Another Infinity feat. Mayumi Morinaga - Glitter (Starving T · forum

Trust

1,238 posts

Joined March 2012

Trust 2014-02-28T03:07:14+00:00

Aw yeah first mod.

Red: Unrankable
Blue: Highly recommended/very questionable
Black: Suggestion

[General]

There are 3 .osb files in your song folder, you should only have one.
The dimensions of your background is 1365x768 which is just a pixel off of the 1366x768 widescreen recommendation. Here is the same background with the proper size:
Background
Make sure Widescreen Support is toggled consistently for each difficulty. It is toggled for Hinsvar's Normal and Hard but not Insane.

[Hinsvar's Normal]

00:26:328 - I really felt the need to release the slider here because of the significant beat and click something on that red tick where the vocal starts. A rhythm like this would feel most intuitive after how 00:22:471 (1,2) played:
Example
00:56:757 - The default soft claps sound really loud for this kiai. I think it would be a nice effect if you lowered volume by 10% for this section since the music feels like it's building up to the next kiai which starts off more powerfully.
01:19:042 (3) - Whistle on the head fits with how you're using and makes sense with the music.
01:19:900 (4) - Adding a whistle on the head to catch that bell sound would be consistent with how one was used for 01:23:328 (4).
01:33:828 (5) - Makes more sense to have this clap on the tail to follow the pattern.
02:31:471 (4) - Spacing inconsistency here, keep at the 1.4x interval
02:34:471 (1) - Removing NC here would be consistent with your combo patterning.
03:01:900 (1,2) - Swapping these two on the timeline would fit the music better imo, also would be consistent with the rhythm you've been following for this section.
03:08:757 (1) - Rotate this slightly so the reverse end isn't slightly touching the head of 03:07:042 (1).
03:20:328 - Add a note here? The gap in the rhythm feels strange because there's no pause or break in the music that justify it. I think a continuous rhythm would feel better here since the beat is actually quite strong as well.

[Hard]
Consider using AR7. I don't really think having the same AR as Insane makes for a good difficulty spread.

00:01:900 - Because the default soft sample-set is being used for this section, I would lower the volume to 40% or so like Hinsvar did so that the sliderslides aren't so noisy for this soft section.
00:13:900 (5) - There should be a NC here for the strong downbeat and pattern change. Also for the same reason mentioned in Insane, the reverse isn't covering a significant beat or sound so it would make more sense to just use two 1/1 sliders.
00:28:900 (4) - Why not just use another 1/4 reverse with 2 repeats? It makes the most sense to have one here because the sound the previous 1/4 sliders play to is the strongest here so it feels a bit strange to suddenly skip drum hits.
00:44:114 (3) - Whistle on the head sounds good and fits the vocal nicely.
01:34:471 (1) - Finish on the head instead of whistle because of the cymbal and compliment to the vocal.
01:37:900 (4) - NC here to fit your pattern.
01:40:900 (4) - Same suggestion as 00:28:900 (4).
01:59:971 (4,1) - The jump between these two is really big and will be uncomfortable for a lot of players. Try and make the jump smaller.
03:22:471 (1) - There should be a clap on the tail of this slider instead of the whistle.
03:41:328 (1) - A whistle on this spinner would fit well like Hinsvar did for his difficulty.

[Insane]

00:01:900 - Same as mentioned for Hard, 40% volume for this section would fit better.
00:05:114 (1) - Remove the whistle, it's not emphasizing any sound in the music. It might be better to have on the head of 00:05:328 (2).
00:05:328 (2) - NC here would fit better with the music because of the strong vocal. Remove NC on 00:05:114 (1) to fix.
00:05:328 (2,3) - You can definitely make a cleaner blanket between these two.
00:08:328 (4) - Remove the whistle on this would be a nice effect since it would differentiate the lower piano sound here.
00:13:900 (1) - This slider isn't reversing to an easily identifiable sound in the music and isn't very fitting. Consider changing to two 1/1 sliders here:
Example
01:02:114 (4) - NC makes sense here because your new combos appear every strong downbeat and this combo covers two of them.
01:02:114 (4,5,6) - I don't really agree with a triplet here. I would delete 01:02:221 (5) and add a circle on 01:02:650 to fit the piano.
01:07:042 (1) - The tail of this slider is going under the life bar, make sure to move it down.
01:13:900 (1) - Remove the whistle on the head. Just a finish here sounds a lot better.
01:19:042 (4) - NC here follows your pattern because of the strong downbeat.
01:19:900 (6,7,8,9,10) - This stream would feel a lot better to play if it lead into the finish on 01:20:757. Try this rhythm:
Example
01:25:471 (3,4) - The spacing here doesn't make sense. There should be more space between notes 1/2 apart and noticeably less for 1/4. I highly recommended moving these sliders closer to 01:25:900 (1) like this:
Example
01:26:757 (2) - The cymbal here is significantly softer than the previous one. I would lower the volume of this finish by 10~20% to fit the music better.
02:21:721 - A note here would be great because there is a triplet sound in the piano.
03:28:900 (7) - This should be moved closer to the previous slider to be properly read as a 1/4 rhythm.
03:41:328 (1) - Same as mentioned for Hard, a whistle would fit well with this spinner.

I absolutely love this song~
Good luck!!

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,783 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2014-02-28T10:50:21+00:00

Trust wrote:
[Hinsvar's Normal]
00:26:328 - I really felt the need to release the slider here because of the significant beat and click something on that red tick where the vocal starts. A rhythm like this would feel most intuitive after how 00:22:471 (1,2) played:
Example
Sure.
00:56:757 - The default soft claps sound really loud for this kiai. I think it would be a nice effect if you lowered volume by 10% for this section since the music feels like it's building up to the next kiai which starts off more powerfully. ^
01:19:042 (3) - Whistle on the head fits with how you're using and makes sense with the music. Whoops, looks like I forgot that. Added.
01:19:900 (4) - Adding a whistle on the head to catch that bell sound would be consistent with how one was used for 01:23:328 (4). ^
01:33:828 (5) - Makes more sense to have this clap on the tail to follow the pattern. ^
02:31:471 (4) - Spacing inconsistency here, keep at the 1.4x interval Oops.
02:34:471 (1) - Removing NC here would be consistent with your combo patterning. Done.
03:01:900 (1,2) - Swapping these two on the timeline would fit the music better imo, also would be consistent with the rhythm you've been following for this section. ^
03:08:757 (1) - Rotate this slightly so the reverse end isn't slightly touching the head of 03:07:042 (1). ^
03:20:328 - Add a note here? The gap in the rhythm feels strange because there's no pause or break in the music that justify it. I think a continuous rhythm would feel better here since the beat is actually quite strong as well. ^

...I should've just said that I fixed everything.

Thanks for the mod, Trust!

:D

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 4 Glitter (Starving Trancer Remix).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 15400
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Glitter (Starving Trancer Remix)
TitleUnicode:Glitter (Starving Trancer Remix)
Artist:Another Infinity feat. Mayumi Morinaga
ArtistUnicode:森永真由美
Creator:wmtokok
Version:Hinsvar's Normal
Source:Fairy Tail
Tags:Ending 11 Hinsvar
BeatmapID:371493
BeatmapSetID:149424

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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92,160,131328,2,0,P|131:119|138:55,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,36,132185,6,0,B|364:56|364:56|432:36,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,112,132828,2,0,P|432:204|468:292,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,352,133900,2,0,P|248:336|172:348,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,176,134757,2,0,B|216:176|244:196|244:196|284:152|352:132,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,160,135614,6,0,P|440:248|408:336,2,180,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,116,137114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,96,137328,2,0,B|204:100|180:136|180:136|132:120,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,292,138185,2,0,P|204:304|260:268,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,132,139042,6,0,L|472:128,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,200,139685,2,0,B|516:276|444:300|444:300|468:312|496:344,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,368,140757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,244,141185,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,132,141614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,256,142042,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,368,142471,6,0,P|232:336|136:356,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,200,143542,2,0,P|116:172|148:96,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,28,144185,2,0,L|328:32,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,100,145042,2,0,P|376:156|356:224,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,288,145900,6,0,P|144:296|84:272,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,208,146542,2,0,P|64:120|144:60,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,156,147614,2,0,P|332:216|428:196,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,120,148471,2,0,P|420:188|456:296,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,348,149328,6,0,L|268:360,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,212,150185,2,0,L|316:200,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,84,151042,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,252,151471,2,0,P|448:300|516:332,2,120,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,184,152757,6,0,P|196:180|136:148,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,80,153400,2,0,P|112:164|72:264,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,352,154471,2,0,L|348:344,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,252,155328,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,168,155757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,96,156185,5,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,156400,12,2,157900,0:0:0:0:
104,68,158757,6,0,P|64:180|112:292,1,240,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,171614,12,2,173328,0:0:0:0:
304,284,174185,5,8,0:0:0:0:
376,328,174400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,272,174614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,104,175042,6,0,P|408:48|352:36,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,68,175685,2,0,P|192:104|116:52,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,212,176757,2,0,P|88:316|204:308,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,152,178042,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,288,178471,6,0,B|420:296|420:296|484:256,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,188,179114,2,0,L|504:52,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,20,179757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,88,180185,2,0,P|220:100|168:68,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,72,180828,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,156,181042,2,0,P|96:220|68:280,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,360,181900,6,0,P|276:348|337:363,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,324,182543,2,0,P|388:240|424:144,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,36,183614,2,0,P|208:76|120:52,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,204,184685,2,0,L|36:264,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,120,185328,5,2,0:0:0:0:
136,252,185757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,96,186185,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,232,186614,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,136,187042,6,0,P|476:244|412:352,1,240,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,304,188328,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,140,188757,6,0,P|280:72|372:84,2,180,6|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,292,190471,2,0,L|28:300,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,364,191757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,288,192185,6,0,P|492:204|452:120,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,88,193042,2,0,B|336:72|260:108|260:108|200:76,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,104,193900,2,0,P|100:152|108:232,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,320,194757,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,188,195185,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,72,195614,6,0,P|124:104|80:184,1,180,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,324,196685,2,0,P|228:304|288:324,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,328,197328,2,0,P|432:304|492:200,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,228,199042,6,0,L|104:212,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,96,200328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,168,200757,2,0,P|512:276|420:360,1,240,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,324,202042,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,228,202471,6,0,P|116:168|140:104,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,56,203114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,52,203542,2,0,L|436:40,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,128,204185,2,0,P|308:192|324:260,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,256,205042,2,0,P|148:192|116:124,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,48,205900,6,0,P|356:60|424:144,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,148,207614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,308,208042,2,0,B|232:344|280:284|280:284|336:332|392:272,1,240,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,112,209328,6,0,P|368:80|296:80,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,120,209971,2,0,B|184:144|112:100|112:100|60:120,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,284,211042,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,336,211471,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,172,211900,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,284,212328,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,336,212757,6,0,B|276:356|276:356|356:284|356:284|424:304,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,152,214042,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,48,214471,1,4,0:0:0:0:
224,156,214900,2,0,L|236:216,2,60,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,88,215757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
20,248,216185,6,0,P|80:304|184:292,2,180,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,80,217900,2,0,B|96:68|96:68|152:96,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,144,218542,2,0,P|248:152|288:144,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,44,219185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,212,219614,6,0,P|332:288|208:256,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,144,220900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,64,221328,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,221542,12,2,223042,0:0:0:0:

