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Sub Focus ft. Kele - Turn It Around

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Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
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Secretpipe
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lundi 10 novembre 2014 at 21:22:14

Artist: Sub Focus ft. Kele
Title: Turn It Around
Tags: drumstep collab collaboration natteke nemis Vass_Bass Kin
BPM: 174
Filesize: 4819kb
Play Time: 03:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (3,08 stars, 406 notes)
  2. Kin's Easy (1,35 stars, 147 notes)
  3. NNsane (4,56 stars, 508 notes)
  4. Normal (1,97 stars, 247 notes)
  5. Vass' Light Insane (3,54 stars, 424 notes)
Download: Sub Focus ft. Kele - Turn It Around
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#6
→Kin's Easy : Done by Kin
→Normal : Done by me
→Hard : Done by me
→Vass'Light : Done by Vass_Bass
→NNsane : Done by Natteke and Nemis

Drumstep map this time , I hope you'll like it!
Last edited by Secretpipe , edited 40 times in total.
AlexaBM
755 posts
Joined March 2013
AlexaBM
hi o/

[Kin's Easy]
  1. The problem that I see in the whole diff - try not to stack objects in the easier diff of a mapset. It can confuse beginners, I recommand to unstack it ALL. Don't create problems for the beginners :3
  2. 00:37:867 (4) - Why not to make this slider like this?
    img
  3. 00:42:350 (2) - ^
    img
  4. 00:48:902 (3) - ^
    img
    A lot of your sliders breaks the flow. It's not good for the easiest diff!
  5. 01:27:522 (1) - Delete NC and ^
    img
  6. 01:36:143 (2) - Make a better blanket with (1) or move it to x:96 y:300 or so
  7. 01:47:177 (1) - Too near from the HP bar
    img
  8. 01:55:798 (1) - Ctrl+J it?
  9. 02:03:729 (2) - ^
  10. 02:14:764 (2) - ^
  11. 02:32:005 (1,2,3) - ?
    img
  12. 02:47:177 (3) - ?
    img
[Normal]
  1. 01:35:108 (3) - Delete the middle point
  2. 02:05:453 (3) - Add a point at x:232 y:64
[Hard]
  1. 01:42:005 (1,2) - Make a better blanket? I finally found smth orz
  2. 01:48:557 (1,2,3,4) - Make a square?
  3. 01:51:315 (1,2,3,4) - ^
[Vass' Light]
  1. 00:45:453 (3) - может изогнуть в другую сторону? Так и флоу получше будет
    img
  2. 01:22:005 (5,6) - (нази) стакни их получше?
  3. 01:34:419 (3,1) - ^
  4. 01:34:936 (4,2) - ^
  5. 02:08:729 (5,6) - ^
  6. 02:28:902 (1) - а мб как-то так?
    img
  7. 02:34:936 (3,6) - оверлап поправь немного
  8. 02:57:867 (1) - ?
    img
[NNsane]
  1. Where is the Kiai time? Check the green lines please.
That's all. GL~
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
Hi. Secretpipe.

  1. Red words: Should be fixed.
  2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]

1.Tags are consistent (Check in Kin"s diff)
2.Add a sliderslide mute the slider sound?
3.Suggest use 1024x768 size backround picture ,follow the rank rules.
4.Combo color are not consistent.

[Kin's Easy]

01:11:315 (3) - Move a bit DS make the pattern neat?
01:26:488 (3) - Every 2 big white line set a NC,so suggest use NC is good better here.
01:27:522 (1) - If use, this need to remove NC,too.
02:24:074 (1) - Add a 1/2 slider here,it will be play better to easy.

[Normal]

Kiai unsnapped : 00:54:937 , 02:22:954 .

01:33:729 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think it is the same rhythm hereso I think should be consistent rhythm here.
02:26:143 (1) - Perhaps can stack better?
02:45:108 (4) - Downbeat,forget add finish here?
02:47:177 (3) - Perhaps can stack better?

[Vass' Light] (Check Aimod have a error.)(Feel the combo a bit long,perhaps you consider to use NC here.)

00:35:798 (4) - NC
00:41:315 (6) - ^
00:46:833 (4) - ^
01:05:798 (6) - Use ctrl+g make a flow?
01:10:281 (5) - NC.
01:38:729 (2,3,4) - Have a bit hard to read here,because I have no feel can make jumps part here. (So suggest keep DS here)
02:46:833 (6) - NC.
02:49:591 (5) - ^
02:52:350 (5) - ^
03:07:177 (1) - End remove whistle? Feel the song end suddenly sound here,have a bit starnge.

[Hard]

00:49:074 (3) - Seems have a clap sound,add a clap here?
01:17:005 (5) - Perhaps don't overlap here?
01:58:040 (3) - Add a note follow the vocal?
02:03:040 (2) - Why this note jump so big here? (Don"t suggest make a big jump in hard diff) Perhaps you can reduce DS a bit here.
02:18:902 (4) - ^
02:26:143 (1) - Add finish?
02:28:902 (1) - ^
02:34:419 (1) - ^

[NNsane]

00:43:729 (3) - Add a note follow the vocal?
01:14:764 (5) - Seems missed a note follow music?
02:37:177 (1) - Add finish?

