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LordRaika
XD
No problem...
Glad ican help

But btw... The hs stuff, i only checked it for MX
So u might wnt to check it for the other dif as well by urself XD

No kds
Topic Starter
hokin1995

lordraika wrote:

XD
No problem...
Glad ican help

But btw... The hs stuff, i only checked it for MX
So u might wnt to check it for the other dif as well by urself XD

No kds
OK I will check other diff when I have a time :D
shionelove
Hi~from queue
Here's my mod

column 1234

mod
[NM]
00:43:728 (43728|1,43886|2) - and 00:44:991 (44991|2,45149|0) - triplet https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1713865
01:12:938 (72938|1) - until 01:13:096 (73096|3) - ?
01:14:201 (74201|0) - too

[HD]
00:05:359 (5359|2) - change LN until 00:05:991 (5991|3) -
00:43:728 (43728|1,43886|0) - and 00:44:991 (44991|2,45149|0) - triplet
01:19:254 (79254|3) - until 01:19:570 (79570|0) -

[MX]
00:06:149 (6149|1) - move to 1 and 00:06:307 (6307|0,6465|0) - move to 2
00:43:728 (43728|0,43728|3,43886|3,43886|0) - and 00:44:991 (44991|3) - triplet
01:14:201 (74201|2) - until 01:14:517 (74517|1) -

Good Luck~ :)
don't forget M4M~
Topic Starter
hokin1995

hutunohito wrote:

Hi~from queue
Here's my mod

column 1234

mod
[NM]
00:43:728 (43728|1,43886|2) - and 00:44:991 (44991|2,45149|0) - triplet https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1713865
01:12:938 (72938|1) - until 01:13:096 (73096|3) - ?
01:14:201 (74201|0) - too

[HD]
00:05:359 (5359|2) - change LN until 00:05:991 (5991|3) -
00:43:728 (43728|1,43886|0) - and 00:44:991 (44991|2,45149|0) - triplet
01:19:254 (79254|3) - until 01:19:570 (79570|0) -

[MX]
00:06:149 (6149|1) - move to 1 and 00:06:307 (6307|0,6465|0) - move to 2
00:43:728 (43728|0,43728|3,43886|3,43886|0) - and 00:44:991 (44991|3) - triplet
01:14:201 (74201|2) - until 01:14:517 (74517|1) -

Good Luck~ :)
don't forget M4M~
Thank for mod
aitor98
Hi! From queue :3

Keys : 1|2|3|4

General
Fine :D
4K NM
00:12:149 - Add note to 3.
00:12:228 - Add note to 2
00:17:201 - Add note to 1.
00:17:280 - Add note to 2.
00:22:254 - Add note to 4.
00:24:307 - Try to avoid jackhammers in the NM difficulties. 00:24:465 - Move 1 to 2 and 3 to 4.
00:26:359 - Move to 3. Same here.
00:27:623 - Move to 2. Same here.
00:28:728 - Jackhammer again. Put 2 to 1 and 4 to 2.
00:28:886 - Move 2 to 3.
00:29:359 - Move 3 to 4.
01:13:096 - Move to 1.

4K HD
00:25:254 - Move to 2.
00:25:412 - Move 2 to 1 and 3 to 4.
00:25:570 - I would do it like this http://puu.sh/9wjVI/1546f31534.jpg.
00:33:701 - Add note to 2.
00:33:780 - Move 2 to 3.
01:06:780 - I think this is better http://puu.sh/9wkxj/f38eac5cc2.jpg
01:13:254 - I would do this http://puu.sh/9wkLp/0135246dcb.jpg

4K HD
00:36:859 - Move 4 to 3.
00:36:938 - Move 3 to 2.
00:45:780 - I would set it like this for a MX http://puu.sh/9wlnX/84f961bfcc.jpg
.
Topic Starter
hokin1995

aitor98 wrote:

Hi! From queue :3

Keys : 1|2|3|4

General
Fine :D
4K NM
00:12:149 - Add note to 3.
00:12:228 - Add note to 2
00:17:201 - Add note to 1.
00:17:280 - Add note to 2.
00:22:254 - Add note to 4.
00:24:307 - Try to avoid jackhammers in the NM difficulties. 00:24:465 - Move 1 to 2 and 3 to 4.
00:26:359 - Move to 3. Same here.
00:27:623 - Move to 2. Same here.
00:28:728 - Jackhammer again. Put 2 to 1 and 4 to 2.
00:28:886 - Move 2 to 3.
00:29:359 - Move 3 to 4.
01:13:096 - Move to 1.

4K HD
00:25:254 - Move to 2.
00:25:412 - Move 2 to 1 and 3 to 4.
00:25:570 - I would do it like this http://puu.sh/9wjVI/1546f31534.jpg.
00:33:701 - Add note to 2.
00:33:780 - Move 2 to 3.
01:06:780 - I think this is better http://puu.sh/9wkxj/f38eac5cc2.jpg
01:13:254 - I would do this http://puu.sh/9wkLp/0135246dcb.jpg

4K HD
00:36:859 - Move 4 to 3.
00:36:938 - Move 3 to 2.
00:45:780 - I would set it like this for a MX http://puu.sh/9wlnX/84f961bfcc.jpg
.
All fixed
Thank you aitor98 :D
[AyanoTatemaya]
yo~ here's my mod as requested! :)

FARKING D-FRAG OHYEAH!!!