wmtokok

490 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

wmtokok 2014-02-28T13:28:51+00:00

Trust wrote:
Aw yeah first mod. thank you mod

Red: Unrankable
Blue: Highly recommended/very questionable
Black: Suggestion

[General]
There are 3 .osb files in your song folder, you should only have one. fix
The dimensions of your background is 1365x768 which is just a pixel off of the 1366x768 widescreen recommendation. Here is the same background with the proper size:
Background
fix good photo
Make sure Widescreen Support is toggled consistently for each difficulty. It is toggled for Hinsvar's Normal and Hard but not Insane. fix
[Hard]
Consider using AR7. I don't really think having the same AR as Insane makes for a good difficulty spread. fix [/list]
00:01:900 - Because the default soft sample-set is being used for this section, I would lower the volume to 40% or so like Hinsvar did so that the sliderslides aren't so noisy for this soft section. fix
[*]00:13:900 (5) - There should be a NC here for the strong downbeat and pattern change. Also for the same reason mentioned in Insane, the reverse isn't covering a significant beat or sound so it would make more sense to just use two 1/1 sliders. fix [/list]
[*]00:28:900 (4) - Why not just use another 1/4 reverse with 2 repeats? It makes the most sense to have one here because the sound the previous 1/4 sliders play to is the strongest here so it feels a bit strange to suddenly skip drum hits. fix [/list]
[*]00:44:114 (3) - Whistle on the head sounds good and fits the vocal nicely. nice [/list]
[*]01:34:471 (1) - Finish on the head instead of whistle because of the cymbal and compliment to the vocal. fix
[*]01:37:900 (4) - NC here to fit your pattern. fix
[*]01:40:900 (4) - Same suggestion as 00:28:900 (4). fix
[*]01:59:971 (4,1) - The jump between these two is really big and will be uncomfortable for a lot of players. Try and make the jump smaller. fix
[*]03:22:471 (1) - There should be a clap on the tail of this slider instead of the whistle. nice i can't see this
[*]03:41:328 (1) - A whistle on this spinner would fit well like Hinsvar did for his difficulty. fix
hard all fix

[Insane]
00:01:900 - Same as mentioned for Hard, 40% volume for this section would fit better. fix
00:05:114 (1) - Remove the whistle, it's not emphasizing any sound in the music. It might be better to have on the head of 00:05:328 (2). fix
00:05:328 (2) - NC here would fit better with the music because of the strong vocal. Remove NC on 00:05:114 (1) to fix. fix
00:05:328 (2,3) - You can definitely make a cleaner blanket between these two. fix a lot
00:08:328 (4) - Remove the whistle on this would be a nice effect since it would differentiate the lower piano sound here. fix
00:13:900 (1) - This slider isn't reversing to an easily identifiable sound in the music and isn't very fitting. Consider changing to two 1/1 sliders here: fix,i also thank it is too easy
Example
01:02:114 (4) - NC makes sense here because your new combos appear every strong downbeat and this combo covers two of them. fix
01:02:114 (4,5,6) - I don't really agree with a triplet here. I would delete 01:02:221 (5) and add a circle on 01:02:650 to fit the piano. fix,like this
01:07:042 (1) - The tail of this slider is going under the life bar, make sure to move it down. fix[/color]
01:13:900 (1) - Remove the whistle on the head. Just a finish here sounds a lot better. i thank add whistle is more fit,no fix
01:19:042 (4) - NC here follows your pattern because of the strong downbeat.
01:19:900 (6,7,8,9,10) - This stream would feel a lot better to play if it lead into the finish on 01:20:757. Try this rhythm:
sorry,i thank my stream is fit
Example
01:25:471 (3,4) - The spacing here doesn't make sense. There should be more space between notes 1/2 apart and noticeably less for 1/4. I highly recommended moving these sliders closer to 01:25:900 (1) like this:
fix
Example
01:26:757 (2) - The cymbal here is significantly softer than the previous one. I would lower the volume of this finish by 10~20% to fit the music better. fix
02:21:721 - A note here would be great because there is a triplet sound in the piano. fix,good stream
03:28:900 (7) - This should be moved closer to the previous slider to be properly read as a 1/4 rhythm.
03:41:328 (1) - Same as mentioned for Hard, a whistle would fit well with this spinner.[/color] fix
I absolutely love this song~
Good luck!!

Trust's thank very much

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-03-05T16:48:32+00:00

From my queue of M4M

Grey——Just some complaints.
Black——My personal suggestions.
Bold——Highly recommended.
Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you'd better fix it.

[General]

None

[Hinsvar's Normal]

Although the star rating system is changing now, but you can also make it easier?
00:15:614 - add valume to about 55% here?
00:27:828 (1) - begin at 00:27:614 - ?
——
Fine.

[Hard]

blanket都拉的太丑了，仔细拉下啊，00:18:614 (3,1) - 像这种……给人看到的第一眼印象分就拉低了
00:20:757 (1,2,4,5) - 这里我建议还是用回1/1滑条
00:43:042 - 推荐减速
01:10:471 (9) - NC
01:16:257 (2,3,4) - 可能你是想摆跳但是这里摆的的确很有问题，建议是3,4还是按ds，4和后面的1摆一个跳，打起来更舒服
03:36:185 - 推荐减速
——
节奏和音效没有什么问题，排列还是太粗糙，对空间的利用还不如normal

[Insane]

00:08:114 (3) - NC
00:27:614 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 像这里的1/2单点可以摆的再有趣一点
00:43:042 - 推荐减速
00:47:542 (3,4,1) - 这个的flow不好，打着不舒服
00:49:900 (5) - NC
00:55:900 (9) - 音乐虽然很轻不过我听到的钢琴音还是在1/2上而不在3/4上的
01:12:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里明显不是1/4
01:58:042 (5) - whistle
02:00:185 (4) - NC
02:01:471 (1,2) - whistle
02:03:400 (6) - ^ （这里钢琴音配点whistle啊，全是24clap听着太没意思，建议是再去找一个自定义音效的whistle用）
02:08:328 (4) - 挺明显的finish吧
02:34:471 - 这里一段我就觉得挺适合放连打
02:37:900 (3) - 去掉finish
02:54:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ‪节奏不对 http://puu.sh/7jVBC.jpg
03:05:114 (5,1,2) - ……
03:08:650 - add a note
03:19:685 (2,3) - blanket......
03:36:185 - 推荐减速
——
我话糙理不糙，排列太粗糙不够用心是你这个图目前的最大问题，正五角星，四方跳，blanket摆不好，给modder的第一印象就很差，觉得这个mapper没有用心在作图。好好地仔细地修一下图的美观程度吧。

Good luck.

wmtokok

490 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

wmtokok 2014-03-06T14:52:56+00:00

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

From my queue of M4M

Grey——Just some complaints.
Black——My personal suggestions.
Bold——Highly recommended.
Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you'd better fix it.

[Hard]
blanket都拉的太丑了，仔细拉下啊，00:18:614 (3,1) - 像这种……给人看到的第一眼印象分就拉低了拉好了
00:20:757 (1,2,4,5) - 这里我建议还是用回1/1滑条我用了1/2
00:43:042 - 推荐减速 FIX
01:10:471 (9) - NC FIX
01:16:257 (2,3,4) - 可能你是想摆跳但是这里摆的的确很有问题，建议是3,4还是按ds，4和后面的1摆一个跳，打起来更舒服不錯
03:36:185 - 推荐减速 FIX
——
节奏和音效没有什么问题，排列还是太粗糙，对空间的利用还不如normal

[Insane]
00:08:114 (3) - NC FIX
00:27:614 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 像这里的1/2单点可以摆的再有趣一点 FIX
00:43:042 - 推荐减速 FIX
00:47:542 (3,4,1) - 这个的flow不好，打着不舒服因為减速的關係,大部分remap了
00:49:900 (5) - NC ^
00:55:900 (9) - 音乐虽然很轻不过我听到的钢琴音还是在1/2上而不在3/4上的這個都能發現._. fix
01:12:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里明显不是1/4 馬上改回spinner
01:58:042 (5) - whistle
02:00:185 (4) - NC
02:01:471 (1,2) - whistle
02:03:400 (6) - ^ （这里钢琴音配点whistle啊，全是24clap听着太没意思，建议是再去找一个自定义音效的whistle用）沒問題...fix
02:08:328 (4) - 挺明显的finish吧這個我應該放錯了...fix
02:34:471 - 这里一段我就觉得挺适合放连打放了2串連打
02:37:900 (3) - 去掉finish 感覺去掉的話,音效有點靜...NO FIX
02:54:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ‪节奏不对 http://puu.sh/7jVBC.jpg 節奏不錯.FIX
03:05:114 (5,1,2) - …… 應該是包不好? FIX
03:08:650 - add a note 不加...反而我把 03:07:792 - delet
03:19:685 (2,3) - blanket...... fix
03:36:185 - 推荐减速 fix
——
我话糙理不糙，排列太粗糙不够用心是你这个图目前的最大问题，正五角星，四方跳，blanket摆不好，给modder的第一印象就很差，觉得这个mapper没有用心在作图。好好地仔细地修一下图的美观程度吧。

Good luck.

排列地方我會加緊努力...
THANK [Minakami Yuki]

I will update when i find a new sound later.

wmtokok

490 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

wmtokok 2014-03-07T11:29:39+00:00

update on 2014/3/7 19:28

about:
1.new sound

plz re download of the map

thank

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

P o M u T a 2014-03-10T06:02:28+00:00

Hi. m4m

[General]

try add tag 'ed' and 'senya'

[Hinsvar's Normal]

this map 3.24 lol.. good luck keep star late xD..
00:08:757 (4,5) - not fit sound imo. try this. more good sound and good slider tick.
SPOILER
00:40:257 (2) - add whistle slider head. bit calm and weird imo.
01:01:900 (2) - add whistle slider end. instead, 01:03:185 (3) - remove whistle.
01:10:471 (1) - move (x:158 y:259) or middle point (x:256 y:192) is beautiful seems imo
SPOILER
01:35:114 (2,3,1) - why use spacing change? (1.50) i don't under stand.
01:38:971 (3,4) - ^
01:58:042 (4) - maybe forget clap slider head.
02:07:257 (1) - add finish.
03:11:757 (3) - add clap.
03:20:328 (2) - ^

[Hard]

soft-sliderslide2.wav add better your diff. so, sounds more good.
00:08:757 (1) - this slider seems weird. i think not need red point. also, try more beautiful blanket (2).
00:28:900 (4,5) - remove (5) and, try this rhythm, more fit song.
SPOILER
00:41:328 (1) - this is hard diff. bit far spacing imo. try reduce DS.
00:56:757 (1) - add finish slider head. I can hear catch symbals.
01:05:971 (2) - add whistle slider head. your pettern.
01:11:328 (1) - why add newcombo?
01:37:257 (3) - add clap slider end.
01:40:900 (4,5) - same as above 00:28:900 (4,5) - .
02:00:185 (1) - add clap slider end.
02:03:185 (3) - ^
02:16:900 (5) - ^ slider head.
02:51:614 (1) - add finish.
02:56:757 (1) - add clap slider head.
03:10:900 (3) - add clap.
03:21:614 (2,3,4,5) - hard play imo... try reduce ds.
03:30:614 (4) - add clap.
03:31:042 (1,3) - add clap slider end.