Good Luck!
Kin
2,618 posts
Joined August 2010
Kin

AlexaBM wrote:

hi o/

[Kin's Easy]
  1. The problem that I see in the whole diff - try not to stack objects in the easier diff of a mapset. It can confuse beginners, I recommand to unstack it ALL. Don't create problems for the beginners :3 stack isn't forbidden for easy diff, as long as my stack are consistent it's ok
  2. 00:37:867 (4) - Why not to make this slider like this? Because I won't :c
    img
  3. 00:42:350 (2) - ^ ^
    img
  4. 00:48:902 (3) - ^ not fix'd, but chang'd
    img
    A lot of your sliders breaks the flow. It's not good for the easiest diff!
  5. 01:27:522 (1) - Delete NC and ^ no, the NC is here to show It's this slider is follow the "blow" sound (it also the only that not follow the piano sound
    img
  6. 01:36:143 (2) - Make a better blanket with (1) or move it to x:96 y:300 or so this isn't a blanket, this just a stack with the other 1
  7. 01:47:177 (1) - Too near from the HP bar too near =/= touching, so it's ok
    img
  8. 01:55:798 (1) - Ctrl+J it? will break my flow
  9. 02:03:729 (2) - ^ did you miss'd your copy/paste ?
  10. 02:14:764 (2) - ^ ^
  11. 02:32:005 (1,2,3) - ? same as other one
    img
  12. 02:47:177 (3) - ? ^
    img

smallboat wrote:

[Kin's Easy]

01:11:315 (3) - Move a bit DS make the pattern neat? I really want to be consistent here
01:26:488 (3) - Every 2 big white line set a NC,so suggest use NC is good better here.
01:27:522 (1) - If use, this need to remove NC,too. as explain on other mod, 3 is still following the piano, and then suddenly 1 is following the "blow" sound
02:24:074 (1) - Add a 1/2 slider here,it will be play better to easy. I prefer keep 1/1 for the melody
thanks for mod \o
Also, for tag, I'll let Secret check it

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TitleUnicode:Turn It Around
Artist:Sub Focus ft. Kele
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Creator:Secretpipe
Version:Kin's Easy
Source:
Tags:drumstep collab collaboration natteke nemis Vass_Bass Kin
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Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Secretpipe

AlexaBM wrote:

hi o/ \o

[Normal]
  1. 01:35:108 (3) - Delete the middle point Done
  2. 02:05:453 (3) - Add a point at x:232 y:64 I think it's fine
[Hard]
  1. 01:42:005 (1,2) - Make a better blanket? I finally found smth orz Done
  2. 01:48:557 (1,2,3,4) - Make a square? Done
  3. 01:51:315 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Done
That's all. GL~
Thanks a lot =3

smallboat wrote:

Hi. Secretpipe.

  1. Red words: Should be fixed.
  2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]

1.Tags are consistent (Check in Kin"s diff) Fixed
2.Add a sliderslide mute the slider sound? It's fine
3.Suggest use 1024x768 size backround picture ,follow the rank rules. I'll do it later
4.Combo color are not consistent. I'll see

[Normal]

Kiai unsnapped : 00:54:937 , 02:22:954 . Where ? lol

01:33:729 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think it is the same rhythm hereso I think should be consistent rhythm here. I'll fix if another person complain it !
02:26:143 (1) - Perhaps can stack better? Done
02:45:108 (4) - Downbeat,forget add finish here? Nah it's fine !
02:47:177 (3) - Perhaps can stack better? Yeah sure , fixed

[Hard]

00:49:074 (3) - Seems have a clap sound,add a clap here? Yup
01:17:005 (5) - Perhaps don't overlap here? Done
01:58:040 (3) - Add a note follow the vocal? nah it's fine
02:03:040 (2) - Why this note jump so big here? (Don"t suggest make a big jump in hard diff) Perhaps you can reduce DS a bit here. Done a stack here
02:18:902 (4) - ^ Done
02:26:143 (1) - Add finish? Yup
02:28:902 (1) - ^ Nah it's fine
02:34:419 (1) - ^ ^


Good Luck!
Thanks a lot boat =3
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Secretpipe
Waiting for Vass !

Grave for now~
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
Just rank it already
and also no changes
Kin
2,618 posts
Joined August 2010
Kin

Vass_Bass wrote:

Just rank it already
Maeglwn
Maeglwn
sup dude

[General]
  1. green lines seem to be unsnapped in all diffs. consider fixing
[Kin's Easy]
  1. combo colors in this diff different than the others? o.O
  2. 00:57:522 (2,3) - overlap
  3. 01:27:522 (1,1) - overlap, and the double NC is kinda confusing. is it really necessary? it's not really opening into anything special
  4. 01:32:005 (2,1,2) - probably could blanket all 3 of these together, wouldn't take any time at all to do
  5. 02:02:695 (1) - the ncs in basically this entire part seem off by one. shouldn't the NCs be one note backwards? ex: 02:06:833 (2) - should be an NC
  6. 03:00:626 (1,2) - bit of an overlap here
[Normal]
  1. 01:44:764 (1) - anchor is in the wrong place here if you want to follow the vocals, move the anchor back so it's going over it when the white tick in the middle of the slider happens
  2. 01:52:350 (3,1) - some weird ass flow here :P I guess it's probably okay, just kinda weird is all
  3. 01:59:591 (2) - passive slider seems to be especially awkward right here, maybe just make this 2 single taps?
  4. 02:16:488 (3,1) - probably could fix the blanket here
[Vass' Light]
  1. 00:33:039 (1) - yo this seems mad awkward to open with. maybe consider putting at least a bit of a curve into this? :(
  2. 00:59:074 (4,5,7) - ew, overlap here on the slider starts and 7
  3. 01:01:833 (4,5,6,7) - maybe make a bit of a zig zag pattern here to make this more fun to play? seems kinda linear and linear is boring idk

    the main issue I have with this is that it just seems.. hard to read. in general. so many single taps in like linear formations and stuff. it's a good map, but that's my personal gripe
[Hard]
  1. 01:43:040 (1,4) - very noticable overlap
  2. 01:50:798 (2,2) - slight overlap
  3. 01:59:591 (1,4) - overlap mister copy and paste :P

    looks pretty good
[NNsane]
  1. 00:50:971 (4) - I hate these types of sliders throughout the mapset, so boring :(
  2. 00:57:867 (1,1,2) - overlap
  3. 01:43:040 (3,4,5) - can't tell if intentional overlap or not

    yea idk there's a lot of overlaps in this it's kinda confusing

oh well I'm kinda sleepy now so I'll end it there, this is probably rankable
gl
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Secretpipe