Col: 1|2|3|4

[NM]
00:12:228 (12228|1) - (optional) you can remove this note since it's only a NM diff
00:17:280 (17280|1) - ^
00:23:991 (23991|3) - move to 2
00:29:044 (29044|2) - move to 1
00:29:359 (29359|0) - move to 2

[HD]
Nothing worth mentioning here, flawless diff :)

[MX]
00:09:701 - http://puu.sh/9wXMd/63eb7dea94.jpg
00:24:780 (24780|2) - (optional) move to 1
00:36:623 - http://puu.sh/9wXZN/994f886abe.jpg

Good luck~! And here's a bonus pic! xD
Topic Starter
hokin1995

HinagikuKatsura wrote:

yo~ here's my mod as requested! :)

FARKING D-FRAG OHYEAH!!!

Col: 1|2|3|4

[NM]
00:12:228 (12228|1) - (optional) you can remove this note since it's only a NM diff
00:17:280 (17280|1) - ^
00:23:991 (23991|3) - move to 2
00:29:044 (29044|2) - move to 1
00:29:359 (29359|0) - move to 2

[HD]
Nothing worth mentioning here, flawless diff :)

[MX]
00:09:701 - http://puu.sh/9wXMd/63eb7dea94.jpg
00:24:780 (24780|2) - (optional) move to 1
00:36:623 - http://puu.sh/9wXZN/994f886abe.jpg

Good luck~! And here's a bonus pic! xD
All fixed
Thank you , HinagikuKatsura :D

- Yuuto -
Hi, from my queue

/me saw the BG *o*
D-Frag! i love the anime

Coloumns : 1 2 3 4

* = Highly suggest

[General]
Clean

[NM]
00:13:412 - add note to 3
00:33:149 - suggestion : osu.ppy.sh/ss/1753090 . comfortable patterns, and so suitable with the sound as well. *
01:05:675 (65675|3) - move to 1 for hand balance
01:17:044 (77044|1) - move to 1 , its has a same sound like 01:16:728 (76728|0)

[HD]
00:10:570 (10570|3) - there's has no sound there right? i think you should have to delete it
00:57:149 - add note to 3

  • 00:33:149 (33149|1,33465|1) - how about move them to 1
    and.
    00:33:307 (33307|0) - move this to 2

    its so suitable with the sound
00:34:412 (34412|1) - move to 4

[MX]
cool

That is all that i could found.. so good map, here.. have my star.
Topic Starter
hokin1995

Yuutosan wrote:

Hi, from my queue

/me saw the BG *o*
D-Frag! i love the anime

Coloumns : 1 2 3 4

* = Highly suggest

[General]
Clean

[NM]
00:13:412 - add note to 3
00:33:149 - suggestion : osu.ppy.sh/ss/1753090 . comfortable patterns, and so suitable with the sound as well. *
01:05:675 (65675|3) - move to 1 for hand balance
01:17:044 (77044|1) - move to 1 , its has a same sound like 01:16:728 (76728|0)

[HD]
00:10:570 (10570|3) - there's has no sound there right? i think you should have to delete it
00:57:149 - add note to 3

  • 00:33:149 (33149|1,33465|1) - how about move them to 1
    and.
    00:33:307 (33307|0) - move this to 2

    its so suitable with the sound
00:34:412 (34412|1) - move to 4

[MX]
cool

That is all that i could found.. so good map, here.. have my star.
All fixed
Thank you for mod and your star Yuutosan ;)
SpiceSoul_old
only problem i found was you sick sense in naming the difficulties The NM should have been HD in my opinion i also found a guy who did the same 1 very hard looking beatmap and called it Easy difficulty.
all i have to say is think of the new people who will start this game and play your map.
it would be way to hard for them so i would say maybe make an easy map that is easy to play
that is all i have to say have a good day and dont forget Kudosu if you think i was even a little helpful!!
Topic Starter
hokin1995

SpiceSoul wrote:

only problem i found was you sick sense in naming the difficulties The NM should have been HD in my opinion i also found a guy who did the same 1 very hard looking beatmap and called it Easy difficulty.
all i have to say is think of the new people who will start this game and play your map.
it would be way to hard for them so i would say maybe make an easy map that is easy to play
that is all i have to say have a good day and dont forget Kudosu if you think i was even a little helpful!!
Thank you for your idea
Bruce
hokin君我们又见面了>.>
Column:1 2 3 4
Red Color:Warning or unrankable issue
Green Color:Think it over
[NM]
00:00:623 (623|3) - Move to 3.Add a Note at 4 如果是用双Note表达重音的话要从头到尾贯彻着lol

00:02:044 (2044|2) - Suggest you Delete.之前和这个相同的音都是1/1了..这个就不要突然1/2了毕竟还是NM

00:03:307 (3307|3) - Move to 00:03:465 - 理由是前面两条的综合^

00:07:096 (7096|1) - Delete.

