1. Hard (3.42 stars, 186 notes)
2. Insane (4.97 stars, 495 notes)
3. KwaN's Normal (2.02 stars, 212 notes)
4. Yoru's Hard (4.13 stars, 340 notes)
5. zjw's Easy (1.37 stars, 118 notes)

[_Crystal] wrote:

tiny suggestions

[Insane]
00:39:693 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里可以用复制粘贴大法,一个一个拉形状不一致
00:42:692 貌似这里有一个音
00:47:749 ^
01:18:775 (1) - 形状有点..
01:30:774 (3,4,5,1) - 间距太小了 不好读 (highly recommended to fix)
01:32:660 (2,3,4,1) - ^
01:56:572 (1,1,1) - 没必要1个note 1个NC

good luck!

1. offset=117858 bpm =156.4
2. offset=123612 bpm =147.880

gorgonzoler wrote:

hello, i am gorgonzoler


插上红线继续map下去比较好
insert here

1. offset=117858 bpm =156.4
2. offset=123612 bpm =147.880

希望能帮到你！！如果你觉得不对劲的话可以微调
另外no kuds

hhkkyy wrote:

[Insane]
00:25:293 形状不好看。。。
00:40:721 按照2,3,1拍似乎flow更高 这样接nc后的1就不舒服了我觉得
00:48:949 连续3.25跳，找麻婆谈人生系列。。（不用改） 还有人觉得小呢;w;
01:35:321 略显单调，，不过问题不大
01:39:174 拍子应该是第一拍空四分接三个八分再接四分而不是直接八分 即便的确原曲是那么多8分也不会这样改，多用八分实在不好……
01:40:031 4分拍（鼓点）到1为止，建议删2，这样后面一个跳也好有点准备。。。 中间那么多鼓点留在那里总不好吧……
01:40:374 跳的顺序有点奇怪？一般这种不是做六角星跳么。。
01:52:544 建议把4,5,1之间距离调成一致 已改
然后把我的hit sound和audio抄了吧、、 拍子太不一样了没法抄;w;

yf_bmp wrote:

have a short irc mod with mapper
call me back in-game if you want more mods

SPOILER

13:15 yf_bmp: np下吧
13:15 yf_bmp: 你的图
13:19 yf_bmp: hi
13:19 - H i k a r i -: ok
13:20 - H i k a r i -: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/190450
13:20 - H i k a r i -: np是神马意思来着……
13:21 yf_bmp: 输入/np的话会有歌曲信息
13:21 - H i k a r i -: ;w;
13:21 *yf_bmp is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/318975 Toyosaki Aki - MORE&MORE]
13:21 *- H i k a r i - is watching [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/318975 Toyosaki Aki - MORE&MORE [Insane]] -Easy +Hidden
13:22 - H i k a r i -: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/190450 ……这样吧
13:27 yf_bmp: 再试一遍
13:27 - H i k a r i -: …………
13:31 yf_bmp: 01:08:490 - 这里开始应该是想跟钢琴音吧?
13:32 yf_bmp: 那么最好是所有的钢琴音都跟上
13:32 yf_bmp: 01:16:718 (3,4,1,2) - 比如这里你突然跟了主旋律
13:32 yf_bmp: 但其实这里面很多钢琴音
13:32 - H i k a r i -: 01:08:410 这里是主旋律吧？
13:33 - H i k a r i -: 01:08:490
13:33 yf_bmp: 可以在跟钢琴音的时候顾及主旋律
13:33 - H i k a r i -: 恩……我看看
13:33 yf_bmp: 01:08:490 (1) - 这里没有钢琴音, 所以就跟主旋律了 可以这样
13:34 yf_bmp: 或者说非常不明显
13:35 - H i k a r i -: 01:16:375 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 这里我跟了一段主旋律，然后后面接着跟钢琴音
13:36 yf_bmp: 因为可以说这里是整首歌最激昂的地方 适合作为kiai, 而kiai的话这样子的话太平静了
13:36 - H i k a r i -: soga……
13:37 - H i k a r i -: ……不过全跟钢琴音不就都是4分音了么？
13:37 yf_bmp: 也不是的
13:37 - H i k a r i -: 应该怎么做……？
13:37 yf_bmp: 01:12:261 (5,6,1) - 像你这里 不就有1/2的空拍吗
13:38 yf_bmp: 可以把非常不明显的1/4空掉
13:38 yf_bmp: 换成1/2
13:38 yf_bmp: 01:20:832 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - 包括你这里处理的也不错
13:39 - H i k a r i -: 稍微有点想法了……我看看
13:41 yf_bmp: kiai前面是跟鼓点?
13:42 yf_bmp: 00:39:264 - 00:39:178 - 那我觉得这种不太明显的鼓点最好也要跟
13:42 yf_bmp: 00:49:549
13:42 yf_bmp: 00:49:549
13:43 yf_bmp: 01:00:177
13:43 - H i k a r i -: 多边形跳几处的鼓点怎么处理……？
13:45 yf_bmp: http://puu.sh/a6gKN/e9069a2266.png 这样还是规则跳的
13:45 - H i k a r i -: 好的
13:46 yf_bmp: 大体的mod就这些 剩下的都是些小地方
13:47 - H i k a r i -: ok，那段加个KIAI TIME么？
13:47 yf_bmp: 不加也行
13:48 - H i k a r i -: 好的
13:48 yf_bmp: 因为这首分段还没这么明显
13:49 - H i k a r i -: ……的确
13:50 yf_bmp: 那就先这样 你先改吧?
13:50 - H i k a r i -: 那么那段我可以先跟鼓点然后再跟钢琴么
13:50 - H i k a r i -: 恩，正在改
13:50 yf_bmp: 密集一些也行
13:51 yf_bmp: 不要在那用长滑条

Kochiya Sanya wrote:

新人mod 可以参考
[general]
Where are 音效？没有kiai time 多没劲啊 给出的kiai可以参考 你也可以自己认为哪儿高潮放哪... slideslide音效消音 咕噜咕噜的好难听... 多没劲啊 ;w;做不来音效111
[insane]
00:24:609 (2,3) - 这两note还是放在滑条的第二个点上比较好
像这样

fixed 顺带把前面的单点位置也改了
00:28:379 (3) - 这个压在一号note下面？ 然后红点向下拉点 fixed（原来对准的怎么歪了……
00:33:522 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里跟后面的note叠得貌似不好看 而且我打了两次都以为这五个跟后面是串的节奏 还是建议把它排开 参考

fixed
00:34:636 - 没听错的话这里应该是没有音的.. 应该是两条串 fixed
01:00:091 (6) - 这个往下挪点？ 擦边感觉不太好看的样子 fixed
00:47:920 - 这里到下一条绿线kiai？ 这里音乐没那么燃，还是不要放KIAI了，现在KIAI自己放了一段，其他容我再思考思考
01:08:490 - 01:41:059 - 这一段kiai？
01:38:231 - 感觉这里有音啊 感觉是一个串的节奏 如果要空开 我感觉这里空会比较好...01:38:059 - 这里空是因为有个很明显的鼓点
01:39:174 (1) - 退一格 再在最后加个note 01:40:888 (4) - 同理 已改
01:40:202 (1) - 我怎么听着像八分鼓点啊...如果你也觉得是就跟前面的一样都是折返+note 已改，其实这里和上面都是6分音，我就用一个折返了
01:39:345 - 01:41:402 - 这里kiai？
00:51:520 (1,2,3) - 这组三连的二号跟前面的四号重叠一下？ 已改（怎么跳到前面去惹
01:55:287 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - 这地方感觉略混乱.. 重新排一下这几个串的位置？ 其实就是个四方跳，Editor显乱但其实很清楚
01:53:744 - 01:57:858 - 这里kiai？
02:04:017 - 这里好像有八分拍 四暗刻 ……这个颤音算了吧
02:04:626 (3) - 这个 貌似不在节奏上 试了三分拍也不行 挪到02:04:677 (3) - 感觉又不太可能 虽然我听着蛮合适... 应该是bpm变了 找个bpm测得屌的人帮你测下 我不会测啊 看上面帖子……我也不会测所以是别人帮我测的我感觉不错就用惹

liaoxingyao wrote:

[General]
质量比我的好 ;w;
没有设置音频预览时间。 fixed
[Insane]
第一根红线：BPM 160.26 Offset 1145
第三根红线：BPM 175 Offset 19130
第四根红线：BPM 159 Offset 117900
顺便再加几根红线
BPM 151 Offset 122428
BPM 145 Offset 123620
BPM 135 Offset 125068
记得resnap all notes fixed except the second one 第二、三根线我只采纳了offset
00:19:123 (3) - 难看
00:22:209 (4) - 难看 个人觉得这俩blanket还不错啊……
00:24:266 (1,2,3) - 试试这样摆
fixed
00:33:863 (1) - 奇怪 为何NC fixed
00:34:036 (2) - NC fixed
00:35:579 (3) - NC fixed
01:18:775 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这部分我觉得做的挺好 thx
01:27:003 (4) - NC fixed
01:46:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 有点难看 稍微改了下位置……不知道现在怎么样
[Last]
其实做的还行
Good Luck ^_^

• 
  tag移除cytus（已经在source里面）

• 第一根红线是否有必要？（毕竟打图不需要）
  00:19:130 (3) - 00:20:158 (4) - 00:21:186 (1,2,4) - 00:23:243 (1,1,1) - 00:26:329 (2,2,3) - 00:29:414 (1,2,4) - .....你看着加whistle吧
  00:31:471 (1) - 这里开始可以加clap，后面太繁琐了，差不多的，我就说说Finish好了
  00:35:585 (1) - 00:52:041 (1) - 01:08:497 (1) - 01:24:953 (1) - 01:56:837 (1) - finish
  01:57:900 - 这个后面就不要加clap了
  00:31:471 - 这根绿线0.75x ，而00:52:034 - 这根1.0x，明显最开始的节奏最舒缓
  00:41:071 (2,3) - 2，3换一下
  00:48:099 (2,3,4) - 突然ds变很高（比我还凶）。。
  01:07:297 (1) - 没必要使用折返
  01:07:469 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 可以考虑渐渐增大ds
  01:10:554 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  01:08:497 (1) - 不好看
  01:10:554 (1) - 建议不用两个以上的折返
  01:23:239 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 赞
  01:33:010 (3) - Ctrl+G
  整体感觉梗不够多啊（够

[Teichan] wrote:

Red means it conflicts with the guideline, you must fix it.
Blue means some of my important suggestions, you can ignore it.
Black just means my comments.
M4M
[General]

• 
  tag移除cytus（已经在source里面） fixed

[Insane]

• 第一根红线是否有必要？（毕竟打图不需要） 线还是得插好……
  00:19:130 (3) - 00:20:158 (4) - 00:21:186 (1,2,4) - 00:23:243 (1,1,1) - 00:26:329 (2,2,3) - 00:29:414 (1,2,4) - .....你看着加whistle吧
  00:31:471 (1) - 这里开始可以加clap，后面太繁琐了，差不多的，我就说说Finish好了
  00:35:585 (1) - 00:52:041 (1) - 01:08:497 (1) - 01:24:953 (1) - 01:56:837 (1) - finish
  01:57:900 - 这个后面就不要加clap了 Hitsound all fixed. 非常感谢！
  00:31:471 - 这根绿线0.75x ，而00:52:034 - 这根1.0x，明显最开始的节奏最舒缓
  00:41:071 (2,3) - 2，3换一下[/color] 换了的话接后面的1很别扭
  00:48:099 (2,3,4) - 突然ds变很高（比我还凶）。。
  01:07:297 (1) - 没必要使用折返 这是个六分拍……总不见得做连打吧……
  01:07:469 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 可以考虑渐渐增大ds
  01:10:554 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^[/color]
  01:08:497 (1) - 不好看 稍微改了下
  01:10:554 (1) - 建议不用两个以上的折返 fixed
  01:23:239 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 赞 ^_^thx
  01:33:010 (3) - Ctrl+G fixed
  整体感觉梗不够多啊（够 黔驴技穷惹;w;

