1. 00:01:920 (1,2) - 虽然影响不大，但还是建议头尾包好
   
2. 00:04:277 (2,3,1) - 不是太美观
   
3. 00:12:205 (1,2,3,4) - 有点省事的感觉。。
   
4. 00:13:920 (1,3) - 3叠到1上
5. 00:16:491 (4) - 这一部分的重音只有这里留在尾部
6. 00:20:777 (1,2,3,4,1) - 不是规则的四边形
7. 00:29:134 - SB闪现转换有点早，建议配合乐音往后挪到00:29:348 -
8. 00:39:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 摆放和节奏需要重考虑
   
9. 00:41:348 (2,3) - 2换成滑条压蓝线，比较好听
   
10. 01:16:277 (4,5,6,7,8) - 形状不是太好看
11. 01:32:777 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1调整到后四个中间
12. 01:54:205 (9,10,11,12,13,1) - 减几个note比较好听
    
13. 02:39:420 - 同样闪现位置往后推半拍
14. 03:02:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - 调整下正五边形比较好看
15. 03:29:348 (1) - ctrl+g
16. 03:32:777 (1,2,3,4) - ↑
    
17. 03:40:277 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这里不适合渐离。。。
    

1. 00:04:062 (4) - 不建议忽略这个1/2音
2. 00:24:205 (3,4,5) - 配合下00:22:491 (1,2) -
3. 00:27:634 (1) - 转盘起始往前半拍
4. 00:39:420 - 同闪现调整
5. 01:12:205 (1) - 这个难度转盘有点短，建议起始在这里
6. 03:24:848 - 加note
7. 03:38:562 (3,4) - 配合下人声
   

Yales

Yales wrote:

Hi,
Sorry, at the end of my mod, I restarted to mod the beginning of the map .
Also, thank you to say what you changed or not (and if possible, why you didn't).

[General]
You should, indeed, reduce the kiai time, chose the key parts. i think it is a key parts of kiai now

[Insane]

1. 00:07:491 (1,2) - The spacing is quite intense for a slow part no? I suggest you to lower it special here ..no fix
2. 00:08:134 (1,2) - ^ ^
3. 00:16:920 (5,6,7) - This triple sounds quite odd to me, I'd rather put the triple on the next slider.-> 00:17:027 (6) -> 00:17:241 - like this: fix
4. 00:51:205 (3,4,5,1) - ^ fix
5. 00:22:491 (1) - The shape doesnt look good you should arrange the blanket. OK
6. 00:23:777 (5) - same here, even if it's just a bit. more blanket with (4) fix
7. 00:24:205 (1) - ^ OK
8. 00:39:634 (1) - 00:40:920 (13) - This is up to you, but my point of view, is: this kind of shape stream plays bad. i think it is fit the song of rhythm.no fix
9. 01:53:348 (1) - ^ ^
10. 00:41:562 - You shouldn't ignore the note here, or at least, arrange the spacing of this note 00:41:777 (3) - not need.i use some jump prominent the rhythm. If i add this note will feel too bored no fix
11. 00:55:920 (1) - 1/1 slider maybe You can't listen that have a piano song here? no fix
12. 01:21:848 (4) - move to x:128 y:320 i move to X:116 Y:324 fix
13. 01:37:277 (3,4,5) - The flow is pretty bad, try something like this maybe http://puu.sh/8jKay.jpg look good fix
14. 01:56:777 (1) - Bad flow, try this http://puu.sh/8jKgC.jpg and you should add a NC on this slider as well. nice flow.but it skip the NC here ..fix
15. 02:27:420 (6) - add a triple add
16. 03:02:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - this star doesn't look like a star. You should redraw fix
17. 03:03:634 (1) - I find the slider quite ugly A simple shape might be better fix
    02:58:491 (1) - ^ and bad flow because of it fix
18. 03:19:705 (2) - I don't like the flow here neither, try this maybe http://puu.sh/8jKEi.jpg i like this no fix
19. 03:40:277 (2,3,4,5,6) - I understand what you wanted to do, but this plays bad though, also I suggest you to put the same spacing quite high if you want to keep the same effect. fix
20. 03:07:384 (4) - remove? fix
21. 01:36:205 (1) - arrange shape? http://puu.sh/8jL56.jpg FIX
22. 02:00:848 (7,4,5,6) - CTRL+H ; Ctrl+J OK
23. 02:04:277 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
24. 02:09:420 (2) - Move to x216 y:216 fix
25. 02:09:848 (4) - ^ ^

Ok, that's pretty much it. I love the song and the map has some good points, but sometimes your flow is destroyed by the shape of your sliders/esthetic. Indeed, you should maybe pay more intention to it, especially because it;s a slow song you can clearly see it .
I didnt't point out everything about this cause I don't want to change your "style" neither. Indeed, I kinda like this "old" style. However, this is an example of the shapes I would make.
From 02:14:348 (2) - - to 02:16:920 (3) - (the last one is the selected note in blue) I lowered the AR for the screen.
I think your "style" maybe good.Also i should keep my "style" too.SO i use some idea in your style. thank
http://puu.sh/8jLM5.jpg

All my sliders here are made this way and I tried to make perfect blanket as you can see here: http://puu.sh/8jM44.jpg or here http://puu.sh/8jLTC.jpg

You can ofc use this pattern if you want to. It was just an example.

So yes, that's it, pretty much.
Good luck ~

thank your mod

1. 00:04:062 (4) - 不建议忽略这个1/2音 --------------> i don't suggest that skip a 1/2
2. 00:24:205 (3,4,5) - 配合下00:22:491 (1,2) - ---------->reference 00:22:491 (1,2) -
3. 00:27:634 (1) - 转盘起始往前半拍 ------------>spinner should be start on 00:27:420 -
4. 00:39:420 - 同闪现调整 ------------>SB change (i fix it)
5. 01:12:205 (1) - 这个难度转盘有点短，建议起始在这里 -----------------> the spinner is too short in this diff
6. 03:24:848 - 加note ----------> add note
7. 03:38:562 (3,4) - 配合下人声 -------------> Please fit the vocal of people
   img

   

wmtokok wrote:

Hinsvar just see this of ids's mod

[Hinsvar's Normal]

1. 00:04:062 (4) - 不建议忽略这个1/2音 --------------> i don't suggest that skip a 1/2 I don't want to make the rhythm more complex to follow the star difficulty rule...
2. 00:24:205 (3,4,5) - 配合下00:22:491 (1,2) - ---------->reference 00:22:491 (1,2) - Sure.
3. 00:27:634 (1) - 转盘起始往前半拍 ------------>spinner should be start on 00:27:420 - I want to follow the cymbal at 00:27:634.
4. 00:39:420 - 同闪现调整 ------------>SB change (i fix it) Okay!
5. 01:12:205 (1) - 这个难度转盘有点短，建议起始在这里 -----------------> the spinner is too short in this diff Eh idk, I feel that this is quite fitting enough in terms of length.
6. 03:24:848 - 加note ----------> add note Started 03:25:062 (5) here instead.
7. 03:38:562 (3,4) - 配合下人声 -------------> Please fit the vocal of people
   img

   
   Since there's a loud instrument sound at 03:38:777, no, as it'll be awkward to leave that empty.