00:08:201 (8201|0) - Move to 3

00:08:359 (8359|1,8517|2) - Move to 1 and 2 并且是相同的时间点

00:24:307 (24307|2,24465|1) - Delete these 2Notes and 00:24:623 - Add a Note at 2

00:28:096 - ~ 00:29:675 - 原来不是少现象
有些地方你用双Notes但是我并不太清楚这里你是表达了些什么 反而在重音的地方只用1Note

00:30:149 - Add a Note 这个应该是失误了 这边突然少了个音

00:39:938 (39938|3) - 渐弱的音 所以Move to 1 所以这边加个Note吧 ←←←←←←←←←←←

00:41:201 (41201|0) - 最后一音是变强的 所以Move to 3..啊 这里用双Note了 怎么前面的没用↑

00:41:517 (41517|0) - 这边这个 虽然有音啦 但是 很奇怪 Remove更好

00:49:254 - 漏音啦 Add a Note at 1

01:08:991 - ~ 01:10:412 - Test play的时候觉得很奇怪 这里建议还是跟鼓点

01:23:991 (83991|3) - 嘤嘤 最后故意来1/2连点的吗 如果不是的话Move to 2

[HD]
00:03:307 (3307|1,3386|2) - 前面1/2连点一直进行中的吧?那么这里也不能放过啦 Ctrl+J

00:08:359 (8359|3,8438|2) - 和^一样 Ctrl+J

00:15:859 (15859|2,16017|2) - 没有音的 Remove

00:15:623 (15623|1) - 如果^Remove了的话 这个Move to 3

00:25:570 - ~ 00:26:201 - 建议还是跟鼓点比较好

00:27:780 - ~ 00:29:044 - 轻重音区分错了 建议这边你再看看

00:43:728 (43728|0,43807|1,43886|0) - 这个注意了啊 之前是NM所以1/4也没关系
这边是1/3而且是00:43:780 - 00:43:886 - 的

00:45:044 - 这个也是1/3 知道要怎么改了吧 MX就不提了 你顺带改掉

[MX]
00:03:465 - ~ 00:05:991 - 因为是MX了所以这个长条Part还是变成纯1/4连打比较好 更加有新意 也增加了难度

00:08:359 - 就像这里就挺好的 而且是1/4+长条连打 就很好

00:15:859 (15859|2,16017|1) - 全部下移一格

00:16:254 (16254|2,16412|1) - Ctrl+J 第一排和第二排的音不一样 他和第三排才一样

00:20:675 - 00:20:754 - 00:20:833 - 在不造成连点的情况下多加1Note.有别的音 MX的话果然要更难点才好lol

00:50:201 - 跟的Vocal呢 这样的话和后面的音是一样的 所以多加1note

00:50:517 - 00:50:833 - 00:51:149 - 00:51:465 - 强调重音 多加1Note

00:52:412 - Kiai开头外加重音 多加2Notes

01:02:201 - ~ 01:02:833 - 有1/4的 可以考虑一下

01:22:886 - 多加2Notes

01:23:833 (83833|3,83833|2) - 这个不太好 我的建议是在这两个Hold拆成4个Notes.应该懂我的意思吧?

OK.That's all.Good Luck~
突然发现Mod到后面全变成中文了 理由比较好说明lol
Topic Starter
hokin1995

Simple_Star wrote:

hokin君我们又见面了>.>
Column:1 2 3 4
Red Color:Warning or unrankable issue
Green Color:Think it over
[NM]
00:00:623 (623|3) - Move to 3.Add a Note at 4 如果是用双Note表达重音的话要从头到尾贯彻着lol

00:02:044 (2044|2) - Suggest you Delete.之前和这个相同的音都是1/1了..这个就不要突然1/2了毕竟还是NM

00:03:307 (3307|3) - Move to 00:03:465 - 理由是前面两条的综合^

00:07:096 (7096|1) - Delete.

00:08:201 (8201|0) - Move to 3

00:08:359 (8359|1,8517|2) - Move to 1 and 2 并且是相同的时间点

00:24:307 (24307|2,24465|1) - Delete these 2Notes and 00:24:623 - Add a Note at 2

00:28:096 - ~ 00:29:675 - 原来不是少现象
有些地方你用双Notes但是我并不太清楚这里你是表达了些什么 反而在重音的地方只用1Note

00:30:149 - Add a Note 这个应该是失误了 这边突然少了个音

00:39:938 (39938|3) - 渐弱的音 所以Move to 1 所以这边加个Note吧 ←←←←←←←←←←←

00:41:201 (41201|0) - 最后一音是变强的 所以Move to 3..啊 这里用双Note了 怎么前面的没用↑

00:41:517 (41517|0) - 这边这个 虽然有音啦 但是 很奇怪 Remove更好

00:49:254 - 漏音啦 Add a Note at 1

01:08:991 - ~ 01:10:412 - Test play的时候觉得很奇怪 这里建议还是跟鼓点

01:23:991 (83991|3) - 嘤嘤 最后故意来1/2连点的吗 如果不是的话Move to 2

[HD]
00:03:307 (3307|1,3386|2) - 前面1/2连点一直进行中的吧?那么这里也不能放过啦 Ctrl+J

00:08:359 (8359|3,8438|2) - 和^一样 Ctrl+J

00:15:859 (15859|2,16017|2) - 没有音的 Remove

00:15:623 (15623|1) - 如果^Remove了的话 这个Move to 3

00:25:570 - ~ 00:26:201 - 建议还是跟鼓点比较好

00:27:780 - ~ 00:29:044 - 轻重音区分错了 建议这边你再看看

00:43:728 (43728|0,43807|1,43886|0) - 这个注意了啊 之前是NM所以1/4也没关系
这边是1/3而且是00:43:780 - 00:43:886 - 的