[Insane]

00:04:257 (5) - add whistle slider end.
00:24:828 (2) - this overlaps i don't like..

good luck
my map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/70945

wmtokok

490 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

wmtokok 2014-03-10T11:39:44+00:00

P o M u T a wrote:
Hi. m4m

[General]
try add tag 'ed' and 'senya' 'ed' not need ,'senya' i would ask other modder to add
[Hard]
soft-sliderslide2.wav add better your diff. so, sounds more good. add it
00:08:757 (1) - this slider seems weird. i think not need red point. also, try more beautiful blanket (2). only fix blanket (2)
00:28:900 (4,5) - remove (5) and, try this rhythm, more fit song.
SPOILER
sorry...i like this rhythm
00:41:328 (1) - this is hard diff. bit far spacing imo. try reduce DS. fix
00:56:757 (1) - add finish slider head. I can hear catch symbals. fix
01:05:971 (2) - add whistle slider head. your pettern. yes
01:11:328 (1) - why add newcombo? because the song a waiting long time
01:37:257 (3) - add clap slider end. fix
01:40:900 (4,5) - same as above 00:28:900 (4,5) - . ^
02:00:185 (1) - add clap slider end. fix
02:03:185 (3) - ^ fix
02:16:900 (5) - ^ slider head. fix
02:51:614 (1) - add finish. i like this
02:56:757 (1) - add clap slider head. fix
03:10:900 (3) - add clap. fix
03:21:614 (2,3,4,5) - hard play imo... try reduce ds. fix
03:30:614 (4) - add clap. fix
03:31:042 (1,3) - add clap slider end. fix
[Insane]
00:04:257 (5) - add whistle slider end. done
00:24:828 (2) - this overlaps i don't like.. fix
good luck
my map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/70945

thank P o M u T a

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,783 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2014-03-11T00:54:49+00:00

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:
[Hinsvar's Normal]

Although the star rating system is changing now, but you can also make it easier? This should be sufficiently easy, IMO. Also, I'm not quite sure about how will the star rating rule changes after the calculation change, so uh...
00:15:614 - add valume to about 55% here? Sure.
00:27:828 (1) - begin at 00:27:614 - ? ^
——
Fine.

I fixed everything from P o m u T a's mod except for 01:01:900 (2) since there is a stronger piano at 01:03:185, and the suggestion after it because I think the current position is quite fine already.

Thanks for the mod!

Haha.

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 4 Glitter (Starving Trancer Remix).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 15400
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Glitter (Starving Trancer Remix)
TitleUnicode:Glitter (Starving Trancer Remix)
Artist:Another Infinity feat. Mayumi Morinaga
ArtistUnicode:森永真由美
Creator:wmtokok
Version:Hinsvar's Normal
Source:Fairy Tail
Tags:Ending 11 Hinsvar
BeatmapID:371493
BeatmapSetID:149424

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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392,348,149328,6,0,L|268:360,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,212,150185,2,0,L|316:200,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,84,151042,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,252,151471,2,0,P|448:300|516:332,2,120,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,184,152757,6,0,P|196:180|136:148,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,80,153400,2,0,P|112:164|72:264,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,352,154471,2,0,L|348:344,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,252,155328,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,168,155757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,96,156185,5,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,156400,12,2,157900,0:0:0:0:
104,68,158757,6,0,P|64:180|112:292,1,240,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,171614,12,2,173328,0:0:0:0:
304,284,174185,5,8,0:0:0:0:
376,328,174400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,272,174614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,104,175042,6,0,P|408:48|352:36,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,68,175685,2,0,P|192:104|116:52,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,212,176757,2,0,P|88:316|204:308,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,152,178042,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,288,178471,6,0,B|420:296|420:296|484:256,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,188,179114,2,0,L|504:52,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,20,179757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,88,180185,2,0,P|220:100|168:68,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,72,180828,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,156,181042,2,0,P|96:220|68:280,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,360,181900,6,0,P|276:348|337:363,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,324,182543,2,0,P|388:240|424:144,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,36,183614,2,0,P|208:76|120:52,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,204,184685,2,0,L|36:264,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,120,185328,5,2,0:0:0:0:
136,252,185757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,96,186185,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,232,186614,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,136,187042,6,0,P|476:244|412:352,1,240,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,304,188328,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,140,188757,6,0,P|280:72|372:84,2,180,6|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,292,190471,2,0,L|28:300,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,364,191757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,288,192185,6,0,P|492:204|452:120,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,88,193042,2,0,B|336:72|260:108|260:108|200:76,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,104,193900,2,0,P|100:152|108:232,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,320,194757,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,188,195185,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,72,195614,6,0,P|124:104|80:184,1,180,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,324,196685,2,0,P|228:304|288:324,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,328,197328,2,0,P|432:304|492:200,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,228,199042,6,0,L|104:212,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,96,200328,1,10,0:0:0:0:
484,168,200757,2,0,P|512:276|420:360,1,240,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,324,202042,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,228,202471,6,0,P|116:168|140:104,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,56,203114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,52,203542,2,0,L|436:40,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,128,204185,2,0,P|308:192|324:260,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,256,205042,2,0,P|148:192|116:124,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,48,205900,6,0,P|356:60|424:144,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,148,207614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,308,208042,2,0,B|232:344|280:284|280:284|336:332|392:272,1,240,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,112,209328,6,0,P|368:80|296:80,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,120,209971,2,0,B|184:144|112:100|112:100|60:120,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,284,211042,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,336,211471,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,172,211900,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,284,212328,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,336,212757,6,0,B|276:356|276:356|356:284|356:284|424:304,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,152,214042,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,48,214471,1,4,0:0:0:0:
224,156,214900,2,0,L|236:216,2,60,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,88,215757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
20,248,216185,6,0,P|80:304|184:292,2,180,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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216,144,218542,2,0,P|248:152|288:144,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,44,219185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,212,219614,6,0,P|332:288|208:256,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,144,220900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,64,221328,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,221542,12,2,223042,0:0:0:0:

Mizukashii

161 posts

Joined September 2013

Mizukashii 2014-03-20T04:57:06+00:00

here's a New BG if you want (suggestion)

i can find more if you want

BG

wmtokok

490 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

wmtokok 2014-03-20T05:22:10+00:00

Mizukashii wrote:
here's a New BG if you want (suggestion)

i can find more if you want

BG

thank...
but i don't need a new BG
when i need BG that i would find you

Mizukashii

161 posts

Joined September 2013

Mizukashii 2014-03-22T12:27:08+00:00

wmtokok wrote:
Mizukashii wrote:
here's a New BG if you want (suggestion)

i can find more if you want

BG

thank...
but i don't need a new BG
when i need BG that i would find you

ok

-Teina-

529 posts

Joined October 2013

-Teina- 2014-04-09T07:20:40+00:00

IRCMOD

14:38 wmtokok: 我想你幫我TEST下..
14:38 tellertheworld: 都好~
14:38 wmtokok: 你NP先我晏D有時間MOD下
14:39 *tellertheworld is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/393158 fripSide - Black Bullet (TV Size)]
14:39 tellertheworld: ..
14:39 *wmtokok is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/369246 Another Infinity feat. Mayumi Morinaga - Glitter (Starving Trancer Remix)]
14:39 tellertheworld: 唔係
14:39 *tellertheworld is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/372713 fripSide - fortuna on the Sixteenth night]
14:39 tellertheworld: 佢先岩
14:39 wmtokok: K
14:39 tellertheworld: test既意思係打一次?
14:40 wmtokok: 試打下就得
14:40 *tellertheworld is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/369246 Another Infinity feat. Mayumi Morinaga - Glitter (Starving Trancer Remix) [Insane]] +DoubleTime
14:40 wmtokok: 想睇下順唔順
14:40 wmtokok: .
14:42 tellertheworld: oh no......
14:43 tellertheworld: 2分鐘好似咁長咁既..
14:43 wmtokok: NO DT._.
14:48 wmtokok: LAG機= =?
14:49 tellertheworld: 545
14:51 tellertheworld: e個難度唔係咁關widescreen support
14:51 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/81LYE.jpg
14:52 wmtokok: setting錯左?
14:53 tellertheworld: 嗯
14:53 tellertheworld: 一樣冇關
14:55 wmtokok: 一陣整..
14:56 wmtokok: insane洗唔洗...
14:56 tellertheworld: 唔洗
14:57 tellertheworld: insane 關左
14:57 tellertheworld: 02:54:185 (1,2,3) -
14:57 tellertheworld: insane e 3個音快左
14:57 tellertheworld: 快左d 係指節奏試下用反彈slider
14:59 tellertheworld: 00:13:042 (3) - 移高小小
15:00 tellertheworld: 00:42:185 (6) - 同00:42:614 (8) - 試下remove 個finish
15:00 tellertheworld: 00:42:185 (6) - e個可以保留
15:01 wmtokok: 唔想._. 本來就有音係到
15:01 tellertheworld: 講緊邊到- -?
15:02 wmtokok: (8)
15:02 tellertheworld: 咁你試下係00:42:721 - 同00:42:935 - cut 音
15:03 tellertheworld: 01:02:542 (3,4,5) - 冇喇喇有快速既3連打好奇怪
15:03 tellertheworld: 01:16:471 (5) - 再細聲小小
15:04 tellertheworld: 01:21:614 - 加note
15:04 tellertheworld: 應該係連接... 冇斷過
15:05 tellertheworld: 01:35:328 (5) - 距離個01:35:542 (6) - 拉遠小小
15:06 wmtokok: 嗯
15:06 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/81MwX.jpg
15:07 tellertheworld: 01:54:935 - 加note
15:07 tellertheworld: 01:54:078 (8) - nc
15:08 wmtokok: 01:54:935 唔加.
15:08 tellertheworld: 覺得加左好d
15:08 tellertheworld: 當然唔加都冇問題
15:09 wmtokok: 因為...本來有大串連打再加3連有D怪
15:09 tellertheworld: 拉break未到位?
15:09 tellertheworld: 02:39:614 -
15:09 wmtokok: 故意..
15:10 tellertheworld: 我就覺得01:54:828 (7) - e粒音單獨好怪- -"
15:10 tellertheworld: 個人感覺姐..
15:11 tellertheworld: 03:29:114 (8) - 覺得唔應該overlap
15:11 tellertheworld: 03:41:328 (1) -
15:11 wmtokok: 呢個我都有諗過...
15:12 tellertheworld: 係03:41:221 - 開始
15:12 wmtokok: 但係感覺分開好難打..
15:12 tellertheworld: 咁你將03:28:900 (7) - 拉到同03:28:042 (3) - 距離差唔多
15:13 tellertheworld: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1495715
15:14 wmtokok: 還OK..
15:16 wmtokok: mod到這裡吧

wmtokok

490 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

wmtokok 2014-04-15T13:01:27+00:00

Big update on 2014/4/15

1.offset(1900) ----------->(1920)
2.BG timing

T_Terry_T

13 posts

Joined October 2013

T_Terry_T 2014-04-19T14:40:39+00:00

I came here from this modding queue, but damn: there's nothing to mod for me!
I suggest to remove the KT between 00:56:777 and 01:08:777 since the chorus is 10s or something after it, but aside from that diffs are good and cool.
Shooting a star for the great work.
Good luck with the ranking!

wmtokok

490 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

wmtokok 2014-04-19T15:57:53+00:00

T_Terry_T wrote:
I came here from this modding queue, but damn: there's nothing to mod for me!
I suggest to remove the KT between 00:56:777 and 01:08:777 since the chorus is 10s or something after it, but aside from that diffs are good and cool.
Shooting a star for the great work.
Good luck with the ranking!

Thank you so much,but
i can't give you a KD for you
because i don't fix anything

T_Terry_T

13 posts

Joined October 2013

T_Terry_T 2014-04-19T22:15:25+00:00

wmtokok wrote:
T_Terry_T wrote:
I came here from this modding queue, but damn: there's nothing to mod for me!
I suggest to remove the KT between 00:56:777 and 01:08:777 since the chorus is 10s or something after it, but aside from that diffs are good and cool.
Shooting a star for the great work.
Good luck with the ranking!

Thank you so much,but
i can't give you a KD for you
because i don't fix anything

It's okay. I didn't post to receive KD!

