Remillion Cross wrote:

second here huehehe
hi Rumia `w`/
sorry for a delay T_T
for me, your pattern is very great and i won't touching this too much, so this is just a suggestion for you

[Normal]
*00:10:048 (10048|2) - move to 2nd column, it will make the better view like this http://puu.sh/9j0GW/6f4737d431.jpg
*00:18:951 (18951|2) - disable the finish hitsounds, just one is already fit with the music imo
*00:25:145 (25145|0,25145|6) - add a finish hitsound, maybe just one or two circles
*00:37:532 (37532|1) - add a finish hitsound for follow the element of music in here
*00:39:080 - suggestion : follow the vocals for this ( http://puu.sh/9j10e/82b8a063e0.jpg )
*00:52:435 (52435|1) - move to 1st column didnt move for self preference pattern
*00:59:209 (59209|4) - add a finish hitsound here, or you also can applied this to 00:59:209 (59209|2) - too for a better hearding finish hitsound added one
*01:05:403 (65403|2) - ^
other's without replies are fixed
[Hard]
*00:49:532 (49532|3) - the slider's end is not snapped >_> http://puu.sh/9j1nu/e6a0c5097c.jpg fixed
*00:12:758 (12758|3) - my suggestion : better if you delete this and add 2 circles in here for consistency ( http://puu.sh/9j1tV/ffbb572523.jpg ). Also, don't forget to apply a finish hitsound in one of them it is quite hard to press these notes with the shields , prefer to keep it
If you didn't agree, just add a finish hitsound here added
*00:23:887 (23887|4) - this circle should follow the electric-guitar sound in 00:23:790 - following the bassdrum
*00:25:145 (25145|4,25145|0) - add a finish hitsound here
*00:37:532 (37532|1) - add a finish hitsound here
*00:59:209 (59209|4) - ^
added all finish
[Insane]
*00:01:145 (1145|5) - move to 7th column, it will be support the other pattern such as 00:01:532 (1532|4,1532|6) and 00:01:919 (1919|4,1919|6) its actually related to the previous pattern so no changes
*01:11:493 (71493|5) - http://puu.sh/9j2sJ/29d829bfc2.jpg unsnapped object
*00:12:758 (12758|1) - add a finish hitsound here
*00:37:532 (37532|1) - ^
*00:43:725 - just a suggestion : http://puu.sh/9j3Qq/ef866752c6.jpg prefered mine better
*00:59:209 (59209|0,59209|6) - add a finish hitsound here
*01:24:370 (84370|3) - the slider should ends at 01:29:209 (you can check the Normal or Hard for this too) fixed
added finish
[Extra]
*HP9 pls no
*00:08:935 - just a suggestion : http://puu.sh/9j4PA/891031fa98.jpg i dont like to repeat the 1/8 in the same collumn , it is same as jackhammmer
*00:12:758 (12758|6) - add a finish hitsound here fixed
*00:22:241 (22241|3) - suggestion : move to 5th column fixed
*00:37:532 (37532|5) - add a finish too fixed
*00:53:403 (53403|6) - the slider should ends at 00:53:693 fixed
*nice LN thx

that's all, good luck~!

Simple_Star wrote:

Hello Poetmia~
Column:1 2 3 4 5 6 7
[Normal]
00:34:048 (34048|4) - Move to 7. 00:30:951 - ~ 00:41:403 - Haven't 7 orz moved some to 7 hhh

00:39:854 - A bit diffcult How about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1699395
or this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1699398 ah rethink about it yeah made a little simpler pattern but ww didnt use yours , thx for suggesting!

01:01:919 (61919|4) - Change to Hold end at 01:02:306 - fixed

[Hard]
00:11:016 - How about this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1699410 nice , but keep the last long notes for my preference

00:36:274 - Add a Note at 7

00:42:564 - Add a Note at 6 didnt add , focus on the main synth only

01:05:016 (65016|0) - Move to 5

01:15:854 (75854|6,76338|5) - Ctrl+J
fixed all ~

[Insane]
00:21:274 - 00:21:564 - 00:21:854 - Piano LN likes 00:19:725 - intentionally didnt map as LN , i made chord instead to give different feeling

00:48:951 - My suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1699434 nice

01:13:919 - Add 2~3Notes added~

01:23:983 - How about this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1699442 fix in different way~

[Extra]
00:22:919 (22919|1,22919|5) - Can't understand what catch orz.(If you catch)Piano long sound.It is in 00:22:822 - misplaced lolol

00:43:338 - Add a Note i think 4 notes is fine~

01:13:725 (73725|5,73725|1) - Change to Hold end at 01:13:919 - fixed

01:18:951 - My suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1699457 good!