00:45:044 - 这个也是1/3 知道要怎么改了吧 MX就不提了 你顺带改掉

[MX]
00:03:465 - ~ 00:05:991 - 因为是MX了所以这个长条Part还是变成纯1/4连打比较好 更加有新意 也增加了难度

00:08:359 - 就像这里就挺好的 而且是1/4+长条连打 就很好

00:15:859 (15859|2,16017|1) - 全部下移一格

00:16:254 (16254|2,16412|1) - Ctrl+J 第一排和第二排的音不一样 他和第三排才一样

00:20:675 - 00:20:754 - 00:20:833 - 在不造成连点的情况下多加1Note.有别的音 MX的话果然要更难点才好lol

00:50:201 - 跟的Vocal呢 这样的话和后面的音是一样的 所以多加1note

00:50:517 - 00:50:833 - 00:51:149 - 00:51:465 - 强调重音 多加1Note

00:52:412 - Kiai开头外加重音 多加2Notes

01:02:201 - ~ 01:02:833 - 有1/4的 可以考虑一下

01:22:886 - 多加2Notes

01:23:833 (83833|3,83833|2) - 这个不太好 我的建议是在这两个Hold拆成4个Notes.应该懂我的意思吧?

OK.That's all.Good Luck~
突然发现Mod到后面全变成中文了 理由比较好说明lol
基本上有九成都是中文呢ww
謝謝你的mod 讓我看到一些我沒留意的地方 :D
Soldsaga KunG
Mania Mod :D

Column : 1|2|3|4

NM
00:50:517 (50517|2) - move to 1
00:59:201 (59201|2) - to 01:00:307 (60307|1) - too Hard for NM ?

HD & MX
Well done :) :)

Good Beatmaps Good Luck :) :)
Topic Starter
hokin1995

Soldsaga KunG wrote:

Mania Mod :D

Column : 1|2|3|4

NM
00:50:517 (50517|2) - move to 1
00:59:201 (59201|2) - to 01:00:307 (60307|1) - too Hard for NM ?

HD & MX
Well done :) :)

Good Beatmaps Good Luck :) :)
Fixed
Thank you for mod ;)
Ichigaki
Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map :)
Called from ♪ ichia7x's [4Mode] Modding Queue ♪


Coloumn edit
1 | 2 | 3 | 4


[General]
  1. The Artist name, well it's not major error probably and it's just my suggestion, but give a space from each other. Now is '花澤香菜&伊藤靜&豊崎愛生', you can seperate it to '花澤香菜 & 伊藤靜 & 豊崎愛生'
  2. There's Title Unicode error...
    ミンナノナマエヲイレテクダサイ(TV Size) if romanized it'll become 'Minna no Namae wo Irete Kudasai(TV Size)', not 'Minna no Namee wo Irete Kudasai(TV Size)'
  3. Remove 'ディーふらぐ!' from tags since it's already on source, and change 'd-frag!' to it's full name, 'D-Fragment!'. You can add the main character as additional
  4. I'll give you a video for this, i'll send it via PM, check it soon
[NM]
  1. 00:00:623 (623|2) - start this from 00:00:307 -
  2. 00:09:465 (9465|3) - remove this, try to follow your last pattern
  3. 00:12:149 (12149|2) - maybe you can remove this if you follow your last pattern
  4. 00:15:307 - change to
  5. 00:24:465 (24465|3) - remove this
  6. 01:20:044 - add note to 4
[HD]
  1. 00:22:096 - add note to one, there's strong beat
  2. 00:22:728 - ^
  3. 00:27:070 & 00:27:228 - add note to make stairs
  4. 00:39:938 - add note to 3
    Well, check again for this diff, sometimes you used double notes for strong beat, and sometimes note, i suggest you to use double notes as if there's a strong beat
[MX]
  1. 00:00:623 (623|0,623|2) - start from 00:00:307 -
  2. 00:00:623 - add a note in 2 / 4
  3. 00:03:701 - add note for pattern
    Usage between double-notes and triple notes here is not balanced, try to balanced it
Topic Starter
hokin1995

ichia7x wrote:

Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map :)
Called from ♪ ichia7x's [4Mode] Modding Queue ♪


