ErunamoJAZZ
ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
Hola ola k ase
[hard][taiko]
- 00:23:746 (1) - NC? Neh, queda muy corto el combo si no, lo dejo así.
- 00:26:371 (5) - NC? Este si que lo agrego.
- 00:35:746 (3) - Fix spacing. Si querías hacer un jump... bueno.. uno de esos necesitaría más espacio... xD cambios de 1.0x a 1.1x no se sienten como jumps, si no como cosas mal espaciadas. Oh sure, fixed.
- 00:38:559 (3) - blanket con (4)? Nope, Está bien así, no todo tienen que ser blankets D:
- 00:48:684 (1) - blanket con (10)? K. Listo.
- 00:49:246 (2) - si mejoraras el blanket con (1), sería cool. No :<
- 00:51:684 (6) - NC Sip, agregado.
- 00:52:059 (2) - mm.. y si le cambias la concavidad? Supongo que ya xD.
- 00:53:371 (1) - fix spacing, misma razón de antes. Sisi, fixed.
- 00:57:684 (1,3,5,7) - quizás si les mejoraras los blankes.. aunque no sé si quieras :/ Yo lo veo bien así, me gusta, lo dejo como está.
- 01:00:684 (1) - OJO, esto creo que es unrankable http://puu.sh/9sC8n/bb8eb327bd.jpg, no debes tapar las flechas de repetición con nada. Nunca. K, lo cambié un poco.
- 01:06:309 (5) - blanket con (2) Hecho.
- 01:07:246 (2) - Fix spacing. Debería ser consistente en todo el combo, ya que quizás no estás con la intención de hacer un jump. (creo que lo correcto es que todo esté a 1.1x) Ya.
- 01:11:371 (5) - dat antijump *¬* Y que hago con esto? XDDD
- 01:12:309 (3) - fix spacing. Ya.
- 01:16:996 (4) - por temas estéticos, es mucho mejor que procures hacer un stack con (2). No soy estético, y queda como está
- 01:23:746 (2) - respecto al flow, entra bien, pero sale mal Yo lo siento bien o.o
Como de taiko no se nada, no puedo opinar, aunque se oyen bien Bueno, al menos alguna critica constructiva me hiciste (?
Suerte con el mapa
Senritsu
Tanke for mod!Senritsu wrote:
Hi! Hello!
Coming mod from mingmichael's queue. I'm helping him temporarily.
Don't worry; he will check your map again sooner / later
I'm only modding the taiko diffs. XD
[General]SPOILERadd 'opening' to tags Sure.
my opinion is 01:03:684 is better for start of the kiai time, and it ended at 01:23:184. The kiai is ok, i'm not changing it.
For taiko : change the BG code from 0,0,"BG.jpg",0,100 to 0,0,"BG.jpg",0,80 Did it.
i can't SS it, due my slow internet. *headbang* but you will see the difference between them
[Muzukashii]SPOILER00:20:371 (20) - try changing this to d. following the music, which is lower than both 00:19:996 (19,21) - Sure.
00:21:309 add d here? there's still music here; imo try not to make it empty, because the music is also dominant there Yes, added.
00:23:371 (31,32,33) - change this kkd? because you can faintly hear the music here 00:23:371 (31) - almost same with 00:23:559 (32) - why? because it's really really faint, and not as heavy as 00:23:746 (33) - well this is just a suggestion tho.. I preffer not, its following the music better on my way.
if you change that, change 00:24:121 (34,35,36) - to dkd to suit it with the music I've changed it to dkk.
00:26:746 (43,44) - add finish here? if you hear it closely, the music is very strong there Added on 44.
00:31:621 add d here, because you're following the vocal which is available there Not a bad suggestion, but i preffer not. I feel that space better than adding that d.
00:37:621 try adding d here too? same reason as above.. this is just suggestion too I've thinked about it too, but i didn't want to do a large pattern since is a muzukashii.
00:51:121 add d. same reason as above I Like this one, added.
01:19:996 (67,68,69,70) - add finish there, because the music is giving 'pressure' to them Yep, you're right, added.
Your diff is mostly following the vocal, and not considering the instrument as well. It's a pretty nice diff though. >w< Oh, thanks >w<
[Oni]SPOILER00:20:371 (24) - change to d with same reason as muzu Same Suggestion on same part, same answer, changed.
00:19:996 (23,24,25,26) - add finish? because the music is loud and stuffs (?) Dont feel like adding finishers there.
00:22:340 try adding d here. because the music sounds like triplet. i know it sounds better with ddk, but it would seems like too out of place. Not a bad suggestion, but i'll keep it as it is.
00:26:746 (52,53) - add finish here. music xD Added on 52.
00:31:621 try add dd (1/4) here. and make the pattern ddk. it will 'seems' like you're following both vocal and drum ;3 I've did something here, not what you told me through.
00:52:246 try making something like this. http://puu.sh/9sUu6.jpg it follows the music well (the line is at 00:52:246) Woah, it sounds very good, added.
00:54:965 and 00:55:527 add d with same reason as above Yep, same.
01:07:996 (23,24,25,26) - change this to D K D K because the music sounds strong there Added them.
01:09:871 add d here. there's the drum faintly can be heard Sure.
01:19:996 (83,84,85,86) - add finish with same reason as muzu Same as i said, added.
01:10:059 (31) - add finish here because the music is loud? Yep.
01:26:184 (110) - remove this. too long and too boring. give it a break to player Nope, they dont need a break there, since its all kdkdk and not something like kdddkdddk.
01:27:684 (117) - and change this to d, because the music stops rising at 01:27:496, and faintly you can hear drum quitely there. Yep, changed.
Nice diff at average, but try to fill the kiai time more to make it more fun and exciting to play I meant to make an easy oni since all the oni's are getting more harder and harder.
Good luck!