为啥开头是87.5
2014-09-07 18:48 Fycho: 你能不能解释下
2014-09-07 18:48 Fycho: BPM
2014-09-07 18:49 Macuilxochitl: wojuede mei wen ti a
2014-09-07 18:49 Macuilxochitl: bpm/2
2014-09-07 18:49 Fycho: 为什么要除以二
2014-09-07 18:49 Fycho: 开头又没鼓
2014-09-07 18:49 Fycho: 用0.5倍绿线 
2014-09-07 18:50 Fycho: 用红线变速是禁止的
2014-09-07 18:51 Macuilxochitl: haoba
2014-09-07 18:51 Fycho: 但是改timing要restore #1...
2014-09-07 18:52 Macuilxochitl: ..
2014-09-07 18:52 Macuilxochitl: 其实我觉得没问题 不过有变速之嫌还是改了为好
2014-09-07 18:53 Macuilxochitl: ok gaile
2014-09-07 18:53 Macuilxochitl: baibai
2014-09-07 23:29 Macuilxochitl: qiu a
2014-09-07 23:29 Macuilxochitl: 我刚刚找了毛爷
2014-09-07 23:29 Macuilxochitl: 说了一下timing的事
2014-09-07 23:30 Macuilxochitl: 但是我不确定这种情况下我update后找他rebub是不是合法的
2014-09-07 23:34 Fycho: 你说是我发现的吗
2014-09-07 23:34 Macuilxochitl: ..后来提了
2014-09-07 23:35 Macuilxochitl: 决定了还是你来rebub#1吧
2014-09-07 23:35 Fycho: 恩
2014-09-07 23:35 Fycho: 现在来继续？
2014-09-07 23:35 Macuilxochitl: 可以a
2014-09-07 23:35 Macuilxochitl: 晚上网应该好点了吧
2014-09-07 23:36 Fycho: np下
2014-09-07 23:36 Macuilxochitl: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/437671 himmel feat. YooSanHyakurei - Seraphim]
2014-09-07 23:38 Fycho: 那个manual stack改不改
2014-09-07 23:38 Macuilxochitl: 改了已经
2014-09-07 23:40 Fycho: 03:34:635 (1,2) - 这距离大点？
2014-09-07 23:40 Fycho:  03:34:806 (2) - 放左边啥的
2014-09-07 23:41 Macuilxochitl: uh
2014-09-07 23:41 Macuilxochitl: ..感觉还成?
2014-09-07 23:41 Fycho: 那就成吧
2014-09-07 23:41 Macuilxochitl: 好
2014-09-07 23:41 Macuilxochitl: 改了
2014-09-07 23:41 Macuilxochitl: 挪左边了
2014-09-07 23:42 Fycho: 04:14:749 (3,4) -这音量也太小了吧
2014-09-07 23:43 Macuilxochitl: 能听见啊..
2014-09-07 23:45 Fycho: 其他没什么槽点啊
2014-09-07 23:45 Fycho: 也没什么好说的 好图多说啥都是nazi
2014-09-07 23:46 Macuilxochitl: e
2014-09-07 23:47 Fycho: 你传吧
2014-09-07 23:47 Macuilxochitl: hao
2014-09-07 23:58 Fycho:  .
2014-09-07 23:58 Fycho: 啥时候你传完了发个PM给我 我睡觉去了
2014-09-08 00:00 Macuilxochitl: 好
2014-09-08 00:04 Macuilxochitl: 我醉了
2014-09-08 00:04 Macuilxochitl: 这半年都传不完
2014-09-08 10:36 Macuilxochitl: 我的妈 传完了
2014-09-08 10:36 Fycho: 。
2014-09-08 10:45 Macuilxochitl: haole
2014-09-08 10:46 Fycho: 哦
2014-09-08 13:02 Macuilxochitl: chekc chekc one two
2014-09-08 13:02 Macuilxochitl: ck
2014-09-08 13:05 Fycho: 01:22:291 - 
2014-09-08 13:05 Fycho: kiai unsanp
2014-09-08 13:05 Fycho: 动timing后很多绿线有1MS误差
2014-09-08 13:05 Fycho: 01:44:234 - unsanp
2014-09-08 13:05 Fycho: kiai
2014-09-08 13:07 Macuilxochitl: hao
2014-09-08 13:07 Macuilxochitl: 全得改还是怎么
2014-09-08 13:07 Macuilxochitl: wocao 延后
2014-09-08 13:08 Macuilxochitl: 还是得全改
2014-09-08 13:08 Fycho: 恩啊
2014-09-08 13:08 Fycho: 03:24:434 - 还有这个
2014-09-08 13:09 Fycho: 有的绿线差1ms音效就错了
2014-09-08 13:09 Macuilxochitl: dui
2014-09-08 13:09 Macuilxochitl: 麻烦
2014-09-08 13:09 Fycho: 或者说变速滑条的的就不变速了
2014-09-08 13:09 Fycho: 真是麻烦
2014-09-08 13:09 Macuilxochitl: 操我要上课了我再看看
2014-09-08 13:09 Fycho:  kiai就这些unsanp
2014-09-08 13:09 Fycho: 绿线你自己看看?
2014-09-08 13:10 Macuilxochitl: dui