thank Hinsvar

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188,340,118491,6,0,B|240:364|304:328|304:328|328:344|368:352,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,256,120205,2,0,P|28:200|44:132,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,48,121062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,156,121491,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,80,121920,6,0,P|484:172|456:272,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,316,122777,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,280,123205,2,0,P|232:252|228:216,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,123634,2,0,L|384:128,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,52,124920,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,204,125348,6,0,P|72:272|184:296,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,252,126205,2,0,L|252:128,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,60,126848,2,0,P|188:36|148:20,1,60,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,127277,12,4,128777,0:0:0:0:
364,328,129420,6,0,P|424:340|476:316,2,120,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,276,130491,2,0,P|240:268|184:300,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,160,131348,2,0,P|131:119|138:55,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,36,132205,6,0,B|364:56|364:56|432:36,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,112,132848,2,0,P|432:204|468:292,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,352,133920,2,0,P|248:336|172:348,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,176,134777,2,0,B|216:176|252:192|252:192|284:152|352:132,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,160,135634,6,0,P|440:248|408:336,2,180,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,116,137134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,96,137348,2,0,B|204:100|180:136|180:136|132:120,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,292,138205,2,0,P|200:304|256:268,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,132,139062,6,0,L|472:128,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,196,139705,2,0,B|512:272|440:296|440:296|464:308|492:340,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,372,140777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,244,141205,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,132,141634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,256,142062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,368,142491,6,0,P|232:336|136:356,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,200,143562,2,0,P|116:172|132:96,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,24,144205,2,0,L|324:28,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,96,145062,2,0,P|372:152|352:220,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,288,145920,6,0,P|144:296|84:272,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,208,146562,2,0,P|64:120|144:60,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,156,147634,2,0,P|332:216|428:196,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,120,148491,2,0,P|420:188|456:296,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,348,149348,6,0,L|268:360,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,212,150205,2,0,P|216:164|284:124,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,84,151062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,252,151491,2,0,P|448:300|516:332,2,120,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,184,152777,6,0,P|196:180|136:148,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,80,153420,2,0,P|112:164|72:264,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,352,154491,2,0,L|348:344,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,252,155348,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,168,155777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,96,156205,5,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,156420,12,2,157920,0:0:0:0:
104,68,158777,6,0,P|64:180|112:292,1,240,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,171634,12,2,173348,0:0:0:0:
304,284,174205,5,8,0:0:0:0:
376,328,174420,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,272,174634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,104,175062,6,0,P|408:48|352:36,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,68,175705,2,0,P|192:104|116:52,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,212,176777,2,0,P|88:316|192:280,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,178062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,288,178491,6,0,B|420:296|420:296|484:256,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,188,179134,2,0,L|504:52,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,20,179777,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,88,180205,2,0,P|220:100|168:68,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,72,180848,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,156,181062,2,0,P|96:220|68:280,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,360,181920,6,0,P|276:348|337:363,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,324,182563,2,0,P|388:240|424:144,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,36,183634,2,0,P|208:76|120:52,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,204,184705,2,0,L|36:264,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,120,185348,5,2,0:0:0:0:
136,252,185777,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,96,186205,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,232,186634,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,136,187062,6,0,P|476:244|412:352,1,240,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,304,188348,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,140,188777,6,0,P|280:72|372:84,2,180,6|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,292,190491,2,0,L|31:261,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,328,191777,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,268,192205,6,0,P|508:184|468:100,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,80,193062,2,0,B|348:64|272:100|272:100|212:68,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,193920,2,0,P|112:144|120:224,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,324,194777,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,188,195205,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,72,195634,6,0,P|124:104|80:184,1,180,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,324,196705,2,0,P|228:304|288:324,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,328,197348,2,0,P|432:304|492:200,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,228,199062,6,0,L|104:212,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,96,200348,1,10,0:0:0:0:
484,168,200777,2,0,P|512:276|420:360,1,240,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,324,202062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,228,202491,6,0,P|116:168|140:104,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,56,203134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,52,203562,2,0,L|436:40,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,120,204205,2,0,B|300:148|316:196|316:196|300:212|280:240,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,276,204848,2,0,P|132:212|152:128,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,48,205920,6,0,P|356:60|424:144,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,148,207634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,308,208062,2,0,B|232:344|280:284|280:284|336:332|392:272,1,240,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,112,209348,6,0,P|368:80|296:80,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,120,209991,2,0,B|184:144|112:100|112:100|60:120,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,284,211062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,336,211491,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,172,211920,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,284,212348,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,336,212777,6,0,B|276:356|276:356|356:284|356:284|424:304,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,152,214062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,48,214491,1,4,0:0:0:0:
224,156,214920,2,0,L|236:216,2,60,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,88,215777,1,8,0:0:0:0:
20,248,216205,6,0,P|80:304|184:292,2,180,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,80,217920,2,0,B|96:68|96:68|152:96,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,144,218562,2,0,P|248:152|288:144,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,44,219205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,212,219634,6,0,P|332:288|208:256,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,144,220920,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,64,221348,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,221562,12,2,223062,0:0:0:0:

appleeaterx wrote:

Hey, from #modreq

[General]
Still a lot of KIAI - maybe remove the KIAI at 00:56:777 ? OK remove it,i also think KIAI is more

[Hard]
00:05:991 (2) - move up 1 grid for a better blanket fix
01:01:920 (1) - move to x200,y156 fix
01:11:455 - maybe start spinner here for vocals (you can also leave it as it is) not a best here
01:34:491 (1) - move to x68,y224 fix
02:28:705 (3) - move to x348,y168 for spacing no fix
02:28:920 (4) - move to x368,y280 for blanket fix
02:29:134 (5) - move to x460,y212 if you did the 2 above not need
03:01:920 (1,2,3,4) - maybe try this? http://puu.sh/8mWUD.jpg i make other else
03:25:277 (3,4,5,1) - ^ similar to above? i move down some grid

[Insane]
00:02:562 (3) - better blanket? move slider to x328,y328 ( http://puu.sh/8mUBv.jpg ) NO FIX..i would like to keep my DS(1.2x)
00:04:277 (2,3) - move to x320,y100 and x360,y200 for a better spacing and blanket i just change other place of (3),because (2) should be blanket with (00:05:348 (1) - )
01:06:420 (5,6,7) - try this http://puu.sh/8mV0V.jpg not like it sorry ><
01:11:455 - same as hard not a best here
01:21:848 (4) - move to x120,y320 no fix,keep my DS(1.2x)
01:33:848 - add a note? gap feels a bit awkward it is my special rhythm,no fix
01:35:348 (5) - ctrl+g? NO
03:15:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i thought you'd make a star pattern here, maybe let the slider face the other way, and make a star http://puu.sh/8mW06.png that it ok ...but i make other thing from your idea,,thank
03:20:348 (3) - move to x412,y244 for a blanket fix

Nice map! - sorry for my terrible mod, hope it helped!

1. Optional: Add Burst Kiai at 00:15:634 - since it is first Chorus (at start).
   

   15634,-100,4,2,0,55,0,1
   15741,-100,4,2,0,55,0,0

2. 00:56:777 - This is not part of the chorus. Either A) Remove this Kiai or B) Make this a Burst Kiai.
   

   56777,-100,4,2,0,65,0,1
   56884,-100,4,2,0,65,0,0

3. 02:08:777 - I strongly suggest that you remove this kiai (Burst Kiai does not seem to fit).
4. 02:36:205 - Remove this Kiai, there is no emphasis of chorus that would invoke it.
5. Keep the Kiais at 01:13:920 - and 02:55:062 - as these are part of the Main Chorus.

1. 00:07:062 (2) - Move this to x:456, y:189 to stack properly with 00:04:062 (4) -
2. 00:10:277 (6) - I personally prefer using a circle here but your current 1/2 slider also works (it is a bit confusing though, and there is no easy to accompany its difficulty)
3. 00:12:205 (1,2) - Is there any reason why these two objects are so far away from each other and have no flow? If you must, add a circle at 00:13:491 - and change the next slider to make it flow and look nicer.
4. 00:24:205 (3,4) - This pattern is a bit confusing (slider 1/1 circle wait, then 1/1 circle wait 1/2 slider wait). Consider replacing with a 1/1 slider instead to match your previous and next pattern.
5. 01:10:491 (1) - Move to x:162, y:259 to stack with 01:08:777 (1) -. You may also want to consider slightly moving the objects so that the red vertex on 01:10:491 (1) - meets the line of the Y-axis. (Symmetry)
6. 01:35:134 (2,3) - This doesn't look right to me, maybe a different slider pattern?
7. 02:19:705 (2,3) - Slider 2 points in the opposite direction of circle 3. This may be intentional, but it is somewhat confusing and may make the novice player sliderbreak. Given that there is no Easy difficulty in this mapset, I strongly suggest that you change this and make it flow.
8. 02:22:491 (1) - Move to x:320 y:372 to stack with 02:20:777 (3) -
9. 02:23:562 (2,3,4) - Going right then back left feels weird from my perspective. Try Ctrl+H'ing the slider 4 or go for symmetry across the Y-axis here.
10. 03:20:777 (3) - This object goes off the grid quite a bit. Try bring it in more (to help support the people that play with 4:3 resolution).
11. 03:31:062 (3,4,5,6) - This is the only time that you use this pattern in the whole song. I strongly suggest that you change it. Maybe use a 1/1 slider somewhere instead?
12. 03:32:777 (1) - Use a nicer slider like this instead:
    
    

Project Railgun wrote:

hello from #modreqs

[General]

1. Optional: Add Burst Kiai at 00:15:634 - since it is first Chorus (at start). i think 75% of vol. is OK,and this is a main part
   

   15634,-100,4,2,0,55,0,1
   15741,-100,4,2,0,55,0,0

2. 00:56:777 - This is not part of the chorus. Either A) Remove this Kiai or B) Make this a Burst Kiai. For Hinsvar's diff?
   

   56777,-100,4,2,0,65,0,1
   56884,-100,4,2,0,65,0,0

3. 02:08:777 - I strongly suggest that you remove this kiai (Burst Kiai does not seem to fit). Fix...
4. 02:36:205 - Remove this Kiai, there is no emphasis of chorus that would invoke it. ^ fix too
5. Keep the Kiais at 01:13:920 - and 02:55:062 - as these are part of the Main Chorus. i keep on 3 kiai time

Good luck~

AndreasHD wrote:

[General] First of all, I just wanna say that I like the song
I'd rather set the preview point here 01:13:920 because it's chorus. it that OK...no fix
I hope Im not too nazi in my mod.. The major mod has been done, this is a minor one.
By the way, Im not going to mod the StoryBoard in this post.

