orioncomet wrote:

~[Over all]~
- Set a perview point
- remoeve the "," out of your TAG
- Source: Add some Source like Album or something
- Slider Tick Rate: 2

~[Vibrate [short ver.]]~
All notes on this diff are too hard to read, Plz make this diff to be easy more this, and so many hidden note when playing not good at an Easy diff too
Plz lower the Slider Velocity
00:32:045 (1) - what!!?? O.o first note isn't snapped
00:40:219 (3) - fail
01:03:904 (9) - ^
01:07:377 (4) - ^
01:19:693 (3) - ^
01:27:272 (3,4, 6) - ^
01:35:167 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:14:325 (1) - sound finish

~[Earthquake!!]~
01:10:221 (1) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:11:169 (3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:36:432 (3,5) - hidden notes are not make a sense
01:38:958 (1) - ^
01:46:537 (3,5) - ^
01:49:063 (1) - ^
02:10:221 (9) - make it end at 02:10:537
02:37:063 (3,5) - hidden notes
02:39:590 (1) - ^
02:47:169 (3,5) - ^
02:49:695 (1) - ^
02:52:221 (3,1) - ^
02:14:325 (1) - sound finish
03:16:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - WTF, this past want a warning like 'x2' or something
03:35:011 (1) - 02:14:325 (1) - sound finish

At last It's a NICE SONG, star

Estelle18 wrote:

ชั้นโดนบังคับมา -0-

termerys wrote:

Cheedar wrote:

Spacing mod D:
Well, do the repairs without grid snap and pressing ctrl.
*star*

[Normal]
Hm... Maybe you could make little hitcircles (Try 2nd tick) and increase Overall Difficulty (Try the middle tick). : ok fixed
00:57:906 (2) - Spacing
01:02:011 (2,3) - ^
01:03:274 (4) - ^
01:12:748 (2) - ^
01:15:590 (2) - ^
01:22:221 (2) - ^
01:23:484 (4) - ^
01:25:063 (4) - ^
01:31:063 (3) - ^
01:43:379 (2) - ^
01:53:484 (2) - ^
01:56:642 (7) - ^
02:03:274 (6) - ^
02:13:063 (5) - ^

[Hard]
00:36:432 (4) - Spacing
00:53:484 (1) - ^
00:58:221 (4) - ^
01:05:169 (1) - ^
01:06:116 (2) - ^
01:08:958 (1) - Align with 01:08:327 (4) middle : Fixed
01:19:695 (4) - Spacing
01:22:221 (4) - ^
01:23:484 (8) - ^
01:24:116 (2) - ^
01:38:958 (1,2,3) - Did you try to do a triangule here? : Yes
02:12:432 (4) - Spacing
02:30:748 (5) - ^
03:24:116 (1) - ^
03:28:537 (7) - ^

^
^
I already used distance snap, why it is still wrong in spacing?

1. Please delete osb.file since it's not used
2. countdown in normal is used while in Hard is not, please unify them
3. pop, michael jackson need not to add to tag since pop would add to Genre after ranked and michael jackson is inclued in artist

1. hit volume seem loud, try 60 like DJPop said
2. I feel it's lack of hitsound, try to find some custom sound if possible
3. Easier diff. doesn't mean shorter, why not map it to end?

1. 01:55:379 (3) - I don't think whistle fit here
2. 03:16:221 2xBPM - I think this part need a note to show "it's 2xBPM", it comes unexcepted
3. Still feel lack of hitsound

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. Please delete osb.file since it's not used : already
2. countdown in normal is used while in Hard is not, please unify them : i make it the same
3. pop, michael jackson need not to add to tag since pop would add to Genre after ranked and michael jackson is inclued in artist : oh i see

[Normal]

1. hit volume seem loud, try 60 like DJPop said : Roger
2. I feel it's lack of hitsound, try to find some custom sound if possible : I don't know how to put in the custom sound, but can i put whistle or clap inshead?
3. Easier diff. doesn't mean shorter, why not map it to end? : ok I agree

[Hard]

1. 01:55:379 (3) - I don't think whistle fit here : ok i agree
2. 03:16:221 2xBPM - I think this part need a note to show "it's 2xBPM", it comes unexcepted : ok already put in (I'm already put it in, but it missing, i don't know why
3. Still feel lack of hitsound : ok working on it

star

don't have time to check, but in case you don't know...

the .osb file is the storyboard file that applies to all difficulties. So if you only had storyboard for one diff, then delete .osb and full submit <-- This is important. If it does apply to all diffs, then keep it.