call me back when you are ready.
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k
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Restore bubble #1 due to timing change.
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#2
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Approved.
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Beige

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

Approved.
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？！谢谢F酱！！！
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we resnapped the preview time. adjusted the spacing of a pattern or two. added fanzhen0019 and some more tags related to the song.

really impressive stuff. i've been playing this for a while.

so ehh...setting this on fire!!

have my fire virginity!!(nobody cares)

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

Approved.
something
23:14 Oracle: 我感觉我还是check一下
23:14 Macuilxochitl: dian!
23:14 Oracle: 防止被艹
23:14 Macuilxochitl: hao
23:15 Oracle: .
23:15 Oracle: woznm
23:15 Oracle: 我怎么找不到你那个图了
23:15 Macuilxochitl: seraphim
23:20 Oracle: 首先你加fanzhen0019进tags
23:22 Macuilxochitl: .
23:23 Oracle: 你以前拿fanzhen0019rank过图啊
23:23 *Oracle is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/437671 himmel feat. YooSanHyakurei - Seraphim [Heaven]]
23:23 Oracle: woxiandada
23:23 Macuilxochitl: `.....
23:23 Macuilxochitl: 我光看你消息去了
23:23 *Macuilxochitl is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/344620 Akiyama Uni - The Grimoire of Alice [Lunatic]]
23:23 Macuilxochitl: 挂了
23:28 Oracle: 。
23:28 Oracle: 我操
23:28 Oracle: 早知道先点再玩
23:29 Macuilxochitl: .
23:29 Macuilxochitl: 是不是傻逼
23:29 Oracle: 我傻逼了
23:29 Macuilxochitl: 加了两tag
23:29 Macuilxochitl: himmel说这曲子以后可能会收录musync
23:29 Macuilxochitl: 我先加上
23:30 Oracle: 好
23:30 Oracle: 我象征性看一遍，其实打得时候没有任何不自然的地方
23:30 Macuilxochitl: 毛爷爷让我改个地方我很不爽 想改回来
23:30 Oracle: 哪里
23:31 Macuilxochitl: 01:56:577 (1,2,1,2) -
23:31 Macuilxochitl: 01:56:920 (1,2) -
23:31 Macuilxochitl: 本来后面这个12是和前面一样的
23:31 Oracle: http://puu.sh/bKeFw/6f6ca2a20b.jpg？
23:32 Macuilxochitl: 你说得对
23:32 Oracle: 我觉得改回来
23:32 Oracle: 01:59:320 (1,2,1,2) - 看看这里
23:32 Oracle: consistency
23:32 Macuilxochitl: yes
23:33 Macuilxochitl: 02:37:720 (1,2,3) -
23:33 Macuilxochitl: 这一块我很不爽
23:34 Macuilxochitl: 因为间距不一
23:34 Oracle: 我觉得没啥 纵向3个note等距的
23:34 Oracle: 不会难看
23:35 Macuilxochitl: 我还是改了一下
23:35 Macuilxochitl: 因为和slider头部组成的三角形不等边
23:35 Macuilxochitl: 感觉妈死了一样的难受
23:35 Oracle: 你这强迫症
23:36 Macuilxochitl: 这样才能做出好看的图
23:36 Oracle: 01:01:377 (5,6,7,2) - 那其实这里也。。
23:36 Oracle: 不太整齐
23:36 Oracle: 那个2往左歪了一点
23:36 Macuilxochitl: 这里不用管
23:36 Macuilxochitl: 因为打完后slider就没了
23:37 Oracle: 噢 你做的三角形是下面那个
23:37 Macuilxochitl: 硬改我就挪slider
23:37 Macuilxochitl: done