Maruyu

742 posts

Joined July 2013

Maruyu 2014-04-21T14:40:45+00:00

Hey~ From my modding queue.

I'm sorry if I misunderstood but your post was a bit confusing, what I thought I read was that you needed me for Normal difficulty. So here it goes~

Hinsvar's Normal

1- 00:01:920 (1) - you can angle it a bit better at 00:02:562 (2), just to make it a better curve
2- 00:07:062 (2,3) - It's not bad, but if you could somehow curve this into having 00:07:920 (3)'s curve flow right into 00:08:777 (4) it would look neat.
Something like http://puu.sh/8hy00.png. It felt good to me because it feels like you're doing 00:04:062 (4), then reversing the flow with 00:05:348 (1) and redoing the curve again.
3- 00:10:277 (6) - Angle this into 00:10:920 (7), and then make it a curve into 00:12:205 (1).
4- 00:18:205 (5) - You can curve that into 00:19:062 (1), and do the same with 00:20:777 (2), making it go into 00:21:420 (3).
5- 00:22:491 (1) - You don't have to, but having it curve to the other side looks better to me.
6- I'd prefer if you curved 00:25:062 (5), then repositioned 00:25:920 (1,2) to have 00:25:920 (1) blanket 00:26:562 (2).
7- 00:55:062 (2) - Curve this into 00:55:920 (3). You might also want to place it just a bit more to the left to help
8- I would prefer if you rotate 01:07:705 (2) clockwise, just to make some sort of movement to flow into 01:08:777 (1)
9- 01:10:491 (1) - Try to make this start on top of 01:08:777 (1)'s finish (just to look more pretty)
10- 01:19:062 (3,4) - You can try to adjust that like what I suggested in 2-, to have it flow into 01:20:777 (1)
11- 01:27:634 (1) - Move this a bit further down and adjust the curve to make it less tight into 01:28:491 (2)
12- 01:58:491 (1) - This looks better if you invert it vertically.
13- 02:14:777 (4) - You could try to slightly curve it a bit better.
14- 02:17:348 (3) - Maybe something symmetrical with 02:18:205 (4) would look better
15- I'd personally prefer if you didn't have this shape here 02:19:705 (2). But I guess it could stay.
16- 02:23:562 (2) - Try to perfect this curve into 02:24:205 (3)
17- 02:30:205 (2,3,4,1) - Tried to take this part and slightly move things a bit around. Turned out like this: http://puu.sh/8hzFp.png (note that the highlighted slider on the back is 02:32:777 (1), which is now starting where 02:30:205 (2) ends. You'll then want to curve 02:32:777 (1) a bit better into 02:33:420 (2).
18- 02:56:777 (3) - You could try to curve this better into 02:58:062 (4).
19- 03:10:491 (2) - Rotate clockwise to go into 03:11:777 (3).
20- 03:24:205 (4,5) - Might look better if both curves are turned to each other, because then you'll still have the pattern and 03:25:062 (5) will go into 03:25:920 (1).

Also, you should turn on epilepsy warning AND your kiai time is a bit too big. You should try to take another look at it and see where you can improve.

Saoji

825 posts

Joined February 2013

Saoji 2014-04-23T03:26:45+00:00

Hi,
Sorry, at the end of my mod, I restarted to mod the beginning of the map

.
Also, thank you to say what you changed or not (and if possible, why you didn't).

[General]
You should, indeed, reduce the kiai time, chose the key parts.

[Insane]

00:07:491 (1,2) - The spacing is quite intense for a slow part no? I suggest you to lower it
00:08:134 (1,2) - ^
00:16:920 (5,6,7) - This triple sounds quite odd to me, I'd rather put the triple on the next slider.-> 00:17:027 (6) -> 00:17:241 - like this:
00:51:205 (3,4,5,1) - ^
00:22:491 (1) - The shape doesnt look good you should arrange the blanket.
00:23:777 (5) - same here, even if it's just a bit.
00:24:205 (1) - ^
00:39:634 (1) - 00:40:920 (13) - This is up to you, but my point of view, is: this kind of shape stream plays bad.
01:53:348 (1) - ^
00:41:562 - You shouldn't ignore the note here, or at least, arrange the spacing of this note 00:41:777 (3) -
00:55:920 (1) - 1/1 slider maybe
01:21:848 (4) - move to x:128 y:320
01:37:277 (3,4,5) - The flow is pretty bad, try something like this maybe http://puu.sh/8jKay.jpg
01:56:777 (1) - Bad flow, try this http://puu.sh/8jKgC.jpg and you should add a NC on this slider as well.
02:27:420 (6) - add a triple
03:02:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - this star doesn't look like a star. You should redraw
03:03:634 (1) - I find the slider quite ugly A simple shape might be better
02:58:491 (1) - ^ and bad flow because of it
03:19:705 (2) - I don't like the flow here neither, try this maybe http://puu.sh/8jKEi.jpg
03:40:277 (2,3,4,5,6) - I understand what you wanted to do, but this plays bad though, also I suggest you to put the same spacing quite high if you want to keep the same effect.
03:07:384 (4) - remove?
01:36:205 (1) - arrange shape? http://puu.sh/8jL56.jpg
02:00:848 (7,4,5,6) - CTRL+H ; Ctrl+J
02:04:277 (2,3,4) - ^
02:09:420 (2) - Move to x216 y:216
02:09:848 (4) - ^

Ok, that's pretty much it. I love the song and the map has some good points, but sometimes your flow is destroyed by the shape of your sliders/esthetic. Indeed, you should maybe pay more intention to it, especially because it;s a slow song you can clearly see it .
I didnt't point out everything about this cause I don't want to change your "style" neither. Indeed, I kinda like this "old" style. However, this is an example of the shapes I would make.
From 02:14:348 (2) - - to 02:16:920 (3) - (the last one is the selected note in blue) I lowered the AR for the screen. http://puu.sh/8jLM5.jpg

All my sliders here are made this way

and I tried to make perfect blanket as you can see here: http://puu.sh/8jM44.jpg or here http://puu.sh/8jLTC.jpg

You can ofc use this pattern if you want to. It was just an example.

So yes, that's it, pretty much.
Good luck ~

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,783 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2014-04-23T04:17:17+00:00

Yuzu- wrote:
Hey~ From my modding queue.

I'm sorry if I misunderstood but your post was a bit confusing, what I thought I read was that you needed me for Normal difficulty. So here it goes~

Hinsvar's Normal
1- 00:01:920 (1) - you can angle it a bit better at 00:02:562 (2), just to make it a better curve Okay.
2- 00:07:062 (2,3) - It's not bad, but if you could somehow curve this into having 00:07:920 (3)'s curve flow right into 00:08:777 (4) it would look neat.
Something like http://puu.sh/8hy00.png. It felt good to me because it feels like you're doing 00:04:062 (4), then reversing the flow with 00:05:348 (1) and redoing the curve again. Nope; the curve is too strong, and it'll break the flow.
3- 00:10:277 (6) - Angle this into 00:10:920 (7), and then make it a curve into 00:12:205 (1). Okay for this.
4- 00:18:205 (5) - You can curve that into 00:19:062 (1), and do the same with 00:20:777 (2), making it go into 00:21:420 (3). I'm sure the curve is already good enough here...
5- 00:22:491 (1) - You don't have to, but having it curve to the other side looks better to me. It'd break the flow to 00:23:134 (2).
6- I'd prefer if you curved 00:25:062 (5), then repositioned 00:25:920 (1,2) to have 00:25:920 (1) blanket 00:26:562 (2). Did stuff around here.
7- 00:55:062 (2) - Curve this into 00:55:920 (3). You might also want to place it just a bit more to the left to help Sure.
8- I would prefer if you rotate 01:07:705 (2) clockwise, just to make some sort of movement to flow into 01:08:777 (1) Played around with the nodes instead.
9- 01:10:491 (1) - Try to make this start on top of 01:08:777 (1)'s finish (just to look more pretty) Okay.
10- 01:19:062 (3,4) - You can try to adjust that like what I suggested in 2-, to have it flow into 01:20:777 (1) ^
11- 01:27:634 (1) - Move this a bit further down and adjust the curve to make it less tight into 01:28:491 (2) ^
12- 01:58:491 (1) - This looks better if you invert it vertically. ^
13- 02:14:777 (4) - You could try to slightly curve it a bit better. ^
14- 02:17:348 (3) - Maybe something symmetrical with 02:18:205 (4) would look better Nope; I intend to have a diversity in slider shape so the diff won't be boring.
15- I'd personally prefer if you didn't have this shape here 02:19:705 (2). But I guess it could stay. ^
16- 02:23:562 (2) - Try to perfect this curve into 02:24:205 (3) Okay.
17- 02:30:205 (2,3,4,1) - Tried to take this part and slightly move things a bit around. Turned out like this: http://puu.sh/8hzFp.png (note that the highlighted slider on the back is 02:32:777 (1), which is now starting where 02:30:205 (2) ends. You'll then want to curve 02:32:777 (1) a bit better into 02:33:420 (2). Did another thing.
18- 02:56:777 (3) - You could try to curve this better into 02:58:062 (4). Done.
19- 03:10:491 (2) - Rotate clockwise to go into 03:11:777 (3). ^
20- 03:24:205 (4,5) - Might look better if both curves are turned to each other, because then you'll still have the pattern and 03:25:062 (5) will go into 03:25:920 (1). The flow here will break, so...

Also, you should turn on epilepsy warning AND your kiai time is a bit too big. You should try to take another look at it and see where you can improve.

Thanks for modding!

Yeah.

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AIR

1,577 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-04-23T08:41:09+00:00

hi，来自m4m

[Insane]

00:01:920 (1,2) - 虽然影响不大，但还是建议头尾包好
00:04:277 (2,3,1) - 不是太美观
00:12:205 (1,2,3,4) - 有点省事的感觉。。
00:13:920 (1,3) - 3叠到1上
00:16:491 (4) - 这一部分的重音只有这里留在尾部
00:20:777 (1,2,3,4,1) - 不是规则的四边形
00:29:134 - SB闪现转换有点早，建议配合乐音往后挪到00:29:348 -
00:39:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 摆放和节奏需要重考虑
00:41:348 (2,3) - 2换成滑条压蓝线，比较好听
01:16:277 (4,5,6,7,8) - 形状不是太好看
01:32:777 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1调整到后四个中间
01:54:205 (9,10,11,12,13,1) - 减几个note比较好听
02:39:420 - 同样闪现位置往后推半拍
03:02:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - 调整下正五边形比较好看
03:29:348 (1) - ctrl+g
03:32:777 (1,2,3,4) - ↑
03:40:277 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这里不适合渐离。。。

[Hinsvar's Normal]

00:04:062 (4) - 不建议忽略这个1/2音
00:24:205 (3,4,5) - 配合下00:22:491 (1,2) -
00:27:634 (1) - 转盘起始往前半拍
00:39:420 - 同闪现调整
01:12:205 (1) - 这个难度转盘有点短，建议起始在这里
03:24:848 - 加note
03:38:562 (3,4) - 配合下人声

wmtokok

490 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

wmtokok 2014-04-23T13:25:25+00:00

Yales

Yales wrote:
Hi,
Sorry, at the end of my mod, I restarted to mod the beginning of the map .
Also, thank you to say what you changed or not (and if possible, why you didn't).