Maeglwn wrote:

sup dude sup'

[General]
  1. green lines seem to be unsnapped in all diffs. consider fixing Done
[Normal]
  1. 01:44:764 (1) - anchor is in the wrong place here if you want to follow the vocals, move the anchor back so it's going over it when the white tick in the middle of the slider happens Done
  2. 01:52:350 (3,1) - some weird ass flow here :P I guess it's probably okay, just kinda weird is all Curved (3) a bit!
  3. 01:59:591 (2) - passive slider seems to be especially awkward right here, maybe just make this 2 single taps? Wanted to follow the synth here. I'll change it if another ppl complain it :D
  4. 02:16:488 (3,1) - probably could fix the blanket here done

[Hard]
  1. 01:43:040 (1,4) - very noticable overlap It's just a stack and it could be fine but I'll stack these notes!
  2. 01:50:798 (2,2) - slight overlap it's fine
  3. 01:59:591 (1,4) - overlap mister copy and paste :P fixed

    looks pretty good thanks :DD
[NNsane]
  1. 00:50:971 (4) - I hate these types of sliders throughout the mapset, so boring :( Well , that's your taste but actually , the flow is kinda already nice here.
  2. 00:57:867 (1,1,2) - overlap This is a stack lol
  3. 01:43:040 (3,4,5) - can't tell if intentional overlap or not The placement is fine actually!

    yea idk there's a lot of overlaps in this it's kinda confusing I don't know if you played it but overlaps are shown on the editor and I couldn't find a real issue when playing.

oh well I'm kinda sleepy now so I'll end it there, this is probably rankable
gl
Thanks a lot for modding!
Tsukasa Hiiragi
1 post
Joined May 2013
Tsukasa Hiiragi
Nice map owo
Kin
2,618 posts
Joined August 2010
Kin

Maeglwn wrote:

[Kin's Easy]
  1. combo colors in this diff different than the others? o.O Dunno, I used the one used on the 1st diff uploaded by Secret
  2. 00:57:522 (2,3) - overlap it's maybe your skin because there's no overlap
  3. 01:27:522 (1,1) - overlap, and the double NC is kinda confusing. is it really necessary? it's not really opening into anything special same as ^ ; but 1st NC deleted
  4. 01:32:005 (2,1,2) - probably could blanket all 3 of these together, wouldn't take any time at all to do maybe fixed
  5. 02:02:695 (1) - the ncs in basically this entire part seem off by one. shouldn't the NCs be one note backwards? ex: 02:06:833 (2) - should be an NC ye fixed
  6. 03:00:626 (1,2) - bit of an overlap here it's maybe your skin because there's no overlap
update
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Au passage, tu peux vérifier mes combo color ? :D
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Secretpipe
Everything updated + added consistent Combo colours
Lust
osu! Alumni
2,667 posts
Joined January 2013
Lust
small irc mod

log
14:43 Secretpipe: oh small IRC xD Cause I need mods they said xD
14:43 Secretpipe: 3 mods aren't really enough for a bubble LOL
14:44 Lust: uh sure
14:44 Lust: it will have to be quick though, going to grab something to eat
14:44 *Secretpipe is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/445934 Sub Focus ft. Kele - Turn It Around]
14:45 Secretpipe: Thanks in advance ? :D
14:45 Lust: oh i remember nemis and natteke mapped this a long time ago
14:45 Lust: i think i still have this map lol
14:45 Secretpipe: Ranking it for Natteke/Nemis/Vass
14:45 Secretpipe: oh yeah xD
14:45 *Lust is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/346711 Sub Focus ft. Kele - Turn It Around]
14:45 Secretpipe: they gave me their diff
14:49 *Lust is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/445966 Sub Focus ft. Kele - Turn It Around [Hard]]
14:49 Secretpipe: yus?
14:49 Lust: 01:37:522 (4,1,2,3) - because of the stack leniency 1 2 and 3 touch 4 and makes it look a little untidy - it can also provide for a bit of a distraction
14:50 Lust: the best way to handle this is to change the rhythm around to avoid it, here let me come up with a suggestion
14:50 Secretpipe: I must be drunk but
14:50 Secretpipe: what's stack leniancy ? XD
14:50 Lust: song setup -> advanced -> stack leniency
14:51 Lust: it is how much objects stack 
14:51 Secretpipe: I should increase this ?
14:51 Lust: its best to keep it consistent throughout the difficulties
14:51 Lust: so your best bet is to rearrange the pattern
14:52 Secretpipe: Oki I understand now owo
14:52 Lust: its just something to watch out for xD
14:52 Secretpipe: yeah xD
14:52 Secretpipe: Have you got an example ? :o
14:53 Secretpipe: brb don't crash
14:54 Secretpipe: back
14:54 Secretpipe: idk if it's me but the servors are slow LOL
14:54 Secretpipe: 01:43:040 (1,4) - Have to fix this stack btw
14:56 Lust: orz why is puush so slow
14:56 Secretpipe: yeah
14:56 Secretpipe: :/
14:56 Secretpipe: can't even go through yt lol
15:00 Secretpipe: but otherwise , is the diff decent enough ?
15:03 Lust: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/9MK93iz.jpg
15:03 Lust: sorry for the delay, but see if you can follow that
15:03 Lust: other than that it should be good to go

we fixed a rhythm and a stack leniency issue
theramdans
1,251 posts
Joined September 2012
theramdans
random and somehow nazi mod

Easy
00:34:419-
00:35:798-
00:38:557-
00:45:453-
00:46:833-
01:05:108-
01:07:867-
01:13:384-
01:16:143-
01:40:626-
01:42:005-
01:48:902-
02:27:867-
02:44:419-
02:50:971-
02:55:108-
03:02:005-

unstack them then resnap distance please, why so many stacks in this easy diff????
this is the easy diff with the most stacks i ever saw/modded so far

02:33:729 (3) - try this http://puu.sh/cjfUi/1c269a3859.png

Hmm, thats all, overall mapset is good and fine as it is
Go!
AruOtta
1,296 posts
Joined May 2012
AruOtta
Hey, as requested (late btw)

Kin's Easy

00:38:902 (2,3,4) - The blanket between (3) and (4) isn't the same than the one betwene (2) and (4), you should try this exemple :
SPOILER
02:32:005 (1) - This slider doesn't follow the clap pattern, you should add a clap on the head and the tail, and remove the one on the reverse.

