Kloyd wrote:

definitely you are

& gonna map full ver (+ I & +O) someday

jyc-Binggan wrote:

Kloyd wrote:

definitely you are

& gonna map full ver (+ I & +O) someday

have you intersted making a guest diff for me?

Kloyd wrote:

having not enough time, so It depends on the time you gonna rank or not.

If you not willing to rank this shortly, I can make hard for you.

jyc-Binggan wrote:

am I pro?

jyc-Binggan wrote:

Kloyd wrote:

having not enough time, so It depends on the time you gonna rank or not.

If you not willing to rank this shortly, I can make hard for you.

ok,if I get ready to rank this,i will tell you

jyc-Binggan wrote:

for rank

BakaHuang wrote:

hey yo

whats up man

Foreverends wrote:

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
noooooooooooooooOOOoooooooooOoOOOOXO

1. maybe move wip now!
2. try add tag 'dubstep' and 'piano'? people can more good search!
3. standard and extra diff remove Countdown check better.
4. your BG 1365x768. try find or convert 1366x768? bg nazi.
5. remove widerscreen support all diff.
6. remove letter box during breaks check all diff. so, nothing break this mapset!

1. This diff only nothing kiaitime.
2. 00:03:704 (1) - this is small spinner end and next notes between. so, try this sound? i think more easily play. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1904253
3. 00:15:159 (2) - add finish? fit imo.
4. 00:33:523 (1) - add finish good sound imo.
5. 00:40:068 (1) - not recommend this. maybe 1/4 many reverse slider is hard to read beginner player. 00:40:068 - . 00:40:432 - . try both time add circle more easy! also, fit song.
6. 01:02:613 (1) - move (x:448 y:168)? so, 01:01:159 (1) - this Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J place, more seems good and play.
7. 01:11:341 (1) - spinner sound is fine. but, between. so, try end move 01:13:886 - . sound is np imo.
8. 01:15:704 (1) - ^ end is 01:16:795 - .
9. 01:18:613 (1) - ^ end is 01:19:704 - .

1. Beginner same OD and HP. so, try both +1. because mapset balance.

1. 00:39:341 (1) - more and more bit hitsound volume up? I mean add some greenline.
2. 00:45:159 (6) - add finish here.
3. 01:02:613 (1) - ^ but, slider head.
4. 01:08:432 (1) - ^ but, small symbal sound here.

1. awesome!

1. a难度四星半 e难度五星 建议做个hard或者把e拉到7星以上
2. 00:37:159 (5) - 往右一格

1. 00:02:977 - move this note 1 grid up and 1 grid right
2. 01:30:613 (6,7) - 去掉7 把6放后一蓝线
3. 01:43:977 (4) - move this note 1 grid up and 1 grid right

P o M u T a wrote:

hi!

[General]

1. maybe move wip now!
2. try add tag 'dubstep' and 'piano'? people can more good search!
3. standard and extra diff remove Countdown check better. ok!
4. your BG 1365x768. try find or convert 1366x768? bg nazi. i want to change a better bg,but i cant find..
5. remove widerscreen support all diff. ok
6. remove letter box during breaks check all diff. so, nothing break this mapset!

ok!

[Beginner]

1. This diff only nothing kiaitime. done
2. 00:03:704 (1) - this is small spinner end and next notes between. so, try this sound? i think more easily play.http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1904253 now may better
3. 00:15:159 (2) - add finish? fit imo. yes
4. 00:33:523 (1) - add finish good sound imo. yes
5. 00:40:068 (1) - not recommend this. maybe 1/4 many reverse slider is hard to read beginner player. 00:40:068 - . 00:40:432 - . try both time add circle more easy! also, fit song. done
6. 01:02:613 (1) - move (x:448 y:168)? so, 01:01:159 (1) - this Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J place, more seems good and play.
7. 01:11:341 (1) - spinner sound is fine. but, between. so, try end move 01:13:886 - . sound is np imo. good
8. 01:15:704 (1) - ^ end is 01:16:795 - . ok
9. 01:18:613 (1) - ^ end is 01:19:704 - .

ok

[Standard]

1. Beginner same OD and HP. so, try both +1. because mapset balance.

done

[Another]

1. 00:39:341 (1) - more and more bit hitsound volume up? I mean add some greenline.
2. 00:45:159 (6) - add finish here. yes!
3. 01:02:613 (1) - ^ but, slider head. yes!
4. 01:08:432 (1) - ^ but, small symbal sound here.

yes!

