Team "Hanayamata" - Hana wa Odore ya Irohaniho (TVsize) · forum

iyasine

Joined January 2012

iyasine 2014-08-04T10:14:01+00:00

Guy wrote:
RecheckなのでNO KDでお願いします

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[iyasine's Hard]
多分大丈夫だとは思うけどちょっと連打が多くてNormalとの難易度差が心配です。最低難易度がNormalなのでHardはもう少しだけ易しめの方が推奨されます。今回は気になったと言うことだけ書いておきます！ギリギリをついてみたけどやっぱりアカンか・・・(ﾟoﾟ) 次から3diff編成のHard作るときはもっと簡単にします！２ヶ所ほど3連をやめました！00:23:616 - 01:23:991 -
01:23:897 (3,4,1) - 音取りは問題ないけど配置的な理由でリズムとりづらいです。4をスタックさせない方がいいと思います。fixed!超叩きやすくしました！
01:25:960 (3,4) - 微妙にずれてるのは意図的だったり・・・？　テスト画面でもそれほど変化がある訳でもないのでわかりやすくスタックさせておいたほうが良さそうです。missでしたo.o; 完全にスタックしました！
Call me back!

がいマンrecheckご苦労様

助言感謝します (*˘ω˘*)

http://puu.sh/aE9oR/3802534857.zip

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2014-08-04T11:16:02+00:00

rerecheck dayo

[General]

コンボカラーがInsaneにしか適用されてないのでHardとNormalにもコピーして適用してください
SPOILER

[Insane]

00:24:460 (3) - 00:23:710 (1) - の終端に完全にスタックしよう。x309 y96

[litoluna's Normal]

01:00:460 (3) - 3/4でsnapされています。1/1に直してください。
01:18:269 - 緑線直ってないぞーーー　01:18:272 - にsnapしてください。

Momovely

Topic Starter

Momovely 2014-08-04T11:30:57+00:00

[quote="Guy"]rerecheck dayo

[General]

コンボカラーがInsaneにしか適用されてないのでHardとNormalにもコピーして適用してください
SPOILER

コピーしました！

[Insane]

00:24:460 (3) - 00:23:710 (1) - の終端に完全にスタックしよう。x309 y96

スタックさせました！

チェックありがとうございます！m(_ _)m

litoluna

1,074 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2014-08-04T11:51:54+00:00

Guy wrote:
rerecheck dayo

[litoluna's Normal]
01:00:460 (3) - 3/4でsnapされています。1/1に直してください。
01:18:269 - 緑線直ってないぞーーー　01:18:272 - にsnapしてください。

Guysamagomennnsaaigomennnsaigomennsnaigo2dome
直しました。。。

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2014-08-04T11:58:37+00:00

go go

Momovely

Topic Starter

Momovely 2014-08-04T12:01:01+00:00

Guy wrote:
go go

いくぜー！

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

3,686 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2014-08-04T19:11:27+00:00

Go Go ~

残念ながらunrank要素はなかった模様

Last edited by Satellite 2014-08-08T07:39:22+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Momovely

Topic Starter

Momovely 2014-08-05T01:09:39+00:00

Satellite wrote:
Go Go ~

残念ながらunrank要素はなかった模様

白文字で書くな！ｗ

Momovely

Topic Starter

Momovely 2014-08-10T07:20:53+00:00

修正箇所

00:46:022 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - 　

気づいた頃にはあっぷでーと押してました。。

m(_ _)m

https://www.dropbox.com/s/52b41zwyc6rs6 ... ize%29.osz

アップデートする前のやつです。

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2014-08-10T13:21:09+00:00

At a request from mapper, a bit changing placement.
map have been updated.

Rebubbled.

Momovely

Topic Starter

Momovely 2014-08-11T04:45:17+00:00

Guy wrote:
At a request from mapper, a bit changing placement.
map have been updated.

Rebubbled.

ありがと！

Akie-

47 posts

Joined September 2013

Akie- 2014-08-27T09:32:41+00:00

yoyoyo
[Insane]

00:09:460 (5) - Clap外してWhistleでもいいかな。
00:10:210 (1) - add Whistle
00:17:710 (1) - 00:18:460 (4) - 00:19:210 (1) - add Finish or add Clap
00:34:210 (1) - Whistle外してFinish
00:36:085 (1) - Finish外してClap
00:37:023 (7) - add Clap
00:37:117 (8) - remove Clap
00:43:210 (1) - add Clap?
00:52:960 (3) - add Finish?
00:59:147 (4) - add Whistle
00:59:897 (2) - add Whistle
01:00:647 (6) - add Whistle
01:01:397 (2) - add Whistle
01:04:960 (3) - add Finish?
01:04:960 (3) - ここでkiai切ってもいい気がする。
01:20:710 (1) - add Finish
01:26:710 (1) - add Finish

まだInsaneしか作ったことないのでInsaneしか見れませんでした。

Momovely

Topic Starter

Momovely 2014-08-27T09:42:11+00:00

Akie- wrote:
yoyoyo
[Insane]