Coloumn edit
1 | 2 | 3 | 4


[General]
  1. The Artist name, well it's not major error probably and it's just my suggestion, but give a space from each other. Now is '花澤香菜&伊藤靜&豊崎愛生', you can seperate it to '花澤香菜 & 伊藤靜 & 豊崎愛生'
  2. There's Title Unicode error...
    ミンナノナマエヲイレテクダサイ(TV Size) if romanized it'll become 'Minna no Namae wo Irete Kudasai(TV Size)', not 'Minna no Namee wo Irete Kudasai(TV Size)'
  3. Remove 'ディーふらぐ!' from tags since it's already on source, and change 'd-frag!' to it's full name, 'D-Fragment!'. You can add the main character as additional
  4. I'll give you a video for this, i'll send it via PM, check it soon
[NM]
  1. 00:00:623 (623|2) - start this from 00:00:307 -
  2. 00:09:465 (9465|3) - remove this, try to follow your last pattern
  3. 00:12:149 (12149|2) - maybe you can remove this if you follow your last pattern
  4. 00:15:307 - change to
  5. 00:24:465 (24465|3) - remove this
  6. 01:20:044 - add note to 4
[HD]
  1. 00:22:096 - add note to one, there's strong beat
  2. 00:22:728 - ^
  3. 00:27:070 & 00:27:228 - add note to make stairs
  4. 00:39:938 - add note to 3
    Well, check again for this diff, sometimes you used double notes for strong beat, and sometimes note, i suggest you to use double notes as if there's a strong beat
[MX]
  1. 00:00:623 (623|0,623|2) - start from 00:00:307 -
  2. 00:00:623 - add a note in 2 / 4
  3. 00:03:701 - add note for pattern
    Usage between double-notes and triple notes here is not balanced, try to balanced it
All fixed
Thank you for mod ;) ;) and I will waiting your pm :D
Lunatic Raccoon
Mod from Q
Sorry for EXTREME delay T_T
My Internet sucks these days

General
All Fine!Not related but OMFG Kana Hanazawa \o/
NM
  1. 00:00:307 Long note should start here
  2. 00:05:044 Add a note
  3. 00:14:044 Add note in 2nd coll
  4. 00:14:675 Same
  5. 00:18:465 Add if you follow the vocal
  6. 00:19:096 and 00:19:728 Same
  7. 00:41:991 Too blank... Add a note/notes if you like
  8. 00:51:623 and 00:51:780 Add note
  9. 01:06:307 Make it a double note
  10. 01:12:938 (112938|1) and 01:14:201 (114201|0) LN too short
  11. 01:17:991 (117991|3) and 01:19:254 (119354|0) Let them be LNs
HD
  1. 00:09:149 Add some more http://puu.sh/anAVQ/c871cd181a.jpg
  2. 00:22:412 Add note in 3rd coll
  3. 00:28:728 Add a note
  4. 00:36:623 Add note in 3rd coll and 00:37:096 in 1st coll cuz i see you attached each note to a LN
  5. 01:04:096 Add note in 1st coll
MX
  1. 00:38:833 (38833|3) Since it's an endsound so please unsnap it
  2. 01:08:359 I think it's mute sounds. Unsnap the double note and unsnap the note in 3rd coll in 01:08:517

Good luck with your beatmap!
Topic Starter
hokin1995

huycoihn wrote:

Mod from Q
Sorry for EXTREME delay T_T
My Internet sucks these days

General
All Fine!Not related but OMFG Kana Hanazawa \o/
NM
  1. 00:00:307 Long note should start here
  2. 00:05:044 Add a note
  3. 00:14:044 Add note in 2nd coll
  4. 00:14:675 Same
  5. 00:18:465 Add if you follow the vocal
  6. 00:19:096 and 00:19:728 Same
  7. 00:41:991 Too blank... Add a note/notes if you like
  8. 00:51:623 and 00:51:780 Add note
  9. 01:06:307 Make it a double note
  10. 01:12:938 (112938|1) and 01:14:201 (114201|0) LN too short
  11. 01:17:991 (117991|3) and 01:19:254 (119354|0) Let them be LNs
HD
  1. 00:09:149 Add some more http://puu.sh/anAVQ/c871cd181a.jpg
  2. 00:22:412 Add note in 3rd coll
  3. 00:28:728 Add a note
  4. 00:36:623 Add note in 3rd coll and 00:37:096 in 1st coll cuz i see you attached each note to a LN
  5. 01:04:096 Add note in 1st coll
MX
  1. 00:38:833 (38833|3) Since it's an endsound so please unsnap it
  2. 01:08:359 I think it's mute sounds. Unsnap the double note and unsnap the note in 3rd coll in 01:08:517

Good luck with your beatmap!
Thank you for mod :D
arcwinolivirus
"Arcwinolivirus BAT checking/modding"

Take note that I am focusing on note patterns, comfortability, placements and consistency.
Also, do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod but reason them out with sense.

I will be kind of strict and if I point out something that is quite offensive to your heart of being a mapper, Please do not take it seriously and also... I am not angry or mad or something. baka! >w<

[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• No problem!

Column:
_ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|

[NM]
SPOILER
00:03:465 (3465|2) - remove, 3-noted press. Same strong sound as 00:02:201 (2201|0,2201|1) - which is only 2-noted note press. HD diff doesnt even have 3-noted.

00:05:359 (5359|1) - move to 1 different pitch than 00:05:044 (5044|1) -

00:08:517 (8517|1) - remove. same reason as previous. 3-noted press is too much for this NM.