[Extra]

1. awesome!

good luck! star

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Another

1. a难度四星半 e难度五星 建议做个hard或者把e拉到7星以上 大哥做了个hard，开心
2. 00:37:159 (5) - 往右一格

好的

Extra

1. 00:02:977 - move this note 1 grid up and 1 grid right 好的
2. 01:30:613 (6,7) - 去掉7 把6放后一蓝线 好的
3. 01:43:977 (4) - move this note 1 grid up and 1 grid right

好的

that is all 美丽

好的

Regraz wrote:

Hi! Binggan~
•This is Regraz's mod. Note that I am rather new to modding/mapping, so I am sorry if this cannot provide real help.
•This color means things that I highly suggest. But all the mods are just ideas, feel free to deny these because as to mapping, we need various ideas, right?
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The 0001 map modded since using the new modding framwork. (Dont care about this number , it is just used to remind me the number of maps I've modded.)

General and Song Setup

1. Trying to make countdown settings the same in all diffs.
2. You'll need a Hyper to make the diff spread more acceptable.
3. You dont set KIAI time in Beginner diff, why not?
4. Remove Letterbox during breaks because you dont have breaktime in this mapset.
5. Uncheck Widescreen support if you wont add a storyboard.

all done

Beginner

Overall: The map is well-made and fun to play, but there are some issues abot the layout and hard points. It is a little hard as an Beginner, it is more like a Normal/Standard.
CS is 3.5???!! 这个不行吗！？？

Rhythm:
1. 00:03:704 (1) - This note is placed too short after the spinner. Either remove the spinner and add sth else there or remove these notes. Also that spinner is too short for new players. New players cannot spin fast, so as to them, spinner will be the largest obstacle in playing osu. 我觉得这个应该没问题
2. 00:40:068 (2) - This slider ought not appear in Beginner diff. It seems recreational to use multi-short-repeat slider (kick slider) here, but it is a killer as to noob players since they hav not get the ability to handle such slider. So I recommend a normal slider here. 改了
3. 01:06:250 (2,3) - Of course using 1/2 is fun and recreational for playing, but using two 1/2 short sliders is too hard agian for new players. The note density is high because of this. 我觉得没啥问题
4. 01:11:341 (1) - Also the same issues of 00:03:704 (1) - the note after it is too fast to be caught by new players. 改了
5. 01:15:704 (1,1) - The spinner density is little high.
6. 01:23:886 (2,3) - A slider starting at redline and a slider starting at whiteline. Such rhythm will be hard for new players to read. I recommend a repeat slider and a hitcircle here. 这样挺好玩的
7. 01:42:977 (4,1,2,3,4) - The transition of whiteline to redline seems abrupt.
8. 01:44:795 (1) - This slider seems inconsisitent with 01:47:704 (1,2,3,4) - no
9. 01:46:523 (2,3) - Blueline sliders. very good rhythm

Flow and Structure:
1. 00:16:068 (1,2) - Blanket issue.
2. 00:21:886 (1,3) - Avoid overlapping.
3. 00:34:250 (2,3,1) - Trying this for a better flow and layout: http://puu.sh/aKEwd/d2d8b199e3.jpg
4. 00:38:613 (3,1) - Avoid overlapping.
5. 00:52:432 (1,2) - Still a blanket issue: http://puu.sh/aKEKu/0ef035311a.jpg
6. 00:55:341 (4) - What's wrong with the distance spacing here? this is good
7. 00:58:250 (2,3) - Also a blanket issue: http://puu.sh/aKEPX/8936fdb77f.jpg
8. 01:32:977 (4,1,2) - Stack two single notes together is also not an appropriate pattern for beginner diff. Why not combine 01:33:159 (1,2) - into a slider? no
9. 01:35:341 (2,1) - Avoid overlapping
10. 01:38:250 (2) - You stacked both the start of this slider and the end. Still an issue as to beginner diffs. no
the other almost fixed
Hitsounds:
1. 00:29:886 (3) - Add whistle at the end?
2. 00:48:068 (1) - ^
3. 00:55:341 (4) - Add whistle?
4. 01:08:432 (1,2,1,2) - Use N:C1 clap at the end of every slider?
5. 01:27:341 (1) - Use whistle+finish
almost all fixed
Other isues:
1. 00:46:613 (4) - NC?

Standard

Overall: Almost like a Hard. But this diff is fun to play, the ideas in this diff is very good and creative.
Rhythm:
1. 00:04:432 (1,2) - Using a reverse 3/2 slider instead.
2. 00:34:250 (3,1) - Reverse 2 times is a combo killer as to newbie players. Dont use such.
3. 00:50:250 (4,5) - Why using so hard 1/4 reverse slider?
4. 01:14:250 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Even 4 circles are better.
5. 01:17:159 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Wont repeat the same issue.
no change，now is good
Flow and Structure:
1. 00:42:250 (1) - Move to 121|152 for a perfect stack. yes！
2. 01:23:886 (4,1) - Straight? no
3. 01:28:068 (2,3) - Trying to make their shape the same. maybe not

Hitsounds:
1. 00:59:704 (1) - Slider tick ruins the music.