美丽

liaoxingyao wrote:

No Kud
Offset为117900的红线BPM换为159.50
Offset为123620的红线BPM换为145.01
Offset为125068的红线Offset-1ms
记得为绿线换Offset和Resnap All Notes

yf_bmp wrote:

no kd

[Insane]
请注意一些细节方面的事情 虽然不影响打图 但会给人一种比较乱的感觉

00:18:788 (1,2,3) - 这三个应该不是刻意不等距的吧 让它们等距 fixed

00:20:158 (4,1) - 4的后半部分没有包住1的头 fixed

00:25:300 (1,2) - 太单调的感觉 跟前面一样做些形状会比较好 一直没想法就摆在这里了;w;

00:30:443 (4) - 这个形状现在不太常用 不过也没问题 那就不改了

00:31:471 (1,2,3,4,5) - 关于这四个 我觉得你的图应该有挺多图形跳的 所以这四个建议摆成平行四边形会比较好 改了下

00:34:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 如果是弧形的话 那是没摆好 fixed

00:34:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,3) - 没包好 ;w;？

00:39:357 (7,8,1) - 这里距离突然不等 又不太像是刻意弄的..所以建议等距 后面再适当调调 fixed

00:39:699 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 可以用旋转工具摆的更好, 顺带如果滑条的弧度稍微再大一点的话会更美观 ;w;摆了一会儿越来越丑……

00:41:071 (2,3,1) - 这三个同时看的话会比较别扭, 00:41:756 (1,2,3) - 这三个没有包好,而且要注意00:41:756 (1,3) - 之间的距离 fixed

00:43:813 (1,2) - 没包好 fixed

00:45:870 (1) - 这个滑条还是有些欠前后关系的考虑 00:44:842 (2,1) - 这两个一起看的话有些看不出之间有啥关系.. 以及可以00:45:870 (1,4) - 这两个一起看 fixed，上次改了一下前面然后就导致这里别扭了

00:55:127 (1,2,3) - 可以错开一些 这个现在真心少用 都是挺老的梗了 fixed;w;

01:02:669 (2,3) - 3 的形状欠考虑, 01:02:326 (1,2,3) - 这三个一起看能看得出的 fixed

01:02:326 - 01:08:326 - 这一段总体来看 感觉是围绕一个方向在field边缘转 不太建议这样 这里我先不改了

01:09:183 (3,1) - 尾部和note挤在一块了 fixed

01:10:383 (4,1) - 包好一些 fixed

01:11:411 - 这里也建议加个物件, 空拍没啥感觉 fixed

01:16:725 (1,2,3) - 换成连打 已经kiai了却放的这么拘束的话实在没感觉 fixed

01:17:754 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed

01:21:696 (2) - 以这个为中心, 01:20:839 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 可以看出这个串的弧度不够 fixed

01:34:210 (1,2,3) - 可以错开一些 个人感觉stack比较好看……

01:46:894 (3,5,1) - 距离注意下

02:00:541 (2,4) - fixed

音效太单薄了 比如你跟钢琴音的部分在高音部分可以加whistle啊之类的 音乐里有鼓点的地方可以shift+w 暴力加音效 我再研究研究

Good luck~

- H i k a r i - wrote:

liaoxingyao wrote:

No Kud
Offset为117900的红线BPM换为159.50
Offset为123620的红线BPM换为145.01
Offset为125068的红线Offset-1ms
记得为绿线换Offset和Resnap All Notes

;w;还是一直觉得不给kds不好意思……

- H i k a r i - wrote:

[General]
insane 的话我觉还是GS tiny好点
怎么没E N H？补一下呗，这样好一起啊

[Insane]
00:24:272 (1,2,3) - 这里怎么突然间距就变了，感觉跟前面保持一样比较好啊

00:32:087 (1,5) - 这里铺折返感觉很怪，因为前面有跳且2已经在折返条上，这样停顿一下连贯性就断了的感觉

00:32:500 (5) - 同上

00:35:585 (1,2,3,4) - 这里节奏少了点 下多点note

00:40:042 (2,3,1,2) -没包好？

00:47:927 (1,2,3,4,5) -跳整体有点扁，flow有点不好，试着纵向拉宽点

00:49:984 (1,2,3,4,5) -跟00:32:087(1,5) - 一样的感觉

00:51:013 (5) -没摆直的感觉

01:00:269 (1) -这里很坑人不好读，这么短的折返大多数osuer光标在这里不会动，所以很影响接下来的读图，
不过是是故意的就不用改了了

01:05:240 - 加个note 空了不好

01:18:782 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -1.5有点大，调低点或者改成弧，总之注意flow

01:24:953-01:32:495-这里我推荐改变DS来表现歌曲又高到低，节奏减少感觉一般在鼓点的消失和人声清唱的开始会好点

mod的不好别见怪呀

TT Mouse wrote:

hi!

- H i k a r i - wrote:

[General]
insane 的话我觉还是GS tiny好点 ;w;？
怎么没E N H？补一下呗，这样好一起啊 ;w;正在做

[Insane]
00:24:272 (1,2,3) - 这里怎么突然间距就变了，感觉跟前面保持一样比较好啊 这里是接着下面的滑条中心

00:32:087 (1,5) - 这里铺折返感觉很怪，因为前面有跳且2已经在折返条上，这样停顿一下连贯性就断了的感觉 我考虑下

00:32:500 (5) - 同上

00:35:585 (1,2,3,4) - 这里节奏少了点 下多点note TAT感觉没啥鼓点跟

00:40:042 (2,3,1,2) -没包好？ 这里怎么改也弄不漂亮

00:47:927 (1,2,3,4,5) -跳整体有点扁，flow有点不好，试着纵向拉宽点 fixed

00:49:984 (1,2,3,4,5) -跟00:32:087(1,5) - 一样的感觉

00:51:013 (5) -没摆直的感觉 fixed

01:00:269 (1) -这里很坑人不好读，这么短的折返大多数osuer光标在这里不会动，所以很影响接下来的读图，
不过是是故意的就不用改了了 fixed

01:05:240 - 加个note 空了不好 这里没主旋律我就空掉了

01:18:782 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -1.5有点大，调低点或者改成弧，总之注意flow fixed

01:24:953-01:32:495-这里我推荐改变DS来表现歌曲又高到低，节奏减少感觉一般在鼓点的消失和人声清唱的开始会好点 TAT我四暗刻一下……

mod的不好别见怪呀

Hakurei Yoru wrote:

嘿~你的GD~
滑条肯定是拉得难看的 可以自己改改。
质量欠佳见谅。

SPOILER

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Title:Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~
TitleUnicode:Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~
Artist:Project Grimoire
ArtistUnicode:Project Grimoire
Creator:- H i k a r i -
Version:Hyper
Source:Cytus
Tags:ICE
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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liaoxingyao wrote:

GD
抱歉GD太屎了...sad

liaoxingyao wrote:

如果你不介意的话 建议
Xingyao's Normal
Redwhite's Hyper

Hakurei Yoru wrote:

[general]
嗯，其实好图。
[Normal]
说残忍点直接删了吧。
说好听点remap plz.
梗用得完全超出了NM的范围了。;w;那得我自己来一张了
[Insane]
把前面做了吧。
00:33:528 (1) - 这音空得简直世界第一不愉快。红线起连打也是…… fixed

