hmm, love me some yuuki aoi. this needs to get ranked already
thx for your mod~ and updated!Lanturn wrote:
Hello. Mod/Bubble Check as promised! (also, don't KD this since you gave one to me earlier ) lol I clicked without thinking
[General]
BG: Your BG isn't a proper 4:3 or 16:9 scaling. (960x720 would have been accurate for 4:3. A problem easily spotted on this is your SB in the collab diff. It has some black shown on the sides before it hits the border.
I downscaled from 726 to 720, and then made it 16:9 by adding white borders on the side for the final 1280x720 16:9 dimensions: http://puu.sh/b9myS.jpg
thx a lot for this~
^after taking this, make sure to enable widescreen and readjust the SB for widescreen. I personally find moving the x coord from 505 to 475 fits perfectly! eh I think the current is also fine so not changed
Example:
M,0,14126,42802,505,420
Change to and repeat for the rest.
M,0,14126,42802,475,420
[All Diffs][Normal]
- 01:07:508 - 01:21:626 - 02:18:096 - 02:32:214 - 03:28:685 - 03:42:802 - I would suggest adding a whistle on each point listed. When playing through this I can really notice when you stop using whistles at these points. While it does suit the song, I believe it suits the song better to have this expected whistle on each point. sorry I did the hitsounding like this intentionally, I want to keep them without whistles as the music, especially vocal becomes soft here so I want to show the difference. not changed
- If you apply the above. Consider 01:21:626 - 02:32:214 - 03:42:802 - to reduce their volume down to 60% from 70% because of how similar it is to the first half of the kiai. you are still just right on this point
- 02:55:155 - This whistle section feels slightly loud. Maybe try 50%? hmm I think it's currently fine
One note: A lot of the DS spacings varies a lot in this difficulty. An example is 01:45:890 (4,1) - using 0.88 distance spacing when you are using 0.8 DS. Another big one is 02:54:273 (2) - with quite the distance between the previous/next notes. I highly recommend going through this difficulty very quickly, and adjust any big spacings like mentioned above. should be fine now[Hard]
- 02:00:449 (1) - I would suggest shortening this slider by 1/2 and then adding a circle or 1/2 slider at 02:01:552 - | Reference back at 00:49:861 (1,2) - which is the same part of the song. I kinda wanna keep this because I think the vocal actually ends at different time caomparing thiese two points while I mostly go with the vocal in this diff
- 02:28:023 (4,5) - I find this pattern a little awkard to play since it comes off of a 3/2 slider. One solution is to add a whistle to the tail end of (4) | Do this in all diffs if you put one here. | Another suggestion is to turn these into a 1/2 reverse slider like you did at 01:17:435 (4) - which in my opinion is a needed change. fixed with 1/2 reverse
- 03:15:890 (4) - I think this would be much more suited at x256 y358 for a little bit of symmetry with 03:14:126 (5) - | Another reason is that this starts getting too low on the screen for comfort. changed in different way
As mentioned in normal, the distance spacing in this difficulty is a bit out of place again. Stuff like 02:52:508 (3,4) - could be easily balanced. Please go through this difficulty again and check the DS on each note. should also be fine now[Collab]
- 00:54:935 (1) - I highly suggest removing this timing point, or moving it to 00:55:596 - as there is an SV change in the middle of it (I'm pretty sure this would cause some problems in convert maps, so I would like to see this changed). I believe the best time to start up 1.0 SV is at 00:56:920 - when the kiai starts instead of during the lead-in part. If you do decide to keep the SV in the lead-in part make sure to NC when you apply it. ok I never thought about other modes
- 01:57:582 (2) - Add whistle. This part feels empty without the whistle emphasizing on the vocals here. (collab has a whistle here) fixed
- 02:05:743 - also has the same issue as above. | If you wanted to as well, you can move the SV change of 03:16:332 - to 03:18:096 - even though there isn't any sliders from this until the kiai starts. Consistency though. also for these
- 02:22:508 (4) - Lower this slider a bit since it gets pretty close to the top of the screen. You can easily achieve this by selecting 02:21:626 (1,2,3,4,5) - and moving them all down a little. adjusting for DS on the upcoming note of course. fixed by rotating
- 03:01:993 (3) - I suggest putting an NC here. This is a pretty long combo otherwise. (check collab for reference) I don't really get the necessity here because there're only 2 objects before that in the combo set, changed though
Fycho:asked Fycho and fixed the above two
- 00:58:685 (1) - Try placing this at x256 y186 | It blankets the earlier slider and maintains the equal spacing.