[General]
You should, indeed, reduce the kiai time, chose the key parts. i think it is a key parts of kiai now

[Insane]
00:07:491 (1,2) - The spacing is quite intense for a slow part no? I suggest you to lower it special here ..no fix
00:08:134 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:16:920 (5,6,7) - This triple sounds quite odd to me, I'd rather put the triple on the next slider.-> 00:17:027 (6) -> 00:17:241 - like this: fix
00:51:205 (3,4,5,1) - ^ fix
00:22:491 (1) - The shape doesnt look good you should arrange the blanket. OK
00:23:777 (5) - same here, even if it's just a bit. more blanket with (4) fix
00:24:205 (1) - ^ OK
00:39:634 (1) - 00:40:920 (13) - This is up to you, but my point of view, is: this kind of shape stream plays bad. i think it is fit the song of rhythm.no fix
01:53:348 (1) - ^ ^
00:41:562 - You shouldn't ignore the note here, or at least, arrange the spacing of this note 00:41:777 (3) - not need.i use some jump prominent the rhythm. If i add this note will feel too bored no fix
00:55:920 (1) - 1/1 slider maybe You can't listen that have a piano song here? no fix
01:21:848 (4) - move to x:128 y:320 i move to X:116 Y:324 fix
01:37:277 (3,4,5) - The flow is pretty bad, try something like this maybe http://puu.sh/8jKay.jpg look good fix
01:56:777 (1) - Bad flow, try this http://puu.sh/8jKgC.jpg and you should add a NC on this slider as well. nice flow.but it skip the NC here ..fix
02:27:420 (6) - add a triple add
03:02:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - this star doesn't look like a star. You should redraw fix
03:03:634 (1) - I find the slider quite ugly A simple shape might be better fix
02:58:491 (1) - ^ and bad flow because of it fix
03:19:705 (2) - I don't like the flow here neither, try this maybe http://puu.sh/8jKEi.jpg i like this no fix
03:40:277 (2,3,4,5,6) - I understand what you wanted to do, but this plays bad though, also I suggest you to put the same spacing quite high if you want to keep the same effect. fix
03:07:384 (4) - remove? fix
01:36:205 (1) - arrange shape? http://puu.sh/8jL56.jpg FIX
02:00:848 (7,4,5,6) - CTRL+H ; Ctrl+J OK
02:04:277 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
02:09:420 (2) - Move to x216 y:216 fix
02:09:848 (4) - ^ ^

Ok, that's pretty much it. I love the song and the map has some good points, but sometimes your flow is destroyed by the shape of your sliders/esthetic. Indeed, you should maybe pay more intention to it, especially because it;s a slow song you can clearly see it .
I didnt't point out everything about this cause I don't want to change your "style" neither. Indeed, I kinda like this "old" style. However, this is an example of the shapes I would make.
From 02:14:348 (2) - - to 02:16:920 (3) - (the last one is the selected note in blue) I lowered the AR for the screen.
I think your "style" maybe good.Also i should keep my "style" too.SO i use some idea in your style. thank
http://puu.sh/8jLM5.jpg

All my sliders here are made this way and I tried to make perfect blanket as you can see here: http://puu.sh/8jM44.jpg or here http://puu.sh/8jLTC.jpg

You can ofc use this pattern if you want to. It was just an example.

So yes, that's it, pretty much.
Good luck ~

thank your mod

ids

ids wrote:
hi，来自m4m
HI 我在未來數天來MOD你的圖

[Insane]

00:01:920 (1,2) - 虽然影响不大，但还是建议头尾包好 OK https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538806
00:04:277 (2,3,1) - 不是太美观美觀FIX...但(3)這個滑條不打算拉直.. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538808
00:12:205 (1,2,3,4) - 有点省事的感觉。。這里我重新做過 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538815
00:13:920 (1,3) - 3叠到1上 OK
00:16:491 (4) - 这一部分的重音只有这里留在尾部不是在尾部... 在頭的位置
00:20:777 (1,2,3,4,1) - 不是规则的四边形 FIX
00:29:134 - SB闪现转换有点早，建议配合乐音往后挪到00:29:348 - 後退了
00:39:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 摆放和节奏需要重考虑的確很有啟發..可是我想到一個比你這個應該更好 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538825
00:41:348 (2,3) - 2换成滑条压蓝线，比较好听個人覺得不太合適 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538828
01:16:277 (4,5,6,7,8) - 形状不是太好看 FIX
01:32:777 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1调整到后四个中间不了,這里是故意做星型
01:54:205 (9,10,11,12,13,1) - 减几个note比较好听改了跟上邊差不多的 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538837
02:39:420 - 同样闪现位置往后推半拍這個問題不大
03:02:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - 调整下正五边形比较好看這個樓上的MOD都有提到... 所以我已經FIX了
03:29:348 (1) - ctrl+g OK
03:32:777 (1,2,3,4) - ↑ 這個有點怪異 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538815
03:40:277 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这里不适合渐离。。。這個樓上的MOD都有提到... 所以我已經FIX了 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538852
THANK YOU

感謝你們
THANKS~

Hinsvar just see this of ids's mod

[Hinsvar's Normal]

00:04:062 (4) - 不建议忽略这个1/2音 --------------> i don't suggest that skip a 1/2
00:24:205 (3,4,5) - 配合下00:22:491 (1,2) - ---------->reference 00:22:491 (1,2) -
00:27:634 (1) - 转盘起始往前半拍 ------------>spinner should be start on 00:27:420 -
00:39:420 - 同闪现调整 ------------>SB change (i fix it)
01:12:205 (1) - 这个难度转盘有点短，建议起始在这里 -----------------> the spinner is too short in this diff
03:24:848 - 加note ----------> add note
03:38:562 (3,4) - 配合下人声 -------------> Please fit the vocal of people
img

thank Hinsvar

Update on tomorrow

wmtokok

490 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

wmtokok 2014-04-24T02:01:44+00:00

Update on 2014/4/25
all diff

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,783 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2014-04-25T01:53:15+00:00

wmtokok wrote:
Hinsvar just see this of ids's mod

[Hinsvar's Normal]
00:04:062 (4) - 不建议忽略这个1/2音 --------------> i don't suggest that skip a 1/2 I don't want to make the rhythm more complex to follow the star difficulty rule...
00:24:205 (3,4,5) - 配合下00:22:491 (1,2) - ---------->reference 00:22:491 (1,2) - Sure.
00:27:634 (1) - 转盘起始往前半拍 ------------>spinner should be start on 00:27:420 - I want to follow the cymbal at 00:27:634.
00:39:420 - 同闪现调整 ------------>SB change (i fix it) Okay!
01:12:205 (1) - 这个难度转盘有点短，建议起始在这里 -----------------> the spinner is too short in this diff Eh idk, I feel that this is quite fitting enough in terms of length.
03:24:848 - 加note ----------> add note Started 03:25:062 (5) here instead.
03:38:562 (3,4) - 配合下人声 -------------> Please fit the vocal of people
img
Since there's a loud instrument sound at 03:38:777, no, as it'll be awkward to leave that empty.
thank Hinsvar

Thanks, guys!

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Mint

1,607 posts

Joined February 2013

Mint 2014-04-25T15:55:08+00:00

Hey, from #modreq

[General]
Still a lot of KIAI - maybe remove the KIAI at 00:56:777 ?

[Hinsvar's Normal]
02:19:705 (2) - maybe something like this for the flow? http://puu.sh/8mXtp.jpg

[Hard]
00:05:991 (2) - move up 1 grid for a better blanket
01:01:920 (1) - move to x200,y156
01:11:455 - maybe start spinner here for vocals (you can also leave it as it is)
01:34:491 (1) - move to x68,y224
02:28:705 (3) - move to x348,y168 for spacing
02:28:920 (4) - move to x368,y280 for blanket
02:29:134 (5) - move to x460,y212 if you did the 2 above
03:01:920 (1,2,3,4) - maybe try this? http://puu.sh/8mWUD.jpg
03:25:277 (3,4,5,1) - ^ similar to above?

[Insane]
00:02:562 (3) - better blanket? move slider to x328,y328 ( http://puu.sh/8mUBv.jpg )
00:04:277 (2,3) - move to x320,y100 and x360,y200 for a better spacing and blanket
01:06:420 (5,6,7) - try this http://puu.sh/8mV0V.jpg
01:11:455 - same as hard
01:21:848 (4) - move to x120,y320
01:33:848 - add a note? gap feels a bit awkward
01:35:348 (5) - ctrl+g?
03:15:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i thought you'd make a star pattern here, maybe let the slider face the other way, and make a star http://puu.sh/8mW06.png
03:20:348 (3) - move to x412,y244 for a blanket

Nice map! - sorry for my terrible mod, hope it helped!

wmtokok

490 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

wmtokok 2014-04-27T15:31:05+00:00

appleeaterx wrote:
Hey, from #modreq

[General]
Still a lot of KIAI - maybe remove the KIAI at 00:56:777 ? OK remove it,i also think KIAI is more

[Hard]
00:05:991 (2) - move up 1 grid for a better blanket fix
01:01:920 (1) - move to x200,y156 fix
01:11:455 - maybe start spinner here for vocals (you can also leave it as it is) not a best here
01:34:491 (1) - move to x68,y224 fix
02:28:705 (3) - move to x348,y168 for spacing no fix
02:28:920 (4) - move to x368,y280 for blanket fix
02:29:134 (5) - move to x460,y212 if you did the 2 above not need
03:01:920 (1,2,3,4) - maybe try this? http://puu.sh/8mWUD.jpg i make other else
03:25:277 (3,4,5,1) - ^ similar to above? i move down some grid

[Insane]
00:02:562 (3) - better blanket? move slider to x328,y328 ( http://puu.sh/8mUBv.jpg ) NO FIX..i would like to keep my DS(1.2x)
00:04:277 (2,3) - move to x320,y100 and x360,y200 for a better spacing and blanket i just change other place of (3),because (2) should be blanket with (00:05:348 (1) - )
01:06:420 (5,6,7) - try this http://puu.sh/8mV0V.jpg not like it sorry ><
01:11:455 - same as hard not a best here
01:21:848 (4) - move to x120,y320 no fix,keep my DS(1.2x)
01:33:848 - add a note? gap feels a bit awkward it is my special rhythm,no fix
01:35:348 (5) - ctrl+g? NO
03:15:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i thought you'd make a star pattern here, maybe let the slider face the other way, and make a star http://puu.sh/8mW06.png that it ok ...but i make other thing from your idea,,thank
03:20:348 (3) - move to x412,y244 for a blanket fix

Nice map! - sorry for my terrible mod, hope it helped!

Thank your mod

Eni

1,437 posts

Joined May 2013

Eni 2014-05-22T02:14:34+00:00

hello from #modreqs

[General]

Optional: Add Burst Kiai at 00:15:634 - since it is first Chorus (at start).
```
15634,-100,4,2,0,55,0,1
15741,-100,4,2,0,55,0,0
```
00:56:777 - This is not part of the chorus. Either A) Remove this Kiai or B) Make this a Burst Kiai.
```
56777,-100,4,2,0,65,0,1
56884,-100,4,2,0,65,0,0
```
02:08:777 - I strongly suggest that you remove this kiai (Burst Kiai does not seem to fit).
02:36:205 - Remove this Kiai, there is no emphasis of chorus that would invoke it.
Keep the Kiais at 01:13:920 - and 02:55:062 - as these are part of the Main Chorus.