[Hard]
00:09:205 here you could form the approach circle better. fix
00:10:920 (2) - To place this note under a slider is a little harsh for a fix
'Hard' in my opinion.

00:11:562 (4,1) - Spacing between these two are too much compared to the rest. fix

00:22:062 (4) - Don't new combo here. OK

00:22:491 (6) - New combo. OK

00:29:134 (5) - This is very hard to read for "hardplayers", try to spread out OK
(4) (5) and (6).

00:42:205 (3) - Spacing too small compared to (1) and (2). fix

01:09:205 (2) - New combo. good idea

01:09:634 (1) - New combo here aswell. good idea

01:17:348 (1) - This spcacing is way too much for 'hard'. i agree with you

01:41:134 (5) - Spread out this note. (As mentioned before). fix

02:16:920 (4) - Too much spacing. OK

03:35:777 (4) - Too much spacing. i think player can easy that play on this flow,no fix

[Insane]
I would set the OD (overall difficulty) to 8 instead of 7, because it's Insane, and it's gonna feel better too. fix

00:16:491 (4) - This slider can be better, if you look at the picture, you can see what I mean, try to form it after the approachcircle. fix

Click here

00:19:705 (2) - Just drag it one tick to the right, only if you want a more perfect map, all though, personally I didn't like the flow of those two sliders,but you can keep them. change other flow

00:59:348 (5) - Snap this note to the end of the slider properly. fix

01:17:348 (1) - This slider can feel so much better if you make it more like this: fix

Click here

01:32:348 (5) - Try to not overlap this with (3) fix

01:32:562 (6) - This is not in the center of the starpattern, but if you do what I told you above, "not overlap", then it should work out. Or atleast be better. fix

01:40:062 (3,4,5) - Drag all of these one tick up, because of the spacing between these three: 01:39:634 (1,2,3) - fix other else

02:21:420 (4,5,6) - The spacing of these three notes are extreme compared to
the rest of the map, consider changing the spacing smaller. fix

Pereira006 wrote:

hello hello

[Insane]

Hitsound:

• 
  00:04:277 (2) - Remove whistle in end slider, is don't fit you style hitsound and this music FIX
  00:19:920 (4) - missing add whistle add
  00:52:705 (3,4,5) - this could add all whistle, there higher melody, sense a lot IMO good idea
  03:05:777 (2) - missing add clap in start slider add
  03:32:134 (4) - missing add clap in end slider add

Gameplay:

• 
  01:01:920 (5,1) - change new combo, http://puu.sh/b9osF/07552aca0e.jpg better lot FIX
  01:40:491 (5) - isn't perfect align with 01:41:134 (6,7,8) and 01:40:277 (4) FIX@@
  03:41:134 (6) - inconsistency spacing with 03:40:491 (3,4,5) FIX

stuff cool

[Hard]

Hitsound:

• 
  02:56:777 (1) - missing add whistle in start slider add
  03:23:134 (2) - missing add whistle in end slider add

Gameplay:

• 
  00:42:420 (4) - I see my eye, this place isn't same place with 00:42:848 (6) no fix,because i feel it is same@@

nothing wrong here, look good


this kiai is so weird, I know is guest, but very very weird and is not sense here....
and that hitsound whistle the custom 1 is ruin this diff a lot, example the second kiai part, that lot whistle in tick red I not like and 01:55:920 at 02:08:084 that whisle is not sense...
You gameplay is good, but hitsound need better

Any question ask me
Best good luck

1. 00:07:491 (1,2) - I think spacing is too high here same with 00:08:134 (1,2) -
2. 00:21:634 (5,6) - Prefer to stack so it not too confuse to play
3. 00:27:634 (1,2) - How about this? http://puu.sh/bf4bP/5e8851c9f2.png better cosmetic
4. 00:41:348 (2,3) - Prefer to stack so it not too confuse to play. Hmm.. I think this you style so I will stop modding about this beat spacing after this
5. 00:47:134 (2,3,4) - Should line up for better flow
6. 00:58:062 (4) - For better cosmetic move this to x=256 y=215
7. 01:59:777 (3) - y=320 to line up 01:59:777 (3,5,6,8) - so it will consistent with 02:00:205 (4,7) -
8. 02:09:420 (2,4) - x=208 y=211 for better cosmetic
9. 02:21:848 (7) - Prefer to line up with 02:22:062 (8,9,10,11,1) - so you will get better flow http://puu.sh/bf4C7/967c80cd03.png
10. 03:25:277 (3,1) - Improve curve a bit make it curve same like this http://puu.sh/bf4Ne/4b3586916a.png
11. 03:30:205 - Feel empty add a note here
    I think you can improve in cosmetic for this diff

1. 00:21:634 (3,4,5) - Move to x=322 y=136 for better cosmetic
2. 02:32:134 (4,5) - Spacing here is not consistent with 02:31:705 (2,3) - you should copy-paste 02:31:705 (2,3) -
3. 02:24:205 (1) - Move to x=359 y=212 for better diamond shape here 02:23:562 (3,4,5,1) -
   Not many suggestions for this diff

No_Gu wrote:

from my M4M queue.no bub round

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
00:13:920 (1) - 好像没折返上的音? remove了
00:25:491 (3) - 间距不等 而且这边整个pattern也不是特别好 FIX
00:27:634 (1,2,3,4) - 仔细听听连打不少是加clap的。记得改小点音量 而且我觉得可以3也复制前面直接顺下来 音量改為50%
01:08:777 (1,1,2,1,2,3,1) - 有点乱乱的。。hard不建议这样 FIX
01:21:420 (4,1) - 跟前面overlap。而且感觉1的形状好像没什么意义。。 FIX
02:07:062 (1,1) - Hard最好还是别太近吧 虽然没原则性规定但是这样很容易跪 delete了了(1)
02:09:420 (3,4,5,1) - 等距? OK
02:13:920 (1,2,3,4,5) - 用compose里面的工具重新弄一个吧 FIX
02:18:634 (3,4,1) - 有点微妙啊。。说34一起吧，间距还有点大，说341在一起吧，间距还不等。我觉得要不34放近点然后4到1算一个跳或者341等距 不錯...我選用前者的方法
02:20:777 (1,2,3,4) - 不如第一个slider转3次90° 最后一个用scale缩一下 FIX
02:39:634 - break停这里 這個我看不懂,估計應該是Break在這裹開始吧..FIX
有些地方跳大了点不过BPM比较低应该还可以 我修改了大部分的跳位

[Insane]
00:41:991 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 不放五角星吗 決定改用別的梗
00:51:420 (4,5,1,5,6,1) - 可以叠。。不然误导性太强 FIX
01:58:062 (5,1) - 这个overlap 這個是故意的...可以不改嗎?
03:02:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - 还是用compose里面的工具重新弄一下 FIX
03:09:848 (5,6,7) - 不正啊 這個我嘗試修改一下

整张图都是没什么大问题但是小毛病不少。。跳设计的有种满天乱飞的感觉，很多图形摆的也很随便。跳这东西一个一个mod是mod不过来的。需要自己多看图打图感受才明白。不过第三张图的话这样也很不错了

CelsiusLK wrote:

Hello there from my modding queue

[Insane]

1. 00:07:491 (1,2) - I think spacing is too high here same with 00:08:134 (1,2) - 2.7X>2.5X
2. 00:21:634 (5,6) - Prefer to stack so it not too confuse to play i not think this is too confuse._.
3. 00:27:634 (1,2) - How about this? http://puu.sh/bf4bP/5e8851c9f2.png better cosmetic OK
4. 00:41:348 (2,3) - Prefer to stack so it not too confuse to play. Hmm.. I think this you style so I will stop modding about this beat spacing after this change
5. 00:47:134 (2,3,4) - Should line up for better flow OK
6. 00:58:062 (4) - For better cosmetic move this to x=256 y=215 i move this to x=272 y=212,because i would like to keep on the DS
7. 01:59:777 (3) - y=320 to line up 01:59:777 (3,5,6,8) - so it will consistent with 02:00:205 (4,7) - fix
8. 02:09:420 (2,4) - x=208 y=211 for better cosmetic OK
9. 02:21:848 (7) - Prefer to line up with 02:22:062 (8,9,10,11,1) - so you will get better flow http://puu.sh/bf4C7/967c80cd03.png FIX
10. 03:25:277 (3,1) - Improve curve a bit make it curve same like this http://puu.sh/bf4Ne/4b3586916a.png fix
11. 03:30:205 - Feel empty add a note here fix
    I think you can improve in cosmetic for this diff

[Hard]

1. 00:21:634 (3,4,5) - Move to x=322 y=136 for better cosmetic move to other place
2. 02:32:134 (4,5) - Spacing here is not consistent with 02:31:705 (2,3) - you should copy-paste 02:31:705 (2,3) - OK
3. 02:24:205 (1) - Move to x=359 y=212 for better diamond shape here 02:23:562 (3,4,5,1) - OK
   Not many suggestions for this diff

[Hinsvar's Normal]
Very nice Normal

Overall
Good map but you can improve in cosmetic that's all

Good luck

• update:

1. 1.about the map
2. 2.Break time :159600,170734 > 159634,170734

1. Tag : Remve "senya" because, It is not announced in a formula. ( I know Mayumi Morinaga = senya but... )
2. You should be PreviewTime set "15420" Please check all diff.