- 03:26:148 (3) - Balance this slider out as it is going from 0.77 to 0.93 and could use some tidying up. | Simply moving this to x390 y308 works pretty well.
Zero:All in all these diffs are great. Call me back when you've gone through the mod!
- 01:25:596 (2,3) - These two sliders really feel like they're seperated by 1/2 spacing, even if I try to remember I forget and always hit it late. It's mostly due to the symmetry, but the sudden start of this new rhythm is also causing it. I think it would be much better to break the pattern you have going and use some 1/4 circles to generate the wanted effect as it'll set the rhythm down for the upcoming notes. | https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1971558 is an example of what you can do. ok if it really make things better, I don't have any problem on that though, as it's pretty consistent with the other similar ones which follow and it's not the first appearance of this rhythm in this diff
- 01:39:273 (1) - Add a whistle to this like you have in both Normal/Hard. ok a lower volume one for consistency
`w`Athena Tennos wrote:
u guys all became to red name!...omg...
2014-09-03 22:49 Fycho: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/492654 Yuuki Aoi - Gyutto Shite Hoshiinda [Normal]]
2014-09-03 22:49 Fycho: 下完了
2014-09-03 22:49 Zero__wind: 嗯
2014-09-03 22:49 Fycho: 00:11:038 (1,1) - 这个是不是太soon啊
2014-09-03 22:50 Fycho: 那边不是说easy 4拍 normal两拍嘛,这就一拍
2014-09-03 22:50 Zero__wind: 是啊按现在的意思好像是都危险
2014-09-03 22:50 Fycho: 我觉得干脆移除转盘比较号
2014-09-03 22:50 Fycho: 直接跟人声
2014-09-03 22:50 Fycho: safe为主
2014-09-03 22:50 Zero__wind: 当时做的时候都是按Easy两拍Normal一拍做的
2014-09-03 22:50 Fycho: 把低难度开头转盘都去掉?
2014-09-03 22:51 Zero__wind: 可以考虑 反正暂时我先放着不动
2014-09-03 22:51 Zero__wind: 其实后面还有转盘……
2014-09-03 22:51 Fycho: 我的意思是 少一个转盘没什么 优先safe啊
2014-09-03 22:51 Zero__wind: ACTION dies
2014-09-03 22:51 Fycho: 你等来看的狗看看他说什么
2014-09-03 22:51 Zero__wind: 嗯 是这个意思
2014-09-03 22:52 Zero__wind: 反正真要改也不麻烦 分分钟的事儿 不掉肉
2014-09-03 22:53 Fycho: 00:57:802 (2) - whistle
2014-09-03 22:54 Zero__wind: 好的
2014-09-03 22:55 Fycho: 01:37:287 (1,2,3,4) - 换个形状?像平行四边形00:40:817 (1,2,3,4) -
2014-09-03 22:55 Fycho: 不然等腰梯形
2014-09-03 22:55 Fycho: 有点强迫症
2014-09-03 22:55 Zero__wind: 完全没想这回事儿……
2014-09-03 22:56 Zero__wind: 123是复制的前面的 4是随便摆的orz
2014-09-03 22:56 Fycho: 好
2014-09-03 22:56 Fycho: 02:04:861 (3) - 这个放到02:04:640 - 来?
2014-09-03 22:56 Fycho: 跟music加whistle
2014-09-03 22:57 Fycho: 跟前面几句一样 并跟第一段kiai前区分开
2014-09-03 22:57 Zero__wind: 也行
2014-09-03 22:57 Zero__wind: 做这里的时候我也想了一下 要不要和前面一样算了
2014-09-03 22:58 Fycho: 前面没那个红线音=。=
2014-09-03 22:58 Fycho: 02:28:023 (1,2) - 交换?红线起的滑条打着憋屈
2014-09-03 22:58 Fycho: 先圈后1/2滑条 这种
2014-09-03 22:58 Zero__wind: 哦明白 打着不舒服么
2014-09-03 22:59 Fycho: 第一个kiai也是啊
2014-09-03 22:59 Zero__wind: 反正有几个类似的地方 我就随便看心情有的时候先circle有的时候先slider的……
2014-09-03 23:00 Fycho: 01:09:273 - whistle?参考01:23:390 -
2014-09-03 23:00 Fycho: 02:19:640 - ^
2014-09-03 23:00 Zero__wind: 好的
2014-09-03 23:00 Fycho: 02:49:861 - 这里,
2014-09-03 23:00 Fycho: 这里开始到03:03:537 -
2014-09-03 23:00 Fycho: 全白线加clap?