These suggestions are the only things I can say on this diff. It's approximately perfect and ready for rank

Normal


01:15:108 (2,4) - Ces deux objets sont pas parfaitement stackés =/
01:32:350 (3,4) - Je te conseille de changer le (4) en un slider droit et parallèle à (3), c'est un peu étrange actuellement
01:37:522 (2) - Le normal-hitfinish sur la queue du slider me parait bizarre et incohérent avec le paterne d'hitsound
02:08:557 (3,4,1) - Si tu pourrais faire un triangle équilatéral ça serait parfait :3
02:09:936 (1,2) - Le flow est un peu maladroit ici, je te conseille de bouger (2) à x44|y36 (pour faire un blanket, et pour que le mouvement de (1) soit un peu plus continué et moins "cassé" d'un coup
02:11:660 (3) - Ici, le soft-hitfinish me parait aussi bizarre, tu devrais l'enlever, ça ne suit pas la musique =/
02:42:350 (5) - Ce slider empêche d'avoir un new combo exactement à 02:42:695, et empêche également ce beat d'être cliquable. Je te conseille de le remplacer par un circle, puis d'en stack un autre sur 02:43:040 (1) à 02:42:695 (et d'ajouter un finish pour rester cohérent)
02:45:108 (4) - Même remarque, tu ne peux pas mettre ne NC à 02:45:453 (alors que c'est important vu que c'est le début d'une nouvelle part)
02:53:729 (1,2,3) - Il faut que tu fasse un triangle équilatéral ici également (c'est stressant d'avoir un triangle quelconque xD)
03:00:281 (2,3) - Peut être un blanket ici ? Tu a facilement la possibilité de le faire :3

Hard

00:46:833 (1,2) - Le blanket est assez mal fait ici, je te conseille d'augmenter la courbe de (1)
01:21:315 (4) - Si tu veux suivre la logique des new combo, il faut en ajouter un là
01:37:177 (3,4) - Ces deux sliders sembles un peu trop proches l'un de l'autre, faudrait un peu les espacer.
01:38:212 (3,4,5) - Je pense pas que faire ces deux jumps à la suite soit une assez bonne idée, cette accélération si soudaine pourrait faire perdre certains joueurs =/
01:50:798 (2,2) - Ici c'est limite de l'overlap, faut un peu m'espacer tout ça :3
01:55:798 (1,2) - J'ai pas l'impression que ces deux sliders sont parfaitement en train de blanket
01:59:936 (2,3,4) - Triangle équilatéral ici plz ?
02:11:143 (2,5,6) - Les trois finish sur ces sliders ne sont pas justifiés avec la musique, il n'y a donc aucune raison de les mettre, même par pur rythmique
02:42:005 (4,1) - Presque un overlap ici, faudrait espacer les deux sliders
02:52:350 (1) - Ce slider parait bizarre... Je pense que ça ira mieux si tu augmente sa courbe un peu
03:07:177 (3) - Au contraire, celui-ci à une courbe trop importante, essaye de la réduire un peu

Vass' Light

01:11:315 (8) - This slider makes the beat 01:11:660 unclickable and then you can't make a new combo here, but it's important to have these things for this beat, so you really should fix it.
01:35:108 (1,2) - The stacks are a bit weird here. You should increase a bit the distance between the objects above them, or stack them complety with these objects above.
01:37:436 (4) - This beat doesn't follow the song, it's overmapped, so you must delete it then.
01:39:246 (1) - This slider should also be applied to the slider velocity multiplier, you should move the inherited at 99246 instead of 99247 (the offset).
02:07:695 - You missed an emphasized beat here, it's quite sad, so you should fix it in my opinion.
03:07:177 (1) - The whistle on this slider's tail seems quite strange =/

NNSane

00:50:971 (4) - You should add a NC here if you want to follow the NC patern you created for this part.
02:10:971 (5,1,3) - The finish on these sliders are a bit weird and don't follow the song, so you must delete them.
02:15:626 (1) - I think you should delete this NC because the green one (the previous one) is too short.

I hope this mod will be helpful :3

Sorry again for the late, and good luck for rank <3
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
http://puu.sh/cl12t/89dc4e1fb7.osu hey
Kin
2,618 posts
Joined August 2010
Kin

Kenterz wrote:

Hey, as requested (late btw) coucou toi

Kin's Easy

00:38:902 (2,3,4) - The blanket between (3) and (4) isn't the same than the one betwene (2) and (4), you should try this exemple : J'ai plus ou moins fix, en gardant mon slider symetrique
SPOILER
02:32:005 (1) - This slider doesn't follow the clap pattern, you should add a clap on the head and the tail, and remove the one on the reverse. j'ai fais de la merde sur ce clap, lel, fixed

These suggestions are the only things I can say on this diff. It's approximately perfect and ready for rank
Merci du mod \o

SPOILER
osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55108
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
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BeatDivisor: 4
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Title:Turn It Around
TitleUnicode:Turn It Around
Artist:Sub Focus ft. Kele
ArtistUnicode:Sub Focus ft. Kele
Creator:Secretpipe
Version:Kin's Easy
Source:
Tags:drumstep collab collaboration natteke nemis Vass_Bass Kin
BeatmapID:445934
BeatmapSetID:186502