Note: Background doesn't count as storyboard unless you did stuff with it

YGOkid8 wrote:

you probably did something with the storyboard afterwards or something. when making difficulty specific storyboard, make sure you set the "Diff. Specific" box BEFORE you exit the design tab. Otherwise, the .osb will come back. Or that's how it goes for me anyway.

If that doesn't work, I dunno, you'll need to ask someone with more experience >.<

01:35:169 (1) - I highly recommend you to make this slider 1x speed too and start the 0,5x section here: 01:36:432. It follows the beat and is more intuitive.

02:35:800 (1) - I highly recommend you to make this slider 1x speed too and start the 0,5x section here: 02:37:063. It follows the beat.

fartownik wrote:

Offset +10 (32 021) i almost don't know the different, but it's better
then Timing -> Resnap All Notes done

The mp3 that you are using is longer than the mapped part. Please crop the unmapped part. It's a original one, so i don't want to crop it, it's not only that you download the song to play, but you still can listen and enjoy the song at once

The 2x warning appears on [Normal] too. Please delete the .osb file from the general folder and do the full submission. It won't matter if you cut the mp3, but you should do this. .osb deleted, .mp3 cutting^

Resnap all of the timing sections (or at least kiai starts/ends), example: 02:15:590 - the end of the kiai section is not centrainly on the tick. done

This map is generally not hitsounded. Please add some samples (especially in the middle of the map).will do

[Normal]

Increase HP Drain by 1 or 2 ticks. roger that

01:15:590 (2) - Curve it prettier? of corse!
01:35:169 (1) - I highly recommend you to make this slider 1x speed too and start the 0,5x section here: 01:36:432. It follows the beat and is more intuitive. WHY???
[01:56:642] - Move the start of the kiai section to this point. thanks
01:58:537 (6) - New combo. ok
02:13:379 (6) - Delete last 2 repeats. Read the advice below.
02:14:327 (1) - Move the spinner 1/1 back. ok


[Hard]

Resnap all of the timing sections (or at least kiai starts/ends), example: 02:15:590 - the end of the kiai section is not centrainly on the tick. done!
Ah, the 2x timing section has ruined this map. It would be good with no spacing changes. should i delete the 2x?

01:14:011 (1) - Move this spinner 1/4 back and expand it by 1/4. It sounds better. ok
01:36:432 (3) - New combo. ok
[01:56:642] - Move the start of the kiai section to this point. ok
02:35:800 (1) - I highly recommend you to make this slider 1x speed too and start the 0,5x section here: 02:37:063. It follows the beat. like i said on top
02:37:063 (3) - New combo. ok
02:47:169 (3) - ^ ^
02:54:748 (1) - Move this spinner 1/4 back and expand it by 1/4. It sounds better. actually, it's a original one, but vivere told me to do that (why should i do like him lol)
[02:57:274] - Move the start of the kiai section to this point. ok
03:20:800 (2) - Delete. Uninstall~~
03:29:800 (4) - Align it with (4).HOW?
03:30:432 (5) - New combo.ok

The 2x speed section in [Hard] is a bit messy, but the map is fine in general. Thanks for modded
+star +kudosu~

Lybydose wrote:

well, fartownik already said a lot of things I was going to post, but I'll confirm that you really should lolchange these things:

+8-9 offset i +10 offset =w=b

01:35:169 (1) - I highly recommend you to make this slider 1x speed too and start the 0,5x section here: 01:36:432. It follows the beat and is more intuitive. really?, i can play both of it >w<~

02:35:800 (1) - I highly recommend you to make this slider 1x speed too and start the 0,5x section here: 02:37:063. It follows the beat. ^

In addition to that, you REALLY should change the dark blue and dark grey combo colors. They are really hard to see against the background. Changed

Kiai is inconsistent between the two difficulties. Normal starts at 01:56:011, while Hard starts at 01:55:379. You should change normal so that it is the same as Hard. ok done

This song is really begging for more clap hitsound use. Hear the sound at 00:55:379? You should use claps to sync to that sound. For most of the song, the pattern will simply be a clap every 2 beats. In addition, the hitsounds are hard to hear. Increase the volume on the soft hitsounds for both difficulties. DJPop said that it's too loud, so, what should i do?