00:14:201 (14201|0) - what is this LN for? I suggest to change to short note.

00:21:465 (21465|2,21780|0,22412|1,22728|3) - ^

00:56:517 - add note to 2 strong sound.

01:06:623 (66623|2) - move to 4

01:17:991 - add note to 1. strong sound. same as 01:19:254 (79254|0,79254|1) -
[HD]
SPOILER
00:08:359 (8359|2,8438|3) - ctrl j for comfortability.

00:14:675 (14675|3) - remove. same as 00:13:412 (13412|2) -

00:41:201 (41201|3) - change to short note. Since LN is quite inconsistent to its sound.

00:45:149 (45149|2) - remove. Why 3-noted press? no strong sound here. Also if applied,

00:45:044 (45044|3) - move to 3

00:48:780 (48780|2) - move to 4 for balance note spread.

00:57:149 (57149|2) - remove and move the HS to note at column 1. Not strong enough to be 3-noted press which is same as 00:57:465 (57465|2,57465|0)

00:59:517 (59517|3) - change to short note. quite inconsistent.

00:59:675 - add note to 2. bass sound.

01:02:833 - add note to 1 strong start sound.

01:04:570 - add note to 4 hithat.

01:09:623 (69623|0) - change to short note.

01:14:201 (74201|1) - remove and move the HS to LN at column 3. Not strong to be 3-noted.

01:19:254 (79254|0) - remove ^

01:23:991 (83991|3,83991|1,83991|0) - This is acceptable 3-noted notes since the last/final sound is strong.
[MX]
SPOILER
00:00:307 - Suggesting: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2011270
• the 2 first LNs represent the intro effect sounds.
• 00:00:938 - 3-noted notes in that image. which will be the same as 00:02:201 (2201|2,2201|1,2201|3) - with same 3-noted key press.

00:04:096 (4096|1) - remove to avoid the jack. Do not be afraid to remove those 3-noted notes if its for comfortability and consistency. Just like you did at 00:09:149 (9149|3,9149|2) -

00:04:728 (4728|3) - ^ and.. 00:04:649 (4649|2) - move to 4

00:05:359 (5359|0) - remove and.. 00:05:280 (5280|1) - move to 1

00:05:991 (5991|3) - remove. just liek 01:17:991 (77991|0,77991|3) -

00:11:991 - add note to 2. bass sound.

00:14:675 (14675|1) - remove. not strong to be 3-noted.

00:15:307 - add note to 1

00:17:359 (17359|0) - What is this LN for? Suggesting to change to short note and if applied.. 00:17:991 - add note to 1

00:18:544 (18544|0) - move to 3 for hand balance.

00:20:359 - add note to 3. same strong sound as 00:19:254 (19254|1,19254|3,19254|2) -

00:21:465 - add note to 2

00:21:780 (21780|0) - remove.

00:22:096 - add note to 2

00:23:201 (23201|2) - remove. not strong sound. its just a hithat.

00:26:201 (26201|0) - What is this LN for? change to short note and if applied.. 00:26:517 - add note to 1

00:31:254 (31254|3,31570|3) - remove not strong enough to be 3-noted key press. same as 00:33:938 (33938|2,33938|0,34096|1,34096|3) -

00:32:359 (32359|2,32675|0,32833|3) - remove

00:33:307 (33307|0) - remove

00:35:675 (35675|2,35991|3,36307|2,36623|3,36938|2,37096|1,37412|1,37728|3,37886|2) - change all to short note to avoid the abusive LNs. also quite inconsistent in this part.

00:38:201 (38201|1,38517|2) - keep these LNs since its a consistent LN for bass.

00:39:938 (39938|3) - change to short note.

00:41:201 (41201|0) - ^

00:42:623 (42623|1) - I suggest to shorten this LN into single note and rearrange the pattern inside of it afterwards.

00:44:517 (44517|0) - reduce length until 00:45:149 and rearrange 00:45:780 (45780|3,45859|2,45938|3,46017|2,46096|3,46175|2,46254|3,46333|2,46412|3) - so it wont become a trill.

00:46:728 (46728|3) - change to short note.

01:02:201 (62201|0) - same as previous reduce length until 01:02:517 and spread out the drum rolls.

01:05:044 (65044|1,65201|3) - remove. no additional instruments in this part.

01:05:675 (65675|2) - ^

01:07:570 - add note to 4. impact sound.

01:07:886 - add note to 1. ^

01:08:517 (68517|3) - remove.

01:12:938 - add LN to 2 until 01:13:254 just like 01:14:201 (74201|2,74201|1,74201|3,74359|3) -

01:23:675 - add note to 4. just like 01:23:201 (83201|2,83201|1) -
[Overall]
Cheerful song choice! Keep it up >w<)b Good luck :)
Topic Starter
hokin1995

arcwinolivirus wrote:

"Arcwinolivirus BAT checking/modding"

Take note that I am focusing on note patterns, comfortability, placements and consistency.
Also, do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod but reason them out with sense.

I will be kind of strict and if I point out something that is quite offensive to your heart of being a mapper, Please do not take it seriously and also... I am not angry or mad or something. baka! >w<

[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• No problem!