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CircleSize:3
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ApproachRate:3.5
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404,110,90626,1,2,0:0:0:0:
250,69,91315,5,2,0:0:0:0:
209,225,92005,2,0,P|184:280|96:328,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,176,94074,2,0,P|81:121|169:73,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,225,96143,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,96488,12,0,99246,0:0:0:0:
144,80,100626,5,2,0:0:0:0:
144,80,100971,2,0,B|116:156|116:156|136:236,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,308,102005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,308,102350,2,0,P|208:292|320:300,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,324,103384,2,0,B|412:288|412:288|420:232,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,168,104074,6,0,P|456:160|504:164,2,80,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,196,105108,2,0,P|264:212|160:188,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,164,106143,2,0,P|108:116|124:56,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,16,107177,6,0,B|292:32|292:32|340:40,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,52,107867,2,0,P|460:96|464:200,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,260,108902,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,260,109246,2,0,B|384:252|384:252|336:272|336:272|280:264,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,252,110281,5,0,0:0:0:0:
152,188,110626,2,0,P|132:120|156:32,2,160,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,252,112350,6,0,P|236:276|296:268,2,80,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,199,113384,2,0,P|287:127|256:55,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,22,114419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,56,114764,2,0,P|76:127|104:200,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,256,115798,6,0,P|204:252|244:264,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,172,116833,2,0,B|380:132|380:132|376:80,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,320,118212,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,118557,12,0,121315,1:0:0:0:
128,308,122695,6,0,P|100:236|128:136,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,92,123729,6,0,B|204:104|204:104|252:100,1,80,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
400,84,124764,2,0,P|464:104|488:200,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,152,126833,5,0,1:0:0:0:
112,84,127522,2,0,P|48:104|24:200,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,108,129246,6,0,B|224:120|224:120|268:116,1,80,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
424,100,130281,2,0,P|448:174|431:252,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,176,132350,5,0,1:0:0:0:
144,252,133040,2,0,P|120:188|144:88,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,316,134764,6,0,B|228:300|228:300|272:296,1,80,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
428,288,135798,2,0,B|436:208|436:208|416:120,1,160
296,28,137177,2,0,B|288:108|288:108|308:196,1,160,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
336,260,138212,6,0,P|400:272|480:244,2,120,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,139591,12,0,143384,0:0:0:0:
344,72,144764,6,0,P|384:56|428:52,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,104,145798,2,0,P|248:176|168:208,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,208,146833,6,0,B|80:172|80:172|72:128,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,276,147867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,276,148212,2,0,P|176:308|352:276,1,240,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,212,149591,6,0,P|436:220|468:244,2,80,0|8|0,0:2|0:0|0:2,0:2:0:0:
316,208,150626,2,0,B|276:204|240:228|240:228|208:216|208:216|144:216,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,120,152005,6,0,P|32:72|44:36,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,192,153040,2,0,P|108:188|160:200,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,220,153729,2,0,B|256:148|256:148|256:64|256:64,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,344,155798,6,0,P|88:296|84:256,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,196,156488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,124,156833,2,0,P|160:84|248:96,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,136,157867,6,0,B|356:148|356:148|408:148,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,158557,2,0,P|472:240|460:280,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,328,159246,2,0,P|340:316|260:356,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,269,160971,6,0,P|472:230|464:192,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,124,161660,2,0,B|384:112|384:112|344:80,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,40,162350,2,0,P|216:32|156:88,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,163384,6,0,B|87:164|87:164|35:159,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,148,164419,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,148,164764,2,0,P|288:152|348:208,1,160
364,280,165798,5,8,0:0:0:0:
216,340,166488,2,0,P|176:348|128:336,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,312,167177,2,0,B|84:232|84:232|80:152,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,76,168212,6,0,P|104:52|144:48,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,92,169246,2,0,P|332:100|376:92,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,72,169936,2,0,P|476:120|468:224,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,280,170971,5,0,0:0:0:0:
416,280,171315,2,0,B|336:260|336:260|256:272,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,288,172350,2,0,P|132:292|80:272,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,132,173384,6,0,P|52:84|72:32,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,204,174419,2,0,P|132:196|180:208,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,236,175108,5,0,0:0:0:0:
244,236,175453,2,0,P|320:256|397:237,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,172,176488,5,0,0:0:0:0:
396,108,176833,2,0,P|318:89|242:109,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,152,177867,2,0,L|160:240,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,360,178902,6,0,L|270:281,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,204,179591,2,0,B|364:216|364:216|396:176|456:192,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,268,180626,5,0,0:0:0:0:
408,344,180971,2,0,P|332:360|240:344,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,316,182005,5,0,0:0:0:0:
176,316,182350,2,0,P|132:256|180:168,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,140,183384,6,0,L|312:136,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,180,184074,2,0,L|460:176,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,184764,12,0,187522,0:0:0:0:
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Secretpipe

Kenterz wrote:

Hey, as requested (late btw) hi

Normal


01:15:108 (2,4) - Ces deux objets sont pas parfaitement stackés =/ done
01:32:350 (3,4) - Je te conseille de changer le (4) en un slider droit et parallèle à (3), c'est un peu étrange actuellement done
01:37:522 (2) - Le normal-hitfinish sur la queue du slider me parait bizarre et incohérent avec le paterne d'hitsound changed
02:08:557 (3,4,1) - Si tu pourrais faire un triangle équilatéral ça serait parfait :3 done
02:09:936 (1,2) - Le flow est un peu maladroit ici, je te conseille de bouger (2) à x44|y36 (pour faire un blanket, et pour que le mouvement de (1) soit un peu plus continué et moins "cassé" d'un coup Le pattern n'a pas de problème actuellement
02:11:660 (3) - Ici, le soft-hitfinish me parait aussi bizarre, tu devrais l'enlever, ça ne suit pas la musique =/ Removed!
02:42:350 (5) - Ce slider empêche d'avoir un new combo exactement à 02:42:695, et empêche également ce beat d'être cliquable. Je te conseille de le remplacer par un circle, puis d'en stack un autre sur 02:43:040 (1) à 02:42:695 (et d'ajouter un finish pour rester cohérent) done
02:45:108 (4) - Même remarque, tu ne peux pas mettre ne NC à 02:45:453 (alors que c'est important vu que c'est le début d'une nouvelle part) done
02:53:729 (1,2,3) - Il faut que tu fasse un triangle équilatéral ici également (c'est stressant d'avoir un triangle quelconque xD) done
03:00:281 (2,3) - Peut être un blanket ici ? Tu a facilement la possibilité de le faire :3
done