1. 00:04:062 (4) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Why do you respond suddenly in Back　Melody? I think more better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
   
2. 00:09:420 (5,6,7) - Same as above.
   
3. 00:15:205 (3) - Remove whistle. whistle does not match the breathing point imo.
4. 00:18:848 - add note? I think same as point 00:17:134 -
5. 00:19:062 (1) - The fact that you don't use any hitsound for that drum that goes every white tick in this section makes me sad, but oh well.
6. 00:52:920 (4) - Distance snap is not indicated. Please check this.
7. 01:08:777 (1) - Is New Combo of this point really necessary? I think not need. Remove New Combo better.
8. 01:13:920 (1) - Too soon after a spinner. It definitely doesn't give players enough recovery.
9. 01:20:562 - Add note. It is necessary for securing of constant rhythm.
10. 01:23:991 - Same as above.
11. 01:26:777 (6) - Do you not make form more neatly? Please think to see Grid.
    
    img

    
12. 01:37:705 - Add note. The reason is the same as other points.
13. 01:38:562 (2,3,4) - Try an arrange like this. I think that more better.
    
14. 02:01:705 - Add note. The reason is the same as other points.
15. 02:09:420 (1) - Too soon after a spinner. It definitely doesn't give players enough recovery.
16. 02:14:777 (4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
17. 02:54:634 (3) - Add "Sampleset : D + Clap.
18. Difficulty is anxious about a thing more than 1.99

1. HP Drain -1 for mapset balance.
2. 00:04:920 (1) - Remove whistle on slider head. There is no sound that whistle sounds in this point.
3. 00:13:920 (1) - It is rhythm not to match music. Try this?
   
4. 00:25:705 (4) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try to move X:292 Y:56
5. 00:42:205 (3,4,5,6,1) - I think that it is considerably difficult in the Hard diff. It is desirable to change one to slider.
6. 00:43:062 - ~ 00:56:562 - Slider velocity multiplier : *0.5. It is hard to play one becoming slow suddenly. Please Remapping *0.75
7. 01:03:420 (4,1) - The flow feels a bit blah. Try an arrange like this.
   
   img

   
8. 01:05:991 (2) - Not fit this rhythm. Change this.
   
9. 01:09:634 (5) - Missed finish on purpose? I think a finish fits better anyhow. (slider head)
10. 01:10:491 - Changed *0.75 The reason is the same as other points.
11. 01:17:134 (4,1) - Why do you use Jump?
12. 01:26:777 (3,4) - Not too fond of the straight flow here. Try an arrange like this.
    
    img

    
13. 01:28:920 (3,4,1) - It is mere suggestion.
    
    img

    
14. 01:33:205 (2,3) - Try " CTRL+G " is more better.
15. 01:36:205 (1,2,3,4) - I feel tight. Please use this cord.
    
    img+code

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16. 01:56:348 (3,4) - Jump does not fit it here.
17. 02:19:062 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Suggestion to clean it more. Please use code. it if you understand
    
    img+img+code

    460,304,139062,5,2,0:0:0:0:
    460,304,139491,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    376,240,139705,2,0,B|296:232|300:280|220:272,1,160
    144,204,140348,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    128,308,140562,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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    144,204,142062,2,0,L|160:168,3,40,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

    
    
18. 02:33:420 (2,3,1) - Do you use the triangle?
    
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19. 02:37:062 (2,3) - It is a very quiet part. You should employ a slider. (add green line and use slider velocity multiplier *0.75 )
    
20. 03:02:134 (2) - Move X:156 Y:248 and 03:02:348 (3) - Move X:236 Y:188 mean a quadrangle.
    
    img

    
21. 03:36:205 - ~ 03:36:205 (1,2) - Slider velocity multiplier : *0.5. It is hard to play one becoming slow suddenly. Please Remapping *0.75

1. 00:02:562 (2) - Add whistle on slider end.
2. 00:04:920 (3) - Remove whistle on slider end. whistle does not match the breathing point imo.
3. 00:10:920 (2) - Remove whistle on slider head. and Add whistle on slider end.
4. 00:16:170 (3) - Remove note. You must not put note in the point where there is not a sound.
5. 00:41:455 - and 00:41:562 - add note.
6. 00:43:062 (1) - Move X:252 Y:36
7. 00:54:205 (3,4,5,6) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
   
8. 00:55:062 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It is hard to read this stream. Try an arrange like this.
   
9. 00:55:920 (1,2) - Add whistle on slider end.
10. 01:01:491 (3,4) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try " CTRL+G " more better flow imo.
11. 01:07:062 (1) - Not too fond of the straight flow here. Try this.
    
    img

    
12. 01:09:312 (6) - Overmapped remove note better.
13. 01:25:062 (3) - Nazi. Please do Mapping more neatly. (Blanket)
    
    img

    
14. 01:34:062 (1) - Remove New Combo and Add New Combo here 01:34:491 (3) -
    
15. 01:40:491 (5) - I kinda want a regular soft whistle here. (slider end)
16. 01:58:062 (5,1) - This slider should be further from the previous slider even if you have placed it there to make a blanket together with "place" sliders.
    
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17. 02:24:098 (2) - Distance Snap is broken. It's hard to read.
18. 02:25:812 (8) - Only in here, why is Distance 1.1? I think should be use "Distance 0.8"
19. 02:56:455 (6) - Move 02:56:670 - here. Please listen to melody.
    
20. 03:00:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Do not fit a melody. Please listen to music well.
    
21. 03:03:205 (5) - I kinda want a regular clap here.
22. 03:13:920 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same as 03:00:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
23. 03:21:098 (4) - Remove note. only this.
24. 03:24:098 - Add note.
25. 03:27:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as 03:00:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -

Satellite wrote:

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.




[General]

1. Tag : Remve "senya" because, It is not announced in a formula. ( I know Mayumi Morinaga = senya but... ) done my diff
2. You should be PreviewTime set "15420" Please check all diff.done my diff

[Hard]

1. HP Drain -1 for mapset balance. OK
2. 00:04:920 (1) - Remove whistle on slider head. There is no sound that whistle sounds in this point. OK
3. 00:13:920 (1) - It is rhythm not to match music. Try this? this rhythm very cool...fix!!!
   
4. 00:25:705 (4) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try to move X:292 Y:56 nice
5. 00:42:205 (3,4,5,6,1) - I think that it is considerably difficult in the Hard diff. It is desirable to change one to slider. change
6. 00:43:062 - ~ 00:56:562 - Slider velocity multiplier : *0.5. It is hard to play one becoming slow suddenly. Please Remapping *0.75 fix
7. 01:03:420 (4,1) - The flow feels a bit blah. Try an arrange like this. cool
   
   img

   
8. 01:05:991 (2) - Not fit this rhythm. Change this. not good...i feel empty of this rhythm,i try to other rhythm
   
9. 01:09:634 (5) - Missed finish on purpose? I think a finish fits better anyhow. (slider head) add
10. 01:10:491 - Changed *0.75 The reason is the same as other points. OK
11. 01:17:134 (4,1) - Why do you use Jump? it is same of 01:24:848 (2) - rhythm,so i would like to jump@@
12. 01:26:777 (3,4) - Not too fond of the straight flow here. Try an arrange like this. nice!!!!!! www
    
    img

    
13. 01:28:920 (3,4,1) - It is mere suggestion. why you can think this nice idea!!! fix now!!
    
    img

    
14. 01:33:205 (2,3) - Try " CTRL+G " is more better. OK
15. 01:36:205 (1,2,3,4) - I feel tight. Please use this cord. OK
    
    img+code

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    480,24,96848,2,0,P|488:64|480:104,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    396,160,97277,2,0,P|428:188|464:200,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

    
16. 01:56:348 (3,4) - Jump does not fit it here. i change it to jump (3) only
17. 02:19:062 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Suggestion to clean it more. Please use code. it if you understand yes...really clean a lot
    
    img+img+code

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    460,304,139491,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    376,240,139705,2,0,B|296:232|300:280|220:272,1,160
    144,204,140348,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    128,308,140562,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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    284,224,141634,2,0,L|252:297,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    144,204,142062,2,0,L|160:168,3,40,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

    
    
18. 02:33:420 (2,3,1) - Do you use the triangle? OK
    
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19. 02:37:062 (2,3) - It is a very quiet part. You should employ a slider. (add green line and use slider velocity multiplier *0.75 ) OK,but i try my rhythm
    