Column:
_ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|

[NM]
SPOILER
00:03:465 (3465|2) - remove, 3-noted press. Same strong sound as 00:02:201 (2201|0,2201|1) - which is only 2-noted note press. HD diff doesnt even have 3-noted.

00:05:359 (5359|1) - move to 1 different pitch than 00:05:044 (5044|1) -

00:08:517 (8517|1) - remove. same reason as previous. 3-noted press is too much for this NM.

00:14:201 (14201|0) - what is this LN for? I suggest to change to short note.

00:21:465 (21465|2,21780|0,22412|1,22728|3) - ^

00:56:517 - add note to 2 strong sound.

01:06:623 (66623|2) - move to 4

01:17:991 - add note to 1. strong sound. same as 01:19:254 (79254|0,79254|1) -
[HD]
SPOILER
00:08:359 (8359|2,8438|3) - ctrl j for comfortability.

00:14:675 (14675|3) - remove. same as 00:13:412 (13412|2) -

00:41:201 (41201|3) - change to short note. Since LN is quite inconsistent to its sound.

00:45:149 (45149|2) - remove. Why 3-noted press? no strong sound here. Also if applied,

00:45:044 (45044|3) - move to 3

00:48:780 (48780|2) - move to 4 for balance note spread.

00:57:149 (57149|2) - remove and move the HS to note at column 1. Not strong enough to be 3-noted press which is same as 00:57:465 (57465|2,57465|0)

00:59:517 (59517|3) - change to short note. quite inconsistent.

00:59:675 - add note to 2. bass sound.

01:02:833 - add note to 1 strong start sound.

01:04:570 - add note to 4 hithat.

01:09:623 (69623|0) - change to short note.

01:14:201 (74201|1) - remove and move the HS to LN at column 3. Not strong to be 3-noted.

01:19:254 (79254|0) - remove ^

01:23:991 (83991|3,83991|1,83991|0) - This is acceptable 3-noted notes since the last/final sound is strong.
[MX]
SPOILER
00:00:307 - Suggesting: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2011270
• the 2 first LNs represent the intro effect sounds.
• 00:00:938 - 3-noted notes in that image. which will be the same as 00:02:201 (2201|2,2201|1,2201|3) - with same 3-noted key press.

00:04:096 (4096|1) - remove to avoid the jack. Do not be afraid to remove those 3-noted notes if its for comfortability and consistency. Just like you did at 00:09:149 (9149|3,9149|2) -

00:04:728 (4728|3) - ^ and.. 00:04:649 (4649|2) - move to 4

00:05:359 (5359|0) - remove and.. 00:05:280 (5280|1) - move to 1

00:05:991 (5991|3) - remove. just liek 01:17:991 (77991|0,77991|3) -

00:11:991 - add note to 2. bass sound.

00:14:675 (14675|1) - remove. not strong to be 3-noted.

00:15:307 - add note to 1

00:17:359 (17359|0) - What is this LN for? Suggesting to change to short note and if applied.. 00:17:991 - add note to 1

00:18:544 (18544|0) - move to 3 for hand balance.

00:20:359 - add note to 3. same strong sound as 00:19:254 (19254|1,19254|3,19254|2) -

00:21:465 - add note to 2

00:21:780 (21780|0) - remove.

00:22:096 - add note to 2

00:23:201 (23201|2) - remove. not strong sound. its just a hithat.

00:26:201 (26201|0) - What is this LN for? change to short note and if applied.. 00:26:517 - add note to 1

00:31:254 (31254|3,31570|3) - remove not strong enough to be 3-noted key press. same as 00:33:938 (33938|2,33938|0,34096|1,34096|3) -

00:32:359 (32359|2,32675|0,32833|3) - remove

00:33:307 (33307|0) - remove

00:35:675 (35675|2,35991|3,36307|2,36623|3,36938|2,37096|1,37412|1,37728|3,37886|2) - change all to short note to avoid the abusive LNs. also quite inconsistent in this part.

00:38:201 (38201|1,38517|2) - keep these LNs since its a consistent LN for bass.

00:39:938 (39938|3) - change to short note.

00:41:201 (41201|0) - ^

00:42:623 (42623|1) - I suggest to shorten this LN into single note and rearrange the pattern inside of it afterwards.

00:44:517 (44517|0) - reduce length until 00:45:149 and rearrange 00:45:780 (45780|3,45859|2,45938|3,46017|2,46096|3,46175|2,46254|3,46333|2,46412|3) - so it wont become a trill.

00:46:728 (46728|3) - change to short note.

01:02:201 (62201|0) - same as previous reduce length until 01:02:517 and spread out the drum rolls.

01:05:044 (65044|1,65201|3) - remove. no additional instruments in this part.

01:05:675 (65675|2) - ^

01:07:570 - add note to 4. impact sound.

01:07:886 - add note to 1. ^

01:08:517 (68517|3) - remove.