Hard

00:46:833 (1,2) - Le blanket est assez mal fait ici, je te conseille d'augmenter la courbe de (1) Fixd
01:21:315 (4) - Si tu veux suivre la logique des new combo, il faut en ajouter un là done
01:37:177 (3,4) - Ces deux sliders sembles un peu trop proches l'un de l'autre, faudrait un peu les espacer. done
01:38:212 (3,4,5) - Je pense pas que faire ces deux jumps à la suite soit une assez bonne idée, cette accélération si soudaine pourrait faire perdre certains joueurs =/ fixed in another way
01:50:798 (2,2) - Ici c'est limite de l'overlap, faut un peu m'espacer tout ça :3 Y a pas d'overlaps owo
01:55:798 (1,2) - J'ai pas l'impression que ces deux sliders sont parfaitement en train de blanket Le blanket est bien
01:59:936 (2,3,4) - Triangle équilatéral ici plz ? k
02:11:143 (2,5,6) - Les trois finish sur ces sliders ne sont pas justifiés avec la musique, il n'y a donc aucune raison de les mettre, même par pur rythmique J'ai remplacé par des whistles
02:42:005 (4,1) - Presque un overlap ici, faudrait espacer les deux sliders Ca touche pas , et en plus y a un écart assez important dans la TL.
02:52:350 (1) - Ce slider parait bizarre... Je pense que ça ira mieux si tu augmente sa courbe un peu Fixed in another way
03:07:177 (3) - Au contraire, celui-ci à une courbe trop importante, essaye de la réduire un peu fixd


NNSane

00:50:971 (4) - You should add a NC here if you want to follow the NC patern you created for this part. uhm..okay
02:10:971 (5,1,3) - The finish on these sliders are a bit weird and don't follow the song, so you must delete them. Fixed
02:15:626 (1) - I think you should delete this NC because the green one (the previous one) is too short. Done

I hope this mod will be helpful :3 It was

Sorry again for the late, and good luck for rank <3
Thanks again for modding!
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
Improve some NC setting and kiaitime adjust,everything looks fine on all diffs are okay imo.

Bubbled !