20. 03:02:134 (2) - Move X:156 Y:248 and 03:02:348 (3) - Move X:236 Y:188 mean a quadrangle. fix
    
    img

    
21. 03:36:205 - ~ 03:36:205 (1,2) - Slider velocity multiplier : *0.5. It is hard to play one becoming slow suddenly. Please Remapping *0.75 OK

[Insane]

1. 00:02:562 (2) - Add whistle on slider end. add
2. 00:04:920 (3) - Remove whistle on slider end. whistle does not match the breathing point imo. OK
3. 00:10:920 (2) - Remove whistle on slider head. and Add whistle on slider end. OK
4. 00:16:170 (3) - Remove note. You must not put note in the point where there is not a sound. fix
5. 00:41:455 - and 00:41:562 - add note. add
6. 00:43:062 (1) - Move X:252 Y:36 OK
7. 00:54:205 (3,4,5,6) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. OK
   
8. 00:55:062 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It is hard to read this stream. Try an arrange like this. OK
   
9. 00:55:920 (1,2) - Add whistle on slider end. add
10. 01:01:491 (3,4) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try " CTRL+G " more better flow imo. good flow
11. 01:07:062 (1) - Not too fond of the straight flow here. Try this. nice:D
    
    img

    
12. 01:09:312 (6) - Overmapped remove note better. i make other thing here
13. 01:25:062 (3) - Nazi. Please do Mapping more neatly. (Blanket) OK
    
    img

    
14. 01:34:062 (1) - Remove New Combo and Add New Combo here 01:34:491 (3) - fix
    
15. 01:40:491 (5) - I kinda want a regular soft whistle here. (slider end) OK-0-
16. 01:58:062 (5,1) - This slider should be further from the previous slider even if you have placed it there to make a blanket together with "place" sliders. OK
    
    img

    
17. 02:24:098 (2) - Distance Snap is broken. It's hard to read. fix
18. 02:25:812 (8) - Only in here, why is Distance 1.1? I think should be use "Distance 0.8" fix
19. 02:56:455 (6) - Move 02:56:670 - here. Please listen to melody. good!!!
    
20. 03:00:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Do not fit a melody. Please listen to music well. good rhythm ...fix
    
21. 03:03:205 (5) - I kinda want a regular clap here. add
22. 03:13:920 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same as 03:00:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - OK
23. 03:21:098 (4) - Remove note. only this. OK
24. 03:24:098 - Add note. add
25. 03:27:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as 03:00:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - OK

Nice mapset ! "Hard" and "Insane" diff need more work. Get 2-3 more mods and then call me back again
I'll recheck you are map :3 Good Luck. OK

1. 00:07:062 (2) - Move this to x:456, y:189 to stack properly with 00:04:062 (4) - ...
2. 00:10:277 (6) - I personally prefer using a circle here but your current 1/2 slider also works (it is a bit confusing though, and there is no easy to accompany its difficulty) Sure.
3. 00:12:205 (1,2) - Is there any reason why these two objects are so far away from each other and have no flow? If you must, add a circle at 00:13:491 - and change the next slider to make it flow and look nicer. Fixed.
4. 00:24:205 (3,4) - This pattern is a bit confusing (slider 1/1 circle wait, then 1/1 circle wait 1/2 slider wait). Consider replacing with a 1/1 slider instead to match your previous and next pattern. ^
5. 01:10:491 (1) - Move to x:162, y:259 to stack with 01:08:777 (1) -. You may also want to consider slightly moving the objects so that the red vertex on 01:10:491 (1) - meets the line of the Y-axis. (Symmetry) I'm sure they already stack pretty well.
6. 01:35:134 (2,3) - This doesn't look right to me, maybe a different slider pattern? How can it look wrong?
7. 02:19:705 (2,3) - Slider 2 points in the opposite direction of circle 3. This may be intentional, but it is somewhat confusing and may make the novice player sliderbreak. Given that there is no Easy difficulty in this mapset, I strongly suggest that you change this and make it flow. I'm sure this is fine. Played around a bit with the shape though.
8. 02:22:491 (1) - Move to x:320 y:372 to stack with 02:20:777 (3) - ...Did stuff.
9. 02:23:562 (2,3,4) - Going right then back left feels weird from my perspective. Try Ctrl+H'ing the slider 4 or go for symmetry across the Y-axis here. I'm pretty sure this is fine.
10. 03:20:777 (3) - This object goes off the grid quite a bit. Try bring it in more (to help support the people that play with 4:3 resolution). This won't affect them. It isn't that off.
11. 03:31:062 (3,4,5,6) - This is the only time that you use this pattern in the whole song. I strongly suggest that you change it. Maybe use a 1/1 slider somewhere instead? Then why? It isn't confusing at all.
12. 03:32:777 (1) - Use a nicer slider like this instead:
    
    Refined my current slider.

AndreasHD wrote:

First, you need to change the timing of you'r kiai so it's the same as the other difficulties. I'll leave this to wmtokok.

00:08:777 (1) - New Combo. Done.

01:00:205 (1) - Drag this one tick to the right, just so the spacing get's right. ...I think it's fine here.

01:39:205 (4) - Drag this two tick down, so it get's the right spacing. Fixed.

Pereira006 wrote:

[Hinsvar's Normal]

Hitsound:

• 
  01:01:920 (2) - missing add whistle in end slider There isn't anything to emphasize.
  01:14:562 (2) - ruin me... remove whistle What?
  01:17:348 (1) - in end slider, that whisle ruin me a lot, i don't like Fits the song though.

Gameplay:

• 
  00:08:777 (4) - this could put new combo color right? The lyrics and song is change Yep.
  01:10:491 (1) - (nazi) the end point need grid 1 down to perfect shape in first point Already perfect as is.
  02:24:205 (3) - (nazi) the end point need grid 1 up Okay.

Satellite wrote:

[Hinsvar's Normal]

1. 00:04:062 (4) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Why do you respond suddenly in Back　Melody? I think more better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. Did something similar.
   
2. 00:09:420 (5,6,7) - Same as above. ^
   
3. 00:15:205 (3) - Remove whistle. whistle does not match the breathing point imo. Done.
4. 00:18:848 - add note? I think same as point 00:17:134 - ^
5. 00:19:062 (1) - The fact that you don't use any hitsound for that drum that goes every white tick in this section makes me sad, but oh well. Wait, there is one? I'm sure I'm not hearing any drums.
6. 00:52:920 (4) - Distance snap is not indicated. Please check this. Fixed.
7. 01:08:777 (1) - Is New Combo of this point really necessary? I think not need. Remove New Combo better. ^
8. 01:13:920 (1) - Too soon after a spinner. It definitely doesn't give players enough recovery. ^
9. 01:20:562 - Add note. It is necessary for securing of constant rhythm. ^
10. 01:23:991 - Same as above. ^
11. 01:26:777 (6) - Do you not make form more neatly? Please think to see Grid. ^
    
    img

    
12. 01:37:705 - Add note. The reason is the same as other points. ^
13. 01:38:562 (2,3,4) - Try an arrange like this. I think that more better. ^
    
14. 02:01:705 - Add note. The reason is the same as other points. ^
15. 02:09:420 (1) - Too soon after a spinner. It definitely doesn't give players enough recovery. | I'm very sure a 3/2 beats of gap should be fine and not too soon.
16. 02:14:777 (4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. Where's the link or picture? lol. I think I know what do you want though, so changed.
17. 02:54:634 (3) - Add "Sampleset : D + Clap. Only Drum sampleset without a clap should be fine, I think.
18. Difficulty is anxious about a thing more than 1.99 I still think that this is easy enough though, so no worries.

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 15400
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.6

[Metadata]
Title:Glitter (Starving Trancer Remix)
TitleUnicode:Glitter (Starving Trancer Remix)
Artist:Another Infinity feat. Mayumi Morinaga
ArtistUnicode:Another Infinity feat. 森永真由美
Creator:wmtokok
Version:Hinsvar's Normal
Source:Fairy Tail
Tags:Ending 11 Hinsvar senya
BeatmapID:371493
BeatmapSetID:149424

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"fairytailbg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,29548,38434
2,101548,112148
2,159834,170434
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,128

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Hinsvar wrote:

@wmtokok: Please make the kiai consistent for me, thanks o/ done

1. 1. Remove TAG :senya
2. 2. Preview Time set "15420"
3. 3. Open epilepsy warning

[ Setsuna ] wrote:

Hello! I came from #modreqs
*=Personal Suggestion
**=Should Fix
***=FIX NOW LOL

[Hard]
*00:08:777 (1) - This slider looks weird, not sure if it was meant to be like that. make more good now
*02:22:062 (4) - Put this a little higher, as it doesn't look good like that >.>. i feel look good now ._."
*02:55:062 (1) - No NC Here is a new part of the lyric
**03:34:491 (1,2,3,4) - 1,3,4 Have the same hitsound, while 2 has a different hitsound. Should fix this and make them all the same.... You should remove (1,3,4) of the finish to listen the song.You can feel the song have a "finish" on (1,3,4) . Only (2) can't feel it.

