1. Easy (1.9 stars, 208 notes)
2. Hard (3 stars, 470 notes)
3. Normal (2.45 stars, 109 notes)

PocketSizedNinja wrote:

I really, really like this song ♥
do you plan on making an insane difficulty? c:

1. remove the following for tags. these are unnecessary, imo
   kenshi yonezu
   not exactly vocaloid
2. title: メランコリーキッチン
   source: http://reissuerecords.net/yankee.html

1. hard to find rhythm, imo. even if hard diff, I suggest to conform DS to some extent
2. avoid overlapping. especially, avoid covering the slider's start or reversearrow.
   for example, 00:11:725 (3,4) - is not good
3. add NC in a regular way to some extent. for example, 00:37:772 (1,1,1) - is hard to see due to add NC frequently
4. there are very few curved siders and many angular sliders. that's so boring
5. too many 1/4 sliders like 00:18:004 (3) - . that's hard to find rhythm. for example, I suggest the following.
   
   and in this case, stack pattern is fine, too~
   
   SPOILER

   
6. the circle on the blue line like 01:18:818 (1) - is hard to find rhythm. you should avoid the pattern including it as far as possible.
   in this case, the pattern based on white line is better like this
   
7. 02:21:958- end kiai?

paseli wrote:

Mod from modding queue~

[Easy]
Meh map, with some bugs you need to fix:
Make sure you fix up ALL(!) the DS issues which AiMod is referring to (ctrl+shift+a, 'Check distance snap').fffffffffff i know. that happened last night when I was changing the SV.
Don't start to many new combos at points where not needed (e.g. 00:15:446 (1,1,1,1) - ,00:22:888 (1,1,1,1,1) - ). Usually, 4-5 objects in a combo is a good guideline for easy. oh yeah i was meaning to change those

00:33:586 - Up to this point, it is all too symmetrical.
00:48:004 - to 00:52:190 - random distances between sliders, make them equalok
01:14:516 (1,1) - This is flow breaking, I'd rearrange all circles can do
01:29:865 - insert break time here ok
01:33:586 - to 02:36:376 - you just copied this from the first part, this is really unintuitive and people will notice it. Have you considered using more 'round' sliders? i know.. (honestly it's a habit i have from being an artist: cover everything first then fix up the details.) I'll go fix it asap.

01:46:609 (1,2,1,1,2) - repetitive pattern to 00:24:749 (1,1,1,1,1) - , try another one out.
02:24:167 - on white tick please. it was
02:44:283 (1) - this spinner is way too long for an easy mapok
02:57:307 (3,4,5) - please use DS to fix these issues up
02:58:237 (5,1) - just as a tip, avoid this type of overlap in easier maps
03:03:818 (2,3,4,5) - as a sample: 90° patterns is not the way to go in this song imo, this looks better http://puu.sh/aGT0l/7be3b245c2.jpg
Your map is filled with those, replace some. diamond patterns are also good http://puu.sh/aGT53/7eeb9b8a3f.jpg
03:21:493 (4,1) - overlap, but the real problem is that you are recycling shapes again. Use another, here's an example http://puu.sh/aGTdQ/f9fc49d066.jpg
03:28:935 (1,1) - recycling ._.

[Normal]
Go with the following difficulty setup: HP 4/5, CS 3, AR 4/5, OD 4/5
Use 1/2 beats as a guideline for normal maps.
In normal maps, you need to check distance snap too, so use AiMod here again to fix all issues.ok

[Hard]
HP +2, CS -1.
Map this diff at least with Grid level 3 for finer tuning.
The map is still messy and shapeless, you have to reconsider some passages you mapped, here's the sample:
00:49:400 - to 00:53:702 - .

00:08:004 (1,2,3) - Okay, but here you can make more interesting sliders. Example: http://puu.sh/aGTFD/36ee40306f.jpg sure
00:11:725 (3,4) - This overlap doesn't look good, reposition slider 4 ok
00:18:935 - backslider to white tick
00:19:865 (3) - this ends up too abrupt. make circle+slider to go with the man's voice: http://puu.sh/aGTN2/81a75bd124.jpg
00:20:562 (5,6) - ^. Don't overuse this though, it ends up to be too repetitive. You can also make slider end on white tick instead.
00:25:446 - ^. This happens pretty often in your map, you can figure the other ones out easily
01:00:562 (1,2) - don't overlap these this way, the distances need to be clearer since players tend to tap at 1/4 beats here.
I won't mod further since it wouldn't help you at all. So I give you two guidelines for how you can make better slider patterns (which make up 50% of this map i think):
1. For aesthetical patterns, consider forming a slider according to the approachcircle of the incoming circles http://puu.sh/aGUg5/cd932f5168.jpg
i was considering this. i guess i wasn't too confident in my ability to pull it off. :/
2. Align sliders so they complement better to each other: http://puu.sh/aGUmI/ee28af6612.jpg , http://puu.sh/aGUqo/2f2484502c.jpg
3. Zigzag sliders also do their job in this map: http://puu.sh/aGUCy/856b97ffd9.jpg

^for all this. yeah you have a point i'll try and follow your advise

And please, remember: Never recycle so many patterns, I saw it happening in this map too.

[waratte]
Why would you torture people with a map with CS 7 ._. Don't go with too big DS if you are mapping this with the current CS. I... wasn't using cs7... but ok


That's all I can say to your map atm. Go with the guidelines I wrote for you and rework some stuff with them in mind.
You can actually make some decent maps out of this song.

Greetings,
paseli

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
mainly, basic indication

[General]

1. remove the following for tags. these are unnecessary, imo
   kenshi yonezu
   not exactly vocaloid hehehe ehhhh. why did I put that there. >>;
2. title: メランコリーキッチン Okay
   source: http://reissuerecords.net/yankee.html

[Hard]

1. hard to find rhythm, imo. even if hard diff, I suggest to conform DS to some extent sure
2. avoid overlapping. especially, avoid covering the slider's start or reversearrow.
   for example, 00:11:725 (3,4) - is not good totally
3. add NC in a regular way to some extent. for example, 00:37:772 (1,1,1) - is hard to see due to add NC frequently
4. there are very few curved siders and many angular sliders. that's so boring ok i'll change it
5. too many 1/4 sliders like 00:18:004 (3) - . that's hard to find rhythm. for example, I suggest the following.
   
   and in this case, stack pattern is fine, too~I'll look into that
   
   SPOILER

   
6. the circle on the blue line like 01:18:818 (1) - is hard to find rhythm. you should avoid the pattern including it as far as possible.
   in this case, the pattern based on white line is better like this sure i'll look into it.
   
7. 02:21:958- end kiai?oh yeah sure thing

I hope you finish your map

~Good Luck~