23:39 Macuilxochitl: 本来还准备整个SB
23:39 Macuilxochitl: 我就坐等himmel大大给我BG
23:39 Macuilxochitl: 结果现在曲子还没收录呢
23:39 Oracle: 等不及了
23:39 Macuilxochitl: 歌词有 我贴creator words算了
23:39 Oracle: 我觉得这曲子 厉害
23:40 Macuilxochitl: 又改了点东西
23:41 Oracle: 一会update以后高速我
23:41 Macuilxochitl: 改title可还行
23:41 Macuilxochitl: 不对 artist的瓶邪
23:41 Oracle: 你确定title对么
23:41 Macuilxochitl: 拼写
23:41 Macuilxochitl: title队
23:41 Oracle: 怎么改了
23:41 Oracle: 有没有官方source啊
23:41 Macuilxochitl: artist我改了一个字
23:41 Macuilxochitl: 瑶山百霊
23:41 Oracle: 本来是什么0 0
23:41 Macuilxochitl: 微博是瑶山百霊
23:41 Macuilxochitl: 原来是灵啊
23:42 Macuilxochitl: 无伤大雅
23:42 Macuilxochitl: 好了 我要updare了
23:42 Oracle: 你到时候能提供正确source就行
23:42 Macuilxochitl: source没有
23:43 Oracle: 这首歌出自哪里的啊
23:43 Macuilxochitl: 我虾米抓的
23:43 Macuilxochitl: 不然只能找本人要了
23:44 Macuilxochitl: 而且这还是LKs加过一段的
23:44 Macuilxochitl: 要不然连5min都没有
23:44 Oracle: http://puu.sh/bKfqd/77202d6df7.png 我觉得你问问他
23:44 Macuilxochitl: 你看看这图fav
23:44 Macuilxochitl: done
23:44 Macuilxochitl: 你就懂了
23:44 Macuilxochitl: 04:20:577 - 04:31:549 - LKs加了后面这一段
23:45 Oracle: 。
23:45 Oracle: 完全没听出来
23:45 Macuilxochitl: 就是copy
23:46 Oracle: http://ycool.com/user/yaoshanbailing
23:46 Oracle: 跪下来了
23:46 Oracle: http://puu.sh/bKfzz/6805f6a031.png
23:46 Oracle: 两个都有
23:46 Macuilxochitl: ...
23:47 Macuilxochitl: 醉了
23:47 Macuilxochitl: 我该回去
23:47 Oracle: 我想想。。
23:47 Oracle: 她好像有官网
23:47 Oracle: 我查一下
23:48 Oracle: http://puu.sh/bKfFn/b003284ec8.jpg
23:48 Oracle: 这是推特
23:48 Oracle: 好了
23:48 Oracle: 我找到靠谱的了
23:49 Oracle: http://puu.sh/bKfIg/636e27151b.png
23:49 Macuilxochitl: haohaoaho
23:49 Macuilxochitl: 所以我又加了几个Tag
23:49 Macuilxochitl: Y欧诺der voice
23:49 Macuilxochitl: yonder
23:51 Macuilxochitl: 没问题我就改了啊
23:51 Macuilxochitl: udpate
23:51 Oracle: 嗯
23:55 Macuilxochitl: done
23:56 Macuilxochitl: 好
23:56 Macuilxochitl: bub#1#1app全是华人
23:56 Macuilxochitl: #2
23:56 Oracle: 有何不可
23:56 Oracle: 支持国产
23:56 Macuilxochitl: 支持国产
23:56 Macuilxochitl: op
23:56 Oracle: 我现在要仔细看看 防止被un啊
23:56 Oracle: 被un又是三个狗
23:56 Oracle: 老板美丽
23:57 Oracle: 。
23:57 Macuilxochitl: good
23:57 Oracle: 老板啊
23:57 Oracle: 你的preview time
23:57 Oracle: 好像unsnap
23:57 Oracle: 02:18:520 -
23:57 Oracle: 拉开来仔细看看
23:57 Macuilxochitl: .
23:57 Oracle: 是吧
23:58 Macuilxochitl: dpne
00:00 Macuilxochitl: updt
00:13 Oracle: 好了我觉得都没啥了
00:13 Oracle: 这个CS4.3你确定吗
00:13 Macuilxochitl: a
00:14 Oracle: 看来是确定4.3
00:14 Macuilxochitl: ok
00:14 Macuilxochitl: 4.3
00:18 Oracle: 咦
00:18 Oracle: 这好像是老板处女app
00:18 Macuilxochitl: 队
00:18 Macuilxochitl: 混蛋
00:18 Oracle: 我会负责的
00:18 Macuilxochitl: 嘤嘤嘤
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Congrats ~
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hao !!!!谢谢老板!!!
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finally!