01:23:403 (83403|2,83403|4) - Change to Hold end at 01:23:500 - fixed~

Good Luck~

Lokovodo wrote:

SPOILER

♥

short mod

[Normal]
00:40:145 (40145|1,40241|3,40241|5) - this plays kinda weird but i think its just me i suggest CRTL + H no i dont think its fit to mirror them . i removed the 3rd note for better reading for normals
01:06:951 i think this is calling for another note at 7 added~
00:17:403 add note? added~

(something to try)
00:58:822 move 5 to 6
00:59:016 move to 4
00:59:209 move 5 to 1
tried but i prefer the current pattern fits the song well , thanks for suggestions!
[Hard]
00:32:500 move 4 to 5?
00:39:854 (39854|1,39951|5,39951|3) - i like this CTRL + H (kind of like the previous difficulty) ok fixed this one looks better

(suggestion)
01:05:209 move to 3 fixed~!
01:05:403 move to 3 to 1 i prefer to keep this fits better with the previous one you asked to move~
[Insane + Extra]
I need to practice playing more ___.·´¯`(>▂<)´¯`·.___

Take my star you sexy rumia~! dat sexy! xD thanks for star!

yoshilove wrote:

nekooooooooo nekoneko suggestion

column : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

neko7K

[Normal]
00:09:080 - add note to 5??? prefer not adding notes , muzui ww
00:11:403 (11403|5,12177|5,12370|2,12370|4) - whistle
00:17:403 - add note to 4?
* 00:37:532 - add one note ??
01:20:112 - add note to 4 (00:10:048) only focus the vocal ~
other fixed~!

[Hard]
00:09:467 (9467|0) - whistle
00:09:854 (9854|4,10241|3,10629|2,11403|4,12177|5,12370|2,12370|4) - whistle
* 00:37:532 - add note to 4 or 6
00:42:370 ~ 00:42:758 - drum rhythm is wrong? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1702002 im following the synth~
00:43:725 - add note to 4 or 2
01:13:532 (73532|2,73532|4) - move to 01:13:435
01:13:725 - add note to 4
others fixed!z

[Insane]
00:01:048 (1048|1) - whistle
00:02:500 (2500|3,2596|1,2790|2,2887|5,2983|3) - whistle
a... 00:36:564 (36564|2,36661|4) - remove ---> 00:36:564 - add note to 3, 5 and 00:36:661 - add note to 4 i prefer the current one looks more clean~
* 00:37:532 - add note to 4
00:42:564 ~ 00:42:758 - drum rhythm is wrong? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1702028 ww same as hard diff~

00:43:048 and 00:43:338 - add note to 4 (mettya muzui!! very hard)

00:54:758 - Add LN ???
00:55:241 - ^

01:05:403 - add note to 4?
01:19:919 - ^ prefer not adding for consistency~

-
00:55:725 - nice LN wwww yey wwww yatta~!

[Extra]
00:17:403 - add note to 4?
00:24:274 (24274|1) - remove?? removed~ and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1702060 rearranged a little at this part
00:36:564 (36564|3) - LN end 00:36:758 www inconsistent ww
00:52:241 - add~ ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1702065
01:22:435 - add one note?
other fixed!

-
01:06:951 ~ 01:08:500 - nice pyaaaaaawwww http://puu.sh/9ovkd.JPG wwww

waaaaaaaa

Reikosaka wrote:

[Normal]

00:05:209 (5209|4,5209|2) - same pitch, move it to 2nd & 6th.

00:05:596 (5596|1,5596|5) - different pitch, move to 3rd & 7th.
fixed both of the above

00:07:338 - i think adding single note to every on-beat is better, so the patterns not only focusing vocal synth. might be hard for normal players so i guess this should be fine

00:24:370 (24370|4,24467|2,24661|4,24758|2) - this two pattern does have different pitch placement, i think this 00:24:467 (24467|2) - should be 2nd i didnt follow the pitch very accurate , but i rearranged this a little , thanks

00:48:951 (48951|5,48951|1) - this hold note should end 00:49:338 - then from the same place add hold note until 00:49:919 - , single or double is good. i want to extend the hold ignoring the hssss sound since its hard to alternate between the holds , and usually new player got nervous so this might actually helps

[Hard]

00:07:145 (7145|3) - in normal difficult you're placed double note in synth vocal, but this only single hold note. it's like not consistent. suggested hold note like http://puu.sh/9UKJW/e3e23b5b73.png or http://puu.sh/9UKMN/45fe03ce62.png the intro part i dont want it to be so crowded , it should be smooth flow , actually i think its already good , in nm i dont want to alternate them so focusing on vocal (doubles )on nm is okay since the vocal is stronger than the beat .

00:42:370 (42370|2,42467|3,42661|1,42758|2) - wonder which beat are you followed ? the keyboard , instead of the kicks

Rumia- wrote:

notice me bat-san~

ExPew wrote:

osu needs more tvsize

hutunohito wrote:

[Another]
00:08:887 (8887|0,8935|6,8983|5,9032|3,9080|1,9129|0,9177|4) -
1/6...?

hutunohito wrote:

[Another]
00:08:887 (8887|0,8935|6,8983|5,9032|3,9080|1,9129|0,9177|4) -
1/6...?

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Hi Rumia- I come for a small check at Another's diff:
[Another]
00:18:435 (18435|6) - move to 00:18:467 - (1/4)

Nice patterns and a very great song from fripSide >w< Good luck on re-rank!

sorry if I got mistake about this

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Hi Rumia- I come for a small check at Another's diff:
[Another]
00:18:435 (18435|6) - move to 00:18:467 - (1/4)

Nice patterns and a very great song from fripSide >w< Good luck on re-rank!

sorry if I got mistake about this

hutunohito wrote:

I checked with ExPew~
[Insane]
00:23:016 (23016|3) - start 00:23:112 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1945829 i dont think so..
[Another]
00:18:435 (18435|6) - 1/4
00:36:758 (36758|3,36806|4,36854|5) - 1/6
01:19:919 (79919|0,79983|1,80048|6) - 1/4

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

sorry, wrong posting ;w; Good luck on re-rank and the 1st black bullet's mania mapset!