Notes: Not much problems (Again), I like this.

[Insane]
*00:22:062 (6) - I don't know about this, it just feels.... er, out of place. no fix this
**00:28:491 (3,4,5,6) - Weird stream, maybe use slider to stream converter? no fix too...use slider may too easy in insane
**00:41:562 (3) - This is out of place (in contrast to the other two beats before it) But i think this rhythm is best now
**00:42:098 (2) - ^ ^
*00:55:920 (1) - No NC OK
01:25:920 (1,2) - This is not a mod, I just wanted to say this sounds awesome thanks
*01:34:062 (6) - I don't know what to say about this too, as I said earlier it feels "out of place". no fix,because 01:33:848 - i use some pause there...So i would like to keep the fast rhythm that i use a short slider here.
02:36:205 (1,2) - This sounds awesome too! XD

Notes: As a Insane, it's bound to have more problems then the other ones..... BUT it's still fun to play. I like this.

Please give me feedback on my mod!

CoroQuetz wrote:

Add Ryu* and Starving Trancer to tags (the two of them are Another Infinity)~

1. 1. Change all whistle of the application
2. 2 .Some SB change
3. 3. Fix some Nazi thing

UnLock- wrote:

Insane

Set AR to 9 NO fix,because Hard diff is AR7.So hope Insane diff should be AR8
00:07:491 (1) ~ 00:07:705 (2), 00:08:134 (1) ~ 00:08:348 (2) its too far! is close right now...
00:22:277 (7) add New Combo here and delete New Combo 00:22:491 here. NO fix.I add NC of the style is add it on the big white line.
01:54:420 (1) Delete New Combo here and add New Combo 01:54:634 here. its good for reading stream notes. OK

Sellenite wrote:

我觉得这个质量好点，你这个在osu里面声音太沉。给你转了个更清晰的192，不要打我..
如果要用的话offset要重新调一下：

http://puu.sh/bnC0F/6d1bb0646c.mp3

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[General]

1. Fine

[Insane]

1. 00:07:491 (1,2,1,2) - 這裡有可能會誤讀, 因為 00:07:491 (1,2) - 和 00:06:634 (3,1) - 看上去都有一樣的snapping FIX
2. 00:16:705 (4) - x324 y56 , 讓 00:16:277 (3) - 包好 OK
3. 00:17:670 (2,3) - stack on 00:17:348 (1) - 尾 NO FIX,因為我整個INSANE都沒有在滑條尾部用重疊,想保持一致唔用
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:41:348 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 這樣做的話看上去比以前更整潔和更有梗:3 FIX 一點點
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:00:848 (2) - flow有點不自然 OK
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:04:705 (4) - stack on 01:05:134 (1) - 頭 我怕有點難..不過先FIX
7. 01:40:062 (3) - x384 y200 FIX
8. 02:04:920 (6,7) - 放成這樣的話好玩點:3 感覺不錯
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 02:39:634 - add a note here :3 不了...這個我想配合一下SB
10. 03:16:277 (2,3,4,5,6) - 做得更像一個星星吧 :3 OK@@
11. 03:34:491 (1,6) - 現在不好看 OK
    
    SPOILER

    

[Hard]

1. 00:13:920 (1,2) - 有點違和 這裡的背景音樂也不算太大的.. 想不到更好的節奏了
2. 02:39:634 - 跟insane一樣 配合SB TOO

[Normal]

1. Fine

感覺要一個easy EASY就不弄了..因為這不算快歌,太易感覺好容易打到訓著埋

Pururut wrote:

senya :3
随便摸点 懒 其实我不会摸图 拍飞 小P大大怎會打飛:D
因为我很久没打图就没做testplay了,我记得以前打过,不过过了太久忘记了,所以我也不知道什么地方憋手.

[Genenal]
fine

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
00:29:348 (6) - NC? 不打算NC就個,因為沒什麼太特別的音
01:01:920 (1) - 尾巴和 01:00:205 (1) - 头叠好？ 好...
01:06:205 (3) - improve blanket 我感覺blanket得很好了
02:07:062 (1) - 转圈有的疼 NO FIX
03:01:491 (4) - 头和 02:59:777 (4) - 叠好? 好
03:25:920 (1) - 200,328 OK
03:35:777 (4) - 300,92 OK
03:40:277 (2) - improve blanket OK

[Insane]
00:09:420 (2) - mprove blanket OK
00:29:348 (9) - NC? same hard diff
00:26:991 (6) - 288,112 OK
01:15:634 (3) - NC在这？我看你01:17:134 (8,9,1) - 这里又是这样为何前面不一样 說的很好..我NC錯了
02:10:277 (1,2,3) - ^ OK
02:23:991 (1,2,3) - ^ OK
01:40:062 (3) - 384,200 OK
01:41:348 (8) - NC? 不了
02:37:920 (3) - ^ 不了
01:55:062 (6) - 和前面连打一样的间距吧这里变成0.6了 FIX
02:58:491 (1) - 280,284 屁股翘点 ok
02:59:777 (4) - 没叠好 我看是叠好了
03:16:277 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这个五角有点肥 fix
03:27:205 (3) - 没叠好 ok
03:35:777 (7) - 224,288 ok

美丽 祝rank

buhei wrote:

from my queue

[Hard]
the spacing of this Hard diff is really..a bit large
for the part from 00:01:920 - to 00:13:920 - , the spacing is really too large. reduce it, like you did in the part from 00:41:348 - to 00:56:777 -
00:15:205 (3) - a strange shape._. you can use a slowdown straight instead. NO fix
00:51:634 (1) - too curve OK
00:58:491 (1) - what's the meaning of the tiny tail? cut it plz! OK
01:10:491 - 01:11:348 - would you like to add a S whistle (not S1) here? i think finish is best here
01:25:277 (3) - too curve OK
01:29:991 (2) - 02:01:920 (1) - 03:40:277 (2) - ^ NO fix this two
01:35:134 (2) - look better if you put it on 138,3 OK
02:37:920 - please use the S2 finish! OK
03:41:348 (1) - ^ OK

[Insane]
00:27:634 (1,2,3) - don't let them sticked to each other! feel free to put them farther! NO fix
00:39:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - why streams here? i think 00:41:348 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - are enough! OK
00:44:134 (3) - strange NO fix
01:08:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - nice stream will be perfect if you reduce them to 5, like this 02:35:348 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - OK
01:30:741 (6) - delete this note plz._. change to other place
01:53:991 (7) - why slider here? i think notes are better OK
02:06:527 (3,4) - it's to sudden, and hard to read OK
02:35:241 - add a note here and let it and 02:35:134 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - become a stream. the rhythm here is different from 01:08:777 - and 7-note-stream will be better here. feel strange
03:07:598 (5) - delete this and put notes on 03:07:812 - and 03:08:670 - . a long stream from 03:07:705 - to 03:08:777 - must be cool OK
03:28:920 (5,6) - ._. no change ._.
put a stream from 03:35:134 - to 03:36:205 - ? NO
03:41:348 (1) - same as Hard. S2 finish plz. OK

good song

1. New mp3 file
2. New soft-hitclap
3. Offset 1920>2543(+623) [because this a new mp3]
4. SB offset too

1. 00:17:348 (1) - 这样吧，多好看
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:19:491 (2,3,4) - 摆成这样的blanket，现在太散了啊
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:20:348 (6,7) - 试了几次还是ctrl+g比较好，连续逆时针，注意把音效修正
4. 00:58:277 (5,6,1) - 怎么说呢..玩得时候flow不顺的样子，改为这样试试，后面的也要移动一下
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:20:777 (1,2,3,4) - 这段的flow玩的时候十分棘手啊，01:21:420 (3) - 和01:21:848 (4) -都 ctrl +g
6. 01:25:062 (3) - 也是超棘手，ctrl+g
7. 01:30:420 (5,6,7) - 摆成与滑条成弧度的吧，看起来很散
8. 01:34:062 (6) - 换成1/4滑条吧，仔细听下bgm，现在的节奏被打断了
9. 01:41:027 建议加circle，现在是活生生打断节奏啊
10. 01:55:062 (5) - NC
11. 02:06:527 (3,4) - 1/4跳连打啊..摆在滑条旁边吧，太坑了
12. 02:13:277 (4) - 摆成这样
    SPOILER

    
13. 02:31:920 (3,4) - 跳的应该是4，不是3，试试这样
    SPOILER

    
14. 03:25:277 (3) - ctrl+g

Sellenite wrote:

你上面怎么给kd我了...no kd for this post
[Insane]