01:08:497 (1,2,3) - 咋和hhkkyy一样都喜欢这么长的条结尾还把俩1/4错开..其实这里重叠会不会能看点——当然这只是建议。 stack了

01:15:697 (7) - 音乐没吵你吵啥。 改成4分拍跟钢琴音惹

01:24:953 (1) - 这里一段有点浪费音乐密度哦。

01:32:153 (4) -

这里不得不提一下，你这In的下节奏密度也是莫名其妙得很，处理好作为玩家打一张图对音乐感觉出来的节奏，这样一个关系是很重要的。
这张In吧，很多应该高密度的地方就是长滑条打法，就一张Diff你偷什么懒——————其实吧就一段……
和上一条一起回复了吧，2nd还是不太敢下节奏下的太狠……于是水段不少……个人感觉做成水段问题也不大（明明是不水自己就打不动了
01:31:467 (1,2,3,4) - 换梗。 fixed

01:38:152 (3,2) - 弄成短滑条 不要在中间空音会更好。

01:56:151 (5) - ^ fixed

其实说那么多干啥呢，空音空得有点多，而且空得特别难受。
自己做出来的图全程仔细听听音效。 ;w;我还是图样……

没摸过几次我都敢这么装比。
肯定要被婊，我先跑，有人婊我我不说话。

sodarose wrote:

insane

建议把开头那段也做了吧orz
01:31:467 (1,2,1,2) - 感觉怪怪的 ;w;我觉得没啥问题……
02:05:067 (1) - 这里加个circle，把转盘移到02:05:178 fixed

Redwhite's Hyper

感觉改成hard会不会好一些啊
吐槽下滑条尾2连切指太多了orz
00:30:443 (1) - 少折返一下感觉好一些
00:34:900 (2) - NC
01:40:723 (2) - ^

渣摸见谅orz

spring wrote:

hyper

01:00:098 - 建议加一个note和前面的2同一位置，这里的音比较高，加一个note和前面00:58:898 (2) - 区别开比较好，和后面连起来也感觉很顺
01:01:983 (7) - 这个可以画的更加标准些，像这个01:01:469 (5) -

insane

00:42:271 (3) - Ctrl+G 感觉打起来更舒服 fixed，这样改真的很不错哎
01:46:723 (2,3) - 这两个改成和前面这个01:46:037 (3,4,5) - 一样的三连感觉不错 这里没音…而且我这样摆了也没办法改成三连了
01:53:580 - 这个位置的音挺容易听到的，加一个note柑橘能更好 fixed
01:50:494 (4,5) - 间距和这里01:49:808 (1,2) - 相同更好看些 我考虑下

渣摸请不要见怪

[zjwautumn's Easy]
u dont make Easy by ds 1.4, i dont know its rankable or not.
[Yoru's Hyper]
00:02:268 (1,1) - plz blanket it well
00:02:268 (1,2) - not really stacking
00:04:514 (1,2) - I think 3/4 slider is not good here because the music is not very high. I will put 4/4 slider and a note here if I'm mapping.
00:08:258 - you need add some note here.
00:09:007 (1,3) - doesn't really staking
00:09:381 (2,3) - blanket
00:12:751 (4,1) - ^
00:14:248 (1,2) - ^
00:14:623 (2,2) - stacking
00:19:472 (2,2,1) - ^
00:21:186 (1,2) - blanket
00:22:901 (2,3,1) - stacking
00:23:586 (2,2) - ^
00:31:471 (1,2,3,4,5) - Blanket
00:39:014 (2) - Maybe ctrl + g flow better
00:42:785 (1,1) - stacking
00:44:156 (5,6,7,3) - ^
00:54:784 (3,1) - ^
01:01:812 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - looks not good
01:08:326 (3,1) - stacking
01:08:497 (1,4) - ^
01:09:183 (1,4) - Blanket
01:14:668 (6,1) - ^
I dont want write more, there is many problem like those, u need all fix it
[Insane]
00:38:328 (2) - I think clap here its better
00:46:556 (2) - ^
00:47:585 (6,7) - ^
01:45:180 (1,2) - maybe stack