I mod Easy / Normal~

[Hinsvar's Normal]

00:07:062 (2) - Move this to x:456, y:189 to stack properly with 00:04:062 (4) -
00:10:277 (6) - I personally prefer using a circle here but your current 1/2 slider also works (it is a bit confusing though, and there is no easy to accompany its difficulty)
00:12:205 (1,2) - Is there any reason why these two objects are so far away from each other and have no flow? If you must, add a circle at 00:13:491 - and change the next slider to make it flow and look nicer.
00:24:205 (3,4) - This pattern is a bit confusing (slider 1/1 circle wait, then 1/1 circle wait 1/2 slider wait). Consider replacing with a 1/1 slider instead to match your previous and next pattern.
01:10:491 (1) - Move to x:162, y:259 to stack with 01:08:777 (1) -. You may also want to consider slightly moving the objects so that the red vertex on 01:10:491 (1) - meets the line of the Y-axis. (Symmetry)
01:35:134 (2,3) - This doesn't look right to me, maybe a different slider pattern?
02:19:705 (2,3) - Slider 2 points in the opposite direction of circle 3. This may be intentional, but it is somewhat confusing and may make the novice player sliderbreak. Given that there is no Easy difficulty in this mapset, I strongly suggest that you change this and make it flow.
02:22:491 (1) - Move to x:320 y:372 to stack with 02:20:777 (3) -
02:23:562 (2,3,4) - Going right then back left feels weird from my perspective. Try Ctrl+H'ing the slider 4 or go for symmetry across the Y-axis here.
03:20:777 (3) - This object goes off the grid quite a bit. Try bring it in more (to help support the people that play with 4:3 resolution).
03:31:062 (3,4,5,6) - This is the only time that you use this pattern in the whole song. I strongly suggest that you change it. Maybe use a 1/1 slider somewhere instead?
03:32:777 (1) - Use a nicer slider like this instead:

Good luck~

wmtokok

490 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

wmtokok 2014-05-23T01:44:29+00:00

Project Railgun wrote:
hello from #modreqs

[General]
Optional: Add Burst Kiai at 00:15:634 - since it is first Chorus (at start). i think 75% of vol. is OK,and this is a main part
15634,-100,4,2,0,55,0,1
15741,-100,4,2,0,55,0,0
00:56:777 - This is not part of the chorus. Either A) Remove this Kiai or B) Make this a Burst Kiai. For Hinsvar's diff?
56777,-100,4,2,0,65,0,1
56884,-100,4,2,0,65,0,0
02:08:777 - I strongly suggest that you remove this kiai (Burst Kiai does not seem to fit). Fix...
02:36:205 - Remove this Kiai, there is no emphasis of chorus that would invoke it. ^ fix too
Keep the Kiais at 01:13:920 - and 02:55:062 - as these are part of the Main Chorus. i keep on 3 kiai time
Good luck~

thank your mod

AndreasHD

478 posts

Joined June 2010

AndreasHD 2014-06-06T12:36:22+00:00

[General] First of all, I just wanna say that I like the song

I'd rather set the preview point here 01:13:920 because it's chorus.
I hope Im not too nazi in my mod.. The major mod has been done, this is a minor one.
By the way, Im not going to mod the StoryBoard in this post.

[Hinsvar's Normal]
First, you need to change the timing of you'r kiai so it's the same as the other difficulties.

00:08:777 (1) - New Combo.

01:00:205 (1) - Drag this one tick to the right, just so the spacing get's right.

01:39:205 (4) - Drag this two tick down, so it get's the right spacing.

[Hard]
00:09:205 here you could form the approach circle better.
00:10:920 (2) - To place this note under a slider is a little harsh for a
'Hard' in my opinion.

00:11:562 (4,1) - Spacing between these two are too much compared to the rest.

00:22:062 (4) - Don't new combo here.

00:22:491 (6) - New combo.

00:29:134 (5) - This is very hard to read for "hardplayers", try to spread out
(4) (5) and (6).

00:42:205 (3) - Spacing too small compared to (1) and (2).

01:09:205 (2) - New combo.

01:09:634 (1) - New combo here aswell.

01:17:348 (1) - This spcacing is way too much for 'hard'.

01:41:134 (5) - Spread out this note. (As mentioned before).

02:16:920 (4) - Too much spacing.

03:35:777 (4) - Too much spacing.

[Insane]
I would set the OD (overall difficulty) to 8 instead of 7, because it's Insane, and it's gonna feel better too.

00:16:491 (4) - This slider can be better, if you look at the picture, you can see what I mean, try to form it after the approachcircle.

Click here

00:19:705 (2) - Just drag it one tick to the right, only if you want a more perfect map, all though, personally I didn't like the flow of those two sliders,
but you can keep them.

00:59:348 (5) - Snap this note to the end of the slider properly.

01:17:348 (1) - This slider can feel so much better if you make it more like this:

Click here

01:32:348 (5) - Try to not overlap this with (3)

01:32:562 (6) - This is not in the center of the starpattern, but if you do what I told you above, "not overlap", then it should work out. Or atleast be better.

01:40:062 (3,4,5) - Drag all of these one tick up, because of the spacing between these three: 01:39:634 (1,2,3) -

02:21:420 (4,5,6) - The spacing of these three notes are extreme compared to
the rest of the map, consider changing the spacing smaller.

wmtokok

490 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

wmtokok 2014-06-07T02:51:53+00:00

AndreasHD wrote:
[General] First of all, I just wanna say that I like the song
I'd rather set the preview point here 01:13:920 because it's chorus. it that OK...no fix
I hope Im not too nazi in my mod.. The major mod has been done, this is a minor one.
By the way, Im not going to mod the StoryBoard in this post.

[Hard]
00:09:205 here you could form the approach circle better. fix
00:10:920 (2) - To place this note under a slider is a little harsh for a fix
'Hard' in my opinion.

00:11:562 (4,1) - Spacing between these two are too much compared to the rest. fix

00:22:062 (4) - Don't new combo here. OK

00:22:491 (6) - New combo. OK

00:29:134 (5) - This is very hard to read for "hardplayers", try to spread out OK
(4) (5) and (6).

00:42:205 (3) - Spacing too small compared to (1) and (2). fix

01:09:205 (2) - New combo. good idea

01:09:634 (1) - New combo here aswell. good idea

01:17:348 (1) - This spcacing is way too much for 'hard'. i agree with you

01:41:134 (5) - Spread out this note. (As mentioned before). fix

02:16:920 (4) - Too much spacing. OK

03:35:777 (4) - Too much spacing. i think player can easy that play on this flow,no fix

[Insane]
I would set the OD (overall difficulty) to 8 instead of 7, because it's Insane, and it's gonna feel better too. fix

00:16:491 (4) - This slider can be better, if you look at the picture, you can see what I mean, try to form it after the approachcircle. fix
Click here

00:19:705 (2) - Just drag it one tick to the right, only if you want a more perfect map, all though, personally I didn't like the flow of those two sliders,but you can keep them. change other flow

00:59:348 (5) - Snap this note to the end of the slider properly. fix

01:17:348 (1) - This slider can feel so much better if you make it more like this: fix

Click here

01:32:348 (5) - Try to not overlap this with (3) fix

01:32:562 (6) - This is not in the center of the starpattern, but if you do what I told you above, "not overlap", then it should work out. Or atleast be better. fix

01:40:062 (3,4,5) - Drag all of these one tick up, because of the spacing between these three: 01:39:634 (1,2,3) - fix other else

02:21:420 (4,5,6) - The spacing of these three notes are extreme compared to
the rest of the map, consider changing the spacing smaller. fix

thanks your mod

edit: from PM about the OD8(fix it)

Pereira006

osu! Alumni

2,801 posts

Joined October 2010

Pereira006 2014-08-27T01:36:06+00:00

hello

[Insane]

Hitsound:

00:04:277 (2) - Remove whistle in end slider, is don't fit you style hitsound and this music
00:19:920 (4) - missing add whistle
00:52:705 (3,4,5) - this could add all whistle, there higher melody, sense a lot IMO
03:05:777 (2) - missing add clap in start slider
03:32:134 (4) - missing add clap in end slider

Gameplay:

01:01:920 (5,1) - change new combo, http://puu.sh/b9osF/07552aca0e.jpg better lot
01:40:491 (5) - isn't perfect align with 01:41:134 (6,7,8) and 01:40:277 (4)
03:41:134 (6) - inconsistency spacing with 03:40:491 (3,4,5)

stuff cool

[Hard]

Hitsound:

02:56:777 (1) - missing add whistle in start slider
03:23:134 (2) - missing add whistle in end slider

Gameplay:

00:42:420 (4) - I see my eye, this place isn't same place with 00:42:848 (6)

nothing wrong here, look good

[Hinsvar's Normal]

Hitsound:

01:01:920 (2) - missing add whistle in end slider
01:14:562 (2) - ruin me... remove whistle
01:17:348 (1) - in end slider, that whisle ruin me a lot, i don't like

Gameplay:

00:08:777 (4) - this could put new combo color right? The lyrics and song is change
01:10:491 (1) - (nazi) the end point need grid 1 down to perfect shape in first point
02:24:205 (3) - (nazi) the end point need grid 1 up

this kiai is so weird, I know is guest, but very very weird and is not sense here....
and that hitsound whistle the custom 1 is ruin this diff a lot, example the second kiai part, that lot whistle in tick red I not like and 01:55:920 at 02:08:084 that whisle is not sense...
You gameplay is good, but hitsound need better
[]
Any question ask me
Best good luck

wmtokok

490 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

wmtokok 2014-08-27T14:32:35+00:00

Pereira006 wrote:
hello hello

[Insane]

Hitsound:

00:04:277 (2) - Remove whistle in end slider, is don't fit you style hitsound and this music FIX
00:19:920 (4) - missing add whistle add
00:52:705 (3,4,5) - this could add all whistle, there higher melody, sense a lot IMO good idea
03:05:777 (2) - missing add clap in start slider add
03:32:134 (4) - missing add clap in end slider add

Gameplay:

01:01:920 (5,1) - change new combo, http://puu.sh/b9osF/07552aca0e.jpg better lot FIX
01:40:491 (5) - isn't perfect align with 01:41:134 (6,7,8) and 01:40:277 (4) FIX@@
03:41:134 (6) - inconsistency spacing with 03:40:491 (3,4,5) FIX

stuff cool

[Hard]

Hitsound:

02:56:777 (1) - missing add whistle in start slider add
03:23:134 (2) - missing add whistle in end slider add

Gameplay:

00:42:420 (4) - I see my eye, this place isn't same place with 00:42:848 (6) no fix,because i feel it is same@@

nothing wrong here, look good

this kiai is so weird, I know is guest, but very very weird and is not sense here....
and that hitsound whistle the custom 1 is ruin this diff a lot, example the second kiai part, that lot whistle in tick red I not like and 01:55:920 at 02:08:084 that whisle is not sense...
You gameplay is good, but hitsound need better

Any question ask me
Best good luck

thanks a lot

No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2014-08-31T04:17:31+00:00

from my M4M queue.no bub round

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
00:13:920 (1) - 好像没折返上的音?
00:25:491 (3) - 间距不等而且这边整个pattern也不是特别好
00:27:634 (1,2,3,4) - 仔细听听连打不少是加clap的。记得改小点音量而且我觉得可以3也复制前面直接顺下来
01:08:777 (1,1,2,1,2,3,1) - 有点乱乱的。。hard不建议这样
01:21:420 (4,1) - 跟前面overlap。而且感觉1的形状好像没什么意义。。
02:07:062 (1,1) - Hard最好还是别太近吧虽然没原则性规定但是这样很容易跪
02:09:420 (3,4,5,1) - 等距?
02:13:920 (1,2,3,4,5) - 用compose里面的工具重新弄一个吧
02:18:634 (3,4,1) - 有点微妙啊。。说34一起吧，间距还有点大，说341在一起吧，间距还不等。我觉得要不34放近点然后4到1算一个跳或者341等距
02:20:777 (1,2,3,4) - 不如第一个slider转3次90° 最后一个用scale缩一下
02:39:634 - break停这里
有些地方跳大了点不过BPM比较低应该还可以