2014-09-03 23:00 Fycho: 我觉得跟贴合音乐
2014-09-03 23:01 Zero__wind: 感觉有点吵 算了
2014-09-03 23:01 Fycho: 03:03:979 (1,2,3) - 距离大点?
2014-09-03 23:01 Zero__wind: 我觉得前面每小节前三拍都像底鼓
2014-09-03 23:01 Fycho: 容易读成1/2
2014-09-03 23:02 Zero__wind: 嗯 这个再看看吧 反正暂时就是按ds的
2014-09-03 23:02 Fycho: 03:46:332 (3) - 加个whistle更好啊
2014-09-03 23:02 Fycho: 美丽
2014-09-03 23:03 Zero__wind: 行
2014-09-03 23:03 Zero__wind: 那我其他diff也得加一下了
That is all you needed to do!Zero__wind wrote:
I admit that the gap from the current Normal to Hard is sharp so I will rename the Normal as Easy and add an additional Normal inbetween soon
thank you for your suggestions of courseShiro wrote:
That is all you needed to do! oh glad to see you againZero__wind wrote:
I admit that the gap from the current Normal to Hard is sharp so I will rename the Normal as Easy and add an additional Normal inbetween soon
Regarding Hard:
00:35:302 (6,2) - confusing because the second slider is hidden under the first one. I don't think this would be acceptable in an Insane, let alone in a Hard - you could try to turn (6) around so that it doesn't cover (2) anymore no I actually don't think that 6 would ever totally overlap 2, when you're about to click, 6 has already disappeared. yet I changed this one as it could be easily achieved
00:41:258 (2,1) - same I rotated 1 by a certain degree and it should be better now, I know it's still kinda overlapped, but I think there's no other proper place for it to stay
I see you have made it easier, which is good. I personally (I insist: personally) think this is ok, although there are too many triples to my taste. yes it's a bit much, at the end, because I originally wanted to make the later kiais harder than the former as the song goes stronger (also for Collab) should still be acceptable though
Regarding the Collab:
00:29:126 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this kind of rhythm, which you use a lot, is nowhere to be found in the song. It doesn't exactly fit its calm and quiet nature either. Simpler streams (3 and 5 notes) would fit much better. No, I'd say, definitely. as you may know or not, I've NEVER been a mapper who will cassually throw inexistent streams everywhere. I mapped them like this because I think and I'm really sure that there are keyboard sounds which form rhythms like this. plz really ask some other people if you still think it's wrong, or use a better earphone or anything. you make like this, or not, but as it's in the music, it shouldn't be denied and forbidden.
00:47:435 (3,4,1) - please make these a proper triangle =( okie
01:10:155 (1,2) - this goes against the song - the emphasized beat is 01:10:596 - which is a sliderend in the map. It's the same problem as those 2 and 4-note streams I pointed out earlier same thing (as you said)
01:11:699 (3,4) - super duper mega ultra nazi but they aren't perfectly stacked fixed
01:27:361 (2,3,4,5,6) - This kind of spacing is really confusing, it looks like (2,3) is a 1/2 gap, while it's not. fixed all this kind of spacing in the part
The song repeats itself a lot and so does the map (which is good, in a way), so what I pointed out above applies to a lot of different spots across the whole diff
The main problem with this map is the overuse of 1/4 that are nowhere to be found in the song, whether it be in the Hard or in the Collab.