*EDIT

o,wait
http://shop.attackthemusic.com/album/frequency-blitz-2

>>Himmel feat. Yoohimemiya - Seraphim
should rename?
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支持国产
支持反震
支持女装（咦
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Gz~
fanzhen0019
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sionKotori wrote:

finally!


*EDIT

o,wait
http://shop.attackthemusic.com/album/frequency-blitz-2

>>Himmel feat. Yoohimemiya - Seraphim
should rename?
himmel confirmed that the one i am using is correct.


"This is correct ww. The former one 'yoo himemiya' was wrong spelt in fact ww"
(pic taken from microblog)
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Macuilxochitl wrote:

sionKotori wrote:

finally!


*EDIT

o,wait
http://shop.attackthemusic.com/album/frequency-blitz-2

>>Himmel feat. Yoohimemiya - Seraphim
should rename?
himmel confirmed that the one i am using is correct.


"This is correct ww. The former one 'yoo himemiya' was wrong spelt in fact ww"

(pic taken from microblog)

ahh okay!! congratz for your 1st approved!!
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sionKotori wrote:

finally!


*EDIT

o,wait
http://shop.attackthemusic.com/album/frequency-blitz-2

>>Himmel feat. Yoohimemiya - Seraphim
should rename?
as the above posts. fanzhen asked himmel about this before, the composer of this song admitted he gave the wrong title to the CD producer.
plus the mp3 has been edited by LKs so it's not exactly the version from CD. thus i consider we should keep the title offered by himmel-the composer of the song. that way's more official. thanks for the concern tho!!
Atrue
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No more discussions should be made about the artist name, which is confirmed by the singer herself. (preventing more trouble)
Congratz!
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Please don't stop being weird and awesome
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holy shit gratz! 8-)
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恭喜震爺
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Gratz '^'
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Yey gratz once again, amazing diff \o/
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Congratz ^^
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