[Insane]
00:41:991 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 不放五角星吗
00:51:420 (4,5,1,5,6,1) - 可以叠。。不然误导性太强
01:58:062 (5,1) - 这个overlap
03:02:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - 还是用compose里面的工具重新弄一下
03:09:848 (5,6,7) - 不正啊

整张图都是没什么大问题但是小毛病不少。。跳设计的有种满天乱飞的感觉，很多图形摆的也很随便。跳这东西一个一个mod是mod不过来的。需要自己多看图打图感受才明白。不过第三张图的话这样也很不错了

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2014-08-31T06:11:54+00:00

Hello there from my modding queue

[Insane]

00:07:491 (1,2) - I think spacing is too high here same with 00:08:134 (1,2) -
00:21:634 (5,6) - Prefer to stack so it not too confuse to play
00:27:634 (1,2) - How about this? http://puu.sh/bf4bP/5e8851c9f2.png better cosmetic
00:41:348 (2,3) - Prefer to stack so it not too confuse to play. Hmm.. I think this you style so I will stop modding about this beat spacing after this
00:47:134 (2,3,4) - Should line up for better flow
00:58:062 (4) - For better cosmetic move this to x=256 y=215
01:59:777 (3) - y=320 to line up 01:59:777 (3,5,6,8) - so it will consistent with 02:00:205 (4,7) -
02:09:420 (2,4) - x=208 y=211 for better cosmetic
02:21:848 (7) - Prefer to line up with 02:22:062 (8,9,10,11,1) - so you will get better flow http://puu.sh/bf4C7/967c80cd03.png
03:25:277 (3,1) - Improve curve a bit make it curve same like this http://puu.sh/bf4Ne/4b3586916a.png
03:30:205 - Feel empty add a note here
I think you can improve in cosmetic for this diff

[Hard]

00:21:634 (3,4,5) - Move to x=322 y=136 for better cosmetic
02:32:134 (4,5) - Spacing here is not consistent with 02:31:705 (2,3) - you should copy-paste 02:31:705 (2,3) -
02:24:205 (1) - Move to x=359 y=212 for better diamond shape here 02:23:562 (3,4,5,1) -
Not many suggestions for this diff

[Hinsvar's Normal]
Very nice Normal

Overall
Good map but you can improve in cosmetic that's all

Good luck

wmtokok

490 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

wmtokok 2014-09-01T06:09:04+00:00

No_Gu wrote:
from my M4M queue.no bub round

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
00:13:920 (1) - 好像没折返上的音? remove了
00:25:491 (3) - 间距不等而且这边整个pattern也不是特别好 FIX
00:27:634 (1,2,3,4) - 仔细听听连打不少是加clap的。记得改小点音量而且我觉得可以3也复制前面直接顺下来音量改為50%
01:08:777 (1,1,2,1,2,3,1) - 有点乱乱的。。hard不建议这样 FIX
01:21:420 (4,1) - 跟前面overlap。而且感觉1的形状好像没什么意义。。 FIX
02:07:062 (1,1) - Hard最好还是别太近吧虽然没原则性规定但是这样很容易跪 delete了了(1)
02:09:420 (3,4,5,1) - 等距? OK
02:13:920 (1,2,3,4,5) - 用compose里面的工具重新弄一个吧 FIX
02:18:634 (3,4,1) - 有点微妙啊。。说34一起吧，间距还有点大，说341在一起吧，间距还不等。我觉得要不34放近点然后4到1算一个跳或者341等距不錯...我選用前者的方法
02:20:777 (1,2,3,4) - 不如第一个slider转3次90° 最后一个用scale缩一下 FIX
02:39:634 - break停这里這個我看不懂,估計應該是Break在這裹開始吧..FIX
有些地方跳大了点不过BPM比较低应该还可以我修改了大部分的跳位

[Insane]
00:41:991 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 不放五角星吗決定改用別的梗
00:51:420 (4,5,1,5,6,1) - 可以叠。。不然误导性太强 FIX
01:58:062 (5,1) - 这个overlap 這個是故意的...可以不改嗎?
03:02:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - 还是用compose里面的工具重新弄一下 FIX
03:09:848 (5,6,7) - 不正啊這個我嘗試修改一下

整张图都是没什么大问题但是小毛病不少。。跳设计的有种满天乱飞的感觉，很多图形摆的也很随便。跳这东西一个一个mod是mod不过来的。需要自己多看图打图感受才明白。不过第三张图的话这样也很不错了

thanks No_Gu

CelsiusLK wrote:
Hello there from my modding queue

[Insane]
00:07:491 (1,2) - I think spacing is too high here same with 00:08:134 (1,2) - 2.7X>2.5X
00:21:634 (5,6) - Prefer to stack so it not too confuse to play i not think this is too confuse._.
00:27:634 (1,2) - How about this? http://puu.sh/bf4bP/5e8851c9f2.png better cosmetic OK
00:41:348 (2,3) - Prefer to stack so it not too confuse to play. Hmm.. I think this you style so I will stop modding about this beat spacing after this change
00:47:134 (2,3,4) - Should line up for better flow OK
00:58:062 (4) - For better cosmetic move this to x=256 y=215 i move this to x=272 y=212,because i would like to keep on the DS
01:59:777 (3) - y=320 to line up 01:59:777 (3,5,6,8) - so it will consistent with 02:00:205 (4,7) - fix
02:09:420 (2,4) - x=208 y=211 for better cosmetic OK
02:21:848 (7) - Prefer to line up with 02:22:062 (8,9,10,11,1) - so you will get better flow http://puu.sh/bf4C7/967c80cd03.png FIX
03:25:277 (3,1) - Improve curve a bit make it curve same like this http://puu.sh/bf4Ne/4b3586916a.png fix
03:30:205 - Feel empty add a note here fix
I think you can improve in cosmetic for this diff
[Hard]
00:21:634 (3,4,5) - Move to x=322 y=136 for better cosmetic move to other place
02:32:134 (4,5) - Spacing here is not consistent with 02:31:705 (2,3) - you should copy-paste 02:31:705 (2,3) - OK
02:24:205 (1) - Move to x=359 y=212 for better diamond shape here 02:23:562 (3,4,5,1) - OK
Not many suggestions for this diff
[Hinsvar's Normal]
Very nice Normal

Overall
Good map but you can improve in cosmetic that's all

Good luck

thanks CelsiusLK

update:

1.about the map
2.Break time :159600,170734 > 159634,170734

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2014-09-01T17:55:51+00:00

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

Recheck Here!

[General]

Tag : Remve "senya" because, It is not announced in a formula. ( I know Mayumi Morinaga = senya but... )
You should be PreviewTime set "15420" Please check all diff.

[Hinsvar's Normal]

00:04:062 (4) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Why do you respond suddenly in Back　Melody? I think more better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
00:09:420 (5,6,7) - Same as above.
00:15:205 (3) - Remove whistle. whistle does not match the breathing point imo.
00:18:848 - add note? I think same as point 00:17:134 -
00:19:062 (1) - The fact that you don't use any hitsound for that drum that goes every white tick in this section makes me sad, but oh well.
00:52:920 (4) - Distance snap is not indicated. Please check this.
01:08:777 (1) - Is New Combo of this point really necessary? I think not need. Remove New Combo better.
01:13:920 (1) - Too soon after a spinner. It definitely doesn't give players enough recovery.
01:20:562 - Add note. It is necessary for securing of constant rhythm.
01:23:991 - Same as above.
01:26:777 (6) - Do you not make form more neatly? Please think to see Grid.
img
01:37:705 - Add note. The reason is the same as other points.
01:38:562 (2,3,4) - Try an arrange like this. I think that more better.
02:01:705 - Add note. The reason is the same as other points.
02:09:420 (1) - Too soon after a spinner. It definitely doesn't give players enough recovery.
02:14:777 (4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
02:54:634 (3) - Add "Sampleset : D + Clap.
Difficulty is anxious about a thing more than 1.99

[Hard]

HP Drain -1 for mapset balance.
00:04:920 (1) - Remove whistle on slider head. There is no sound that whistle sounds in this point.
00:13:920 (1) - It is rhythm not to match music. Try this?
00:25:705 (4) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try to move X:292 Y:56
00:42:205 (3,4,5,6,1) - I think that it is considerably difficult in the Hard diff. It is desirable to change one to slider.
00:43:062 - ~ 00:56:562 - Slider velocity multiplier : *0.5. It is hard to play one becoming slow suddenly. Please Remapping *0.75
01:03:420 (4,1) - The flow feels a bit blah. Try an arrange like this.
img
01:05:991 (2) - Not fit this rhythm. Change this.
01:09:634 (5) - Missed finish on purpose? I think a finish fits better anyhow. (slider head)
01:10:491 - Changed *0.75 The reason is the same as other points.
01:17:134 (4,1) - Why do you use Jump?
01:26:777 (3,4) - Not too fond of the straight flow here. Try an arrange like this.
img
01:28:920 (3,4,1) - It is mere suggestion.
img
01:33:205 (2,3) - Try " CTRL+G " is more better.

01:36:205 (1,2,3,4) - I feel tight. Please use this cord.

img+code

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01:56:348 (3,4) - Jump does not fit it here.

02:19:062 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Suggestion to clean it more. Please use code. it if you understand

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02:33:420 (2,3,1) - Do you use the triangle?
img
02:37:062 (2,3) - It is a very quiet part. You should employ a slider. (add green line and use slider velocity multiplier *0.75 )
03:02:134 (2) - Move X:156 Y:248 and 03:02:348 (3) - Move X:236 Y:188 mean a quadrangle.
img
03:36:205 - ~ 03:36:205 (1,2) - Slider velocity multiplier : *0.5. It is hard to play one becoming slow suddenly. Please Remapping *0.75

[Insane]

00:02:562 (2) - Add whistle on slider end.
00:04:920 (3) - Remove whistle on slider end. whistle does not match the breathing point imo.
00:10:920 (2) - Remove whistle on slider head. and Add whistle on slider end.
00:16:170 (3) - Remove note. You must not put note in the point where there is not a sound.
00:41:455 - and 00:41:562 - add note.
00:43:062 (1) - Move X:252 Y:36
00:54:205 (3,4,5,6) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
00:55:062 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It is hard to read this stream. Try an arrange like this.
00:55:920 (1,2) - Add whistle on slider end.
01:01:491 (3,4) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try " CTRL+G " more better flow imo.
01:07:062 (1) - Not too fond of the straight flow here. Try this.
img
01:09:312 (6) - Overmapped remove note better.
01:25:062 (3) - Nazi. Please do Mapping more neatly. (Blanket)
img
01:34:062 (1) - Remove New Combo and Add New Combo here 01:34:491 (3) -
01:40:491 (5) - I kinda want a regular soft whistle here. (slider end)
01:58:062 (5,1) - This slider should be further from the previous slider even if you have placed it there to make a blanket together with "place" sliders.
img
02:24:098 (2) - Distance Snap is broken. It's hard to read.
02:25:812 (8) - Only in here, why is Distance 1.1? I think should be use "Distance 0.8"
02:56:455 (6) - Move 02:56:670 - here. Please listen to melody.
03:00:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Do not fit a melody. Please listen to music well.
03:03:205 (5) - I kinda want a regular clap here.
03:13:920 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same as 03:00:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
03:21:098 (4) - Remove note. only this.
03:24:098 - Add note.
03:27:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as 03:00:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -

Nice mapset ! "Hard" and "Insane" diff need more work. Get 2-3 more mods and then call me back again

I'll recheck you are map :3 Good Luck.