IRC
2014-10-22 18:48 Secretpipe: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/445515 Sub Focus ft. Kele - Turn It Around]
2014-10-22 18:50 smallboat: well,this song time have bit long,need a bit time :3
2014-10-22 18:50 smallboat: right :3
2014-10-22 18:53 Secretpipe: oh oki :3
2014-10-22 18:59 Secretpipe: can you quick check it now ? :3
2014-10-22 18:59 smallboat: now?
2014-10-22 19:00 Secretpipe: yeah owo
2014-10-22 19:01 smallboat: I try it
2014-10-22 19:01 Secretpipe: :D
2014-10-22 19:04 smallboat: combo color not consistent in kin's easy diff o/
2014-10-22 19:04 smallboat: select widescreen support in NNsane
2014-10-22 19:04 Secretpipe: BUT
2014-10-22 19:05 Secretpipe: I CHANGED COLOURS FOR KIN D:
2014-10-22 19:05 Secretpipe: oh yeah
2014-10-22 19:05 Secretpipe: I think I understad why
2014-10-22 19:05 Secretpipe: lol
2014-10-22 19:05 smallboat: :D
2014-10-22 19:05 Secretpipe: there's no SB
2014-10-22 19:05 Secretpipe: so I should disable it
2014-10-22 19:05 Secretpipe: I'll remove for all diffs
2014-10-22 19:05 smallboat: okay :3
2014-10-22 19:07 Secretpipe: updated
2014-10-22 19:07 smallboat: ur kiai time need to keep consistent
2014-10-22 19:07 smallboat: in ur diff
2014-10-22 19:08 Secretpipe: kiai are inconsistent
2014-10-22 19:08 Secretpipe: but it doesn't matter
2014-10-22 19:10 smallboat: nono ,is say you do your diff, the kiai need to keep consistent,really ><
2014-10-22 19:11 smallboat: because your diff kiai time (normal and hard),are not in the same kiai
2014-10-22 19:11 Secretpipe: where ?
2014-10-22 19:11 Secretpipe: oh
2014-10-22 19:11 Secretpipe: lemme see
2014-10-22 19:13 Secretpipe: done
2014-10-22 19:14 smallboat: Vass light  have a aimod error
2014-10-22 19:14 smallboat: unsnapped
2014-10-22 19:16 Secretpipe: Crashed lol
2014-10-22 19:17 smallboat: Okay,General check are done, I'm start checking diff now :3
2014-10-22 19:18 Secretpipe: crashed again D:
2014-10-22 19:18 Secretpipe: Can't resnap
2014-10-22 19:18 smallboat: lol
2014-10-22 19:18 smallboat: sad
2014-10-22 19:18 Secretpipe: well updating
2014-10-22 19:21 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/445934 Sub Focus ft. Kele - Turn It Around [Kin's Easy]]
2014-10-22 19:21 smallboat: 01:26:488 (3) - Forgot add NC?
2014-10-22 19:21 smallboat: 01:34:074 (3) - Same
2014-10-22 19:22 Secretpipe: k done
2014-10-22 19:22 smallboat: 01:43:384 (5,1) - Feel swap NC better
2014-10-22 19:23 smallboat: okay easy check done 
2014-10-22 19:23 Secretpipe: done
2014-10-22 19:26 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/445516 Sub Focus ft. Kele - Turn It Around [Normal]]
2014-10-22 19:26 smallboat: 01:37:522 (2) - remove the whistle?
2014-10-22 19:26 smallboat: in end
2014-10-22 19:27 Secretpipe: lolz I added it before and wasn"t dure
2014-10-22 19:27 Secretpipe: removed!
2014-10-22 19:28 smallboat: 02:20:626 (1,1) - this space...
2014-10-22 19:28 smallboat: lol
2014-10-22 19:29 smallboat: need to space 2 beat
2014-10-22 19:30 smallboat: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2159409
2014-10-22 19:30 smallboat: try it
2014-10-22 19:30 Secretpipe: this is not the easiest diff of the mapset
2014-10-22 19:30 Secretpipe: it's fine
2014-10-22 19:31 smallboat: but the QAT will notice this
2014-10-22 19:32 Secretpipe: well , last time , my normal was like this and they didn't mention it
2014-10-22 19:32 Secretpipe: also , there's an easy so it's fine
2014-10-22 19:33 Secretpipe: wait a sec , I'll be backs oon
2014-10-22 19:33 Secretpipe: also , write mod in the chat , I'll fix  it in some min :3
2014-10-22 19:35 smallboat: okay
2014-10-22 19:36 Secretpipe: I mean, continue to write
2014-10-22 19:36 Secretpipe: I'll asnwer
2014-10-22 19:36 smallboat: okay I know
2014-10-22 19:38 smallboat: well,if you don't fix that things,I am really worry the QAT will pick here
2014-10-22 19:41 Secretpipe: oki
2014-10-22 19:41 smallboat: ex:https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3335365
2014-10-22 19:42 smallboat: Easy 4 beat normal 2 beat
2014-10-22 19:42 smallboat: He is so notice that~~~~
2014-10-22 19:44 smallboat: 02:50:281 (5) - This finish hs have a bit noisy,if want to use it,turn down a bit volume?
2014-10-22 19:44 smallboat: hard in the same reason
2014-10-22 19:45 smallboat: normal check done
2014-10-22 19:46 Secretpipe: hmmm
2014-10-22 19:46 Secretpipe: wait
2014-10-22 19:46 smallboat: ?
2014-10-22 19:49 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/445517 Sub Focus ft. Kele - Turn It Around [Vass' Light]]
2014-10-22 19:49 smallboat: seems so a lot NC problem
2014-10-22 19:50 smallboat: I post time point  add the NC
2014-10-22 19:50 smallboat: 00:35:798 (4) - 
2014-10-22 19:50 smallboat: 00:41:315 (6) - 
2014-10-22 19:51 smallboat: 00:46:833 (4) - 
2014-10-22 19:54 smallboat: 00:54:419 (2) - the slider end i suggest reduce the red line feel better
2014-10-22 19:55 smallboat: 00:56:488 (5) - NC
2014-10-22 19:55 smallboat: 00:59:246 (5) - 
2014-10-22 19:55 Secretpipe: notthing for the hard ?
2014-10-22 19:55 smallboat: light diff first
2014-10-22 19:55 Secretpipe: oh k
2014-10-22 19:56 Secretpipe: gonna fix in a sec
2014-10-22 19:57 smallboat: 01:42:005 (1) - Same as  00:54:419
2014-10-22 19:59 smallboat: 02:46:833 (6) - NC
2014-10-22 19:59 smallboat: 02:49:591 (5) - 
2014-10-22 19:59 smallboat: 02:52:350 (5) - 
2014-10-22 20:00 smallboat: 03:03:902 (2) - this is a stream,miss a red note here
2014-10-22 20:01 Secretpipe: Nice catch
2014-10-22 20:01 smallboat: lol
2014-10-22 20:02 Secretpipe: btw
2014-10-22 20:02 Secretpipe: fixed all NC issues
2014-10-22 20:02 Secretpipe: except slider end
2014-10-22 20:02 Secretpipe: I'll let it
2014-10-22 20:02 smallboat: sure
2014-10-22 20:03 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/445966 Sub Focus ft. Kele - Turn It Around [Hard]]
2014-10-22 20:03 smallboat: Your NC set good
2014-10-22 20:03 Secretpipe: o/
2014-10-22 20:04 smallboat: but the light diff NC I don't like...XD
2014-10-22 20:04 Secretpipe: xD
2014-10-22 20:05 smallboat: 00:56:660 (1) - Feel change 2 notes will play better
2014-10-22 20:08 Secretpipe: Nah , sorry , I wanted to emphasize the synth here :3
2014-10-22 20:08 smallboat: OKAY
2014-10-22 20:12 smallboat: 02:20:108 (3,4) - 
2014-10-22 20:12 smallboat: Keep the same DS ?
2014-10-22 20:12 smallboat: Have bit hard to read.
2014-10-22 20:13 smallboat: 02:37:177 (6) - Missed a NC
2014-10-22 20:13 Secretpipe: it's a stack lol
2014-10-22 20:13 smallboat: LOL
2014-10-22 20:14 Secretpipe: nc fixed
2014-10-22 20:15 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/445515 Sub Focus ft. Kele - Turn It Around [NNsane]]
2014-10-22 20:19 smallboat: 00:43:039 (2) - Feel missed a voice (?
2014-10-22 20:19 smallboat: *note
2014-10-22 20:19 smallboat: 00:41:660 (2) - same
2014-10-22 20:20 Secretpipe: nah
2014-10-22 20:20 Secretpipe: it'd feel overmapped
2014-10-22 20:20 Secretpipe: already talked with natteke about this
2014-10-22 20:22 Secretpipe: Update ? :D
2014-10-22 20:23 smallboat: another diff check done
2014-10-22 20:23 smallboat: okay
2014-10-22 20:24 smallboat: maybe it is fine
2014-10-22 20:26 Secretpipe: :'D
2014-10-22 20:38 smallboat: okay update it let me see again 
2014-10-22 20:38 Secretpipe: updating
2014-10-22 20:39 Secretpipe: done
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Secretpipe
It's happening AAAAH
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
Bg size change by mapper, so rebub it.
Aka
1,777 posts
Joined January 2012
Aka
hi, as requested


kin's

・i am not a fan of stack in the easiest diff, ugh.. up to you but i'd unstack a half of those. like these, which are repeating one after another, like these 00:45:453 (3,4,1,2) - .
00:34:419 (3,4) - for example this one. the construction of the pattern will move a bit down from the left upper corner where your whole beginning is
01:13:384 (2,3) - and this one, too. since the music intonation goes different there
・01:40:626 (1,2) - wouldnt start like this after a break. and this is about starting with the circle. usually, as i noticed after watchnig replays of the newbie players, its hard for them to carry 2 approach circles and its hard to get into rhythm again. i'd recommend to change the rhythm there to this
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OR. since the vocals are mainly emphasized there would be nice to start object with them after that spinner break which could mess up
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normal