Other isues:
None

Another

Overall: Very awesome diff. Full of challenge and creativity. Nice indeed.
Rhythm:
1. 01:08:250 (8,1) - A triplet will bring more fun?
2. 01:47:522 (8,1) - ^
Flow and Structure:
1. 01:50:250 (1,2,3,4) - Keeping distance the same? ok
Hitsounds:
1. 00:33:523 (6) - Finish? ok
2. 00:45:159 (6) - Finish, you can add some soft-whistles in this part to make instrumets outstanding. ok
3. 00:50:977 (1) - Soft ok
4. 01:12:795 (1,2,3,4) - Add greenlines to make volumn go up little by little. yes
5. 01:46:250 (1) - Finish ok
6. 01:47:704 (1) - Finish on the head. ok
Other isues:
1. 00:40:068 (2) - NC because you changed the slider velocity. ok
2. 01:15:704 (10) - NC?

ok

Extra

Nothing much to say.
So dont categorize them, sry.
00:30:250 (3,4) - Consider improving this blanket. yes
00:50:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Recommend group every 4 of them instead of 3 for better read. no
00:50:977 (9) - NC no
01:22:068 (1,2) - Completed stacked. Consider at least make some angle changes.

maybe no

•That's all.
•In general, this is a very good mapset, I cant help playing it!!!!!
•Finally, good luck on ranking! And take my star~

Megurine Luka wrote:

我真是想一圈打爆饼干

http://puu.sh/aTP24/21aebe335e.osu

音效偷懒了直接抄了，太累了......

Heatherfield wrote:

哦

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

As your request

卧槽，人玩。


[Hyper]

本身难度不怎么地，就是整体有点乱，读图难度不均，给我的感觉是有点，玩着玩着本来是hyper突然来一个extra难度的读图点这种感觉。。

00:08:613 (3) - 在00:09:159 - 白线结尾 No. 本身就是拉长slider过渡到后一个slider的意图

00:12:432 (4) - 在00:12:432 - 放个note就行了 you serious? 只有一个note节奏上炒鸡难听，而且两个短slider和前面的两个长slider做对应。

00:21:341 (8,1) - 合成一个slider，00:21:432 - 蓝线起，00:21:704 - 红线终 我理解你的意思。但是前面都是五连，这里突然做成两个二连，打起来很不舒服

00:27:704 (1,2,3) - 2和3这种用在hyper最好是换成slider。要好读的多。 不理解，没觉得slider+note的组合为啥不能放到hyper里

00:28:432 (4,5,6) - 这里也很别扭。你试试00:28:432 - 这里放个note4，然后slider5从00:28:613 - 开始，00:28:795 - 结束。slider6从00:28:886 - 蓝线起，00:29:159 - 白线终。大致这样的节奏

SPOILER

no。我跟的鼓点

00:29:341 (1,2) - 这俩个完全可以删掉，加着只是徒增读图的困难程度罢了。no，同样跟的节奏，没什么好删的。读图也并不困难。

00:43:704 (6,1) - 这俩中间太空了。跟着音乐应该是两个1/3的折返然后再接1才对啊，大致这样

SPOILER

你确定这是跟着音乐？怎么听都觉得我现在这样才是啊

00:50:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hyper很少出现这么长的连打，可以用折返代替。 r u serious?

hyper建议好好改改。

没了、、、

hard以下的我都摸不动就不摸了/w\

good luck~★

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

As your request

卧槽，人玩。

[Extra]
00:28:613 (1,2,1) - 前面这两个1,2再拖长一点感觉可能更合拍子。这里给你个排列的参考。不影响前后布局

SPOILER

00:31:341 (5) - 1/3就挺好啊。。overmap没什么必要

00:38:613 (3) - 和00:38:159 (4) - 一样怎么不用折返

01:30:613 (6,7) - 离5稍近一点，01:30:249 (4,5) - 距离和这个一样，容易读错 改了

01:45:704 (5) - 卧槽，好远。稍近一点，差不多5的圆心在中间横着的那条粗线上那种距离。

01:47:159 (9) - ^

[Another]
我喜欢这note大小<3

01:34:341 - note 好的！

01:06:613 (7,8) - 这个停顿不是很自然。试试这个

SPOILER

01:08:250 (8) - ^

SPOILER

谢谢mod

good luck~★

Heatherfield wrote:

怎么开枪打我 莫名