Last edited by Satellite 2014-09-12T07:40:02+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

wmtokok

490 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

wmtokok 2014-09-02T14:28:31+00:00

Satellite wrote:

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]
Tag : Remve "senya" because, It is not announced in a formula. ( I know Mayumi Morinaga = senya but... ) done my diff
You should be PreviewTime set "15420" Please check all diff.done my diff

[Hard]
HP Drain -1 for mapset balance. OK
00:04:920 (1) - Remove whistle on slider head. There is no sound that whistle sounds in this point. OK
00:13:920 (1) - It is rhythm not to match music. Try this? this rhythm very cool...fix!!!
00:25:705 (4) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try to move X:292 Y:56 nice
00:42:205 (3,4,5,6,1) - I think that it is considerably difficult in the Hard diff. It is desirable to change one to slider. change
00:43:062 - ~ 00:56:562 - Slider velocity multiplier : *0.5. It is hard to play one becoming slow suddenly. Please Remapping *0.75 fix
01:03:420 (4,1) - The flow feels a bit blah. Try an arrange like this. cool
img
01:05:991 (2) - Not fit this rhythm. Change this. not good...i feel empty of this rhythm,i try to other rhythm
01:09:634 (5) - Missed finish on purpose? I think a finish fits better anyhow. (slider head) add
01:10:491 - Changed *0.75 The reason is the same as other points. OK
01:17:134 (4,1) - Why do you use Jump? it is same of 01:24:848 (2) - rhythm,so i would like to jump@@
01:26:777 (3,4) - Not too fond of the straight flow here. Try an arrange like this. nice!!!!!! www
img

01:28:920 (3,4,1) - It is mere suggestion. why you can think this nice idea!!! fix now!!
img
01:33:205 (2,3) - Try " CTRL+G " is more better. OK
01:36:205 (1,2,3,4) - I feel tight. Please use this cord. OK
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396,160,97277,2,0,P|428:188|464:200,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:56:348 (3,4) - Jump does not fit it here. i change it to jump (3) only
02:19:062 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Suggestion to clean it more. Please use code. it if you understand yes...really clean a lot
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02:33:420 (2,3,1) - Do you use the triangle? OK
img
02:37:062 (2,3) - It is a very quiet part. You should employ a slider. (add green line and use slider velocity multiplier *0.75 ) OK,but i try my rhythm
03:02:134 (2) - Move X:156 Y:248 and 03:02:348 (3) - Move X:236 Y:188 mean a quadrangle. fix
img
03:36:205 - ~ 03:36:205 (1,2) - Slider velocity multiplier : *0.5. It is hard to play one becoming slow suddenly. Please Remapping *0.75 OK
[Insane]
00:02:562 (2) - Add whistle on slider end. add
00:04:920 (3) - Remove whistle on slider end. whistle does not match the breathing point imo. OK
00:10:920 (2) - Remove whistle on slider head. and Add whistle on slider end. OK
00:16:170 (3) - Remove note. You must not put note in the point where there is not a sound. fix
00:41:455 - and 00:41:562 - add note. add
00:43:062 (1) - Move X:252 Y:36 OK
00:54:205 (3,4,5,6) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. OK
00:55:062 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It is hard to read this stream. Try an arrange like this. OK
00:55:920 (1,2) - Add whistle on slider end. add
01:01:491 (3,4) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try " CTRL+G " more better flow imo. good flow
01:07:062 (1) - Not too fond of the straight flow here. Try this. nice:D
img
01:09:312 (6) - Overmapped remove note better. i make other thing here
01:25:062 (3) - Nazi. Please do Mapping more neatly. (Blanket) OK
img
01:34:062 (1) - Remove New Combo and Add New Combo here 01:34:491 (3) - fix
01:40:491 (5) - I kinda want a regular soft whistle here. (slider end) OK-0-
01:58:062 (5,1) - This slider should be further from the previous slider even if you have placed it there to make a blanket together with "place" sliders. OK
img
02:24:098 (2) - Distance Snap is broken. It's hard to read. fix
02:25:812 (8) - Only in here, why is Distance 1.1? I think should be use "Distance 0.8" fix
02:56:455 (6) - Move 02:56:670 - here. Please listen to melody. good!!!
03:00:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Do not fit a melody. Please listen to music well. good rhythm ...fix
03:03:205 (5) - I kinda want a regular clap here. add
03:13:920 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same as 03:00:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - OK
03:21:098 (4) - Remove note. only this. OK
03:24:098 - Add note. add
03:27:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as 03:00:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - OK

Nice mapset ! "Hard" and "Insane" diff need more work. Get 2-3 more mods and then call me back again
I'll recheck you are map :3 Good Luck. OK

thanks a lot of Satellite

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,783 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2014-09-02T15:52:41+00:00

[quote="appleeaterx"[Hinsvar's Normal]
02:19:705 (2) - maybe something like this for the flow? http://puu.sh/8mXtp.jpg Oops, it isn't here anymore.[/quote]

[quote="Project Railgun":1337][Hinsvar's Normal]

00:07:062 (2) - Move this to x:456, y:189 to stack properly with 00:04:062 (4) - ...
00:10:277 (6) - I personally prefer using a circle here but your current 1/2 slider also works (it is a bit confusing though, and there is no easy to accompany its difficulty) Sure.
00:12:205 (1,2) - Is there any reason why these two objects are so far away from each other and have no flow? If you must, add a circle at 00:13:491 - and change the next slider to make it flow and look nicer. Fixed.
00:24:205 (3,4) - This pattern is a bit confusing (slider 1/1 circle wait, then 1/1 circle wait 1/2 slider wait). Consider replacing with a 1/1 slider instead to match your previous and next pattern. ^
01:10:491 (1) - Move to x:162, y:259 to stack with 01:08:777 (1) -. You may also want to consider slightly moving the objects so that the red vertex on 01:10:491 (1) - meets the line of the Y-axis. (Symmetry) I'm sure they already stack pretty well.
01:35:134 (2,3) - This doesn't look right to me, maybe a different slider pattern? How can it look wrong?
02:19:705 (2,3) - Slider 2 points in the opposite direction of circle 3. This may be intentional, but it is somewhat confusing and may make the novice player sliderbreak. Given that there is no Easy difficulty in this mapset, I strongly suggest that you change this and make it flow. I'm sure this is fine. Played around a bit with the shape though.
02:22:491 (1) - Move to x:320 y:372 to stack with 02:20:777 (3) - ...Did stuff.
02:23:562 (2,3,4) - Going right then back left feels weird from my perspective. Try Ctrl+H'ing the slider 4 or go for symmetry across the Y-axis here. I'm pretty sure this is fine.
03:20:777 (3) - This object goes off the grid quite a bit. Try bring it in more (to help support the people that play with 4:3 resolution). This won't affect them. It isn't that off.
03:31:062 (3,4,5,6) - This is the only time that you use this pattern in the whole song. I strongly suggest that you change it. Maybe use a 1/1 slider somewhere instead? Then why? It isn't confusing at all.
03:32:777 (1) - Use a nicer slider like this instead:

Refined my current slider.

Good luck~

AndreasHD wrote:
First, you need to change the timing of you'r kiai so it's the same as the other difficulties. I'll leave this to wmtokok.

00:08:777 (1) - New Combo. Done.

01:00:205 (1) - Drag this one tick to the right, just so the spacing get's right. ...I think it's fine here.

01:39:205 (4) - Drag this two tick down, so it get's the right spacing. Fixed.

Pereira006 wrote:
[Hinsvar's Normal]

Hitsound:

01:01:920 (2) - missing add whistle in end slider There isn't anything to emphasize.
01:14:562 (2) - ruin me... remove whistle What?
01:17:348 (1) - in end slider, that whisle ruin me a lot, i don't like Fits the song though.

Gameplay:

00:08:777 (4) - this could put new combo color right? The lyrics and song is change Yep.
01:10:491 (1) - (nazi) the end point need grid 1 down to perfect shape in first point Already perfect as is.
02:24:205 (3) - (nazi) the end point need grid 1 up Okay.

Satellite wrote:
[Hinsvar's Normal]
00:04:062 (4) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Why do you respond suddenly in Back　Melody? I think more better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. Did something similar.
00:09:420 (5,6,7) - Same as above. ^
00:15:205 (3) - Remove whistle. whistle does not match the breathing point imo. Done.
00:18:848 - add note? I think same as point 00:17:134 - ^
00:19:062 (1) - The fact that you don't use any hitsound for that drum that goes every white tick in this section makes me sad, but oh well. Wait, there is one? I'm sure I'm not hearing any drums.
00:52:920 (4) - Distance snap is not indicated. Please check this. Fixed.
01:08:777 (1) - Is New Combo of this point really necessary? I think not need. Remove New Combo better. ^
01:13:920 (1) - Too soon after a spinner. It definitely doesn't give players enough recovery. ^
01:20:562 - Add note. It is necessary for securing of constant rhythm. ^
01:23:991 - Same as above. ^
01:26:777 (6) - Do you not make form more neatly? Please think to see Grid. ^
img
01:37:705 - Add note. The reason is the same as other points. ^
01:38:562 (2,3,4) - Try an arrange like this. I think that more better. ^
02:01:705 - Add note. The reason is the same as other points. ^
02:09:420 (1) - Too soon after a spinner. It definitely doesn't give players enough recovery. | I'm very sure a 3/2 beats of gap should be fine and not too soon.
02:14:777 (4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. Where's the link or picture? lol. I think I know what do you want though, so changed.
02:54:634 (3) - Add "Sampleset : D + Clap. Only Drum sampleset without a clap should be fine, I think.
Difficulty is anxious about a thing more than 1.99 I still think that this is easy enough though, so no worries.

Thanks!

@wmtokok: Please make the kiai consistent for me, thanks o/

lol

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wmtokok

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wmtokok 2014-09-02T16:30:22+00:00

Hinsvar wrote:
@wmtokok: Please make the kiai consistent for me, thanks o/ done

@Hinsvar: I see your diff forget of

1. Remove TAG :senya
2. Preview Time set "15420"
3. Open epilepsy warning

I help you make the kiai , 1 , 2 and 3 on the update

Update on 3/9/2014

[ Setsuna ]

422 posts

Joined October 2013

[ Setsuna ] 2014-09-03T05:20:17+00:00

Hello! I came from #modreqs

*=Personal Suggestion
**=Should Fix
***=FIX NOW LOL

[Hinsvar's Normal]
*00:19:062 (1) - Maybe change this into something else, it's missing the clap hitsound.
*00:43:062 (1) - Maybe put a beat on the white tick after this slider.
**01:11:777 (1) - Make this spinner longer (to the next white tick)

Notes: Not much problems (BAT GD OP), I like this.

[Hard]
*00:08:777 (1) - This slider looks weird, not sure if it was meant to be like that.
*02:22:062 (4) - Put this a little higher, as it doesn't look good like that >.>.
*02:55:062 (1) - No NC
**03:34:491 (1,2,3,4) - 1,3,4 Have the same hitsound, while 2 has a different hitsound. Should fix this and make them all the same....

Notes: Not much problems (Again), I like this.

[Insane]
*00:22:062 (6) - I don't know about this, it just feels.... er, out of place.
**00:28:491 (3,4,5,6) - Weird stream, maybe use slider to stream converter?
**00:41:562 (3) - This is out of place (in contrast to the other two beats before it)
**00:42:098 (2) - ^
*00:55:920 (1) - No NC
01:25:920 (1,2) - This is not a mod, I just wanted to say this sounds awesome

*01:34:062 (6) - I don't know what to say about this too, as I said earlier it feels "out of place".
02:36:205 (1,2) - This sounds awesome too!

Notes: As a Insane, it's bound to have more problems then the other ones..... BUT it's still fun to play. I like this.

Please give me feedback on my mod!

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