1. 00:17:348 (1) - 这样吧，多好看 之前FIX了
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:19:491 (2,3,4) - 摆成这样的blanket，现在太散了啊 ^
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:20:348 (6,7) - 试了几次还是ctrl+g比较好，连续逆时针，注意把音效修正 ^
4. 00:58:277 (5,6,1) - 怎么说呢..玩得时候flow不顺的样子，改为这样试试，后面的也要移动一下 OK
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:20:777 (1,2,3,4) - 这段的flow玩的时候十分棘手啊，01:21:420 (3) - 和01:21:848 (4) -都 ctrl +g 我(1)都ctrl +g..不然flow都是有點怪
6. 01:25:062 (3) - 也是超棘手，ctrl+g OK
7. 01:30:420 (5,6,7) - 摆成与滑条成弧度的吧，看起来很散 之前FIX了
8. 01:34:062 (6) - 换成1/4滑条吧，仔细听下bgm，现在的节奏被打断了 不錯!!!
9. 01:41:027 建议加circle，现在是活生生打断节奏啊 感覺怪怪的
10. 01:55:062 (5) - NC OK
11. 02:06:527 (3,4) - 1/4跳连打啊..摆在滑条旁边吧，太坑了 這個應該是我之前不小心動了旁邊的那個滑條..不過之前MOD FIX了..thanks
12. 02:13:277 (4) - 摆成这样 好....
    SPOILER

    
13. 02:31:920 (3,4) - 跳的应该是4，不是3，试试这样 NICE..
    SPOILER

    
14. 03:25:277 (3) - ctrl+g 感覺太難了= =

就这么多吧，其实hard对于我来说是挺好的了，就是insane需要的细节需要修一修。觉得要找一些modding比较有经验的人看一看吧，把insane的小细节都修一修。搞好后找satellite就可以了，他会继续看这图的>///<

希望能帮到你一些，good luck

[ Setsuna ] wrote:

[Hinsvar's Normal]
*00:19:062 (1) - Maybe change this into something else, it's missing the clap hitsound. Shouldn't be that much of a problem.
*00:43:062 (1) - Maybe put a beat on the white tick after this slider. Remapped this part.
**01:11:777 (1) - Make this spinner longer (to the next white tick) ^

Notes: Not much problems (BAT GD OP), I like this.

UnLock- wrote:

Hinsvar's Normal

Set HP to 4 3 should be okay.
01:28:491 (2) delete this circle and add circle 01:28:277 and 01:28:705 I'm focusing on the instruments here.
to
02:30:205 (2) ~ 02:31:491 (4) i think, this placement is better. Remapped this part.

Example

Move 02:30:205 (2) to 02:29:991 and Move 02:31:062 (3) to 02:30:848
Note Placement is for yourself

buhei wrote:

from my queue

[Hinsvar's Normal]
i don't think you should use S claps instead of S1 claps somewhere._. Improved the hitsounding.
plz add sound effects on sliderticks like 01:00:205 (1) - Shouldn't be necessary.
01:06:848 (4) - delete this note since it's too hard and there's no vocal on it. There is an instrument sound though.
02:17:348 - 02:18:205 - may be wrong places for whistle. put them on 02:17:777 - 02:18:634 - This is correct. What are you talking about?
02:27:634 (3,4) - why 3/2 sliders? i think 1/1 slider is much better, like ^ Did stuff here.
02:54:205 (1,2,3) - too hard._. use a slider with reverse instead plz At this BPM this pattern should be okay.
03:41:562 (1) - put the S2 finish on the tail plz Finish is too loud.

osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 15420
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
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BeatDivisor: 4
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TitleUnicode:Glitter (Starving Trancer Remix)
Artist:Another Infinity feat. Mayumi Morinaga
ArtistUnicode:Another Infinity feat. 森永真由美
Creator:wmtokok
Version:Hinsvar's Normal
Source:Fairy Tail
Tags:Ending 11 Hinsvar
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312,120,204205,2,0,B|300:148|316:196|316:196|300:212|280:240,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,276,204848,2,0,P|132:212|152:128,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,48,205920,6,0,P|356:60|424:144,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,148,207634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,308,208062,2,0,B|232:344|280:284|280:284|336:332|392:272,1,240,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,112,209348,6,0,P|368:80|296:80,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,120,209991,2,0,B|184:144|112:100|112:100|60:120,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,284,211062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,336,211491,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,172,211920,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,284,212348,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,336,212777,6,0,B|269:350|269:350|362:294|362:294|434:315,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,156,214062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,51,214491,1,4,0:0:0:0:
224,156,214920,2,0,L|236:216,2,60,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,88,215777,1,8,0:0:0:0:
20,248,216205,6,0,P|80:304|184:292,2,180,6|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,91,217920,2,0,B|143:79|143:79|199:107,2,120,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,254,219205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,324,219634,6,0,P|348:240|316:116,2,240,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,221562,12,2,223062,0:0:0:0:

1. New mp3 file
2. add soft-hitclap3
3. add soft-sliderslide3
4. Offset 1920>2543(+623) [because this a new mp3]
5. SB offset too
6. uptdae all diff

1. I ask offset pro(Guy) says offset +7ms
2. Other issue next recheck =w=

1. This map StarDifficulty 2.03 The lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars. Please check Rule
2. Must be reduce some notes. When it is difficult, please send a chat to me ! XD
3. AR-0.5 or -1 AR5 is not kind to a beginner.
4. 00:04:685 (4) - Remove whistle. and 00:04:900 (5) - Add whistle better. Try this.
5. 00:11:543 (4) - Mmmm... I think not fit melody this slider... Try my suggestion.
   
   
   Placement suggestion img

   
6. 00:53:971 (1) - Let's make cleaner form.
   
   img

   

   164,36,53971,6,0,B|252:8|252:76|340:36,2,180,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

7. 01:03:828 (3) - Missing whistle. Remove whistle. (Please listen "S:C1 whistle wav file)
8. 01:05:971 (3) - Same as above. (slider end)
9. 01:08:328 (2) - ...Slider head remove whistle ? too noisy...
10. 01:15:185 (2) - Same as above. I think too noisy...
11. I do not suggest it afterward, but some consecutive whistle are noisy. Please check default skin (not custom hitsound skin) and Some whistle please remove.
12. 01:34:471 (4) - A little danger rhythm. Please simplify it more. Changed only note better?
    
13. 01:53:971 (1,1) - Note - 1/2gap - Spinner. I think that It is not easy for a beginner. Changed Spinner only or Slider only better. What do you think?
14. 01:54:185 (1,1) - It's fine. But I think should give more rest. for beginner player. Try my suggestion. Don't worry. It's not unrankable.
    
15. 01:58:685 (4) - Remove whistle on slider end. Please listen S:C1 whistle wav... bass drum whistle not fit here...
16. 02:05:971 (1) - Remove whistle on slider head. and Add finish on slider head better?
17. 02:07:900 (1,1) - Too soon after a spinner. It definitely doesn't give players enough recovery. need 750ms Please read this forum.
    
18. 03:00:828 (4) - Move X:288 Y108 and 03:01:471 (5) - Move X:96 Y:72
    
    img

    
19. 03:09:400 - ~ 03:43:685 - Really nice! fun <3
20. Good Normal :3 Sorry too many suggestion ;__; Hope to helpful

1. Some whitle suggestion. all back melody follow. try this =w=
2. 00:12:828 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Please clean it more ! Please use this code ~
   
   img

   
   code

   256,228,12828,6,0,L|256:308,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   196,176,13257,2,0,L|119:200,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   224,100,13685,2,0,L|176:35,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   304,108,14114,2,0,L|351:43,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   324,184,14543,6,0,P|340:192|361:196,2,40,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   224,100,15185,2,0,P|220:80|212:60,2,40,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   168,156,15614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   108,104,15828,2,0,P|88:148|112:216,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:18:399 (2,3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
   
4. 00:42:828 (3,4) - Same as above.
   
5. 00:44:328 (2) - Remove whistle.
6. 00:50:114 (3) - Try an arrange like this.
   
   img

   
7. 00:56:328 (2) - Add whistle.
8. 01:12:614 (2) - Not fit bass drum whistle? I think remove whistle better.
9. 01:56:328 (2) - Add whistle on slider end. and add whistle 01:57:185 (4) - here.
10. 01:58:685 (4) - add whistle. (whistle and clap fine)
11. 02:00:400 (3) - Same as above.
12. 02:02:114 (4,5) - Same as above.
13. 02:03:828 (3,4) - Same as above.
14. 02:04:900 (2) - Add whistle on slider end. and add whistle 02:05:757 (4) - here.
15. 02:07:043 (3) - Add whistle and add whistle on slider end 02:07:257 (4) - here.
16. 02:40:257 - Changed Break time ?
    
    before

    
    after

    
17. 02:54:828 (1) - Overmapped. Please reduce only one. and suggestion.
    