abused or not, that's something rather subjective, as long as those beats do exisit in the music. like it or not, that's something even more subjective, without the diff spread issue, I hope this whole set is better-rankable now and would NOT be unranked again
don't kd this
谢谢偶像~Sharlo wrote:
一直掉线没法IRC啊orz
[Normal]歌好治愈
- 00:11:038 (1) - 这里你不用抓嘉文问了 嘉文对抓spinner这件时间简直情有独钟
我的图就是因为这样被要求re的 我觉得去掉了也不好 跟Easy一样的结束时间比较好呢 统统美丽- 00:15:449 (3) - 唔这里怎么听都觉得很奇怪 建议是折返一下跟vocal 嘛 因为跟伴奏的 感觉跟vocal的话1/2的节奏会太密
- 00:55:155 (1) - 这边的spinner去掉 在00:56:037 - 加一个1/1的折返滑条 嗯spinner几个都改了
- 01:09:052 (3) - Remove 总觉得01:08:170 - 这里才应该加note呢 偶像书得很对!我一开始做的时候类似的地方都加了note的 然后做完发现2.26星……美丽 只好删了一下降到2.25 不然怕又要被教做人
- 01:42:802 (1) - 这里节奏对不上啊喂……怎么看都很违和
- 01:48:317 (3,4) - 也是十分违和……不介意的话都去掉吧【逃
- 01:49:861 (1) - 也是十分牵强
- 01:57:582 (2) - 考虑1/2来回滑条妈 关系不大
- 02:05:743 (1) - 同上
- 02:19:640 (3) - 同上
- 02:51:405 - 加个圈?
就是BG不萌哭了 求萌bg
thx for your mod~Lanturn wrote:
Normal diff mod coming up. No KD.
[Normal]
I'm a bit worried about the spinners in your Easy/Normal diffs now. with Easy recommending about a 4/1 gap and normal being 2/1 though I'm not sure if this applies to this because it's under 160bpm. (I need to verify with a QAT on this.) I'll leave suggestions on how you can fix these in Normal for now. It might not be an issue though.
- 00:11:038 (1,1) - You might get your head bitten off from this? | Delete 00:13:905 (1) - and you should have enough room after the spinner. Another suggestion is to end the spinner back where Easy ends.
- 00:57:361 (1) - I'm worried about this as well. | Two suggestions. 1) Remove the spinner and map through the spinner. The spinner in the below image started 1/2 after (3)
2) Delete 00:57:361 (1) - | I still recommend using suggestion 1) as it's a bit strange to start a kiai on a spinner end.- 02:05:743 (1) - Same ^
- 03:16:332 (1) - Same thing as above. | If this isn't a problem, then I suggest moving 03:18:537 (1) - closer to the center so it's easier for the player to recover.
Edit: I had an outdated version I was modding at this time. The spinners are fine now. Oops! yeah~ spinners resolved
------- 01:09:052 (3) - / 01:23:170 (3) - / 02:19:640 (3) - / 02:33:758 (3) - / 03:30:228 (3) - / 03:44:347 (3) - All of these circles don't really feel dominant enough to deserve their own circle. If you delete any of these notes and listen to the song, you'll quickly see that they really aren't important and not worth their own circle. Most of the stuff you map slider-heads or circles to are vocals/important sounds in this diff. A slider-end is fine (like in the majority of your other diffs besides a few times) | This is optional but I think they could be changed to implement a slider end or just deleted. changed all these, tough work though
-------- 00:26:037 (2) - Missing whistle on head. added
- 00:27:582 - your hard diff might be missing a whistle here? lol yay
- 00:53:170 (6) - Balance this at x469 y147 | The note touches (1) but is spaced from (5) fixed
- 01:51:405 (2) - Missing whistle (check hard. insane doesn't map to this though, so maybe remove from hard?) removed from Hard actually
- 01:58:685 (4,5) - To maintain your pattern like 00:48:096 (3) - Try using a 3/4 reverse slider here. It actually fits pretty well here even if it's slightly different sounding. not really fitting in here like the former point
- 02:35:302 (2,3) - Control+G? Moving downwards feels more natural here instead of right. changed that part totally
- 03:07:067 (2) - x211 y153 to even up the noticeable distance spacing gap. ok
- 03:15:890 (4) - x334 y297 to make a perfect diamond. done
- 03:40:155 (3) - Try making this a straight slider like 03:41:037 (5) - | The first thing that caught my eyes was the curve from the (3) not really supporting the (4) Try something like this | http://puu.sh/blVOx.jpg ok good
Good luck getting this reranked :3