・00:33:039 (1) - on reverse, 00:34:074 (2) - , 00:34:419 (3) - head, 00:49:936 (2) - head and on sounds like these at the beginning i'd really like to hear whistles, since these sounds are pretty loud and as i hear emphasized most of all in this part. up to you though
・01:59:591 (2) - i'd change this to note-slider. cause atm slider end on a downbeat and the sound is pretty strong. its noticeable and does feel awkward during the gameplay
02:07:867 (2) - this one is okay cause nothing really loud and ~hard~ stands for this part
・02:20:626 (1,1) - this is considered as not enough recovery time after spinner. Normal difficulty needs at least 2 beats for ~160 bpm, so this is NOT acceptable and will be unqualified because of tis reason. better try to map this part
・02:41:315 (3,6) - this is not really noticeable during the gameplay but for the aethtetic sake i'd recommend you to move the (3) a bit upper, it would look neater
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・02:43:729 (2,3) - again about the downbeat. also i can hear a long sound starting from 02:44:074 - there and i bet you hear that this one is way longer than previous. so if i were you i'd change this rhythm to note-slider thing


hard

・the beginning part of this diff (till kiai) is harder than vass' light and her diff is considered as a light insane. it is also harder than kiai in YOUR diff. there is a pretty constant 1/2 rhythm which doesnt make it look like an actual hard. the normal diff barely has 1/2 sliders/notes and there you have some triplets, which is strange as well..
02:05:453 - starting from there, 02:05:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 02:10:971 (1,2,3,4) - things like that increases your star rating of the diff A LOT, just replace it with sliders and you will see that rating falls fast as hell
the last kiai look like an insane and harder than light insane as well.. meh, it could be just me, but this is my opinion which i'd like to share

i wanted to mention something from all diffs but its 4am and i chose wrong time for writing such stuff.. D: im sorry
g-good luck i suppose?
Kin
2,618 posts
Joined August 2010
Kin

Aka wrote:

hi, as requested


kin's

・i am not a fan of stack in the easiest diff, ugh.. up to you but i'd unstack a half of those. like these, which are repeating one after another, like these 00:45:453 (3,4,1,2) - . I can't hear other thing than stack >_<
00:34:419 (3,4) - for example this one. the construction of the pattern will move a bit down from the left upper corner where your whole beginning is
01:13:384 (2,3) - and this one, too. since the music intonation goes different there tbh, I think the stack sounds good with the melody
・01:40:626 (1,2) - wouldnt start like this after a break. and this is about starting with the circle. usually, as i noticed after watchnig replays of the newbie players, its hard for them to carry 2 approach circles and its hard to get into rhythm again. i'd recommend to change the rhythm there to this
SPOILER
OR. since the vocals are mainly emphasized there would be nice to start object with them after that spinner break which could mess up melody is emphasized, not the vocal >_< also, unstacked
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Secretpipe
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Secretpipe

Aka wrote:

hi, as requested


normal

・00:33:039 (1) - on reverse, 00:34:074 (2) - , 00:34:419 (3) - head, 00:49:936 (2) - head and on sounds like these at the beginning i'd really like to hear whistles, since these sounds are pretty loud and as i hear emphasized most of all in this part. up to you though okay done
・01:59:591 (2) - i'd change this to note-slider. cause atm slider end on a downbeat and the sound is pretty strong. its noticeable and does feel awkward during the gameplay I think the rhythm is well respected here. You're totally right! Fixed!
02:07:867 (2) - this one is okay cause nothing really loud and ~hard~ stands for this part
・02:20:626 (1,1) - this is considered as not enough recovery time after spinner. Normal difficulty needs at least 2 beats for ~160 bpm, so this is NOT acceptable and will be unqualified because of tis reason. better try to map this part Deleted the spinner and decided to add some objects!
・02:41:315 (3,6) - this is not really noticeable during the gameplay but for the aethtetic sake i'd recommend you to move the (3) a bit upper, it would look neater I think it's fine imo :3
SPOILER
・02:43:729 (2,3) - again about the downbeat. also i can hear a long sound starting from 02:44:074 - there and i bet you hear that this one is way longer than previous. so if i were you i'd change this rhythm to note-slider thing Done. I also added two triangles! It's better for the esthetism :D


hard

・the beginning part of this diff (till kiai) is harder than vass' light and her diff is considered as a light insane. it is also harder than kiai in YOUR diff. there is a pretty constant 1/2 rhythm which doesnt make it look like an actual hard. the normal diff barely has 1/2 sliders/notes and there you have some triplets, which is strange as well..
02:05:453 - starting from there, 02:05:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 02:10:971 (1,2,3,4) - things like that increases your star rating of the diff A LOT, just replace it with sliders and you will see that rating falls fast as hell
the last kiai look like an insane and harder than light insane as well.. meh, it could be just me, but this is my opinion which i'd like to share

As I told you in chat today , I remade the spacing in the kiai of the hard and you tell me that it should be fine now so... fixed :D

i wanted to mention something from all diffs but its 4am and i chose wrong time for writing such stuff.. D: im sorry
g-good luck i suppose?
Thanks a bunch for modding :D
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