    img

    
18. 03:10:043 (2) - Add whistle on slider head and end.
19. 03:10:900 (4) - Add whistle.
20. 03:11:757 (3) - Add whistle on slider head. and 03:12:185 (4) - add whistle.
21. 03:14:114 (5) - Add whistle on slider end.
22. 03:16:900 (2) - Same as 03:10:043 (2) -
23. 03:17:757 (4) - Add whistle on slider head.
24. 03:18:614 (2) - Add whistle on slider head. and add whistle 03:19:043 (3) - here.
25. 03:19:257 (4) - Add whistle on slider end.
26. 03:20:971 (3) - Add whistle on slider reverse.
27. 03:23:757 (2) - Add whistle on slider head. and add whistle 03:24:185 (3) - here.
28. 03:24:828 (1) - Add whistle on slider head.
29. 03:25:471 (2) - Add whistle on slider head. and add whistle 03:25:900 (3) - here.
30. 03:26:543 (1) - Add whistle on slider head.
31. 03:27:185 (2,5) - Add whistle.
32. 03:30:614 (3) - Add whistle on slider head.
33. 03:31:257 (4) - Same as above.
34. 03:31:685 (1) - Same as above.
35. 03:32:328 (2) - Same as above.
36. When I forget it, please add it >.<

1. 00:05:543 (3) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try an arrange like this~
   
   img

   
2. 00:05:971 (1) - Missing whistle on slider head. please add.
3. 00:07:471 (4) - Same as above. (mean : add whistle)
4. 00:08:971 (3,4,1) - Not much this jump. Try an arrange like this~
   
   img

   

   287,308,8971,2,0,P|296:264|288:220,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   80,172,9400,6,0,P|104:228|212:264,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

5. 00:20:757 (1) - Remove Nc. and Add Nc 00:21:400 (4) - here.
   
6. 00:23:543 (2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
   
7. 00:25:900 (4,5) - Not fit melody.. I think It's much :3
   
8. 00:27:614 (6,7) - The flow feels a bit blah. Try "CTRL+G" I think much flow.
9. 00:41:757 (5) - In this place, there is a problem of the visibility. Please change other pattern.
10. 00:43:257 (5,6,7,8,1) - Crooked Stream. Please more clean it.
    
    img

    
11. 00:44:328 (2) - Same as Hard diff.
12. 00:56:114 (4) - Remove whistle. and add whistle 00:56:328 (5) - here.
13. 01:07:043 (5,7) - Add whistle.
14. 01:12:614 (3) - Same as Hard diff.
15. 01:34:685 (6,7) - Please use DS 1.2. because same as part 01:26:114 (4,5) -
16. 01:38:543 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why is it different from Hard diff ?
17. 02:11:007 (7) - w-what ? lol
18. 02:40:257 - Same as Hard diff.
19. 03:00:828 (1,5) - Add whistle.
20. 03:08:543 (1) - Please check distance snap.
21. 03:10:043 (2,5,7) - Add whistle.
22. 03:11:757 (2,4) - Same as above.
23. 03:14:543 (1,5) - Same as above.
24. 03:16:900 (2,4,6) - Same as above.
25. 03:18:614 (2,3,4) - Same as above.
26. 03:23:757 (3,6) - Same as above.
27. 03:25:471 (2,3) - Same as above.
28. 03:29:543 (5,6) - Why is only this place difficult? Please check other part...
29. 03:30:614 (2) - Add whistle.
30. 03:31:685 (1) - Add whistle on slider head.
31. 03:33:400 (1,3) - Same as above.
32. Sorry some whistle suggestion. Try this =w=

Satellite wrote:

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

Recheck! Don't give Kds this post =w=
1st mod here!

[General]

1. I ask offset pro(Guy) says offset +7ms OK
2. Other issue next recheck =w=

[Hard]

1. Some whitle suggestion. all back melody follow. try this =w= OK
2. 00:12:828 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Please clean it more ! Please use this code ~ GOOD,fix
   
   img

   
   code

   256,228,12828,6,0,L|256:308,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   196,176,13257,2,0,L|119:200,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   224,100,13685,2,0,L|176:35,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   304,108,14114,2,0,L|351:43,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   324,184,14543,6,0,P|340:192|361:196,2,40,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   224,100,15185,2,0,P|220:80|212:60,2,40,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   168,156,15614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   108,104,15828,2,0,P|88:148|112:216,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:18:399 (2,3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. not fix this ...00:18:828 - because i would like use S2(finish).Buti will try other rhythm too.
   
4. 00:42:828 (3,4) - Same as above. OK
   
5. 00:44:328 (2) - Remove whistle. OK
6. 00:50:114 (3) - Try an arrange like this. NICE
   
   img

   
7. 00:56:328 (2) - Add whistle. add
8. 01:12:614 (2) - Not fit bass drum whistle? I think remove whistle better. fix
9. 01:56:328 (2) - Add whistle on slider end. and add whistle 01:57:185 (4) - here. add
10. 01:58:685 (4) - add whistle. (whistle and clap fine) ^
11. 02:00:400 (3) - Same as above. ^
12. 02:02:114 (4,5) - Same as above. ^
13. 02:03:828 (3,4) - Same as above. ^
14. 02:04:900 (2) - Add whistle on slider end. and add whistle 02:05:757 (4) - here. ^
15. 02:07:043 (3) - Add whistle and add whistle on slider end 02:07:257 (4) - here. ^
16. 02:40:257 - Changed Break time ? change
    
    before

    
    after

    
17. 02:54:828 (1) - Overmapped. Please reduce only one. and suggestion. FIX
    
    img

    
18. 03:10:043 (2) - Add whistle on slider head and end. add
19. 03:10:900 (4) - Add whistle. ^
20. 03:11:757 (3) - Add whistle on slider head. and 03:12:185 (4) - add whistle. ^
21. 03:14:114 (5) - Add whistle on slider end. ^
22. 03:16:900 (2) - Same as 03:10:043 (2) - ^
23. 03:17:757 (4) - Add whistle on slider head. ^
24. 03:18:614 (2) - Add whistle on slider head. and add whistle 03:19:043 (3) - here. ^
25. 03:19:257 (4) - Add whistle on slider end. ^
26. 03:20:971 (3) - Add whistle on slider reverse. ^
27. 03:23:757 (2) - Add whistle on slider head. and add whistle 03:24:185 (3) - here. ^
28. 03:24:828 (1) - Add whistle on slider head. ^
29. 03:25:471 (2) - Add whistle on slider head. and add whistle 03:25:900 (3) - here. ^
30. 03:26:543 (1) - Add whistle on slider head. ^
31. 03:27:185 (2,5) - Add whistle. ^
32. 03:30:614 (3) - Add whistle on slider head. ^
33. 03:31:257 (4) - Same as above. ^
34. 03:31:685 (1) - Same as above. ^
35. 03:32:328 (2) - Same as above.
36. When I forget it, please add it >.< OK

nice whistle suggestion


[Insane]

1. 00:05:543 (3) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try an arrange like this~ FIX
   
   img

   
2. 00:05:971 (1) - Missing whistle on slider head. please add. add
3. 00:07:471 (4) - Same as above. (mean : add whistle) add
4. 00:08:971 (3,4,1) - Not much this jump. Try an arrange like this~ OK
   
   img

   

   287,308,8971,2,0,P|296:264|288:220,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   80,172,9400,6,0,P|104:228|212:264,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

5. 00:20:757 (1) - Remove Nc. and Add Nc 00:21:400 (4) - here. change
   
6. 00:23:543 (2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. nice
   
7. 00:25:900 (4,5) - Not fit melody.. I think It's much :3 OK www
   
8. 00:27:614 (6,7) - The flow feels a bit blah. Try "CTRL+G" I think much flow. fix
9. 00:41:757 (5) - In this place, there is a problem of the visibility. Please change other pattern. i try other...
10. 00:43:257 (5,6,7,8,1) - Crooked Stream. Please more clean it. fix
    
    img

    
11. 00:44:328 (2) - Same as Hard diff. remove
12. 00:56:114 (4) - Remove whistle. and add whistle 00:56:328 (5) - here. feel good
13. 01:07:043 (5,7) - Add whistle. OK
14. 01:12:614 (3) - Same as Hard diff. OK
15. 01:34:685 (6,7) - Please use DS 1.2. because same as part 01:26:114 (4,5) - OK
16. 01:38:543 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why is it different from Hard diff ? FIX@@
17. 02:11:007 (7) - w-what ? lol change www
18. 02:40:257 - Same as Hard diff. OK
19. 03:00:828 (1,5) - Add whistle. add
20. 03:08:543 (1) - Please check distance snap. fix
21. 03:10:043 (2,5,7) - Add whistle .^
22. 03:11:757 (2,4) - Same as above. ^
23. 03:14:543 (1,5) - Same as above. ^
24. 03:16:900 (2,4,6) - Same as above. ^
25. 03:18:614 (2,3,4) - Same as above. ^
26. 03:23:757 (3,6) - Same as above. ^
27. 03:25:471 (2,3) - Same as above. ^
28. 03:29:543 (5,6) - Why is only this place difficult? Please check other part... ^
29. 03:30:614 (2) - Add whistle. ^
30. 03:31:685 (1) - Add whistle on slider head. ^
31. 03:33:400 (1,3) - Same as above. ^
32. Sorry some whistle suggestion. Try this =w=

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