01:12:938 - add LN to 2 until 01:13:254 just like 01:14:201 (74201|2,74201|1,74201|3,74359|3) -

01:23:675 - add note to 4. just like 01:23:201 (83201|2,83201|1) -
[Overall]
Cheerful song choice! Keep it up >w<)b Good luck :)
All fixed thank you for mod :D
arcwinolivirus
All seems good to me~! BUBBLED~! Congratulations ^o^
Topic Starter
hokin1995

arcwinolivirus wrote:

All seems good to me~! BUBBLED~! Congratulations ^o^
Thank you so much ;)
Rumia-
according to source i found in the official anime site http://www.d-fragments.net/products/music.html
the title should be
title : ミンナノナマエヲイレテクダサイ TV size ver
romanised title : Minna no Namae o Irete Kudasai TV Size ver

also some issues in
[MX]
00:10:570 - unsanpped green line
00:10:886 - ^
00:41:438 - the sv is a bit too slow i think , maybe to 0.75?
00:43:780 (43780|1,43886|1,44201|1) - doesnt need 2 note imo
00:45:780 - snap green line here , the current speed up is rather confusing because it speed up too early
00:57:149 - if you want to add burst effect , i recommend you to put x1.25 instead , so , remove these lines
00:57:386 - and 00:57:465 -
00:57:701 - snap this line to 00:57:780 -
01:07:254 - fix like previous part
01:12:307 - i think this speed up is not necessary. the slow down works lot better :D

[HD]
hp + 1
also fix sv in this diff if u aplly it on mx
!

great map , call me back
Topic Starter
hokin1995

Rumia- wrote:

according to source i found in the official anime site http://www.d-fragments.net/products/music.html
the title should be
title : ミンナノナマエヲイレテクダサイ TV size ver
romanised title : Minna no Namae o Irete Kudasai TV Size Ver

also some issues in
[MX]
00:10:570 - unsanpped green line
00:10:886 - ^
00:41:438 - the sv is a bit too slow i think , maybe to 0.75?
00:43:780 (43780|1,43886|1,44201|1) - doesnt need 2 note imo
00:45:780 - snap green line here , the current speed up is rather confusing because it speed up too early
00:57:149 - if you want to add burst effect , i recommend you to put x1.25 instead , so , remove these lines
00:57:386 - and 00:57:465 -
00:57:701 - snap this line to 00:57:780 -
01:07:254 - fix like previous part
01:12:307 - i think this speed up is not necessary. the slow down works lot better :D

[HD]
hp + 1
also fix sv in this diff if u aplly it on mx
!

great map , call me back
Thank you rumia ;)
Rumia-
after some discussion in game with hd diff , qualified
Yuji Tokaji
Gratz !!!!
Sky_Demon
好 好 好 好 好意義不明

沒事 恭喜grz :)
Bruce
液少看一张图嗯...虽然我觉得还有点小问题不过也无妨啦

总之恭喜~
Topic Starter
hokin1995

Kazey wrote:

Gratz !!!!
Thanks

Sky_Demon wrote:

好 好 好 好 好意義不明

沒事 恭喜grz :)
謝謝w

Simple_Star wrote:

液少看一张图嗯...虽然我觉得还有点小问题不过也无妨啦

总之恭喜~
是嗎? 那裡有問題@@?
不過謝謝你啦
Ayachi-
恭喜
打醬油打醬油
Topic Starter
hokin1995

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

恭喜
打醬油打醬油
謝謝:D
打醬油打醬油打醬油
送你一支醬油
Evening
I'm so sorry


The offset is wrong here,

938 should be the more correct offset due to the Downbeat being on the wrong tick

https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Music_Theory

Link for reference.
shionelove
[NM]
00:43:728 (43728|1,44991|2) - 1/3
Taiwan-NAK
BEST check ever

hehe
PROGUY

Reason for Disqualification


The following were brought up by KSHR and myself.

[General]
  1. Title and Romanized Title are in conflict with each other. To follow its source, change the "TV Size Ver" in the Romanized Title to "TV size ver".
  2. The correct offset is 938 ms for it being the first downbeat. (Be sure to use AiMod after this fix in case of unsnapped notes.)
Once the issues have been resolved, you'll need to ask BATs to bubble and requalify the mapset once more. However, it is recommended that you get further modding to polish the set further before going for qualification. Good luck.
Topic Starter
hokin1995

lZenxl wrote:

I'm so sorry


The offset is wrong here,

938 should be the more correct offset due to the Downbeat being on the wrong tick

https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Music_Theory

Link for reference.

hutunohito wrote:

[NM]
00:43:728 (43728|1,44991|2) - 1/3

PROGUY wrote:

Reason for Disqualification


The following were brought up by KSHR and myself.

[General]
  1. Title and Romanized Title are in conflict with each other. To follow its source, change the "TV Size Ver" in the Romanized Title to "TV size ver".
  2. The correct offset is 938 ms for it being the first downbeat. (Be sure to use AiMod after this fix in case of unsnapped notes.)
Once the issues have been resolved, you'll need to ask BATs to bubble and requalify the mapset once more. However, it is recommended that you get further modding to polish the set further before going for qualification. Good luck.
Thank you so much :D
all fixed :D
arcwinolivirus
Checked Title and offset fix. Seems good to go again~ REBUBBLED~!
shionelove
go go~
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