Hard:

01:57:590 (6) - I don't like the way this sounds. It seems like you are trying to follow the vocals, but the vocals are actually off-beat and don't really sync to the timeline. I think it sounds better if you just extend it 1/4.
02:07:695 (5) - ^
02:58:221 (6,7) - same as above, but you used circles here instead. I suggest adding a circle at 02:58:537 -
03:08:327 (6,7) - same, add circle at 03:08:642?

^ ok, i added more circles and sliders, hope that it will work with yours

1. Make the offset like the one Shulin posted, 916.
2. Delete the .osb file from song folder, like Shulin posted.
3. Capitalize the TAGs.

1. Decrease overall difficulty by one (?) Because it's the easiest difficulty.

Gladi wrote:

[General]

1. Make the offset like the one Shulin posted, 916. it sound strange, i'm not sure which offset should i use; Shulin or Lokamp
2. Delete the .osb file from song folder, like Shulin posted. done
3. Capitalize the TAGs.

[Hard]

01:54:920 (1,1,1) - Remove these New Combo marks.
01:56:814 (1) - Same here, remove New Combo on this one also.
02:04:709 (1) - Remove new combo here and then...
02:05:972 (3) - ...Add the new combo here.

[Normal]

1. Decrease overall difficulty by one (?) Because it's the easiest difficulty.

00:26:794 (2) - Spacing, (2) is too far away from (1).
00:45:426 (3) - Spacing, (3) is too far away from (2).

done

xxheroxx wrote:

You should make another difficulty, like an "Insane" .It get bubble already.
Also, you should map all the song :S I don't like normal diff in full version, i think it's too long for the easiest diff

[Normal]

Spacing is a bit weird. Keep "distance snap" active actually it active always, but some space still wrong

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

I don't see any sign lol

[General]
1. You may crop the unused part of the song. I think I deleted enough, it won't be good song if I delete it more
2. Delete the .osb file. done

[Normal]
00:46:389 (1) - Remove new combo, Then...
00:47:652 (3) - Add new combo.
00:49:547 (6) - Turn of distance snap, then move one tiny grid down.
00:58:073 (5) - Add new combo. Then...
00:59:021 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:00:284 (5) - Add new combo.
01:02:810 (3) - ^
01:07:863 (5) - Add new combo. Then...
01:09:126 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:15:442 (7) - Add new combo.
01:16:705 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:18:600 (4) - Add new combo.

[Hard]
00:40:231 (2) - Move one tiny grid right.

01:05:337 - I don't like how the distance changes suddenly from here.
02:04:705 - ^

it's s slow part of the song

done
Star.

YGOkid8 wrote:

i hope you didn't forget that when you delete the .osb file, you need to Full Submit?

termerys wrote:

umm.. can u re-download it again, please?
because i just test it and there's no .osb in there

YGOkid8 wrote:

termerys wrote:

umm.. can u re-download it again, please?
because i just test it and there's no .osb in there

ha ha, I'm not saying it's there, I'm just saying don't forget as a reminder

kingcobra52 wrote:

-The hitsound volumes for normal and hard are different (this is very noticeable in the chorus) can you fix this? OK fixed

Hard

02:45:442 (1) and onward - Why isn't the clap hitsound used any further? oh, thanks for remind me.

Starred. kudosu

termerys wrote:

um, i won't be able to fix mods from now. I'm on traveling
so, I can't fix for a few days
Thanks for understand

DJPop wrote:

termerys wrote:

um, i won't be able to fix mods from now. I'm on traveling
so, I can't fix for a few days
Thanks for understand

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Dangaard wrote:

uhm, isn't this song supposed to be snapped to 1/6 partially?
00:24:915 (2,3,4) - here for example: if I listen to the song in 25% speed (3) and (4) must be clicked too early