00:09:460 (5) - Clap外してWhistleでもいいかな。
00:10:210 (1) - add Whistle
00:17:710 (1) - 00:18:460 (4) - 00:19:210 (1) - add Finish or add Clap
00:34:210 (1) - Whistle外してFinish
00:36:085 (1) - Finish外してClap
00:37:023 (7) - add Clap
00:37:117 (8) - remove Clap
00:43:210 (1) - add Clap?
00:52:960 (3) - add Finish?
00:59:147 (4) - add Whistle
00:59:897 (2) - add Whistle
01:00:647 (6) - add Whistle
01:01:397 (2) - add Whistle
01:04:960 (3) - add Finish?
01:04:960 (3) - ここでkiai切ってもいい気がする。
01:20:710 (1) - add Finish
01:26:710 (1) - add Finish
まだInsaneしか作ったことないのでInsaneしか見れませんでした。

Last edited by Momovely 2014-11-23T07:33:00+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,480 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-08-27T10:49:29+00:00

irc modded with the mapper, fixed some hitsounds issues in insane diff.

irc log

2014-08-27 17:34 Fycho: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/460456 Team "Hanayamata" - Hana wa Odore ya Irohaniho (TVsize) [Insane]]
2014-08-27 17:34 Fycho: 00:07:397 - this clap should be removed
2014-08-27 17:34 Momovely: ok!
2014-08-27 17:35 Fycho: 00:10:585 - clap here ,not whistle
2014-08-27 17:36 Fycho: 00:10:960 - 00:11:335 - both are clap, please remove whistle
2014-08-27 17:37 Momovely: OK!
2014-08-27 17:37 Fycho: 00:37:023 (7) - add clap?
2014-08-27 17:38 Momovely: ooh
2014-08-27 17:38 Momovely: good idea!
2014-08-27 17:38 Fycho: there are many drums in music
2014-08-27 17:38 Fycho: adding clap will be good!
2014-08-27 17:38 Fycho: 00:39:460 (4) - sliderhead add clap too
2014-08-27 17:39 Momovely: add

Here are the rest diffs:

[Mod Info]

Black: Suggestions
Bold: Important things. You should consider
Red: Unrankable issues. You Must Fix

[iyasine's Hard]

00:12:741 (5,6,7) –this pattern is quite hard for hard player to read, I highly recommend you change this, for example this rhythm, http://puu.sh/b9S4R/78fad22395.jpg
00:52:210 –use 80% volume to be consistent with01:04:210 -?
00:57:647 –volume is big for here, I’d advise you to reduce the volume to 70%

[litoluna's Normal]

01:14:710 (1) –The reverse arrow 01:15:460 - should be added clap not whistle, it’s snare-drum not kick drum, so clap fits it better
01:16:210 –same^

pretty nice mapset, you can poke guy to rebubble first since you got a mod when it's bubbled, then I can rank it.

Last edited by Fycho 2014-08-27T11:04:23+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Momovely

Topic Starter

Momovely 2014-08-27T10:53:55+00:00

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Last edited by Momovely 2015-03-03T05:39:39+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Momovely

Topic Starter

Momovely 2014-08-27T11:08:22+00:00

[quote="Fycho"]irc modded with the mapper, fixed some hitsounds issues in insane diff.

irc log

2014-08-27 17:34 Fycho: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/460456 Team "Hanayamata" - Hana wa Odore ya Irohaniho (TVsize) [Insane]]
2014-08-27 17:34 Fycho: 00:07:397 - this clap should be removed
2014-08-27 17:34 Momovely: ok!
2014-08-27 17:35 Fycho: 00:10:585 - clap here ,not whistle
2014-08-27 17:36 Fycho: 00:10:960 - 00:11:335 - both are clap, please remove whistle
2014-08-27 17:37 Momovely: OK!
2014-08-27 17:37 Fycho: 00:37:023 (7) - add clap?
2014-08-27 17:38 Momovely: ooh
2014-08-27 17:38 Momovely: good idea!
2014-08-27 17:38 Fycho: there are many drums in music
2014-08-27 17:38 Fycho: adding clap will be good!
2014-08-27 17:38 Fycho: 00:39:460 (4) - sliderhead add clap too
2014-08-27 17:39 Momovely: add

All Fix!

very very helpful

Thank you for watching my map!

litoluna

1,074 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2014-08-27T11:21:20+00:00

@fycho
ok~
all fixed!!

thanks modding><

iyasine

1,135 posts

Joined January 2012

iyasine 2014-08-27T11:30:16+00:00

Fycho wrote:
irc modded with the mapper, fixed some hitsounds issues in insane diff.

[iyasine's Hard]
00:12:741 (5,6,7) –this pattern is quite hard for hard player to read, I highly recommend you change this, for example this rhythm, fixed!http://puu.sh/b9S4R/78fad22395.jpg
00:52:210 –use 80% volume to be consistent with01:04:210 -? Yes
00:57:647 –volume is big for here, I’d advise you to reduce the volume to 70% ok~ vol70% → 60%!

pretty nice mapset, you can poke guy to rebubble first since you got a mod when it's bubbled, then I can rank it.

Thx ふぃこ！

http://puu.sh/b9UQ4/20ac499c49.rar

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2014-08-27T12:55:47+00:00

pon