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[ General]
Easy's Preview time is at 63696ms while the others are at 63311ms, try to make it consistent pretty please c:
(for Taikos) The hitsounds are too soft ;w; I could barely hear them over the song (and yes, I play at full hitsound volume), you can make it better by raising the volume to 100% OR using normal sampleset OwO
(for Taikos)You should move down your bg since now one of the girls kawaii desu ne head is obstructed, You can see the tutorial (made by mint ww)in the spolierbox below.
[ Muzu]
00:23:371 - Add a d here to be consistent with 00:17:371 , they have literally the same rhythm
00:24:121 - ^
00:36:871 (72,73,74,75) - Well imo making these k d k d instead of all d's will fit the vocals that go high-low-high-low better
00:41:746 - Since the vocals become lower here, d sounds better here OwO
01:18:496 - This place is seriously lacking a note while I'm testing since you kinda ignored the vocals here ;w; Add a d here as it plays better
01:18:871 - Remove this note if you followed the mod above to avoid having a 1/2 that's too long ;w;
01:18:684 - this big note is pretty awkward as where it is now, I would suggest removing it
Well overall the Muzu is fine, but there are some big note placement that felt very strange/awkward to me ;w; See suggestions below for addition/removal of finishes ._.
[ Oni]
1/4 streams ending with a big note just looks ugly :<
00:21:309 (27,28) - Any reason behind why both of these are kats here but dons at 00:15:309 (1,2) ? o3o I would make them consistent since the instrument which has 1/4 beats are pretty much the same in both points
00:36:871 (98,99,100,101,102,103) - same as muzu having a k d k d rhythm seems to complemet the music better ~ try kkd k d or something similar here?
00:52:059 - make this a d to be consistent with 00:55:059 since you have an obvious ddk hitsound placement here
00:57:215 - well the drums doesn't appear here but at 00:57:402 so move the note there instead kk
00:57:684 (189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211) - well i like the pattern you're using here <3
01:22:809 - just saying d here sounds better to me XD
01:27:121 (114,116) - hmmm make both of these k like in Muzu? the music gets stronger here
01:28:059 (118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126) - Well the music goes from low-high here but you have kkkkdddd which is pretty flow-breaking (even though you probably did that to make the finishes rankable). Well, a rankable and better solution would be just ddddkkk K K ;w;
Like the Oni >w<
That's all djakdhaksjhdkjda Good luck for rank djsahjkashfkjfa
[ General]
Easy's Preview time is at 63696ms while the others are at 63311ms, try to make it consistent pretty please c:
(for Taikos) The hitsounds are too soft ;w; I could barely hear them over the song (and yes, I play at full hitsound volume), you can make it better by raising the volume to 100% OR using normal sampleset OwO
(for Taikos)You should move down your bg since now one of the girls kawaii desu ne head is obstructed, You can see the tutorial (made by mint ww)in the spolierbox below.
SPOILER
1. Go to Edit Mode and pick your song.
2. Click File at the top left and click "Open .osu in the Notepad"
3. Slide down to the [Events] and you'll see something like this:
2. Click File at the top left and click "Open .osu in the Notepad"
3. Slide down to the [Events] and you'll see something like this:
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,04. Change to:
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,1005. And you'll done! Be make sure to do it to both Muzu and Oni.
[ Muzu]
00:23:371 - Add a d here to be consistent with 00:17:371 , they have literally the same rhythm
00:24:121 - ^
00:36:871 (72,73,74,75) - Well imo making these k d k d instead of all d's will fit the vocals that go high-low-high-low better
00:41:746 - Since the vocals become lower here, d sounds better here OwO
01:18:496 - This place is seriously lacking a note while I'm testing since you kinda ignored the vocals here ;w; Add a d here as it plays better
01:18:871 - Remove this note if you followed the mod above to avoid having a 1/2 that's too long ;w;
01:18:684 - this big note is pretty awkward as where it is now, I would suggest removing it
Well overall the Muzu is fine, but there are some big note placement that felt very strange/awkward to me ;w; See suggestions below for addition/removal of finishes ._.
m(._.)m Imma friggin spider
00:27:684 - This note should be a big one since the guitar is similar as 00:30:684, even though its not as strong, its still on the big white tick so not having it as a big note just seems...strange D:
00:39:121 - owo
hm imo 01:06:684 doesn't warrant a finisher for itself since the music isn't particularly outstanding, and also you didn't put finishes at the similar beats like 01:12:684 while 01:07:996 (20,21,22,23) AND parts that have the same strong guitar in the kiai certainly deserved to be emphasized more :3
00:39:121 - owo
hm imo 01:06:684 doesn't warrant a finisher for itself since the music isn't particularly outstanding, and also you didn't put finishes at the similar beats like 01:12:684 while 01:07:996 (20,21,22,23) AND parts that have the same strong guitar in the kiai certainly deserved to be emphasized more :3
[ Oni]
1/4 streams ending with a big note just looks ugly :<
00:21:309 (27,28) - Any reason behind why both of these are kats here but dons at 00:15:309 (1,2) ? o3o I would make them consistent since the instrument which has 1/4 beats are pretty much the same in both points
00:36:871 (98,99,100,101,102,103) - same as muzu having a k d k d rhythm seems to complemet the music better ~ try kkd k d or something similar here?
00:52:059 - make this a d to be consistent with 00:55:059 since you have an obvious ddk hitsound placement here
00:57:215 - well the drums doesn't appear here but at 00:57:402 so move the note there instead kk
00:57:684 (189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211) - well i like the pattern you're using here <3
01:22:809 - just saying d here sounds better to me XD
01:27:121 (114,116) - hmmm make both of these k like in Muzu? the music gets stronger here
01:28:059 (118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126) - Well the music goes from low-high here but you have kkkkdddd which is pretty flow-breaking (even though you probably did that to make the finishes rankable). Well, a rankable and better solution would be just ddddkkk K K ;w;
Like the Oni >w<
That's all djakdhaksjhdkjda Good luck for rank djsahjkashfkjfa